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The article has been unlocked, so I have amended the above notice. And add here: If someone new to the article makes an inappropriate edit, inform them of this moderated discussion, and discuss the edit on this page. If someone who is already aware of the restrictions in place makes an inappropriate edit, inform me, and I will deal with it. ''']''' ''']''' 14:03, 18 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
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:...I want people to edit the article. But I want those who edit it to be trustworthy, and to only edit by consensus, not to revert or encourage or incite others to revert, not to remove or add content that alters meaning without first establishing that it is OK to do do, not to make edits based on guessing or assuming, but to follow the academic principles of doing research FIRST, and then supporting statements with citations, and to follow Misplaced Pages guidelines on building an article. This is editing basics, and should be done on every article. It is particularly important that it should be done on this article. This is not the article to be making bold edits, nor uncertain edits. This is an article where we need people to be putting their proposals down on the talkpage and getting consensus. Who actually makes the edit after consensus has been done, doesn't matter. As long as that person actions the edit as agreed, and does not add their own twist as they are doing so. I am concerned there is not much time before ArbCom reconvenes, and I don't want edit wars to start up on the article between now and then. So I want all edits to the article to be secure and agreed. And if there are editors who are not able to discern when an edit has been agreed or not, they should be discouraged from editing the article. If necessary, permanently. I can't make that clear enough. The article has suffered for years because editors have taken unilateral action on the article rather than seeking consensus first. On a contentious topic like this it is vital to discus and get consensus. Doubly so when there's a moderated discussion taking place. And triply so when there's an ArbCom case being held in suspension.... ''']''' ''']''' 12:32, 15 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Well, someone just made an extreme undiscussed change in the first sentence of the article. What happens now? <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 22:49, 15 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::I've just notified that editor of the Moderated dicsussion ].--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 02:20, 16 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::Yes, that is the appropriate approach. I will copy this over to the talkpage so people are clear. ''']''' ''']''' 11:37, 16 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
If someone is already fully aware of the restrictions in place on the article, and they make an inappropriate edit, they will be sanctioned. If someone is not aware, they should be informed of the situation, and directed to this discussion page. Their edit can then be discussed and consensus sought as to what is to be done with it. Only obvious vandalism (such as "Misplaced Pages sucks", "My balls are big", "Wombats are best") and BLP violations should be reverted on sight. If it's a possible BLP violation it's best to revert and to let me know immediately - I will allow a fair amount of leeway on reverting possible BLP violations. Somebody in good faith adding, removing or altering content is '''not''' to be reverted. However, somebody who adds, removes or alters content without consensus and after being informed of the restrictions in place, will be sanctioned. Notify me, and I will deal with it. I will revert the edit and sanction the editor. Anyone can inform an editor of the restrictions in place, but only an independent admin or myself can carry out reverts and sanctions. | |||
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*If someone new to the article makes an inappropriate edit, inform them of this discussion, and discuss the edit here. | |||
*If someone who is already aware of the restrictions in place makes an inappropriate edit, inform me, and I will deal with it. | |||
I hope that is clear. ''']''' ''']''' 11:57, 16 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
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:Sounds like a good 3/4 of a plan but is missing an important item. So drive-bys can edit it any way, and their edits can only be reverted by consensus? Guess where that will end up. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 13:21, 16 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
I made a comment ] that I would be happy to moderate a discussion. I would be looking to draw people together on the broader issues that concern contributors. One of the concerns I have noted is regarding the amount of material in the article, and I think that might be a useful starting point. However, the first stage would be to ensure that nobody has an objection to a moderated discussion, or to me being the person to hold it. I'd like to wait a day or two for responses or queries to my offer of doing this before getting fully stuck into a content discussion. ''']''' ''']''' 15:25, 8 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Nothing is missing. A "drive by edit" is not by default a bad edit, and editors need to accept that the principle of Misplaced Pages editing is that we welcome contributions from all - not just those who have edited an article for a long time. An expert on the Tea Party movement may read the article, note some errors, or missing information, and quickly amend the article and move on. This is to be encouraged, not reverted. It would be better for folks to concentrate on sorting out the article rather than quibbling at attempts to moderate the process. ''']''' ''']''' 09:27, 18 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''support''' and thanks ] (]) 15:30, 8 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
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*'''support''' We need it. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 15:47, 8 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
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*'''Support''' even though I do not qualify as active here really. ] (]) 15:50, 8 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
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*'''<s>Oppose for now</s>'''. per comment on ArbCom talk page. ] (]) 16:04, 8 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support''' I reviewed a few ArbCom pages and can see why, in comparison to other cases, the TPM is not on the front burner, so I see no reason to delay until this case is settled. Also, I read again Silk Tork's comments on ArbCom and feel he is very insightful and likely to help sort the situation here to everyone's satisfaction. ] (]) 18:08, 9 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support''' Moderation by a previously uninvolved person with some authority is badly needed. ] (]) 16:59, 8 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support''' ----] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 18:15, 8 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support''' Of course, after the Arbcom case is closed. Mediation could be integrated into the remedial measures forthcoming there.--] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 18:22, 8 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support'''. ] (]) 23:23, 8 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''No objection'''. I understand Malke's point of view, but I think SilkTork could do something to ameliorate her (Malke's) concerns. As she is a major contributor to the talk page, I think that her concerns need to be dealt with to the extent possible. I should add that '''now''' there is strong evidence toward Xenophrenic's ] in ''intentionally'' disregarding the obvious meaning of Malke's comments (in the "anti-immigration" section) in favor of an absurd interpretation, so I'm not sure that Malke's concerns can be met without unjustly protecting Xenophrenic. I would like to support, as it may provide a way out of this mess, but Malke's concerns need to be met so that she can freely participate. — ] ] 20:22, 8 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
**Would the editor who made the redactions kindly so identify themselves? Referring to edits is generally ''not'' cnsidered a "personal attack" on Misplaced Pages. ] (]) 22:48, 8 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::<Collect please undo your post, so I can revert Xenophrenic's redaction of Arthur Rubin's comment. Your edit is in the way. Thanks.] (]) 22:53, 8 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::Nevermind, I reverted it manually. ] (]) 22:59, 8 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::Xenophrenic has redacted Arthur's comment three times now and that seems ] to me. ] (]) 23:09, 8 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::Xenophrenic reverts/redactions and again and again . ] (]) 23:14, 8 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::It's too late to formally add Xenophrenic to the RfAr, as it's already past the workshop stage. And, ''if'' someone would point me to an appropriate forum to comment on ] by editors not already named in the RfAr, I would do it ''there'' instead of ''here'', for the most part. However, it's also a potential reason why I ''might'' object to this proposal, so it's not completely out of line to mention it here, even if Xenophrenic thinks it is. — ] ] 00:59, 9 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Redaction was wrong but so was your one sided accusation. P&G would also be a candidate and you're not an innocent. I suggest you try and reduce the temperature rather than provoking others ----] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 06:03, 9 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
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Arthur didn't make a one-sided accusation. He's simply pointing out Xenophrenic's behavior in an accurate, measured, well-written comment that is not at all a personal attack. Xenophrenic has also violated ] and ]. It's disruptive to keep redacting another editor's comments without bringing it up on the talk page. Why not post an explanation here for other editors to see and comment, too? That gives the editor the chance to redact his own comments. It's also disruptive for Xenophrenic to imply that sources he's using are sanctioned by "ArbCom" because Silk Tork suggested them on the Workshop talk page. And his incivility and refusal to strike through his comments are worrisome. Xenophrenic is quick to demand that other editor's redact their comments about him, but he won't extend the same courtesy when they object to what he's said about them. In fact, he argues more vigorously that's he right and the editor is wrong. ] (]) 12:07, 9 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
The phrase "one somewhat personified by Ron Paul and the other by Sarah Palin. "Paulites" have a Jeffersonian, "neo-isolationist" approach" which says or implies that Ron Paul, (the person who wants free trade with Cuba) is an isolationist. This says or implies that a living person has a belief/agenda that is opposite to his actual belief/agenda. An erroneous word in a source is certainly not enough to place/repeat the false statement/implication (particularly about a living person) in Misplaced Pages. | |||
Also, although the source used the word/said it, there is no requirement that everything that every source says and every word used (right or wrong) must get put into the article. | |||
Malke's concerns are that editors "must be extra careful in what they say", and that an editor has used something from one of the sources I noted. The sources I mentioned were , , , and . | |||
The proposal is to reword (or delete the whole sentence ''if necessary'') to remove any statement/implication that Ron Paul is a (neo)isolationist. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 14:39, 12 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
I'd rather people were extra careful. I'd always rather people were extra careful - all the time, on every page, not just ones that are being watched. Having said that, I understand frustration when editing contentious subjects, and expect tempers to fray now and again. However, when moderating content discussions I encourage focus on content not contributor, and let people know I will hat discussions that are off-topic and distracting. As regards concerns about any sanctions coming from the ArbCom case. I cannot speak for the other Committee members, but I don't see sufficient poor behaviour in those editing this article to justify sanctions. This is a highly contentious and polarising topic, and - if anything - I have been impressed by how you folks have held it together for so long. What I am interested in is not sanctioning anyone, but in helping you folks improve the article and reach a compromise that satisfies the main contributors, and so results in a fair, honest and balanced article that will be helpful to the general reader. I don't think it will be easy, nor will it be quick, but if everyone is willing to have a positive attitude toward this attempt, then I think it will work. | |||
:well said! Paul is a ], meaning free trade with all, entangling alliances with none. ] (]) 14:48, 12 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
::As far as I am aware, Jefferson's approach has conventionally been referred to as isolationist, but he was not against free trade or interacting with other nations, or even sending the military to deal with pirates. | |||
I'm not clear on the problem as regards the sources. I suspect, Malke, what you saying is not that you have an issue with the sources, but that suggestions I make may be used to justify actions that may not be helpful. My aim as a moderator, is to assist you folks reach the decisions and actions yourself, rather than me make the decisions for you folks to follow. But, yes, at times I may be pushing for a decision, and if things are deadlocked I will offer suggestions. | |||
:::good point and part of the problem, few people, including RS know the actual def of ], ''the policy or doctrine of isolating one's country from the affairs of other nations by declining to enter into alliances, foreign economic commitments, '''foreign trade'''...'' ] (]) 18:04, 12 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
::So, if a reliable source says "Jeffersonian" neo-isolationist (does the quote include Jeffersonian?), then it should not be considered misleading, as there is a historical context for that discourse. If a more modern and nuanced parlance is preferred, find a reliable source that uses such phraseology. If it has been found to be sufficiently objectionable, then there should be corresponding sources.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 16:17, 12 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::Just leave out calling Ron Paul an "isolationist". Simple. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 17:18, 12 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::{{done}} I have removed the word "neo-isolationist" from the mainspace. regards .... ] (]) 03:26, 13 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::What is the basis of the presumption of consensus on that? I don't believe that the discussion of the sources had even been concluded. Note that I wouldn't necessarily be opposed to the terms removal, I just want to see a source-based rationale. | |||
:::::I haven't looked at the edit, but the term non-interventionist would be significantly more narrow in scope than "Jeffersonian neo-isolationist", which appears to have been cited from a reliable source, if I recall correctly. | |||
:::::I do not believe that the unlocking of the article is a license for anyone to make such edits without adequate discussion here, first.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 06:08, 13 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::Try reviewing the edit. The entire meaning of the statement has been well preserved. ] (]) 12:02, 13 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
As Malke is the main contributor to the article, I think working with an objection would be difficult, so will wait for further comments. ''']''' ''']''' 00:34, 9 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::Yes, the statement can be made without mislabeling Ron Paul as an isolationist. Doubly so since the statement isn't even about Ron Paul. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 13:21, 13 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
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:Although I have been in some correspondence with Malke off-Wiki, I would like to ask here '''on'''-Wiki, whether Malke's objection is that edits based on sources mentioned by SilkTork might be ''perceived'' to have a "stamp of approval", and not be as subject to critical review. If so, if SilkTork could give what asssurances that he honestly can, it might be adequate for Malke. — ] ] 00:59, 9 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
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::I have not given my approval for any edits. And that is not the role I would envisage taking. I am not here as a member of ArbCom, but as a fellow editor. My role would be to moderate discussions, assist with keeping them on task, and look for agreement and consensus on how to move the article toward a balanced and acceptable position. ''']''' ''']''' 01:12, 9 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::I believe the Britannica is a problematic source at best - it is tertiary by definition, and solicits proposed edits from readers (one step from a Wiki). In short, we would best be advised not to use it as a source here. IMHO. ] (]) 02:03, 9 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*. I am assuming this was done under the impression that if information is in the lead it does not have to be in the article. That is a misunderstanding of how articles are constructed - see ]. I had indicated earlier that . Following the edit removing that information, the main body of the article now does not contain key information regarding perceptions of the Tea Party; and there is material summarised in the lead that is not mentioned in the main body. These are basic errors that should not be taking place at this stage as we move toward improving the article. Please, nobody make any "bold" edits. Removing sourced material should not happen without a discussion here. To underscore the importance of this, Phoenix and Winslow is topic-banned from the article for one week for removing sourced content without first getting consensus. I will reinstate the information. If people are uncomfortable with the wording in the lead and the main body being so similar, that is a copy-editing solution in which the wording is altered, but the information remains. | |||
As Malke still appears to have an objection I will withdraw my offer of assistance. I do urge folks here to get someone in to moderate a discussion to look at the bigger issues. ''']''' ''']''' 12:29, 9 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*There has been . A significant part of the problem with this article has been the reverting. The approach to be taken is to approach the editor responsible for the questionable edit, and discus the matter with them first. If unable to resolve the matter, get a wider consensus on this talkpage. Nobody should be reverting unless the edit is clear and obvious vandalism or BLP violation, or there is consensus for the revert. Reverting because of disagreement over content should not be taking place, and any instances of that happening, the reverter will be sanctioned. | |||
* @Malke, I'm waiting to hear your response to ST's withdrawal of his offer to moderate based on a perception that you have some objection to that. | |||
:Since your objection seems irrational to me, and as I do not particularly share your opinion regarding EdJohnson's qualifications, I would be categorically opposed to him being the moderator. | |||
*There is a complaint on my talkpage regarding two edits by North, both of which are marked "Please revert me if you do not agree". If you are unsure about an edit, do not make it - come here for consensus first. Do not ask people to revert on an article with a revert restriction. This is tantamount to a honey trap. Reverting as a standard mode of editing needs to stop on this article. We should be aiming for an editing approach that does not involve reverting at all. I have looked at both edits. The first is acceptable as North was correcting a clear error. Such edits are encouraged. The second edit alters information without first having checked the source. We don't do that in any article. We don't guess. We don't make assumptions. We check our facts. A basic editing error. That is unacceptable in any article. It is particularly bad on this one. For making a revert without consensus. And for altering information without consensus. North8000 is also topic banned from this article for one week. | |||
:If you are intent on cherry-picking a moderator, perhaps mandatory mediation with Arbcom appointed mediators would be the proper way to proceed.--] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 14:37, 9 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::While my opinion was opposite to Malke's, I think that they expressed sincere considerations, and a sincere attempt at making a good suggestion. I think it is not warranted and not very nice to call that "cherry-picking" a moderator, which implies several other things. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 19:02, 9 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
I am not comfortable that in less than 48 hours of the article being unlocked there have been such poor examples of editing. I don't wish to put a chill effect on this article. But I do want to send out the message that if your editing skills and judgement are not up to the job you should not edit this article. If your contributions to this article are more negative than positive, then you need to either stay away voluntarily, or you will be forced to stay away. In just over two weeks ArbCom will reconvene to decide what is to happen regarding this article and those editors involved in editing it. I really want this article to be in good shape and making progress. If that means cutting out some editors along the way, then so be it. Time is running out. Let's get some quality editing done please. No more reverting. No more making assumptions. No more "bold" edits that remove sourced content. No more making political statements. If you are more interested in grandstanding your political views, then this article is not for you. There is some serious encyclopaedic work that needs to be done in the next two weeks. I'd like to see folks focus on that. ''']''' ''']''' 16:50, 14 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
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:Well, that effect is already present. I've felt the inclination to remove editorializations of RS's and apply other corrections that would be proven non-controversial 95% of the time. Foresight of knee-jerk reactions have steered me towards inaction. Make of that what you will. Being said, North8000's removal of the 17th amendment was wrong. Both factually and procedurally. As for P&W's edit, there's a problem with the statement ''"...called partly conservative, partly libertarian, and partly populist."'' (which appears in the lead) not being supported in the body of subarticle, ], let alone the summary thereof in the body of ]. So, what we have is a violation of ] in both articles. Perhaps, the best course of action would be removal in both the lead and body of TPM until it's supported in the body of "Perceptions." Lest we continue to support more '''"poor examples of editing."''' ]<u>]</u> 18:27, 14 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
::First, I think Silk Tork's clarification of editing rules is brilliant and very clear and certainly easily followed from now on. So no excuses ever again. Second, I'm confused now about what the para is supposed to say, and I've asked P&W below to clarify his perceptions of what was to be included. We absolutely must all be on the same page here to prevent this happening again. ] (]) 18:39, 14 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
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] and ] are banned from editing the ] article until this time on 21 June 2013. If they do edit the article they will be blocked. They may continue to join in the discussion on this page. ''']''' ''']''' 17:02, 14 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
:That was unnecessary. I did not remove sourced content from the article since it's still there, in the lede section of the article. I removed redundant material in an effort to proceed in a constructive way. That's all. Is trying to work constructively here going to be like a walk through a minefield every day? ] (]) 18:15, 14 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Maybe I'm having a "Junior moment" (as opposed to a senior moment), but I was under the impression that the material in the perceptions section was to be moved to the subarticle once the remaining para in the main was agreed upon. Did we not agree to the version by Collect which you then changed? Or did we agree to the version you crafted earlier and did Silk Tork not action that edit? Please clarify, thanks. ] (]) 18:34, 14 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
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That was totally uncalled for! It was a gnome edit, the edit summary asked anybody who disagreed to revert me'. Where is the controversy? Who is going to argue that a TPM agenda item is to prevent the states from being allowed to pick their Senators by an election? And I don't even see that rule that you are describing anywhere. Where is it? You are going to turn this article into a fifth rail that nobody is going to want to risk working on. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 01:16, 15 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
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SilkTork, I hope you don't mind, but until others present more specific proposals on "trimming", and that gets rolling, Id like to propose addressing the text of recent edits that has been blanket reverted three times (different versions) related to the constitution in the Agenda section. The article needs trimming, to be sure, but it needs more than that. | |||
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Do you think these two processes could be carried out in tandem here? Or should I open a content dispute case at DR/N in relation to the Agenda section? ] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 15:59, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
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I would like to propose a collective evaluation of the constitution related text that has been the subject of contention over the past few days, with blanket revsions even after I modify, expand and incorporate new material, the last edit including new material from a source first introduced by Malke. | |||
The version of the page in question is , and the first section I would like to request input on is the following paragraph from the Schmidt source. Please look at the paragraph in context and comment on its relevance, whether it is well-integrated into the flow of the opening of that section, etc. If a consensus is reached to include this passage in the above-linked version of the opening of the Agenda section, then the proposed section on the Constitution can be scrutinized. There is substantially more material available than what I've posted there, incidentally. | |||
FWIW: It might be best to just have Silk Tork 'hat' discussions rather than archiving. Especially in case of any misunderstandings, the previous discussions are readily viewed. ] (]) 19:12, 14 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
<blockquote>The Tea Party contains a welter of oftentimes conflicting Agendas... Yet within this confusing constellation of ideas and viewpoints, there is a relatively stable ideological core to the Tea Party. This core is particularly evident when one focuses on the vision of the Constitution regularly professed by movement leaders, activists, and supporters.</blockquote>] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 15:55, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:I recognise there is a desire to keep the discussion all on one page, and I did try to hat all the closed discussions, but the page was becoming unwieldy, so I have moved all the closed discussions to a subpage: ]. I note there is an archive system in place, though there has been some disagreement over archiving, and how to do it. As part of the discussion on archiving, there should be consideration on how the archives of this page are to fit into the archives of the article talkpage. My moving of the closed discussions to a subpage is not ideal, as that subpage will need attention as it is not easy to navigate due to being very long, and the discussions are all hatted rather than being visible. So that should be seen as simply a temporary measure to free up editing of this page. ''']''' ''']''' 10:12, 18 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
*Silktork, there are ongoing discussions on the Talk page regarding three troublesome words, and a fourth issue regarding "planned obsolescence" of some terms used in the Agenda section, for which I've proposed a very simple solution. Discussed in a little greater detail in the Trimming section above. I would appreciate it if you'd clear these items off our plate first since they've devoured an enormous amount of time and effort in recent weeks. ] (]) 19:36, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
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Malke has been in touch - ]. We can start. I suggest we create a subpage in which to hold the discussions. It can be linked and/or ] on this page. I know there has been friction and frustration, but in order to move the discussions forward there should be no personal comments. Allow me to hat any personal comments that creep in. It would be better if I, or another uninvolved person, did that; and if, while waiting for the comment to be hatted, people did not respond, even if the comment sits there for a while. Something I have found useful, is when annoyed, type out what you want to say - but don't post it; edit it down to something polite, then discard it. It gets it out of your system, but doesn't upset anyone. | |||
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If there's no objections I will start a subpage sometime tomorrow, and on that we can briefly discuss and lay out the main issues, and consider if the article needs trimming, and if so, the best way of doing that. There was a suggestion recently of creating split-off articles. We could also consider that. ''']''' ''']''' 22:44, 9 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
''<u>Overall readability scores</u>'' '''14/31''' - partially de-archived <br> | |||
:Hello SilkTork. I think that it is important to acknowledge that the underlying cause here is conflicting goals, not personal chemistry. (Although good chemistry would make a lot of other things go better). I think that it must also be acknowledged that if an article has been pulled to one "side" that the objectives on that one "side" are to maintain the status quo, while the immediate objectives of the other "side" are to pull it towards neutral. Sincerely, <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 23:36, 9 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
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::I'd like a clarification about the "personal comments" restriction. In some cases, a particular ''edit'' may strike me as absurd (in some cases, to the point where I do not see how any competent person could see it as appropriate), regardless of the identity of the editor. Since we will be talking about the future of the article, rather than the past edits, this shouldn't come up, but, I'd like clarification. I would avoid commenting that a particular ''editor'' is taking inappropriate actions, but it may be necessary to indicate a particular ''edit'' is absurd. Any ideas? — ] ] 09:50, 10 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::Anything judgemental not factual is probably a mistake here. I would say why you thought it was absurd, avoiding sarcasm and irony. Ive had irony taken as consent for absurdity before now. ----] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 10:14, 10 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
The Tea Party doesn't have a single uniform agenda. The decentralized character of the Tea Party, with its lack of formal structure or hierarchy, allows each autonomous group to set its own priorities and goals. Goals may conflict, and priorities will often differ between groups. Many Tea Party organizers see this as a strength rather than a weakness, as decentralization has helped to immunize the Tea Party against co-opting by outside entities and corruption from within.<ref name="Rauch1">"Group Think: Inside the Tea Party’s Collective Brain"; National Journal; Jonathan Rauch; September 11, 2010</ref><br> | |||
The Tea Party has generally sought to avoid placing too much emphasis on traditional conservative social issues. National Tea Party organizations, such as the ] and ], have expressed concern that engaging in social issues would be divisive.<ref name="Rauch1"/> Instead, they have sought to have activists focus their efforts away from social issues and focus on economic and limited government issues.<ref name="AssocPress">; KTVB News; January 28, 2010</ref><ref></ref> Still, many groups like ]'s 9/12 Tea Parties, TeaParty.org, the Iowa Tea Party and Delaware Patriot Organizations do act on social issues such as abortion, gun control, prayer in schools, and illegal immigration.<ref></ref><ref name="AssocPress"/><ref></ref><br> | |||
Yes, Arthur, comment on the edit rather than the editor. And yes, Snowded, it is helpful to explain one's thinking. I would hope, however, at this stage, that we would be considering broad issues, and getting consensus for actions rather than dealing with individual edits or smaller points. Once the broad issues are agreed, folks here can deal with the fine tuning, and I would think at that stage my role would be over. ''']''' ''']''' 09:01, 11 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
The Tea Party generally focuses on government reform. Among its goals are limiting the size of the federal government, reducing government spending, lowering the national debt and opposing tax increases.<ref name="Foley1">], law professor at ] College of Law, writing on the Tea Party's proclamations regarding the Constitution, observed: "Tea Party opposition to bailouts, stimulus packages and health-care reform is reflected in various proposals to amend the Constitution, including proposals to require a balanced budget, repeal the Sixteenth and Seventeenth Amendments, and give states a veto power over federal laws (the so-called Repeal Amendment)." (Foley, Elizabeth Price. ''Tennessee Law Review,'' Vol. 78, p. 751. August 3, 2011.)</ref> To this end, Tea Party groups have protested ], ], ], ] and perceived attacks by the federal government on their 1st, 2nd, 4th and 10th Amendment rights.<ref name="Zernike1">Kate Zernike, a national correspondent for ''],'' wrote: "It could be hard to define a Tea Party agenda; to some extent it depended on where you were. In the Northeast, groups mobilized against high taxes; in the Southwest, illegal immigration. Some Tea Partiers were clearer about what they didn't want than what they did. But the shared ideology — whether for young libertarians who came to the movement through Ron Paul or older 9/12ers who came to it through Glenn Beck — was the belief that a strict interpretation of the Constitution was the solution to government grown wild. By getting back to what the founders intended, they believed they could right what was wrong with the country. Where in the Constitution, they asked, does it say that the federal government was supposed to run banks? Or car companies? Where does it say that people have to purchase health insurance? Was it so much to ask that officials honor the document they swear an oath to uphold?" (Zernike, Kate. '''' New York: Times Books, 2010, pp.65-66.)</ref> Tea Party groups have also voiced support for ] legislation as well as tighter border security, and opposed amnesty for illegal immigrants.<ref>; Fox News; July 5, 2013</ref><ref>; National Review; Betsy Woodruff; June 20, 2013</ref> They have formed ] to support candidates sympathetic to their goals and have opposed what they call the "Republican establishment" candidates. After setbacks in the ], the movement again shifted its focus. With repeal off the table, the Tea party now leads efforts to ] federal health care law.<ref name="Fringe"/><ref name="Rauch2">; National Journal; Jonathan Rauch;March 2, 2011</ref> It has also mobilized locally against the ] ].<ref name="Fringe">{{cite news | |||
:Thanks SilkTork, for setting this up and serving as our moderator. It will generally be a difficult, time-consuming and thankless task, but I hope we can resolve some issues and improve the article. Individual edits concerning use of the terms "grass-roots" and "anti-immigration" to generally describe TPm (installing the first term in the lede and removing the second term from the "Agenda" section) have been very contentious, and devoured a great deal of editor time and Talk page space. Most troublesome to me is the apparent lack of any real progress regarding these two edits, which I consider to be self-evident, based on the number of reliable sources which actually support these terms per ]. Somebody with authority needs to be able to step up and say, "We have consensus for this," or "There's no consensus for that, and I doubt there ever will be." Are you that person of authority? If so, would you review the article Talk page and try to make these determinations? ] (]) 16:12, 11 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
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| title = Clout Diminished, Tea Party Turns to Narrower Issues | |||
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}}</ref> They have protested the IRS for ] of groups with "tea party" in their names.<ref>; Wall Street Journal; Rebecca Ballhaus; June 19, 2013</ref><br> | |||
Even though the groups have a wide range of different goals, the Tea Party places the Constitution at the center of its reform agenda.<ref>Schmidt</ref><ref>; New York Times; Adam Liptak, March 13, 2010</ref><ref name="Foley1"/> It urges the return of government as intended by the ]. It also seeks to teach its view of the Constitution and other founding documents.<ref name="Rauch1"/> Scholars have described its interpretation variously as ], popular,<ref>; Northwestern University Law Review; Ilya Somin; December 6, 2011</ref> or a unique combination of the two.<ref>Rebecca E. Zietlow, law professor at the ] College of Law, characterizes the Tea Party's constitutional position as a combination of two schools of thought: "originalism" and "popular constitutionalism." "Tea Party activists have invoked the Constitution as the foundation of their conservative political philosophy. These activists are engaged in 'popular originalism,' using popular constitutionalism — constitutional interpretation outside of the courts — to invoke originalism as interpretive method." (Zietlow, Rebecca E. ''Florida Law Review,'' Vol. 64, p. 483 (2012).0</ref><ref>; Hastings Constitutional Law Quarterly; Christopher W. Schmidt; May 9, 2012</ref> Reliance on the Constitution is selective and inconsistent. Adherents cite it, yet do so more as a cultural reference rather than out of commitment to the text, which they seek to alter.<ref>''The Tea Party and the Remaking of Republican Conservatism''; Theda Skocpol and Vanessa Williamson; ]; 2012; Pgs. 50-51</ref><ref>; Contexts May 2011 vol. 10 no. 2; Andrew J. Perrin, Stephen J. Tepper; Pgs. 7-8</ref><ref name="Zernike2">; Kate Zernike; Macmillan Publishers; 2010; Pages 67-68</ref><ref>; Virginia Law Review; James E. Ryan; November 2011; Page 19-20</ref><ref>''The Tea Party: A Brief History''; Formisano, Ronald; The Johns Hopkins University Press; 2012; Page 52</ref> Several constitutional amendments have been targeted by some in the movement for full or partial repeal, including the ], ], and ]. There has also been support for a proposed ], which would enable a two-thirds majority of the states to repeal federal laws, and a ], which would limit deficit spending.<ref name="Foley1"></ref><br> | |||
===Establishing broad issues=== | |||
This is just a suggestion, but it might be a good idea for editors to briefly name an issue they feel needs addressing, like 'article length,' etc. Just list something and sign your name. Then once we have a list, we could sort it and decide which issues seem most important, as I imagine that would be respectful of Silk Tork's time here. Then we could work our way through the revised list. If editors agree, then simply name an issue below and sign your name. ] (]) 17:31, 11 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
* '''Article organization.''' It should be laid out like the other articles about political movements. All commentary, particularly by persons, publications or entities that can reasonably be construed to be politically opposed to the Tea Party, should be near the end of the article if it gets into the article at all. After all, if we allow politicians and political organizations to be defined by their opponents, there would be a certain biography starting with the words, '''"]''' is a socialist born in Kenya ..." To control the length of the article, we create sub-articles with links such as ]. ] (]) 18:25, 11 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:*'''Comment''' The TPm is not a political party, and I strongly disagree with your suggestion that criticism of any portion be relegated to the end of the article.] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 13:01, 12 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:*'''Compare''' Take a look at Misplaced Pages's articles describing the ], or ], which are not political parties. Where's the criticism and commentary from persons outside the organization? In the final 1/4 of the article. ] (]) 19:56, 12 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::The organizations/movements are not the same, nor is the scope of the material covered in the articles. There is ''no'' Misplaced Pages policy that mandates the comparing articles deemed to be peers based on some extraneous political criteria in order define how the respective articles are to be written, which again, is based on what RS have to say and policy.--] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 07:11, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::No, they're not the same. But they should be treated in a consistent manner at Misplaced Pages. Consistency = NPOV. We can't have all articles about progressive organizations and movements with a tiny, cramped section of conservative criticism at the end, and all articles about conservative movements with progressive criticism splattered all over them like birdshot. Try to be objective, and just look at a random sample of articles about both conservative and progressive organizations at Misplaced Pages. That's what we've got. ] (]) 22:24, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::Agree that the Occupy movement and the Tea Party movement are not the same, but criticisms by political enemies, of either movement, should be trimmed and isolated. I'm not sure about criticism of methods by those who agree with the (apparent) goals, but I tend to believe it should be given the same treatment. — ] ] 23:40, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::P&W, I would say that insofar as consistency is relevant to NPOV, it would have to be consistency with RS, not on the basis of what a given editor defines in terms of attribute matching as equivalents in some extraneous categorization schema. | |||
:::::I would venture to say that there are more reasons to be critical of the TPm than Occupy, for example, which resonated with people in countries throughout the world in the wake of the finance crisis. Such reasons seem to generally relate to a perception on the part of observes from various backgrounds that the TPm includes constituents that are advocating for private interests from behind a facade of patriotism and American values, whereas Occupy and the other group that has been mentioned are involved in advocating for well-defined causes that are more narrow in scope and readily intelligible to the general public. | |||
:::::There's very little for political opponents to expose when causes are out in the open and plain to see. You either agree or disagree with the cause, and can debate its merits but not its status as that for which advocacy has been undertaken. On the other hand, where people feel a facade has been erected to project a public image aimed to deceive while pursuing ulterior motives, then there will be efforts to expose the facade as well as the actual causes that are being advanced from behind the facade. This is where the AstroTurf question comes in with respect to the TPm.--] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 00:33, 15 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::Ubikwit, there's a lot to criticize about the ] but much of it just doesn't seem to find its way into the article: Raping a student who is developmentally disabled. Dozens of other cases of sexual assault. Repeatedly masturbating in front of children. Multiple incidents of violence against police, including one officer who was allegedly stabbed. Anti-Semitic overtones. Chronic thefts, including expensive personal electronic items. Most disturbing, an effort to keep reports of sexual assault away from police, so that the Occupy community could handle the sexual assault reports internally. And an enormous number of the usual complaints, heard whenever there's a large mass of people like this gathering for extended periods, about urinating and defecating in public spaces and on private property. | |||
::::::Just in case you think it's the corporate media or evil conservatives making up a pack of lies about the Occupy movement, here's a couple of reports from within the Occupy movement itself about sexual assaults and some of the other issues I've mentioned: Here's another from the very progressive Feminist Wire, describing an "Occupy rape culture": | |||
::::::In the ] article, we see a laundry list of every incident that could possibly be construed as bigoted in any way. But members of the ] are alleged to have committed a multitude of genuine felonies — '''VIOLENT''' felonies — and where's the laundry list in that article? There's just two sentences about them, and those two sentences are split up and "buried." | |||
::::::''I would venture to say that there are more reasons to be critical of the TPm than Occupy, for example ...'' Are you kidding me, Ubikwit? The two movements need to be treated the same: objectively, consistently, and NPOV. None of the reliable, neutral sources claim that the TPm or organizations within it are ], despite misrepresentations by some editors to the contrary. Give up on that. And we should also be talking about a reduction of the "bigotry laundry list" in the TPm article to the buried single sentence treatment we see in the ] article. ] (]) 01:43, 15 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::P&W, you have raised some valid criticism of Occupy, assuming that they are attested to to in RS. I would suggest that you edit that article, and engage in appropriate dispute resolution processes if the sources are challenged, etc. | |||
:::::::The fact remains, however, that the movements are vastly different, and the both movements need to be treated in accordance with the respective body of RS that is created in relation to them. In the case of the TPm, the breadth and depth of the types of criticism emanating from a wide variety of sources testifies to the fact that there is more material in its scope that is subject to critical evaluation. Moreover, there are already several studies published in academic sources by professors, legal scholars and researchers. I don't believe that you've pointed to a single such reference with respect to Occupy--not that there might not be such sources forthcoming. | |||
:::::::It is not permissible under WP:DUE to try and exclude coverage of the RS relating to an article because the article in question is deemed to be about a topic that has an oppositional counterpart. NPOV with respect to RS, as determined by WP:DUE and WP:WEIGHT are the policies at issue, primarily. Furthermore, with respect to the TPm, primary sources are of limited applicability, so you need to find more secondary sources if you want to counter statements made in RS, especially those published by academic presses.] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 05:59, 15 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::::I'm not trying to exclude coverage of any reliable sources, Ubikwit. I'm only trying to give them the ] they're due. Majority opinions, such as "]" and "opposed to illegal immigration" should be stated in Misplaced Pages's voice in the first 10% of the article, and expanded upon in the heart of the article. Minority opinions, such as "Astroturf" and "anti-immigration," should be stated in the final 1/4 of the article, and carefully attributed to the tiny handful of people who are making the claims. "The breadth and depth of the criticism" is almost entirely coming from partisan sources that are opposed, like ], ] and ''].'' And as I said on the main Talk page, I categorically ignore the "go and edit some other article" defense. ] (]) 16:58, 15 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
One attempt at forming a list of what Tea Partiers wanted Congress to do resulted in the '']''. It was a legislative agenda created by conservative activist Ryan Hecker with the assistance of ] of FreedomWorks. Armey had co-written the previous ] released by the Republican Party during the 1994 midterm elections. One thousand agenda ideas that had been submitted were narrowed down to twenty-one non-social issues. Participants then voted in an online campaign in which they were asked to select their favorite policy planks. The results were released as a ten-point Tea Party platform.<ref name="Davis">{{Cite news|url=http://abcnews.go.com/Politics/tea-party-activists-craft-contract-america/story?id=9740705|title=Tea Party Activists Craft 'Contract from America'|last=Davis|first=Teddy|date=9 February 2010|work=ABC News|publisher=American Broadcasting Company|accessdate=18 September 2010}}</ref><ref name="Davis2">{{cite web|last=Davis |first=Teddy |url=http://abcnews.go.com/Politics/tea-party-activists-unveil-contract-america/story?id=10376437&page=2 |title=Tea Party Activists Unveil 'Contract from America' |publisher=ABC News |date=April 15, 2010 |accessdate=June 7, 2011}}</ref> The Contract from America was met with some support within the Republican Party, but it was not broadly embraced by GOP leadership, which released its own ']'.<ref name="Davis2"/><br></div> | |||
* '''Hot button words.''' Certain terms, such as "]" and "anti-immigration," have proven to be very controversial. They trigger edit wars, reams and reams of text on the article Talk page, and ultimately a lot of frustration and anger. Let's find a way to short circuit all the frustration and anger. I propose a procedure to be limited to this moderated discussion. All participants are asked to sign on below. The procedure is this: an editor seeking to introduce or change a particular descriptive word proposes the edit in a new section on this page. All editors active on this page have seven days to '''Support''' or '''Oppose''' the edit, and present policy-based arguments supporting their positions. At the end of the seven days, SilkTork determines whether there is consensus one way or the other, and announces that finding at the end of the section. | |||
:::* '''Support.''' It's relatively fast, and it has finality and certainty. ] (]) 18:25, 11 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
Unresolved concerns: | |||
*We should establish that the highest priority objective is to make this article informative. Endless effort/ battles/ on trying to fight/wiki-lawyer in swipes or praise should be recognized as contrary to that. 02:06, 12 April 2013 (UTC) <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) </span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:4) Introduce the pedestrian understanding of constitutional originalism by sociologists: {{ex|Reliance on the Constitution is selective and inconsistent. Adherents cite it, yet do so as a cultural reference rather than out of commitment to the text, which they seek to alter.}} | |||
*'''Reduce content''' The article should provide a good overview of the Tea Party movement and not stay mired in excessive details. Perhaps merge 2010/2012 elections with another article like ]. Merge anything that deals with protests over to ]. If it's something that happened at a protest, it really belongs in that article. Nothing should be duplicated here in this article, which is a bit long to begin with. ] (]) 03:53, 12 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:*'''Oppose''' - You don't call a plumber to tell you why the furnace is acting up. ]<u>]</u> 21:25, 10 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::Addendum: Malke and P&W's versions both have this sentence in their proposed paragraph on ''Contract from America'', which I don't object to adding if we intend to scrap the present subsection on that same topic: | |||
::::''The top ten included "identify the constitutionality of every new law, reject cap and trade legislation, demand a balanced federal budget, simplify the tax code, assess constitutionality of federal agencies, limit growth in annual federal spending, repeal Obamacare, new energy policy that supports exploration, reduce earmarks, and reduce federal taxes."'' | |||
:::] (]) 10:25, 10 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::I'd keep the list, but we do need a merge for reduced redundancy. ]<u>]</u> 21:30, 10 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:Same answer as the previous 5 versions. Good enough to go in as a starting point for further work. With the understanding that it needs changes which we can handle then. (Including later fixing the travesty "Reliance on the Constitution is selective and inconsistent." If someone advocates blacks' right to vote and cites the constitution, but fails to advocate the right to bear arms in the same speech, do you put that "inconsistent" statement in their article?) Would not replace the subsections which would be handled separately. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 13:41, 10 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:*'''Comment''' What do you mean by "not stay mired in excessive details"? This is an encyclopedia and should provide as much detailed content in covering the topic as appropriate according to the reliable sources and policy.] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 13:01, 12 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::re: ''Reliance on the Constitution is selective and inconsistent. Adherents cite it, yet do so as a cultural reference rather than out of commitment to the text, which they seek to alter.'' | |||
*'''Framing of the article''' The article currently is disjointed, and uninformative. | |||
::Two objections have been raised about that text. The first, is that it is opinion, rather than reliably sourced fact. This is incorrect; the sources do not say they are opining, and the sources (the Oxford University published book, and the peer-reviewed academic paper) are indeed reliable. Also, equally reliable sources calling that text into question have not been produced. Further objections along those lines would be better handled at ]. | |||
::The second objection, as I understand it, is that the text is inaccurate or false. The "right to vote/right to bear arms" example doesn't exemplify the reasoning behind the "inconsistent" description being used here. Here is some of the source content supporting the proposed text: | |||
::{{quotation|It can further be found in the TPM’s recurring cultural theme of returning to the ideals of the Constitution. Like the Tea Party name, this theme is <u>selectively nostalgic</u> <u>Support for Constitutional principles is not absolute.</u> TPM supporters were twice as likely than others to favor a constitutional amendment banning flag burning; many also support efforts to overturn citizenship as defined by the Fourteenth Amendment. That TPM supporters <u>simultaneously want to honor the founders’ Constitution and alter</u> that same document highlights the political flexibility of the cultural symbols they draw on. The TPM supporters’ <u>inconsistent views of the Constitution</u> suggests that their nostalgic embrace of the document is animated more by a network of cultural associations than a thorough commitment to the original text. (Perrin, Pgs. 7-8)}} | |||
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::{{quotation|They are doing what every political endeavor does: using history as a source of inspiration and social identity. Just like other political actors, past and present, Tea Partiers <u>stretch the limits of the Constitution, use it selectively, and push for amendments</u>. Tea Partiers have argued for measures such as restrictions on birthright citizenship, abridgements of freedom of religion for Muslim-Americans, and suspension of protections in the Bill of Rights for suspected terrorists. <u>Some parts of the Constitution are lauded over others</u>. (Skocpol/Williamson, Pgs. 50-51)}} | |||
::The "inconsistency" is not so much that they do advocate one part while not advocating another part of the Constitution (although they do that, too), but more that they advocate adherance to the constitution while at the same time advocating amending or repealing. Did I incorrectly word what the sources are saying, or is the contention that the sources are just wrong? ] (]) 19:59, 10 July 2013 (UTC) (I note that North8000 is travelling, and says we can fix this later, but I thought I'd at least try to get a clearer picture of the objection.) ] (]) 19:59, 10 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::I'd call it misleading POV wording, including if a source said it. Again, we can fix this after it's in. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 13:36, 11 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:The article should be organized more on topical issues as addressed in secondary sources, not primary source material by TPm activists or leaders. | |||
::::"A source" didn't say it, many sources have. Here's another one: | |||
::{{quotation|The Tea Partiers' view of the Constitution was commonly described as "originalism," a fidelity to the exact words of the document as they were written in 1787 that has adherents at major universities and, in Antonin Scalia and Clarence Thomas, on the U.S. Supreme Court. And some Tea Partiers' version of the Constitution sounded just like that. But many others were learning <u>subjective interpretations of the Constitution that went beyond the primary source, and beyond what legal scholars or Americans would recognize</u>—even using a dictionary—in reading the original document. (Zernike; Boiling Mad, Pgs. 67-68)}} | |||
::::And another one in this academic, peer reviewed paper contrasting conservative originalism with progressive living constitutionalism (cited in no fewer than 33 academic journals and papers): | |||
::{{quotation|It serves as a critical counterweight to the <u>distorted history</u> pedaled by many conservative politicians and activists, including the members of the Tea Party. These activists seek to portray themselves as the true defenders of the Constitution, but <u>they are selective in their defense</u> and in their vision. They incorrectly portray the powers of the federal government established by the original Constitution as exceedingly limited, which ignores both the language of the Constitution and the crucial fact that it was adopted in response to the flawed Articles of Confederation, which failed to establish a strong national government. In addition to distorting the original Constitution, Tea Partiers <u>often pretend as if the Constitution were never amended and therefore simply ignore</u> the expansion of individual rights and federal power accomplished by those amendments. When <u>selective amnesia fails</u>, they call for <u>jettisoning portions of the Constitution they dislike</u>, including the guarantee of citizenship in the Fourteenth Amendment to all who are born in the United States. Indeed, Justice Scalia jumped on the Tea Party bandwagon last year in suggesting that the Seventeenth Amendment was a bad idea, which is simultaneously remarkable and somewhat beside the point for a sitting Justice, whose oath is to defend the Constitution—even the parts he may not like. Put simply, the rise of the Tea Party has led to a national debate over the meaning of the Constitution, which has recently focused on the constitutionality of health care reform. The <u>distortions, selective reading of the Constitution</u>, and calls for constitutional amendments by Tea Partiers demand a response from progressives, and Amar‘s work outlines a devastating one. But there is a further lesson in here for progressives who remain uncertain about the wisdom of embracing the Constitution. If the Tea Partiers have to fiddle so much with the actual Constitution in order to claim that it supports their positions, doesn‘t that in itself constitute excellent proof that the real Constitution is not nearly as conservative as the Tea Partiers would like? (James E. Ryan; Virginia Law Review, Pgs. 19-20)}} | |||
::::Another highly regarded source published by Johns Hopkins University Press makes this observation in his book specifically about the Tea Party movement: | |||
::{{quotation|The federal government, especially Congress, must be held to a strict interpretation of the Constitution. Like other Americans, however, Tea Party supporters are selective about which passages to ignore and which to revere. (Formisano; Pg. 52)}} | |||
::::So, to recap, here's the proposed text based on many reliable sources: '''"Reliance on the Constitution is selective and inconsistent. Adherents cite it, yet do so more as a cultural reference rather than out of commitment to the text, which they seek to alter."''' That accurately conveys what the multiple reliable sources say, without being misleading. Are there other concerns? | |||
::::] (]) 05:44, 21 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
== Getting back to work == | |||
:The ''Agenda'' section is the prime example of the problem. Whereas secondary sources addressing topical issues related to the TPm focus on issues such as the constitution and immigration, the Agenda section is taken up almost entirely by the "Contract from America", which is basically a document that has been used in an effort to recruit people, including politicians to the TPm. The Tea Party Patriots are the only group apparently involved in the largely failed effort to have the platform adopted (it lists a total of four legislators from 2010!). In other words, the Contract from America is given undue prominence, even though it is for all intents and purposes obsolete, having been eclipsed by the Republican "Pledge to america", etc.; moreover, there is not a single secondary source discussing it. Seeing as it has its own article, perhaps it should be substantially trimmed down in accordance with WP:UNDUE, and secondary sources introduced. | |||
:With respect to immigration, an argument has been put forth that immigration reform is now the current issue. If such shifting of the time frames is permissible there, then the Contract for America should be considered to be something of a dated document, and the content of the issues in it that are still current addressed. | |||
:It is still may be necessary to trace the development of some positions where the transitions between past stances and the current stance are relevant. | |||
:The domestic issues having the greatest import include: | |||
#The constitution | |||
#Taxation | |||
#Immigration | |||
#The role/size of the government | |||
:Considering that the TPm is almost entirely restricted to the USA, it is very strange that the Agenda section obscures the domestic issues that could be considered as primary motivators for the grass-roots participants, relegating them to blurbs, yet prominently features foreign policy. That belies a total lack of balance in the ''Agenda'' section. And the "Tea Party Caucus" is defunct, so why was it described in terms that make it seem current and viable with respect to foreign policy? | |||
:There must have been substantial criticism of the contract when it came out, in light of controversial contents, such as items 2 and 10 on the list. Why is there absolutely no input from secondary sources? There is some criticism and analysis reltated to the foreign policy pronouncements. ] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 05:37, 12 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
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::Ubikwit, SilkTork mentioned above that the focus is on the edit and not the editor. We're trying to come to an agreement here. Comments such as "proponents. . .use the article for advocacy," and naming editors and your uninformed assumptions of their supposed motivations, are not helpful. You have no evidence of advocacy and it's a personal attack against editors to even suggest that, especially when you then name editors. You have no evidence or knowledge of anyone's motivations or their personal or professional lives. You are simply attacking volunteer editors. I've redacted your comments. I can't speak for the other editors, but if you accuse me of advocacy again, I will take you to a noticeboard. ] (]) 12:33, 12 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::I don't believe that mentioning an editor in response to a claim they make is precluded, but I will refrain from suggesting you are engaged in advocacy, and admit, in retrospect, that it was improper (largely due to lack of sleep, basically). On the other hand, you should re-read the opening paragraph by SilkTork regarding personal comments, and not take matters into your own hands by removing my comments, accusing me of a personal attack and then threatening me with ANI. Are you also implying that my comments related to statements made by P&W and North suggested advocacy on their parts. My comment primarily have addressed the content of the edits by the editor, not the editor on a personal level. I have reentered my remarks that relate directly to other editor's posts as comments following the relevant edits.] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 13:01, 12 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::The purpose of the list is to establish what editors see as changes that will benefit the article. Questions and comments can come later. I've moved your post down here. ] (]) 13:15, 12 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::And yes, you were accusing all three of us of advocacy. Re-read your own comment. ] (]) 13:30, 12 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::Malke, I don't care to engage in a prolonged argument with you, but I'm going to have to ask you to stop moving/removing my comments. If SilkTork finds anything inappropriate or misplaced, he can hat it or move it to the place in the discussion that he finds appropriate, at his discretion as moderator. Thank you.] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 15:00, 12 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
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Malke. If you become aware of personal comments in future, please draw it to my attention rather than deal with it yourself. ''']''' ''']''' 15:20, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:Oh,aye. I see your point. ] (]) 22:10, 14 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
It might be a good idea to open a section addressing the specific government programs the TP opposes and include the Social Security and Medicare programs which TP members depend on. Tea Party members and their supporters don't seem to be against them, yet these programs represent the same kind of huge government programs they are opposed to. | |||
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*'''Reduce the trivia and marginally germane material''' Most items should be ''about'' the TPM movement at a regional or national scale. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 17:50, 12 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:*'''Comment''' It seems to me that this represents another attempt to artificially constrain the scope of the article in a manner that is not in conformance with policy. There is, incidentally, WP:HTRIV, but the qualification that "Most items should be ''about'' the TPM movement at a regional or national scale" does not seem to be included in that policy. The operative phrase in that policy is <blockquote>...trivia is information that is not important to the subject it is being presented in relation to.</blockquote> | |||
::The encyclopedic article we are drafting should not be a simple chronicle of the exploits of the TPm, but comprehensive in scope, including the full compliment of analysis and criticism found in reliable secondary sources, in paricular.] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 18:51, 12 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::I've not talking about criticism, I'm talking about trivia, which the article is loaded with. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 18:59, 12 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::Fair enough, let's address it on a case-by-case basis. The article certainly is disjointed, so there may be some information that might make more sense if better integrated, and I wouldn't be surprised if there turned out to be some trivia, too. Maybe that would fall into place if the article were framed in a more coherent manner, making the clean up easier.] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 19:16, 12 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''trim''', specifically criticism like much of the the section ''On issues of race, bigotry and public perception''. the tea party is multicultural (the % is irrelevant, everyone is welcome and represented , ) I also question the benefit of the section ''Obama's thoughts''. the section on polling from 2010 does little to explain what the movement is about, rather backs up claims already made above such as the tp is a minority not liked by the majority. this is the second of 2 sections devoted to polling, which i question if either really fit. polls are easily manipulated and the very lowest rung of what is considered a rs. wp is not a democracy, neither is the usa, a quasi-democratic poll of a tiny minority is perhaps not the best sources we have available for the message intended to convey ] (]) 08:42, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Trim''' Definitely, per recommendations by Darkstar and North8000. Too much trivia. Plenty of opportunity for sub-articles here. ] (]) 22:19, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Trim''', per recommendations by Darkstar and North8000. However, I disagree with some of the '''Framing''' of this '''framing''' section; reliable sources commenting on the '''stated''' agenda of TPm organizations should be preferred to politically opposed, but still reliable, sources commenting on the "actual" agenda as those sources see it. "Reliable sources" which are sufficiently biased can only be used for clearly ''factual'' material (e.g., a stated agenda), not for interpretation or opinion. — ] ] 23:51, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::I'm not clear as to some of the terminology and phrases used above. What do you mean by "commenting on the stated agenda", for example, and how does that differ from "the actual" agenda? | |||
::I would suggest that there are several types of commentary, some which are topical analysis carried out considering the historical context, etc., and some are critical, attempting to expose aspects that the constituents of the movement may seek to portray themselves as standing for when in fact others see something else in the actions, etc., of the movement that contradicts the official stance. | |||
::It would not be in accord with WP:DUE (or WP:NPOV) to exclude analysis of any part of the TPm "stated agenda" set forth in secondary sources. as for criticism, I think there could be a separate section for critical commentary that is more contestable than straightforward analysis.] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 14:23, 14 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::What I'm saying is that '''biased''' (normally) <del>biased</del> reliable sources talking about the TPm's "agenda" should be disregarded except as in it reports on the TPm's ''stated'' agenda. Those sources' opinions on the TPm's "actual" agenda would be seriously biased, and cannot possibly be ''part'' of the article, except under a "media" section. — ] ] 17:04, 14 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::Yes, you're right Arthur, and that has been the problem with the article from the beginning. Now even the 'origins' section about the early protests has been prefaced with the opinions of those who want to support the new claim that big tobacco started the movement. Prefacing everything they do and say with a counterclaim first, is the same as if every time the president were about to give a speech, someone got up before him and said, "Here's everything he's going to say, and here's why you shouldn't believe him." ] (]) 17:44, 14 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::Two followup points: | |||
:::::1) How would you distinguish between "biased" "and critical" | |||
:::::2) Where would you suggest that the content of academic sources (i.e., not mass-media sources) that you consider to be biased but reliable be included?] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 00:11, 15 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::1) It's a problem. I think we can all agree that a self-described liberal would be biased against the TPm. One could argue that anyone who takes a stance which the TPm generally (I know it's a weasel-word) opposes would be considered biased, but it's ''possible'' that some such correspondents could act in an unbiased manner. | |||
:::::::The liberal and conservative opposition is valid, but that doesn't stop both Fox News and the Huffington Post from being RS.] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 05:59, 15 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::::It doesn't stop Fox News and the Huffington Post from ''generally'' being RS, but we cannot accept opinions or "conclusions" from clearly biased sources. Some sources can be reliable for (verifiable) facts, some for interpretations, and some for commentary. In this case, Fox News and the Huffington Post are reliable for facts, but ''not'' for interpretations or conclusions. <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) </span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> | |||
::::::2) Probably still media. We might put it in the "agenda" section with a cavaet, such as "'']'' asserts that the TPm's goals were to deregulate tobacco." (If they actually said that, which I doubt.) — ] ] 02:51, 15 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Peer-reviewed journals and scholarly studies published by academic presses are not mass media; in fact, the are that in contradistinction to which the term "mass" of the compound noun "mass media" has been adopted. ] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 05:59, 15 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Peer-reviewed journals are not "mass media", but they are still not necessarily reliable for interpretation, if sufficiently biased (which '']'' is). '']'' is not presently used for the agenda of the TPm; if it were, it also could only be used for demonstrable facts, not interpretations or conclusions. — ] ] 07:04, 15 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::I think that the Tobacco control article would fit best in a Criticism section in relation to AstroTurf. The Criticism section might be divided into Scholarly and Mass Media sections, for example. The connections detailed in that paper relate primarily to organizations that pre-date the appearance of the TPm, and most of the information analyzed in the study is from that period, too. So I think that the tobacco excise tax issue is basically subsumed under the general taxation agenda as proclaimed by the TPm, and I'm not aware that it has been proclaimed as an agenda item since the TPm started articulating an agenda. | |||
:::::::::On the other hand, the studies by legal scholars relating to the stances on the constitution that have been articulated by various TPm activists and leaders are illuminating for their objective analysis against the backdrop of the historical development of theories of interpretation and application of the constitution. Informative sources such as those should be integrated into the main body of the article.] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 07:27, 15 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::Much as I would like to include scholarly studies of the agenda as it relates to the Constitution, most are hopelessly biased. If you would suggest a ''specific'' study, I would give my opinion as to whether it's an RS for analysis. — ] ] 07:56, 15 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::Any and all of these, for example: | |||
