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The article has been unlocked, so I have amended the above notice. And add here: If someone new to the article makes an inappropriate edit, inform them of this moderated discussion, and discuss the edit on this page. If someone who is already aware of the restrictions in place makes an inappropriate edit, inform me, and I will deal with it. ''']''' ''']''' 14:03, 18 June 2013 (UTC)

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Copied over (and edited) from my talkpage: Copied over (and edited) from my talkpage:


:...I want people to edit the article. But I want those who edit it to be trustworthy, and to only edit by consensus, not to revert or encourage or incite others to revert, not to remove or add content that alters meaning without first establishing that it is OK to do do, not to make edits based on guessing or assuming, but to follow the academic principles of doing research FIRST, and then supporting statements with citations, and to follow Misplaced Pages guidelines on building an article. This is editing basics, and should be done on every article. It is particularly important that it should be done on this article. This is not the article to be making bold edits, nor uncertain edits. This is an article where we need people to be putting their proposals down on the talkpage and getting consensus. Who actually makes the edit after consensus has been done, doesn't matter. As long as that person actions the edit as agreed, and does not add their own twist as they are doing so. I am concerned there is not much time before ArbCom reconvenes, and I don't want edit wars to start up on the article between now and then. So I want all edits to the article to be secure and agreed. And if there are editors who are not able to discern when an edit has been agreed or not, they should be discouraged from editing the article. If necessary, permanently. I can't make that clear enough. The article has suffered for years because editors have taken unilateral action on the article rather than seeking consensus first. On a contentious topic like this it is vital to discus and get consensus. Doubly so when there's a moderated discussion taking place. And triply so when there's an ArbCom case being held in suspension.... ''']''' ''']''' 12:32, 15 June 2013 (UTC) :...I want people to edit the article. But I want those who edit it to be trustworthy, and to only edit by consensus, not to revert or encourage or incite others to revert, not to remove or add content that alters meaning without first establishing that it is OK to do do, not to make edits based on guessing or assuming, but to follow the academic principles of doing research FIRST, and then supporting statements with citations, and to follow Misplaced Pages guidelines on building an article. This is editing basics, and should be done on every article. It is particularly important that it should be done on this article. This is not the article to be making bold edits, nor uncertain edits. This is an article where we need people to be putting their proposals down on the talkpage and getting consensus. Who actually makes the edit after consensus has been done, doesn't matter. As long as that person actions the edit as agreed, and does not add their own twist as they are doing so. I am concerned there is not much time before ArbCom reconvenes, and I don't want edit wars to start up on the article between now and then. So I want all edits to the article to be secure and agreed. And if there are editors who are not able to discern when an edit has been agreed or not, they should be discouraged from editing the article. If necessary, permanently. I can't make that clear enough. The article has suffered for years because editors have taken unilateral action on the article rather than seeking consensus first. On a contentious topic like this it is vital to discus and get consensus. Doubly so when there's a moderated discussion taking place. And triply so when there's an ArbCom case being held in suspension.... ''']''' ''']''' 12:32, 15 June 2013 (UTC)
::Well, someone just made an extreme undiscussed change in the first sentence of the article. What happens now? <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 22:49, 15 June 2013 (UTC) ::Well, someone just made an extreme undiscussed change in the first sentence of the article. What happens now? <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 22:49, 15 June 2013 (UTC)
:::I've just notified that editor of the Moderated dicsussion ].--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 02:20, 16 June 2013 (UTC) :::I've just notified that editor of the Moderated dicsussion ].--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 02:20, 16 June 2013 (UTC)
::::Yes, that is the appropriate approach. I will copy this over to the talkpage so people are clear. ''']''' ''']''' 11:37, 16 June 2013 (UTC) ::::Yes, that is the appropriate approach. I will copy this over to the talkpage so people are clear. ''']''' ''']''' 11:37, 16 June 2013 (UTC)