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:::::::::::#] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 09:04, 15 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::: They all cover what ''might be'' a position (not necessary, part of an "agenda") taken by some factions within the TPm. Probably includable with that phrasing, with two adjustments: | |||
::::::::::::: My ''might be'' depends on the precise wording of the paper; it should be noted that abstracts represent the position of the author(s), ''not'' necessarily vetted by the journal. It's been known to happen that abstracts take the exact opposite position to that supported by the paper. | |||
::::::::::::: Law review journals include student papers, which should be considered to have less reliability than those presented by established professionals. | |||
:::::::::::: I haven't read even the ones available for download in full, but the third one seems to refer to a movement which the TPm is associated with, rather than one which is actually part of the TPm. If that's the case, it's only usable to support that the TPm ''associates with'' the named movement, rather that that the named movement is part of the "agenda" of the TPm. — ] ] 20:20, 15 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
{{outdent}}Well, I'm not sure how you are distinguishing between a position and an agenda in this context. There is the general problem of clarifying agenda items that most TPm activists support, but it would seem that the proclamations related to constitutional amendments are fairly widely reported and studied. | |||
If you don't have time to read the sources, there's little to discuss. | |||
Regarding the third source, I'm not sure to which associated movement you are referring, but the so-called Repeal amendment is more widely discussed than the so-called ], which I gather was drafted in repose to the onset of the TPm by a libertarian law professor. It is true that the third paper does not discuss the TPm in depth in the same manner that the other two papers do, so I haven't used it except for citing facts, namely this passage<<blockquote>Tea Party opposition to bailouts, stimulus packages and health-care | |||
reform is reflected in various proposals to amend the Constitution, | |||
including proposals to require a balanced budget, repeal the Sixteenth and | |||
Seventeenth Amendments, and give states a veto power over federal laws | |||
(the so-called Repeal Amendment).</blockquote>] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 10:35, 16 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:I've now read those for which the actual article is available, and there's no "there" there. — ] ] 11:05, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::: Just correcting one point, "clarifying agenda items that most TPm activists support" is not enough to make it germane, it would need to be in some TPM context. As a whimsical but useful illustrations, if a poll found that most TPM supporters preferred dogs over cats, that does not weigh towards considering dogs to be a TPM agenda item. The more realistic areas are social conservatism/liberalism issues, where the libertarians and conservatives within the TPM have conflicting views, which the agenda has mostly stayed away from. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 12:10, 16 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
] (]) 15:17, 12 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Trim''', per Darkstar, North8000. Also, agree with Arthur on the TP groups stating their agenda. The agenda should be brief but include mention of fiscal goals, opposition to Obamacare, opposition to U.N. Agenda 21, pro-immigration reform, and amnesty with secure borders. And 'get out the vote,' and mention the super PAC. ] (]) 02:59, 14 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:That would prove difficult. How do we delve into the complexity of Medicare which older Americans paid into their entire lives only to see cut for another entitlement (Obamacare), and social security which is backed by IOU's the federal government can only pay back with increased taxes or borrowing? Even saying they oppose these programs is troublesome. Opposition is more to the administration of such programs. ]<u>]</u> 15:31, 12 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
::*''Comment'' First, that sounds like a proposal to populate the Agenda section with exclusively primary source material, while excluding analysis of the policy positions set forth as points in the agenda. Primary sources are not used indiscriminately on Misplaced Pages to promote a certain image a given entity seeks to project of itself. Thepolicy is WP:PRIMARY, which states<blockquote>Any interpretation of primary source material requires a reliable secondary source for that interpretation. A primary source may only be used on Misplaced Pages to make straightforward, descriptive statements of facts that can be verified by any educated person with access to the source but without further, specialized knowledge. For example, an article about a novel may cite passages to describe the plot, but any interpretation needs a secondary source. Do not analyze, synthesize, interpret, or evaluate material found in a primary source yourself; instead, refer to reliable secondary sources that do so. Do not base an entire article on primary sources, and be cautious about basing large passages on them.</blockquote> | |||
::I thought it was an interesting dichotomy. Look at the demographic. They're all headed for retirement and will need these programs. I've mentioned this several times back in 2010 but nobody ever wanted to do it. ] (]) 16:23, 12 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::See my comments under Arthur's post regarding WP:DUE, etc. | |||
:::It also seems like you are proposing items that are clearly not part of the agenda under the Agenda section, such as the super PAC, for example, which would seem to belong under the Organization section. The same probably holds true for the "get out the vote" stuff. Participating in electoral politics is a means to effect the agenda, but I'm not sure it can be categorized as an agenda point in and of itself unless it were taking aim at voter apathy, for example.] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 14:23, 14 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::Agree that some of those are not part of the agenda, but strongly disagree about what a reliable source for the agenda might be. WP:PRIMARY suggests that we should use secondary sources which talk about the primary sources, not those which speculate on the "true meaning" of those sources. — ] ] 11:05, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
IMO, the first order of business should be to decide what the article is actually about. The sources so far presented do not indicate that the TPM is a single identifiable organism at all -- in fact dealing with its very disparate nature is one of the problems the current article has. It does not appear to be monolithic, nor to require that its "members" hold particular views, nor that the views of many subset of its members then become the views of the group as a whole in the sources presented so far. Thus I would suggest that we have sections showing historical use of the term "tea party", the history of some of the identifiable organizations using the term "tea party", the nature of the most prominent groups forming the TPM, and the "mathematical intersection" of the beliefs espoused by ''all'' of those groups, not just any belief expressed by a single segment of such groups. And we must consider the article as a whole (]) as the curent melange looks like a horse desgned by a committee <g>. ] (]) 11:56, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::* Malke, please feel free to write a couple of paragraphs on that topic and post them here for approval. If there's a reliable source which specifically addresses that "interesting dichotomy," it should be identified and cited like this: | |||
==Avoiding the most likely failure mode== | |||
:::<blockquote>''Joe Blow, a political science professor at Wassamatta U., has examined the "paradox" created by the Tea Party movement's support for reform of Social Security and Medicare. Blow observes this support is not in the self-interest of many Tea Party members, since they tend to be over 50 years old and will be relying on these programs in a few years.''</blockquote> | |||
One way to help achieve success is to identify the most likely forms of failure and then try to avoid them. The most likely failure of the process is when the people who are trying to fix the article get ground down and give up and mostly go away. ("mostly go away" = only sporadically comment rather than make real efforts.) Unfortunately, I think that that is starting to happen. Then the article would end up being determined by the few "persistent" folks. That has been its history; we should work to avoid that. Sincerely, <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 18:22, 22 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::* There are three steps I'd like to take right away: | |||
:That is a good point, and why I wish to involve all the main contributors in a consensus decision. If some people do not get involved in a decision to remove some content, but come back to edit in a months time and reinstate thst content, then this effort has been for nothing. However, we are all volunteers on this project, so people cannot be made to do anything. On the other hand, people can be sanctioned for doing something against consensus, so it might be useful to have strong sanctions in place, such as ArbCom DS. Anyway, the contributors tool is back working - so I will shortly contact everyone. ''']''' ''']''' 07:41, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::#One thing I think we should take action on immediately is adding the word ] (with the Wikilink) to the lede sentence. We were discussing it just before the moderated discussion started. I felt we had consensus for it, since there were so many reliable sources to support it. The allegations about ] have one or two sources, and are clearly a minority opinion per ]. | |||
:::#Another thing we should consider immediately is removing the ] section. The removal of the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" section has kind of orphaned THIS section. I suggest we cut the length of the paragraph about the gas grill in half, and add both events to the list of bulleted incidents at the end of ], in chronological order. | |||
:::#Also, there's a subsection at the beginning of the "History" section called ]. Nothing there is notable enough to remain in this top-level article. It should be moved to the spin-off article, ], after the bulleted list of incidents. | |||
::* '''Strongly support.''' Now that the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" roadblock has finally been removed, we can move forward with several other items that have been waiting patiently. The "grass-roots" edit, for example, has been waiting for two months. Let's get these three items done and move on. regards .... ] (]) 03:26, 13 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
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::Just a thought - but would stopping the talk page discussion (which is going no where) until an agreement is reached here be one way to make progress? ----] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 08:28, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::*'''Oppose''' First, I believe that we are to be focusing on one item at a time, not multiple items in a haphazard manner.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 06:12, 13 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::Stopping the Talk page discussion to get some sort of consensus on sources and policies here regarding a few points would be very helpful. For example, ''newspaper Vs academic sources''...we have unresolved arguments that both be given equal weight despite evidence the newspapers are aligned with the Tea Party, especially the argument that the larger number of newspapers Vs number of academic sources means academic opinion is basically fringe. We also face the argument that a newspaper not mentioning something is equivalent to it being a source for it not existing. ''Terminology''...we have unresolved arguments that sources using words with definitions that do not match exactly the Misplaced Pages definition cant be used, ie: Sources say TP is both grass-roots and astro-turfed but astro-turfed doesn't allow grass-roots at all so we can't say astro-turfed. These may sound silly but they are real stumbling blocks on the Talk page. ] (]) 09:45, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::"Newspapers aligned with the Tea Party"? Never mind. It's more that the academic sources that have been provided, and that I've been able to read, are from ultra-left-wing commentators. (And one libertarian source.) If the authors thought the the TPm agenda was possible, they wouldn't say so. Authors, even in "academic papers", make choices as to what to discuss and what to ignore. Some editors (on the article talk page) are using the fact that certain concepts are not named in the academic papers to demonstrate that they aren't there. — ] ] 11:18, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::As for "newspaper vs. academic sources", if the newspapers almost always state one position, and academic sources a contrary position, then we can't reasonably say either is fringe. However, if the academic sources only ''occassionally'' present a contrary position, and are mostly silent, then you could make a reasonable case that those academic papers are minority, if not fringe. It's a difficult problem; perhaps ''that'' issue should be brought up as a named issue on this page. — ] ] 11:18, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*If you scroll up, you'll see that SilkTork is reluctant to act on these questions "without a broader consensus." The comment immediately preceding that was mine, where I asked specifically for a decision on consensus for the two terminology disputes — "grass-roots" and "anti-immigration." SilkTork moved that comment under an "extended discussion" hat. Without it, it isn't clear what he's talking about specifically. Taken in its entirety, that exchange of comments indicated that SilkTork believes we do have consensus on these two issues, but it isn't as strong as he would have liked. I feel much the same way. Based on the sources we've found, ] is telling us what to do very clearly; but a vocal minority of editors chooses to interpret policy another way. | |||
*I've been saying this for weeks. We need to listen to policy-based arguments, focus on what policy is telling us to do on these two intractable points, and do it. Then we need to move on. It should be obvious that we will never achieve a unanimous consensus on these points, because some editors cannot check their partisanship at the Misplaced Pages door, or have come to this page to pursue a grudge. No solution will ever be perfect. We need to accept a good solution that isn't perfect. | |||
*In both cases, there is a strong majority of reliable sources that say one thing very clearly, and a small minority of reliable sources that are being carefully and laboriously contorted by a few partisans to say something else. ] tells us what to do. We need to accept it, and do it. ] (]) 11:28, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:*According to Misplaced Pages policy, I believe that academic sources take precedence over news media. Academic sources offer in depth analysis of topics, whereas news media articles are more informational, with some analysis. It is WP:SYNTH and WP:OR to attempt to assert, for example, that news media should be given equal weight because of strength in numbers of citations. | |||
::-The statement by ] related to the news media favoring the TRm was intended to be made, I believe, with reference to the "conservative media outlets" referred to by Skopol as comprising one constituency of the "tripartite mix". | |||
::-With respect to the criticism of Skopol and Fromisano's framing of Astroturfing, it is not the case that they are wrong and the Misplaced Pages article is right, but that Misplaced Pages article needs to be updated to reflect their statements on the topic.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 11:42, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::I do not agree that "academic" sources take precedence over news media. Academic sources usually offer more analysis, but it may require an expert librarian to determine whether an academic source is discredited, while newspapers issue retractions. An academic book ''should'' be better-researched, but usually is not as carefully edited, and there is no place to look for retractions. P&W above uses a different tone than I would have, but he's right. There is a strong majority of reliable sources that say one thing very clearly (anti-illegal-immigration, and grass-roots), and a small minority which ''may'' say something different (anti-immigration, and astroturfed). As for astroturfed, we do have a definitional question — my understanding is that the majority view is that for something to be "astroturfed", the funding has to be hidden, which is not the case, here. It's not organized enough to be hidden. — ] ] 11:58, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::Yes Arthur, that is my understanding as well. And that's what the well-sourced WP article on ] says, along with a few other things. One political operative pretends to be several people, and generally there's one or more computers involved. So if you have a team of four political operatives, it can be made to appear that 20-30 people are all writing letters to the editor of the same newspaper, for example. It looks like a ] even though there aren't really any grass-roots there. That is the commonly accepted definition of the ] term "Astroturfing." And there is no allegation that it's happening here. In this case, all sources agree that there is (at least) a very strong grass-roots component to TPm. No reliable source is saying that fake grass-roots have been manufactured. And there's no need to manufacture a fake when you have the real thing. That's why any other component that isn't grass-roots can't fairly be described as Astroturf. I came up with the descriptive term "watering the grass." Rather than manufacturing fake grass-roots, the big money elites are making sure that the very real grass-roots are able to thrive. It isn't Astroturf. ] (]) 13:13, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::Your extraction from the article is too narrow in scope, and insofar as Astroturfing can be characterized as relating to the attempt to unduly influence public opinion, the mere involvement of FOX NEWS in exaggerating the TPm and attempting to promote it could be regarded as a form of Astroturfing. What is it that Skopol says about Fox and the TPm? Sorry that I don't have access to the book or the time to read it.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 14:35, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::: is a damn good opinion column that expresses my thinking on the matter. Why is it that when one side does something, it's called "community organizing," or "get out the vote," but when the other side does exactly the same thing in exactly the same way, it's called "Astroturfing"? The people with the money are doing what they can to make sure that everybody who agrees with them shows up. It's not Astroturfing. And what reliable, neutral source is saying that ] "exaggerated" or "promoted" TPm, rather than just reporting the facts as they appeared? It isn't exaggeration or promotional to say that the winner of the 2010 election cycle was the Tea Party, the losers were Barack Obama and Nancy Pelosi, and the Tea Party defeated them with its millions of grass-roots voters. Perhaps Fox News paid attention to the Tea Party because they deserved the attention, when other networks were reluctant to mention them. ] (]) 15:12, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::(A) There's nothing "haphazard" about it, and we have previously discussed more than one edit at a time — usually removal of the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" section, plus some other edit. (B) I don't see any substantive objection, just a procedural one, which has just been addressed — see (A). ] (]) 12:02, 13 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
*Spill over guys you are just carrying on the same discussion as on the talk page. ----] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 12:02, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Yeah, that's right. But on the Talk page, SilkTork wasn't participating. Here, I hope he will participate and resolve this. ] (]) 12:10, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
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Solving this is going to take rising above endless correct or policy-misrepresenting wikilawyering to add / remove stuff to make the TPM look good or bad. Some concepts that might help in this area: | |||
I didn't have a chance to get back yesterday, but I realized the first goal here is to reduce content. I will postpone the Soc Sec issue until the reductions have been completed. My suggestion for further reducing content that might take the tension off from that last edit, is to reduce the protest/rally sections. We already have ] and the content could easily be transferred there. My suggestion for a remaining para, with a link to the main, is focus on the beginnings and then mention the spread to national, without too much detail. Just generalized. I'd be happy to write up a sample para if anybody is interested. | |||
On the grassroots bit, because there's so much controversy about it (with editors), it is something that needs to be addressed here. We do have to take things one at a time. I just thought something easy, like reducing the protests section, might be something that is easy and could help foster a more collegial atmosphere. The race/bigotry section was stressful for all. (And I agree about the History section with it's "commentaries" subsection. I also agree with transferring the "Other events" section the subarticle.) | |||
*Avoid "characterization" words regarding the overall movement that are not significantly informative. | |||
*Remove trivia, including the cherry-picked trivia that this article is loaded with. If it isn't about some larger scale aspect of the movement it should be left out. Maybe go one step down to briefly include Congress and governor-level elections/elected officials. | |||
*Additions and wording should recognize that it is a phenomena, not an entity. Although this sounds abstract, I think that it would lead to a lot of fixes. | |||
*Get rid of constructions from primary sources. The polling data on TPM supporters on non-TPM issues comes to mind | |||
*Sources that are used as actual sources (i.e. not framed as just statements of their own opinion) should be better than just meeting the low floor of wp:RS. We should lean towards ones that are objective and knowledgeable in the particular area where they are being used/cited. | |||
] (]) 13:16, 13 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
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Unless there is focus on completing one task at a time, then no matters will get resolved. I understand there is concern about sourcing, and that it would be helpful to have a discussion regarding sourcing. However, the main problem that has been identified is the size of the article, and a start has been made on discussing what to trim. I am hatting the sourcing discussion until the trimming matter has been resolved. I would ask that until one matter has been resolved, that no other matters are raised. The main talkpage is still open, and people can discuss other matters there if they wish, in preparation for bringing them here. But I am unwilling to moderate several discussions at the same time. ''']''' ''']''' 07:17, 28 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:Yeah, maybe leave "grass roots" for later. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 14:01, 13 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
== Proposed solution for 'grass-roots' == | |||
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] posted a quote from the '']'s'' article about the Skocpol & Williamson book, and I think it provides us a rather elegant solution for this impasse: "Skocpol and Williamson see the Tea Party as neither solely a mass movement nor an Astroturf creation, arguing for something in between: a grassroots movement amplified by the right-wing media and supported by elite donors." I see no reason why we can't incorporate part of this quote into the lede. Here is the current lede: | |||
I think that possibly the most messed up section in the article is the "polling of supporters". It's a ] ] fest, about the worst abuse of primary sources I've ever seen, uses hostile op-ed pieces as a "source" of polling data, and has misleading or inaccurate summaries. Many "gems" in there. For example "predominantly white" (any group representative of US polulaiotn is going to be "predominantly white") A good candidate to take a close look at. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 11:32, 14 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
<blockquote>The '''Tea Party movement''' is an ] political movement that advocates strict adherence to the ],<ref>{{cite news |url=http://www.nytimes.com/2010/03/14/weekinreview/14liptak.html |title=Tea-ing Up the Constitution |newspaper=The New York Times |date=March 13, 2010 |last=Liptak |first=Mark |location=Washington, D.C. |accessdate=October 31, 2010 |quote=It is, of course, hard to say anything definitive about the Tea Party movement, a loose confederation of groups with no central leadership. But if there is a central theme to its understanding of the Constitution, it is that the nation’s founders knew what they were doing and that their work must be protected.}}</ref> reducing ] ] ...</blockquote> | |||
:This article was loaded with gems like that when we started. It was like the home of a ]. Now that responsible Wikipedians have taken charge of the situation and we're trying to clean it up, we're going to be hauling rubbish out of here for weeks. Every time we open the door to a new section, there's going to be a little avalanche of garbage falling out. regards ... ] (]) 16:19, 14 June 2013 (UTC) | |||
===Let's get back to work=== | |||
Here is the lede I propose: | |||
I think we should get back to work. The article has been substantially improved, but we still have a lot of work to do. SilkTork has left us since he's traveling during the next week and won't have Internet access. The ArbCom case has started up again, so I'm sure we'll all be on our best behavior, and we have a rough framework of rules for future procedure proposed by North8000. | |||
<blockquote>The '''Tea Party movement''' is an ] ] political movement, "amplified by the right-wing media and supported by elite donors,"<ref>{{cite news | url= http://www.cjr.org/review/the_tea_party_paradox.php?page=all | title=The Tea Party Paradox | newspaper=Columbia Journalism Review |date=January 11, 2012 |last=Ventura |first=Elbert |location=New York, NY |accessdate=April 25, 2013 |quote=Skocpol and Williamson see the Tea Party as neither solely a mass movement nor an Astroturf creation, arguing for something in between: a grassroots movement amplified by the right-wing media and supported by elite donors.}}</ref> that advocates strict adherence to the ],<ref>{{cite news |url=http://www.nytimes.com/2010/03/14/weekinreview/14liptak.html |title=Tea-ing Up the Constitution |newspaper=The New York Times |date=March 13, 2010 |last=Liptak |first=Mark |location=Washington, D.C. |accessdate=October 31, 2010 |quote=It is, of course, hard to say anything definitive about the Tea Party movement, a loose confederation of groups with no central leadership. But if there is a central theme to its understanding of the Constitution, it is that the nation’s founders knew what they were doing and that their work must be protected.}}</ref> reducing ] ] ...</blockquote> | |||
The race/bigotry section and the agenda section were very difficult and stressful for everyone. It seems to me that to a very substantial extent, they are done. There may be some follow-up work to do with the agenda sub-sections, and some tweaking of the language we've already added/changed in that section (including refcites — ). But I think the big problems have been resolved, and we can go forward with some less challenging portions of the article. | |||
It avoids use of the word "Astroturfing" since we'll clearly never reach an agreement on using that word, and it accurately describes what the reliable sources are actually saying. Does that adequately address everyone's concerns? ] (]) 16:38, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
Let's get on the stick. | |||
:The Tea Party's list of 16 "Non-Negotiable Core Beliefs" doesn't even mention the Constitution or reduced government spending. In fact the core beliefs only mention of government spending is advocating increased military spending. ] (]) 17:30, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
My proposal for three minor improvements will be slightly modified as described below. This is to make it more attractive to those who may have been opposed to the original proposal. Modified portions and some explanation and argument have been added in ''italics'' and <s>strikethrough.</s> | |||
With something that is a phenomena (not an entity) it's hard to generalize, but I believe that the agenda that had the widest net cast / most input received was the contract from America. I think that at least 7 of the 10 points were on one of those two. If one interprets less spending to sort of mean smaller government, then I think it's up to 10 for 10. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 18:14, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:#One thing I think we should take action on immediately is adding the word ] (with the Wikilink) to the lede sentence. We were discussing it just before the moderated discussion started. I felt we had consensus for it, since there were so many reliable sources to support it. The allegations about ] have one or two sources, and are clearly a minority opinion per ]. ''Astroturfing allegations have already been presented in the body of the article. If necessary, these can be expanded upon, particularly with footnoted blockquotes from Formisano and Skocpol.'' | |||
:Specifically, how do the two of you feel about this edit to the lede sentence? ] (]) 19:10, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:#Another thing we should consider immediately is removing the ] section. The removal of the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" section has kind of orphaned THIS section. I suggest we <s>cut the length of the paragraph about the gas grill in half, and</s> add both events to the list of bulleted incidents at the end of ], in chronological order. | |||
:#Also, there's a subsection at the beginning of the "History" section called ]. Nothing there is notable enough to remain in this top-level article. It should be moved to the spin-off article, ], after the bulleted list of incidents. ''I think it's important to identify this as'' '''''"criticism and''''' ''commentaries," since that's what it is, and identify critics as progressives and anti-tobacco activists, since their motives in raising these criticisms are most likely partisan.'' | |||
* '''Strongly support.''' Now that the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" roadblock ''and the agenda roadblock'' <s>has</s> ''have'' finally been removed, we can move forward with several other items that have been waiting patiently. The "grass-roots" edit, for example, has been waiting for <s>two</s> '''''three''''' months. Let's get these three items done and move on. regards .... ] (]) 13:45, 6 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::If I might be permitted to but in, something that involves Astroturfing cannot be characterized as a "phenomena", as phenomena occur spontaneously and naturally, without corporate funding.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 19:16, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
* '''Comment''' The addition of grass roots was opposed P&W and you continue to confuse voting with consensus. Otherwise I really don't see the point until the Arbcom position is settled. It ha gone back there because this approach did not work. ----] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 04:50, 7 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::I meant "phenomena" in the vaguest sense of the term, and mostly to point out that it is not an entity. It's really a combination of many different things,.....and agenda, several hundred organizations, instances of actions, instances of support of all types, speeches, influences on elections, a concept and rallying cry, and a general decentralized "push" for certain changes. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 19:27, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::There's no confusion on my part, Snowded. The TPm is a ]; this is the majority position per ]. The example that I used in previous incarnations of this thread was the ] article. Even though a minority of reliable sources, including (at that time) the Vice President of the United States, the Attorney General, and two Deputy Attorneys General were of the opinion that in some cases waterboarding was not torture, a majority of sources stated that it was torture. Accordingly, the first six words of the ] article are, "Waterboarding is a form of torture" In previous incarnations of this discussion thread over the past six months, I've linked at least 18 reliable sources stating that the TPm is a grass-roots movement. These included both peer-reviewed academic and fact-checked news organization sources. Those editors who opposed the edit cited two sources: one by Ron Formisano, who claims that a few groups associated with TPm are engaged in ], and one by Theda Skocpol, who observes that the TPm is neither grass-roots nor Astroturf, but something in between. Even if we count both of these sources as sharing the same minority opinion, it's eighteen to two — clearly a majority opinion and a minority opinion per ]. | |||
::::Now '''that''' (the use of the word "phenomena") is an example fighting over definitions when the word isn't to be used in the article. Could we stop that, and get back to discussing proposed text? — ] ] 04:40, 26 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::But it isn't even that good for those who oppose the edit, Snowded. It's eighteen for the majority opinion, one for a minority opinion, and one for a different minority opinion, because Formisano and Skocpol don't share the same opinion. Clearly, the authors of the ] article have shown us how to handle this situation. Review the archives of that article's Talk page. Those who opposed that edit were very determined, but they lost the content dispute. Here, we also see support for treating obvious minority opinions as something other than the minority. This is a policy based argument, Snowded. Policy based arguments, not votes, determine consensus per ] and ]. You see, there's no confusion on my part about what constitutes consensus at Misplaced Pages. Do you have a policy based argument? | |||
::Next, let's examine your desire to wait until the ArbCom decision. Are you waiting for ArbCom to issue topic bans for one side in the content dispute, and then the other side can have its way? ArbCom doesn't decide content disputes. Policy decides content disputes and here, the policy is ]. Also, you claim that "this approach did not work." It wasn't allowed to work. The first time, we had consensus and SilkTork shut down the discussion to steer us into "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception." The second time, SilkTork shut down the discussion to steer us into the "Agenda" section. Let's get an admin from ] to close this, and provide him with links to the previous two discussions. ] (]) 05:39, 7 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::That response illustrates why the Arbcom resolution is needed before progress can be made ----] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 09:46, 7 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::Now you are back here - your !vote is solicited above in Lis alibi pendens. ] (]) 11:58, 7 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::A month block for a problematic editor on various Philosophy articles has given me some time Collect but I'm not 100% on my continued participation. I'm waiting to see what comes out of the Arbcom ruling. However I have responded to your request and personal hat tip to you by the way. We've had our disagreements over the years but you do seem to be trying to make some progress here. ----] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 13:56, 7 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::* ''That response illustrates why the Arbcom resolution is needed before progress can be made'' Perhaps you'd care to explain, Snowded. I politely provided a fairly thorough policy based argument. Do you have a policy based argument that explains why the edit shouldn't be actioned? If not, why shouldn't the edit be actioned? ] (]) 15:36, 7 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::I and other editors have explained the issue elsewhere P&W, this is just another manifestation, counting votes, repeating your arguments as if they were uncontroversial conclusions and at length. Sorry been here too many times to go through it all again ----] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 02:13, 8 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::I agree that a persuasive argument has yet to be made, and the past discussions are being misrepresented here as an "18 sources versus just 2 sources" weight discussion, which simply isn't the situation. To use a clearer analogy, if Blitzo Motor Company makes a hybrid car (gas/electric), we don't put a sentence in our article lead about that car saying simply "this car is gasoline-powered". Sure, you can come up with 18 sources that say it runs on gas, and it does, but that isn't the whole truth. It also runs on electricity, and that isn't a "minority opinion", it's a fact - and it remains a fact regardless of how many sources are produced saying so. ] (]) 17:59, 9 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::: Once again, it's being claimed that a source must also say "There is no part of TPm that is Astroturfed" in order for that source to be counted as a "TPm is grass-roots" source. When a source says "TPm is grass-roots," that necessarily contains the implicit statement, "There is no part of TPm that is Astroturfed." See my previous analogy about the ] article. If several reliable sources state, "The elephant is an animal," necessarily implicit in that statement is, "The elephant is not a plant." Finding reliable sources which describe ] as plants, and then trying to insert the statement, "Many scholarly sources have indicated that extensive portions of the elephant are a plant" in the ] article, and keep the statement, "The elephant is an animal" out of the lede, is analogous to this effort to describe TPm in this article as Astroturfed. ] (]) 15:14, 10 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::I don't see where that claim is being made. Reliable sources say there are many grassroots activists in the movement, which has been significantly astroturfed. Are you claiming, against reliable sources, that there has been no astroturfing of the movement, or are you only claiming that we shouldn't mention that fact in the lead of the article? ] (]) 16:01, 10 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
Note: The new posited rules disallow such colloquy - I suggest we start ''now'' with not mentioning ''any'' editors by name in ''any'' post, not even using "you." ] (]) 10:47, 8 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::"amplified by the right-wing media and supported by elite donors," comes across as weasel wording considering the substantial input both have had. I prefer some version of Skocpol's take. I think something along the lines of the following covers most points, is factual and pretty much how it's seen by the rest of the world (I copy/pasted some from the Encyclopaedia Britannica):<br />''The Tea Party movement is an American grass-roots political movement, supported by national political and corporate interests and conservative media outlets, that advocates less taxation, immigration, and government intervention in the private sector.'' ] (]) 10:23, 26 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::Agreed -- with the possible change to "''...taxation and government intervention in the private sector, and strong enforcement of immigration laws.''" placing the two primary concerns which appear to be in common for the various groups first (removing comma after taxation to show that "less" also applied to government intervention - else we ought add "less" also before the word "government"), and then strengthening the comment about immigration laws. ] (]) 11:51, 26 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
If we're talking about the first sentence, I commend the good effort by P&W, but think that the current one is more informative. Sincerely, <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 11:09, 26 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*The version I've proposed contains more information. It calls the movement a ] with qualifications contained in a direct quote from the CJR review TFD posted. Then there's the version which Wayne proposed. The trouble with both is that they fail to illustrate the complex nature of the movement. A few elements accept money from corporate donors. Some do not. Some are coordinating with, and being coopted by, the Republican Party to various degrees. Many are not. It's a complex situation and needs a lengthy, complex explanation — but this is the lede sentence, and there are obvious ] implications. And we must choose our few words carefully so that they're free from any bias. "Conservative media outlets" is certainly better than "right-wing media" for example but I think we're on the right track. ] (]) 14:16, 26 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Maybe I should make sure we're talking about the same thing. Are we talking about the first sentence in the first paragraph in the lead? And if so, what would be inserted where and what, if anything, would be eliminated? Thanks. Sincerely, <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 15:21, 26 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
* The "explanation" I recall was to focus on Formisano and Skocpol, over and over again, in infinite detail; to dismiss such eminently reliable fact-checked news organizations as ''],'' ] and '']'' as birdcage liner and fish wrap, compared to the founts of wisdom contained in the pages of a book by a history professor at the ]; and to pretend that ] (for example) wasn't at least as reliable, and at least as notable as ]. In other words, to claim that seventeen ] sources '''(yes, seventeen)''' plus one ] source (Foley) saying | |||
*I see a number of problems with the above-proposed versions. | |||
#First, there is no agreement that the movement should be called a "grass-roots movement". | |||
#There is no agreement that the term Astroturf not be included. | |||
#I consider it something of a logical fallacy to claim that the TPm calls for strict adherence to the constitution when in fact they call for radically changing the constitution through the addition and subtraction of amendments. Constitutional originalism is more involved than "strict adherence". The constitution figures prominently in the agenda as it embodies various themes of government at which respective constituencies of the TPm have taken aim. --]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 16:45, 26 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*Well, yes. We are talking about the first sentence in the first paragraph in the lede. | |||
#There '''should''' be an agreement that the movement should be called a "grass-roots movement" in the lede, since each and every source at least mentions a grass-roots component, and the strong majority just calls it "grass-roots," period. | |||
#There '''should''' be an agreement that the term "Astroturf" will not be included in the lede. Only one source (Ronald Formisano) actually uses that term to describe any portion of the TPm. He only uses it once, on page 100. He is demonstrably biased in favor of Barack Obama, the Tea Party's political enemy. He is a tiny minority of one. Skocpol describes TPm as a mix of grass-roots activism, nationally-known conservative leaders, conservative media and corporate donors. And Formisano describes the same components — he just uses a different word to describe one component, and uses that word in a way that doesn't follow its conventional meaning. | |||
#If you'd like, Ubikwit, we can end the lede section by saying, "House Minority Leader ], a Democrat, once described the Tea Party movement as ']' before being forced out as Speaker of the House by the Tea Party in the November 2010 election. Theda Skocpol, a ] political scientist has refuted that description, calling it 'poppycock.' " That's the only way I'd agree to putting that word in the lede — at the end of the lede, in a manner that illustrates the political motivation behind it, and instantly followed by a refutation from a reliable source. | |||
#"Strict adherence to the Constitution" doesn't mean you can't support an amendment. It only means that until it's amended the way you want it, you have to obey it as written. After all, the Constitution contains a provision for its own amendment by the American people, through their elected representatives. This provision can be strictly adhered to, and strictly followed. It seems to me that the Tea Party believes Obama and the Democrats, and to a lesser extent the Republicans, have exceeded their constitutional authority. That's where the desire for "strict adherence" comes from. It also seems to me that certain amendments, such as the Second (right to keep and bear arms) and the Fifth (freedom of speech, right to peacably assemble for a redress of grievances) are very near and dear to their hearts. ] (]) 18:39, 26 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:"House Minority Leader Nancy Pelosi, a Democrat, once described the Tea Party movement as 'Astroturf' before being forced out as Speaker of the House by the Tea Party in the November 2010 election." P&W, I do not know if you meant that suggestion as a joke or actually expect others to accept it. But it is wrong on so many counts, we will never make progress with suggestions like that. The Republican Party, not the Tea Party, beat the Democrats. And Pelosi's comments on the Tea Party had nothing to do with the outcome. It also implies that she was the only person who actually called them that. "Strict adherence to the constitution" by the way means strict adherence to their interpretation. Another interpretation is that they are misinterpreting the constitution. ] (]) 02:10, 27 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::For the first half: no, I didn't expect any of the "Astroturfing" advocates to actually accept that proposal. regarding the proposal at the top of the thread, I'm a great deal more serious. For the second half: sounds like ] to me, unless you can come up with some reliable, neutral sources to support the two statements, "strict adherence to their interpretation," and "they are misinterpreting the Constitutioon." ] (]) 04:15, 27 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::Skocpol never said that astro-turfing was poppycock. She said that claims that the Tea Party was '''entirely''' astro-turfed was poppycock and that the TP was a "tri-partite mix" of grassroots, astroturf and media. It is also incorrect to say that ''Only one source (Ronald Formisano) actually uses that term to describe any portion of the TPm.'' In his book, ] says that "a significant portion of the Tea Party" is astro-turfed. ] talks about the effect of grass-roots and astro-turfed organisations then gives examples including "the Tea Party movement emerged on the right with substantial corporate contributions." Lawrence Rosenthal, Professor of Sociology at Berkeley says in his book ''The Precipitous Rise of the Tea Party,'' "Democratic blogs say the Tea Party is astro-turf, social movement analysis supports them" and "The Tea Party Movement is not, then, a purely grass-roots phenomenon or a spontaneous force...in it's initial stage the Tea Party was an astro-turfed grass-roots contrivance" which gained some "marginal autonomy" when it grew too large to be controlled. Clarence Lo, professor of sociology from University of Missouri says that the media "put forward a romantic narrative of a movement composed of policical neophytes" when it is documented that the Tea Party groups themselves claimed to be political activists. One Tea Party leader, Robin Stublen, actually stated that the Tea Party had lost it's grass-roots and that the Tea Party Express was "a GOP Astro-turf." ] (]) 04:38, 27 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::Having said that I like ]s suggestion ''The Tea Party movement is an American grass-roots political movement, supported by national political and corporate interests and conservative media outlets, that advocates less taxation and government intervention in the private sector, and strong enforcement of immigration laws.'' Astro-turfing, anti-immigration and other beliefs can be covered in the article. I just read that the Tea Party had supported a bill to prevent teachers with foreign accents from teaching in public schools so anti-immigration is definitely not too strong a word. ] (]) 04:52, 27 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::I think that's a reasonable lead. However, having had a professor (in a non-language course) who had such a thick accent that I couldn't understand her, I can sympathize with that bill. But, that would be "anti-immigrant", rather than "anti-immigration". — ] ] 19:09, 27 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::In the Skocpol & Williamson source, the researchers do not describe a "grassroots movement", but instead repeatedly refer to the "grassroots activists" and "grassroots people" (and grassroots-adherants/supporters/participants/Tea Partiers...) — in other words, the individual activist component of the movement. That is what the 'grassroots' description is applied to, instead of the movement as a whole. Given the heterogeneous (or tripartite) nature of the movement as described by reliable sources (including pgs. 10-13 of S&W), I would adjust Collect's proposed lead wording to say: | |||
:::::::''The '''Tea Party movement''' is an American political movement comprised of grassroots activists, wealthy national political action committees, corporate interests and conservative media outlets. It advocates less taxation and spending, smaller government and ...'' | |||
::::::I'm leaving the second sentence open-ended, as I suspect "what the movement advocates" might spark some additional discussion given the range of agendas across the movement, and the apparent reprioritization of some goals since 2009. ] (]) 19:21, 27 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::That seems reasonable. The fact that it originated ''as'' a grass-roots movement probably should be in the lede, but there are few sources which accurately talk about the origins of the movement, so I would be willing to have that only in the body. — ] ] 20:25, 27 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Regarding Xenophrenic's suggestion, there aren't any sources to support an edit like that, either in the lede or in the body of the article. Who are these 'wealthy national political action committees,' and 'corporate interests,' 'media outlets,' etc. And Skocpal and Williamson don't say it either. They also don't say anything about 'anti-immigration.' Collect's suggestion is neutral. And Wayne, do you have a source you can show us that the Tea Party is proposing to ban teachers with "accents?" ] (]) 22:19, 27 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Which TPm affiliated organization was it that spent $10 million on the last election? What type of organization is<blockquote>One Tea Party leader, Robin Stublen, actually stated that the Tea Party had lost it's grass-roots and that the '''Tea Party Express''' was "a GOP Astro-turf."</blockquote> | |||
:::::::::The Koch brothers would seem to represent an obvious corporate interest. | |||
:::::::::The lead itself should be worded slightly differently for logical consistency, as the conservative news groups aren't officially a dedicated part of the TPm, though some, like FOX, wold seem to have sometimes served in an actual organizational capacity. | |||
:::::::::Something more along the lines of<blockquote>''The '''Tea Party movement''' is an American political movement that comprises grassroots activists and astro-turfed groups funded by wealthy national political donors and corporate interests. It has also benefited from support provided by conservative media outlets. Generally speaking, the Tea Party movement advocates less taxation and spending, smaller government...''</blockquote>--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 02:53, 28 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*The "Astroturf" advocates keep citing the same two or three sources. I've already cited 11 on the main Talk page — three from the ''],'' two from the ''],'' one from ], one from ], one from '']'' of all places, a very interesting 30-minute webcam round-table discussion hosted by the ''Huffington Post,'' and a Harvard PDF in which Theda Skocpol, of all people, says that "Thus the grassroots Tea Party phenomenon is real ..." — and I can cite many more, stating that they are '''a "grassroots" organization, period. Without any qualifying statements.''' Here are a few more: one from ], one from ], two from the ''],'' one from the ''],''and one from the ''].'' To this list we can also add the scholarly, peer-reviewed work of Elizabeth Foley. Some editors believe that in order to count in a ] comparison, these sources would have to explicitly deny that there's an Astroturf component in TPm. In this case, all 18 sources stated that they are a "grassroots" organization, period. Implicit in that statement is a denial that any part of the movement is Astroturf. | |||
*It is abundantly clear that the two or three sources claiming any part of the Tea Party is Astroturf are a tiny minority per ]. Those sources do not include Skocpol and Williamson; the "tripartite mix" they described did not use the word "Astroturf," or any other term that was equated with "Astroturf" elsewhere in their book. ] (]) 05:53, 28 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Why do you keep citing newspaper sources which Skocpol, whom you support for anything she says that you agree with, has explicity said are part of the Tea Party and therefor unlikely to be partisan on the issue. I'm not familiar with Williamson but on page 63, Skocpol specifically equates the "resource-deploying national organisations" she says are part of the "tri-partite" with astro-turfing. ] (]) 07:14, 28 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
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Hatting for now as per my comment above. ''']''' ''']''' 07:20, 28 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:are somehow outweighed by one ] source (Formisano) saying | |||
==racist, religious, and homophobic slurs== | |||
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since the TPM has disavowed those using such terms, would anyone object to removing them from the article? ] (]) 16:34, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:I think the matter needs to be mentioned. The left-wing media are really making a big deal out of it. A sectional lede sentence referring in a general way to these allegations of bigotry, without specifically calling out each and every incident. Then several reference cites to linkable reliable sources making these allegations. Maybe a couple of sentences on one or two of the most notable examples of the behavior and language that's being complained about, like the spitting and name calling before the vote on ]. Then a statement or two from the major Tea Party organizations that disavow such behavior and the use of such terms. Darkstar, I suggest you write one or two paragraphs that follow this framework, and I'll see what I can do about gathering consensus for it. Unless somebody has a better idea. regards ... ] (]) 18:57, 25 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
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Hatting for now, per my comments above. ''']''' ''']''' 07:24, 28 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::TPm = ({{frac|2|}} G) + ({{frac|2|}} A) | |||
:and one ] source (Skocpol) saying | |||
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:::*Well, we already have enormously time-consuming discussions underway on the main Talk page regarding three troublesome words: | |||
:::::#"Generally," in the Agenda section; | |||
:::::#"Anti-Immigration," in the Agenda section; | |||
:::::#"Grass-roots," in the lede of the article. | |||
::::There's also a question regarding the "planned obsolescence" of certain terms in the Agenda section. I proposed a very simple solution , to simply make a Wikilink out of each term that may be unclear to future readers, with the Wikilink going to the appropriate article. Please make a determination regarding consensus on the first three issues, and make all four edits. ] (]) 19:25, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
Let's work on the broad issues. We may well find that the smaller issues are taken care of as part of the broader actions. However, we will take up time and energy diverting off into smaller discussions. We agree what should be dealt with, and we tackle that. And then we agree the next item. I will hat this brief discussion shortly. ''']''' ''']''' 19:52, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
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:Remember when I said we "have enormously time-consuming discussions underway on the main Talk page regarding three troublesome words"? One of our more contentious editors has chosen to try reopening those enormously time-consuming discussions on the main Talk page. (I suspected, when I was directing your attention to those three troublesome words, that he'd do something like this if given the opportunity.) He's never voiced support or any objection regarding moderated discussion, and now he's declining to participate on this page. What do you suggest? ] (]) 03:04, 17 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::My apologies for directing my comments toward the inappropriateness of the specific discussion, rather than noting it has already been resolved. Still, something needs to be done ''there''. — ] ] 19:22, 17 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
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Looking through the above comments it appears there is broad agreement that the article needs trimming, though some are concerned that too much or the wrong sort of stuff will be trimmed, such as the criticism section. | |||
:(neither A nor G, but something in between). If anyone's recollection of the opposing arguments is any different — or if you have some other, more convincing argument besides | |||
Can we discuss what people feel should be trimmed, and what should be done with the trimmed material - create sub-articles or remove it completely? And I stress again, we are discussing broad strokes, not individual words or sentences. ''']''' ''']''' 15:20, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
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:then please post it, and enlighten me. Because perhaps I'm just too stupid, but I really don't understand why the policy based argument I've just posted is '''NOT''' an uncontroversial conclusion. regards ... ] (]) 13:52, 8 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:I just locked the article as there is a slow moving edit war going on. I have locked it in the version it was in when I went there - that it is locked in that version doesn't imply any support of that version. Whatever version an article is locked in during a dispute, is always ! When an article is locked nobody, not even an admin, can edit the article without first gaining consensus for the edit, unless it is to correct minor and obvious errors or to do simple maintenance. We will discuss edits here on this page, and I will action the edits for which there is consensus. When there is broad agreement that the article has been trimmed satisfactorily, it will be unlocked. ''']''' ''']''' 15:40, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
* Regarding the removal of the ] section, and putting that material in the bulleted list of incidents at the end of the ] spin-off article, in chronological order: this is the top-level article in a series on a complex subject, which has at least three satellite articles. Please see ] and the notability guideline on ]. The vandalism of someone's gas grill, for example, fails notability on several counts for a top-level article. These events clearly belong in the "Perceptions" spin-off article, not this top-level article. | |||
* Regarding removal of the ] subsection and its placement in the "Perceptions" spin-off article, again this fails notability requirements for a top-level article in a series. These are minority opinions at best, and fringe theories at worst. The article in '']'' magazine, especially, has been carefully ignored by mainstream news organizations, and there are well-grounded questions regarding its political motivations. ], ] and ] all indicate that the spin-off article is where these commentaries belong. | |||
:I would say that almost all of the election related material is obsolete, and therefore, perhaps somewhat trivial at present. The 2010 and 2012 election sections, and the entirety of the "Ground game and Get Out The Vote (GOTV) efforts" section seem superfluous to me. | |||
:Perhaps the issue of immigration should be incorporated under the current section "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception". | |||
:Aside from election related reporting-style content (chronicle of results, etc.) and random media noise, there is a growing body of high-level academic secondary sources providing much needed analysis of the sort of which the article is sorely lacking, in my opinion. Media coverage should be better integrated with analysis where possible, in an effort to present the topic in a more encyclopedic manner.] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 15:35, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::disagree, the election material is relevant as several primary challengers defeated establishment gop incumbents. ] (]) 9:00 pm, Today (UTC+1) | |||
:::Would it be possible/acceptable to summarise the main points of the elections, such as "several primary challengers defeated establishment gop incumbents" rather than list all the incidents? ''']''' ''']''' 20:29, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::*'''Support''' A brief summary of the significance of the election results to the movement as a whole should be described on the main page, and a sub-page (or multiple sub-pages) on the details of candidates, campaigns, etc., would serve to remove excessive information in the article that is peripheral to describing the movement as such. ] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 01:31, 14 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::*'''support''', main point being about the TP challenging the establishment gop. ] (]) 02:42, 14 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*] section. Trim or create sub-article? What material to remove? Keep the lead paragraphs, but remove the bullet points? Is there material in the bullet points worth keeping as a brief summary of the 2010 election. Can the whole section be reduced to one or two sentences? ''']''' ''']''' 20:26, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:*'''Trim and create sub-article.''' The 2010 election cycle was the first and most powerful showing by TPm. It reduced ] from Speaker of the House to Minority Leader. There were more seats lost in the House by the party controlling the White House than in any election since the Great Depression. Even Ted Kennedy's Senate seat was lost. It was an unmitigated disaster for Obama and the Democrats, and TPm was the bulldozer pushing that event to happen. It deserves an entire article of its own, but it also deserves two paragraphs here. ] (]) 22:37, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
* Again, if anyone would like to offer a policy based argument against any of these three proposed edits, I look forward to your response. regards ... ] (]) 14:52, 8 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Just a quick note, P&W: The guidelines you linked above (WP:N and WP:EVENT) apply to notability of an "article", and not to notability of content within an existing article, which is what we are discussing. I made that same mistake years ago, and was corrected by a couple helpful editors. WP:WEIGHT is the applicable guideline here. You should also be aware that content determined to be inappropriate for our main article due to policy reasons is equally inappropriate for a spinoff article. Material is moved to spinoff articles only because it has grown too lengthy or detailed, not because the content "fails notability", "is minority opinion" or "is fringe". Moving it for those reasons means you are trying to create a POV-FORK, and that's against policy. ] (]) 17:59, 9 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*] section. As above. Trim or create sub-article? What to keep. Can it be summarised in one or two sentences. ''']''' ''']''' 20:26, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:*'''Trim and create sub-article.''' In the 2012 election, the TPm failed to remove ] (although the main reason may have been lukewarm TPm attitudes about ]) and lost a few of the congressional seats it had gained in 2010. Some really stupid and insensitive statements by a pair of TPm Senate candidates prevented them from taking the Senate. But despite these key losses, the Tea Party survived a fierce counteroffensive by progressive organizations. It deserves an entire article of its own, but it also deserves two paragraphs here. ] (]) 22:37, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::* The material does fail notability for the top-level article in a series. See ] and ] for the official Misplaced Pages guideline. Perhaps the most directly on-point WP policy/guideline is not ], but a section of ] called ]: | |||
:*'''Trim and create sub-article.''' ] (]) 23:28, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::<blockquote>Summary style is based on the premise that information about a topic should not all be contained in a single article since different readers have different needs ... '''''The parent article should have general summary information''''' and the more detailed summaries of each subtopic should be in child articles and in articles on specific subjects.</blockquote> | |||
*] section. Trim? What to keep if it is trimmed. ''']''' ''']''' 20:26, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:*'''Trim and move to Agenda section.''' This is an important aspect of the movement's growth from protests to lobbying congress to getting out the vote. One national group also has created a super PAC. ] (]) 23:28, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::*'''Oppose move to ''Agenda'' section''' This section appears to have absolutely nothing to do with the agenda of the protests. It relates strictly to a strategic shift to campaigning from protesting, and the tactical aspects of implementing the campaigning. It is completely unrelated to platform points, etc. It's about converting protest momentum into election results, not about the ideological basis of the protests. All of the election stuff should probably be integrated into a single article organized along chronological lines, paralleling the current presentation of the material, reflecting in the presentation of the article the changes that occurred over time Its scope on the main article page can be greatly reduced.] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 23:58, 13 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Here is a quote from an article by Zernike in the NYT that probably expresses the gist of the matter.<blockquote>“This movement, if we can turn out hundreds or thousands to the streets to protest and wave signs and yell and make an impact on public policy debate, then we can make a lot of difference,” Brendan Steinhauser, FreedomWorks’s chief organizer for the Tea Party groups, told the leaders gathered here. “But if those same people go and walk neighborhoods and do all the things we’re talking about, put up the door-hangers in the final 72 hours and make the phone calls, we may crush some of these guys.”</blockquote> | |||
::Strictly speaking, the TPm agenda is comprised of the stances that they have proclaimed in relation to "public policy".] <sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 00:29, 14 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::* Particularly since the list of alleged racist incidents has been moved to the spin-off article, the "Other events" section has been orphaned and should be moved as well. See also ]. Personal opinions held by notable, but partisan individuals about the origins of the Tea Party are beyond the topical scope of this article. The ] article is a more appropriate place for them. ] (]) 15:32, 10 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
I think that '''the best criteria for material is that it that it be informative about the TPM'''. I think that if we follow a fleshed out version of that sentence it would be a good guide to almost every area of this article. A few thoughts about "fleshing out" that statement or the effects of such: | |||
*We recognize that the TPM is not an entity, it is a phenomena consisting of hundreds of organizations, activities, events, actions, happenings. So any thing that is informative ''about'' the TPM needs to be dealing with it on a larger scale, or high-impact happenings. | |||
*To be ''about'' the TPM, it needs to be 'about'' the TPM. If a local TP'er farted in public, and some papers hostile to the TPM decided to maximize coverage of the fart, that does not <s>aromatically</s> automatically make the fart germane to or suitable for or useful for the top level TPM article. We need to have discussions about what is useful and information to include. | |||
*Criticism should be of the informative type, not just talking points of / swipes by opponents. | |||
*A movement is defined by it's agenda, and defines it's agenda. That's how it pursue it. If an opponent newspaper writer says that the agenda of the US Democratic party is to be hostile to business and drive non-government US jobs overseas, that does not mean that that is their agenda. Top level stuff (e.g. their platform etc.) defines their agenda. The same for the TPM, even though it is much moroe decentralized. | |||
<font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 14:57, 15 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::*''The material does fail notability for the top-level article in a series.'' --P&W | |||
::Most of this is reasonable but, it should be noted that we should let coverage in reliable sources decide whose public farts are relevant to the TPM and which arent. Similarly we should never restrict descriptions of agenda to the the TPMs own statements about it, and we also wouldnt do that to the democratic party, or anyother group. That would be disinformative. Their agenda is defined by how it is described in reliable sources. Their own publications is one such source, but not the only one. And exactly because it is a decentralized movement their agenda may include the view points espoused publicly by their most prominent members whether or not they are articulated in their official agenda.]·] 12:52, 16 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::There is no "notability" requirement for content, but there are several guidelines on whether content is appropriate for a Misplaced Pages article. However, if content is not policy-compliant for the main article, it is also inappropriate for subarticles. See ]. Regarding the origins of the movement, that kind of content is definitely within the scope of the main article. The brief paragraph you refer to as commentary actually appears to be a mix of commentary and fact, and should instead be re-written. re: the "Other events" section (that header, frankly, sucks), are you now claiming it is too detailed or long (per WP:DETAIL)? ] (]) 16:55, 10 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
I think there's some useful and positive discussion taking place here, though it would be helpful if more people were involved so a true consensus can be formed. ''']''' ''']''' 15:38, 16 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::* ''The brief paragraph you refer to as commentary actually appears to be a mix of commentary and fact ...'' There are no "facts" here at Misplaced Pages, because it doesn't matter whether we as editors believe a statement is true. There are only viewpoints expressed by (and verifiable in) reliable sources — and, when we find enough reliable sources expressing the same viewpoint, it's the majority viewpoint and we are required to treat it as the majority viewpoint. Here, the majority viewpoint per ] is that the TPm is a grass-roots movement, period, full stop. The ] article tells us how we should state this majority viewpoint: | |||
:I'm reluctant to take any actions on the article without a broader consensus. Contributors are not compelled to take part in this discussion, though it would be helpful. I will leave a message for each of the main contributors. I will leave a standard message, and leave it for each, regardless of if they have already contributed here. ''']''' ''']''' 18:56, 19 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::"Waterboarding is a form of torture ..." | |||
::The contributors tool is currently down, so - rather than attempt manually to work out who the main contributors are on a busy article - I'll wait until the tool is up and running. ''']''' ''']''' 19:05, 19 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::is there anyway everyone can yield a tiny amount in hopes of making some progress? i sincerely think all of us will be happier with the final result. we seemed to be making progress timing the election sections which would be considered positive material. so if we can agree to do that much, perhaps the next section we trim will be some of the negative material. SilkTork came here ready to help and we can't accept the help without all of us making some minor concessions.(no edit is permanent and almost anything would be better than what we have now)] (]) 19:46, 19 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::Speaking only for myself, I consider moving ''most'' of the election material to subarticles an improvement (remembering to retain duplicate references which would otherwise be lost.) However, ''most'' of the <u>material</u> should be moved to subarticles or to the ]. I think we need to wait to consider an action as having consensus, if, in addition to the normal requirements, at least one party on each "side" must agree. I still don't think I'm really on a "side"; almost all of the negative material, and most of the postive material, doesn't belong here. — ] ] 22:58, 19 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::#There would appear to be some consensus (although a limited number of editors have participated) to create subarticles for the 2010 and 2012 elections. I would propose a single subarticle comprehensively covering elections and electioneering. | |||
:::::#There are a couple of outstanding issues regarding the treatment of PACs and "Get out the vote". Get out the vote would seem to be part of electioneering to me, and could be incorporated in the elections related article under and "Electioneering " section. I think that PACs should fall under the "Organization" section. | |||
:::::#Not much progress has been made on whether the question of immigration and xenophobia can be integrated with the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" section, or anew section created under which all of those topics are addressed. Immigration reform is still pending, and there may be people that feel it merits a separate section, but the question of xenophobia would seem pertinent to both. That could wait, but the election related material should be moved to subarticles and the gist relevant to the main article summarized, etc. | |||