If someone is already fully aware of the restrictions in place on the article, and they make an inappropriate edit, they will be sanctioned. If someone is not aware, they should be informed of the situation, and directed to this discussion page. Their edit can then be discussed and consensus sought as to what is to be done with it. Only obvious vandalism (such as "Misplaced Pages sucks", "My balls are big", "Wombats are best") and BLP violations should be reverted on sight. If it's a possible BLP violation it's best to revert and to let me know immediately - I will allow a fair amount of leeway on reverting possible BLP violations. Somebody in good faith adding, removing or altering content is '''not''' to be reverted. However, somebody who adds, removes or alters content without consensus and after being informed of the restrictions in place, will be sanctioned. Notify me, and I will deal with it. I will revert the edit and sanction the editor. Anyone can inform an editor of the restrictions in place, but only an independent admin or myself can carry out reverts and sanctions. If someone is already fully aware of the restrictions in place on the article, and they make an inappropriate edit, they will be sanctioned. If someone is not aware, they should be informed of the situation, and directed to this discussion page. Their edit can then be discussed and consensus sought as to what is to be done with it. Only obvious vandalism (such as "Misplaced Pages sucks", "My balls are big", "Wombats are best") and BLP violations should be reverted on sight. If it's a possible BLP violation it's best to revert and to let me know immediately - I will allow a fair amount of leeway on reverting possible BLP violations. Somebody in good faith adding, removing or altering content is '''not''' to be reverted. However, somebody who adds, removes or alters content without consensus and after being informed of the restrictions in place, will be sanctioned. Notify me, and I will deal with it. I will revert the edit and sanction the editor. Anyone can inform an editor of the restrictions in place, but only an independent admin or myself can carry out reverts and sanctions.
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I hope that is clear. ''']''' ''']''' 11:57, 16 June 2013 (UTC) I hope that is clear. ''']''' ''']''' 11:57, 16 June 2013 (UTC)


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:Sounds like a good 3/4 of a plan but is missing an important item. So drive-bys can edit it any way, and their edits can only be reverted by consensus? Guess where that will end up. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 13:21, 16 June 2013 (UTC) :Sounds like a good 3/4 of a plan but is missing an important item. So drive-bys can edit it any way, and their edits can only be reverted by consensus? Guess where that will end up. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 13:21, 16 June 2013 (UTC)
::Nothing is missing. A "drive by edit" is not by default a bad edit, and editors need to accept that the principle of Misplaced Pages editing is that we welcome contributions from all - not just those who have edited an article for a long time. An expert on the Tea Party movement may read the article, note some errors, or missing information, and quickly amend the article and move on. This is to be encouraged, not reverted. It would be better for folks to concentrate on sorting out the article rather than quibbling at attempts to moderate the process. ''']''' ''']''' 09:27, 18 June 2013 (UTC) ::Nothing is missing. A "drive by edit" is not by default a bad edit, and editors need to accept that the principle of Misplaced Pages editing is that we welcome contributions from all - not just those who have edited an article for a long time. An expert on the Tea Party movement may read the article, note some errors, or missing information, and quickly amend the article and move on. This is to be encouraged, not reverted. It would be better for folks to concentrate on sorting out the article rather than quibbling at attempts to moderate the process. ''']''' ''']''' 09:27, 18 June 2013 (UTC)
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Also, although the source used the word/said it, there is no requirement that everything that every source says and every word used (right or wrong) must get put into the article. Also, although the source used the word/said it, there is no requirement that everything that every source says and every word used (right or wrong) must get put into the article.


The proposal is to reword (or delete the whole sentence ''if necessary'') to remove any statement/implication that Ron Paul is a (neo)isolationist. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 14:39, 12 June 2013 (UTC) The proposal is to reword (or delete the whole sentence ''if necessary'') to remove any statement/implication that Ron Paul is a (neo)isolationist. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 14:39, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
:well said! Paul is a ], meaning free trade with all, entangling alliances with none. ] (]) 14:48, 12 June 2013 (UTC) :well said! Paul is a ], meaning free trade with all, entangling alliances with none. ] (]) 14:48, 12 June 2013 (UTC)