:::::#It has dawned on me that if we were to use the Skopol "tripartite" quote in the lead, maybe putting astroturfing in parenthesis, we could incorporate the content of the current "Composition" and "Media coverage" sections into respective subsections under "Organization" corresponding to the tripartite (i.e., grassroots activists/groups, astroturfed groups/wealthy individuals/corporate interests, and conservative media outlets). It seems that some of the polling information from 2010, such as this<blockquote>An October 2010 Washington Post canvass of 647 local Tea Party organizers asked "which national figure best represents your groups?" and got the following responses: no one 34%, Sarah Palin 14%, Glenn Beck 7%, Jim DeMint 6%, Ron Paul 6%, Michele Bachmann 4%</blockquote> is dated and belongs with the election information from the corresponding years. The survey results for ] might be notable under a "Conservative media outlets" subsection (on Fox News at the time, I believe) of the "Organization" section--assuming that the tripartite model is adopted. That a poll would produce such results would seem to substantiate Skopol's characterization. Maybe three subsections wouldn't be enough, but there seems to be latitude for removing a significant amount of basically obsolete information and reorganizing the data that has a longer shelf life in a more coherent fashion.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 07:58, 28 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::"The '''Tea Party movement''' is an ] ''']''' political movement that advocates ..." | |||
*I have notified all significant contributors of this discussion three days ago, and there is still little on task contribution. What we can say is that people taking part here have all agreed with trimming, and that there have been no objections even with personal notifications. Is there enough consensus to move forward with the trimming? ''']''' ''']''' 15:48, 28 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:'''support''' unconditionally. ] (]) 15:55, 28 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:'''support'''--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 16:12, 28 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support trimming all material not ''generally applicable'' to the TPM as a movement''' ] (]) 17:52, 28 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support trimming''' The best criteria is "how directly is it '''about''' the TPM (not just some connection to) the TPM? BTW, many items most needing trimming have not even been discussed here. The twitter comment, the "somebody said that somebody said something racist", the cub BBQ grill line, the POV synthesis from primary sources (polls) and the probably BLP-violating and certainly false line that implies that Ron Paul (the guy who wants to legalize trade with Cuba) is an isolationist. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 21:27, 28 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''support'''----] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 06:19, 29 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::* ''There is no "notability" requirement for content ...'' ], particularly ], requires that the section must be written as "general summary information" regarding the topical scope of the ] sub-article, which is about allegations of "racism, bigotry and intolerance." It's that "intolerance" bit at the end that steers this discussion. It was alleged that some TPm people in Maryland were "intolerant" of a congressman who voted i favor of the ], and gave Tea Party members directions to what they thought was that congressman's house as an expression of this "intolerance." These allegations, and the related vandalism of a gas grill at that house in Maryland don't belong in the "general summary information" in the parent article. They belong in the spin-off article. The relevant sections of Misplaced Pages policy/guidelines that govern this are ] and ]. ] (]) 18:39, 10 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
===Action on trimming=== | |||
:::::You are still arguing to mention grassroots in the lead? As noted several times before, there isn't any real opposition to that (correct me if I'm wrong). The objection is to your suggestion that we cover "grassroots" without also covering "astroturf" in the lead. The prominence of both descriptions, in reliable sources that cover them, requires that we not mention just one of the descriptions, per ]. That would be misleading to the readers. ] (]) 20:27, 10 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
I will propose material here to be trimmed. Two supports with no objections after at least 24 hours will be taken as consensus to action the trimming. ''']''' ''']''' 16:01, 28 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::No it wouldn't mislead readers. Look at the lede to the ] article. It doesn't mention the viewpoint of several reliable sources that waterboarding, in some circumstances, is not torture but a "harsh interrogation" technique. Do you feel that its failure to mention the minority viewpoint in the article lede is misleading to readers? ] (]) 20:53, 10 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Yes, it would mislead readers. Look closely at what you just said: ''"is not torture but a 'harsh interrogation' technique..."'' -- that is an either/or logic statement, which is a completely different situation. With the Tea Party, the reliable sources say we have an "and" situation ("grassroots activists AND astroturf influence"). And I still don't know what "minority viewpoint" you are talking about. The astroturf aspect of the movement is a fact; minority and majority quantifiers only apply to competing viewpoints. ] (]) 00:58, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
Responding to Snowded, it would take quite an effort and major course change by Arbcom to help this, because the case was so badly sent off on a tangent from the start. We need to and should keep trying here. | |||
I am down to a few minutes per day on Misplaced Pages this week and in-depth analysis in beyond me this week. But P & W's ideas look good. I'm not big on worrying about vague characterizations like "grass roots" and no movement is without some purposeful organization / support, but if there ever was a movement where this term applies, TPM is it. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 16:15, 8 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
It was suggested that the election material should be trimmed, moving the bulk to a sub-article. | |||
:In addition to questioning the reliability and bias of the '']'' article, it does not say anything in regard Grassroots v. AstroTurfed. At the most generous interpretation that they know what they're talking about, it says that '''one''' TPm organization was funded by (some of the) same people as the anti-anti-tobacco organizations. — ] ] 16:20, 8 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
I have created a draft sub-article here: ] | |||
===Request for closure=== | |||
And made a draft of what could could be left behind in the main article: | |||
I am about to file a Request for Closure at ]. Accordingly, I've reopened the collapsed subsection that had our mid-June discussion of these three minor improvements. The only objection at that time was Ubikwit saying we should only work on one thing at a time (the agenda section). Now that the agenda section has been substantially improved, we can get back to these three minor issues and get them resolved. Previous discussion at great length may be found , and , during most of the month of April. The closer is asked to review all these discussions over the past three months, and indicate whether we have consensus for each of these three edits. Policy based arguments, not votes, determine consensus per ] and ]. regards ... ] (]) 13:41, 9 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
{{ex|The Tea Party have had ]. In the 2010 midterm elections, ''The New York Times'' identified 138 candidates for Congress with significant Tea Party support, and reported that all of them were running as Republicans—of whom 129 were running for the ] and 9 for the ].<ref>Kate Zernike, ''The New York Times'', October 14, 2010</ref> The ''Wall Street Journal''–NBC News poll in mid October showed 35% of likely voters were Tea-party supporters, and they favored the Republicans by 84% to 10%.<ref>Jonathan Weisman, ''Wall Street Journal, October 20, 2010</ref> The first Tea Party candidate to be elected into office is believed to be Dean Murray, a ] businessman, who won a special election for a New York State Assembly seat in February 2010.<ref name=Murray/>}} | |||
:Regarding the minor issue of whether we should mention the Grassroot & AstroTurf aspects of the movement in the ], or just mention one of those aspects in the lead to the exclusion of the other, it would be informative to note that a similar discussion was had in ]. The consensus was that if both descriptions are to appear in the lead, both would appear together. I don't see a change in that consensus, nor a valid argument to the contrary. As for your 2nd and 3rd minor issues, have those been discussed yet in any detail? ] (]) 17:59, 9 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::That mediation was almost three years ago. One of the most active advocates for "Astroturfing" and opponents of "grass-roots" a month later. And a large number of reliable sources, both ] and ] varieties, have been published since then. Regarding the other two proposed edits, there have been abundant opportunities to express concerns and no concerns were expressed, except Ubikwit saying we should only work on one thing at a time. The "one thing" we were working on has now been substantially completed. This has been discussed and tabled off and on for three months. It's time to turn it over to a closing admin and let him (or her) sort it out. ] (]) 18:22, 9 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::The other 2 issues haven't been discussed because an editor (and also our Moderator) said we were to work on something else first, and you say the next step is to turn the issues over to an admin? Wouldn't the next step be to begin discussions it first (so the Admin will have something to "sort out")? As for the Grassroots/Astroturf descriptions matter, yes, other sources have been published since then -- and still the facts haven't changed. There are just more sources. ] (]) 18:33, 9 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::On the mediation page we find an enormous number of additional sources (notably '']'') to join the overwhelming number of reliable sources stating that it's a ]. Thanks for providing the link to that wealth of additional reliable sources for the majority opinion per ]. For the other two proposed edits, the material fails ] at for the top-level article in a series, but would be fine for a spin-off article. If there really is a policy based argument against them that has been withheld until now, when a closer has already been requested at ], please post it immediately rather than just talking about it. ] (]) 18:42, 9 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::Incorrect. WP:N applies to articles, not content within an article. To quote: ''' The notability guideline does not determine the content of articles, but only whether the topic should have its own article.''' And as noted above, per policy, if it is against policy in a main article, it is against policy in a sub article. I'm sure a knowledgable "closer" will confirm that for you. Regarding the Grassroots & Astroturfed nature of the movement, neither of those descriptions is "opinion", majority or otherwise (even though the Lexington piece in the Economist is an opinion piece), they are reliably sourced facts. ] (]) 19:39, 9 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::] describes them as "viewpoints," not "facts." My mistake, I should have called them "viewpoints," rather than "opinions." One viewpoint — that the TPm is a grass-roots movement, and the fact that some components have accepted corporate donations does not compromise its essentially grass-roots nature — is clearly supported by a majority of the reliable sources, including ] in her peer-reviewed works, ''],'' ''],'' ], ] and many other fact-checked news organizations. The other viewpoints are each supported by a small minority of the reliable sources. Regarding ], that policy directs editors to several guidelines, one of which is ]. There are various subsections within that guidelines such as ], ], and ] which provide clear guidance in demoting such events as the vandalism of someone's gas grill in Maryland to the spin-off article. ] (]) 20:38, 9 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::To be more specific about what the reliable sources convey, the TPm consists of both grassroots activists as well as big-monied players and professional politicos, thinktanks and conservative elites that have sought to direct, fund, coordinate and use these "grassroots" efforts. And this fact is neither minority nor majority viewpoint. What "other" viewpoints are you speaking of? Regarding your alphabet-soup of policy links, please simply quote the section of the policy you are acting under, and the content you are applying it to, and let's discuss it. All the ones you linked do not apply here. They apply to the creation of Misplaced Pages articles. ] (]) 20:56, 9 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::::The fact that some RS support "A + G" while others support "G" does not negate the fact that the ones supporting "G" vastly outnumber the ones supporting "A + G" and are therefore the majority per ]. Is there any argument in favor of treating "Astroturfed plus grass-roots" as the majority viewpoint? How many reliable sources support this viewpoint? We've been over this exhaustively. Many of the sources just don't support "Astroturfed plus grass-roots." Some, such as NPR ask the question "Is TPm Astroturfed plus grass-roots?" but do not answer "yes." ] (]) 22:04, 9 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::The fact that the movement has genuine grassroots activists in it is <u>a</u> majority viewpoint (as contrasted with not having grassroots activists in it), not <u>the</u> majority viewpoint. It is also a "majority viewpoint" that the movement has been extensively astroturfed, is conservative, takes stances on fiscal issues, had influence in the 2010 elections, etc. Minority viewpoints, for example, would be the ones saying there are no grassroots activists in the movement, or there is no astroturf influencing of the movement, or that the movement had no influence on the 2010 elections. The fact that RS saying the TP movement is concervative vastly outnumber the ones mentioning grassroots doesn't mean the grassroots description is a minority viewpoint. ] (]) 10:25, 10 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
===Extended discussion of grass-roots and astroturf=== | |||
{{ex|According to a calculation on an NBC blog, 32% of the candidates that were backed by the Tea Party, or were on a ballot line with a "Tea Party" name, won the election.<ref>{{cite web |url= http://firstread.nbcnews.com/_news/2010/11/03/5403120-just-32-of-tea-party-candidates-win |title=Just 32% of Tea Party candidates win - First Read |author=Alexandra Moe |work=firstread.nbcnews.com |date=3 Nov 2010 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref> Especially the Tea-party backed Senate Republican nominees for: ], ] and ], who had all defeated "establishment" Republicans that were expected to win the Senate races. The three Senate nominees were seen by many in America and the media as either amateurs or too far-out there to be electable as their positions on certain aspects were viewed as extreme.<ref>{{cite web|author=E. Thomas McClanahan |url=http://www.star-telegram.com/2012/09/01/4208642/commentary-todd-akin-answered.html |title=Commentary: Todd Akin answered Claire McCakill's prayers | Guest columns | Fort Worth, Arling |publisher=Star-telegram.com |date=September 1, 2012 |accessdate=November 8, 2012}}</ref> Several of the Tea Party-endorsed candidates won victories against established Republicans in primaries, such as Alaska, Colorado, Delaware, Florida, Nevada, New York, South Carolina, and Utah.{{fact}}}} | |||
{{od}} | |||
* Please use colons to indent properly when responding per ] policy. | |||
{{ex|For the 2012 election, four of the 16 Tea Party candidates won a seat on the Senate, and Tea Party Caucus founder Michele Bachmann was re-elected to the House.<ref>{{cite web |url= http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2012/11/06/tea-party-election-results_n_2084506.html |title=Tea Party Election Results: Conservative Movement Of 2010 Takes Pounding In 2012 |author=Ian Gray|work=huffingtonpost.com |date= 7 Nov 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref> The media, such as ABC and Bloomberg, commented that Tea Party candidates did less well in 2012 than in 2010.<ref>{{cite web |url= http://abcnews.go.com/blogs/politics/2012/06/tea-party-candidates-losing-steam-in-2012/ |title=Tea Party Candidates Losing Steam in 2012 - ABC News |author=Elizabeth Hartfield|work=abcnews.go.com |date=27 June 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref><ref>{{cite web |url= http://www.businessweek.com/articles/2012-11-07/has-the-tea-party-lost-its-mojo |title=Has the Tea Party Lost Its Mojo? - Businessweek |author=Elizabeth Dwoskin |work=businessweek.com |date= 7 Nov 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref>}} | |||
* ''It is also a "majority viewpoint" that the movement has been extensively astroturfed ...'' This is a false statement. | |||
Please support, oppose, or raise concerns. ''']''' ''']''' 20:46, 29 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
* ''Minority viewpoints, for example, would be the ones saying ... there is no astroturf influencing of the movement ...'' This is also a false statement. What makes these false statements is the overwhelming number of sources saying, "It's a grass-roots movement," without any hesitation or qualification (including not only both peer-reviewed academic and fact-checked news organization sources, but also the Tea Party groups themselves, which must be considered reliable in this limited context under ]), compared to the ones like Formisano saying, "It's partially Astroturfed." The ratio is at least 3-to-1 and may be as high as 10-to-1. | |||
I suggest that since the "Tea Party" is ''not'' established by discussion to be a ''single'' entity, that we use the phrase "Various Tea Party groups" instead of just "the Tea Party." The "percentage winning" should reflect 50% for the Senate and 31% for the House, as the NBC blog source states. And I would avoid "especially" as being problematic verbiage in any event. I would also reduce the sentence about the three "odd" Senate candidates to being "seen as having views too far from the mainstream" as bing short, simple, and accurate per sources. I would also shorten the 2012 result comments to "The general media in 2012 noted that the Tea Party candidadtes did less well than in 2010" as being accurate and to the point. IMHO, shorter is generally better. ] (]) 21:17, 29 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
* Most of the sources presented in this three-year discussion, which were claimed by some editors to say, "It's partially Astroturfed," turned out after investigation to be either (A) not actually saying that or (B) the opinion of some notable, but highly partisan opponent of the Tea Party, such as ] or ]. These minority opinions are already properly attributed and quoted farther down in the article, and no one is suggesting they should be removed. | |||
Looks OK, especially with Collect's ideas. But for clarity, could you state the action on the proposed changes, e.g "replace the section named "Ibsum factum" with the following:" Sincerely, <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 23:13, 29 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:Yes, it's as discussed above, replacing the ] ] sections with the text in green, and moving the two election sections to a new sub-article to be called ] - the draft for that is here: ]. ''']''' ''']''' 07:46, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
* Now then, if there is a genuinely policy based argument to be made against any of these three edits, please post it. "It's partially Astroturfed" is obviously a minority viewpoint per ]. ] (]) 11:22, 10 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
* '''Support''' The only point raised by Collect that seems necessary is to remove the term "Especially". Other than that, in this context simply "The Tea Party" seems fine and is easier to maintain consistency. The organization/movement will have been more thoroughly defined elsewhere in the preceding sections of the article. I also don't agree with eliminating what little detail there is for the 2012 election as it makes it clear that there was a precipitous decline in the number of and success of candidates associated with the TPM in contrast to 2010. I also don't see what "percentage winning" passage Collect is referring to.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 04:11, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
**''... blog, 32% of the candidates that were backed by the Tea Party, or were on a ballot line with a "Tea Party" name, won the election'' is the section which I suggest should ''more closely follow'' what the blog actually states. And I still feel that there is ''nothing'' in ''any'' source which suggest the "TPM" is a specific "entity" rather than a whole slew of separate and disparate entities with ''some'' overlapping and ''some'' non-overlapping of positions. Lastly, Misplaced Pages is not here to "''make clear''" anything other than what reasonable weight determines to be salient - we are ''not'' here to make any point about anyone or anything, which appears to be a problem at times. ] (]) 08:03, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
* '''support''' (editors, let's try this approach please. anything would be an improvement over the last 2 years of junk status) ] (]) 07:56, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:*''There are many reliable sources that refer to the Tea Party movement as a movement, not an entity or a centralized, monolithic organization. Skopol's tripartite characterization has repeatedly been mentioned, and there are commonalities found across the movement, especially with respect to the agenda. I don't have a problem with going with "A number of Tea Parties" here, so long as you are not attempting to surreptitiously undermine the discussion of the Tea Party movement as such, particularly in the Agenda section.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 09:03, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
* '''support''' (editors, let's try this approach please. anything would be an improvement over the last 2 years of junk status) ] (]) 07:56, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Colons were used to indent properly (check the edit history); that the movement has an astroturfed component is the majority viewpoint, and trying to say it has absolutely no astroturfing involved is the minority viewpoint; Pelosi and Krugman are being cited for their opinions only; can't comment on the other two edits, as they haven't really been discussed. ] (]) 16:01, 10 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
The text with Collect's suggestions: | |||
* ''that the movement has an astroturfed component is the majority viewpoint ...'' This is a false statement. We've been over all these sources with a fine-toothed comb. Out of all the claims that this is the majority viewpoint, here is the single grain of truth: Formisano says that the Institute For Liberty (IFL) is an Astroturfed TPm component. However, IFL doesn't identify itself as part of the TPm, and I've never seen any other source identify IFL as part of the TPm. | |||
{{ex|Various Tea Party groups have had ]. In the 2010 midterm elections, ''The New York Times'' identified 138 candidates for Congress with significant Tea Party support, and reported that all of them were running as Republicans—of whom 129 were running for the ] and 9 for the ].<ref>Kate Zernike, ''The New York Times'', October 14, 2010</ref> The ''Wall Street Journal''–NBC News poll in mid October showed 35% of likely voters were Tea-party supporters, and they favored the Republicans by 84% to 10%.<ref>Jonathan Weisman, ''Wall Street Journal, October 20, 2010</ref> The first Tea Party candidate to be elected into office is believed to be Dean Murray, a ] businessman, who won a special election for a New York State Assembly seat in February 2010.<ref name=Murray/>}} | |||
* There is no valid policy based argument opposing any of these three edits. From ]: "The closer is there to judge the consensus of the community, after discarding irrelevant arguments: those that flatly contradict established policy, those based on personal opinion only, those that are logically fallacious, those that show no understanding of the matter of issue. ... He (or she) is not expected to decide the issue, just to judge the result of the debate, and is expected to know policy sufficiently enough to know what arguments are to be excluded as irrelevant." ] (]) 03:37, 11 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
{{ex|According to a calculation on an NBC blog, of the candidates that were backed by a Tea Party group, or were on a ballot line with a "Tea Party" name, 50% were elected to the Senate and 31% to the House.<ref>{{cite web |url= http://firstread.nbcnews.com/_news/2010/11/03/5403120-just-32-of-tea-party-candidates-win |title=Just 32% of Tea Party candidates win - First Read |author=Alexandra Moe |work=firstread.nbcnews.com |date=3 Nov 2010 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref> The Tea-party backed Senate Republican nominees for: ], ] and ], who had each defeated "establishment" Republicans that were expected to win the Senate races. The three Senate nominees were seen by the media as having views too far from the mainstream to be electable.<ref>{{cite web|author=E. Thomas McClanahan |url=http://www.star-telegram.com/2012/09/01/4208642/commentary-todd-akin-answered.html |title=Commentary: Todd Akin answered Claire McCakill's prayers | Guest columns | Fort Worth, Arling |publisher=Star-telegram.com |date=September 1, 2012 |accessdate=November 8, 2012}}</ref> Several of the Tea Party-endorsed candidates won victories against established Republicans in primaries, such as Alaska, Colorado, Delaware, Florida, Nevada, New York, South Carolina, and Utah.{{fact}}}} | |||
::Adding an unqualified statement, such as ''"The Tea Party is a grassroots movement."'', to the lede would not satisfy ] anymore than using "astroturf" in lede would. | |||
<blockquote class="toccolours" style="background:PaleGreen; margin-left:50px; float:none; padding:4px 8px 4px 8px; display:table;"> | |||
Considered in its entirety, the Tea Party is neither a top-down creation nor a bottom-up explosion. This remarkable political outpouring is best understood as a combination of three intertwined forces. Each force is important in its own right, and their interaction is what gives the Tea Party its dynamism, drama, and wallop. <small>...snip...</small> Grassroots activists, roving billionaire advocates, and right-wing media purveyors{{mdash}}these three forces, together, create the Tea Party... | |||
<br /><span style="float:right;">{{mdash}} {{Cite book |last1 = Skocpol | first1 = T. |last2 = Williamson | first2 = V. | title = The Tea Party and the Remaking of Republican Conservatism |publisher = ] | year = 2012 | isbn = 9780199832637}}</span> | |||
</blockquote> | |||
::More ] is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of "grassroots" as it applies to the Tea Party movement. {{mdash}} ] (]) 07:25, 11 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::I would hardly call it '''"unqualified"'''. But, if I'm to read your comment correctly -- You feel the use of ''grassroots'' ought not be construed as all-encompassing. | |||
:::My solution: {{ex|The Tea Party is a political movement primarily based in grassroots activism.}} ]<u>]</u> 14:22, 11 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
* ''More ] is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of "grassroots" as it applies to the Tea Party movement.'' '''YES. EXACTLY.''' I simply could not agree with you more on this point. After an insightful observation like that one, you could be my new best friend. | |||
{{ex|For the 2012 election, the media commented that Tea Party candidates did less well than in 2010.<ref>{{cite web |url= http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2012/11/06/tea-party-election-results_n_2084506.html |title=Tea Party Election Results: Conservative Movement Of 2010 Takes Pounding In 2012 |author=Ian Gray|work=huffingtonpost.com |date= 7 Nov 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref><ref>{{cite web |url= http://abcnews.go.com/blogs/politics/2012/06/tea-party-candidates-losing-steam-in-2012/ |title=Tea Party Candidates Losing Steam in 2012 - ABC News |author=Elizabeth Hartfield|work=abcnews.go.com |date=27 June 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref><ref>{{cite web |url= http://www.businessweek.com/articles/2012-11-07/has-the-tea-party-lost-its-mojo |title=Has the Tea Party Lost Its Mojo? - Businessweek |author=Elizabeth Dwoskin |work=businessweek.com |date= 7 Nov 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref>}} | |||
* Generally speaking, those sources that have endeavored to define TPm as "Astroturfed" or "partially Astroturfed" have consistently attempted to redefine the word "Astroturfed" in a much more expansive manner. The expanded definition is intended by these sources to include activities that were never perceived as Astroturfing before. The term was first coined in the 1980s and 1990s, when paid political and corporate operatives were each pretending to be several ordinary people at once, writing letters to congressmen, senators, and the editors of major newspapers and news magazines, artificially manufacturing the appearance of a ], or popular support or opposition to a particular thing, '''''where there was none.''''' | |||
:Is this OK? ''']''' ''']''' 08:00, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::No objection to the above selected content, in general. I'd recommend some minor cosmetic edits, however: | |||
::The second sentence of the second paragraph should have this appended to the end: '', lost.'' | |||
::The tag should be replaced with a citation. (I'll see if I can locate one.) | |||
::The first sentence of the second paragraph should read "identified themselves as a Tea Party member" instead of "were on a ballot line with a 'Tea Party' name", in order to comply with the cited source. The present wording is unsourced. | |||
::I'm not sure if this is a problem or not, but the first paragraph claims 129 House and 9 Senate candidates. The second paragraph gives percentages based on 130 House and 10 Senate candidates. | |||
::Question: Is the reliability of the NBC Blog source challenged in some way? If not, I'd suggest dropping the "According to a calculation on an NBC blog" verbiage, and just start that sentence with "Of the candidates". | |||
::] (]) 08:52, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
* This term was and continues to be a well-recognized and well-understood term in the political science lexicon. Its meaning has never actually changed, unless you can demonstrate a consensus across all of political science, discussing all movements and all activities by political and corporate operatives, that supports such a change in the definition. The meaning is limited to the activities I've described: pretending to be the elements of a grass-roots movement '''''where no such elements exist.''''' | |||
* In this case, not even ] has claimed that there are absolutely zero grass-roots elements in the Tea Party movement. The effect of corporate involvement, and involvement by established political parties (the Republican Party) and conservative leaning news media (Fox News, Daily Caller and the like) is only to amplify these grass-roots elements — '''''elements that genuinely do exist.''''' | |||
*'''Conditional oppose''' | |||
::I would be OK with the first two paragraphs if the information regarding the 2012 election were restored and that paragraph written in a manner reflecting a more balanced and neutral POV with respect to the elections overall. The lone term "media" is also somewhat misleading due to the close relationship between FOX News and the TPm. As it stands, this cannot be said to be an NPOV text, because it doesn't even come close to representing what the sources say. The first two paragraphs attempt to portray the TPm's success in elections as some sort of juggernaut, and the extremely vacuous single sentence covering the 2012 election gives no detail compared to too much detail for 2010, making it seem somewhat promotional on the one hand and in denial on the other. Just look at the tiles of the articles (references) from the ''media'': | |||
* There was a video teleconference recorded and posted by '']'' where political experts were discussing this effort to change and expand the definition of the term "Astroturfing." I've posted the link to it at least twice and will try to find it again, and post it again. But yes, my new best friend, more ] is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of "grass-roots" as it applies to TPm '''''without attempting to change the meaning''''' of that long-established term of art, to include activities that, had ] and ] engaged in them, would be cheerfully described by the very same sources as "]." | |||
:#http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2012/11/06/tea-party-election-results_n_2084506.html | |||
::'''Tea Party Election Results: Conservative Movement Of 2010 Takes Pounding In 2012''' | |||
:#http://abcnews.go.com/blogs/politics/2012/06/tea-party-candidates-losing-steam-in-2012/ | |||
::'''Tea Party Candidates Losing Steam in 2012''' | |||
:#http://www.businessweek.com/articles/2012-11-07/has-the-tea-party-lost-its-mojo | |||
::'''Has the Tea Party Lost Its Mojo?''' | |||
* The difference here is that the community that's being organized is much more fiscally conservative. And that's really the biggest and most salient difference between the community organizing that's being done by the Koch Brothers, and the community organizing that was done by Barack Obama. Opponents and critics of the movement tend to focus instead on the fact that the Tea Party is mostly white. Considering that some of the most beloved candidates of the Tea Party have included ], ], ], ] and ], race is simply not the salient factor. ] (]) 14:37, 11 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::I would think a paragraph more along the lines of<blockquote>For the 2012 election, the Tea Party movement could only claim 16 affiliated candidates, of whom four were able to win a seat in the Senate, while Tea Party Caucus founder Michele Bachmann was the only candidate re-elected to the House.</blockquote> | |||
::would reflect the actual state of affairs as portrayed in the cited RS.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 09:03, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::I'm going to skip past the new twists on old memes above (''"It depends on what the meaning of the word 'is' is." and "Some of my best friends are black."'') and comment on these: | |||
*I don't mean to be contrarian by the above post, as I am aware of how difficult it has been to make it this far. On the other hand, it seems necessary to declare that the focus on policy should not be sacrificed in pursuit of expedience. I feel somewhat out of order in being compelled to state that policies such as RS and NPOV, etc., apply when an ARBCOM member is moderating the discussion, but I am not in consensus with the above passage as currently drafted.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 10:46, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::*''You feel the use of ''grassroots'' ought not be construed as all-encompassing. My solution: The Tea Party is a political movement primarily based in grassroots activism.'' --TE | |||
:::The trouble is that your version isn't accurate. Those 16 candidates were only the ones for the Senate, and did not include House candidates. Also, Bachmann was not the only House candidate from TPm who won. ] (]) 12:14, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::That's a tiny step in the right direction, but still leaves us saying that the hybrid car "runs primarily on gasoline" to the neglect of mentioning that it also runs on electricity. By "unqualified statement", I think the other editor is noting that most sources (and this is particularily true of news media sources) use words like 'grassroots', 'conservative', 'anti-tax movement', without qualification because they are convenient and true, but our article would be remiss and misleading if it mentioned taxes without also mentioning spending, or mentioned conservative without also mentioning libertarian, or mentioned grassroots without also mentioning astroturfed. | |||
::::OK, I did not read through the sources, so that sentence was drafted on the fly, assuming that the previous version somewhat accurately reflected the content of the sources. I do not have time to go through the sources, but would assume that they can be summed up in a single sentence along the lines of that rough draft.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 13:10, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support''' the emended version as being in ''strict compliance with the sources''. I would note that the suggestion that "lost" be appended to the second sentence of the second paragraph is both grammatically and factually incorrect. The NBC blog was the source for the wording about "''anyone who has either been backed by a Tea Party group or has identified themselves as a member of the Tea Party movement''", which is broader than Xeno's choice. If we decide to use the full definition used in the blog, we ''must'' clearly denote it in quotes, of course. The numbers are from the source cited - if sources disagree, then we do not try to "correct" the source named. Where a calculation is made in a source, Misplaced Pages guidelines say to ''name the source used for the calculation''. The NYT source is uded to indicate actual party affiliation, the NBC blog does not make that claim, so if we start with the NBC blog, we pretty much lose the "Republicans" claim - we can not use both without then hitting SYNTH. If we combine the two ''in any way'' without making it clear that the NBC blog did ''not'' make such a claim, we would be making a claim which is not found on the NBC blog. ] (]) 11:59, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::Sorry but it's inaccurate. See above. I'll come up with a version that's more accurate later this morning when I have a bit of time. ] (]) 12:14, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::Collect, why don't you respond to the question about the sentence on the 2012 elections? Unfortunately, I don't have the time to go through the sources at the moment to directly refute in a detailed manner your claim that the sentence I questioned is in "strict compliance with the sources".--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 13:10, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::Sorry but I find language such as '''could only claim''' etc. to be ''quite likely'' found by other editors to be excessively POV and thus contrary to absolute Misplaced Pages policy. CONSENSUS is not "perfection" but it does require scrupulos adherence to the NPOV policy. Hope this helps. ] (]) 13:32, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::Fair enough, that was just a quick modification of the existing text along the lines of what I assumed to have been a sentence originally drafted to reflect the content of the cited sources. It looks like I will have to pound out an actual edit for the 2012 elections. Unfortunately, I do not see a source comparable to the NBC blog for numbers related to 2012. It appears that the TPm lost about 20% of its seats. Would that sound about right to you? I want to keep the edit to a single concise sentence. There is a lot of predominately negative commentary about the TPm in the 2012 election, but this is about the only source with extensive numbers I have found . The data was gathered from the state websites detailing election results.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 15:18, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
Try this one: | |||
:::If we look at ''sources that <u>actually discuss the meaning</u> of "grassroots" as it applies to the Tea Party movement'' as suggested above, we see that the description is most frequently applied to the masses of Americans upset at proposed bailouts (activists), not a movement, which was actually developed by more than just grassroots activists. | |||
{{ex|Various Tea Party groups have ]. In the 2010 midterm elections, ''The New York Times'' identified 138 candidates for Congress with significant Tea Party support, and reported that all of them were running as Republicans—of whom 129 were running for the ] and nine for the ].<ref>Kate Zernike, ''The New York Times'', October 14, 2010</ref> The ''Wall Street Journal''–NBC News poll in mid October showed 35% of likely voters were Tea-party supporters, and they favored the Republicans by 84% to 10%.<ref>Jonathan Weisman, ''Wall Street Journal, October 20, 2010</ref> The first Tea Party candidate to be elected into office is believed to be Dean Murray, a ] businessman, who won a special election for a New York State Assembly seat in February 2010.<ref name=Murray/>}} | |||
:::*''not even Ronald P. Formisano has claimed that there are absolutely zero grass-roots elements in the Tea Party movement'' --P&W | |||
:::Nor have any Misplaced Pages editors, as far as I know. That's not where the disagreement is here. ] (]) 16:30, 11 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
{{od}}Why waste so much precious time on the trivial -- Are we still stuck in the past? ''Astroturfing'' allegations were fun while they lasted, but the world has moved on. Since mentioned above, I decided to do a count:<br>''''''<br><small>Vanessa Williamson, Theda Skocpol, and John Coggin</small> | |||
*Grassroots - <s>24</s> 29 <small> ]<u>]</u> 22:25, 11 July 2013 (UTC)</small> | |||
{{ex|According to a calculation on an NBC blog, of the candidates that were backed by a Tea Party group, or were on a ballot line with a "Tea Party" name, 50% were elected to the Senate and 31% to the House.<ref>{{cite web |url= http://firstread.nbcnews.com/_news/2010/11/03/5403120-just-32-of-tea-party-candidates-win |title=Just 32% of Tea Party candidates win - First Read |author=Alexandra Moe |work=firstread.nbcnews.com |date=3 Nov 2010 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref> The Tea-party backed Senate Republican nominees for: ], ] and ], who had each defeated "establishment" Republicans who were expected to win the Senate races, eventually lost in the general election. The three nominees were seen by some media sources as having views too far from the mainstream to be electable.<ref>{{cite web|author=E. Thomas McClanahan |url=http://www.star-telegram.com/2012/09/01/4208642/commentary-todd-akin-answered.html |title=Commentary: Todd Akin answered Claire McCaskill's prayers | Guest columns | Fort Worth, Arlington |publisher=Star-telegram.com |date=September 1, 2012 |accessdate=November 8, 2012}}</ref> Several of the Tea Party-endorsed candidates won victories against established Republicans in primaries, such as Alaska, Colorado, Delaware, Florida, Nevada, New York, South Carolina, and Utah.{{fact}}}} | |||
*Astroturf - 0 | |||
It's time to let go. ]<u>]</u> 19:37, 11 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Oooh, how very scientific! Your count is off, by the way. It's 29 to 0; but even at 29 the mentions of "grassroots" are still outnumbered by mentions of Elites and Funders of the movement. Not a single mention of a "grassroots movement", but plenty of references to activists, adherents and TPers that are one part of it. Oh, and did you realize several of those "grassroots" are mentions of other conservatives from the past, not TPers? Or is it at all important to you that most of those "grassroots" mentions actually are questioning or qualifying that term? | |||
{{ex|For the 2012 election, four of the 16 Tea Party candidates for the Senate won a seat, and Tea Party Caucus founder Michele Bachmann was re-elected to the House.<ref>{{cite web |url= http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2012/11/06/tea-party-election-results_n_2084506.html |title=Tea Party Election Results: Conservative Movement Of 2010 Takes Pounding In 2012 |author=Ian Gray|work=huffingtonpost.com |date= 7 Nov 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref> The media, such as ABC and Bloomberg, commented that Tea Party candidates weren't as successful in 2012 as in 2010.<ref>{{cite web |url= http://abcnews.go.com/blogs/politics/2012/06/tea-party-candidates-losing-steam-in-2012/ |title=Tea Party Candidates Losing Steam in 2012 - ABC News |author=Elizabeth Hartfield|work=abcnews.go.com |date=27 June 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref><ref>{{cite web |url= http://www.businessweek.com/articles/2012-11-07/has-the-tea-party-lost-its-mojo |title=Has the Tea Party Lost Its Mojo? - Businessweek |author=Elizabeth Dwoskin |work=businessweek.com |date= 7 Nov 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref>}} | |||
:::{{quotation|<small>... has been beset with controversy about its grassroots authenticity ... These elites have long since developed a policymaking infrastructure in Washington, but had previously achieved only limited success in directly connecting themselves to an activist grassroots base ... and how grassroots undertakings relate to the Republican Party and to national organizations claiming to further Tea Party efforts ... (TPP), whose website was up and running within days of the original Santelli rant, has been more closely associated with grassroots activism than TPE ... TPP rhetoric and the group’s homespun website gives the impression of an entirely grassroots, volunteer-run organization ... dubs itself the “official grassroots American movement” ... not clear how much grassroots Tea Partiers know about the national advocacy and funding organizations promoting and trying to capitalize on their efforts ... a partnership formalizing long-time ties between the pro-business lobby and the conservative media’s grassroots mobilization efforts ... conservative media’s social coordination of willing local activists and participants, the anti-regulation big-business lobby could harness new grassroots networks to accompany their already powerful DC presence ... elite Tea Party funders and grassroots activists ...</small>}} | |||
::But we wouldn't want to let a little thing like context get in the way. No one is arguing that there are not genuine grassroots activists in the movement; the disagreement with reliable sourcing only arises when a suggestion is made to describe the movement only as "grassroots". Sorry to see you move on, ] (]) 21:23, 11 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::OR/SYN. Personal beliefs of what constitutes ''astroturf'' has no place in the mainspace. ]<u>]</u> 22:25, 11 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::None were stated. The concern is over describing the movement as only ''grassroots''. {{mdash}} ] (]) 03:36, 12 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::I see nothing wrong with the reliable sources' research or synthesis, and it appears to be well-founded conclusion rather than "personal belief". Are we speaking of the same reliable sources? We can raise the issue at WP:RSN to verify if they have a place in mainspace, if needed. ] (]) 12:27, 12 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::Just doing my best to abide by ''Rule 1''. Unfortunately, I must break it to avoid further misunderstanding: '''"Your personal beliefs of what constitutes ''astroturf'' has no place in the mainspace."''' | |||
:::::It's quite clear that if the RS wanted to use the term "astroturf," they were free to do so. ''Elites and Funders'', your personal opinions of what is established by their presence, has no bearing here. ]<u>]</u> 16:02, 12 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::Of course Misplaced Pages editor opinions and beliefs have no place in mainspace; yours nor mine. I don't see why you feel compelled to state the obvious. We're discussing reliable sources, aren't we? Now returning to those, we see that funding sources and elite establishment influence are indeed important components when describing astroturf/grassroots. Skocpol, Williamson, Formisano and other reliable sources all clearly indicate that the TP movement cannot be described as wholly "grassroots". Our Misplaced Pages article shouldn't either, nor should it misleadingly imply it by inserting the unqualified 'grassroots' description in the lead to the exclusion of the other aspects. The RS ''does'' use the term astroturf (and "not grassroots" and "top-down" and "co-opted" and "faux-grassroots" ...) if you've examined their fuller work on the matter. <small><blockquote>''"Many supporters also proclaim the Tea Party to be purely a grassroots rebellion, a "mass movement of ... 'regular' Americans with real concerns about losing the right to live their lives as they choose." This view captures only a small part of the truth, ignoring the fact that Tea Party participants are in many respects even more ideologically extreme than other very conservative Republicans. Similarly, the ‘mass movement’ portrayal overlooks the fact that the Tea Party, understood in its entirety, includes media hosts and wealthy political action committees, plus national advocacy groups and self-proclaimed spokespersons – elites that wield many millions of dollars in political contributions and appear all over the media claiming to speak for grassroots activists who certainly have not elected them, and to whom they are not accountable. What kind of mass rebellion is funded by corporate billionaires, like the Koch brothers, led by over-the-hill former GOP kingpins like Dick Armey, and ceaselessly promoted by millionaires media celebrities like Glenn Beck and Sean Hannity?”''</blockquote></small> | |||
::::::] (]) 21:01, 12 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Finally, something we can agree on: ''"he TP movement cannot be described as wholly 'grassroots'."'' There's no such thing in this day and age that could gain a foothold in American politics. You need some muscle behind that hustle. The point of contention is erroneously throwing the term ''astroturf'' about as if it's suddenly been redefined. So and so says ''astroturf'', I'm sure there's a place for it in this BLP, attributed, but would be a stretch to consider it lead-worthy. Weight and all. On "''their fuller work,''" I'm of limited resources. I have overdue books, my google machine is the best I can do. But it's not all bad. For instance, by using parts of your excerpt, my google machine led me to the very text that completes said excerpt, for context: <small><blockquote>''The opposite illusion is also there among those who proclaim the Tea Party to be nothing more than an "astroturf" phenomenon, an illusion pushed by Fox News, or a "billionaire's tea party" in which "corporate America is faking a grassroots revolution." This take on the Tea Party as a kabuki dance entirely manipulated from above simply cannot do justice to the volunteer engagement of many thousands of men and women who travel to rallies with their homemade signs and, even more remarkably, have formed ongoing, regularly meeting local Tea Party groups. The citizens we have met, who spend hours meeting with one another, arguing with officials, and learning about the workings of local, state, and national government—these people do not fit the caricatures espoused by some on the left. They are unglamorous, mostly older middle-class Americans. Billionaire-funded political action committees and longtime free-market advocacy organizations are certainly doing all they can to leverage and benefit from Tea Party activism. But they did not create all that activism in the first place, nor do they entirely control the popular effervescence.''</blockquote></small> | |||
:::::::Hope this helps. ]<u>]</u> 22:31, 12 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::::I don't think we've ever disagreed on that part; the movement is neither wholly grassroots or astroturfed. I provided the paragraph that shows the movement isn't entirely grassroots, and you just added the paragraph that shows the movement isn't entirely astroturfed. (By the way, I have dead-tree copies of each of the above sources if Google's "preview" function fails you.) No one has "redefined" astroturf or grassroots here. Neither grassroots nor astroturf needs to be attributed to "so and so", unless you suggest we start citing opinion pieces, and I'd recommend against that. (Pssst ... by the way, this isn't a BLP.) See more of this same discussion below. ] (]) 00:58, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::What I posted, when the RS actually used the phrase ''astroturf'', in parenthesis, shot it down with the quickness. And this is very much a BLP. ]<u>]</u> 02:02, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::By "in parenthesis", did you mean "in quotes"? If so, the only thing shot down was the notion that the movement is "nothing more than" or "entirely manipulated" or "entirely controlled" astroturf, and no one is suggesting it is. Like I said, we've never disagreed on that point. And no, ] is not a ]. Just go to WP:BLPN and search the archives for "tea party" and see for yourself, as that one has been tried a couple times before. If you meant that BLP rules still apply to living people regardless of what article they are mentioned in, then we agree. ] (]) 02:51, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::''"Quotes"'' would be the safe assumption. But, I guess it's always good to ask so as to avoid any further misunderstanding. Those "quotes" have a funny way of surrounding what the RS finds to be fringe viewpoints. If you would like, I propose we use the RS as a counterpoint to the Pelosi/Krugman '09 ''astroturf'' allegations. In their same quotation form. ]<u>]</u> 03:16, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
* Please stop beating your dead horse. It's dead. | |||
* ''It's 29 to 0; but even at 29 the mentions of "grassroots" are still outnumbered by mentions of Elites and Funders of the movement.'' "Elites and funders" do not equal "Astroturf," except in the opinion of Ron Formisano. None of these 29 sources describes the activities of these "elites and funders" as Astroturfing, nor does any of these 29 sources describe what they're doing as having a compromising or diluting effect on the essential grass-roots nature of the movement. All they're doing is amplifying the genuine grass-roots elements that are actually there. And as I said before, these very same activities would be described as "]" without the slightest hesitation, rather than "Astroturfing," if it was Barack Obama and Organizing for America instead of conservatives with money. ] (]) 04:08, 12 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
With all due respect to contributors who worked on previous versions, the grammar was a bit awkward and not 100% accurate compared to the sources. I realize everyone is trying very hard to improve this article and I commend you for your efforts. I'm trying to keep up. Let me know what you think. regards ... ] (]) 13:12, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::29 sources? No, that is a single source, with 29 iterations of the word "grassroots" used to describe what is and is not grassroots, and yes they do describe the activities of the funders and established elites. ] (]) 21:01, 12 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:For the NBC blog I used "5 WON - 50% of Tea Party candidates won" for the Senate and "40 WON - 31% of Tea Party candidates won" for the House. based on the numbers of races decided at the time pf the post as being more informative than a mixed "32%". The prominence of Senate candidates is not identical to that of house candidates, and simply adding the totals is misleading. Posit a party gaining 20 House seats v. a party gaining 20 Senate seats -- which has ''greater weight'' in Congress? Thus I suggest using the more detailed figures from the source is better information for the average reader. Also ''all'' the media commented on "less success" even including Fox et al -- restricting it to ABC and Bloomberg is not necessary. Really. Lastly, I find the "amateur" asides about the odd candidates is ''not'' necessary, and adds nothing for the reader (what, precisely, is a "political amateur" if they had actually held office in the past or worked for years in politics? - they were viewed as too far out of the mainstream per tons of sources). ] (]) 13:32, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*:I agree: There is no source which calls the movement Astroturfed, which doesn't (1) redefine Astroturfed to include any corporate funding, nor (2) quotes political opponents of the movement. I could almost support a statement that it's a grass-roots movement ''said to be'' Astroturfed, but even that doesn't seem to be correct. — ] ] 10:12, 12 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::There is no problem using the more detailed information, but you have left out relevant context in a manner that seems to portray the TPm candidates as gaining more than they did in the senate, for example. What percentage of the senate does 5 members account for? If you are going to insist on details, then the context is necessary to maintain NPOV. The more I look at the sources the more apparent it becomes that the text in the article is not even close to reflecting what they say. | |||
:::It's true that (1) RS include funding sources in their definitions of grassroots and astroturfing (not "redefine", as funding sources have been part of the definition since the terms were created). (2) None of the sources we're presently discussing "quotes political opponents of the movement", so perhaps Arthur Rubin would be so kind as to indicate which sources he's talking about. Even our Misplaced Pages article notes that "]" ''implies that the creation of the movement <u>and the group supporting it</u> are natural and spontaneous, highlighting the differences between this and a movement that is orchestrated by traditional power structures.'' While the reliable sources note there are grassroots activists, they also note the "movement" is controlled, directed and funded by traditional special interests. Why all the aversion to conveying what the reliable sources actually say? ] (]) 12:27, 12 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::With respect to the percentage of candidates fielded (according to the NBC blog), 10/100 (=10%) for the Senate is significantly lower than 130/435 (=@33%) for the House. From that perspective, the TPm was able to field supportive candidates in only 1/10th of Senate races whereas the figure is 1/3rd for the House. It would seem that you are trying to blow the numbers out of proportion to make it look like they accomplished more than they did by saying that they won 50% of the races for the Senate and only 31% for the House, without including the combined total of 32%, which puts those figures in perspective. From another angle, the TPm supportive candidates that won in 2010 accounted for 5/100 (=5%) of the Senate and 40/435 (=@9%) of the House, so again the numbers tend to be more relevant with respect to the House, not the Senate. Excuse the WP:OR analysis of the sources, but it is to counter the current NPOV presentation. | |||
:::* ''(not "redefine", as funding sources have been part of the definition since the terms were created)'' There are other essential elements of the definition of "Astroturfing," and they've been essential elements of the definition since the term was created in the '80s. Not just (A) corporate and PAC money, but also (B) a genuine Astroturfing operation conceals the source of the money, and (C) one political or corporate operative pretends to be several people at once — and the people he's pretending to be have no connection to the source of the money. Is there any evidence of anything like either (B) or (C) going on here? Both are essential elements of the political science term "Astroturfing." | |||
::The coverage of the 2012 election, in particular, is almost exclusively negative with respect to the results for TPm affiliated candidates. Not one reliable source cited or that I've found portrays anything that could be deemed a plus for TPm supporters, so the description has to reflect that. I am in favor of keeping the election information in the main article to a minimum, so I will attempt to make a one or two sentence description relating to the 2012 election coverage.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 17:50, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::* If the TPm does not have both (B) and (C), then what's happening here is called "]." Rich, powerful people are simply providing funds to make sure that all of the very real, grass-roots people who share their beliefs show up at the next protest, or the next election. And without (B) and (C), individuals like Ronald P. Formisano are most certainly trying to redefine "Astroturfing" to include activities that would have made Barack Obama one of the most notorious Astroturfers in the history of politics. | |||
:::Collect's reasoning behind the use of 50% and 31%, instead of the aggregate 32%, is sound -- but it should be noted that the content thrust of the cited source is: For all the talk of the Tea Party's strength, ''only'' this many won. The use of the 32% aggregate statistic better conveys that narrative, but that doesn't mean we need to use that statistic, unless we're conveying that narrative, too. Are we? I have no preference either way. I still don't see where this wording is supported in a source: ''were on a ballot line with a "Tea Party" name''. Also, I agree with Collect regarding the text about media comments and specifically mentioning Bloomberg, etc. Why not replace that with the generic but accurate "Political observers have commented..."? And finally, I believe these two sources would suffice as citations supporting the sentence presently tagged as "citation needed": and . ] (]) 18:31, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::* Here's the link to that '']'' video of a discussion about the definition of ]. According to my new best friend ArtifexMayhem, this source deserves more weight than Formisano because it actually discusses the definition of the word it's using. This is a 30-minute video but it's worth a very careful review. Watch for the comments by Edward Walker, the guy with eyeglasses who had to connect to the discussion via telephone, and John Hawkins, the guy wearing the headset. They're the ones who, in my opinion, really hit all the points we've been talking about. ] (]) 13:40, 12 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::I'm the last person to break up a beautiful friendship, but AM said nothing specifically about that video clip and I think you may have missed his/her point. What was said is, "More weight is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of 'grassroots' as it applies to the Tea Party movement." This video clip source is indeed more weighty than one of the many news reports that merely stick in the word "grassroots" by rote when reporting about a protest or activist, etc., (you are up to 18 now, you said?). But that puts it on par with Formisano's ''The Tea Party: A Brief History'', which goes to great lengths to discuss the grassroots and astroturfed aspects as they apply to the Tea Party. Same with Skocpol & Williamson's ''The Tea Party and the Remaking of Republican Conservatism''. Starting at 26:30, Walker gives an accurate popular astroturf versus grassroots description, which doesn't contradict what reliable sources have been saying. He admits he is "unclear" about co-opting, and who co-opted whom, but he does acknowledge the grassroots activists, although he gets the timeline wrong about involvement in the movement. Walker is one of the lead proponents of the line of thought that (and I quote him) ''"The dividing line between “grassroots” and “Astroturf” may be more of a political Rorschach test than a precisely measurable concept. But, in any case, changing relationships between companies and the public—especially in the health domain—are leading more and more industries to institute grassroots mobilization programs."'' (See the "grassroots lobbying" form of astroturfing.) | |||
:::::*''And as I said before...'' --P&W | |||
:::::Repeated time and again, yes, without much change in the discussion. Instead of continuing to spin our wheels, how about we try to move the discussion forward? Maybe if we first developed this topic better in the body of the article, then summarize that content in the lead? ] (]) 21:01, 12 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::Yes, it has been repeated — and '''no argument''' has been presented for inclusion of "astroturf". But perhaps we should concentrate on other matters. — ] ] 23:02, 12 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Except for the '''arguments that have been presented for inclusion of astroturf''', but you would not be expected to know about those. ] (]) 00:58, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::::"''''" - Xenophrenic | |||
::::::::All I've seen was not one mention of ''astroturfing''. OR/SYN has no place in the mainspace. ]<u>]</u> 02:09, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::I see nothing wrong with the reliable sources' research or synthesis, and it appears to be well-founded conclusion rather than "personal belief". ] (]) 02:51, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::Just doing my best to abide by ''Rule 1''. Unfortunately, I must break it to avoid further misunderstanding: '''"Your OR/SYN has no place in the mainspace."''' ]<u>]</u> 03:07, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::Of course Misplaced Pages editor opinions and beliefs have no place in mainspace; yours nor mine. I don't see why you feel compelled to state the obvious. We're discussing reliable sources, aren't we? I don't see where I've placed "OR/SYN" in mainspace, or even made a proposal that we do so. Maybe some other editor? ] (]) 03:26, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::''"rassroots mobilization programs being referred to are astroturf"'' - Xenophrenic | |||
::::::::::::Well, definitely not in the . Which is why I sometimes feel compelled to state, and restate the obvious. ]<u>]</u> 03:33, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
{{od}} | |||
* ''I'm the last person to break up a beautiful friendship, but AM said nothing specifically about that video clip ...'' Specifically, AM said, "More ] is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of 'grassroots' as it applies to the Tea Party movement." He did not include Formisano specifically, but the HuffPo video clip is included by definition because it actually discusses the meaning of that word. Formisano does discuss the grass-roots aspects, and what he's trying to redefine as "astroturfed" aspects of TPm. But he never really talks about what Astroturf means, let alone admit that he's trying to expand the definition by leaps and bounds. The multiple experts in the HuffPo clip do talk about what the word means. And it does not mean merely donating money to a Tea Party group. So no, according to AM, the HuffPo video clip deserves more weight than Formisano's book. | |||
*'''Support''' as conforming to all the requirements of Misplaced Pages here. ] (]) 14:22, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support''' per Collect. I'm fine with any of Silk Tork's versions above also. ] (]) 16:02, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
* ''"... are leading more and more industries to institute grassroots mobilization programs."'' Right. '''"GRASSROOTS''' mobilization programs." ]. Not Astroturf. I think it's important to make it very clear how few of these sources actually say, "The Tea Party movement is partially Astroturfed." Skocpol doesn't say it, for example. ] (]) 02:31, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
===More action on trimming=== | |||
* ''Except for the arguments that have been presented for inclusion of astroturf ...'' References to Astroturf are already included down in the body of the article, where minority opinions belong. Nobody is suggesting that they should be removed. What should be changing is the article's treatment of the word "grass-roots." That word goes into the lede sentence, where the majority opinion belongs. ] (]) 02:31, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*Good progress. When there are no further queries or changes, I will edit the article with the latest amended version after at least 24 hours have passed. Meanwhile, would people take a look at ], as I think some of the amendments made above may apply to the proposed sub-article. It would be useful to have the sub-article ready at the same time as making the edit to the main article. ''']''' ''']''' 14:49, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::No, I really don't think AM indicated that your video clip is weight-ier than Formisano or Skocpol. Let's see if he'll clarify for us. And yes, the grassroots mobilization programs being referred to ''are'' astroturf; it's the new grassroots lobbying. As for Skocpol not being quoted as saying the TP movement is partially Astroturfed, how would you propose to convey what she did say? ] (]) 02:51, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::I had a moment of ] and created an article called ]. I suggest with all due respect that it's a better title. "Elections" is a bit vague for a worldwide encyclopedia and someone from Australia or New Zealand, or from India who reads the English Misplaced Pages, may not have heard of the American Tea Party. Specifying a range of dates suggests it may be the start of a series of articles chronicling the Tea Party's effect on U.S. elections farther down the road. I've used SilkTork's subpage article but added the subsection on ground game/GOTV from the ] article, adding "2014 election cycle" to the section header, and we can expand it as time passes — more news and analysis gets published. I'm sure it will be edited a great deal in the next few hours, days and weeks, but thought it was appropriate to get it out there in the mainspace. regards ... ] (]) 16:14, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::Correct, I did not ''"indicated that video clip is weight-ier than Formisano or Skocpol."'' Per ], "When available, academic and peer-reviewed publications, scholarly monographs, and textbooks are usually the most reliable sources." I.e., Formisano and Skocpol are the types of sources we should prefer. {{mdash}} ] (]) 06:23, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::This is not about being bold or about rushing things. We need to work by consensus. It is because people have been bold rather than patient that there are problems on this article. Please don't do that again as it undermines what we is trying to be achieved here. I have redirected the article title to the main article. If you have concerns about the title or the spelling of a word, or the structure of a sentence, or any of the other everyday editing that crops up, please either bring it here to the discussion table, or go ahead and work on the draft. Let's let this right. ''']''' ''']''' 19:06, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::Quote her directly. At one point she says that the TPm is a ], supported by deep-pockets money like the Koch Brothers and "amplified" by conservative media such as Fox News and Breitbart. That is what she actually said: her own opinion, in her own words, which didn't include the use of the word "Astroturf." Quote that paragraph of her book. ] (]) 17:07, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::I think you're on the right track. Once again, I definitely think that the subsection on Ground game/GOTV from the ] article belongs in a separate article related to elections. It only seems natural to integrate the material on the elections along with the electioneering, and an article title referring to the effect or impact on the elections serves to focus that information in a more coherent manner.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 16:40, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::Quote "her" directly? Don't you mean "them"? Neither Skocpol nor Williamson mention a "grassroots movement". They do mention grassroots activists-people-enthusiasts-adherents-protesters ... you know, the individuals who are genuinely grassroots but only '''part''' of the movement. One component of the movement out of three. Perhaps that is part of the misunderstanding here. You make a big deal out of the fact that the word "astroturf" is rarely used by Skocpol, yet she nonetheless writes a lot about astroturfing. She explains how the movement is neither wholly grassroots or astroturfed. It isn't necessary to repeatedly spell out a-s-t-r-o-t-u-r-f to discuss "top-down" organizing, or "supposedly" grassroots activity, or "elitist" co-opting and control or "the super rich fat-cats who have manipulated Tea Party activism with such glee". It is still astroturf she is describing. Formisano spells it out as well: ''So what is the answer to the question posed at the beginning of this chapter: "Astroturf or Grassroots Populism?" The simple answer is that the Tea Parties have been created by both kinds of populism, in part by the few -- the corporate lobbyists from above--but also from the passionate many expressing real grassroots populism.'' Or ''The Tea Partiers, finally, are routinely referred to in the media as conservatives. But their blend of astroturf and grassroots populism is more accurately labeled right-wing or reactionary populism.'' You claimed above that if pro-Obama groups were to do what FreedomWorks, Americans for Prosperity, etc., were doing, it would be called "community organizing". No, it wouldn't. It would (and has) been called what it is: | |||
::By the way, I successfully resisted the powerful urge to add the word "grass-roots" to the new article's header. I may have been a bit hasty creating the article at all, and I apologize for that. I would like to offer a gentlemen's agreement. No high-profile editing decisions, especially to the lede, should be made to the content of any of these spin-off articles without prior agreement here, in this moderated discussion. Can we agree on that? ] (]) 16:43, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::{{quotation|<small>More recent advocacy events have likewise shown an apparent lack of spontaneous organization, most notably some of the early “Tea Party” protests. Following CNBC pundit Rick Santelli’s call, in February 2009, for a “‘Chicago Tea Party’” to oppose President Obama’s mortgage bailout plan, numerous websites dedicated to the cause sprang to life, each supposedly part of a national grassroots Internet protest and each tied to the Sam Adams Alliance advocacy group. This group in turn enjoyed substantial financial support from the Koch family, multibillionaire owners of one of the largest privately-held corporations in the United States, and FreedomWorks, a public relations firm with former House Majority leader Dick Armey as its chairman, and which the Kochs have funded. The above examples highlight a phenomenon more widely known as “Astroturfing,” or fake grassroots advocacy, a practice that has become popular among particular groups and individuals. </small>}} | |||
::::::This has been acknowledged as astroturf activity for decades. If you insist on having such nuanced subject matter appear in the lead of the article, we could say something similar to: | |||
:::::::''The Tea Party movement is an American political movement that advocates reducing the U.S. national debt and federal budget deficit by reducing U.S. government spending and taxes. The movement comprises both grassroots and astroturf components, including passionate activists, wealthy political action committees and national advocacy groups, establishment elites and conservative media outlets. The movement has been called partly conservative, partly libertarian, and partly populist. It has sponsored protests and supported political candidates since 2009.'' | |||
::::::What are your thoughts? ] (]) 00:50, 14 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::The video teleconference posted by '']'' interviewed four different academics simultaneously. It deserves at least as much weight. And as you said, the four academics do actually discuss the meaning of the words they're using, so unless I'm mistaken about what you said, or you've suddenly changed your mind, that source deserves even more weight than Formisano or Skocpol. ] (]) 17:07, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
The definitive version? | |||