::As far as I am aware, Jefferson's approach has conventionally been referred to as isolationist, but he was not against free trade or interacting with other nations, or even sending the military to deal with pirates. ::As far as I am aware, Jefferson's approach has conventionally been referred to as isolationist, but he was not against free trade or interacting with other nations, or even sending the military to deal with pirates.
:::good point and part of the problem, few people, including RS know the actual def of ], ''the policy or doctrine of isolating one's country from the affairs of other nations by declining to enter into alliances, foreign economic commitments, '''foreign trade'''...'' ] (]) 18:04, 12 June 2013 (UTC) :::good point and part of the problem, few people, including RS know the actual def of ], ''the policy or doctrine of isolating one's country from the affairs of other nations by declining to enter into alliances, foreign economic commitments, '''foreign trade'''...'' ] (]) 18:04, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
::So, if a reliable source says "Jeffersonian" neo-isolationist (does the quote include Jeffersonian?), then it should not be considered misleading, as there is a historical context for that discourse. If a more modern and nuanced parlance is preferred, find a reliable source that uses such phraseology. If it has been found to be sufficiently objectionable, then there should be corresponding sources.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 16:17, 12 June 2013 (UTC) ::So, if a reliable source says "Jeffersonian" neo-isolationist (does the quote include Jeffersonian?), then it should not be considered misleading, as there is a historical context for that discourse. If a more modern and nuanced parlance is preferred, find a reliable source that uses such phraseology. If it has been found to be sufficiently objectionable, then there should be corresponding sources.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 16:17, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
:::Just leave out calling Ron Paul an "isolationist". Simple. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 17:18, 12 June 2013 (UTC) :::Just leave out calling Ron Paul an "isolationist". Simple. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 17:18, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
::::{{done}} I have removed the word "neo-isolationist" from the mainspace. regards .... ] (]) 03:26, 13 June 2013 (UTC) ::::{{done}} I have removed the word "neo-isolationist" from the mainspace. regards .... ] (]) 03:26, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
:::::What is the basis of the presumption of consensus on that? I don't believe that the discussion of the sources had even been concluded. Note that I wouldn't necessarily be opposed to the terms removal, I just want to see a source-based rationale. :::::What is the basis of the presumption of consensus on that? I don't believe that the discussion of the sources had even been concluded. Note that I wouldn't necessarily be opposed to the terms removal, I just want to see a source-based rationale.
:::::I haven't looked at the edit, but the term non-interventionist would be significantly more narrow in scope than "Jeffersonian neo-isolationist", which appears to have been cited from a reliable source, if I recall correctly. :::::I haven't looked at the edit, but the term non-interventionist would be significantly more narrow in scope than "Jeffersonian neo-isolationist", which appears to have been cited from a reliable source, if I recall correctly.
:::::I do not believe that the unlocking of the article is a license for anyone to make such edits without adequate discussion here, first.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 06:08, 13 June 2013 (UTC) :::::I do not believe that the unlocking of the article is a license for anyone to make such edits without adequate discussion here, first.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 06:08, 13 June 2013 (UTC)


:::::Try reviewing the edit. The entire meaning of the statement has been well preserved. ] (]) 12:02, 13 June 2013 (UTC) :::::Try reviewing the edit. The entire meaning of the statement has been well preserved. ] (]) 12:02, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
::::::Yes, the statement can be made without mislabeling Ron Paul as an isolationist. Doubly so since the statement isn't even about Ron Paul. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 13:21, 13 June 2013 (UTC) ::::::Yes, the statement can be made without mislabeling Ron Paul as an isolationist. Doubly so since the statement isn't even about Ron Paul. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 13:21, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
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It might be a good idea to open a section addressing the specific government programs the TP opposes and include the Social Security and Medicare programs which TP members depend on. Tea Party members and their supporters don't seem to be against them, yet these programs represent the same kind of huge government programs they are opposed to.