::::::Four different academics? Walker was the only academic in that group, and there were two Tea Partiers and an executive from "Yes! magazine". Information from Walker can be considered, although he admits he is "unclear" about the co-opting of the Tea Party. Formisano and Skocpol do indeed discuss how the TP is grassroots and astroturfed, so it appears that you are mistaken about what was said. Hopefully that helps. ] (]) 00:50, 14 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::* ''And yes, the grassroots mobilization programs being referred to are astroturf ...'' According to who? A pseudonymous Misplaced Pages editor's ]? One history professor at the University of Kentucky? Or a demonstrated consensus across the entire profession of political science, supporting that redefinition of the term "Astroturf" by that history professor from the University of Kentucky? Because only the third one will be sufficient to support that statement. ] (]) 05:31, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::You lost me with the U-of-Kentucky reference ... name? I'm also not citing any Misplaced Pages editors. As for your characterization that astroturfing has been redefined, I'd like to see what source you are citing that to, because that's news to me. I do see that there are newer terms like "grassroots lobbying", "astroturf lobbying" and "grassroots mobilization" being introduced over the past decade, but I am unaware of any actual redefining of astroturfing. ] (]) 00:50, 14 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::I caught the "''history professor at the University of Kentucky''" reference right away, and that's even without previously . ]<u>]</u> 07:36, 14 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::I wish I was as quick on the uptake; you are both speaking of Formisano? I do have the book (borrowed, not owned), and nowhere in it does it mention him as a professor at UofK. He's been referred to simply as "Formisano" in these discussions, so the new referense threw me. I've just Google'd him - looks like an impressive fellow. ] (]) 17:33, 14 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
{{od}} | |||
Opponents of the proposed edit adding the word "grass-roots" to the lede have cited three sources, generally referred to here as "Skocpol," "Formisano," and "Zellner." Skocpol doesn't support use of the term "Astroturfing." Formisano does, but is trying to expand the definition of "Astroturfing" in doing so. Here's a link to an op-ed column by Formisano: Here's another: Formisano clearly likes Barack Obama very, very much and his bias most likely seeps into his writing about TPm. Zellner, while focusing his article on Astroturfed lobbying efforts, decided to do a drive-by on the Tea Party. He not only supports the expanded definition of "Astroturfing," but he relies exclusively on sources that Misplaced Pages would not consider reliable sources: an AlterNet article, and the partisan ] op-ed column. (Check his footnotes.) Furthermore, at the time he wrote the article in November 2010, he was not a professor. He has never been a professor. He was a law student at the time, seeking to obtain a JD the following spring. This is not an academic, certainly not of the same caliber as ], and should not be presented as one. | |||
*Note that there was a reference in the second paragraph, which relates to the 2010 election, related to Todd Akin and the 2012 election and mixed up with the three senate races. I don't see how that could have gotten mixed up like that and missed by everyone, but I have moved it to the third paragraph, and added a brief mention. There is this passage that from an entry in the section being moved to the subarticle<blockquote>Akin caused controversy with his ]. Akin subsequently lost the election to McCaskill. <ref>. Kansas City Star. November 7, 2012. Retrieved November 7, 2012.</ref></blockquote> | |||
Meanwhile here is a sampling of the reliable, neutral sources supporting a description of TPm as "grass-roots," period, full stop: three from the ''],'' two from the ''],'' one from ], one from ], one from '']'' of all places, a very interesting 30-minute webcam round-table discussion hosted by the ''Huffington Post,'' one from the ''],'' and a Harvard PDF in which Theda Skocpol, of all people, says that "Thus the grassroots Tea Party phenomenon is real ..." | |||
:Also, as Collect indicated that Fox News also downplayed the TPm election results, I eliminated reference to "media" in the third paragraph. The second paragraph has been whittled down substantially, and the third expanded in part due to relocation of the controversy related information that had been buried and obscured in the second. The controversy is related to the poorer performance, and should probably be included per WP:DUE, though I have left out the specifics, including only a Wikilink to the relevant article. | |||
The 30-minute webcam round table hosted by HuffPo, in a very interesting exchange of ideas, explores what is actually meant by the term "Astroturfing." The mere addition of money, even from people like the Koch Brothers, does not negate the grass-roots nature of the movement. Only if the money is being used to pretend that there is genuine grass-roots support for a particular position '''where no grass-roots support actually exists''' can it legitimately be called Astroturfing. It is painfully obvious that the majority viewpoint, per ], is that TPm is a ], even if we don't count the Tea Party's self-serving claims — which we should count under ]. Accordingly, using the ] article as an example, this majority viewpoint should be stated in the lede sentence. | |||
{{ex|Various Tea Party groups have ]. In the 2010 midterm elections, ''The New York Times'' identified 138 candidates for Congress with significant Tea Party support, and reported that all of them were running as Republicans—of whom 129 were running for the ] and 9 for the ].<ref>Kate Zernike, ''The New York Times'', October 14, 2010</ref> The ''Wall Street Journal''–NBC News poll in mid October showed 35% of likely voters were Tea-party supporters, and they favored the Republicans by 84% to 10%.<ref>Jonathan Weisman, ''Wall Street Journal, October 20, 2010</ref> The first Tea Party affiliated candidate to be elected into office is believed to be Dean Murray, a ] businessman, who won a special election for a New York State Assembly seat in February 2010.<ref name=Murray/>}} | |||
Regarding the "Other events" section, it was orphaned by removal of the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" section, and should accompany that section in the spin-off article. These "other events" are not notable enough to be included in a top-level article written in ]. | |||
{{ex|According to statistics on an NBC blog, overall, 32% of the candidates that were backed by the Tea Party or on a ballot line with a "Tea Party" name won election. Tea Party supported candidates won 5 of 10 Senate races (50%) contested, and 40 of 130 House races (31%) contested. <ref>{{cite web |url= http://firstread.nbcnews.com/_news/2010/11/03/5403120-just-32-of-tea-party-candidates-win |title=Just 32% of Tea Party candidates win - First Read |author=Alexandra Moe |work=firstread.nbcnews.com |date=3 Nov 2010 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref> Tea-party backed Senate Republican nominees for ], ] and ] all defeated "establishment" Republicans that had been expected to win the respective Senate races.}} | |||
Regarding the "Commentaries on origins," they're partisan and, for the most part, not notable enough to be included in a top-level article written in ]. The '']'' article never should have been mentioned in this article's mainspace. Here's a harsh analysis of that ''Tobacco Control'' study. And in their grant proposal to obtain public funding from NIH, the authors of the study basically admitted that they had a political agenda in seeking this funding: the anti-smoking lobby "requires understanding how the tobacco industry maintains a favorable social and policy environment" As the contributor at ''Huffington Post'' sarcastically observed, it's hard to tell the difference between this stated objective, and political ]. Also, here's an examination of the chief author of the study, Stanton Glantz, and his research: | |||
{{ex|Tea Party candidates fared poorly in the 2012 election, winning four of 16 Senate races contested, and losing approximately 20% of the seats in the House that had been won in 2010. Tea Party Caucus founder Michele Bachmann was re-elected to the House by a narrow margin. The 2012 election was marred by ] involving Tea Party backed candidates ] and ].<ref>{{cite web |url= http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2012/11/06/tea-party-election-results_n_2084506.html |title=Tea Party Election Results: Conservative Movement Of 2010 Takes Pounding In 2012 |author=Ian Gray|work=huffingtonpost.com |date= 7 Nov 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref><ref>{{cite web |url= http://abcnews.go.com/blogs/politics/2012/06/tea-party-candidates-losing-steam-in-2012/ |title=Tea Party Candidates Losing Steam in 2012 - ABC News |author=Elizabeth Hartfield|work=abcnews.go.com |date=27 June 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref><ref>{{cite web |url= http://www.businessweek.com/articles/2012-11-07/has-the-tea-party-lost-its-mojo |title=Has the Tea Party Lost Its Mojo? - Businessweek |author=Elizabeth Dwoskin |work=businessweek.com |date= 7 Nov 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref> <ref>{{cite web|author=E. Thomas McClanahan |url=http://www.star-telegram.com/2012/09/01/4208642/commentary-todd-akin-answered.html |title=Commentary: Todd Akin answered Claire McCakill's prayers | Guest columns | Fort Worth, Arling |publisher=Star-telegram.com |date=September 1, 2012 |accessdate=November 8, 2012}}</ref>}}--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 19:01, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
* ''It isn't necessary to repeatedly spell out a-s-t-r-o-t-u-r-f to discuss "top-down" organizing ...'' Yes, it is necessary to say it at least once: "These activities by this Tea Party group were Astroturfing." To establish a different standard violates ]. Astroturfing has a very specific meaning, and the activities described by Formisano and Zellner do not satisfy that definition. The term has very negative connotations, indicating that something fraudulent (or at least very dishonest) is going on, which is why the TPm's political enemies have been trying so hard for so many years to hang that word around the Tea Party's neck. We've officially discussed this to death. ] (]) 01:51, 15 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Oppose''' | |||
:::Why argue against "Opponents of the proposed edit adding the word 'grass-roots' to the lede"? That's why this conversation keeps repeating itself, because of mis-framing of the discussion. I have no problem with "grassroots" being in the lead, as long as the astroturfed aspect of the movement is also added according to reliable sources. Here is a proposed sentence for the lede that addresses your request to mention "grassroots" in the lead, while also sticking to what reliable sources say: | |||
**'''"A store sold 5 of 10 Mercedes in white, and 30 of 100 bicycles in white. 32% of its total sales were in white."''' Senate races != House races in either number or in importance. Since the blog specifies the percentages ''by house'', so ought we. You then proceed to add "stuff" which we had decided, I thought, to be placeable in the subarticles and not simply muddy up the main article. ''The three Senate nominees were seen by many in America and the media as either amateurs or too far-out there to be electable as their positions on certain aspects were viewed as extreme'' is not an improvement on the version proffered above. ''losing approximately 20% of the seats in the House that had been won in 2010'' is argumentative and not an improvement to the version proffered above. ''The 2012 election was marred by ] involving Tea Party backed candidates ] and ]'' simply does not belong - as I had thought we all agreed -- when we set up the subarticles. ] (]) 19:19, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::{{ex|The movement comprises both grassroots and astroturf components, including passionate activists, wealthy political action committees and national advocacy groups, establishment elites and conservative media outlets.}} | |||
:::We can add Formisano, Skocpol and Zellner cites at the end of the sentence, along with any of the dozen cites you've linked above. I've looked at each of those sources and not a single one refutes the astroturf aspect of the movement. In fact, your two NPR sources confirm the heterogeneous nature of the movement. (''On one end, it very much is a grassroots movement ... But then on the other hand, you have sort of an establishment that is somewhat preexisting. And these are the folks who have come to the game with a great deal of money, if not a great deal of energy ... So you have two things going on at once here, is what you're saying ... there is also this political structure and corporate structure that's driving them a little bit.'') Your NYT source also confirms the heterogeneous nature of the movement. (''This anti-government, grass-roots Republican offshoot has rattled the party establishment ... Some of the money behind the Tea Party movement or its offshoots has little in common with grass-roots populism.'') Harvard's Skocpol confirms the heterogeneous nature of the movement. (''Many supporters also proclaim the Tea Party to be purely a grassroots rebellion ... overlooks the fact that the Tea Party, understood in its entirety, includes media hosts and wealthy political action committees, plus national advocacy groups and self-proclaimed spokespersons – elites that wield many millions of dollars in political contributions and appear all over the media claiming to speak for grassroots activists ... Considered in its entirety, the Tea Party is neither a top-down creation nor a bottom-up explosion. Each force is important in its own right, and their interaction is what gives the Tea Party its dynamism, drama, and wallop. ... Grassroots activists, roving billionaire advocates, and right-wing media purveyors{{mdash}}these three forces, together, create the Tea Party...'') | |||
:::*None of your sources refute the astroturf component of the movement; they only confirm the grassroots component. | |||
:::*Your personal opinions about what constitutes "astroturf" (i.e.; ''Only if the money is being used to pretend that there is genuine grass-roots support for a particular position where no grass-roots support actually exists can it legitimately be called Astroturfing'') are trumped by what reliable sources say constitutes astroturf. | |||
:::*Your personal opinions about the reliability of academic sources ("he likes Obama"; "he uses sources we wouldn't use"; etc.) aren't convincing. Try WP:RSN? | |||
:::*Your personal opinion that it's not "Astroturf" if it is instead called "fake grassroots", "top-down manipulation", "artifical grassroots lobbying", etc., isn't really applicable in this discussion. | |||
:::] (]) 07:52, 15 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::Actually, it is within our remit as editors to consider the context and determine how much weight to give to a particular source once it has satisfied basic ] requirements. Let's walk through the rules on that. Rule 1 is we're supposed to give greater weight to both peer-reviewed academic sources and fact-checked news organizations. However, Rule 2 says Formisano's track record as a fawning op-ed writer for Team Obama weakens his status as a reliable, '''neutral''' source, and the weight we should give that source. From WP:RS — very, very much: "The reliability of a source depends on context. Each source must be carefully weighed to judge whether it is reliable for the statement being made and is an appropriate source for that content." Rule 3 specifically addresses and advises caution: "Misplaced Pages articles are required to present a neutral point of view. However, reliable sources are not required to be neutral, unbiased, or objective. Common sources of bias include political, financial, religious, philosophical, or other beliefs." In this case, Formisano's expressed political beliefs reduce the weight that should be given to his opinion. | |||
:::::That brings us to Zellner, the law student. Sorry, he's not an academic like the other authors described here, such as ]. He's graduated from law school now, and he's practicing law in Connecticut. His weakened status as a source is confirmed by the weak, heavily biased sources that he chose to rely upon. Remember, context matters. ] (]) 14:05, 17 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::'''reliable sources are not required to be neutral, unbiased, or objective.''' | |||
::::::'''Each source must be carefully weighed to judge whether it is reliable for the statement being made and is an appropriate source for that content.''' | |||
::::::Either we are in agreement, P&W, or the policies you cite don't say what you think they do. (I'm guessing the latter.) Since you, me, and Policy, all appear to agree, any further concerns you have with the above named sources should be raised at WP:RSN. I'll be happy to meet you there, and I'll allow you the benefit of phrasing and framing the initial argument. ] (]) 17:47, 17 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
* ''I have no problem with "grassroots" being in the lead, as long as the astroturfed aspect of the movement is also added according to reliable sources'' It's too bad that the sources supporting "TPm is partially Astroturfed" are such a tiny minority according to ]. For that policy based reason, the word "Astroturf" belongs down in the body of the article where it currently resides, but the word "grass-roots" belongs in the lede sentence. We can modify it the way Skocpol did, "supported by deep pocket donors and amplified by conservative media," but the word "Astroturfing" does not belong in the lede because it's a minority viewpoint. | |||
:::Well, I integrated the house-by-house data after the overall figure of 32%. And for the record, the title of the blog article is '''"Just 32% of Tea Party candidates win"'''. | |||
:::Also, I eliminated the reference to the "amateurs" passage as well as the media, as per your suggestion. I don't recall agreeing not to include the controversy aspect, and had forgotten about that until I uncovered the reference to the article o Akin burried in the second paragraph. | |||
:::I'm not married to the above version. I basically took the first version posted by ST, went through it line by line comparing it to the other versions and with reference to the sources. The reference to 20% loss in seats if from the Daily Kos article linked to above, which seems reliable enough for statistical data, and perhaps should be included if that line winds up in the final version. If you have comprehensive numbers for the 2010 election, why not for the 2012 election? The only mention of the House races is about Bachman?--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 19:31, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::The objective of seeking consensus is to figure out what is "important" and what is "unimportant" to various editors and to try to find a balance between the two. That is where my "version" came from, and why I suggest is meets most of the proper NPOV concerns of editors and does so without tossing the whole stew out. And again - if an editorial opinion column is to be used - it likely belongs in the subarticle and ''not'' in the main article. More is ''not'' generally better on Misplaced Pages. I also commend you to read ]. Cheers. ] (]) 19:37, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::OK, I'll read that. By the way, I just noticed that the "media" and "amateurs" lines were tagged at the end of the third paragraph--a copy and paste error--among all of the refs. Anyway, I've redacted those. Now, what do you think about the Dean Murray reference with respect to a NY State Assembly seat election? Trivial or notable? | |||
:::::If you really think that the Akin et al controversies are not something that should be mentioned in this context, I'll have to defer to hear what ST has to opine on the matter. Wouldn't you agree that those controversies directly contributed to several important losses in the election?--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 19:53, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
* ''Your personal opinion that it's not "Astroturf" if it is instead called "fake grassroots", "top-down manipulation", "artifical grassroots lobbying", etc., isn't really applicable in this discussion.'' It isn't a personal opinion. It's Misplaced Pages policy: ]. Also, I haven't seen a source describing it as "fake grassroots," or "artificial grassroots lobbying." The sources that allegedly support "TPm is partially Astroturfed," for the most part, do not say what's being claimed. | |||
::::::I thought we were pretty close to an agreement. If the Akin and Mourdock remarks "directly contributed to several important losses in the election," then it's obvious that Senate races have a lot more ] than House races. And this would mean that "Just 32% of Tea Party candidates win" is misleading, because on a percentage basis, the Tea Party did a lot better with its Senate candidates than its House candidates. You can't have it both ways. Either the Senate races are treated the same as the House races throughout the discussion, or the Senate races are of elevated importance throughout the discussion. ] (]) 22:26, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::I'm not sure that I follow the logic of how the Akin and Mourdock remarks relate to the percentages, but the cited source does imply that the controversy had serious consequences, at least in the Akin race. | |||
:::::::I didn't mean to spoil the pot, so to speak by bringing that up--though personally I think it is relevant--so I'll remove that sentence and the related source that had been buried in the second paragraph. I'll remove that source if its content isn't going to be addressed, and add the Daily Kos source for the statistics. If the Akin/Mourdock controversies were the only thing standing in the way of consensus at this point, maybe this version will work. As for the 20% statistic, it seems to me that from the standpoint of parallelism between the treatment of the 2010 and 2012 election it is necessary to give balance to the section. Does anyone have another source with such data?--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 04:09, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
* ''I've looked at each of those sources and not a single one refutes the astroturf aspect of the movement.'' Refutation of that alleged aspect is implicit in the statement, "TPm is a grass-roots movement," just as refutation of "Substantial portions of the elephant are plant-like material" is implicit in the statement, "The elephant is an animal." The mere addition of deep pockets money does not compromise the grass-roots nature of the movement. ] (]) 11:38, 15 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
Let's just get it close and keep this process moving. Perfection is the enemy of progress. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 22:06, 30 April 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::*The sources supporting TPm is partially Astroturfed are such a tiny minority? Incorrect; you have produced zero sources refuting that fact, which makes it not only a majority, but an overwhelming unanimous majority. | |||
:::*It isn't a personal opinion, it's Misplaced Pages policy: ]? Incorrect, not when reliable sources are doing the sysnthesis. WP:SYNTH applies to Misplaced Pages editors, not expert sources researching the matter. | |||
:::*Refutation of astroturf aspects is implicit in the grassroots statement? Incorrect; reliable sources explain that genuinely grassroots activists can be manipulated and co-opted by astroturfing groups. (And it's a good thing, too, else a bunch of citizens upset at bailouts never would have been organized and channeled into a 'movement', according to sources.) The fact that a hybrid vehicle can run on gasoline does not refute the fact that it also runs on electricity. Why argue to mention gas in the lead, without mentioning electricity? ] (]) 17:04, 15 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
I consider these vague terms to be a waste of time. But "astroturf" '''''as an overall characterization of the movement''''' is beyond fringe. And so trying to maneuver that in is a complete wp:snow waste of time. And the TPM is about as grassroots as any large movement has been or can be. As far as overall characterizations by sources, I think "grassroots" has about a 30:1 advantage over "astroturf" with the "1" going to zero if you limit it to impartial sources. I even consider spending much time arguing for "grass roots" to be a waste of time even thought it is appropriate. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 11:50, 15 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:I don't think I've seen reliable sources showing astroturf as an "overall characteristic", but rather just one component of the whole. Attempting to describe the movement as overall astroturfed would indeed be fringe, but no one is doing that. Reliable sources have explained the astroturf aspect in detail, and there has been zero refutation of it, so the only "maneuvering" appears to be avoid acknowledging it. Your apples to oranges numeric comparison doesn't apply here, unless you would equally argue that "since 30:1 overall sources characterize the movement as 'conservative' over 'grassroots', we shouldn't mention grassroots". Make that 100:1 sources that avoid mentioning 'grassroots' at all when describing the movement. | |||
:The uncontested fact is that the movement comprises both astroturf and grassroots aspects. Our article should convey what reliable sources convey; it's policy. The "astroturf" part of the description does indeed carry with it negative connotations, so I can understand the impetus to avoid mentioning it. I'm not oblivious to the shotgun-arguments attempt to that end: | |||
:The shortest distance to consensus is if Ubikwit changes his "vote" to '''Support.''' Failing that, if we get a flood of support he can be "outvoted." North8000, what do you say? '''Support?''' ] (]) 03:06, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:— try to deny the reliability of the sources ("not impartial"; "likes Obama!"; "that award-winning source is a student, not a professor!") | |||
:— try to set up a false equivalency ("more sources say grassroots than astroturf!") | |||
:— try to deny standard definitions and applications of the word "astroturfing" ("that reliable source is redefining astroturf!") | |||
:— try to misapply WP:WEIGHT and WP:V ("you are only citing 3 reliable sources that say astroturf is part of the movement!") | |||
:I agree with you that it's a time sink, but I think that's because circular argumentation is being used to try to convey something other than what reliable sources convey. ] (]) 17:04, 15 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::I guess the only reason for coupling the two terms in discussions is that they are sort of opposites of each other. One additional note: Between the two terms, we must recognize that astroturf is a more extreme one (being an outright direct pejorative) than "grass roots" and inherently an argument for an extreme term is much more likely to fall short than an argument for a more moderate term. My main point is that I consider both words to be vague and a waste of time, but ('''''regarding overall characterization''''') the case for "grass roots" is about 30 times stronger than "astroturf" and the grass roots aspects are immensely more prevalent the astroturf aspects. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 17:24, 15 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
''Revised version'' | |||
:::Technically, they aren't really opposites; in the most common usage, they are quite similar with the defining difference being that one is inauthentic (fake, manufactured, not genuine, contrived, bogus, etc.). The words can be used as both nouns and adjectives, which adds to the confusion. As for being pejorative, even that is changing, as the lines between astroturfing and legitimate advocacy mobilization are being blurred. If you can get a copy of ''New Technology, Organizational Change and Governance'' by Emmanuelle Avril & Christine Zumello, you can find an excellent explanation of astroturf organizations which <blockquote>turn upside down the definition and spontaneity of grassroots mobilization since they help materialize an inverted movement. They, in essence, groom the potential roots of a movement; they try to locate the potential defenders of a cause in order to aggregate them through a digital network and mobilization that appears to be spontaneous, but is not.</blockquote> Sound familiar? The "case for" grassroots and astroturf are identical (as in, both factual ... there is no such thing as a "stronger" fact, something either is or isn't factual). The fact that you see "grassroots" more often in news reports about TP activists or TP protest groups are because that's what those news reporters are focusing on in their report: the activists, the protesters and their message ... not the movement or the astroturfed part of it. You keep tossing around the number "30" as if you think WP:WEIGHT refers to prominence/prevalence '''OF''' sources, rather than '''IN''' sources. In every reliable source that looks at the grassroots and astroturf aspects of the movement, you'll find both aspects to be equally prominent. ] (]) 20:02, 15 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
{{ex|Various Tea Party groups have ]. In the 2010 midterm elections, ''The New York Times'' identified 138 candidates for Congress with significant Tea Party support, and reported that all of them were running as Republicans—of whom 129 were running for the ] and 9 for the ].<ref>Kate Zernike, ''The New York Times'', October 14, 2010</ref> The ''Wall Street Journal''–NBC News poll in mid October showed 35% of likely voters were Tea-party supporters, and they favored the Republicans by 84% to 10%.<ref>Jonathan Weisman, ''Wall Street Journal, October 20, 2010</ref> The first Tea Party affiliated candidate to be elected into office is believed to be Dean Murray, a ] businessman, who won a special election for a New York State Assembly seat in February 2010.<ref name=Murray/>}} | |||
::::We're talking about two different things here. I've have been talking about characterizations of the (overall) movement, and, with respect to astroturfing (which would certainly leave out astroturfed, and almost certainly include grassroots) and you are basically talking about existence (to some extent) of elements of each. The former is more appropriate to a lead sentence, the latter is more appropriate for elements (major or minor) in the body of the article. And I consider both terms to be vague = uninformative = a waste of time. Sincerely, <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 20:31, 15 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::We are all talking about the characterizations of the movement as a whole, as are the reliable sources I've cited. (Those sources include Skocpol, Formisano, Zellner and the two NPR and a NYT source from P&W's list.) ] (]) 09:20, 16 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::Well,at least we have that clarity going forward. But that somewhat refutes some of your previous points, which essentially implied that the mere existence of a astroturf component (however small) is relevant to the conversation. Second, by "reliable" to you mean actually reliable or meeting the "floor" of wp:rs? Highly biased unreliable writers often meet the meet the "floor" of wp:rs and should be used in that context (attributed etc.) Finally there is the question of which used which words as an '''''overall characterization''''' of the movement. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 12:40, 16 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::That wasn't my point at all. My point, explicitly stated, is that reliable sources very clearly convey that the "movement" consists of both grassroots components and astroturf components. It is not wholly one or the other, but a combination of both. By "reliable sources", I mean ] as defined by Misplaced Pages policy, nothing more, nothing less. If you feel a cited reliable source is not suitable for supporting the assertion of fact (that means stated in Misplaced Pages's voice without the need for attribution), then let's bring that source and the relevant supported text to WP:RSN for a thorough airing. To your final point, what does Skocpol's "<u>Considered in its entirety</u>, the Tea Party is neither a top-down creation, nor a bottom-up explosion", mean to you? That's "overall". ] (]) 17:48, 17 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
=== Proposal === | |||
{{ex|According to statistics on an NBC blog, overall, 32% of the candidates that were backed by the Tea Party or on a ballot line with a "Tea Party" name won election. Tea Party supported candidates won 5 of 10 Senate races (50%) contested, and 40 of 130 House races (31%) contested. <ref>{{cite web |url= http://firstread.nbcnews.com/_news/2010/11/03/5403120-just-32-of-tea-party-candidates-win |title=Just 32% of Tea Party candidates win - First Read |author=Alexandra Moe |work=firstread.nbcnews.com |date=3 Nov 2010 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref> Tea-party backed Senate Republican nominees for ], ] and ] all defeated "establishment" Republicans that had been expected to win the respective Senate races.}} | |||
Ok. In the last week or so, I went through this enormous discussion. I reread some sections at times to get a better idea of this discussion. Forgive me if I missed anything as I am working through a lot of comments in my head as I write this. It would seem that editors in this discussion page are divided about how to describe this movement. I have a proposed statement, that may be reworded accordingly to fit the article structure, that may appease both sides of the discussion without misleading or POVing the article. | |||
{{ex|Tea Party candidates fared poorly in the 2012 election, winning four of 16 Senate races contested, and losing approximately 20% of the seats in the House that had been won in 2010. Tea Party Caucus founder Michele Bachmann was re-elected to the House by a narrow margin.<ref>{{cite web |url= http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2012/11/06/tea-party-election-results_n_2084506.html |title=Tea Party Election Results: Conservative Movement Of 2010 Takes Pounding In 2012 |author=Ian Gray|work=huffingtonpost.com |date= 7 Nov 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref><ref>{{cite web |url= http://abcnews.go.com/blogs/politics/2012/06/tea-party-candidates-losing-steam-in-2012/ |title=Tea Party Candidates Losing Steam in 2012 - ABC News |author=Elizabeth Hartfield|work=abcnews.go.com |date=27 June 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref><ref>{{cite web |url= http://www.businessweek.com/articles/2012-11-07/has-the-tea-party-lost-its-mojo |title=Has the Tea Party Lost Its Mojo? - Businessweek |author=Elizabeth Dwoskin |work=businessweek.com |date= 7 Nov 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref><ref>{{cite web |url= http://www.dailykos.com/story/2012/12/30/1174753/-What-Happened-to-The-Tea-Party-in-the-2012-Election# What Happened to The Tea Party in the 2012 Election? - Daily Kos |author=Dbug |date= 29 Dec 2012</ref>}}--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 04:09, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
;The Tea Party movement is generally viewed as a grass-roots movement, with occasional views of it being astroturfed. | |||
or | |||
;The Tea Party movement is mostly viewed as a grass-roots movement with some viewing it as an astroturf. | |||
Something along those lines. Any thoughts?—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 17:40, 18 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Thank you for taking a look at the discussion(s). It is indeed rather lengthy, and has been a point of contention since the Tea Party first appeared. Since you asked, here are my initial thoughts on the wording you have proposed: | |||
:That's a big step in the right direction, but which reliable source said that they "fared poorly"? Try this compromise version of the first sentence in the last paragraph: | |||
::1) The division between editors falls into two sides: those who want to mention "grassroots" in the lead without mentioning "astroturf", and those who want to mention both grassroots and astroturf in the lead. | |||
::2) I don't think I've seen ''any'' reliable sources that declare the "movement" (the subject of our article) is wholly astroturfed, so both of the above proposed sentences might be hard to support with reliable sources. Reliable sources are always careful to note that the movement is only partially astroturfed while also having a large grassroots component. | |||
::3) Wording such as "some viewing it as" or "occassional views of it being" give the impression to the reader that the "astroturf" aspect of the movement is just an opinion. Just to clarify, is that what you were intending to convey to the reader? | |||
::4) It would probably be beneficial if we noted which sources we are to cite for this (or any other) proposed wording, as there also seems to be some disagreement among editors as to which sources are suitable. | |||
::] (]) 18:13, 18 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
Try: | |||
:{{ex|Tea Party candidates were less successful in the 2012 election, winning four of 16 Senate races contested, and losing approximately 20% of the seats in the House that had been gained in 2010.}} | |||
:'''The Tea Party movement is generally viewed as a grass-roots movement, with some pointing out partial funding from corporations and wealthy donors''' | |||
Avoiding the quite problematic neologism "astroturf". And quite neutral in tone, as well as being easily sourced. ] (]) 18:42, 18 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::This is a compromise version I've previously mentioned, slightly modified below, easily sourced in the works of Skocpol et al.: | |||
:That change of a few words at the start of one sentence more closely paraphrases the sources I've been reading. What do you say? ] (]) 04:50, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:*'''support''' Your suggested wording would be fine. I don't see a problem.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 04:58, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:*I'll also support, '''if''' the two uncontroversial changes I noted above are implemented: 1) replace the unsourced text ''"on a ballot line with a 'Tea Party' name"'' with ''"identified themselves as a Tea Party member"'', and 2) Note in the ''"Colorado, Nevada and Delaware all defeated"'' sentence that they went on to lose the general election, which was I think the point of the sentence. ] (]) 20:55, 2 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
::OK, that referred to the primaries, so clarified. Note that there is no source for that, and I'm not sure if that text wouldn't fit better at the head of the paragraph, followed by the stats for the general election.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 01:31, 3 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::This , which says "...those of Delaware, Nevada and Colorado, states where Republicans blew a chance for Senate control in 2010 by nominating candidates who were amateurs or too far-out for the general election...", is referring to both primaries and the general election, but I've added an academic source as a citation instead. I'll let you swap the text around if you think it will flow better. ] (]) 05:51, 3 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::It's good to have a source, but introducing the text about being "too far-out" would be difficult and the result not likely to flow better. I'm for just leaving it as is, with the source simply as a citation.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 07:16, 3 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
*Version incorporating changes per P&W and Xeno | |||
::{{ex|The Tea Party movement is generally viewed as a grass-roots movement, with some noting that conservative news media amplify the movement's message, and corporations and wealthy donors provide some of its funding.}} | |||
{{ex|Various Tea Party groups have ]. In the 2010 midterm elections, ''The New York Times'' identified 138 candidates for Congress with significant Tea Party support, and reported that all of them were running as Republicans—of whom 129 were running for the ] and 9 for the ].<ref>Kate Zernike, ''The New York Times'', October 14, 2010</ref> The ''Wall Street Journal''–NBC News poll in mid October showed 35% of likely voters were Tea-party supporters, and they favored the Republicans by 84% to 10%.<ref>Jonathan Weisman, ''Wall Street Journal, October 20, 2010</ref> The first Tea Party affiliated candidate to be elected into office is believed to be Dean Murray, a ] businessman, who won a special election for a New York State Assembly seat in February 2010.<ref name=Murray/>}} | |||
::The word "amplified" is used by Theda Skocpol, a political science professor at Harvard, and the most reliable source provided by the tiny "partially Astroturfed" crowd, so this may work. But Misplaced Pages articles do not elevate small minority viewpoints to appear in the lede like that, as I've repeatedly demonstrated with reference to the lede of the ] article. There are many, many other Misplaced Pages articles I could link that discuss small minority viewpoints down in the body of the article but do not mention them in the lede. The lede is for unchallenged facts and, where viewpoints on the evidence differ, the lede is also for majority viewpoints. Not minority viewpoints. So this is a dead end, and has always been a dead end. An overwhelming majority of reliable sources — including peer-reviewed academics, fact-checked news organizations, and the Tea Party groups themselves, whose self-published websites we're required to treat as reliable sources, see ] — describe the TPm unequivocally, without reservation, as a "grass-roots movement" or its members as "grass-roots activists." Period. Full stop. | |||
{{ex|According to statistics on an NBC blog, overall, 32% of the candidates that were backed by the Tea Party or identified themselves as a Tea Party member won election. Tea Party supported candidates won 5 of 10 Senate races (50%) contested, and 40 of 130 House races (31%) contested. <ref>{{cite web |url= http://firstread.nbcnews.com/_news/2010/11/03/5403120-just-32-of-tea-party-candidates-win |title=Just 32% of Tea Party candidates win - First Read |author=Alexandra Moe |work=firstread.nbcnews.com |date=3 Nov 2010 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref> In the primaries for ], ] and ] the Tea-party backed Senate Republican nominees defeated "establishment" Republicans that had been expected to win their respective Senate races, but went on to lose in the general election to their Democrat opponents.<ref>; Gary C. Jacobson; University of California, San Diego; pg. 3</ref>}} | |||
::Essentially, you are asking us to concede and let Xenophrenic have his way, when the overwhelming majority of sources, comparable Misplaced Pages articles, and Misplaced Pages policy say that it is Xenophrenic who should be conceding. ] (]) 19:03, 18 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
{{ex|Tea Party candidates were less successful in the 2012 election, winning four of 16 Senate races contested, and losing approximately 20% of the seats in the House that had been gained in 2010. Tea Party Caucus founder Michele Bachmann was re-elected to the House by a narrow margin.<ref>{{cite web |url= http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2012/11/06/tea-party-election-results_n_2084506.html |title=Tea Party Election Results: Conservative Movement Of 2010 Takes Pounding In 2012 |author=Ian Gray|work=huffingtonpost.com |date= 7 Nov 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref><ref>{{cite web |url= http://abcnews.go.com/blogs/politics/2012/06/tea-party-candidates-losing-steam-in-2012/ |title=Tea Party Candidates Losing Steam in 2012 - ABC News |author=Elizabeth Hartfield|work=abcnews.go.com |date=27 June 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref><ref>{{cite web |url= http://www.businessweek.com/articles/2012-11-07/has-the-tea-party-lost-its-mojo |title=Has the Tea Party Lost Its Mojo? - Businessweek |author=Elizabeth Dwoskin |work=businessweek.com |date= 7 Nov 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref><ref>{{cite web |url= http://www.dailykos.com/story/2012/12/30/1174753/-What-Happened-to-The-Tea-Party-in-the-2012-Election# What Happened to The Tea Party in the 2012 Election? - Daily Kos |author=Dbug |date= 29 Dec 2012</ref>}}--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 01:31, 3 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
::*'''Support''' Yes, I got the impression that we had achieved consensus for all of this. It should go into the main article to replace removed material for the sub-article. ] (]) 19:36, 5 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::"with some pointing out" is problematic in that it still insinuates opinion as a vague attribution, and begs the question: who says so? (And that would result in the citing of a great many sources, not just the three mentioned above.) Neutral in tone would be to use "some view" to go with "some point out", but I prefer to leave the word "some" out completely. I think the most straight-forward way to convey what reliable sources say is "The movement comprises both this and that" or "consists of" or "is made up of". Working with your (Collect's) wording as a base, how would you feel about: | |||
==Sub-article title and draft== | |||
:'''The Tea Party movement is generally viewed as partially grassroots and partially funded and directed by corporations and wealthy individuals ...''' | |||
Would people please take a look at ]. Phoenix and Winslow has suggested the name for the sub-article should be "Tea Party effect on U.S. elections, 2010-2014", and also suggested adding ], which I have now done. | |||
::: (I should note that the last part, if we really follow reliable sources, should also say advocacy groups and political elites, but in the interest of brevity and compromise that can be relegated to the body of the article.) ] (]) 19:34, 18 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::@P&W: The fact that the movement has an astroturfed component, along with the more visible (and therefore more mentioned) grassroots component, is not a "small minority viewpoint". I would discuss further your misunderstanding of that applicable policy, but I am pressed for time at the moment, so I'll settle for saying ]. ] (]) 19:43, 18 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::I proposed a compromise - I suggest your ultimata are not going to get ''others'' to move past my suggestion by even a millimeter -- in fact I think I am pushing as far towards your POV as is possible with ''any'' prospect of reaching consensus. Cheers - but trying to get me to move further towards your wording is not gonna happen. ] (]) 21:05, 18 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
So, three areas to look at: | |||
1) Is the draft acceptable to be put into mainspace. | |||
2) What is an appropriate title? | |||
3) Should the ground game/GOTV material be discussed as part of the current election material discussion, or should we put that aside for now (and temporarily remove the "Tea Party shifts focus..." material from the sub-article draft) in order to get this part of the discussion wrapped up, and move onto ground game/GOTV next? | |||
:::::Your attempt to push toward the POV of the reliable sources is noted, but I contend that merely moving closer to what sources say is insufficient; we should be saying what the reliable sources say. But this appears moot, as suggestions from both you and me have been shot down by others. ] (]) 21:35, 20 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
Thoughts and comments please. And the draft on ] is open to editing. ''']''' ''']''' 06:57, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
*Then here is what I suggest. Everyone here will propose what to add to the article. "Nothing" is an acceptable option. If it's already proposed, then don't propose it again. Then we will remove the least favored ones until we have a result. I think this might be the only way to get this to have a fixed outcome.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 13:02, 21 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*:Is there a list of proposed additions, already, or should we start over? — ] ] 15:27, 21 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*::We should start over.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 19:22, 21 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
=== New Start === | |||
:I have reorganised the discussion so that each point is dealt with separately. In doing this I moved over two comments, closing down the section in each that was now no longer relevant to the section it was in. There was no intention to alter meaning or impact, but please check to make sure everything is clear, and as it should be. ''']''' ''']''' 20:44, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
====Proposal 1==== | |||
Then let's start over. My proposal is to simply add the word "grass-roots" to the lede sentence as follows: "The Tea Party movement is an American grass-roots political movement that advocates ..." The policy-based arguments supporting this have already been posted at length. To make a long story short, there are 20+ reliable sources stating that it's a "grass-roots movement," period, full stop. And there are three sources that say something else: one of which is most likely biased, one of which was written by a law student rather than a professor (and relies on sources Misplaced Pages doesn't consider reliable), and no two of which say the same thing on this subject. ] is clear about this. ] (]) 14:11, 22 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*This is one proposal. Others may now support or oppose this proposal and throw in their own proposal to be handled the same way.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 15:30, 22 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Oppose''' for the reasons already exhaustively discussed. Inserting just "grassroots", when countless reliable sources indicate that the movement is not completely grassroots, would be a gross violation of Misplaced Pages policy -- ] in particular. The false argument that there are only 3 reliable sources refuting your personal opinion has been disproven; there are many, not just 3. The false argument that those sources are unsuitable due to bias or sourcing issues has been disproven; they are ]. The false argument that those particular 3 sources don't all, in unison, say that the TP movement is ''not'' 100% grassroots has been disproven; they all state that. ] (]) 16:47, 22 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support''' as going in the right direction. It's a grass-roots political movement. Period. That some corporate or "right-wing news media" support the movement does not make it other than grass-roots. I would not object to a neutral expression of that fact in the lead, but using the term "astroturf" is ] or, to be more precise, an original definition of "astroturf". — ] ] 20:20, 23 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::'''It's a grass-roots political movement. Period.''' | |||
::Really? So when Zeitlow, whom we have no problem quoting elsewhere, says, ''"The degree to which the Tea Party movement is a grassroots movement is debatable. Tea Party organizers have received extensive financial support from prominent conservative think-tanks and financiers",'' we can simply cite you to end that debate? Or do you have a source that Misplaced Pages would actually consider reliable instead? When several professors are published by Oxford University Press and say, ''"The defining feature of astroturf groups is that they are generated by an industry, think tank, or front group, but designed to appear as a spontaneous, popular 'grassroots' effort. Especially important are the roles played by the Koch-funded Americans for Prosperity and FreedomWorks front groups in generating a significant portion of the 'Tea Party'..."'', should I inform them that they are conducting original research? ] (]) 21:21, 23 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::''The defining feature of astroturf groups is that they are generated by an industry, think tank, or front group, but designed to appear as a spontaneous, popular 'grassroots' effort''. OK, but ''Especially important are the roles played by the Koch-funded Americans for Prosperity and FreedomWorks front groups in generating a significant portion of the 'Tea Party' '' is the only mention of Tea Party in that book, and seems to be a fringe position, even among the sources that <s>you</s> <ins>have been</ins> claim<ins>ed</ins> to support the "astroturf" position; not even their sources agree. — ] ] 00:26, 24 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::Incorrect; there are at least a few mentions of the Tea Party, FreedomWorks and Americans for Prosperity. And the cited sources agree, and I think you know that, because you would have quickly cited the actual discrepency if there really was one. If I understand you correctly, you are saying that all of the highly reliable sources that say the movement is <u>not</u> 100% grassroots are espousing a "fringe theory", correct? If so, I plan to raise your concern and your specific argument at ] (and I'll be sure to credit you). ] (]) 06:58, 24 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::Okay, since you haven't objected, I'll raise your "fringe position" concern at WP:FTN this evening. Hopefully, we can get it resolved. ] (]) 21:12, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Oppose''' per ]'s reasons. —<span style="white-space: nowrap;font-family: Georgia, sans-serif;">] ]</span> 21:34, 7 August 2013 (UTC) | |||
====Proposal 2==== | |||
;Is the draft acceptable? | |||
Add to the ]: "The movement comprises both grassroots and astroturf components, including concerned citizen activists, wealthy political action committees and national advocacy groups, establishment elites and conservative media outlets.<ref>''Steep: The Precipitous Rise of the Tea Party''; Lawrence Rosenthal, Christine Trost; University of California Press; May 2012; "Debate still rages in the blogs. Some condemn the Tea Party as Astroturf, a movement directly funded and organized from its very beginning by conservative leaders. Others argue that the Tea Party epitomizes grassroots politics, an outpouring of aggreived citizens who spontaneously protested against big government. Both arguments contain at least a grain of truth." Page 98-99; "Local Tea Parties and national Tea Party unbrella groups are entangled with and significantly funded by the United States' conservative establishment and by parts of the Republican Party." Page 134-135</ref><ref>''Keeping the Republic: Power and Citizenship in American Politics''; Christine Barbour, Gerald C Wright; CQ Press; January 2013; "The indirect lobbying we have discussed is often called grassroots lobbying, meaning that it addresses people in their roles as ordinary citizens. It is the weilding of power from the bottom (roots) up, rather than from the top down. Most of what we refer to as grassroots lobbying, however, does not spring spontaneously from the people but is orchestrated by elites, leading some people to call it astroturf lobbying—indicating that it is not really genuine. Often the line between real grassroots and astroturf lobbying is blurred, however. A movement may be partly spontaneous but partly orchestrated. the Tea Party movement has been, in part, the project of Dick Armey, a former Republican House majority leader whose organization, FreedomWorks, promotes low taxes and small government. FreedomWorks and several other conservative groups, as well as prominent individuals including some commentators at Fox News, have lent their organizational expertise to the Tea Partiers but deny that they are orchestrating an astroturf movement." Page 497-498</ref><ref> ''Blessed Are the Organized: Grassroots Democracy in America''; Jeffrey Stout; Princeton University Press; 2010; "Some of the issues that have been of central concern to the religious right over the last three decades have more recently been taken over by the considerably more volatile Tea Party movement. Insofar as the latter movement is a creation of media elites, it too qualifies as an example of top-down politics. The volatility of the movement derives, however, from the sponteneity of its populist spirit. The movement's distrust of elites, and "socialists" could rapidly morph into outright fascism if there were a further deepening of the economic crisis or a series of additional terrorist attacks on the scale of 9/11. In any event, it is easy to imagine the movement's bottom-up populism becoming a more prominent force in American politics in the coming years." Page 230-231</ref> | |||
The policy-based arguments supporting this have already been exhaustively discussed. There are 20+ reliable sources stating that the TPm is <u>not</u> completely grassroots. There are zero reliable sources that refute the astroturfed components of the movement. Some editors are promoting their personal opinion that the "", in violation of ]. ] (]) 16:47, 22 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Oppose''' as not even going the right direction. There is one reliable source which uses the term "astroturf" to apply to the TPm, and he redefines it. The list of supporting organization types ''might'' belong in the lead. I ''might'' support the edit if it were rewritten as "the movement as a grass-roots movement, supported by . — ] ] 20:17, 23 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
=====Vote on 'Is draft acceptable?'===== | |||
::Please cite this "one reliable source" that redefines "astroturf", and cite that redefinition, please, so we can all review it. Is this the redefinition of which you speak? ''"The Astroturf Metaphor asserts that conservative leadership organizations provided resources, direction, and standardized messages that were crucial in instigating Tea Party protests."'' Please direct me to the source you are using that says that is a "redfinition", please. Just so we're all on the same page. ] (]) 21:21, 23 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::"Component" is a very low bar and certainly is not enough to qualify for being a characterization. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 23:59, 23 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::"Component" is my word. What word do you think would more accurately convey what the reliable sources convey? Actually, we can remove that word completely without disrupting the meaning. Would that suffice? ] (]) 06:58, 24 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::(Actually, that's not the source I had in mind which redefined "astroturf". It's still a different definition, though.) Well, I can't prove it's a redefinition, only that it's different than any other definition proposed, including the one in our article ]. If it weren't a redefinition, it could appear in this article, but with "grass-roots" linked (because it does match our definition) and astroturfing '''not''' linked. — ] ] 00:14, 24 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::It's not a different definition. And linking to "grassroots" means it would have to comply with ''"the creation of the movement and the group supporting it are natural and spontaneous, highlighting the differences between this and a movement that is orchestrated by traditional power structures"'', which isn't wholly true. ] (]) 07:01, 24 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Oppose''' for the reasons I've already stated. The majority viewpoint per ], supported by at least one peer-reviewed academic source, 18 fact-checked news organization sources, and five ] sources, is "The Tea Party movement is a ]," period, full stop. ] will not allow us to elevate a minority viewpoint to be stated as a fact in the lede. | |||
:* ''Inserting just "grassroots", when countless reliable sources indicate that the movement is not completely grassroots ...'' "Countless"? Try "three," and no two of them say the same thing. | |||
:* ''The false argument that there are only 3 reliable sources refuting your personal opinion has been disproven; there are many, not just 3.'' This is a false statement. There are three, and no two of them say the same thing. | |||
:* ''The false argument that those sources are unsuitable due to bias or sourcing issues has been disproven; they are highly reliable.'' This is also a false statement. It has not been disproven. You suggested taking this to ] but you didn't do it. ] allows us, as editors, to consider both context and potential bias in determining how much weight should be given to a particular source. Clearly, the consensus of editors here is that these sources don't merit enough weight to outweigh 24+ reliable sources that say, "The Tea Party is a grass-roots movement," period, full stop. | |||
:* ''The false argument that those particular 3 sources don't all, in unison, say that the TP movement is not 100% grassroots has been disproven; they all state that.'' This is a statement based on a false premise. The false premise is that they represent one unified viewpoint. They don't. While all three say that the Tea Party movement is not 100% grassroots, there the resemblance ends. Two of them are in very, very roughly the same "part grassroots, part astroturf" time zone (not the same ballpark, not even the same zip code, but the same time zone). The third says that the Tea Party is neither grassroots nor astroturf, but something else that's in between. | |||
:* ''So when Zeitlow, whom we have no problem quoting elsewhere, says, "The degree to which the Tea Party movement is a grassroots movement is debatable. Tea Party organizers have received extensive financial support from prominent conservative think-tanks and financiers" ...'' Nowhere in that quotation, or even in the entire article, can I find the word "astroturf." Zietlow supports neither your proposal nor mine. She says it's "debatable." ] (]) 03:06, 24 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::*''The majority viewpoint per WP:WEIGHT...'' --P&W | |||
:::...doesn't say anything like that. Please quit misquoting and misapplying the policy. | |||
::*''Try "three," and no two of them say the same thing.'' --P&W | |||
:::Please learn to count. Which "three" are you speaking of this time? And so far, at least 7 of them say the very same thing. Have you even read them? | |||
::*''You suggested taking this to WP:RSN but you didn't do it.'' | |||
:::Correct. I suggested that you should take your challenge to RSN, and you haven't done it. If you'd like me to take your challenge there for you, I will. Which specific reliable source shall we start with, and what is your specific challenge to its suitability as a reliable source? We can work our way through each of them in turn. | |||
::*''WP:RS allows us, as editors, to consider both context and potential bias in determining how much weight should be given to a particular source.'' | |||
:::You are making stuff up about policy again; please stop. "how much weight should be given to a particular source", thanks for the levity. | |||
::*''the consensus of editors here is that these sources don't merit enough weight to outweigh 24+ reliable sources'' | |||
:::Please don't libel the other editors here. I'm fairly certain that most of them have been around long enough to know that number of sources saying something has nothing to do with WP:WEIGHT. I note that your proposal has zero reference citations; would you mind choosing 2 or 3 from your ever-changing number of sources and append them to your proposed text? | |||
::*''While all three say that the Tea Party movement is not 100% grassroots, there the resemblance ends.'' | |||
:::Again, which three sources, exactly, are you speaking of? And you are correct that reliable sources agree that the Tea Party movement is not 100% grassroots, so why should we mislead our readers to believe otherwise? | |||
::*''The degree to which the Tea Party movement is a grassroots movement is debatable ... She says it's "debatable."'' | |||
:::Yet you say there is no debate, according to what you have written above. Why should we mislead readers to believe that? ] (]) 06:58, 24 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
====Proposal 3==== | |||
*'''Acceptable''' Though I am sure that this does not mean "cast in stone" but it furnishes an area where structured discussion ought well exist. ] (]) 11:58, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
Do nothing and leave it alone for 6 months. (This is not what I think should be a course of action. I'm just throwing this out there for consideration.)—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:red;font-family:arnprior">Offline</sub> 05:47, 24 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support''' ] (]) 02:18, 2 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:We've already done nothing for three years. Count the number of reliable sources supporting one proposal. Count the number of reliable sources supporting the other proposal. And then please make a decision per ]. ] (]) 12:15, 24 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support''' ]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 15:01, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Yes, please count the number of reliable sources (many) refuting the "100% grassroots" proposal. Now count the number of reliable sources (zero) refuting the "grassroots+astroturf" proposal. Then make a decision based on actual applicable Misplaced Pages policy, not a misunderstanding of one. ] (]) 21:08, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support''' Still needs a bit of work but that's no reason not to get it out into the mainspace. ] (]) 14:11, 2 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''support''' ] (]) 05:56, 3 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''support''' Have not analyzed in detail, but supporting to keep the process moving forward.<font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 15:25, 4 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support''' - the basic structure, while noting that it still needs work. (The problematic non-sentence starting with "Especially the Tea-party backed..." still exists in this draft, for example, although it has been corrected in the main article summary.) ] (]) 16:22, 4 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
{{cot}} | |||
But I don't see the point of having the ] and ] remain on the main article, as they are not integral to the flow. The evenn have dates corresponding to the respective time frames of the 2010 and 2012 elections.]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 15:01, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
====Proposal 4==== | |||
While the ground game is appropriate in the subarticle and should be developed there, it must also remain as a section on the main article. The main article must show the progression of development by the tea party from organizing rallies through social media, to organizing tea party groups that lobbied congress to offering support to candidates who at first were not electable to supporting electable candidates to organizing superpacs to oppose establishment Republicans. It is about the Tea Party movement afterall, and this is what they've been doing. | |||
Take the existing reliable sources and develop encyclopedic content about the matter in the body of the article first. Then summarize that content in the ], which is how most content in the lede is created. ] (]) 21:08, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
] (]) 16:50, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
{{cob}} | |||
== End of the process — or a fresh start == | |||
We can not, as I see it, continue when any editor decides that the posited rules that six editors accepted should now be discussed at length - the idea that such a devotion to process, which would surely take weeks at the least, needs to be done when a single editor dislikes the ground rules is clearly going to make any solutions here totally impossible. My goal in proposing such rules was to prevent the absurd wikilawyering found in all too many discussions, and that ''any'' editor would desire to promote such behavior I find distressing. My hands are in the bowl of water, and unless everyone actually decides to work on the article instead of on arguing about process, there is no way in (insert expletive) that this can ever be resolved. Will some admin please lock this puppy down? Cheers. ] (]) 22:54, 8 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
;Ground game/GOTV material | |||
:Your extensive concern about process is noted, but most of us here would just like to be productive with regard to the ] and related articles. P&W has reiterated a few content concerns he'd like to see addressed, and I have some as well. By "please lock this puppy down", are you suggesting that we no longer try to improve the article, or is this just a "venue" concern? ] (]) 23:41, 8 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*... But I don't see the point of having the ] and ] remain on the main article, as they are not integral to the flow. The evenn have dates corresponding to the respective time frames of the 2010 and 2012 elections.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 15:01, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
*As some of you are aware, I have volunteered to be the moderator of this page per a request at AN. No one has yet opposed me being moderator so I have accepted the offer. As I settle in as moderator, and getting to know my role, a helping hand at knowing my limits as moderator is appreciated. If anybody objects to me being a moderator, please speak, or write that is, now.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 02:06, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:: ;-) | |||
::But on a serious note, we do appreciate anyone who's willing to help. Hopefully this proves to be a fruitful endeavor for you. ]<u>]</u> 02:16, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::Thank you for joining us, Cyberpower. Would you please review the discussion above, and tell us whether we have consensus for the three proposed edits? ] (]) 04:04, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::Sure. If it's the multisection thread "Getting back to work" give me a few hours to read it through. :-)—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:red;font-family:arnprior">Offline</sub> 11:37, 13 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*Just to let everyone know that I'm still here and that I am sifting through the above discussions and links. It might take me another day or two to reach the end and form a close statement.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 00:01, 15 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
=== Withdrawing my participation @moderated discussion === | |||
=====Vote on Ground game/GOTV===== | |||
Falling by the wayside. No parting shots, just regrets. Perhaps the future will bring about an environment more conducive to progress. Godspeed. ]<u>]</u> 13:50, 14 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support Keeping a Ground game/GOTV section in main article'''. While the ground game is appropriate in the subarticle and should be developed there, it must also remain as a section on the main article. The main article must show the progression of development by the tea party from organizing rallies through social media, to organizing tea party groups that lobbied congress to offering support to candidates who at first were not electable to supporting electable candidates to organizing superpacs to oppose establishment Republicans. It is about the Tea Party movement afterall, and this is what they've been doing. ] (]) 16:50, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Oppose''' The Ground game/GOTV material should be summarized briefly in the section that covers elections on the main article.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 05:10, 2 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
== Amok == | |||
:The point regarding the "Tea Party shifts focus..." material ] is probably the issue on which handling the "Ground game/GOTV" material hinges. If, as the long inline quote comprising essentially the entire first paragraph of that two-paragraph subsection states, "Largely gone are the disorderly rallies", and that is followed by a statement that "the movement has retooled into a loosely organized network of field operations", maybe there is something besides "Ground game/GOTV" being addressed. It sort of sounds like the "shift" away from protests (or, "Tea Parties") is a shift toward advocacy and/or lobbying in "support of legislation". | |||
:Although the section is based on a single long quote from a single news media piece, it begs the question that if there are no more "Tea Parties", what becomes of the "Tea Party" movement per se? | |||
:Here are other quotes from that piece<blockquote>FreedomWorks says that almost 190,000 activists have joined its “FreedomConnector” online network and that it expects fundraising in 2012 to exceed the approximately $21 million it collected last year. Through the end of May, tea-party-associated political action committees had raised almost $18 million.</blockquote> | |||
:<blockquote>Tea Party Patriots, an organization that says it is affiliated with more than 3,500 local tea party groups, reported raising $12 million in donations in 2011 and says it is on track to match or surpass that number this year. Across the country, once-fractious tea party groups are working in concert with state and national Republican parties on key campaigns, especially in critical swing states.</blockquote> | |||
:<blockquote>“We had some success as a movement, but we realized we just didn’t have the knowledge that we needed. How many signatures do you need? Campaign law? How do you qualify?” said Tom Zawistowski, president of Ohio’s Portage County Tea Party. “We went from a protest movement to an activist movement with a structure.”</blockquote> | |||
:<blockquote>The tea party campaign in Indiana, which included more than $600,000 spent by FreedomWorks, visits by volunteers to 125,000 homes and more than 400,000 phone calls, was key to the resounding primary defeat of Lugar, the longtime senator.</blockquote>--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 11:31, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Oppose''' The purpose here is to trim the length of the main article. The GG/GOTV facet of TPm activity deserves to be mentioned in the main article, but it doesn't need its own section. It should be dealt with briefly in the section that covers elections, with a link to a full section of the sub-article where GG/GOTV would be covered thoroughly. ] (]) 14:11, 2 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
The recent sequence of edits on the TPm appear to be essentially ignoring the concept of ] here, and verge on disruption at that article. ] (]) 11:10, 16 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
We ''must'' avoid SYNTH, and only issues which are ''directly related to the TPM'' should be in ''any'' articles. Thus "Candidate X was convicted of bigamy" or the like is related to that particular race, but ''not'' toi the TPM as a movement. Also claims which are ''clearly'' opinion must be cited ''as opinion'' and ascribed to the person holding that opinion which means most of the Ubi suggestion fails, alas. Thus the "Freedomworks" stuff becomes SYNTH all too easily, as do statements about individual "groups" unless we decide that each individual group is also tepresentive of the ''entire'' TPM, which, to my regret, we have not thus far discussed. ] (]) 11:58, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
On the draft article about candidates, I again aver that the percentage for each house as given on the blog is whayt ought to be used - with the exact same arguments as previously presented. ] (]) 12:05, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:Please clarify to which of my suggestions you are referring. The blockquotes above are not my suggestions, incidentally, but quotes from the sole source upon which the abovementioned subsection appears to be based. Would that be what you are referring to as WP:OR/SYNTH? I would say that some of those quotes, especially the one that states, “We went from a protest movement to ''an activist movement with a structure''”(my emphasis) is viable material in discussion the TPm as such, as it is the opinion express opinion of an activist reported in a secondary source. | |||
:I have basically expressed my concurrence above with the notion that election specific scandals and the like should be described on the corresponding subarticle page, perhaps with a mention on the main article if highly notable.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 14:20, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Rather than point out things that are "wrong" I think it is a better use of discussion space to state that the draft presented above by SilkTork was acceptable to me ... trying to deal with something ''not'' on the table as a side discussion is a waste of time here, IMHO. Cheers. ] (]) 14:33, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::When one actually looks at the sources cited and evaluates the text in the article against said source(s), the general outcome has been a mismatch for me, thus far. That is basically the extent to which my comments you characterize as being "side discussions" reach. Anyway, I don't have a problem with the draft, and am happy simply to get that stuff off of the main article page. I do, however, feel that the remaining subsections of the Ground game/GOTV section should go, too. What are they doing there?--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 15:01, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
== Reminder == | |||
It has been brought to my attention that major anti-consensus were being made and reverted, twice. The page has now been fully protected by SilkTork, the previous moderator. As I don't have any admin powers to reverse this, nor do I now see a reason for it to be reversed right now, I am respectfully asking Xenophrenic to be careful in the future, and restrain from editing that article, unless there's a clear consensus claimed for such edits.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:red;font-family:arnprior">Offline</sub> 11:33, 16 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