] (]) 15:17, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
:That would prove difficult. How do we delve into the complexity of Medicare which older Americans paid into their entire lives only to see cut for another entitlement (Obamacare), and social security which is backed by IOU's the federal government can only pay back with increased taxes or borrowing? Even saying they oppose these programs is troublesome. Opposition is more to the administration of such programs. ]<u>]</u> 15:31, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
::I thought it was an interesting dichotomy. Look at the demographic. They're all headed for retirement and will need these programs. I've mentioned this several times back in 2010 but nobody ever wanted to do it. ] (]) 16:23, 12 June 2013 (UTC)

::* Malke, please feel free to write a couple of paragraphs on that topic and post them here for approval. If there's a reliable source which specifically addresses that "interesting dichotomy," it should be identified and cited like this:

:::<blockquote>''Joe Blow, a political science professor at Wassamatta U., has examined the "paradox" created by the Tea Party movement's support for reform of Social Security and Medicare. Blow observes this support is not in the self-interest of many Tea Party members, since they tend to be over 50 years old and will be relying on these programs in a few years.''</blockquote>

::* There are three steps I'd like to take right away:

:::#One thing I think we should take action on immediately is adding the word ] (with the Wikilink) to the lede sentence. We were discussing it just before the moderated discussion started. I felt we had consensus for it, since there were so many reliable sources to support it. The allegations about ] have one or two sources, and are clearly a minority opinion per ].
:::#Another thing we should consider immediately is removing the ] section. The removal of the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" section has kind of orphaned THIS section. I suggest we cut the length of the paragraph about the gas grill in half, and add both events to the list of bulleted incidents at the end of ], in chronological order.
:::#Also, there's a subsection at the beginning of the "History" section called ]. Nothing there is notable enough to remain in this top-level article. It should be moved to the spin-off article, ], after the bulleted list of incidents.

::* '''Strongly support.''' Now that the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" roadblock has finally been removed, we can move forward with several other items that have been waiting patiently. The "grass-roots" edit, for example, has been waiting for two months. Let's get these three items done and move on. regards .... ] (]) 03:26, 13 June 2013 (UTC)

::*'''Oppose''' First, I believe that we are to be focusing on one item at a time, not multiple items in a haphazard manner.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 06:12, 13 June 2013 (UTC)

::::(A) There's nothing "haphazard" about it, and we have previously discussed more than one edit at a time — usually removal of the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" section, plus some other edit. (B) I don't see any substantive objection, just a procedural one, which has just been addressed — see (A). ] (]) 12:02, 13 June 2013 (UTC)

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I didn't have a chance to get back yesterday, but I realized the first goal here is to reduce content. I will postpone the Soc Sec issue until the reductions have been completed. My suggestion for further reducing content that might take the tension off from that last edit, is to reduce the protest/rally sections. We already have ] and the content could easily be transferred there. My suggestion for a remaining para, with a link to the main, is focus on the beginnings and then mention the spread to national, without too much detail. Just generalized. I'd be happy to write up a sample para if anybody is interested.

On the grassroots bit, because there's so much controversy about it (with editors), it is something that needs to be addressed here. We do have to take things one at a time. I just thought something easy, like reducing the protests section, might be something that is easy and could help foster a more collegial atmosphere. The race/bigotry section was stressful for all. (And I agree about the History section with it's "commentaries" subsection. I also agree with transferring the "Other events" section the subarticle.)

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:Yeah, maybe leave "grass roots" for later. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 14:01, 13 June 2013 (UTC)