;Title | |||
:I've made no anti-consensus edits. The recent good faith edits by me, ThinkEnemies, Collect and others, were not first subjected to consensus discussion. I've no problem refraining from editing the main article unless concensus is achieved first. That should apply to all involved editors, of course. The last consensus version is , implemented by our former Moderator, SilkTork. ] (]) 21:35, 20 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:I think that the proposed title is a step in the right direction, but am not sure that using "effect", or even "impact" (which sounds more appropriate to me) quite reflects what the article would cover as a whole. | |||
::<redacted> As we're not allowed to comment on editors here. All I can say is that comment should not be part of any reasoned discussion, because it has little to do with reality. — ] ] 23:27, 20 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:It does seem that things like scandals, which occur during respective election cycles, should be covered under the respective election cycle. I would submit that along the same line of reasoning, the "Ground game/GOV" strategy and activities would also change with each election season, and therefore also belongs in the subarticle, not the main article.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 07:12, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::Still at it? ] (]) 05:44, 21 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
The page has been fully protected and there will evidently be no block for starting an editwar. I propose that we immediately revert the page back to the version that existed before the editwar began. That version may be found . | |||
The working title is ] - a proposed alternative title is ]. I don't wish to insert my views into this, and would rather people discussed themselves what is the most appropriate title, but I do have some reservations regarding ] on two counts: 1) The date range is both restrictive and misleading - what happens after 2014? - and readers may wonder where the other "Tea Party effect on U.S. elections" articles are, given that this one is disambiguated by a specific time range. 2) Using "effect" in the title implies that is the focus of the article, which I don't think it is - it is a record of what happened in the elections with those candidates who are believed to be endorsed or associated with the Tea Party, or one of the Tea Party groups. I am suggesting as a title ] as being neutral, factual, informative, and what sources tend to be using. However, I may be misunderstanding where people wish to take the sub-article. ''']''' ''']''' 20:44, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
* '''Strongly support.''' As so often happens, the page protection took effect with the "wrong" version because people who aren't inclined to editwar didn't want to revert to the "right" version. ] (]) 16:54, 16 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
=====Vote on Title===== | |||
*'''Support''' Without commenting on the changes, the reversion is best way to go from a process standpoint. Contested edits require a group decision. I say "group decision" rather than "consensus" because IMHO the existing text should be just another option in the process. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 16:58, 18 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support''' ] That solves the problem of the date range. ] (]) 02:26, 2 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support''' revert to status quo ante. — ] ] 17:25, 20 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Needs further discussion''' See comment below. The issue of what to include in the article is related to how to title it. I think that the question as to what to include has to be settled before the title can be settled.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 05:14, 2 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Oppose''' an attempt to swap one "Wrong Version" with another "Wrong Version" via !voting. ] (]) 21:35, 20 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Would like further discussion.''' See discussion below. I've taken the liberty of moving this "Title" discussion and vote to the bottom of this section, because apparently the title may take the longest to work out. Titles have a tendency to be chiseled in granite once they get out into the mainspace for a while. Let's see what we can do to improve it. ] (]) 14:11, 2 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
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*'''""''' version. Or alternatively, rather than swap one "Wrong Version" for another "Wrong Version", why not resolve the last remaining concerns about what that content should convey, then implement an actual consensus version? ] (]) 21:35, 20 July 2013 (UTC) | ||
*'''Support''' - With stipulation the ''immigration reform'' position is corrected. ]<u>]</u> 15:37, 21 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::That's a good question. Surely we don't want redundant List articles, so the proposed sub-article would probably be of a higher order than the List article and a lower order than the main article. I think that since we have two in favor of incorporating the GG/GTOV material in the sub-article at this point and are brainstorming a title, some input from Silk Tork on this might be helpful. I suppose that the articles could be merged, but the resulting article would probably be rather unatrattictive and challenging to navigate for a reader looking more for analysis than simple information on a list.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 07:25, 3 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
*Consensus is in favor of reverting to revision.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:red;font-family:arnprior">Offline</sub> 05:52, 24 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
Regarding the draft, I'm fine with it. Regarding the title, I concede taking out the "2010-2014" time bracket. It can be added again in a few years, if this develops into a series of articles spanning a longer period. But I think "Tea Party effect" would be an accurate description. In these elections the Tea Party has had both positive and negative effects for the Republican Party, and therefore has had both negative and positive effects for the Democratic Party. They've challenged establishment Republican Party incumbents in the primaries, forcing them to invest money and other resources just to win the nomination. And in some cases they replaced well-known, professional, moderate candidates with relatively unknown amateurs whose views are out of the mainstream, and incompatible with the people they wish to represent. And they can't seem to get excited about any presidential candidates, unless those candidates are also out of the mainstream and have little chance of winning in November. This has lost some key November races that the Republicans could have won, hurting the Republicans and helping the Democrats. | |||
*'''Comment''' The consensus discussion notwithstanding, admin Arthur Rubin just ] as an involved ''editor'' in this dispute. Having the tools does not grant the right to do what other involved editors cannot do in a content context. ] <span style="color:black"><sup>]</sup></span> 09:45, 24 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
On the other hand, the Tea Party has produced a very real conservative ] that has mobilized millions of people who were previously ambivalent about politics, and now they're marching against Democratic Party leaders and agendas with a full-throated roar and their clenched fists in the air. Many of their favorite candidates are far from amateurish and directly refute any claims of bigotry or "anti-immigration" the moment one looks at their photos, such as ], ], ], ], ], ] and ]. Some are becoming prominent national figures — and possibly very formidable 2016 presidential candidates. These effects are very good for Republicans and very bad for Democrats, as the 2010 results demonstrated. So I think using the term "effect" is appropriate. Speak up if you agree, or if you disagree. ] (]) 21:20, 1 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::I don't consider there to be a dispute. Just editors with differing opinions trying to work this out. And trying to make some rules/processes for ourselves so that this can move forward. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 10:08, 24 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:While no one questions that the TPm has had an effect on elections, including the term ''effect'' term in the title would constrain the scope, just like the date range would. | |||
::::You can call it a dispute or an orange if you feel so inclined but that focuses on a completely non relevant aspect of my sentence. The point is that administrators are not supposed to edit through full protection when they are involved. We have an edit request template for a reason. ] <span style="color:black"><sup>]</sup></span> 10:12, 24 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:I feel that the title proposed by Silk Tork is somewhat insufficient insofar as it tends to resemble a title for a List article. | |||
:::::I asked him to do it as a moderator request.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 12:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:If you want to address more comprehensively than a list what role the TPm has had in elections, you need to move all of the election related material to the article and give it a more comprehensive title. Maybe something like ''"The Tea Party Movement's Influence in US Elections"''. I think that would provide scope for covering the background of TPm participation, the candidates endorsed, and the results as well as both the effect on the Republican party and the overall impact. It should be noted that the references on the Constitution indicate that a conspicuous effect that the TPm has had is that citizens are talking about the constitution more than has been the case in recent history. Does that relate to elections directly?--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 05:10, 2 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::I realize that. I also realize you did so in good faith and that Arthur complied in good faith, which is why I mentioned it here and not at AN. Nevertheless it should not have been done and for the sake of avoiding even the appearance of impropriety I implore you to make liberal (no pun intended) use of the edit request template. ] <span style="color:black"><sup>]</sup></span> 00:17, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:*I must say that I'm starting to like the way you think. Complete agreement with you on GG/GOTV coveragein the main article and for the same reason. SilkTork's title does look like a title for another dreary List article. Unfortunately, the sub-article itself resembles another dreary List article. It needs a little work but that's no reason not to put it out into the mainspace immediately. | |||
:::::::IMHO the moderator is the best one to assess/read the situation. The mop does not make a drop-in person a better one to do so. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 00:20, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:*On the title, I like the word "effect," since the Tea Party is having a very profound effect on U.S. elections in several ways. "Influence" sounds like it's behind the scenes, with a slightly nefarious connotation. Titles have a tendency to be chiseled in granite once they're out in the mainspace for a while, so this part we do have to get right first. Let's try thinking and talking about it for one more day. ] (]) 14:11, 2 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::::I am making a singular point: an involved admin should not edit through full protection. Nothing you're responding with actually addresses this point in the least. Is the moderator the best one to assess/read the situation? Maybe, maybe not. Does the mop make a drop-in-person a better one to do so? Maybe, maybe not. Whether either of those answers falls within the verge of yes/no/maybe/maybe not is ''completely'' irrelevant to the '''very specific''' point that I've made: an involved admin is not permitted to edit through full protection. ] <span style="color:black"><sup>]</sup></span> 09:11, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::Thanks for the vote of confidence, hombre. | |||
Okay. Making liberal use of the edit request template. | |||
:::You are probably right that the title is going to be somewhat difficult, but at least deciding what is going to be in the article facilitates the advancing of the processes to that next step. | |||
:::::::::Noformation is correct. It was wrong of me to ask Arthur to make the edit for me. He was clearly involved, and I have apologized to him for that.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 09:33, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::I don't have any ideas at the moment, but let me just say that the word influence, in its generic sense, encompasses the meaning of effect, and is not necessarily limited to behind the scenes (e.g. influence peddling). One way to look at it is the example of how the TPm has influenced the actions or policy positions taken by Republicans, for example, and then see what effect that has in later stages, such as elections, positions taken by Democrats, etc. | |||
:::Anyway, I would imagine that a better title than the one I suggested will be found, but the above-described usage was what I had in mind with respect to the term "influence".--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 16:33, 2 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
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{{edit protected|Tea Party movement|answered=yes}} SilkTork has reverted Arthur's reversion, indicating that even though the edit was requested by our moderator, it must be executed by an '''''uninvolved''''' admin. The "vote" is 4-1 (everyone except Xenophrenic) in favor of reverting to revision, with the lone opposing "vote" coming from Xenophrenic. The policy based argument is that Xenophrenic edited against consensus. Visiting admins, please make this edit. Thank you. regards .... ] (]) 03:05, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | ||
I am making no comment on the content of the edit, nor on if appropriate consensus has been reached (I've simply glanced at the voting, not read any of the comments), but it is inappropriate for an admin to be making an edit to a fully protected article while they are involved. Arthur Rubin should not have made the edit, and cyberpower should not have asked him to make the edit. What P&W has just done, is the appropriate procedure: ask an independent admin to look into the matter and assess consensus. It's worth reminding everyone that consensus is not always a simple majority vote - especially if a legitimate objection has been raised, and/or if those in majority are in the same camp. The procedure I adopted when moderating is if there was a legitimate objection raised, that the objection would be discussed before taking any further action. Objections should be discussed not ignored. ''']''' ''']''' 08:11, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
===Summary of GG/GOTV=== | |||
:Thanks SilkTork. I did mention that I would make a lot of mistakes in the beginning. But as I make a mistake, I learn from it and get better.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 08:34, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
I think that a single sentence might suffice here, probably preceding the above posted summary of the elections related material. How about something along the lines of this?<blockquote>Aside from rallies, some groups affiliated with the Tea Party movement began to focus on getting out the vote and ground game efforts on behalf of candidates supportive of their agenda starting in the 2010 elections.</blockquote> | |||
::] '''Question:'''<!-- Template:EP --> Hi all. Could some kind soul link to any other discussions where this edit has come up? The voting above doesn't tell me anything about whether people have tried to find a consensus on this issue or how successful any attempts were. However, there is a lot of discussion on this page, and (lazy admin that I am) I don't really feel like reading through all of it to find the relevant bits. I'd appreciate help from those who have followed the proceedings here more closely than I. Best regards — ''''']''''' <sup>]</sup> 09:03, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
That would lead directly into the summary of the 2010 election results.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 05:32, 4 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::To my understanding, problematic editing was going which led to the article being protected a few days back. This above is the only thread to at least link back to the "correct" version of the article while it's protected.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 09:33, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::Hi, Strad. A half-dozen editors had worked to develop an acceptable 'Agenda' section for the ] article, with several competing versions being proposed. An editor prematurely claimed consensus for his preferred version and implemented after some editors expressed support. Other editors contacted the Moderator (SilkTork) and expressed objections to that content being implemented, prompting our Moderator to open ]; note where he reiterates that the Moderator was responsible for declaring consensus unless the edit action was "agreed by all". Unfortunately, SilkTork withdrew as moderator shortly thereafter, leaving the disputed non-consensus version changes in the article and the problem unresolved. Rather than revert or delete the problematic content from the article, I instead proposed a significant rewrite based on proposed content from several versions, and ]. After several days of discussion, editor ThinkEnemies moved some uncontested parts of my proposed text to the main article, and I moved the remainder of the uncontested parts to the main article. Any content to which objections were raised was either deleted (or commented out of view, if discussions were still ongoing). Two and a half days later, Phoenix and Winslow reverted most of the previous edits with this strange edit summary: . That was the beginning of an edit war that resulted in the article being ]. | |||
*VERSION INCORPORATING SUMMARY OF GG/GOTV | |||
:::The above Edit Request appears to me to be an attempt to impose a preferred non-consensus, problematic version on a fully protected article. The most recent "status quo" version would be the one imposed by our Moderator () before any contested edits were made. Since all of the recent versions appear to be the "wrong" version (a fact not disputed by most of the "voters" above), I don't understand this push to have a preferred wrong version implemented unless the intent is to try to keep it implemented. Why not direct this energy toward fixing the content instead? ] (]) 11:28, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
The following includes the above sentence as a preface. | |||
::::Because (A) consensus does not require unanimity, and (B) we will never have unanimity unless everybody else caves in and agrees to allow the "Agenda" section to become, in effect, a second "Organization" section. This version would focus much of the first two paragraphs on the chaotic disorganization of the Tea Party, under the rationale that this chaotic disorganization is the cause of certain agenda inconsistencies between Tea Party groups. The content that was agreed upon, and implemented by me, was supported by a 4-1 "vote" for several hours before I implemented it; and as I explained earlier, there was every reason to expect the final "vote" to to be 6-1. So I made the edit. We had been working on it for weeks non-stop, we'd been through at least 22 different versions of the section, and everybody (with the obvious exception of Xenophrenic, a tower of iron will) was completely exhausted and burned out. | |||
Incidentally, we haven't discussed a title for the section that is to include the summary of material moved to the subarticle. How about the following? | |||
::::As expected, Collect brought the total of "support votes" to five because we had effectively addressed his concerns about readability. But Xenophrenic inexplicably recorded an "oppose vote" even though he was that version's co-author. Snowded came back to the article after an absence of several weeks for an "oppose vote," and ArtifexMayhem appeared out of nowhere, never having edited the article before, for an "oppose vote." | |||
::::However, the '''CURRENT''' consensus clearly recognizes that reverting that edit was out of line, and that it should be restored immediately despite Xenophrenic's objection. Our moderator has recognized this consensus and asked that the version Xenophrenic reverted be restored. Furthermore, in case it wasn't already clear, for those of us who "voted" weeks ago in favor of the version we are now seeking to restore, this is the "right" version. Mr. Stradivarius, please make the edit. ] (]) 12:05, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::Let me see if I correctly understand what you've just written. Between the two proposals, both with five ], you declared "consensus" for your preferred version because some editors voiced their opinions after your "several hour" window between calling for votes and implementing your edit? Well, at least we can agree that the version you tried to implement is not a consensus version, even if you didn't realize that at the time. (A good cautionary tale against rushing things after just a few hours.) My "!vote" in opposition to the problematic version wasn't inexplicable; as I noted in my comment: ''see objections to the problematic content above.'' Your interpretation of '''CURRENT''' consensus fails to recognize the input of the commenting editors. Every editor has a "right" version; what's your aversion to producing a version that is right for Misplaced Pages, instead? By the way, this is the first time you've raised a concern with the first 2 paragraphs of proposed text. Reliable sources make it a point to explain that the desparate TP groups are autonomous and set their own agendas, and reliable sources make it a point to explain the generally "economic" focus of many TP agendas -- therefore, our 'Agenda' section should do the same. Your concern about redundancy with the 'Organization' section is easily remedied by removal of a single sentence from the 'Organization' section. ] (]) 13:42, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
* ] '''Not done:'''<!-- Template:EP --> I'm marking this as not done, as from the above comments it doesn't look like there has been any attempt to address Xenophrenic's concerns. I think SilkTork put it very well when he said "objections should be discussed not ignored", and I don't think the required discussion has happened in this case. — ''''']''''' <sup>]</sup> 04:15, 26 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::There have been continual illicit edits (and reverts) made since the article was first unlocked, and the state of discussion on this page, particularly the dismissal of RS on dubious grounds, makes it a waste of time. | |||
'''The Tea Party movement's involvement in US elections''' | |||
::For the record, the version being pushed by P&W and the same block of editors never came close to achieving consensus even under the premises of the original guidelines (24 hours with at least two votes in support and ''NO'' objections). | |||
::I don't blame Silk Tork for not being able to handle the tremendous burden of moderating this so-called discussion, but it is high time that the Arbcom case brought some resolution and relief to the deplorable state of affairs here.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 10:21, 26 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
{{ex|Aside from rallies, some groups affiliated with the Tea Party movement began to focus on getting out the vote and ground game efforts on behalf of candidates supportive of their agenda starting in the 2010 elections.}} | |||
:::You are not supposed to be bashing other editors on this page. If you feel that it is important to do so, you should move your comments to where responses to such can occur. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 11:36, 26 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::Some of us have gone out of our way to address all stated objections, but progress can't be continually held up due to minor concerns. Now if Ubikwit wants to talk about never coming close to ''"achieving consensus"'' -- Well, they should probably be referred to their own proposals. ]<u>]</u> 13:11, 26 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
== Proposed addition of ] == | |||
{{ex|Various Tea Party groups have ]. In the 2010 midterm elections, ''The New York Times'' identified 138 candidates for Congress with significant Tea Party support, and reported that all of them were running as Republicans—of whom 129 were running for the ] and 9 for the ].<ref>Kate Zernike, ''The New York Times'', October 14, 2010</ref> The ''Wall Street Journal''–NBC News poll in mid October showed 35% of likely voters were Tea-party supporters, and they favored the Republicans by 84% to 10%.<ref>Jonathan Weisman, ''Wall Street Journal, October 20, 2010</ref> The first Tea Party affiliated candidate to be elected into office is believed to be Dean Murray, a ] businessman, who won a special election for a New York State Assembly seat in February 2010.<ref name=Murray/>}} | |||
I propose adding the following (slightly modified) paragraph from the Wikibio of Karl Denninger to the article mainspace, replacing the "Commentaries on origins" subsection in the History section, which should be moved to the "Perceptions" spin-off article: | |||
{{ex|According to statistics on an NBC blog, overall, 32% of the candidates that were backed by the Tea Party or identified themselves as a Tea Party member won election. Tea Party supported candidates won 5 of 10 Senate races (50%) contested, and 40 of 130 House races (31%) contested. <ref>{{cite web |url= http://firstread.nbcnews.com/_news/2010/11/03/5403120-just-32-of-tea-party-candidates-win |title=Just 32% of Tea Party candidates win - First Read |author=Alexandra Moe |work=firstread.nbcnews.com |date=3 Nov 2010 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref> In the primaries for ], ] and ] the Tea-party backed Senate Republican nominees defeated "establishment" Republicans that had been expected to win their respective Senate races, but went on to lose in the general election to their Democrat opponents.<ref>; Gary C. Jacobson; University of California, San Diego; pg. 3</ref>}} | |||
{{ex|Internet pioneer ] was one of the early members of the Tea Party movement, sometimes referred to as a founder.<ref name="LaStampa"/><ref name="RT">{{cite news|url=https://rt.com/usa/news/tea-occupy-denninger-wall-819/|title=Tea Party founder backs Occupy Wall Street|work=]|date=2011-10-14|accessdate=2013-01-05}}</ref> In the aftermath of the March 2008 collapse of ], he founded the website Fed Up USA.<ref name="LaStampa">{{cite news|url=http://tuttoaffari.lastampa.it/_web/cmstp/tmplrubriche/midterm2010/grubrica.asp?ID_blog=321&ID_articolo=7&ID_sezione=711|first=Francesco|last=Semprini|title=Il fondatore del movimento, Karl Denninger, si scaglia contro l'ex governatore dell'Alaska e i Patriots|work=]|date=2010-10-26|accessdate=2013-01-05}}</ref> He came to national attention for the criticisms of the ] which he posted on Fed Up USA in September that year. On January 20, 2009, the day of ], he published a blog post calling on readers to mail tea bags to the White House and Congress, echoing a suggestion by a commenter on one of his earlier blog posts.<ref>{{cite web|url=http://market-ticker.org/akcs-www?singlepost=2137825|first=Karl|last=Denninger|title=February 1st Tea Party?|work=The Market Ticker|date=2009-01-20|accessdate=2013-01-05}}</ref> By February 1, the idea had spread to various ] and ]-oriented blogs, forums, websites and through a ] email campaign.<ref name="huffingtonpost.com">{{cite news|url=http://www.huffingtonpost.com/jane-hamsher/a-teabagger-timeline-koch_b_187312.html |title=Jane Hamsher: A Teabagger Timeline: Koch, Coors, Newt, Dick Armey There From The Start | work=] |date= 16 May 2009|accessdate=2010-04-27}}</ref>}} | |||
{{ex|Tea Party candidates were less successful in the 2012 election, winning four of 16 Senate races contested, and losing approximately 20% of the seats in the House that had been gained in 2010. Tea Party Caucus founder Michele Bachmann was re-elected to the House by a narrow margin.<ref>{{cite web |url= http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2012/11/06/tea-party-election-results_n_2084506.html |title=Tea Party Election Results: Conservative Movement Of 2010 Takes Pounding In 2012 |author=Ian Gray|work=huffingtonpost.com |date= 7 Nov 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref><ref>{{cite web |url= http://abcnews.go.com/blogs/politics/2012/06/tea-party-candidates-losing-steam-in-2012/ |title=Tea Party Candidates Losing Steam in 2012 - ABC News |author=Elizabeth Hartfield|work=abcnews.go.com |date=27 June 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref><ref>{{cite web |url= http://www.businessweek.com/articles/2012-11-07/has-the-tea-party-lost-its-mojo |title=Has the Tea Party Lost Its Mojo? - Businessweek |author=Elizabeth Dwoskin |work=businessweek.com |date= 7 Nov 2012 |accessdate=29 April 2013}}</ref><ref>{{cite web |url= http://www.dailykos.com/story/2012/12/30/1174753/-What-Happened-to-The-Tea-Party-in-the-2012-Election# What Happened to The Tea Party in the 2012 Election? - Daily Kos |author=Dbug |date= 29 Dec 2012</ref>}}--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 13:01, 4 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
Thoughts and comments, please. ] (]) 14:05, 17 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
===Taking stock=== | |||
The trimmed draft has consensus. The sub-article has consensus. There is still ongoing discussion regarding GG/GOTV, though we can deal with that later. What is holding up implementing changes is the proposed title for the sub article. I would rather the material that is being removed and linked was placed in a linkable mainspace article at the same time, and I understand hesitations regarding having a temporary title because temporary titles have a tendency to hang around. A section title has been proposed above, that may also be appropriate for the sub-article: ]. If we can get consensus on this as a title, then we can move forward with the first change, and then tackle the next stage(s). I feel to push this forward we need to get consensus fairly quickly - I would prompt people, but I'm chilling out today on a number of private projects, so if someone would alert the significant contributors to this discussion, that there's a new proposed title, that would be useful. If not, no worries - I'll get round to it at some point over the weekend. But not now, as I already have so many tabs open my browser keeps freezing and threatening to crash! ''']''' ''']''' 15:17, 4 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:That proposed section title / sub-article title is acceptable to me, as it avoids the problems and limitations that come with adding "effects on..." or "influence on...", etc. Suggestion: Should the word (The) be dropped from the beginning of this proposed title when creating the new sub-article, for search functionality concerns? Most readers enter "Tea Party" rather than "The Tea Party" when using Misplaced Pages's ''Search'' function, and the hyper-auto-complete then suggests ...movement; ...protests; etc. This isn't a big issue, but I'm a fan of standardization across related articles. ] (]) 16:50, 4 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:'''support''' good work ''everyone'' helping this article along, well done! ] (]) 17:21, 4 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:This material looks good and useful. The "commentaries on origin" section is really distorted, but I'm not so sure about totally eliminating / replacing it. Perhaps shrink the existing section to a single sentence on each of the listed items and keep the revised one in addition to putting this one in. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 14:16, 17 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support''' Xeno is right — dropping the word "The" at the start of the proposed title is appropriate. Very few articles (with the exception of book titles and such) start with the word "the" — it's usually dropped along with words like "a" or "an". The word "movement" also seems unnecessary as the nature of the group ("movement," not unified party, slightly organized mob, whatever) is dealt with elsewhere. But the part that says "involvement in US elections" is correct. It's just got a lot of characters. It's like headline writing for a newspaper. The word "involvement" is perfect here; but because it's so long, the rest of the title needs to be kept short. I think we can remove "movement," would like to discuss it, and I'm certain we can remove "the". Finally, it appears that Misplaced Pages style requires periods in "U.S." so let's do that as well. | |||
:I'm also chiming in on the '''Good work everyone.''' Cooperation and collegial work is improving. I started the (discontinued) Talk page for ] with such a commendation, and repeat it here. I know we are a lot closer to a stable, long-range solution for this family of articles, and trust is growing. Let's consider ], agree on a title, get that article out on the mainspace, and start trimming the main article this afternoon. regards .... ] (]) 17:40, 4 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:*'''OK by me''' Concise titles are generally a good thing, and uniformity between titles of related articles is probably standard practice. Should there be some slight variation between the title of the Sub-article and the title of the corresponding section in the main article?--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 18:10, 4 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Question:''' What exactly is to be the title of this subarticle? It's not at all clear to me. Is it to be the title voted on earlier, or is "Tea Party involvement in U.S. elections" to be the title? ] (]) 19:14, 4 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Oppose for now''' See comment below. ] (]) | |||
::The whole paragraph should be moved to "Perceptions of the Tea Party movement" spin-off article. ] tells us that this article should summarize what the spin-off articles say. Perhaps a few words to summarize this paragraph, such as "Critics have raised questions about the origins of the movement," should be added to the summary in the "Perceptions of the Tea Party" section. ] (]) 15:20, 18 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::'''Comment''': Sorry for not understanding the question, I got the message from Ubikwit on my iPhone and didn't want to search threads. Thank you, Ubikwit for the message. Two problems I see with the proposed title above: 1) the phrase 'Tea Party movement' isn't on the tip of people's tongues. In general, it's referred to as The Tea Party, though I agree with Xenophrenic that "the" should be dropped. And 2) The Tea Party isn't "involved" in U.S. elections per se. The tea parties do not field candidates, and the groups as organizations do not give candidates money. Their IRS tax status doesn't allow that. This is why Tea Party Patriots had to create a very separate group when they wanted a SuperPac. | |||
:::Sorry, I didn't mean to complicate / snarl things with my suggestion. The Ron Paul and Koch item as written look appropriate. The tobacco thing is way overblown but a brief sentence worded like the Koch item could be appropriate as a compromise. Overall, we should just keep moving. Perfection is the enemy of improvement. The original proposal is also OK with me. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 20:01, 18 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::The tea parties in general endorse candidates and get out the vote which are activities allowed by the IRS. Saying "involvement," however, brings up a whole different impression, like saying, "Alleged U.S. involvement in elections in (pick name of third world country)." It sounds like they are causing interference, which is something Karl Rove has said they're doing. But for Misplaced Pages, I think it's better to say exactly what they are doing which is endorsing candidates and supporting elected officials who agree with their agenda(s). Maybe something like ] or ]. Don't want to be the monkey in the wrench here, but let's get the language right. I'm mostly on my phone and not my laptop for the next several days, but if someone will just message my talk page, I'll see it on my phone. Thanks. ] (]) 20:20, 4 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::You're welcome Malke. There are a couple of points. First, using "endorse" would probably not sound to the average reader like it included the "get out the vote and ground game" activities. Secondly, I think that the usual meaning of "involvement" does not mean "participation" in the same sense as that of a political party, but can be taken to mean any activities undertaken in relation to elections, with a broader connotation. As far as the IRS is concerned, I don't think that the PAC issues are being discussed in this sub-article, but might fall under ground game if those are activities being funded, and that would still be encompassed by "involved", whereas "endorse" seems more narrow. | |||
::::Anyway, the title is important, so it should be discussed thoroughly to ensure that it accommodates everything that is going to be in the article and doesn't give the wrong impression, etc. At least we have reached the stage where only the title remains to be decided at this point.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 20:52, 4 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:Looks good to me; throw it in.--] (]) 05:39, 20 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Welcome to the party, pal. Yeah, it ought to look good to you, because you wrote it. I picked it up, refcites and all, from the ] bio you've been writing. The first four words, and a few other minor changes, were necessary to introduce Mr. Denninger into this environment. | |||
{{Edit protected|Tea Party movement|answered=yes}} | |||
To move this forward, I am proposing to action the trimming, and to create the sub-article in the next 24 hours under the working title of ]. It's a minimal title, not designed to be the final one, but it provides the key words of "Tea party" and "U.S. elections", so readers know what it is about, and is easy to find, and there's nothing in there to take issue with at this stage. Once the article is up and live, you folks can have a separate debate about the title in a formal ] discussion, with an independent admin to decide the matter. I will leave that sub-article unlocked, and it will be interesting to see how editing evolves there. I have been encouraged with the discussion here, where people are able to express disagreements without getting heated or making personal remarks. I hope that continues on the new article. After I have actioned the agreed trimming and created the new article, we'll move on to the next stage of the trimming. ''']''' ''']''' 20:55, 4 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:That sounds like a good plan for the next step. Get the subarticle out into the mainspace and put a minimalist working title on it. Regarding ] ... I'm not sure the discussion on the permanent subarticle title needs to be that controlled. We are getting along and moving toward a solution. But that's cool. regards ... ] (]) 21:45, 4 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''support'''--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 03:41, 5 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''support''' though I find "actioned" as a verb to be a tad unusual <g> ] (]) 13:12, 5 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support''' ] (]) 17:18, 5 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
::The subsection "Commentaries on origin" should be removed, and replaced with the above paragraph in green about Karl Denninger. I think the new subsection header should be "Fed Up USA," the name of his blog where he first started talking about mailing tea bags to congressmen. Also, "Critics have raised questions about the origins of the movement," should be added to the summary in the "Perceptions of the Tea Party" section. — ] (]) 15:50, 20 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::*'''Oppose''' removing "Commentaries on origin" content. I agree with North8000 that there is usable information presently in that section, although it could use some improvement. I don't have a problem with Denninger and FedUpUSA being mentioned in relation to the origins of the movement, but that shouldn't be used as an excuse to remove other material under discussion. ] (]) 16:08, 20 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
I've actioned the edit and created the new article ]. Yes Collect, "actioned" can be a bit jarring when you first encounter it, but as I've been part of management business meetings and committees for a few years now, I'm quite accustomed to it. ''']''' ''']''' 18:37, 5 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::I would never argue to exclude the conspiratorial ''commentary'' on the Tea Party movement. But we should try building an ''origin'' section first. We can add new details on the emergence of social media behind the movement, the catalyst, as they say. ]<u>]</u> 19:57, 20 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::Building an 'Origins' section is an excellent idea. The Santelli rant is commonly cited as marking the "start" of the movement, but that is just because it had the benefit of being a cable news incident followed by a viral YouTube presence. There was certainly popular angst in the weeks before that, as evidenced by Trevor Leach, Keli Carender, Karl Denninger, and some stuff on Smart Girl Politics blogs, the TCOT Twitter gang, etc. We could replace the "Commentaries on origins" header with "Origins", and clean it up a bit. ] (]) 21:35, 20 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::I don't want any trouble. We get that certain perspectives are dangerous. I'll pass this along anyways: http://www.lse.ac.uk/media@lse/research/mediaWorkingPapers/MScDissertationSeries/2012/81.pdf ]<u>]</u> 22:02, 20 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Interesting read. Is that in support of proposed or existing article content? (I assume we are still discussing Origins, and social media's part in TP movement development.) ] (]) 05:44, 21 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Interesting, I figured you wanted to push a crazy-man tobacco conspiracy. This is good news. The nutter is gone from your butter. ]<u>]</u> 06:11, 21 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::I'm not catching your references here. Could you speak plainly please? ] (]) 14:43, 21 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::I got a notification that you've reverted me. How cool is that? Moving on, I'm not about to edit war over your selective ''de-archiving''. Enjoy! ]<u>]</u> 15:34, 21 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::Yeah, I'm liking the new notification tweaks the developers installed. Thanks for not edit warring; the archiving of ongoing discussions that are less than 72 hours old gave me pause, but I'm not going to waste time speculating as to intentions. Want to help build an Origins section? ] (]) 16:07, 21 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
* I've marked the edit request as answered for now. Although the suggestion has mostly been favourably received, I think there should be a bit more discussion about ways that it could be adjusted to satisfy Xenophrenic's objections. If this was a case of choosing a straight yes or no, I would go for "yes", but I think that there is probably a middle way that we can take here. Best — ''''']''''' <sup>]</sup> 12:50, 24 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:The elections material has indeed been removed from the main article, but the GG/GOTV section is still there, and the elections summary section appears to be missing. Are those aspects of the edit still pending?--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 19:02, 5 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Agreed. I got the impression that we had achieved consensus on the content of the elections summary section. See the end of the preceding Talk page section on "Trimming." For Collect's benefit, I can confirm that the use of "action" as a verb is acceptable in some circles of business management and higher education administration. The language is constantly evolving, and music lyrics isn't the only edge of its evolution. ] (]) 19:41, 5 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::The above edit request can be split into two parts. If editors are itching to add something to the article, some of the above proposed Denninger text can be added now, probably immediately before or after (chronologically) the Trevor Leach material. I'd leave off the last proposed sentence, as it is not supported by the cited source. I'm working on content for an 'Origins' section that covers the Jan-Feb 2009 infancy of the movement that may eventually incorporate part of that Denninger material. The second part of the edit request (removal/relocation of the 'Commentaries on origins' content) should instead be refocused on rewriting it as a brief and factual (less the commentary and opinion) 'Origins' section. ] (]) 12:28, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::I don't see a consensus on removing/summarising the Ground game/GOTV material in the main article. I see two in favour, and one opposed. I feel we need to finish that off before moving to the next discussion. ''']''' ''']''' 21:54, 5 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
== direction of this project == | |||
===Ground game/GOTV=== | |||
How should the Ground game/GOTV material be dealt with? ''']''' ''']''' 21:54, 5 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
# Move to ] and summarise in main article as {{ex|Aside from rallies, some groups affiliated with the Tea Party movement began to focus on getting out the vote and ground game efforts on behalf of candidates supportive of their agenda starting in the 2010 elections.}} | |||
# Move to ] and summarise in main article in own section in wording yet to be decided. | |||
# Other. | |||
I've been away on holiday and have not been able to comment, but today I discovered the TPm page has been locked. This is very disconcerting considering all the work editors have put into this discussion here. After looking over the edits on the article, it's apparent that things are not heading in a productive direction at all. I'm not placing blame on anyone, but it's time to stop and reassess this and sort some goals. I'm also disheartened that nobody seems cognizant of the ArbCom case that is pending. The whole point of this moderated discussion was to sort the problems with the editors and the article goals, not make things worse. I'd really like to hear from editors on what they believe really matters here. And Cyberpower, it's enormously kind of you to take on the role of moderator, but since you've don't have admin powers, it might be best if you reconsider things. You'll be called upon to discipline editors for breaching the rules and without admin powers, that won't be possible. It's an enormous burden to begin with, and it absolutely requires an admin. It's obvious to me that the page needed to be locked which SilkTork rightly did. ] (]) 16:53, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::My suggestion: Number 1 above, but also move the elections summary (version dated 13:01 4 May) into the main article, too. The GOTV summary sentence can be appended to it. In the new ''Tea Party in U.S. elections'' sub-article, we can integrate the GOTV material properly into the various date sections. ] (]) 23:03, 5 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:You are right. I have been seriously considering withdrawing as moderator. The mere fact that I'm not an admin, is challenge on its own level.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 18:09, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support 1, basically as per Xeno''' but the GG/GOTV summary seems best as a prefacing statement leading into the main article summary of the elections section, as per the final version of the draft proposed above referred to by Xeno (version dated 13:01 4 May). | |||
::It does make things harder for you. You are very brave to take this on, and your comments are measured and patient which is a huge bonus here. Having the tools, and the threat of them, would make things so much easier for you. ] (]) 18:37, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:Apparently I had the wrong impression that the whole point of going through the process of agreeing on the '''draft''' was primarily focused on the summary <blockquote>of what could be left behind in the main article</blockquote>with the draft of the subarticle almost an afterthought. It doesn't seem to make any sense at all that we have gone through '''seven versions''' since of the draft of the main article summary of the elections sections over a period of seven days. I was under the impression that posting of the main article summary would have occurred simultaneously with the actioning of the edit removing the election sections from the main article.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 01:47, 6 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::I don't threaten. I'm actually quite patient.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 18:54, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support 1.''' Let's make it official and move on. ] (]) 07:00, 6 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::I don't mean you would actually need to threaten. I meant the idea that the tools can be used at any time is often enough to stay an editor from going down the wrong path. I did notice that you are very patient. That's an asset, to be sure. ] (]) 18:58, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::Cyber's head and heart are both in the right place. Unfortunately he needs to be able to ask an admin to perform admin tasks, and the admin needs to be able to accept his judgment and take action immediately, since we've accepted him as our moderator. We have a crowd of people here, all but one of whom are in agreement at this point, but one tendentious editor is still able to stop all our work in its tracks. Changes need to be made. I don't think we need a new moderator. I think we need to give the moderator the on-call admin support that he needs. This is what we need to help our moderator be effective. ] (]) 19:44, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Support''' the change, '''object''' to the choice of section to work on. This article is full of trivia, constructions from primary sources etc. and other problematic material, and we have just been working on the long-but-enclyclopedic sections. <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 12:38 6 May 2013</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> | |||
When are we going to start on the trivia? (the gas grille, the twitter tweet etc) <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 22:38, 5 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::(edit conflict) | |||
:Fire up the chainsaw. As far as I'm concerned, all of the trivia and most of the alleged incidents of bigotry can be chopped, or very briefly summarized. Compared to most other political movements, TPm has been extremely well-behaved. I compared them to the ] at one point, which has been the venue of a large number of very serious, violent crimes such as sexual assault and the stabbing of a police officer. Compared to this, the rude remarks and insensitive signage of a few Tea Party people are eminently non-notable, and have most likely been added by people who are trying to smear TPm, rather than write an objective, NPOV article. Let's remember both NPOV and summary style, and get rid of the trivia and what I would call "Daily Kos cruft." ] (]) 07:00, 6 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::@Cyberpower: Please don't do anything rash - I think your lack of Admin tools is a minor technicality that can be easily remedied by enlisting the aid of a willing Administrator who would perform the Admin actions only at your direction and request. You would still be responsible for all of the dispute resolution, final decision making and moderating. It's something to consider, at least. I say this for a reason. Do you realize that you are the only editor to respond to the request for a moderator after many days on the noticeboard? Do you realize the previous moderator visited the Talk pages of a half-dozen established content editors and requested their help, and they all declined (except one, who stuck his toes in the water, made a handful of minor copy-edits, and hasn't been seen since)? Malke is correct that having Admin tools would be more convenient, but I'm not sure she realizes just how difficult (if not impossible at this point) it would be to find another moderator. | |||
:Wow, things have really slowed down to a crawl around here. ] (]) 03:19, 7 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::@Malke: I hope you had a great time on holiday! You asked to hear from editors what matters here? I really think that differs from editor to editor. Of course everyone will say they want to see article improvement; the generic answer. It has become evident, however, that "improvement" means different things to different editors. The disagreements between editors seem to boil down to whether article content is flattering or non-flattering to the article subject. For me, since I have no personal experience with the subject matter, I must go with what the reliable sources say. Other editors, however, seem to have insider knowledge that I lack - I'm learning, for instance, that seemingly reliable sources, from journalists to academics, are actually not reliable at all. They are secretly "opponents" of the movement, and have an agenda to undermine the movement by claiming unflattering things about them. Or so I've been told. Another thing that matters very much to some editors here, and this is becoming increasingly evident, is what can be done to editors rather than articles. You will find them calling for all manner of bans, blocks and other sanctions against those with whom they have content disagreements. They are easy to spot, lodging carefully worded complaints at Admin noticeboards, ArbComs, RfCs, Talk pages of admins, etc. ] (]) 19:49, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::@P&W: Interesting; you and I agree 100% in our advice to Cyberpower. We also agree on your other observation: there is indeed a crowd of people here that are always in agreement with each other, regardless. Then there's me, who chooses instead to agree with reliable sources, and I do so solo lately since most other editors who do the same have been driven off. Your "tendentious editor" attack has been noted. ] (]) 19:55, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
I think I've supported 90% of the last 15 proposals (all with the caveat the we understand that they aren't perfect and can and will get changes.) and none of them have been implemented. We need to get some that are 90% good put in with the caveat/understanding that they will need to be further evolved after we put them in. Also, let's agree that the status quo is to be treated as just another option. That way people have less to fear that an imperfect change will get entrenched if it's put in. Let's get this baby moving! Sincerely,, <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 21:20, 25 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
== Notice to Everyone == | |||
I would like to remind everyone that discussions outside of this page will not be moderated or controlled and the civility cannot be enforced. Also, more input on the proposals would be appreciated.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 18:08, 29 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
== Stepping Down == | |||
I appreciate that many of you would like to keep as moderator. It was a strong incentive to remain one. However, numerous reasons came up as to why I should step down. First and foremost, when I accepted moderator-ship of this page, it never occurred to me how overwhelming moderating this page for me. I'm afraid I'll burn myself out too quickly and make major mistakes. The current ArbCom case seems to be in favor of topic banning everyone involved for 6 months. There won't be anything to moderate when it passes. On the topic of ArbCom, since I can technically be seen as an involved party, it may come to pass to topic ban me too. In any event resignation would be a preferable option than to face a topic ban. I really feel this should be left to a much more experienced editor to moderate. I thought I could give it a try at least. It was a pleasure to be the moderator of this page, no matter what went on. I hope ArbCom settles this dispute in a fashion that most can agree on.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 09:16, 1 August 2013 (UTC) | |||
:Well said. It's a travesty what's currently happening at ArbCom and your concerns are completely valid. Possibly under less-chilling circumstances we all could've collaborated and actually improved TPM (which is really in sad shape). I'm desperately attempting to re-gain faith in this project. Regrettably, it seems the powers that be are still running interference for truly bad, albeit active elements around here who dissuade and burnout our more well-intentioned contributors. Sad to see this vicious cycle repeating itself. SMH. ]<u>]</u> 12:35, 1 August 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Thanks for stopping by, and we appreciate your contribution. The motion proposed at ArbCom is perplexing to say the least. It's far from impossible to spot the worst offenders on this page — the ones who, either single-handedly or as a very small group, are being allowed and even enabled to obstruct any further progress on the article at all. This is being allowed to happen no matter how bad their track records have been proven to be, and no matter how well-stated and numerous the policy-based arguments might be against them. It's very frustrating. But the willingness of a moderator to step in here at a difficult time, and at least attempt to keep things moving in the right direction, was one of the bright spots. ] (]) 23:16, 3 August 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::Cyberpower, thanks for what you did and we wish you would stay. More fallout from the fact that Arbcom case was sent off on a tangent from the start and has never recovered. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 16:44, 4 August 2013 (UTC) | |||
== Re: ] == | |||
The suddenly fashionable ] approach to Misplaced Pages editing has taken me by surprise and I'm not sure it's appropriate. Binksternet and Ubikwit are encouraged to discuss their concerns here regarding alleged NPOV problems, any proposed changes to the lede sentence, the allegation that the article is a ], etc. Please stop flinging around templates hoping that one of them will stick. For example, the NPOV template that was posted there claims that "relevant discussion can be found on the Talk page." There is no discussion at all on that Talk page concerning your NPOV allegation, so don't post the template until you've expressed your concern in the proper venue. After your concerns have been properly expressed, rather than just driving up and spraying your rhetorical bullets around, a proper response can be posted, and we'll see whether you can gather consensus for your proposed changes. ] (]) 16:10, 6 August 2013 (UTC) | |||
It's a shame that the entire other side in the content dispute has chosen not to participate in the moderated discussion. I'm sure that a new moderator can be found, and would like to proceed. ] (]) 17:28, 7 August 2013 (UTC) | |||
==The term "teabagger"== | |||
I've commented at the main article talk page, but will now repeat here. I can't recall having been involved in this article until right now, and would like to point out an error. The following sentence in the article is unsourced, it has two separate Misplaced Pages tags on it, and it is erroneous: | |||
<blockquote><nowiki>The term '']'' was initially used to refer to Tea Partiers after conservatives{{who|date=September 2013}} used ''tea bag'' as a verb on protest signs and websites.{{cn|date=September 2013}}</nowiki></blockquote> | |||
According to the article by Alex Koppelman that's already in the footnotes: | |||
I'd like to see Malke's comment addressed, or sufficient consensus to judge that concern as minority before taking an action here, so I'd like to leave this discussion open a bit longer. Meanwhile, as per comments above on trivia, I'll open a new discussion looking into what can be agreed is trivia, and so removed from the article without being placed in a sub-article. 08:32, 8 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:I don't think that there is anything of merit to address in Malke's comment, and it is the second time she has proposed without receiving any support in this discussion except from you, SilkTork. Let me also point out that the ground rules you laid out with respect to the time frame (24 hours) for such discussion have been exceeded, as Xenophrenic's first vote in support of moving the material after your request was made on 23:03, 5 May 2013 (UTC), and Malke's only contrary vote was made on 17:55, 7 May 2013 (UTC). | |||
:Perhaps I should mention that P&W also pointed out the delay. being busy with other matters with one thing, but providing indirect support for a twice failed proposal in this discussion seems to me quite another matter. | |||
:Therefore, I request that you reverse your decision and action the agreed upon changes by the majority of participants of this discussion as per the original terms.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 09:27, 8 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
<blockquote>hen used as a verb, the words “tea bag” and “teabagging” have nothing to do with a hot, soothing drink....I’ve traced the meme’s birth back to February 27th, when blogs like Instaputz and Wonkette started using it independently of one another. They were inspired by a photo that the Washington Independent’s David Weigel shot of one protester carrying a sign that was, if you knew that second meaning, pretty funny: “Tea bag the liberal Dems before they tea bag you !!” (sic).</blockquote> | |||
::Getting out the vote a major move forward for the tea party. They started out with rallies, then formed tea party groups and lobbied congress. Then they supported candidates, disastrously at first, without any savvy like the established parties have. They have the ability to self-correct. GOTV shows how they've matured as a movement. Silk Tork has sorted the choices well. He clearly understands the issues. If no one else agrees, I will certainly go along with the majority, but I think the progressive changes, like GOTV, deserve their own sections and bears a second look. ] (]) 15:48, 8 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
Those first uses on websites were not by conservatives at all, so the unsourced sentence in the Misplaced Pages article is false. And the origin seems to have been a single protest sign, not a plurality of them. Surely we can make this article a fine upstanding place to visit, instead of, um, a fleabag. Any objection if I take a crack at it?] (]) 02:21, 28 September 2013 (UTC) | |||
==Trivia material== | |||
::Here's a specific proposal: "In February 2009, a conservative protester was photographed with a sign using the words 'tea bag' as a verb, which swiftly led to left-leaning websites like Wonkette introducing 'teabagger' as a term for Tea Partiers." Cite: Koppelman.] (]) 18:14, 28 September 2013 (UTC) | |||
What material in the article can be agreed is unimportant, unencyclopaedic, unhelpful and/or distracting, and so can be proposed to be removed from the article completely without being placed in a sub-article? ''']''' ''']''' 08:32, 8 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:i doubt it will be agreed, but i think we should remove all racist, homophobic, and religious slurs as undue. ] (]) 09:22, 8 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
::I think that the overall narrative flow of the article has to be established before you can decide what can be considered to be irrelevant trivia, because insofar as "trivia" is being used to designate material deemed peripheral to the balanced presentation of all views presented in RS. For example, one-off remarks by random activists may indeed be insignificant, but on the other hand, if they relate to the development of a more formal stance in relation to an issue, then it may be the case that such a remark should be presented as the cause that sparked debate within the movement that resulted in the current position, etc. | |||
::If much of what is of concern relates to statements about race, religion, etc., perhaps people should figure out where to address questions related to immigration and xenophobia (as addressed in academic sources), and plot a temporal trajectory from early statements through to present stances related to immigration reform, and evaluate what is appropriate to that narrative and what isn't.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 10:03, 8 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::What you just described / defended is ], editors selecting and collecting trivia to create a particular desired impression. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 12:13, 8 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::I don't think I said anything of the sort. I pointed out was that according to NPOV and WP:DUE, the article is supposed to reflect all points of view expressed in reliable sources according to their weight. Accordingly, if something has weight within any meaningful narrative thread found in RS, then it should not be treated as insignificant trivia. Therefore, I suggested framing the significant narrative threads of the article first before haphazardly looking to remove material, as there may be cases where there would be no solid grounds for arguing whether something has weight or is insignificant otherwise. Granted, there may be isolated pieces of information that might be seen as insignificant before going through that process, but I would imagine there will be contentious cases. | |||
:::And your wording would be backed up by what citations? Koppelman doesn't back this up and conflicts with other sources.] (]) 00:00, 29 September 2013 (UTC) | |||
:Anecdotal material in general is of trivial significance. "George Gnarph, a TPM member, killed his wife" and that ilk do ''not'' belong in the article on the ''movement''. Additionally assertions about "subsets" of the movement or small groups within subsets of the movement are not of encyclopedia value, even if the "world's foremost authority" wrote about it - this is about a ''general'' group, and it is unfair to the members thereof to ascribe ''specific pejorative attributes'' to it as a result of someone saying some members may have those attributes. In an article on the Republican party, it would be wrong to incluse "some Republicans are polygamists" for sure, and similar logic should apply here as to pejorative assertions which are not applied to the movement in general. Encyclopedia articles are not collections of anecdotes, and assertions by third parties of pejorative material. They are not even "naratives" as that opens a large can of worms - they are intended to represent fairly and in a neutral manner the ''facts'' about a topic, and nothing else - and most especially they are not supposed to tell the "truth" or "right great wrongs" or to "make sure people know the "right" material about a person or group. Once we get there, we can actually make genuine good articles. And again, I feel ] is a good place to start. ] (]) 12:18, 8 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::Please feel free to rephrase the proposed sentence, or to say specifically what you think is unsupported by Koppelman. I already quoted the pertinent part of Koppelman above. Koppelman seems to have investigated the matter in greatest depth, and so treatments that are obviously more cursory should probably not necessarily be given equal weight with Koppelman. What I mainly tried to do is take the Koppelman info and present it chronologically. Are you saying that you think the current text in the article is fine?] (]) 00:58, 29 September 2013 (UTC) | |||
::If enough material is interrelated enough to define a topic, then it is not anecdotal, and is amenable to be described in terms of the topic, which in turn develops over time with respect to the movement; that is to say, you wind up with something like a narrative, or a group of sub-narratives each of which relates to a different aspect discussed in RS. | |||
::If you want to avoid a haphazard collection of anecdotes then you need a better structure. | |||
::Remember, the Tea Party is a movement that is tending toward greater consistency across groups that were more disparate at the beginning. Incidents related to xenophobia and immigration have contributed to that, and at present this is being addressed with respect to immigration reform, for example. You only need so many examples of a certain sort of behavior, such as racial slurs, to make the point that there was a juncture at which that issue was addressed, and resolved by the adoption of "this (hypothetical) stance", for example, if you have an integrated approach.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 13:52, 8 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::First of all, you took one of many sources and added your own interpretation/twist to it. Further, re. "''cursory treatments''" , "TheWeek.com" source as an example dosn't seem to fit your label at all. Is the present text accurate? Yes it is or very, very close. At least closer to sources presented than what you're proposing. You don't get to decide how much weight each RS receives, you sure understand that. Can the text in question be improved? Sure, there is always space to improve content, just not by twisting it in a different direction contrary to sources. Give it another try and I might go for it.] (]) 01:39, 29 September 2013 (UTC) | |||
First to --]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 13:52, 8 May 2013 (UTC)go should be the part about the gas grille, and the twitter comment by the low level TP'er. After that the "somebody said that somebody in the crowd said something racist" section. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 12:15, 8 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
(Outdent) For the time being, I will continue to assume that you're editing in good faith, TMKC, and that (like me) you are not trying to twist anything. You cite one source to assert that the current text in the Wikipedua article is much better than what I have proposed. Let's look at what that source (TheWeek.com) says about February 2009: | |||
:Are you talking about the guy Thomas referred to ? It seems that RS talk about people like him (as the founder of a TP group in Ohio), and that his actions have disturbed enough people within the TPm to have repercussions throughout.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 13:52, 8 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
<blockquote>Feb. 27, 2009. At the first anti-stimulus "New American Tea Party" rally in Washington D.C., a protestor carries a sign reading "Tea Bag the Liberal Dems before they Tea Bag You!!" The Washington Independent's David Weigel calls it "the best sign I saw."</blockquote> | |||
::Are you asserting that the "fact" is relevant to the topic of the tea party movement ''in general''? If it is ''not'' related to the topic of the article then it is entitled to zero weight at all. The word ''germane'' comes to mind -- and a lot of the "trivia" is simply not ] to the actual topic of the article. Your position appears to be that if a TPM demonstrator were found to owe alimony, that it could be used simply because ''someone'' reported it ''somewhere.'' That is ''not'' the case, and may be part of the overall problem regarding this article. ] (]) 15:41, 8 May 2013 (UTC) | |||
This excerpt is much more cursory than the discussion in the Koppelman article, which identifies further uses on Feb. 27, 2009 by blogs Instaputz and Wonkette. TheWeek.com does not contradict Koppelman, and instead simply skips along to March 2009. I don't see any ambiguity about the fact that the piece in TheWeek is much more cursory about the events of February 2009 than Koppelman. I would also like to request that you please tone down your accusations, and try to assume good faith. Thanks.] (]) 02:06, 29 September 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::That's not exactly what I'm saying. In terms of the level of "facts", I would say that you have two levels. The first would be facts recognized at a first level in analysis, particularly that found in academic sources, such as immigration as a category, for example. The you would have facts that relate to the category at the second level, where immigration as addressed within the Tea Party and reported in news media, etc, is what is relevant. | |||
::I have started a survey at the ].] (]) 16:55, 30 September 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::So what I was implying is that you don't need to list every fact at the second level to demonstrate a point at the first level. Therefore there is probably some redundant material that could be eliminated if the facts at the metalevel were framed and defined along the lines of a narrative tracing the development of TPm position and the like over the past several years in relation to various incidents. |
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The phrase "one somewhat personified by Ron Paul and the other by Sarah Palin. "Paulites" have a Jeffersonian, "neo-isolationist" approach" which says or implies that Ron Paul, (the person who wants free trade with Cuba) is an isolationist. This says or implies that a living person has a belief/agenda that is opposite to his actual belief/agenda. An erroneous word in a source is certainly not enough to place/repeat the false statement/implication (particularly about a living person) in Misplaced Pages. Also, although the source used the word/said it, there is no requirement that everything that every source says and every word used (right or wrong) must get put into the article. The proposal is to reword (or delete the whole sentence if necessary) to remove any statement/implication that Ron Paul is a (neo)isolationist. North8000 (talk) 14:39, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
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I am not comfortable that in less than 48 hours of the article being unlocked there have been such poor examples of editing. I don't wish to put a chill effect on this article. But I do want to send out the message that if your editing skills and judgement are not up to the job you should not edit this article. If your contributions to this article are more negative than positive, then you need to either stay away voluntarily, or you will be forced to stay away. In just over two weeks ArbCom will reconvene to decide what is to happen regarding this article and those editors involved in editing it. I really want this article to be in good shape and making progress. If that means cutting out some editors along the way, then so be it. Time is running out. Let's get some quality editing done please. No more reverting. No more making assumptions. No more "bold" edits that remove sourced content. No more making political statements. If you are more interested in grandstanding your political views, then this article is not for you. There is some serious encyclopaedic work that needs to be done in the next two weeks. I'd like to see folks focus on that. SilkTork 16:50, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
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That was totally uncalled for! It was a gnome edit, the edit summary asked anybody who disagreed to revert me'. Where is the controversy? Who is going to argue that a TPM agenda item is to prevent the states from being allowed to pick their Senators by an election? And I don't even see that rule that you are describing anywhere. Where is it? You are going to turn this article into a fifth rail that nobody is going to want to risk working on. North8000 (talk) 01:16, 15 June 2013 (UTC) |
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The Tea Party doesn't have a single uniform agenda. The decentralized character of the Tea Party, with its lack of formal structure or hierarchy, allows each autonomous group to set its own priorities and goals. Goals may conflict, and priorities will often differ between groups. Many Tea Party organizers see this as a strength rather than a weakness, as decentralization has helped to immunize the Tea Party against co-opting by outside entities and corruption from within.
The Tea Party has generally sought to avoid placing too much emphasis on traditional conservative social issues. National Tea Party organizations, such as the Tea Party Patriots and FreedomWorks, have expressed concern that engaging in social issues would be divisive. Instead, they have sought to have activists focus their efforts away from social issues and focus on economic and limited government issues. Still, many groups like Glenn Beck's 9/12 Tea Parties, TeaParty.org, the Iowa Tea Party and Delaware Patriot Organizations do act on social issues such as abortion, gun control, prayer in schools, and illegal immigration.
The Tea Party generally focuses on government reform. Among its goals are limiting the size of the federal government, reducing government spending, lowering the national debt and opposing tax increases. To this end, Tea Party groups have protested TARP, stimulus programs, cap and trade, health care reform and perceived attacks by the federal government on their 1st, 2nd, 4th and 10th Amendment rights. Tea Party groups have also voiced support for right to work legislation as well as tighter border security, and opposed amnesty for illegal immigrants. They have formed Super PACs to support candidates sympathetic to their goals and have opposed what they call the "Republican establishment" candidates. After setbacks in the 2012 elections, the movement again shifted its focus. With repeal off the table, the Tea party now leads efforts to nullify federal health care law. It has also mobilized locally against the United Nations Agenda 21. They have protested the IRS for controversial treatment of groups with "tea party" in their names.
Even though the groups have a wide range of different goals, the Tea Party places the Constitution at the center of its reform agenda. It urges the return of government as intended by the Founding Fathers. It also seeks to teach its view of the Constitution and other founding documents. Scholars have described its interpretation variously as originalist, popular, or a unique combination of the two. Reliance on the Constitution is selective and inconsistent. Adherents cite it, yet do so more as a cultural reference rather than out of commitment to the text, which they seek to alter. Several constitutional amendments have been targeted by some in the movement for full or partial repeal, including the 14th, 16th, and 17th. There has also been support for a proposed Repeal Amendment, which would enable a two-thirds majority of the states to repeal federal laws, and a Balanced Budget Amendment, which would limit deficit spending.
Unresolved concerns:
- 4) Introduce the pedestrian understanding of constitutional originalism by sociologists: Reliance on the Constitution is selective and inconsistent. Adherents cite it, yet do so as a cultural reference rather than out of commitment to the text, which they seek to alter.
- Oppose - You don't call a plumber to tell you why the furnace is acting up. †TE†Talk 21:25, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
- Addendum: Malke and P&W's versions both have this sentence in their proposed paragraph on Contract from America, which I don't object to adding if we intend to scrap the present subsection on that same topic:
- The top ten included "identify the constitutionality of every new law, reject cap and trade legislation, demand a balanced federal budget, simplify the tax code, assess constitutionality of federal agencies, limit growth in annual federal spending, repeal Obamacare, new energy policy that supports exploration, reduce earmarks, and reduce federal taxes."
- Xenophrenic (talk) 10:25, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
- I'd keep the list, but we do need a merge for reduced redundancy. †TE†Talk 21:30, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
- Addendum: Malke and P&W's versions both have this sentence in their proposed paragraph on Contract from America, which I don't object to adding if we intend to scrap the present subsection on that same topic:
- Same answer as the previous 5 versions. Good enough to go in as a starting point for further work. With the understanding that it needs changes which we can handle then. (Including later fixing the travesty "Reliance on the Constitution is selective and inconsistent." If someone advocates blacks' right to vote and cites the constitution, but fails to advocate the right to bear arms in the same speech, do you put that "inconsistent" statement in their article?) Would not replace the subsections which would be handled separately. North8000 (talk) 13:41, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
- re: Reliance on the Constitution is selective and inconsistent. Adherents cite it, yet do so as a cultural reference rather than out of commitment to the text, which they seek to alter.
- Two objections have been raised about that text. The first, is that it is opinion, rather than reliably sourced fact. This is incorrect; the sources do not say they are opining, and the sources (the Oxford University published book, and the peer-reviewed academic paper) are indeed reliable. Also, equally reliable sources calling that text into question have not been produced. Further objections along those lines would be better handled at WP:RSN.
- The second objection, as I understand it, is that the text is inaccurate or false. The "right to vote/right to bear arms" example doesn't exemplify the reasoning behind the "inconsistent" description being used here. Here is some of the source content supporting the proposed text:
It can further be found in the TPM’s recurring cultural theme of returning to the ideals of the Constitution. Like the Tea Party name, this theme is selectively nostalgic Support for Constitutional principles is not absolute. TPM supporters were twice as likely than others to favor a constitutional amendment banning flag burning; many also support efforts to overturn citizenship as defined by the Fourteenth Amendment. That TPM supporters simultaneously want to honor the founders’ Constitution and alter that same document highlights the political flexibility of the cultural symbols they draw on. The TPM supporters’ inconsistent views of the Constitution suggests that their nostalgic embrace of the document is animated more by a network of cultural associations than a thorough commitment to the original text. (Perrin, Pgs. 7-8)
They are doing what every political endeavor does: using history as a source of inspiration and social identity. Just like other political actors, past and present, Tea Partiers stretch the limits of the Constitution, use it selectively, and push for amendments. Tea Partiers have argued for measures such as restrictions on birthright citizenship, abridgements of freedom of religion for Muslim-Americans, and suspension of protections in the Bill of Rights for suspected terrorists. Some parts of the Constitution are lauded over others. (Skocpol/Williamson, Pgs. 50-51)
- The "inconsistency" is not so much that they do advocate one part while not advocating another part of the Constitution (although they do that, too), but more that they advocate adherance to the constitution while at the same time advocating amending or repealing. Did I incorrectly word what the sources are saying, or is the contention that the sources are just wrong? Xenophrenic (talk) 19:59, 10 July 2013 (UTC) (I note that North8000 is travelling, and says we can fix this later, but I thought I'd at least try to get a clearer picture of the objection.) Xenophrenic (talk) 19:59, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
- I'd call it misleading POV wording, including if a source said it. Again, we can fix this after it's in. North8000 (talk) 13:36, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- "A source" didn't say it, many sources have. Here's another one:
- I'd call it misleading POV wording, including if a source said it. Again, we can fix this after it's in. North8000 (talk) 13:36, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
The Tea Partiers' view of the Constitution was commonly described as "originalism," a fidelity to the exact words of the document as they were written in 1787 that has adherents at major universities and, in Antonin Scalia and Clarence Thomas, on the U.S. Supreme Court. And some Tea Partiers' version of the Constitution sounded just like that. But many others were learning subjective interpretations of the Constitution that went beyond the primary source, and beyond what legal scholars or Americans would recognize—even using a dictionary—in reading the original document. (Zernike; Boiling Mad, Pgs. 67-68)
- And another one in this academic, peer reviewed paper contrasting conservative originalism with progressive living constitutionalism (cited in no fewer than 33 academic journals and papers):
It serves as a critical counterweight to the distorted history pedaled by many conservative politicians and activists, including the members of the Tea Party. These activists seek to portray themselves as the true defenders of the Constitution, but they are selective in their defense and in their vision. They incorrectly portray the powers of the federal government established by the original Constitution as exceedingly limited, which ignores both the language of the Constitution and the crucial fact that it was adopted in response to the flawed Articles of Confederation, which failed to establish a strong national government. In addition to distorting the original Constitution, Tea Partiers often pretend as if the Constitution were never amended and therefore simply ignore the expansion of individual rights and federal power accomplished by those amendments. When selective amnesia fails, they call for jettisoning portions of the Constitution they dislike, including the guarantee of citizenship in the Fourteenth Amendment to all who are born in the United States. Indeed, Justice Scalia jumped on the Tea Party bandwagon last year in suggesting that the Seventeenth Amendment was a bad idea, which is simultaneously remarkable and somewhat beside the point for a sitting Justice, whose oath is to defend the Constitution—even the parts he may not like. Put simply, the rise of the Tea Party has led to a national debate over the meaning of the Constitution, which has recently focused on the constitutionality of health care reform. The distortions, selective reading of the Constitution, and calls for constitutional amendments by Tea Partiers demand a response from progressives, and Amar‘s work outlines a devastating one. But there is a further lesson in here for progressives who remain uncertain about the wisdom of embracing the Constitution. If the Tea Partiers have to fiddle so much with the actual Constitution in order to claim that it supports their positions, doesn‘t that in itself constitute excellent proof that the real Constitution is not nearly as conservative as the Tea Partiers would like? (James E. Ryan; Virginia Law Review, Pgs. 19-20)
- Another highly regarded source published by Johns Hopkins University Press makes this observation in his book specifically about the Tea Party movement:
The federal government, especially Congress, must be held to a strict interpretation of the Constitution. Like other Americans, however, Tea Party supporters are selective about which passages to ignore and which to revere. (Formisano; Pg. 52)
- So, to recap, here's the proposed text based on many reliable sources: "Reliance on the Constitution is selective and inconsistent. Adherents cite it, yet do so more as a cultural reference rather than out of commitment to the text, which they seek to alter." That accurately conveys what the multiple reliable sources say, without being misleading. Are there other concerns?
- Xenophrenic (talk) 05:44, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
Getting back to work
Suggestions on what to work on next
It might be a good idea to open a section addressing the specific government programs the TP opposes and include the Social Security and Medicare programs which TP members depend on. Tea Party members and their supporters don't seem to be against them, yet these programs represent the same kind of huge government programs they are opposed to.
Malke 2010 (talk) 15:17, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
- That would prove difficult. How do we delve into the complexity of Medicare which older Americans paid into their entire lives only to see cut for another entitlement (Obamacare), and social security which is backed by IOU's the federal government can only pay back with increased taxes or borrowing? Even saying they oppose these programs is troublesome. Opposition is more to the administration of such programs. †TE†Talk 15:31, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
- I thought it was an interesting dichotomy. Look at the demographic. They're all headed for retirement and will need these programs. I've mentioned this several times back in 2010 but nobody ever wanted to do it. Malke 2010 (talk) 16:23, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
- Malke, please feel free to write a couple of paragraphs on that topic and post them here for approval. If there's a reliable source which specifically addresses that "interesting dichotomy," it should be identified and cited like this:
Joe Blow, a political science professor at Wassamatta U., has examined the "paradox" created by the Tea Party movement's support for reform of Social Security and Medicare. Blow observes this support is not in the self-interest of many Tea Party members, since they tend to be over 50 years old and will be relying on these programs in a few years.
- There are three steps I'd like to take right away:
- One thing I think we should take action on immediately is adding the word "grass-roots" (with the Wikilink) to the lede sentence. We were discussing it just before the moderated discussion started. I felt we had consensus for it, since there were so many reliable sources to support it. The allegations about Astroturfing have one or two sources, and are clearly a minority opinion per WP:WEIGHT.
- Another thing we should consider immediately is removing the Other events section. The removal of the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" section has kind of orphaned THIS section. I suggest we cut the length of the paragraph about the gas grill in half, and add both events to the list of bulleted incidents at the end of Perceptions of the Tea Party movement, in chronological order.
- Also, there's a subsection at the beginning of the "History" section called Commentaries on origin. Nothing there is notable enough to remain in this top-level article. It should be moved to the spin-off article, Perceptions of the Tea Party movement, after the bulleted list of incidents.
- Strongly support. Now that the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" roadblock has finally been removed, we can move forward with several other items that have been waiting patiently. The "grass-roots" edit, for example, has been waiting for two months. Let's get these three items done and move on. regards .... Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 03:26, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
- Oppose First, I believe that we are to be focusing on one item at a time, not multiple items in a haphazard manner.--Ubikwit見学/迷惑 06:12, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
- (A) There's nothing "haphazard" about it, and we have previously discussed more than one edit at a time — usually removal of the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" section, plus some other edit. (B) I don't see any substantive objection, just a procedural one, which has just been addressed — see (A). Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 12:02, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
I didn't have a chance to get back yesterday, but I realized the first goal here is to reduce content. I will postpone the Soc Sec issue until the reductions have been completed. My suggestion for further reducing content that might take the tension off from that last edit, is to reduce the protest/rally sections. We already have Tea Party protests and the content could easily be transferred there. My suggestion for a remaining para, with a link to the main, is focus on the beginnings and then mention the spread to national, without too much detail. Just generalized. I'd be happy to write up a sample para if anybody is interested.
On the grassroots bit, because there's so much controversy about it (with editors), it is something that needs to be addressed here. We do have to take things one at a time. I just thought something easy, like reducing the protests section, might be something that is easy and could help foster a more collegial atmosphere. The race/bigotry section was stressful for all. (And I agree about the History section with it's "commentaries" subsection. I also agree with transferring the "Other events" section the subarticle.)
Malke 2010 (talk) 13:16, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
- Yeah, maybe leave "grass roots" for later. North8000 (talk) 14:01, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
I think that possibly the most messed up section in the article is the "polling of supporters". It's a wp:synth wp:or fest, about the worst abuse of primary sources I've ever seen, uses hostile op-ed pieces as a "source" of polling data, and has misleading or inaccurate summaries. Many "gems" in there. For example "predominantly white" (any group representative of US polulaiotn is going to be "predominantly white") A good candidate to take a close look at. North8000 (talk) 11:32, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
- This article was loaded with gems like that when we started. It was like the home of a hoarder. Now that responsible Wikipedians have taken charge of the situation and we're trying to clean it up, we're going to be hauling rubbish out of here for weeks. Every time we open the door to a new section, there's going to be a little avalanche of garbage falling out. regards ... Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 16:19, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
Let's get back to work
I think we should get back to work. The article has been substantially improved, but we still have a lot of work to do. SilkTork has left us since he's traveling during the next week and won't have Internet access. The ArbCom case has started up again, so I'm sure we'll all be on our best behavior, and we have a rough framework of rules for future procedure proposed by North8000.
The race/bigotry section and the agenda section were very difficult and stressful for everyone. It seems to me that to a very substantial extent, they are done. There may be some follow-up work to do with the agenda sub-sections, and some tweaking of the language we've already added/changed in that section (including refcites — ). But I think the big problems have been resolved, and we can go forward with some less challenging portions of the article.
Let's get on the stick.
My proposal for three minor improvements will be slightly modified as described below. This is to make it more attractive to those who may have been opposed to the original proposal. Modified portions and some explanation and argument have been added in italics and strikethrough.
- One thing I think we should take action on immediately is adding the word "grass-roots" (with the Wikilink) to the lede sentence. We were discussing it just before the moderated discussion started. I felt we had consensus for it, since there were so many reliable sources to support it. The allegations about Astroturfing have one or two sources, and are clearly a minority opinion per WP:WEIGHT. Astroturfing allegations have already been presented in the body of the article. If necessary, these can be expanded upon, particularly with footnoted blockquotes from Formisano and Skocpol.
- Another thing we should consider immediately is removing the Other events section. The removal of the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" section has kind of orphaned THIS section. I suggest we
cut the length of the paragraph about the gas grill in half, andadd both events to the list of bulleted incidents at the end of Perceptions of the Tea Party movement, in chronological order. - Also, there's a subsection at the beginning of the "History" section called Commentaries on origin. Nothing there is notable enough to remain in this top-level article. It should be moved to the spin-off article, Perceptions of the Tea Party movement, after the bulleted list of incidents. I think it's important to identify this as "criticism and commentaries," since that's what it is, and identify critics as progressives and anti-tobacco activists, since their motives in raising these criticisms are most likely partisan.
- Strongly support. Now that the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" roadblock and the agenda roadblock
hashave finally been removed, we can move forward with several other items that have been waiting patiently. The "grass-roots" edit, for example, has been waiting fortwothree months. Let's get these three items done and move on. regards .... Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 13:45, 6 July 2013 (UTC)
- Comment The addition of grass roots was opposed P&W and you continue to confuse voting with consensus. Otherwise I really don't see the point until the Arbcom position is settled. It ha gone back there because this approach did not work. ----Snowded 04:50, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
- There's no confusion on my part, Snowded. The TPm is a grass-roots movement; this is the majority position per WP:WEIGHT. The example that I used in previous incarnations of this thread was the Waterboarding article. Even though a minority of reliable sources, including (at that time) the Vice President of the United States, the Attorney General, and two Deputy Attorneys General were of the opinion that in some cases waterboarding was not torture, a majority of sources stated that it was torture. Accordingly, the first six words of the Waterboarding article are, "Waterboarding is a form of torture" In previous incarnations of this discussion thread over the past six months, I've linked at least 18 reliable sources stating that the TPm is a grass-roots movement. These included both peer-reviewed academic and fact-checked news organization sources. Those editors who opposed the edit cited two sources: one by Ron Formisano, who claims that a few groups associated with TPm are engaged in Astroturfing, and one by Theda Skocpol, who observes that the TPm is neither grass-roots nor Astroturf, but something in between. Even if we count both of these sources as sharing the same minority opinion, it's eighteen to two — clearly a majority opinion and a minority opinion per WP:WEIGHT.
- But it isn't even that good for those who oppose the edit, Snowded. It's eighteen for the majority opinion, one for a minority opinion, and one for a different minority opinion, because Formisano and Skocpol don't share the same opinion. Clearly, the authors of the Waterboarding article have shown us how to handle this situation. Review the archives of that article's Talk page. Those who opposed that edit were very determined, but they lost the content dispute. Here, we also see support for treating obvious minority opinions as something other than the minority. This is a policy based argument, Snowded. Policy based arguments, not votes, determine consensus per WP:CLOSE and WP:CONSENSUS. You see, there's no confusion on my part about what constitutes consensus at Misplaced Pages. Do you have a policy based argument?
- Next, let's examine your desire to wait until the ArbCom decision. Are you waiting for ArbCom to issue topic bans for one side in the content dispute, and then the other side can have its way? ArbCom doesn't decide content disputes. Policy decides content disputes and here, the policy is WP:WEIGHT. Also, you claim that "this approach did not work." It wasn't allowed to work. The first time, we had consensus and SilkTork shut down the discussion to steer us into "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception." The second time, SilkTork shut down the discussion to steer us into the "Agenda" section. Let's get an admin from WP:AN to close this, and provide him with links to the previous two discussions. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 05:39, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
- That response illustrates why the Arbcom resolution is needed before progress can be made ----Snowded 09:46, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
- Now you are back here - your !vote is solicited above in Lis alibi pendens. Collect (talk) 11:58, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
- A month block for a problematic editor on various Philosophy articles has given me some time Collect but I'm not 100% on my continued participation. I'm waiting to see what comes out of the Arbcom ruling. However I have responded to your request and personal hat tip to you by the way. We've had our disagreements over the years but you do seem to be trying to make some progress here. ----Snowded 13:56, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
- That response illustrates why the Arbcom resolution is needed before progress can be made Perhaps you'd care to explain, Snowded. I politely provided a fairly thorough policy based argument. Do you have a policy based argument that explains why the edit shouldn't be actioned? If not, why shouldn't the edit be actioned? Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 15:36, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
- I and other editors have explained the issue elsewhere P&W, this is just another manifestation, counting votes, repeating your arguments as if they were uncontroversial conclusions and at length. Sorry been here too many times to go through it all again ----Snowded 02:13, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
- I agree that a persuasive argument has yet to be made, and the past discussions are being misrepresented here as an "18 sources versus just 2 sources" weight discussion, which simply isn't the situation. To use a clearer analogy, if Blitzo Motor Company makes a hybrid car (gas/electric), we don't put a sentence in our article lead about that car saying simply "this car is gasoline-powered". Sure, you can come up with 18 sources that say it runs on gas, and it does, but that isn't the whole truth. It also runs on electricity, and that isn't a "minority opinion", it's a fact - and it remains a fact regardless of how many sources are produced saying so. Xenophrenic (talk) 17:59, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
- Once again, it's being claimed that a source must also say "There is no part of TPm that is Astroturfed" in order for that source to be counted as a "TPm is grass-roots" source. When a source says "TPm is grass-roots," that necessarily contains the implicit statement, "There is no part of TPm that is Astroturfed." See my previous analogy about the Elephant article. If several reliable sources state, "The elephant is an animal," necessarily implicit in that statement is, "The elephant is not a plant." Finding reliable sources which describe elephant ears as plants, and then trying to insert the statement, "Many scholarly sources have indicated that extensive portions of the elephant are a plant" in the Elephant article, and keep the statement, "The elephant is an animal" out of the lede, is analogous to this effort to describe TPm in this article as Astroturfed. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 15:14, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
- I don't see where that claim is being made. Reliable sources say there are many grassroots activists in the movement, which has been significantly astroturfed. Are you claiming, against reliable sources, that there has been no astroturfing of the movement, or are you only claiming that we shouldn't mention that fact in the lead of the article? Xenophrenic (talk) 16:01, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
- Once again, it's being claimed that a source must also say "There is no part of TPm that is Astroturfed" in order for that source to be counted as a "TPm is grass-roots" source. When a source says "TPm is grass-roots," that necessarily contains the implicit statement, "There is no part of TPm that is Astroturfed." See my previous analogy about the Elephant article. If several reliable sources state, "The elephant is an animal," necessarily implicit in that statement is, "The elephant is not a plant." Finding reliable sources which describe elephant ears as plants, and then trying to insert the statement, "Many scholarly sources have indicated that extensive portions of the elephant are a plant" in the Elephant article, and keep the statement, "The elephant is an animal" out of the lede, is analogous to this effort to describe TPm in this article as Astroturfed. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 15:14, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
- Now you are back here - your !vote is solicited above in Lis alibi pendens. Collect (talk) 11:58, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
- That response illustrates why the Arbcom resolution is needed before progress can be made ----Snowded 09:46, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
Note: The new posited rules disallow such colloquy - I suggest we start now with not mentioning any editors by name in any post, not even using "you." Collect (talk) 10:47, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
- The "explanation" I recall was to focus on Formisano and Skocpol, over and over again, in infinite detail; to dismiss such eminently reliable fact-checked news organizations as The New York Times, Politico and The Washington Post as birdcage liner and fish wrap, compared to the founts of wisdom contained in the pages of a book by a history professor at the University of Kentucky; and to pretend that Elizabeth Price Foley (for example) wasn't at least as reliable, and at least as notable as Ronald P. Formisano. In other words, to claim that seventeen WP:NEWSORG sources (yes, seventeen) plus one WP:SCHOLARSHIP source (Foley) saying
- TPm = G
- are somehow outweighed by one WP:SCHOLARSHIP source (Formisano) saying
- TPm = (1⁄2 G) + (1⁄2 A)
- and one WP:SCHOLARSHIP source (Skocpol) saying
- TPm = D
- (neither A nor G, but something in between). If anyone's recollection of the opposing arguments is any different — or if you have some other, more convincing argument besides
- 1 + 1 > 18
- then please post it, and enlighten me. Because perhaps I'm just too stupid, but I really don't understand why the policy based argument I've just posted is NOT an uncontroversial conclusion. regards ... Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 13:52, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
- Regarding the removal of the Other events section, and putting that material in the bulleted list of incidents at the end of the Perceptions spin-off article, in chronological order: this is the top-level article in a series on a complex subject, which has at least three satellite articles. Please see WP:N and the notability guideline on WP:EVENT. The vandalism of someone's gas grill, for example, fails notability on several counts for a top-level article. These events clearly belong in the "Perceptions" spin-off article, not this top-level article.
- Regarding removal of the Commentaries on origin subsection and its placement in the "Perceptions" spin-off article, again this fails notability requirements for a top-level article in a series. These are minority opinions at best, and fringe theories at worst. The article in Tobacco Control magazine, especially, has been carefully ignored by mainstream news organizations, and there are well-grounded questions regarding its political motivations. WP:N, WP:WEIGHT and WP:FRINGE all indicate that the spin-off article is where these commentaries belong.
- Again, if anyone would like to offer a policy based argument against any of these three proposed edits, I look forward to your response. regards ... Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 14:52, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
- Just a quick note, P&W: The guidelines you linked above (WP:N and WP:EVENT) apply to notability of an "article", and not to notability of content within an existing article, which is what we are discussing. I made that same mistake years ago, and was corrected by a couple helpful editors. WP:WEIGHT is the applicable guideline here. You should also be aware that content determined to be inappropriate for our main article due to policy reasons is equally inappropriate for a spinoff article. Material is moved to spinoff articles only because it has grown too lengthy or detailed, not because the content "fails notability", "is minority opinion" or "is fringe". Moving it for those reasons means you are trying to create a POV-FORK, and that's against policy. Xenophrenic (talk) 17:59, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
- The material does fail notability for the top-level article in a series. See WP:SUMMARY and WP:SPLIT for the official Misplaced Pages guideline. Perhaps the most directly on-point WP policy/guideline is not WP:N, but a section of WP:SUMMARY called WP:DETAIL:
Summary style is based on the premise that information about a topic should not all be contained in a single article since different readers have different needs ... The parent article should have general summary information and the more detailed summaries of each subtopic should be in child articles and in articles on specific subjects.
- Particularly since the list of alleged racist incidents has been moved to the spin-off article, the "Other events" section has been orphaned and should be moved as well. See also WP:SCOPE. Personal opinions held by notable, but partisan individuals about the origins of the Tea Party are beyond the topical scope of this article. The Perceptions article is a more appropriate place for them. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 15:32, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
- The material does fail notability for the top-level article in a series. --P&W
- There is no "notability" requirement for content, but there are several guidelines on whether content is appropriate for a Misplaced Pages article. However, if content is not policy-compliant for the main article, it is also inappropriate for subarticles. See WP:NNC. Regarding the origins of the movement, that kind of content is definitely within the scope of the main article. The brief paragraph you refer to as commentary actually appears to be a mix of commentary and fact, and should instead be re-written. re: the "Other events" section (that header, frankly, sucks), are you now claiming it is too detailed or long (per WP:DETAIL)? Xenophrenic (talk) 16:55, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
- The brief paragraph you refer to as commentary actually appears to be a mix of commentary and fact ... There are no "facts" here at Misplaced Pages, because it doesn't matter whether we as editors believe a statement is true. There are only viewpoints expressed by (and verifiable in) reliable sources — and, when we find enough reliable sources expressing the same viewpoint, it's the majority viewpoint and we are required to treat it as the majority viewpoint. Here, the majority viewpoint per WP:WEIGHT is that the TPm is a grass-roots movement, period, full stop. The Waterboarding article tells us how we should state this majority viewpoint:
- "Waterboarding is a form of torture ..."
- "The Tea Party movement is an American grass-roots political movement that advocates ..."
- There is no "notability" requirement for content ... WP:SUMMARY, particularly WP:DETAIL, requires that the Perceptions of the Tea Party section must be written as "general summary information" regarding the topical scope of the Perceptions of the Tea Party movement sub-article, which is about allegations of "racism, bigotry and intolerance." It's that "intolerance" bit at the end that steers this discussion. It was alleged that some TPm people in Maryland were "intolerant" of a congressman who voted i favor of the Affordable Care Act, and gave Tea Party members directions to what they thought was that congressman's house as an expression of this "intolerance." These allegations, and the related vandalism of a gas grill at that house in Maryland don't belong in the "general summary information" in the parent article. They belong in the spin-off article. The relevant sections of Misplaced Pages policy/guidelines that govern this are WP:DETAIL and WP:SCOPE. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 18:39, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
- You are still arguing to mention grassroots in the lead? As noted several times before, there isn't any real opposition to that (correct me if I'm wrong). The objection is to your suggestion that we cover "grassroots" without also covering "astroturf" in the lead. The prominence of both descriptions, in reliable sources that cover them, requires that we not mention just one of the descriptions, per WP:WEIGHT. That would be misleading to the readers. Xenophrenic (talk) 20:27, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
- No it wouldn't mislead readers. Look at the lede to the Waterboarding article. It doesn't mention the viewpoint of several reliable sources that waterboarding, in some circumstances, is not torture but a "harsh interrogation" technique. Do you feel that its failure to mention the minority viewpoint in the article lede is misleading to readers? Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 20:53, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
- Yes, it would mislead readers. Look closely at what you just said: "is not torture but a 'harsh interrogation' technique..." -- that is an either/or logic statement, which is a completely different situation. With the Tea Party, the reliable sources say we have an "and" situation ("grassroots activists AND astroturf influence"). And I still don't know what "minority viewpoint" you are talking about. The astroturf aspect of the movement is a fact; minority and majority quantifiers only apply to competing viewpoints. Xenophrenic (talk) 00:58, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- No it wouldn't mislead readers. Look at the lede to the Waterboarding article. It doesn't mention the viewpoint of several reliable sources that waterboarding, in some circumstances, is not torture but a "harsh interrogation" technique. Do you feel that its failure to mention the minority viewpoint in the article lede is misleading to readers? Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 20:53, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
Responding to Snowded, it would take quite an effort and major course change by Arbcom to help this, because the case was so badly sent off on a tangent from the start. We need to and should keep trying here.
I am down to a few minutes per day on Misplaced Pages this week and in-depth analysis in beyond me this week. But P & W's ideas look good. I'm not big on worrying about vague characterizations like "grass roots" and no movement is without some purposeful organization / support, but if there ever was a movement where this term applies, TPM is it. North8000 (talk) 16:15, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
- In addition to questioning the reliability and bias of the Tobacco Control article, it does not say anything in regard Grassroots v. AstroTurfed. At the most generous interpretation that they know what they're talking about, it says that one TPm organization was funded by (some of the) same people as the anti-anti-tobacco organizations. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 16:20, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
Request for closure
I am about to file a Request for Closure at WP:AN. Accordingly, I've reopened the collapsed subsection that had our mid-June discussion of these three minor improvements. The only objection at that time was Ubikwit saying we should only work on one thing at a time (the agenda section). Now that the agenda section has been substantially improved, we can get back to these three minor issues and get them resolved. Previous discussion at great length may be found here, here and here, during most of the month of April. The closer is asked to review all these discussions over the past three months, and indicate whether we have consensus for each of these three edits. Policy based arguments, not votes, determine consensus per WP:CLOSE and WP:CONSENSUS. regards ... Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 13:41, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
- Regarding the minor issue of whether we should mention the Grassroot & AstroTurf aspects of the movement in the lead, or just mention one of those aspects in the lead to the exclusion of the other, it would be informative to note that a similar discussion was had in this mediation. The consensus was that if both descriptions are to appear in the lead, both would appear together. I don't see a change in that consensus, nor a valid argument to the contrary. As for your 2nd and 3rd minor issues, have those been discussed yet in any detail? Xenophrenic (talk) 17:59, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
- That mediation was almost three years ago. One of the most active advocates for "Astroturfing" and opponents of "grass-roots" left Misplaced Pages a month later. And a large number of reliable sources, both WP:NEWSORG and WP:SCHOLARSHIP varieties, have been published since then. Regarding the other two proposed edits, there have been abundant opportunities to express concerns and no concerns were expressed, except Ubikwit saying we should only work on one thing at a time. The "one thing" we were working on has now been substantially completed. This has been discussed and tabled off and on for three months. It's time to turn it over to a closing admin and let him (or her) sort it out. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 18:22, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
- The other 2 issues haven't been discussed because an editor (and also our Moderator) said we were to work on something else first, and you say the next step is to turn the issues over to an admin? Wouldn't the next step be to begin discussions it first (so the Admin will have something to "sort out")? As for the Grassroots/Astroturf descriptions matter, yes, other sources have been published since then -- and still the facts haven't changed. There are just more sources. Xenophrenic (talk) 18:33, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
- On the mediation page we find an enormous number of additional sources (notably The Economist) to join the overwhelming number of reliable sources stating that it's a grass-roots movement. Thanks for providing the link to that wealth of additional reliable sources for the majority opinion per WP:WEIGHT. For the other two proposed edits, the material fails WP:N at for the top-level article in a series, but would be fine for a spin-off article. If there really is a policy based argument against them that has been withheld until now, when a closer has already been requested at WP:AN, please post it immediately rather than just talking about it. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 18:42, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
- Incorrect. WP:N applies to articles, not content within an article. To quote: The notability guideline does not determine the content of articles, but only whether the topic should have its own article. And as noted above, per policy, if it is against policy in a main article, it is against policy in a sub article. I'm sure a knowledgable "closer" will confirm that for you. Regarding the Grassroots & Astroturfed nature of the movement, neither of those descriptions is "opinion", majority or otherwise (even though the Lexington piece in the Economist is an opinion piece), they are reliably sourced facts. Xenophrenic (talk) 19:39, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
- WP:WEIGHT describes them as "viewpoints," not "facts." My mistake, I should have called them "viewpoints," rather than "opinions." One viewpoint — that the TPm is a grass-roots movement, and the fact that some components have accepted corporate donations does not compromise its essentially grass-roots nature — is clearly supported by a majority of the reliable sources, including Elizabeth Price Foley in her peer-reviewed works, The New York Times, The Washington Post, CBS News, National Public Radio and many other fact-checked news organizations. The other viewpoints are each supported by a small minority of the reliable sources. Regarding WP:N, that policy directs editors to several guidelines, one of which is WP:EVENT. There are various subsections within that guidelines such as WP:EFFECT, WP:INDEPTH, and WP:GEOSCOPE which provide clear guidance in demoting such events as the vandalism of someone's gas grill in Maryland to the spin-off article. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 20:38, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
- To be more specific about what the reliable sources convey, the TPm consists of both grassroots activists as well as big-monied players and professional politicos, thinktanks and conservative elites that have sought to direct, fund, coordinate and use these "grassroots" efforts. And this fact is neither minority nor majority viewpoint. What "other" viewpoints are you speaking of? Regarding your alphabet-soup of policy links, please simply quote the section of the policy you are acting under, and the content you are applying it to, and let's discuss it. All the ones you linked do not apply here. They apply to the creation of Misplaced Pages articles. Xenophrenic (talk) 20:56, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
- The fact that some RS support "A + G" while others support "G" does not negate the fact that the ones supporting "G" vastly outnumber the ones supporting "A + G" and are therefore the majority per WP:WEIGHT. Is there any argument in favor of treating "Astroturfed plus grass-roots" as the majority viewpoint? How many reliable sources support this viewpoint? We've been over this exhaustively. Many of the sources just don't support "Astroturfed plus grass-roots." Some, such as NPR ask the question "Is TPm Astroturfed plus grass-roots?" but do not answer "yes." Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 22:04, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
- The fact that the movement has genuine grassroots activists in it is a majority viewpoint (as contrasted with not having grassroots activists in it), not the majority viewpoint. It is also a "majority viewpoint" that the movement has been extensively astroturfed, is conservative, takes stances on fiscal issues, had influence in the 2010 elections, etc. Minority viewpoints, for example, would be the ones saying there are no grassroots activists in the movement, or there is no astroturf influencing of the movement, or that the movement had no influence on the 2010 elections. The fact that RS saying the TP movement is concervative vastly outnumber the ones mentioning grassroots doesn't mean the grassroots description is a minority viewpoint. Xenophrenic (talk) 10:25, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
- The fact that some RS support "A + G" while others support "G" does not negate the fact that the ones supporting "G" vastly outnumber the ones supporting "A + G" and are therefore the majority per WP:WEIGHT. Is there any argument in favor of treating "Astroturfed plus grass-roots" as the majority viewpoint? How many reliable sources support this viewpoint? We've been over this exhaustively. Many of the sources just don't support "Astroturfed plus grass-roots." Some, such as NPR ask the question "Is TPm Astroturfed plus grass-roots?" but do not answer "yes." Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 22:04, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
- To be more specific about what the reliable sources convey, the TPm consists of both grassroots activists as well as big-monied players and professional politicos, thinktanks and conservative elites that have sought to direct, fund, coordinate and use these "grassroots" efforts. And this fact is neither minority nor majority viewpoint. What "other" viewpoints are you speaking of? Regarding your alphabet-soup of policy links, please simply quote the section of the policy you are acting under, and the content you are applying it to, and let's discuss it. All the ones you linked do not apply here. They apply to the creation of Misplaced Pages articles. Xenophrenic (talk) 20:56, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
- WP:WEIGHT describes them as "viewpoints," not "facts." My mistake, I should have called them "viewpoints," rather than "opinions." One viewpoint — that the TPm is a grass-roots movement, and the fact that some components have accepted corporate donations does not compromise its essentially grass-roots nature — is clearly supported by a majority of the reliable sources, including Elizabeth Price Foley in her peer-reviewed works, The New York Times, The Washington Post, CBS News, National Public Radio and many other fact-checked news organizations. The other viewpoints are each supported by a small minority of the reliable sources. Regarding WP:N, that policy directs editors to several guidelines, one of which is WP:EVENT. There are various subsections within that guidelines such as WP:EFFECT, WP:INDEPTH, and WP:GEOSCOPE which provide clear guidance in demoting such events as the vandalism of someone's gas grill in Maryland to the spin-off article. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 20:38, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
- Incorrect. WP:N applies to articles, not content within an article. To quote: The notability guideline does not determine the content of articles, but only whether the topic should have its own article. And as noted above, per policy, if it is against policy in a main article, it is against policy in a sub article. I'm sure a knowledgable "closer" will confirm that for you. Regarding the Grassroots & Astroturfed nature of the movement, neither of those descriptions is "opinion", majority or otherwise (even though the Lexington piece in the Economist is an opinion piece), they are reliably sourced facts. Xenophrenic (talk) 19:39, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
- On the mediation page we find an enormous number of additional sources (notably The Economist) to join the overwhelming number of reliable sources stating that it's a grass-roots movement. Thanks for providing the link to that wealth of additional reliable sources for the majority opinion per WP:WEIGHT. For the other two proposed edits, the material fails WP:N at for the top-level article in a series, but would be fine for a spin-off article. If there really is a policy based argument against them that has been withheld until now, when a closer has already been requested at WP:AN, please post it immediately rather than just talking about it. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 18:42, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
- The other 2 issues haven't been discussed because an editor (and also our Moderator) said we were to work on something else first, and you say the next step is to turn the issues over to an admin? Wouldn't the next step be to begin discussions it first (so the Admin will have something to "sort out")? As for the Grassroots/Astroturf descriptions matter, yes, other sources have been published since then -- and still the facts haven't changed. There are just more sources. Xenophrenic (talk) 18:33, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
- That mediation was almost three years ago. One of the most active advocates for "Astroturfing" and opponents of "grass-roots" left Misplaced Pages a month later. And a large number of reliable sources, both WP:NEWSORG and WP:SCHOLARSHIP varieties, have been published since then. Regarding the other two proposed edits, there have been abundant opportunities to express concerns and no concerns were expressed, except Ubikwit saying we should only work on one thing at a time. The "one thing" we were working on has now been substantially completed. This has been discussed and tabled off and on for three months. It's time to turn it over to a closing admin and let him (or her) sort it out. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 18:22, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
Extended discussion of grass-roots and astroturf
- Please use colons to indent properly when responding per WP:TALK policy.
- It is also a "majority viewpoint" that the movement has been extensively astroturfed ... This is a false statement.
- Minority viewpoints, for example, would be the ones saying ... there is no astroturf influencing of the movement ... This is also a false statement. What makes these false statements is the overwhelming number of sources saying, "It's a grass-roots movement," without any hesitation or qualification (including not only both peer-reviewed academic and fact-checked news organization sources, but also the Tea Party groups themselves, which must be considered reliable in this limited context under WP:SELFSOURCE), compared to the ones like Formisano saying, "It's partially Astroturfed." The ratio is at least 3-to-1 and may be as high as 10-to-1.