I think that possibly the most messed up section in the article is the "polling of supporters". It's a ] ] fest, about the worst abuse of primary sources I've ever seen, uses hostile op-ed pieces as a "source" of polling data, and has misleading or inaccurate summaries. Many "gems" in there. For example "predominantly white" (any group representative of US polulaiotn is going to be "predominantly white") A good candidate to take a close look at. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 11:32, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
:This article was loaded with gems like that when we started. It was like the home of a ]. Now that responsible Wikipedians have taken charge of the situation and we're trying to clean it up, we're going to be hauling rubbish out of here for weeks. Every time we open the door to a new section, there's going to be a little avalanche of garbage falling out. regards ... ] (]) 16:19, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
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*There is a complaint on my talkpage regarding two edits by North, both of which are marked "Please revert me if you do not agree". If you are unsure about an edit, do not make it - come here for consensus first. Do not ask people to revert on an article with a revert restriction. This is tantamount to a honey trap. Reverting as a standard mode of editing needs to stop on this article. We should be aiming for an editing approach that does not involve reverting at all. I have looked at both edits. The first is acceptable as North was correcting a clear error. Such edits are encouraged. The second edit alters information without first having checked the source. We don't do that in any article. We don't guess. We don't make assumptions. We check our facts. A basic editing error. That is unacceptable in any article. It is particularly bad on this one. For making a revert without consensus. And for altering information without consensus. North8000 is also topic banned from this article for one week. *There is a complaint on my talkpage regarding two edits by North, both of which are marked "Please revert me if you do not agree". If you are unsure about an edit, do not make it - come here for consensus first. Do not ask people to revert on an article with a revert restriction. This is tantamount to a honey trap. Reverting as a standard mode of editing needs to stop on this article. We should be aiming for an editing approach that does not involve reverting at all. I have looked at both edits. The first is acceptable as North was correcting a clear error. Such edits are encouraged. The second edit alters information without first having checked the source. We don't do that in any article. We don't guess. We don't make assumptions. We check our facts. A basic editing error. That is unacceptable in any article. It is particularly bad on this one. For making a revert without consensus. And for altering information without consensus. North8000 is also topic banned from this article for one week.


I am not comfortable that in less than 48 hours of the article being unlocked there have been such poor examples of editing. I don't wish to put a chill effect on this article. But I do want to send out the message that if your editing skills and judgement are not up to the job you should not edit this article. If your contributions to this article are more negative than positive, then you need to either stay away voluntarily, or you will be forced to stay away. In just over two weeks ArbCom will reconvene to decide what is to happen regarding this article and those editors involved in editing it. I really want this article to be in good shape and making progress. If that means cutting out some editors along the way, then so be it. Time is running out. Let's get some quality editing done please. No more reverting. No more making assumptions. No more "bold" edits that remove sourced content. No more making political statements. If you are more interested in grandstanding your political views, then this article is not for you. There is some serious encyclopaedic work that needs to be done in the next two weeks. I'd like to see folks focus on that. ''']''' ''']''' 16:50, 14 June 2013 (UTC) I am not comfortable that in less than 48 hours of the article being unlocked there have been such poor examples of editing. I don't wish to put a chill effect on this article. But I do want to send out the message that if your editing skills and judgement are not up to the job you should not edit this article. If your contributions to this article are more negative than positive, then you need to either stay away voluntarily, or you will be forced to stay away. In just over two weeks ArbCom will reconvene to decide what is to happen regarding this article and those editors involved in editing it. I really want this article to be in good shape and making progress. If that means cutting out some editors along the way, then so be it. Time is running out. Let's get some quality editing done please. No more reverting. No more making assumptions. No more "bold" edits that remove sourced content. No more making political statements. If you are more interested in grandstanding your political views, then this article is not for you. There is some serious encyclopaedic work that needs to be done in the next two weeks. I'd like to see folks focus on that. ''']''' ''']''' 16:50, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
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:Well, that effect is already present. I've felt the inclination to remove editorializations of RS's and apply other corrections that would be proven non-controversial 95% of the time. Foresight of knee-jerk reactions have steered me towards inaction. Make of that what you will. Being said, North8000's removal of the 17th amendment was wrong. Both factually and procedurally. As for P&W's edit, there's a problem with the statement ''"...called partly conservative, partly libertarian, and partly populist."'' (which appears in the lead) not being supported in the body of subarticle, ], let alone the summary thereof in the body of ]. So, what we have is a violation of ] in both articles. Perhaps, the best course of action would be removal in both the lead and body of TPM until it's supported in the body of "Perceptions." Lest we continue to support more '''"poor examples of editing."''' ]<u>]</u> 18:27, 14 June 2013 (UTC) :Well, that effect is already present. I've felt the inclination to remove editorializations of RS's and apply other corrections that would be proven non-controversial 95% of the time. Foresight of knee-jerk reactions have steered me towards inaction. Make of that what you will. Being said, North8000's removal of the 17th amendment was wrong. Both factually and procedurally. As for P&W's edit, there's a problem with the statement ''"...called partly conservative, partly libertarian, and partly populist."'' (which appears in the lead) not being supported in the body of subarticle, ], let alone the summary thereof in the body of ]. So, what we have is a violation of ] in both articles. Perhaps, the best course of action would be removal in both the lead and body of TPM until it's supported in the body of "Perceptions." Lest we continue to support more '''"poor examples of editing."''' ]<u>]</u> 18:27, 14 June 2013 (UTC)