- Most of the sources presented in this three-year discussion, which were claimed by some editors to say, "It's partially Astroturfed," turned out after investigation to be either (A) not actually saying that or (B) the opinion of some notable, but highly partisan opponent of the Tea Party, such as Nancy Pelosi or Paul Krugman. These minority opinions are already properly attributed and quoted farther down in the article, and no one is suggesting they should be removed.
- Now then, if there is a genuinely policy based argument to be made against any of these three edits, please post it. "It's partially Astroturfed" is obviously a minority viewpoint per WP:WEIGHT. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 11:22, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
- Colons were used to indent properly (check the edit history); that the movement has an astroturfed component is the majority viewpoint, and trying to say it has absolutely no astroturfing involved is the minority viewpoint; Pelosi and Krugman are being cited for their opinions only; can't comment on the other two edits, as they haven't really been discussed. Xenophrenic (talk) 16:01, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
- that the movement has an astroturfed component is the majority viewpoint ... This is a false statement. We've been over all these sources with a fine-toothed comb. Out of all the claims that this is the majority viewpoint, here is the single grain of truth: Formisano says that the Institute For Liberty (IFL) is an Astroturfed TPm component. However, IFL doesn't identify itself as part of the TPm, and I've never seen any other source identify IFL as part of the TPm.
- There is no valid policy based argument opposing any of these three edits. From WP:CLOSE: "The closer is there to judge the consensus of the community, after discarding irrelevant arguments: those that flatly contradict established policy, those based on personal opinion only, those that are logically fallacious, those that show no understanding of the matter of issue. ... He (or she) is not expected to decide the issue, just to judge the result of the debate, and is expected to know policy sufficiently enough to know what arguments are to be excluded as irrelevant." Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 03:37, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- Adding an unqualified statement, such as "The Tea Party is a grassroots movement.", to the lede would not satisfy WP:NPOV anymore than using "astroturf" in lede would.
Considered in its entirety, the Tea Party is neither a top-down creation nor a bottom-up explosion. This remarkable political outpouring is best understood as a combination of three intertwined forces. Each force is important in its own right, and their interaction is what gives the Tea Party its dynamism, drama, and wallop. ...snip... Grassroots activists, roving billionaire advocates, and right-wing media purveyors—these three forces, together, create the Tea Party...
— Skocpol, T.; Williamson, V. (2012). The Tea Party and the Remaking of Republican Conservatism. Oxford University Press. ISBN 9780199832637.
- More weight is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of "grassroots" as it applies to the Tea Party movement. — ArtifexMayhem (talk) 07:25, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- I would hardly call it "unqualified". But, if I'm to read your comment correctly -- You feel the use of grassroots ought not be construed as all-encompassing.
- My solution: The Tea Party is a political movement primarily based in grassroots activism. †TE†Talk 14:22, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- More weight is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of "grassroots" as it applies to the Tea Party movement. — ArtifexMayhem (talk) 07:25, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- More weight is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of "grassroots" as it applies to the Tea Party movement. YES. EXACTLY. I simply could not agree with you more on this point. After an insightful observation like that one, you could be my new best friend.
- Generally speaking, those sources that have endeavored to define TPm as "Astroturfed" or "partially Astroturfed" have consistently attempted to redefine the word "Astroturfed" in a much more expansive manner. The expanded definition is intended by these sources to include activities that were never perceived as Astroturfing before. The term was first coined in the 1980s and 1990s, when paid political and corporate operatives were each pretending to be several ordinary people at once, writing letters to congressmen, senators, and the editors of major newspapers and news magazines, artificially manufacturing the appearance of a grass-roots movement, or popular support or opposition to a particular thing, where there was none.
- This term was and continues to be a well-recognized and well-understood term in the political science lexicon. Its meaning has never actually changed, unless you can demonstrate a consensus across all of political science, discussing all movements and all activities by political and corporate operatives, that supports such a change in the definition. The meaning is limited to the activities I've described: pretending to be the elements of a grass-roots movement where no such elements exist.
- In this case, not even Ronald P. Formisano has claimed that there are absolutely zero grass-roots elements in the Tea Party movement. The effect of corporate involvement, and involvement by established political parties (the Republican Party) and conservative leaning news media (Fox News, Daily Caller and the like) is only to amplify these grass-roots elements — elements that genuinely do exist.
- There was a video teleconference recorded and posted by The Huffington Post where political experts were discussing this effort to change and expand the definition of the term "Astroturfing." I've posted the link to it at least twice and will try to find it again, and post it again. But yes, my new best friend, more WP:WEIGHT is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of "grass-roots" as it applies to TPm without attempting to change the meaning of that long-established term of art, to include activities that, had Barack Obama and Organizing for America engaged in them, would be cheerfully described by the very same sources as "community organizing."
- The difference here is that the community that's being organized is much more fiscally conservative. And that's really the biggest and most salient difference between the community organizing that's being done by the Koch Brothers, and the community organizing that was done by Barack Obama. Opponents and critics of the movement tend to focus instead on the fact that the Tea Party is mostly white. Considering that some of the most beloved candidates of the Tea Party have included Herman Cain, Mia Love, Allen West, Ted Cruz and Marco Rubio, race is simply not the salient factor. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 14:37, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- I'm going to skip past the new twists on old memes above ("It depends on what the meaning of the word 'is' is." and "Some of my best friends are black.") and comment on these:
- You feel the use of grassroots ought not be construed as all-encompassing. My solution: The Tea Party is a political movement primarily based in grassroots activism. --TE
- That's a tiny step in the right direction, but still leaves us saying that the hybrid car "runs primarily on gasoline" to the neglect of mentioning that it also runs on electricity. By "unqualified statement", I think the other editor is noting that most sources (and this is particularily true of news media sources) use words like 'grassroots', 'conservative', 'anti-tax movement', without qualification because they are convenient and true, but our article would be remiss and misleading if it mentioned taxes without also mentioning spending, or mentioned conservative without also mentioning libertarian, or mentioned grassroots without also mentioning astroturfed.
- I'm going to skip past the new twists on old memes above ("It depends on what the meaning of the word 'is' is." and "Some of my best friends are black.") and comment on these:
- If we look at sources that actually discuss the meaning of "grassroots" as it applies to the Tea Party movement as suggested above, we see that the description is most frequently applied to the masses of Americans upset at proposed bailouts (activists), not a movement, which was actually developed by more than just grassroots activists.
- not even Ronald P. Formisano has claimed that there are absolutely zero grass-roots elements in the Tea Party movement --P&W
- Nor have any Misplaced Pages editors, as far as I know. That's not where the disagreement is here. Xenophrenic (talk) 16:30, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- If we look at sources that actually discuss the meaning of "grassroots" as it applies to the Tea Party movement as suggested above, we see that the description is most frequently applied to the masses of Americans upset at proposed bailouts (activists), not a movement, which was actually developed by more than just grassroots activists.
Why waste so much precious time on the trivial -- Are we still stuck in the past? Astroturfing allegations were fun while they lasted, but the world has moved on. Since mentioned above, I decided to do a count:
The Tea Party and the Remaking of Republican Conservatism
Vanessa Williamson, Theda Skocpol, and John Coggin
- Grassroots -
2429 †TE†Talk 22:25, 11 July 2013 (UTC) - Astroturf - 0
It's time to let go. †TE†Talk 19:37, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- Oooh, how very scientific! Your count is off, by the way. It's 29 to 0; but even at 29 the mentions of "grassroots" are still outnumbered by mentions of Elites and Funders of the movement. Not a single mention of a "grassroots movement", but plenty of references to activists, adherents and TPers that are one part of it. Oh, and did you realize several of those "grassroots" are mentions of other conservatives from the past, not TPers? Or is it at all important to you that most of those "grassroots" mentions actually are questioning or qualifying that term?
... has been beset with controversy about its grassroots authenticity ... These elites have long since developed a policymaking infrastructure in Washington, but had previously achieved only limited success in directly connecting themselves to an activist grassroots base ... and how grassroots undertakings relate to the Republican Party and to national organizations claiming to further Tea Party efforts ... (TPP), whose website was up and running within days of the original Santelli rant, has been more closely associated with grassroots activism than TPE ... TPP rhetoric and the group’s homespun website gives the impression of an entirely grassroots, volunteer-run organization ... dubs itself the “official grassroots American movement” ... not clear how much grassroots Tea Partiers know about the national advocacy and funding organizations promoting and trying to capitalize on their efforts ... a partnership formalizing long-time ties between the pro-business lobby and the conservative media’s grassroots mobilization efforts ... conservative media’s social coordination of willing local activists and participants, the anti-regulation big-business lobby could harness new grassroots networks to accompany their already powerful DC presence ... elite Tea Party funders and grassroots activists ...
- But we wouldn't want to let a little thing like context get in the way. No one is arguing that there are not genuine grassroots activists in the movement; the disagreement with reliable sourcing only arises when a suggestion is made to describe the movement only as "grassroots". Sorry to see you move on, Xenophrenic (talk) 21:23, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- OR/SYN. Personal beliefs of what constitutes astroturf has no place in the mainspace. †TE†Talk 22:25, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- None were stated. The concern is over describing the movement as only grassroots. — ArtifexMayhem (talk) 03:36, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- I see nothing wrong with the reliable sources' research or synthesis, and it appears to be well-founded conclusion rather than "personal belief". Are we speaking of the same reliable sources? We can raise the issue at WP:RSN to verify if they have a place in mainspace, if needed. Xenophrenic (talk) 12:27, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- Just doing my best to abide by Rule 1. Unfortunately, I must break it to avoid further misunderstanding: "Your personal beliefs of what constitutes astroturf has no place in the mainspace."
- It's quite clear that if the RS wanted to use the term "astroturf," they were free to do so. Elites and Funders, your personal opinions of what is established by their presence, has no bearing here. †TE†Talk 16:02, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- Of course Misplaced Pages editor opinions and beliefs have no place in mainspace; yours nor mine. I don't see why you feel compelled to state the obvious. We're discussing reliable sources, aren't we? Now returning to those, we see that funding sources and elite establishment influence are indeed important components when describing astroturf/grassroots. Skocpol, Williamson, Formisano and other reliable sources all clearly indicate that the TP movement cannot be described as wholly "grassroots". Our Misplaced Pages article shouldn't either, nor should it misleadingly imply it by inserting the unqualified 'grassroots' description in the lead to the exclusion of the other aspects. The RS does use the term astroturf (and "not grassroots" and "top-down" and "co-opted" and "faux-grassroots" ...) if you've examined their fuller work on the matter.
"Many supporters also proclaim the Tea Party to be purely a grassroots rebellion, a "mass movement of ... 'regular' Americans with real concerns about losing the right to live their lives as they choose." This view captures only a small part of the truth, ignoring the fact that Tea Party participants are in many respects even more ideologically extreme than other very conservative Republicans. Similarly, the ‘mass movement’ portrayal overlooks the fact that the Tea Party, understood in its entirety, includes media hosts and wealthy political action committees, plus national advocacy groups and self-proclaimed spokespersons – elites that wield many millions of dollars in political contributions and appear all over the media claiming to speak for grassroots activists who certainly have not elected them, and to whom they are not accountable. What kind of mass rebellion is funded by corporate billionaires, like the Koch brothers, led by over-the-hill former GOP kingpins like Dick Armey, and ceaselessly promoted by millionaires media celebrities like Glenn Beck and Sean Hannity?”
- Xenophrenic (talk) 21:01, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- Finally, something we can agree on: "he TP movement cannot be described as wholly 'grassroots'." There's no such thing in this day and age that could gain a foothold in American politics. You need some muscle behind that hustle. The point of contention is erroneously throwing the term astroturf about as if it's suddenly been redefined. So and so says astroturf, I'm sure there's a place for it in this BLP, attributed, but would be a stretch to consider it lead-worthy. Weight and all. On "their fuller work," I'm of limited resources. I have overdue books, my google machine is the best I can do. But it's not all bad. For instance, by using parts of your excerpt, my google machine led me to the very text that completes said excerpt, for context:
The opposite illusion is also there among those who proclaim the Tea Party to be nothing more than an "astroturf" phenomenon, an illusion pushed by Fox News, or a "billionaire's tea party" in which "corporate America is faking a grassroots revolution." This take on the Tea Party as a kabuki dance entirely manipulated from above simply cannot do justice to the volunteer engagement of many thousands of men and women who travel to rallies with their homemade signs and, even more remarkably, have formed ongoing, regularly meeting local Tea Party groups. The citizens we have met, who spend hours meeting with one another, arguing with officials, and learning about the workings of local, state, and national government—these people do not fit the caricatures espoused by some on the left. They are unglamorous, mostly older middle-class Americans. Billionaire-funded political action committees and longtime free-market advocacy organizations are certainly doing all they can to leverage and benefit from Tea Party activism. But they did not create all that activism in the first place, nor do they entirely control the popular effervescence.
- Hope this helps. †TE†Talk 22:31, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- I don't think we've ever disagreed on that part; the movement is neither wholly grassroots or astroturfed. I provided the paragraph that shows the movement isn't entirely grassroots, and you just added the paragraph that shows the movement isn't entirely astroturfed. (By the way, I have dead-tree copies of each of the above sources if Google's "preview" function fails you.) No one has "redefined" astroturf or grassroots here. Neither grassroots nor astroturf needs to be attributed to "so and so", unless you suggest we start citing opinion pieces, and I'd recommend against that. (Pssst ... by the way, this isn't a BLP.) See more of this same discussion below. Xenophrenic (talk) 00:58, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- What I posted, when the RS actually used the phrase astroturf, in parenthesis, shot it down with the quickness. And this is very much a BLP. †TE†Talk 02:02, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- By "in parenthesis", did you mean "in quotes"? If so, the only thing shot down was the notion that the movement is "nothing more than" or "entirely manipulated" or "entirely controlled" astroturf, and no one is suggesting it is. Like I said, we've never disagreed on that point. And no, Tea Party movement is not a Biography of a Living Person. Just go to WP:BLPN and search the archives for "tea party" and see for yourself, as that one has been tried a couple times before. If you meant that BLP rules still apply to living people regardless of what article they are mentioned in, then we agree. Xenophrenic (talk) 02:51, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- "Quotes" would be the safe assumption. But, I guess it's always good to ask so as to avoid any further misunderstanding. Those "quotes" have a funny way of surrounding what the RS finds to be fringe viewpoints. If you would like, I propose we use the RS as a counterpoint to the Pelosi/Krugman '09 astroturf allegations. In their same quotation form. †TE†Talk 03:16, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- By "in parenthesis", did you mean "in quotes"? If so, the only thing shot down was the notion that the movement is "nothing more than" or "entirely manipulated" or "entirely controlled" astroturf, and no one is suggesting it is. Like I said, we've never disagreed on that point. And no, Tea Party movement is not a Biography of a Living Person. Just go to WP:BLPN and search the archives for "tea party" and see for yourself, as that one has been tried a couple times before. If you meant that BLP rules still apply to living people regardless of what article they are mentioned in, then we agree. Xenophrenic (talk) 02:51, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- What I posted, when the RS actually used the phrase astroturf, in parenthesis, shot it down with the quickness. And this is very much a BLP. †TE†Talk 02:02, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- I don't think we've ever disagreed on that part; the movement is neither wholly grassroots or astroturfed. I provided the paragraph that shows the movement isn't entirely grassroots, and you just added the paragraph that shows the movement isn't entirely astroturfed. (By the way, I have dead-tree copies of each of the above sources if Google's "preview" function fails you.) No one has "redefined" astroturf or grassroots here. Neither grassroots nor astroturf needs to be attributed to "so and so", unless you suggest we start citing opinion pieces, and I'd recommend against that. (Pssst ... by the way, this isn't a BLP.) See more of this same discussion below. Xenophrenic (talk) 00:58, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Finally, something we can agree on: "he TP movement cannot be described as wholly 'grassroots'." There's no such thing in this day and age that could gain a foothold in American politics. You need some muscle behind that hustle. The point of contention is erroneously throwing the term astroturf about as if it's suddenly been redefined. So and so says astroturf, I'm sure there's a place for it in this BLP, attributed, but would be a stretch to consider it lead-worthy. Weight and all. On "their fuller work," I'm of limited resources. I have overdue books, my google machine is the best I can do. But it's not all bad. For instance, by using parts of your excerpt, my google machine led me to the very text that completes said excerpt, for context:
- Of course Misplaced Pages editor opinions and beliefs have no place in mainspace; yours nor mine. I don't see why you feel compelled to state the obvious. We're discussing reliable sources, aren't we? Now returning to those, we see that funding sources and elite establishment influence are indeed important components when describing astroturf/grassroots. Skocpol, Williamson, Formisano and other reliable sources all clearly indicate that the TP movement cannot be described as wholly "grassroots". Our Misplaced Pages article shouldn't either, nor should it misleadingly imply it by inserting the unqualified 'grassroots' description in the lead to the exclusion of the other aspects. The RS does use the term astroturf (and "not grassroots" and "top-down" and "co-opted" and "faux-grassroots" ...) if you've examined their fuller work on the matter.
- OR/SYN. Personal beliefs of what constitutes astroturf has no place in the mainspace. †TE†Talk 22:25, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- Oooh, how very scientific! Your count is off, by the way. It's 29 to 0; but even at 29 the mentions of "grassroots" are still outnumbered by mentions of Elites and Funders of the movement. Not a single mention of a "grassroots movement", but plenty of references to activists, adherents and TPers that are one part of it. Oh, and did you realize several of those "grassroots" are mentions of other conservatives from the past, not TPers? Or is it at all important to you that most of those "grassroots" mentions actually are questioning or qualifying that term?
- Please stop beating your dead horse. It's dead.
- It's 29 to 0; but even at 29 the mentions of "grassroots" are still outnumbered by mentions of Elites and Funders of the movement. "Elites and funders" do not equal "Astroturf," except in the opinion of Ron Formisano. None of these 29 sources describes the activities of these "elites and funders" as Astroturfing, nor does any of these 29 sources describe what they're doing as having a compromising or diluting effect on the essential grass-roots nature of the movement. All they're doing is amplifying the genuine grass-roots elements that are actually there. And as I said before, these very same activities would be described as "community organizing" without the slightest hesitation, rather than "Astroturfing," if it was Barack Obama and Organizing for America instead of conservatives with money. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 04:08, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- 29 sources? No, that is a single source, with 29 iterations of the word "grassroots" used to describe what is and is not grassroots, and yes they do describe the activities of the funders and established elites. Xenophrenic (talk) 21:01, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- I agree: There is no source which calls the movement Astroturfed, which doesn't (1) redefine Astroturfed to include any corporate funding, nor (2) quotes political opponents of the movement. I could almost support a statement that it's a grass-roots movement said to be Astroturfed, but even that doesn't seem to be correct. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 10:12, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- It's true that (1) RS include funding sources in their definitions of grassroots and astroturfing (not "redefine", as funding sources have been part of the definition since the terms were created). (2) None of the sources we're presently discussing "quotes political opponents of the movement", so perhaps Arthur Rubin would be so kind as to indicate which sources he's talking about. Even our Misplaced Pages article notes that "grassroots" implies that the creation of the movement and the group supporting it are natural and spontaneous, highlighting the differences between this and a movement that is orchestrated by traditional power structures. While the reliable sources note there are grassroots activists, they also note the "movement" is controlled, directed and funded by traditional special interests. Why all the aversion to conveying what the reliable sources actually say? Xenophrenic (talk) 12:27, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- (not "redefine", as funding sources have been part of the definition since the terms were created) There are other essential elements of the definition of "Astroturfing," and they've been essential elements of the definition since the term was created in the '80s. Not just (A) corporate and PAC money, but also (B) a genuine Astroturfing operation conceals the source of the money, and (C) one political or corporate operative pretends to be several people at once — and the people he's pretending to be have no connection to the source of the money. Is there any evidence of anything like either (B) or (C) going on here? Both are essential elements of the political science term "Astroturfing."
- If the TPm does not have both (B) and (C), then what's happening here is called "community organizing." Rich, powerful people are simply providing funds to make sure that all of the very real, grass-roots people who share their beliefs show up at the next protest, or the next election. And without (B) and (C), individuals like Ronald P. Formisano are most certainly trying to redefine "Astroturfing" to include activities that would have made Barack Obama one of the most notorious Astroturfers in the history of politics.
- Here's the link to that Huffington Post video of a discussion about the definition of Astroturfing. According to my new best friend ArtifexMayhem, this source deserves more weight than Formisano because it actually discusses the definition of the word it's using. This is a 30-minute video but it's worth a very careful review. Watch for the comments by Edward Walker, the guy with eyeglasses who had to connect to the discussion via telephone, and John Hawkins, the guy wearing the headset. They're the ones who, in my opinion, really hit all the points we've been talking about. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 13:40, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- I'm the last person to break up a beautiful friendship, but AM said nothing specifically about that video clip and I think you may have missed his/her point. What was said is, "More weight is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of 'grassroots' as it applies to the Tea Party movement." This video clip source is indeed more weighty than one of the many news reports that merely stick in the word "grassroots" by rote when reporting about a protest or activist, etc., (you are up to 18 now, you said?). But that puts it on par with Formisano's The Tea Party: A Brief History, which goes to great lengths to discuss the grassroots and astroturfed aspects as they apply to the Tea Party. Same with Skocpol & Williamson's The Tea Party and the Remaking of Republican Conservatism. Starting at 26:30, Walker gives an accurate popular astroturf versus grassroots description, which doesn't contradict what reliable sources have been saying. He admits he is "unclear" about co-opting, and who co-opted whom, but he does acknowledge the grassroots activists, although he gets the timeline wrong about involvement in the movement. Walker is one of the lead proponents of the line of thought that (and I quote him) "The dividing line between “grassroots” and “Astroturf” may be more of a political Rorschach test than a precisely measurable concept. But, in any case, changing relationships between companies and the public—especially in the health domain—are leading more and more industries to institute grassroots mobilization programs." (See the "grassroots lobbying" form of astroturfing.)
- And as I said before... --P&W
- Repeated time and again, yes, without much change in the discussion. Instead of continuing to spin our wheels, how about we try to move the discussion forward? Maybe if we first developed this topic better in the body of the article, then summarize that content in the lead? Xenophrenic (talk) 21:01, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- Yes, it has been repeated — and no argument has been presented for inclusion of "astroturf". But perhaps we should concentrate on other matters. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 23:02, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- Except for the arguments that have been presented for inclusion of astroturf, but you would not be expected to know about those. Xenophrenic (talk) 00:58, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- "(See the "grassroots lobbying" form of astroturfing.)" - Xenophrenic
- All I've seen was not one mention of astroturfing. OR/SYN has no place in the mainspace. †TE†Talk 02:09, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- I see nothing wrong with the reliable sources' research or synthesis, and it appears to be well-founded conclusion rather than "personal belief". Xenophrenic (talk) 02:51, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Just doing my best to abide by Rule 1. Unfortunately, I must break it to avoid further misunderstanding: "Your OR/SYN has no place in the mainspace." †TE†Talk 03:07, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Of course Misplaced Pages editor opinions and beliefs have no place in mainspace; yours nor mine. I don't see why you feel compelled to state the obvious. We're discussing reliable sources, aren't we? I don't see where I've placed "OR/SYN" in mainspace, or even made a proposal that we do so. Maybe some other editor? Xenophrenic (talk) 03:26, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- "rassroots mobilization programs being referred to are astroturf" - Xenophrenic
- Well, definitely not in the source provided. Which is why I sometimes feel compelled to state, and restate the obvious. †TE†Talk 03:33, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Of course Misplaced Pages editor opinions and beliefs have no place in mainspace; yours nor mine. I don't see why you feel compelled to state the obvious. We're discussing reliable sources, aren't we? I don't see where I've placed "OR/SYN" in mainspace, or even made a proposal that we do so. Maybe some other editor? Xenophrenic (talk) 03:26, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Just doing my best to abide by Rule 1. Unfortunately, I must break it to avoid further misunderstanding: "Your OR/SYN has no place in the mainspace." †TE†Talk 03:07, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- I see nothing wrong with the reliable sources' research or synthesis, and it appears to be well-founded conclusion rather than "personal belief". Xenophrenic (talk) 02:51, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Except for the arguments that have been presented for inclusion of astroturf, but you would not be expected to know about those. Xenophrenic (talk) 00:58, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Yes, it has been repeated — and no argument has been presented for inclusion of "astroturf". But perhaps we should concentrate on other matters. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 23:02, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- I'm the last person to break up a beautiful friendship, but AM said nothing specifically about that video clip and I think you may have missed his/her point. What was said is, "More weight is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of 'grassroots' as it applies to the Tea Party movement." This video clip source is indeed more weighty than one of the many news reports that merely stick in the word "grassroots" by rote when reporting about a protest or activist, etc., (you are up to 18 now, you said?). But that puts it on par with Formisano's The Tea Party: A Brief History, which goes to great lengths to discuss the grassroots and astroturfed aspects as they apply to the Tea Party. Same with Skocpol & Williamson's The Tea Party and the Remaking of Republican Conservatism. Starting at 26:30, Walker gives an accurate popular astroturf versus grassroots description, which doesn't contradict what reliable sources have been saying. He admits he is "unclear" about co-opting, and who co-opted whom, but he does acknowledge the grassroots activists, although he gets the timeline wrong about involvement in the movement. Walker is one of the lead proponents of the line of thought that (and I quote him) "The dividing line between “grassroots” and “Astroturf” may be more of a political Rorschach test than a precisely measurable concept. But, in any case, changing relationships between companies and the public—especially in the health domain—are leading more and more industries to institute grassroots mobilization programs." (See the "grassroots lobbying" form of astroturfing.)
- It's true that (1) RS include funding sources in their definitions of grassroots and astroturfing (not "redefine", as funding sources have been part of the definition since the terms were created). (2) None of the sources we're presently discussing "quotes political opponents of the movement", so perhaps Arthur Rubin would be so kind as to indicate which sources he's talking about. Even our Misplaced Pages article notes that "grassroots" implies that the creation of the movement and the group supporting it are natural and spontaneous, highlighting the differences between this and a movement that is orchestrated by traditional power structures. While the reliable sources note there are grassroots activists, they also note the "movement" is controlled, directed and funded by traditional special interests. Why all the aversion to conveying what the reliable sources actually say? Xenophrenic (talk) 12:27, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- I'm the last person to break up a beautiful friendship, but AM said nothing specifically about that video clip ... Specifically, AM said, "More weight is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of 'grassroots' as it applies to the Tea Party movement." He did not include Formisano specifically, but the HuffPo video clip is included by definition because it actually discusses the meaning of that word. Formisano does discuss the grass-roots aspects, and what he's trying to redefine as "astroturfed" aspects of TPm. But he never really talks about what Astroturf means, let alone admit that he's trying to expand the definition by leaps and bounds. The multiple experts in the HuffPo clip do talk about what the word means. And it does not mean merely donating money to a Tea Party group. So no, according to AM, the HuffPo video clip deserves more weight than Formisano's book.
- "... are leading more and more industries to institute grassroots mobilization programs." Right. "GRASSROOTS mobilization programs." Community organizing. Not Astroturf. I think it's important to make it very clear how few of these sources actually say, "The Tea Party movement is partially Astroturfed." Skocpol doesn't say it, for example. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 02:31, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Except for the arguments that have been presented for inclusion of astroturf ... References to Astroturf are already included down in the body of the article, where minority opinions belong. Nobody is suggesting that they should be removed. What should be changing is the article's treatment of the word "grass-roots." That word goes into the lede sentence, where the majority opinion belongs. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 02:31, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- No, I really don't think AM indicated that your video clip is weight-ier than Formisano or Skocpol. Let's see if he'll clarify for us. And yes, the grassroots mobilization programs being referred to are astroturf; it's the new grassroots lobbying. As for Skocpol not being quoted as saying the TP movement is partially Astroturfed, how would you propose to convey what she did say? Xenophrenic (talk) 02:51, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Correct, I did not "indicated that video clip is weight-ier than Formisano or Skocpol." Per WP:RS, "When available, academic and peer-reviewed publications, scholarly monographs, and textbooks are usually the most reliable sources." I.e., Formisano and Skocpol are the types of sources we should prefer. — ArtifexMayhem (talk) 06:23, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Quote her directly. At one point she says that the TPm is a grass-roots movement, supported by deep-pockets money like the Koch Brothers and "amplified" by conservative media such as Fox News and Breitbart. That is what she actually said: her own opinion, in her own words, which didn't include the use of the word "Astroturf." Quote that paragraph of her book. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 17:07, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Quote "her" directly? Don't you mean "them"? Neither Skocpol nor Williamson mention a "grassroots movement". They do mention grassroots activists-people-enthusiasts-adherents-protesters ... you know, the individuals who are genuinely grassroots but only part of the movement. One component of the movement out of three. Perhaps that is part of the misunderstanding here. You make a big deal out of the fact that the word "astroturf" is rarely used by Skocpol, yet she nonetheless writes a lot about astroturfing. She explains how the movement is neither wholly grassroots or astroturfed. It isn't necessary to repeatedly spell out a-s-t-r-o-t-u-r-f to discuss "top-down" organizing, or "supposedly" grassroots activity, or "elitist" co-opting and control or "the super rich fat-cats who have manipulated Tea Party activism with such glee". It is still astroturf she is describing. Formisano spells it out as well: So what is the answer to the question posed at the beginning of this chapter: "Astroturf or Grassroots Populism?" The simple answer is that the Tea Parties have been created by both kinds of populism, in part by the few -- the corporate lobbyists from above--but also from the passionate many expressing real grassroots populism. Or The Tea Partiers, finally, are routinely referred to in the media as conservatives. But their blend of astroturf and grassroots populism is more accurately labeled right-wing or reactionary populism. You claimed above that if pro-Obama groups were to do what FreedomWorks, Americans for Prosperity, etc., were doing, it would be called "community organizing". No, it wouldn't. It would (and has) been called what it is:
More recent advocacy events have likewise shown an apparent lack of spontaneous organization, most notably some of the early “Tea Party” protests. Following CNBC pundit Rick Santelli’s call, in February 2009, for a “‘Chicago Tea Party’” to oppose President Obama’s mortgage bailout plan, numerous websites dedicated to the cause sprang to life, each supposedly part of a national grassroots Internet protest and each tied to the Sam Adams Alliance advocacy group. This group in turn enjoyed substantial financial support from the Koch family, multibillionaire owners of one of the largest privately-held corporations in the United States, and FreedomWorks, a public relations firm with former House Majority leader Dick Armey as its chairman, and which the Kochs have funded. The above examples highlight a phenomenon more widely known as “Astroturfing,” or fake grassroots advocacy, a practice that has become popular among particular groups and individuals. Connecticut Law Review
- This has been acknowledged as astroturf activity for decades. If you insist on having such nuanced subject matter appear in the lead of the article, we could say something similar to:
- The Tea Party movement is an American political movement that advocates reducing the U.S. national debt and federal budget deficit by reducing U.S. government spending and taxes. The movement comprises both grassroots and astroturf components, including passionate activists, wealthy political action committees and national advocacy groups, establishment elites and conservative media outlets. The movement has been called partly conservative, partly libertarian, and partly populist. It has sponsored protests and supported political candidates since 2009.
- What are your thoughts? Xenophrenic (talk) 00:50, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
- Quote her directly. At one point she says that the TPm is a grass-roots movement, supported by deep-pockets money like the Koch Brothers and "amplified" by conservative media such as Fox News and Breitbart. That is what she actually said: her own opinion, in her own words, which didn't include the use of the word "Astroturf." Quote that paragraph of her book. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 17:07, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Correct, I did not "indicated that video clip is weight-ier than Formisano or Skocpol." Per WP:RS, "When available, academic and peer-reviewed publications, scholarly monographs, and textbooks are usually the most reliable sources." I.e., Formisano and Skocpol are the types of sources we should prefer. — ArtifexMayhem (talk) 06:23, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- No, I really don't think AM indicated that your video clip is weight-ier than Formisano or Skocpol. Let's see if he'll clarify for us. And yes, the grassroots mobilization programs being referred to are astroturf; it's the new grassroots lobbying. As for Skocpol not being quoted as saying the TP movement is partially Astroturfed, how would you propose to convey what she did say? Xenophrenic (talk) 02:51, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- The video teleconference posted by The Huffington Post interviewed four different academics simultaneously. It deserves at least as much weight. And as you said, the four academics do actually discuss the meaning of the words they're using, so unless I'm mistaken about what you said, or you've suddenly changed your mind, that source deserves even more weight than Formisano or Skocpol. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 17:07, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Four different academics? Walker was the only academic in that group, and there were two Tea Partiers and an executive from "Yes! magazine". Information from Walker can be considered, although he admits he is "unclear" about the co-opting of the Tea Party. Formisano and Skocpol do indeed discuss how the TP is grassroots and astroturfed, so it appears that you are mistaken about what was said. Hopefully that helps. Xenophrenic (talk) 00:50, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
- The video teleconference posted by The Huffington Post interviewed four different academics simultaneously. It deserves at least as much weight. And as you said, the four academics do actually discuss the meaning of the words they're using, so unless I'm mistaken about what you said, or you've suddenly changed your mind, that source deserves even more weight than Formisano or Skocpol. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 17:07, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- And yes, the grassroots mobilization programs being referred to are astroturf ... According to who? A pseudonymous Misplaced Pages editor's WP:OR? One history professor at the University of Kentucky? Or a demonstrated consensus across the entire profession of political science, supporting that redefinition of the term "Astroturf" by that history professor from the University of Kentucky? Because only the third one will be sufficient to support that statement. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 05:31, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- You lost me with the U-of-Kentucky reference ... name? I'm also not citing any Misplaced Pages editors. As for your characterization that astroturfing has been redefined, I'd like to see what source you are citing that to, because that's news to me. I do see that there are newer terms like "grassroots lobbying", "astroturf lobbying" and "grassroots mobilization" being introduced over the past decade, but I am unaware of any actual redefining of astroturfing. Xenophrenic (talk) 00:50, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
- I caught the "history professor at the University of Kentucky" reference right away, and that's even without previously bragging about owning his book. †TE†Talk 07:36, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
- I wish I was as quick on the uptake; you are both speaking of Formisano? I do have the book (borrowed, not owned), and nowhere in it does it mention him as a professor at UofK. He's been referred to simply as "Formisano" in these discussions, so the new referense threw me. I've just Google'd him - looks like an impressive fellow. Xenophrenic (talk) 17:33, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
- I caught the "history professor at the University of Kentucky" reference right away, and that's even without previously bragging about owning his book. †TE†Talk 07:36, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
- You lost me with the U-of-Kentucky reference ... name? I'm also not citing any Misplaced Pages editors. As for your characterization that astroturfing has been redefined, I'd like to see what source you are citing that to, because that's news to me. I do see that there are newer terms like "grassroots lobbying", "astroturf lobbying" and "grassroots mobilization" being introduced over the past decade, but I am unaware of any actual redefining of astroturfing. Xenophrenic (talk) 00:50, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
Opponents of the proposed edit adding the word "grass-roots" to the lede have cited three sources, generally referred to here as "Skocpol," "Formisano," and "Zellner." Skocpol doesn't support use of the term "Astroturfing." Formisano does, but is trying to expand the definition of "Astroturfing" in doing so. Here's a link to an op-ed column by Formisano: Here's another: Formisano clearly likes Barack Obama very, very much and his bias most likely seeps into his writing about TPm. Zellner, while focusing his article on Astroturfed lobbying efforts, decided to do a drive-by on the Tea Party. He not only supports the expanded definition of "Astroturfing," but he relies exclusively on sources that Misplaced Pages would not consider reliable sources: an AlterNet article, and the partisan Paul Krugman op-ed column. (Check his footnotes.) Furthermore, at the time he wrote the article in November 2010, he was not a professor. He has never been a professor. He was a law student at the time, seeking to obtain a JD the following spring. This is not an academic, certainly not of the same caliber as Elizabeth Price Foley, and should not be presented as one.
Meanwhile here is a sampling of the reliable, neutral sources supporting a description of TPm as "grass-roots," period, full stop: three from the New York Times, two from the Washington Post, one from Reuters, one from National Public Radio, one from Huffington Post of all places, a very interesting 30-minute webcam round-table discussion hosted by the Huffington Post, one from the Chicago Tribune, and a Harvard PDF in which Theda Skocpol, of all people, says that "Thus the grassroots Tea Party phenomenon is real ..."
The 30-minute webcam round table hosted by HuffPo, in a very interesting exchange of ideas, explores what is actually meant by the term "Astroturfing." The mere addition of money, even from people like the Koch Brothers, does not negate the grass-roots nature of the movement. Only if the money is being used to pretend that there is genuine grass-roots support for a particular position where no grass-roots support actually exists can it legitimately be called Astroturfing. It is painfully obvious that the majority viewpoint, per WP:WEIGHT, is that TPm is a grass-roots movement, even if we don't count the Tea Party's self-serving claims — which we should count under WP:SELFSOURCE. Accordingly, using the Waterboarding article as an example, this majority viewpoint should be stated in the lede sentence.
Regarding the "Other events" section, it was orphaned by removal of the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" section, and should accompany that section in the spin-off article. These "other events" are not notable enough to be included in a top-level article written in summary style.
Regarding the "Commentaries on origins," they're partisan and, for the most part, not notable enough to be included in a top-level article written in summary style. The Tobacco Control article never should have been mentioned in this article's mainspace. Here's a harsh analysis of that Tobacco Control study. And in their grant proposal to obtain public funding from NIH, the authors of the study basically admitted that they had a political agenda in seeking this funding: the anti-smoking lobby "requires understanding how the tobacco industry maintains a favorable social and policy environment" As the contributor at Huffington Post sarcastically observed, it's hard to tell the difference between this stated objective, and political opposition research. Also, here's an examination of the chief author of the study, Stanton Glantz, and his research:
- It isn't necessary to repeatedly spell out a-s-t-r-o-t-u-r-f to discuss "top-down" organizing ... Yes, it is necessary to say it at least once: "These activities by this Tea Party group were Astroturfing." To establish a different standard violates WP:SYNTH. Astroturfing has a very specific meaning, and the activities described by Formisano and Zellner do not satisfy that definition. The term has very negative connotations, indicating that something fraudulent (or at least very dishonest) is going on, which is why the TPm's political enemies have been trying so hard for so many years to hang that word around the Tea Party's neck. We've officially discussed this to death. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 01:51, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
- Why argue against "Opponents of the proposed edit adding the word 'grass-roots' to the lede"? That's why this conversation keeps repeating itself, because of mis-framing of the discussion. I have no problem with "grassroots" being in the lead, as long as the astroturfed aspect of the movement is also added according to reliable sources. Here is a proposed sentence for the lede that addresses your request to mention "grassroots" in the lead, while also sticking to what reliable sources say:
- The movement comprises both grassroots and astroturf components, including passionate activists, wealthy political action committees and national advocacy groups, establishment elites and conservative media outlets.
- We can add Formisano, Skocpol and Zellner cites at the end of the sentence, along with any of the dozen cites you've linked above. I've looked at each of those sources and not a single one refutes the astroturf aspect of the movement. In fact, your two NPR sources confirm the heterogeneous nature of the movement. (On one end, it very much is a grassroots movement ... But then on the other hand, you have sort of an establishment that is somewhat preexisting. And these are the folks who have come to the game with a great deal of money, if not a great deal of energy ... So you have two things going on at once here, is what you're saying ... there is also this political structure and corporate structure that's driving them a little bit.) Your NYT source also confirms the heterogeneous nature of the movement. (This anti-government, grass-roots Republican offshoot has rattled the party establishment ... Some of the money behind the Tea Party movement or its offshoots has little in common with grass-roots populism.) Harvard's Skocpol confirms the heterogeneous nature of the movement. (Many supporters also proclaim the Tea Party to be purely a grassroots rebellion ... overlooks the fact that the Tea Party, understood in its entirety, includes media hosts and wealthy political action committees, plus national advocacy groups and self-proclaimed spokespersons – elites that wield many millions of dollars in political contributions and appear all over the media claiming to speak for grassroots activists ... Considered in its entirety, the Tea Party is neither a top-down creation nor a bottom-up explosion. Each force is important in its own right, and their interaction is what gives the Tea Party its dynamism, drama, and wallop. ... Grassroots activists, roving billionaire advocates, and right-wing media purveyors—these three forces, together, create the Tea Party...)
- Why argue against "Opponents of the proposed edit adding the word 'grass-roots' to the lede"? That's why this conversation keeps repeating itself, because of mis-framing of the discussion. I have no problem with "grassroots" being in the lead, as long as the astroturfed aspect of the movement is also added according to reliable sources. Here is a proposed sentence for the lede that addresses your request to mention "grassroots" in the lead, while also sticking to what reliable sources say:
- None of your sources refute the astroturf component of the movement; they only confirm the grassroots component.
- Your personal opinions about what constitutes "astroturf" (i.e.; Only if the money is being used to pretend that there is genuine grass-roots support for a particular position where no grass-roots support actually exists can it legitimately be called Astroturfing) are trumped by what reliable sources say constitutes astroturf.
- Your personal opinions about the reliability of academic sources ("he likes Obama"; "he uses sources we wouldn't use"; etc.) aren't convincing. Try WP:RSN?
- Your personal opinion that it's not "Astroturf" if it is instead called "fake grassroots", "top-down manipulation", "artifical grassroots lobbying", etc., isn't really applicable in this discussion.
- Xenophrenic (talk) 07:52, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
- Actually, it is within our remit as editors to consider the context and determine how much weight to give to a particular source once it has satisfied basic WP:RS requirements. Let's walk through the rules on that. Rule 1 is we're supposed to give greater weight to both peer-reviewed academic sources and fact-checked news organizations. However, Rule 2 says Formisano's track record as a fawning op-ed writer for Team Obama weakens his status as a reliable, neutral source, and the weight we should give that source. From WP:RS — context matters very, very much: "The reliability of a source depends on context. Each source must be carefully weighed to judge whether it is reliable for the statement being made and is an appropriate source for that content." Rule 3 specifically addresses biased or opinionated sources and advises caution: "Misplaced Pages articles are required to present a neutral point of view. However, reliable sources are not required to be neutral, unbiased, or objective. Common sources of bias include political, financial, religious, philosophical, or other beliefs." In this case, Formisano's expressed political beliefs reduce the weight that should be given to his opinion.
- That brings us to Zellner, the law student. Sorry, he's not an academic like the other authors described here, such as Elizabeth Price Foley. He's graduated from law school now, and he's practicing law in Connecticut. His weakened status as a source is confirmed by the weak, heavily biased sources that he chose to rely upon. Remember, context matters. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 14:05, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
- reliable sources are not required to be neutral, unbiased, or objective.
- Each source must be carefully weighed to judge whether it is reliable for the statement being made and is an appropriate source for that content.
- Either we are in agreement, P&W, or the policies you cite don't say what you think they do. (I'm guessing the latter.) Since you, me, and Policy, all appear to agree, any further concerns you have with the above named sources should be raised at WP:RSN. I'll be happy to meet you there, and I'll allow you the benefit of phrasing and framing the initial argument. Xenophrenic (talk) 17:47, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
- I have no problem with "grassroots" being in the lead, as long as the astroturfed aspect of the movement is also added according to reliable sources It's too bad that the sources supporting "TPm is partially Astroturfed" are such a tiny minority according to WP:WEIGHT. For that policy based reason, the word "Astroturf" belongs down in the body of the article where it currently resides, but the word "grass-roots" belongs in the lede sentence. We can modify it the way Skocpol did, "supported by deep pocket donors and amplified by conservative media," but the word "Astroturfing" does not belong in the lede because it's a minority viewpoint.
- Your personal opinion that it's not "Astroturf" if it is instead called "fake grassroots", "top-down manipulation", "artifical grassroots lobbying", etc., isn't really applicable in this discussion. It isn't a personal opinion. It's Misplaced Pages policy: WP:SYNTH. Also, I haven't seen a source describing it as "fake grassroots," or "artificial grassroots lobbying." The sources that allegedly support "TPm is partially Astroturfed," for the most part, do not say what's being claimed.
- I've looked at each of those sources and not a single one refutes the astroturf aspect of the movement. Refutation of that alleged aspect is implicit in the statement, "TPm is a grass-roots movement," just as refutation of "Substantial portions of the elephant are plant-like material" is implicit in the statement, "The elephant is an animal." The mere addition of deep pockets money does not compromise the grass-roots nature of the movement. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 11:38, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
- The sources supporting TPm is partially Astroturfed are such a tiny minority? Incorrect; you have produced zero sources refuting that fact, which makes it not only a majority, but an overwhelming unanimous majority.
- It isn't a personal opinion, it's Misplaced Pages policy: WP:SYNTH? Incorrect, not when reliable sources are doing the sysnthesis. WP:SYNTH applies to Misplaced Pages editors, not expert sources researching the matter.
- Refutation of astroturf aspects is implicit in the grassroots statement? Incorrect; reliable sources explain that genuinely grassroots activists can be manipulated and co-opted by astroturfing groups. (And it's a good thing, too, else a bunch of citizens upset at bailouts never would have been organized and channeled into a 'movement', according to sources.) The fact that a hybrid vehicle can run on gasoline does not refute the fact that it also runs on electricity. Why argue to mention gas in the lead, without mentioning electricity? Xenophrenic (talk) 17:04, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
I consider these vague terms to be a waste of time. But "astroturf" as an overall characterization of the movement is beyond fringe. And so trying to maneuver that in is a complete wp:snow waste of time. And the TPM is about as grassroots as any large movement has been or can be. As far as overall characterizations by sources, I think "grassroots" has about a 30:1 advantage over "astroturf" with the "1" going to zero if you limit it to impartial sources. I even consider spending much time arguing for "grass roots" to be a waste of time even thought it is appropriate. North8000 (talk) 11:50, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
- I don't think I've seen reliable sources showing astroturf as an "overall characteristic", but rather just one component of the whole. Attempting to describe the movement as overall astroturfed would indeed be fringe, but no one is doing that. Reliable sources have explained the astroturf aspect in detail, and there has been zero refutation of it, so the only "maneuvering" appears to be avoid acknowledging it. Your apples to oranges numeric comparison doesn't apply here, unless you would equally argue that "since 30:1 overall sources characterize the movement as 'conservative' over 'grassroots', we shouldn't mention grassroots". Make that 100:1 sources that avoid mentioning 'grassroots' at all when describing the movement.
- The uncontested fact is that the movement comprises both astroturf and grassroots aspects. Our article should convey what reliable sources convey; it's policy. The "astroturf" part of the description does indeed carry with it negative connotations, so I can understand the impetus to avoid mentioning it. I'm not oblivious to the shotgun-arguments attempt to that end:
- — try to deny the reliability of the sources ("not impartial"; "likes Obama!"; "that award-winning source is a student, not a professor!")
- — try to set up a false equivalency ("more sources say grassroots than astroturf!")
- — try to deny standard definitions and applications of the word "astroturfing" ("that reliable source is redefining astroturf!")
- — try to misapply WP:WEIGHT and WP:V ("you are only citing 3 reliable sources that say astroturf is part of the movement!")
- I agree with you that it's a time sink, but I think that's because circular argumentation is being used to try to convey something other than what reliable sources convey. Xenophrenic (talk) 17:04, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
- I guess the only reason for coupling the two terms in discussions is that they are sort of opposites of each other. One additional note: Between the two terms, we must recognize that astroturf is a more extreme one (being an outright direct pejorative) than "grass roots" and inherently an argument for an extreme term is much more likely to fall short than an argument for a more moderate term. My main point is that I consider both words to be vague and a waste of time, but (regarding overall characterization) the case for "grass roots" is about 30 times stronger than "astroturf" and the grass roots aspects are immensely more prevalent the astroturf aspects. North8000 (talk) 17:24, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
- Technically, they aren't really opposites; in the most common usage, they are quite similar with the defining difference being that one is inauthentic (fake, manufactured, not genuine, contrived, bogus, etc.). The words can be used as both nouns and adjectives, which adds to the confusion. As for being pejorative, even that is changing, as the lines between astroturfing and legitimate advocacy mobilization are being blurred. If you can get a copy of New Technology, Organizational Change and Governance by Emmanuelle Avril & Christine Zumello, you can find an excellent explanation of astroturf organizations which
Sound familiar? The "case for" grassroots and astroturf are identical (as in, both factual ... there is no such thing as a "stronger" fact, something either is or isn't factual). The fact that you see "grassroots" more often in news reports about TP activists or TP protest groups are because that's what those news reporters are focusing on in their report: the activists, the protesters and their message ... not the movement or the astroturfed part of it. You keep tossing around the number "30" as if you think WP:WEIGHT refers to prominence/prevalence OF sources, rather than IN sources. In every reliable source that looks at the grassroots and astroturf aspects of the movement, you'll find both aspects to be equally prominent. Xenophrenic (talk) 20:02, 15 July 2013 (UTC)turn upside down the definition and spontaneity of grassroots mobilization since they help materialize an inverted movement. They, in essence, groom the potential roots of a movement; they try to locate the potential defenders of a cause in order to aggregate them through a digital network and mobilization that appears to be spontaneous, but is not.
- We're talking about two different things here. I've have been talking about characterizations of the (overall) movement, and, with respect to astroturfing (which would certainly leave out astroturfed, and almost certainly include grassroots) and you are basically talking about existence (to some extent) of elements of each. The former is more appropriate to a lead sentence, the latter is more appropriate for elements (major or minor) in the body of the article. And I consider both terms to be vague = uninformative = a waste of time. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 20:31, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
- We are all talking about the characterizations of the movement as a whole, as are the reliable sources I've cited. (Those sources include Skocpol, Formisano, Zellner and the two NPR and a NYT source from P&W's list.) Xenophrenic (talk) 09:20, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
- Well,at least we have that clarity going forward. But that somewhat refutes some of your previous points, which essentially implied that the mere existence of a astroturf component (however small) is relevant to the conversation. Second, by "reliable" to you mean actually reliable or meeting the "floor" of wp:rs? Highly biased unreliable writers often meet the meet the "floor" of wp:rs and should be used in that context (attributed etc.) Finally there is the question of which used which words as an overall characterization of the movement. North8000 (talk) 12:40, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
- That wasn't my point at all. My point, explicitly stated, is that reliable sources very clearly convey that the "movement" consists of both grassroots components and astroturf components. It is not wholly one or the other, but a combination of both. By "reliable sources", I mean Reliable Sources as defined by Misplaced Pages policy, nothing more, nothing less. If you feel a cited reliable source is not suitable for supporting the assertion of fact (that means stated in Misplaced Pages's voice without the need for attribution), then let's bring that source and the relevant supported text to WP:RSN for a thorough airing. To your final point, what does Skocpol's "Considered in its entirety, the Tea Party is neither a top-down creation, nor a bottom-up explosion", mean to you? That's "overall". Xenophrenic (talk) 17:48, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
- Well,at least we have that clarity going forward. But that somewhat refutes some of your previous points, which essentially implied that the mere existence of a astroturf component (however small) is relevant to the conversation. Second, by "reliable" to you mean actually reliable or meeting the "floor" of wp:rs? Highly biased unreliable writers often meet the meet the "floor" of wp:rs and should be used in that context (attributed etc.) Finally there is the question of which used which words as an overall characterization of the movement. North8000 (talk) 12:40, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
- We are all talking about the characterizations of the movement as a whole, as are the reliable sources I've cited. (Those sources include Skocpol, Formisano, Zellner and the two NPR and a NYT source from P&W's list.) Xenophrenic (talk) 09:20, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
- We're talking about two different things here. I've have been talking about characterizations of the (overall) movement, and, with respect to astroturfing (which would certainly leave out astroturfed, and almost certainly include grassroots) and you are basically talking about existence (to some extent) of elements of each. The former is more appropriate to a lead sentence, the latter is more appropriate for elements (major or minor) in the body of the article. And I consider both terms to be vague = uninformative = a waste of time. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 20:31, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
- Technically, they aren't really opposites; in the most common usage, they are quite similar with the defining difference being that one is inauthentic (fake, manufactured, not genuine, contrived, bogus, etc.). The words can be used as both nouns and adjectives, which adds to the confusion. As for being pejorative, even that is changing, as the lines between astroturfing and legitimate advocacy mobilization are being blurred. If you can get a copy of New Technology, Organizational Change and Governance by Emmanuelle Avril & Christine Zumello, you can find an excellent explanation of astroturf organizations which
Proposal
Ok. In the last week or so, I went through this enormous discussion. I reread some sections at times to get a better idea of this discussion. Forgive me if I missed anything as I am working through a lot of comments in my head as I write this. It would seem that editors in this discussion page are divided about how to describe this movement. I have a proposed statement, that may be reworded accordingly to fit the article structure, that may appease both sides of the discussion without misleading or POVing the article.
- The Tea Party movement is generally viewed as a grass-roots movement, with occasional views of it being astroturfed.
or
- The Tea Party movement is mostly viewed as a grass-roots movement with some viewing it as an astroturf.
Something along those lines. Any thoughts?—cyberpower Online 17:40, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you for taking a look at the discussion(s). It is indeed rather lengthy, and has been a point of contention since the Tea Party first appeared. Since you asked, here are my initial thoughts on the wording you have proposed:
- 1) The division between editors falls into two sides: those who want to mention "grassroots" in the lead without mentioning "astroturf", and those who want to mention both grassroots and astroturf in the lead.
- 2) I don't think I've seen any reliable sources that declare the "movement" (the subject of our article) is wholly astroturfed, so both of the above proposed sentences might be hard to support with reliable sources. Reliable sources are always careful to note that the movement is only partially astroturfed while also having a large grassroots component.
- 3) Wording such as "some viewing it as" or "occassional views of it being" give the impression to the reader that the "astroturf" aspect of the movement is just an opinion. Just to clarify, is that what you were intending to convey to the reader?
- 4) It would probably be beneficial if we noted which sources we are to cite for this (or any other) proposed wording, as there also seems to be some disagreement among editors as to which sources are suitable.
- Xenophrenic (talk) 18:13, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
Try:
- The Tea Party movement is generally viewed as a grass-roots movement, with some pointing out partial funding from corporations and wealthy donors
Avoiding the quite problematic neologism "astroturf". And quite neutral in tone, as well as being easily sourced. Collect (talk) 18:42, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
- This is a compromise version I've previously mentioned, slightly modified below, easily sourced in the works of Skocpol et al.:
- The Tea Party movement is generally viewed as a grass-roots movement, with some noting that conservative news media amplify the movement's message, and corporations and wealthy donors provide some of its funding.
- The word "amplified" is used by Theda Skocpol, a political science professor at Harvard, and the most reliable source provided by the tiny "partially Astroturfed" crowd, so this may work. But Misplaced Pages articles do not elevate small minority viewpoints to appear in the lede like that, as I've repeatedly demonstrated with reference to the lede of the Waterboarding article. There are many, many other Misplaced Pages articles I could link that discuss small minority viewpoints down in the body of the article but do not mention them in the lede. The lede is for unchallenged facts and, where viewpoints on the evidence differ, the lede is also for majority viewpoints. Not minority viewpoints. So this is a dead end, and has always been a dead end. An overwhelming majority of reliable sources — including peer-reviewed academics, fact-checked news organizations, and the Tea Party groups themselves, whose self-published websites we're required to treat as reliable sources, see WP:SELFSOURCE — describe the TPm unequivocally, without reservation, as a "grass-roots movement" or its members as "grass-roots activists." Period. Full stop.
- Essentially, you are asking us to concede and let Xenophrenic have his way, when the overwhelming majority of sources, comparable Misplaced Pages articles, and Misplaced Pages policy say that it is Xenophrenic who should be conceding. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 19:03, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
- "with some pointing out" is problematic in that it still insinuates opinion as a vague attribution, and begs the question: who says so? (And that would result in the citing of a great many sources, not just the three mentioned above.) Neutral in tone would be to use "some view" to go with "some point out", but I prefer to leave the word "some" out completely. I think the most straight-forward way to convey what reliable sources say is "The movement comprises both this and that" or "consists of" or "is made up of". Working with your (Collect's) wording as a base, how would you feel about:
- The Tea Party movement is generally viewed as partially grassroots and partially funded and directed by corporations and wealthy individuals ...
- (I should note that the last part, if we really follow reliable sources, should also say advocacy groups and political elites, but in the interest of brevity and compromise that can be relegated to the body of the article.) Xenophrenic (talk) 19:34, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
- @P&W: The fact that the movement has an astroturfed component, along with the more visible (and therefore more mentioned) grassroots component, is not a "small minority viewpoint". I would discuss further your misunderstanding of that applicable policy, but I am pressed for time at the moment, so I'll settle for saying there you go again. Xenophrenic (talk) 19:43, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
- I proposed a compromise - I suggest your ultimata are not going to get others to move past my suggestion by even a millimeter -- in fact I think I am pushing as far towards your POV as is possible with any prospect of reaching consensus. Cheers - but trying to get me to move further towards your wording is not gonna happen. Collect (talk) 21:05, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
- Your attempt to push toward the POV of the reliable sources is noted, but I contend that merely moving closer to what sources say is insufficient; we should be saying what the reliable sources say. But this appears moot, as suggestions from both you and me have been shot down by others. Xenophrenic (talk) 21:35, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
- Then here is what I suggest. Everyone here will propose what to add to the article. "Nothing" is an acceptable option. If it's already proposed, then don't propose it again. Then we will remove the least favored ones until we have a result. I think this might be the only way to get this to have a fixed outcome.—cyberpower Online 13:02, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
- Is there a list of proposed additions, already, or should we start over? — Arthur Rubin (talk) 15:27, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
- We should start over.—cyberpower Online 19:22, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
- Is there a list of proposed additions, already, or should we start over? — Arthur Rubin (talk) 15:27, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
New Start
Proposal 1
Then let's start over. My proposal is to simply add the word "grass-roots" to the lede sentence as follows: "The Tea Party movement is an American grass-roots political movement that advocates ..." The policy-based arguments supporting this have already been posted at length. To make a long story short, there are 20+ reliable sources stating that it's a "grass-roots movement," period, full stop. And there are three sources that say something else: one of which is most likely biased, one of which was written by a law student rather than a professor (and relies on sources Misplaced Pages doesn't consider reliable), and no two of which say the same thing on this subject. WP:WEIGHT is clear about this. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 14:11, 22 July 2013 (UTC)
- This is one proposal. Others may now support or oppose this proposal and throw in their own proposal to be handled the same way.—cyberpower Online 15:30, 22 July 2013 (UTC)
- Oppose for the reasons already exhaustively discussed. Inserting just "grassroots", when countless reliable sources indicate that the movement is not completely grassroots, would be a gross violation of Misplaced Pages policy -- WP:NPOV in particular. The false argument that there are only 3 reliable sources refuting your personal opinion has been disproven; there are many, not just 3. The false argument that those sources are unsuitable due to bias or sourcing issues has been disproven; they are highly reliable. The false argument that those particular 3 sources don't all, in unison, say that the TP movement is not 100% grassroots has been disproven; they all state that. Xenophrenic (talk) 16:47, 22 July 2013 (UTC)
- Support as going in the right direction. It's a grass-roots political movement. Period. That some corporate or "right-wing news media" support the movement does not make it other than grass-roots. I would not object to a neutral expression of that fact in the lead, but using the term "astroturf" is WP:OR or, to be more precise, an original definition of "astroturf". — Arthur Rubin (talk) 20:20, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
- It's a grass-roots political movement. Period.
- Really? So when Zeitlow, whom we have no problem quoting elsewhere, says, "The degree to which the Tea Party movement is a grassroots movement is debatable. Tea Party organizers have received extensive financial support from prominent conservative think-tanks and financiers", we can simply cite you to end that debate? Or do you have a source that Misplaced Pages would actually consider reliable instead? When several professors are published by Oxford University Press and say, "The defining feature of astroturf groups is that they are generated by an industry, think tank, or front group, but designed to appear as a spontaneous, popular 'grassroots' effort. Especially important are the roles played by the Koch-funded Americans for Prosperity and FreedomWorks front groups in generating a significant portion of the 'Tea Party'...", should I inform them that they are conducting original research? Xenophrenic (talk) 21:21, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
- The defining feature of astroturf groups is that they are generated by an industry, think tank, or front group, but designed to appear as a spontaneous, popular 'grassroots' effort. OK, but Especially important are the roles played by the Koch-funded Americans for Prosperity and FreedomWorks front groups in generating a significant portion of the 'Tea Party' is the only mention of Tea Party in that book, and seems to be a fringe position, even among the sources that
youhave been claimed to support the "astroturf" position; not even their sources agree. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 00:26, 24 July 2013 (UTC)- Incorrect; there are at least a few mentions of the Tea Party, FreedomWorks and Americans for Prosperity. And the cited sources agree, and I think you know that, because you would have quickly cited the actual discrepency if there really was one. If I understand you correctly, you are saying that all of the highly reliable sources that say the movement is not 100% grassroots are espousing a "fringe theory", correct? If so, I plan to raise your concern and your specific argument at WP:FTN (and I'll be sure to credit you). Xenophrenic (talk) 06:58, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
- Okay, since you haven't objected, I'll raise your "fringe position" concern at WP:FTN this evening. Hopefully, we can get it resolved. Xenophrenic (talk) 21:12, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- The defining feature of astroturf groups is that they are generated by an industry, think tank, or front group, but designed to appear as a spontaneous, popular 'grassroots' effort. OK, but Especially important are the roles played by the Koch-funded Americans for Prosperity and FreedomWorks front groups in generating a significant portion of the 'Tea Party' is the only mention of Tea Party in that book, and seems to be a fringe position, even among the sources that
- Oppose per Xenophrenic's reasons. —wing gundam 21:34, 7 August 2013 (UTC)
Proposal 2
Add to the lede: "The movement comprises both grassroots and astroturf components, including concerned citizen activists, wealthy political action committees and national advocacy groups, establishment elites and conservative media outlets. The policy-based arguments supporting this have already been exhaustively discussed. There are 20+ reliable sources stating that the TPm is not completely grassroots. There are zero reliable sources that refute the astroturfed components of the movement. Some editors are promoting their personal opinion that the "TPm is 100% grass-roots", in violation of WP:WEIGHT. Xenophrenic (talk) 16:47, 22 July 2013 (UTC)
- Oppose as not even going the right direction. There is one reliable source which uses the term "astroturf" to apply to the TPm, and he redefines it. The list of supporting organization types might belong in the lead. I might support the edit if it were rewritten as "the movement as a grass-roots movement, supported by . — Arthur Rubin (talk) 20:17, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
- Please cite this "one reliable source" that redefines "astroturf", and cite that redefinition, please, so we can all review it. Is this the redefinition of which you speak? "The Astroturf Metaphor asserts that conservative leadership organizations provided resources, direction, and standardized messages that were crucial in instigating Tea Party protests." Please direct me to the source you are using that says that is a "redfinition", please. Just so we're all on the same page. Xenophrenic (talk) 21:21, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
- "Component" is a very low bar and certainly is not enough to qualify for being a characterization. North8000 (talk) 23:59, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
- "Component" is my word. What word do you think would more accurately convey what the reliable sources convey? Actually, we can remove that word completely without disrupting the meaning. Would that suffice? Xenophrenic (talk) 06:58, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
- (Actually, that's not the source I had in mind which redefined "astroturf". It's still a different definition, though.) Well, I can't prove it's a redefinition, only that it's different than any other definition proposed, including the one in our article astroturfing. If it weren't a redefinition, it could appear in this article, but with "grass-roots" linked (because it does match our definition) and astroturfing not linked. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 00:14, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
- It's not a different definition. And linking to "grassroots" means it would have to comply with "the creation of the movement and the group supporting it are natural and spontaneous, highlighting the differences between this and a movement that is orchestrated by traditional power structures", which isn't wholly true. Xenophrenic (talk) 07:01, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
- "Component" is a very low bar and certainly is not enough to qualify for being a characterization. North8000 (talk) 23:59, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
- Please cite this "one reliable source" that redefines "astroturf", and cite that redefinition, please, so we can all review it. Is this the redefinition of which you speak? "The Astroturf Metaphor asserts that conservative leadership organizations provided resources, direction, and standardized messages that were crucial in instigating Tea Party protests." Please direct me to the source you are using that says that is a "redfinition", please. Just so we're all on the same page. Xenophrenic (talk) 21:21, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
- Oppose for the reasons I've already stated. The majority viewpoint per WP:WEIGHT, supported by at least one peer-reviewed academic source, 18 fact-checked news organization sources, and five WP:SELFPUB sources, is "The Tea Party movement is a grass-roots movement," period, full stop. WP:WEIGHT will not allow us to elevate a minority viewpoint to be stated as a fact in the lede.
- Inserting just "grassroots", when countless reliable sources indicate that the movement is not completely grassroots ... "Countless"? Try "three," and no two of them say the same thing.
- The false argument that there are only 3 reliable sources refuting your personal opinion has been disproven; there are many, not just 3. This is a false statement. There are three, and no two of them say the same thing.
- The false argument that those sources are unsuitable due to bias or sourcing issues has been disproven; they are highly reliable. This is also a false statement. It has not been disproven. You suggested taking this to WP:RSN but you didn't do it. WP:RS allows us, as editors, to consider both context and potential bias in determining how much weight should be given to a particular source. Clearly, the consensus of editors here is that these sources don't merit enough weight to outweigh 24+ reliable sources that say, "The Tea Party is a grass-roots movement," period, full stop.
- The false argument that those particular 3 sources don't all, in unison, say that the TP movement is not 100% grassroots has been disproven; they all state that. This is a statement based on a false premise. The false premise is that they represent one unified viewpoint. They don't. While all three say that the Tea Party movement is not 100% grassroots, there the resemblance ends. Two of them are in very, very roughly the same "part grassroots, part astroturf" time zone (not the same ballpark, not even the same zip code, but the same time zone). The third says that the Tea Party is neither grassroots nor astroturf, but something else that's in between.
- So when Zeitlow, whom we have no problem quoting elsewhere, says, "The degree to which the Tea Party movement is a grassroots movement is debatable. Tea Party organizers have received extensive financial support from prominent conservative think-tanks and financiers" ... Nowhere in that quotation, or even in the entire article, can I find the word "astroturf." Zietlow supports neither your proposal nor mine. She says it's "debatable." Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 03:06, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
- The majority viewpoint per WP:WEIGHT... --P&W
- ...doesn't say anything like that. Please quit misquoting and misapplying the policy.
- Try "three," and no two of them say the same thing. --P&W
- Please learn to count. Which "three" are you speaking of this time? And so far, at least 7 of them say the very same thing. Have you even read them?
- You suggested taking this to WP:RSN but you didn't do it.
- Correct. I suggested that you should take your challenge to RSN, and you haven't done it. If you'd like me to take your challenge there for you, I will. Which specific reliable source shall we start with, and what is your specific challenge to its suitability as a reliable source? We can work our way through each of them in turn.
- WP:RS allows us, as editors, to consider both context and potential bias in determining how much weight should be given to a particular source.
- You are making stuff up about policy again; please stop. "how much weight should be given to a particular source", thanks for the levity.
- the consensus of editors here is that these sources don't merit enough weight to outweigh 24+ reliable sources
- Please don't libel the other editors here. I'm fairly certain that most of them have been around long enough to know that number of sources saying something has nothing to do with WP:WEIGHT. I note that your proposal has zero reference citations; would you mind choosing 2 or 3 from your ever-changing number of sources and append them to your proposed text?
- While all three say that the Tea Party movement is not 100% grassroots, there the resemblance ends.
- Again, which three sources, exactly, are you speaking of? And you are correct that reliable sources agree that the Tea Party movement is not 100% grassroots, so why should we mislead our readers to believe otherwise?
- The degree to which the Tea Party movement is a grassroots movement is debatable ... She says it's "debatable."
- Yet you say there is no debate, according to what you have written above. Why should we mislead readers to believe that? Xenophrenic (talk) 06:58, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
Proposal 3
Do nothing and leave it alone for 6 months. (This is not what I think should be a course of action. I'm just throwing this out there for consideration.)—cyberpower Offline 05:47, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
- We've already done nothing for three years. Count the number of reliable sources supporting one proposal. Count the number of reliable sources supporting the other proposal. And then please make a decision per WP:WEIGHT. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 12:15, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
- Yes, please count the number of reliable sources (many) refuting the "100% grassroots" proposal. Now count the number of reliable sources (zero) refuting the "grassroots+astroturf" proposal. Then make a decision based on actual applicable Misplaced Pages policy, not a misunderstanding of one. Xenophrenic (talk) 21:08, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
Proposal 4
Take the existing reliable sources and develop encyclopedic content about the matter in the body of the article first. Then summarize that content in the WP:LEDE, which is how most content in the lede is created. Xenophrenic (talk) 21:08, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
End of the process — or a fresh start
We can not, as I see it, continue when any editor decides that the posited rules that six editors accepted should now be discussed at length - the idea that such a devotion to process, which would surely take weeks at the least, needs to be done when a single editor dislikes the ground rules is clearly going to make any solutions here totally impossible. My goal in proposing such rules was to prevent the absurd wikilawyering found in all too many discussions, and that any editor would desire to promote such behavior I find distressing. My hands are in the bowl of water, and unless everyone actually decides to work on the article instead of on arguing about process, there is no way in (insert expletive) that this can ever be resolved. Will some admin please lock this puppy down? Cheers. Collect (talk) 22:54, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
- Your extensive concern about process is noted, but most of us here would just like to be productive with regard to the Tea Party movement and related articles. P&W has reiterated a few content concerns he'd like to see addressed, and I have some as well. By "please lock this puppy down", are you suggesting that we no longer try to improve the article, or is this just a "venue" concern? Xenophrenic (talk) 23:41, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
- As some of you are aware, I have volunteered to be the moderator of this page per a request at AN. No one has yet opposed me being moderator so I have accepted the offer. As I settle in as moderator, and getting to know my role, a helping hand at knowing my limits as moderator is appreciated. If anybody objects to me being a moderator, please speak, or write that is, now.—cyberpower Online 02:06, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Welcome to party, Pal! ;-)
- But on a serious note, we do appreciate anyone who's willing to help. Hopefully this proves to be a fruitful endeavor for you. †TE†Talk 02:16, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you for joining us, Cyberpower. Would you please review the discussion above, and tell us whether we have consensus for the three proposed edits? Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 04:04, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Sure. If it's the multisection thread "Getting back to work" give me a few hours to read it through. :-)—cyberpower Offline 11:37, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you for joining us, Cyberpower. Would you please review the discussion above, and tell us whether we have consensus for the three proposed edits? Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 04:04, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- Just to let everyone know that I'm still here and that I am sifting through the above discussions and links. It might take me another day or two to reach the end and form a close statement.—cyberpower Online 00:01, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
Withdrawing my participation @moderated discussion
Falling by the wayside. No parting shots, just regrets. Perhaps the future will bring about an environment more conducive to progress. Godspeed. †TE†Talk 13:50, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
Amok
The recent sequence of edits on the TPm appear to be essentially ignoring the concept of WP:Consensus here, and verge on disruption at that article. Collect (talk) 11:10, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
Reminder
It has been brought to my attention that major anti-consensus were being made and reverted, twice. The page has now been fully protected by SilkTork, the previous moderator. As I don't have any admin powers to reverse this, nor do I now see a reason for it to be reversed right now, I am respectfully asking Xenophrenic to be careful in the future, and restrain from editing that article, unless there's a clear consensus claimed for such edits.—cyberpower Offline 11:33, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
- I've made no anti-consensus edits. The recent good faith edits by me, ThinkEnemies, Collect and others, were not first subjected to consensus discussion. I've no problem refraining from editing the main article unless concensus is achieved first. That should apply to all involved editors, of course. The last consensus version is this one, implemented by our former Moderator, SilkTork. Xenophrenic (talk) 21:35, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
- <redacted> As we're not allowed to comment on editors here. All I can say is that comment should not be part of any reasoned discussion, because it has little to do with reality. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 23:27, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
- Still at it? Xenophrenic (talk) 05:44, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
- <redacted> As we're not allowed to comment on editors here. All I can say is that comment should not be part of any reasoned discussion, because it has little to do with reality. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 23:27, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
The page has been fully protected and there will evidently be no block for starting an editwar. I propose that we immediately revert the page back to the version that existed before the editwar began. That version may be found here.
- Strongly support. As so often happens, the page protection took effect with the "wrong" version because people who aren't inclined to editwar didn't want to revert to the "right" version. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 16:54, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
- Support Without commenting on the changes, the reversion is best way to go from a process standpoint. Contested edits require a group decision. I say "group decision" rather than "consensus" because IMHO the existing text should be just another option in the process. North8000 (talk) 16:58, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
- Support revert to status quo ante. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 17:25, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
- Oppose an attempt to swap one "Wrong Version" with another "Wrong Version" via !voting. Xenophrenic (talk) 21:35, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
- "Status Quo Ante" version. Or alternatively, rather than swap one "Wrong Version" for another "Wrong Version", why not resolve the last remaining concerns about what that content should convey, then implement an actual consensus version? Xenophrenic (talk) 21:35, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
- Support - With stipulation the immigration reform position is corrected. †TE†Talk 15:37, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
- Consensus is in favor of reverting to this revision.—cyberpower Offline 05:52, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
- Comment The consensus discussion notwithstanding, admin Arthur Rubin just edited through full protection as an involved editor in this dispute. Having the tools does not grant the right to do what other involved editors cannot do in a content context. Nformation 09:45, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
- I don't consider there to be a dispute. Just editors with differing opinions trying to work this out. And trying to make some rules/processes for ourselves so that this can move forward. North8000 (talk) 10:08, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
- You can call it a dispute or an orange if you feel so inclined but that focuses on a completely non relevant aspect of my sentence. The point is that administrators are not supposed to edit through full protection when they are involved. We have an edit request template for a reason. Nformation 10:12, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
- I asked him to do it as a moderator request.—cyberpower Online 12:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
- I realize that. I also realize you did so in good faith and that Arthur complied in good faith, which is why I mentioned it here and not at AN. Nevertheless it should not have been done and for the sake of avoiding even the appearance of impropriety I implore you to make liberal (no pun intended) use of the edit request template. Nformation 00:17, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- IMHO the moderator is the best one to assess/read the situation. The mop does not make a drop-in person a better one to do so. North8000 (talk) 00:20, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- I am making a singular point: an involved admin should not edit through full protection. Nothing you're responding with actually addresses this point in the least. Is the moderator the best one to assess/read the situation? Maybe, maybe not. Does the mop make a drop-in-person a better one to do so? Maybe, maybe not. Whether either of those answers falls within the verge of yes/no/maybe/maybe not is completely irrelevant to the very specific point that I've made: an involved admin is not permitted to edit through full protection. Nformation 09:11, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- IMHO the moderator is the best one to assess/read the situation. The mop does not make a drop-in person a better one to do so. North8000 (talk) 00:20, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- I realize that. I also realize you did so in good faith and that Arthur complied in good faith, which is why I mentioned it here and not at AN. Nevertheless it should not have been done and for the sake of avoiding even the appearance of impropriety I implore you to make liberal (no pun intended) use of the edit request template. Nformation 00:17, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- I asked him to do it as a moderator request.—cyberpower Online 12:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
- You can call it a dispute or an orange if you feel so inclined but that focuses on a completely non relevant aspect of my sentence. The point is that administrators are not supposed to edit through full protection when they are involved. We have an edit request template for a reason. Nformation 10:12, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
- I don't consider there to be a dispute. Just editors with differing opinions trying to work this out. And trying to make some rules/processes for ourselves so that this can move forward. North8000 (talk) 10:08, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
Okay. Making liberal use of the edit request template.
- Noformation is correct. It was wrong of me to ask Arthur to make the edit for me. He was clearly involved, and I have apologized to him for that.—cyberpower Online 09:33, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
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SilkTork has reverted Arthur's reversion, indicating that even though the edit was requested by our moderator, it must be executed by an uninvolved admin. The "vote" is 4-1 (everyone except Xenophrenic) in favor of reverting to this revision, with the lone opposing "vote" coming from Xenophrenic. The policy based argument is that Xenophrenic edited against consensus. Visiting admins, please make this edit. Thank you. regards .... Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 03:05, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
I am making no comment on the content of the edit, nor on if appropriate consensus has been reached (I've simply glanced at the voting, not read any of the comments), but it is inappropriate for an admin to be making an edit to a fully protected article while they are involved. Arthur Rubin should not have made the edit, and cyberpower should not have asked him to make the edit. What P&W has just done, is the appropriate procedure: ask an independent admin to look into the matter and assess consensus. It's worth reminding everyone that consensus is not always a simple majority vote - especially if a legitimate objection has been raised, and/or if those in majority are in the same camp. The procedure I adopted when moderating is if there was a legitimate objection raised, that the objection would be discussed before taking any further action. Objections should be discussed not ignored. SilkTork 08:11, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks SilkTork. I did mention that I would make a lot of mistakes in the beginning. But as I make a mistake, I learn from it and get better.—cyberpower Online 08:34, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- Question: Hi all. Could some kind soul link to any other discussions where this edit has come up? The voting above doesn't tell me anything about whether people have tried to find a consensus on this issue or how successful any attempts were. However, there is a lot of discussion on this page, and (lazy admin that I am) I don't really feel like reading through all of it to find the relevant bits. I'd appreciate help from those who have followed the proceedings here more closely than I. Best regards — Mr. Stradivarius 09:03, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- To my understanding, problematic editing was going which led to the article being protected a few days back. This above is the only thread to at least link back to the "correct" version of the article while it's protected.—cyberpower Online 09:33, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- Question: Hi all. Could some kind soul link to any other discussions where this edit has come up? The voting above doesn't tell me anything about whether people have tried to find a consensus on this issue or how successful any attempts were. However, there is a lot of discussion on this page, and (lazy admin that I am) I don't really feel like reading through all of it to find the relevant bits. I'd appreciate help from those who have followed the proceedings here more closely than I. Best regards — Mr. Stradivarius 09:03, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- Hi, Strad. A half-dozen editors had worked to develop an acceptable 'Agenda' section for the Tea Party movement article, with several competing versions being proposed. An editor prematurely claimed consensus for his preferred version and implemented this after some editors expressed support. Other editors contacted the Moderator (SilkTork) and expressed objections to that content being implemented, prompting our Moderator to open this discussion; note where he reiterates that the Moderator was responsible for declaring consensus unless the edit action was "agreed by all". Unfortunately, SilkTork withdrew as moderator shortly thereafter, leaving the disputed non-consensus version changes in the article and the problem unresolved. Rather than revert or delete the problematic content from the article, I instead proposed a significant rewrite based on proposed content from several versions, and asked for others to review it and raise objections. After several days of discussion, editor ThinkEnemies moved some uncontested parts of my proposed text to the main article, and I moved the remainder of the uncontested parts to the main article. Any content to which objections were raised was either deleted (or commented out of view, if discussions were still ongoing). Two and a half days later, Phoenix and Winslow reverted most of the previous edits with this strange edit summary: (Since there weren't four "votes" in favor of this massive edit, consensus could not be claimed under the new rules that a strong consensus agreed to on the Moderated Discussion page). That was the beginning of an edit war that resulted in the article being fully locked.
- The above Edit Request appears to me to be an attempt to impose a preferred non-consensus, problematic version on a fully protected article. The most recent "status quo" version would be the one imposed by our Moderator (here) before any contested edits were made. Since all of the recent versions appear to be the "wrong" version (a fact not disputed by most of the "voters" above), I don't understand this push to have a preferred wrong version implemented unless the intent is to try to keep it implemented. Why not direct this energy toward fixing the content instead? Xenophrenic (talk) 11:28, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- Because (A) consensus does not require unanimity, and (B) we will never have unanimity unless everybody else caves in and agrees to allow the "Agenda" section to become, in effect, a second "Organization" section. This version would focus much of the first two paragraphs on the chaotic disorganization of the Tea Party, under the rationale that this chaotic disorganization is the cause of certain agenda inconsistencies between Tea Party groups. The content that was agreed upon, and implemented by me, was supported by a 4-1 "vote" for several hours before I implemented it; and as I explained earlier, there was every reason to expect the final "vote" to to be 6-1. So I made the edit. We had been working on it for weeks non-stop, we'd been through at least 22 different versions of the section, and everybody (with the obvious exception of Xenophrenic, a tower of iron will) was completely exhausted and burned out.
- As expected, Collect brought the total of "support votes" to five because we had effectively addressed his concerns about readability. But Xenophrenic inexplicably recorded an "oppose vote" even though he was that version's co-author. Snowded came back to the article after an absence of several weeks for an "oppose vote," and ArtifexMayhem appeared out of nowhere, never having edited the article before, for an "oppose vote."
- However, the CURRENT consensus clearly recognizes that reverting that edit was out of line, and that it should be restored immediately despite Xenophrenic's objection. Our moderator has recognized this consensus and asked that the version Xenophrenic reverted be restored. Furthermore, in case it wasn't already clear, for those of us who "voted" weeks ago in favor of the version we are now seeking to restore, this is the "right" version. Mr. Stradivarius, please make the edit. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 12:05, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- Let me see if I correctly understand what you've just written. Between the two proposals, both with five "Supports", you declared "consensus" for your preferred version because some editors voiced their opinions after your "several hour" window between calling for votes and implementing your edit? Well, at least we can agree that the version you tried to implement is not a consensus version, even if you didn't realize that at the time. (A good cautionary tale against rushing things after just a few hours.) My "!vote" in opposition to the problematic version wasn't inexplicable; as I noted in my comment: see objections to the problematic content above. Your interpretation of CURRENT consensus fails to recognize the input of the commenting editors. Every editor has a "right" version; what's your aversion to producing a version that is right for Misplaced Pages, instead? By the way, this is the first time you've raised a concern with the first 2 paragraphs of proposed text. Reliable sources make it a point to explain that the desparate TP groups are autonomous and set their own agendas, and reliable sources make it a point to explain the generally "economic" focus of many TP agendas -- therefore, our 'Agenda' section should do the same. Your concern about redundancy with the 'Organization' section is easily remedied by removal of a single sentence from the 'Organization' section. Xenophrenic (talk) 13:42, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- Not done: I'm marking this as not done, as from the above comments it doesn't look like there has been any attempt to address Xenophrenic's concerns. I think SilkTork put it very well when he said "objections should be discussed not ignored", and I don't think the required discussion has happened in this case. — Mr. Stradivarius 04:15, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
- There have been continual illicit edits (and reverts) made since the article was first unlocked, and the state of discussion on this page, particularly the dismissal of RS on dubious grounds, makes it a waste of time.
- For the record, the version being pushed by P&W and the same block of editors never came close to achieving consensus even under the premises of the original guidelines (24 hours with at least two votes in support and NO objections).
- I don't blame Silk Tork for not being able to handle the tremendous burden of moderating this so-called discussion, but it is high time that the Arbcom case brought some resolution and relief to the deplorable state of affairs here.--Ubikwit見学/迷惑 10:21, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
- You are not supposed to be bashing other editors on this page. If you feel that it is important to do so, you should move your comments to where responses to such can occur. North8000 (talk) 11:36, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
- Some of us have gone out of our way to address all stated objections, but progress can't be continually held up due to minor concerns. Now if Ubikwit wants to talk about never coming close to "achieving consensus" -- Well, they should probably be referred to their own proposals. †TE†Talk 13:11, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
Proposed addition of Karl Denninger
I propose adding the following (slightly modified) paragraph from the Wikibio of Karl Denninger to the article mainspace, replacing the "Commentaries on origins" subsection in the History section, which should be moved to the "Perceptions" spin-off article:
Internet pioneer Karl Denninger was one of the early members of the Tea Party movement, sometimes referred to as a founder. In the aftermath of the March 2008 collapse of Bear Stearns, he founded the website Fed Up USA. He came to national attention for the criticisms of the Emergency Economic Stabilization Act of 2008 which he posted on Fed Up USA in September that year. On January 20, 2009, the day of President Obama's first inauguration, he published a blog post calling on readers to mail tea bags to the White House and Congress, echoing a suggestion by a commenter on one of his earlier blog posts. By February 1, the idea had spread to various conservative and libertarian-oriented blogs, forums, websites and through a viral email campaign.
Thoughts and comments, please. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 14:05, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
- This material looks good and useful. The "commentaries on origin" section is really distorted, but I'm not so sure about totally eliminating / replacing it. Perhaps shrink the existing section to a single sentence on each of the listed items and keep the revised one in addition to putting this one in. North8000 (talk) 14:16, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
- The whole paragraph should be moved to "Perceptions of the Tea Party movement" spin-off article. WP:SUMMARY tells us that this article should summarize what the spin-off articles say. Perhaps a few words to summarize this paragraph, such as "Critics have raised questions about the origins of the movement," should be added to the summary in the "Perceptions of the Tea Party" section. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 15:20, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
- Sorry, I didn't mean to complicate / snarl things with my suggestion. The Ron Paul and Koch item as written look appropriate. The tobacco thing is way overblown but a brief sentence worded like the Koch item could be appropriate as a compromise. Overall, we should just keep moving. Perfection is the enemy of improvement. The original proposal is also OK with me. North8000 (talk) 20:01, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
- Looks good to me; throw it in.--Froglich (talk) 05:39, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
- Welcome to the party, pal. Yeah, it ought to look good to you, because you wrote it. I picked it up, refcites and all, from the Karl Denninger bio you've been writing. The first four words, and a few other minor changes, were necessary to introduce Mr. Denninger into this environment.
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- The subsection "Commentaries on origin" should be removed, and replaced with the above paragraph in green about Karl Denninger. I think the new subsection header should be "Fed Up USA," the name of his blog where he first started talking about mailing tea bags to congressmen. Also, "Critics have raised questions about the origins of the movement," should be added to the summary in the "Perceptions of the Tea Party" section. — Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 15:50, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
- Oppose removing "Commentaries on origin" content. I agree with North8000 that there is usable information presently in that section, although it could use some improvement. I don't have a problem with Denninger and FedUpUSA being mentioned in relation to the origins of the movement, but that shouldn't be used as an excuse to remove other material under discussion. Xenophrenic (talk) 16:08, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
- I would never argue to exclude the conspiratorial commentary on the Tea Party movement. But we should try building an origin section first. We can add new details on the emergence of social media behind the movement, the catalyst, as they say. †TE†Talk 19:57, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
- Building an 'Origins' section is an excellent idea. The Santelli rant is commonly cited as marking the "start" of the movement, but that is just because it had the benefit of being a cable news incident followed by a viral YouTube presence. There was certainly popular angst in the weeks before that, as evidenced by Trevor Leach, Keli Carender, Karl Denninger, and some stuff on Smart Girl Politics blogs, the TCOT Twitter gang, etc. We could replace the "Commentaries on origins" header with "Origins", and clean it up a bit. Xenophrenic (talk) 21:35, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
- I don't want any trouble. We get that certain perspectives are dangerous. I'll pass this along anyways: http://www.lse.ac.uk/media@lse/research/mediaWorkingPapers/MScDissertationSeries/2012/81.pdf †TE†Talk 22:02, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
- Interesting read. Is that in support of proposed or existing article content? (I assume we are still discussing Origins, and social media's part in TP movement development.) Xenophrenic (talk) 05:44, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
- Interesting, I figured you wanted to push a crazy-man tobacco conspiracy. This is good news. The nutter is gone from your butter. †TE†Talk 06:11, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
- I'm not catching your references here. Could you speak plainly please? Xenophrenic (talk) 14:43, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
- I got a notification that you've reverted me. How cool is that? Moving on, I'm not about to edit war over your selective de-archiving. Enjoy! †TE†Talk 15:34, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
- Yeah, I'm liking the new notification tweaks the developers installed. Thanks for not edit warring; the archiving of ongoing discussions that are less than 72 hours old gave me pause, but I'm not going to waste time speculating as to intentions. Want to help build an Origins section? Xenophrenic (talk) 16:07, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
- I got a notification that you've reverted me. How cool is that? Moving on, I'm not about to edit war over your selective de-archiving. Enjoy! †TE†Talk 15:34, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
- I'm not catching your references here. Could you speak plainly please? Xenophrenic (talk) 14:43, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
- Interesting, I figured you wanted to push a crazy-man tobacco conspiracy. This is good news. The nutter is gone from your butter. †TE†Talk 06:11, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
- Interesting read. Is that in support of proposed or existing article content? (I assume we are still discussing Origins, and social media's part in TP movement development.) Xenophrenic (talk) 05:44, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
- I don't want any trouble. We get that certain perspectives are dangerous. I'll pass this along anyways: http://www.lse.ac.uk/media@lse/research/mediaWorkingPapers/MScDissertationSeries/2012/81.pdf †TE†Talk 22:02, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
- Building an 'Origins' section is an excellent idea. The Santelli rant is commonly cited as marking the "start" of the movement, but that is just because it had the benefit of being a cable news incident followed by a viral YouTube presence. There was certainly popular angst in the weeks before that, as evidenced by Trevor Leach, Keli Carender, Karl Denninger, and some stuff on Smart Girl Politics blogs, the TCOT Twitter gang, etc. We could replace the "Commentaries on origins" header with "Origins", and clean it up a bit. Xenophrenic (talk) 21:35, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
- I would never argue to exclude the conspiratorial commentary on the Tea Party movement. But we should try building an origin section first. We can add new details on the emergence of social media behind the movement, the catalyst, as they say. †TE†Talk 19:57, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
- I've marked the edit request as answered for now. Although the suggestion has mostly been favourably received, I think there should be a bit more discussion about ways that it could be adjusted to satisfy Xenophrenic's objections. If this was a case of choosing a straight yes or no, I would go for "yes", but I think that there is probably a middle way that we can take here. Best — Mr. Stradivarius 12:50, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
- The above edit request can be split into two parts. If editors are itching to add something to the article, some of the above proposed Denninger text can be added now, probably immediately before or after (chronologically) the Trevor Leach material. I'd leave off the last proposed sentence, as it is not supported by the cited source. I'm working on content for an 'Origins' section that covers the Jan-Feb 2009 infancy of the movement that may eventually incorporate part of that Denninger material. The second part of the edit request (removal/relocation of the 'Commentaries on origins' content) should instead be refocused on rewriting it as a brief and factual (less the commentary and opinion) 'Origins' section. Xenophrenic (talk) 12:28, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
direction of this project
I've been away on holiday and have not been able to comment, but today I discovered the TPm page has been locked. This is very disconcerting considering all the work editors have put into this discussion here. After looking over the edits on the article, it's apparent that things are not heading in a productive direction at all. I'm not placing blame on anyone, but it's time to stop and reassess this and sort some goals. I'm also disheartened that nobody seems cognizant of the ArbCom case that is pending. The whole point of this moderated discussion was to sort the problems with the editors and the article goals, not make things worse. I'd really like to hear from editors on what they believe really matters here. And Cyberpower, it's enormously kind of you to take on the role of moderator, but since you've don't have admin powers, it might be best if you reconsider things. You'll be called upon to discipline editors for breaching the rules and without admin powers, that won't be possible. It's an enormous burden to begin with, and it absolutely requires an admin. It's obvious to me that the page needed to be locked which SilkTork rightly did. Malke 2010 (talk) 16:53, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- You are right. I have been seriously considering withdrawing as moderator. The mere fact that I'm not an admin, is challenge on its own level.—cyberpower Online 18:09, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- It does make things harder for you. You are very brave to take this on, and your comments are measured and patient which is a huge bonus here. Having the tools, and the threat of them, would make things so much easier for you. Malke 2010 (talk) 18:37, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- I don't threaten. I'm actually quite patient.—cyberpower Online 18:54, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- I don't mean you would actually need to threaten. I meant the idea that the tools can be used at any time is often enough to stay an editor from going down the wrong path. I did notice that you are very patient. That's an asset, to be sure. Malke 2010 (talk) 18:58, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- Cyber's head and heart are both in the right place. Unfortunately he needs to be able to ask an admin to perform admin tasks, and the admin needs to be able to accept his judgment and take action immediately, since we've accepted him as our moderator. We have a crowd of people here, all but one of whom are in agreement at this point, but one tendentious editor is still able to stop all our work in its tracks. Changes need to be made. I don't think we need a new moderator. I think we need to give the moderator the on-call admin support that he needs. This is what we need to help our moderator be effective. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 19:44, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- I don't mean you would actually need to threaten. I meant the idea that the tools can be used at any time is often enough to stay an editor from going down the wrong path. I did notice that you are very patient. That's an asset, to be sure. Malke 2010 (talk) 18:58, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- I don't threaten. I'm actually quite patient.—cyberpower Online 18:54, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- It does make things harder for you. You are very brave to take this on, and your comments are measured and patient which is a huge bonus here. Having the tools, and the threat of them, would make things so much easier for you. Malke 2010 (talk) 18:37, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- (edit conflict)
- @Cyberpower: Please don't do anything rash - I think your lack of Admin tools is a minor technicality that can be easily remedied by enlisting the aid of a willing Administrator who would perform the Admin actions only at your direction and request. You would still be responsible for all of the dispute resolution, final decision making and moderating. It's something to consider, at least. I say this for a reason. Do you realize that you are the only editor to respond to the request for a moderator after many days on the noticeboard? Do you realize the previous moderator visited the Talk pages of a half-dozen established content editors and requested their help, and they all declined (except one, who stuck his toes in the water, made a handful of minor copy-edits, and hasn't been seen since)? Malke is correct that having Admin tools would be more convenient, but I'm not sure she realizes just how difficult (if not impossible at this point) it would be to find another moderator.
- @Malke: I hope you had a great time on holiday! You asked to hear from editors what matters here? I really think that differs from editor to editor. Of course everyone will say they want to see article improvement; the generic answer. It has become evident, however, that "improvement" means different things to different editors. The disagreements between editors seem to boil down to whether article content is flattering or non-flattering to the article subject. For me, since I have no personal experience with the subject matter, I must go with what the reliable sources say. Other editors, however, seem to have insider knowledge that I lack - I'm learning, for instance, that seemingly reliable sources, from journalists to academics, are actually not reliable at all. They are secretly "opponents" of the movement, and have an agenda to undermine the movement by claiming unflattering things about them. Or so I've been told. Another thing that matters very much to some editors here, and this is becoming increasingly evident, is what can be done to editors rather than articles. You will find them calling for all manner of bans, blocks and other sanctions against those with whom they have content disagreements. They are easy to spot, lodging carefully worded complaints at Admin noticeboards, ArbComs, RfCs, Talk pages of admins, etc. Xenophrenic (talk) 19:49, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- @P&W: Interesting; you and I agree 100% in our advice to Cyberpower. We also agree on your other observation: there is indeed a crowd of people here that are always in agreement with each other, regardless. Then there's me, who chooses instead to agree with reliable sources, and I do so solo lately since most other editors who do the same have been driven off. Your "tendentious editor" attack has been noted. Xenophrenic (talk) 19:55, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
I think I've supported 90% of the last 15 proposals (all with the caveat the we understand that they aren't perfect and can and will get changes.) and none of them have been implemented. We need to get some that are 90% good put in with the caveat/understanding that they will need to be further evolved after we put them in. Also, let's agree that the status quo is to be treated as just another option. That way people have less to fear that an imperfect change will get entrenched if it's put in. Let's get this baby moving! Sincerely,, North8000 (talk) 21:20, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
Notice to Everyone
I would like to remind everyone that discussions outside of this page will not be moderated or controlled and the civility cannot be enforced. Also, more input on the proposals would be appreciated.—cyberpower Online 18:08, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
Stepping Down
I appreciate that many of you would like to keep as moderator. It was a strong incentive to remain one. However, numerous reasons came up as to why I should step down. First and foremost, when I accepted moderator-ship of this page, it never occurred to me how overwhelming moderating this page for me. I'm afraid I'll burn myself out too quickly and make major mistakes. The current ArbCom case seems to be in favor of topic banning everyone involved for 6 months. There won't be anything to moderate when it passes. On the topic of ArbCom, since I can technically be seen as an involved party, it may come to pass to topic ban me too. In any event resignation would be a preferable option than to face a topic ban. I really feel this should be left to a much more experienced editor to moderate. I thought I could give it a try at least. It was a pleasure to be the moderator of this page, no matter what went on. I hope ArbCom settles this dispute in a fashion that most can agree on.—cyberpower Online 09:16, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
- Well said. It's a travesty what's currently happening at ArbCom and your concerns are completely valid. Possibly under less-chilling circumstances we all could've collaborated and actually improved TPM (which is really in sad shape). I'm desperately attempting to re-gain faith in this project. Regrettably, it seems the powers that be are still running interference for truly bad, albeit active elements around here who dissuade and burnout our more well-intentioned contributors. Sad to see this vicious cycle repeating itself. SMH. †TE†Talk 12:35, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for stopping by, and we appreciate your contribution. The motion proposed at ArbCom is perplexing to say the least. It's far from impossible to spot the worst offenders on this page — the ones who, either single-handedly or as a very small group, are being allowed and even enabled to obstruct any further progress on the article at all. This is being allowed to happen no matter how bad their track records have been proven to be, and no matter how well-stated and numerous the policy-based arguments might be against them. It's very frustrating. But the willingness of a moderator to step in here at a difficult time, and at least attempt to keep things moving in the right direction, was one of the bright spots. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 23:16, 3 August 2013 (UTC)
- Cyberpower, thanks for what you did and we wish you would stay. More fallout from the fact that Arbcom case was sent off on a tangent from the start and has never recovered. North8000 (talk) 16:44, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for stopping by, and we appreciate your contribution. The motion proposed at ArbCom is perplexing to say the least. It's far from impossible to spot the worst offenders on this page — the ones who, either single-handedly or as a very small group, are being allowed and even enabled to obstruct any further progress on the article at all. This is being allowed to happen no matter how bad their track records have been proven to be, and no matter how well-stated and numerous the policy-based arguments might be against them. It's very frustrating. But the willingness of a moderator to step in here at a difficult time, and at least attempt to keep things moving in the right direction, was one of the bright spots. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 23:16, 3 August 2013 (UTC)
Re: Agenda of the Tea Party movement
The suddenly fashionable drive-by shooting approach to Misplaced Pages editing has taken me by surprise and I'm not sure it's appropriate. Binksternet and Ubikwit are encouraged to discuss their concerns here regarding alleged NPOV problems, any proposed changes to the lede sentence, the allegation that the article is a WP:POVFORK, etc. Please stop flinging around templates hoping that one of them will stick. For example, the NPOV template that was posted there claims that "relevant discussion can be found on the Talk page." There is no discussion at all on that Talk page concerning your NPOV allegation, so don't post the template until you've expressed your concern in the proper venue. After your concerns have been properly expressed, rather than just driving up and spraying your rhetorical bullets around, a proper response can be posted, and we'll see whether you can gather consensus for your proposed changes. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 16:10, 6 August 2013 (UTC)
It's a shame that the entire other side in the content dispute has chosen not to participate in the moderated discussion. I'm sure that a new moderator can be found, and would like to proceed. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 17:28, 7 August 2013 (UTC)
The term "teabagger"
I've commented at the main article talk page, but will now repeat here. I can't recall having been involved in this article until right now, and would like to point out an error. The following sentence in the article is unsourced, it has two separate Misplaced Pages tags on it, and it is erroneous:
The term '']'' was initially used to refer to Tea Partiers after conservatives{{who|date=September 2013}} used ''tea bag'' as a verb on protest signs and websites.{{cn|date=September 2013}}
According to the article by Alex Koppelman that's already in the footnotes:
hen used as a verb, the words “tea bag” and “teabagging” have nothing to do with a hot, soothing drink....I’ve traced the meme’s birth back to February 27th, when blogs like Instaputz and Wonkette started using it independently of one another. They were inspired by a photo that the Washington Independent’s David Weigel shot of one protester carrying a sign that was, if you knew that second meaning, pretty funny: “Tea bag the liberal Dems before they tea bag you !!” (sic).
Those first uses on websites were not by conservatives at all, so the unsourced sentence in the Misplaced Pages article is false. And the origin seems to have been a single protest sign, not a plurality of them. Surely we can make this article a fine upstanding place to visit, instead of, um, a fleabag. Any objection if I take a crack at it?Anythingyouwant (talk) 02:21, 28 September 2013 (UTC)
- Here's a specific proposal: "In February 2009, a conservative protester was photographed with a sign using the words 'tea bag' as a verb, which swiftly led to left-leaning websites like Wonkette introducing 'teabagger' as a term for Tea Partiers." Cite: Koppelman.Anythingyouwant (talk) 18:14, 28 September 2013 (UTC)
- And your wording would be backed up by what citations? Koppelman doesn't back this up and conflicts with other sources.TMCk (talk) 00:00, 29 September 2013 (UTC)
- Please feel free to rephrase the proposed sentence, or to say specifically what you think is unsupported by Koppelman. I already quoted the pertinent part of Koppelman above. Koppelman seems to have investigated the matter in greatest depth, and so treatments that are obviously more cursory should probably not necessarily be given equal weight with Koppelman. What I mainly tried to do is take the Koppelman info and present it chronologically. Are you saying that you think the current text in the article is fine?Anythingyouwant (talk) 00:58, 29 September 2013 (UTC)
- And your wording would be backed up by what citations? Koppelman doesn't back this up and conflicts with other sources.TMCk (talk) 00:00, 29 September 2013 (UTC)
- First of all, you took one of many sources and added your own interpretation/twist to it. Further, re. "cursory treatments" , "TheWeek.com" source as an example dosn't seem to fit your label at all. Is the present text accurate? Yes it is or very, very close. At least closer to sources presented than what you're proposing. You don't get to decide how much weight each RS receives, you sure understand that. Can the text in question be improved? Sure, there is always space to improve content, just not by twisting it in a different direction contrary to sources. Give it another try and I might go for it.TMCk (talk) 01:39, 29 September 2013 (UTC)
(Outdent) For the time being, I will continue to assume that you're editing in good faith, TMKC, and that (like me) you are not trying to twist anything. You cite one source to assert that the current text in the Wikipedua article is much better than what I have proposed. Let's look at what that source (TheWeek.com) says about February 2009:
Feb. 27, 2009. At the first anti-stimulus "New American Tea Party" rally in Washington D.C., a protestor carries a sign reading "Tea Bag the Liberal Dems before they Tea Bag You!!" The Washington Independent's David Weigel calls it "the best sign I saw."
This excerpt is much more cursory than the discussion in the Koppelman article, which identifies further uses on Feb. 27, 2009 by blogs Instaputz and Wonkette. TheWeek.com does not contradict Koppelman, and instead simply skips along to March 2009. I don't see any ambiguity about the fact that the piece in TheWeek is much more cursory about the events of February 2009 than Koppelman. I would also like to request that you please tone down your accusations, and try to assume good faith. Thanks.Anythingyouwant (talk) 02:06, 29 September 2013 (UTC)
- I have started a survey at the main article talk page.Anythingyouwant (talk) 16:55, 30 September 2013 (UTC)
- ^ "Group Think: Inside the Tea Party’s Collective Brain"; National Journal; Jonathan Rauch; September 11, 2010
- ^ Tea Partiers shaking up races across country; KTVB News; January 28, 2010
- ^ Elizabeth Price Foley, law professor at Florida International University College of Law, writing on the Tea Party's proclamations regarding the Constitution, observed: "Tea Party opposition to bailouts, stimulus packages and health-care reform is reflected in various proposals to amend the Constitution, including proposals to require a balanced budget, repeal the Sixteenth and Seventeenth Amendments, and give states a veto power over federal laws (the so-called Repeal Amendment)." (Foley, Elizabeth Price. "Sovereignty, Rebalanced: The Tea Party and Constitutional Amendments." Tennessee Law Review, Vol. 78, p. 751. August 3, 2011.) Cite error: The named reference "Foley1" was defined multiple times with different content (see the help page).
- Kate Zernike, a national correspondent for The New York Times, wrote: "It could be hard to define a Tea Party agenda; to some extent it depended on where you were. In the Northeast, groups mobilized against high taxes; in the Southwest, illegal immigration. Some Tea Partiers were clearer about what they didn't want than what they did. But the shared ideology — whether for young libertarians who came to the movement through Ron Paul or older 9/12ers who came to it through Glenn Beck — was the belief that a strict interpretation of the Constitution was the solution to government grown wild. By getting back to what the founders intended, they believed they could right what was wrong with the country. Where in the Constitution, they asked, does it say that the federal government was supposed to run banks? Or car companies? Where does it say that people have to purchase health insurance? Was it so much to ask that officials honor the document they swear an oath to uphold?" (Zernike, Kate. Boiling Mad: Inside Tea Party America. New York: Times Books, 2010, pp.65-66.)
- Tea Party groups ramp up fight against immigration bill, as August recess looms; Fox News; July 5, 2013
- Tea Party - vs - Immigration Reform; National Review; Betsy Woodruff; June 20, 2013
- ^ Gabriel, Trip (December 25, 2012). "Clout Diminished, Tea Party Turns to Narrower Issues". The New York Times.
- The Tea Party's Next Move; National Journal; Jonathan Rauch;March 2, 2011
- Carey, Nick (October 15, 2012). "Tea Party versus Agenda 21: Saving the U.S. or just irking it?". Reuters.com.
- Tea Party Protesters Rally Against IRS, Government; Wall Street Journal; Rebecca Ballhaus; June 19, 2013
- Schmidt
- Tea-ing Up the Constitution; New York Times; Adam Liptak, March 13, 2010
- The Tea Party Movement and Popular Constitutionalism; Northwestern University Law Review; Ilya Somin; December 6, 2011
- Rebecca E. Zietlow, law professor at the University of Toledo College of Law, characterizes the Tea Party's constitutional position as a combination of two schools of thought: "originalism" and "popular constitutionalism." "Tea Party activists have invoked the Constitution as the foundation of their conservative political philosophy. These activists are engaged in 'popular originalism,' using popular constitutionalism — constitutional interpretation outside of the courts — to invoke originalism as interpretive method." (Zietlow, Rebecca E. "Popular Originalism? The Tea Party Movement and Constitutional Theory." Florida Law Review, Vol. 64, p. 483 (2012).0
- The Tea Party and the Constitution; Hastings Constitutional Law Quarterly; Christopher W. Schmidt; May 9, 2012
- The Tea Party and the Remaking of Republican Conservatism; Theda Skocpol and Vanessa Williamson; Oxford University Press; 2012; Pgs. 50-51
- Cultures of the Tea Party; Contexts May 2011 vol. 10 no. 2; Andrew J. Perrin, Stephen J. Tepper; Pgs. 7-8
- Boiling Mad: Inside Tea Party America; Kate Zernike; Macmillan Publishers; 2010; Pages 67-68
- Laying Claim to the Constitution: The Promise of New Textualism; Virginia Law Review; James E. Ryan; November 2011; Page 19-20
- The Tea Party: A Brief History; Formisano, Ronald; The Johns Hopkins University Press; 2012; Page 52
- Davis, Teddy (9 February 2010). "Tea Party Activists Craft 'Contract from America'". ABC News. American Broadcasting Company. Retrieved 18 September 2010.
- ^ Davis, Teddy (April 15, 2010). "Tea Party Activists Unveil 'Contract from America'". ABC News. Retrieved June 7, 2011.
- Steep: The Precipitous Rise of the Tea Party; Lawrence Rosenthal, Christine Trost; University of California Press; May 2012; "Debate still rages in the blogs. Some condemn the Tea Party as Astroturf, a movement directly funded and organized from its very beginning by conservative leaders. Others argue that the Tea Party epitomizes grassroots politics, an outpouring of aggreived citizens who spontaneously protested against big government. Both arguments contain at least a grain of truth." Page 98-99; "Local Tea Parties and national Tea Party unbrella groups are entangled with and significantly funded by the United States' conservative establishment and by parts of the Republican Party." Page 134-135
- Keeping the Republic: Power and Citizenship in American Politics; Christine Barbour, Gerald C Wright; CQ Press; January 2013; "The indirect lobbying we have discussed is often called grassroots lobbying, meaning that it addresses people in their roles as ordinary citizens. It is the weilding of power from the bottom (roots) up, rather than from the top down. Most of what we refer to as grassroots lobbying, however, does not spring spontaneously from the people but is orchestrated by elites, leading some people to call it astroturf lobbying—indicating that it is not really genuine. Often the line between real grassroots and astroturf lobbying is blurred, however. A movement may be partly spontaneous but partly orchestrated. the Tea Party movement has been, in part, the project of Dick Armey, a former Republican House majority leader whose organization, FreedomWorks, promotes low taxes and small government. FreedomWorks and several other conservative groups, as well as prominent individuals including some commentators at Fox News, have lent their organizational expertise to the Tea Partiers but deny that they are orchestrating an astroturf movement." Page 497-498
- Blessed Are the Organized: Grassroots Democracy in America; Jeffrey Stout; Princeton University Press; 2010; "Some of the issues that have been of central concern to the religious right over the last three decades have more recently been taken over by the considerably more volatile Tea Party movement. Insofar as the latter movement is a creation of media elites, it too qualifies as an example of top-down politics. The volatility of the movement derives, however, from the sponteneity of its populist spirit. The movement's distrust of elites, and "socialists" could rapidly morph into outright fascism if there were a further deepening of the economic crisis or a series of additional terrorist attacks on the scale of 9/11. In any event, it is easy to imagine the movement's bottom-up populism becoming a more prominent force in American politics in the coming years." Page 230-231
- ^ Semprini, Francesco (2010-10-26). "Il fondatore del movimento, Karl Denninger, si scaglia contro l'ex governatore dell'Alaska e i Patriots". La Stampa. Retrieved 2013-01-05.
- "Tea Party founder backs Occupy Wall Street". Russia Today. 2011-10-14. Retrieved 2013-01-05.
- Denninger, Karl (2009-01-20). "February 1st Tea Party?". The Market Ticker. Retrieved 2013-01-05.
- "Jane Hamsher: A Teabagger Timeline: Koch, Coors, Newt, Dick Armey There From The Start". The Huffington Post. 16 May 2009. Retrieved 2010-04-27.