::First, I think Silk Tork's clarification of editing rules is brilliant and very clear and certainly easily followed from now on. So no excuses ever again. Second, I'm confused now about what the para is supposed to say, and I've asked P&W below to clarify his perceptions of what was to be included. We absolutely must all be on the same page here to prevent this happening again. ] (]) 18:39, 14 June 2013 (UTC) ::First, I think Silk Tork's clarification of editing rules is brilliant and very clear and certainly easily followed from now on. So no excuses ever again. Second, I'm confused now about what the para is supposed to say, and I've asked P&W below to clarify his perceptions of what was to be included. We absolutely must all be on the same page here to prevent this happening again. ] (]) 18:39, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
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] and ] are banned from editing the ] article until this time on 21 June 2013. If they do edit the article they will be blocked. They may continue to join in the discussion on this page. ''']''' ''']''' 17:02, 14 June 2013 (UTC) ] and ] are banned from editing the ] article until this time on 21 June 2013. If they do edit the article they will be blocked. They may continue to join in the discussion on this page. ''']''' ''']''' 17:02, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
:That was unnecessary. I did not remove sourced content from the article since it's still there, in the lede section of the article. I removed redundant material in an effort to proceed in a constructive way. That's all. Is trying to work constructively here going to be like a walk through a minefield every day? ] (]) 18:15, 14 June 2013 (UTC) :That was unnecessary. I did not remove sourced content from the article since it's still there, in the lede section of the article. I removed redundant material in an effort to proceed in a constructive way. That's all. Is trying to work constructively here going to be like a walk through a minefield every day? ] (]) 18:15, 14 June 2013 (UTC)


::Maybe I'm having a "Junior moment" (as opposed to a senior moment), but I was under the impression that the material in the perceptions section was to be moved to the subarticle once the remaining para in the main was agreed upon. Did we not agree to the version by Collect which you then changed? Or did we agree to the version you crafted earlier and did Silk Tork not action that edit? Please clarify, thanks. ] (]) 18:34, 14 June 2013 (UTC) ::Maybe I'm having a "Junior moment" (as opposed to a senior moment), but I was under the impression that the material in the perceptions section was to be moved to the subarticle once the remaining para in the main was agreed upon. Did we not agree to the version by Collect which you then changed? Or did we agree to the version you crafted earlier and did Silk Tork not action that edit? Please clarify, thanks. ] (]) 18:34, 14 June 2013 (UTC)


That was totally uncalled for! It was a gnome edit, the edit summary asked anybody who disagreed to revert me'. Where is the controversy? Who is going to argue that a TPM agenda item is to prevent the states from being allowed to pick their Senators by an election? And I don't even see that rule that you are describing anywhere. Where is it? You are going to turn this article into a fifth rail that nobody is going to want to risk working on. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 01:16, 15 June 2013 (UTC) That was totally uncalled for! It was a gnome edit, the edit summary asked anybody who disagreed to revert me'. Where is the controversy? Who is going to argue that a TPM agenda item is to prevent the states from being allowed to pick their Senators by an election? And I don't even see that rule that you are describing anywhere. Where is it? You are going to turn this article into a fifth rail that nobody is going to want to risk working on. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 01:16, 15 June 2013 (UTC)
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:I recognise there is a desire to keep the discussion all on one page, and I did try to hat all the closed discussions, but the page was becoming unwieldy, so I have moved all the closed discussions to a subpage: ]. I note there is an archive system in place, though there has been some disagreement over archiving, and how to do it. As part of the discussion on archiving, there should be consideration on how the archives of this page are to fit into the archives of the article talkpage. My moving of the closed discussions to a subpage is not ideal, as that subpage will need attention as it is not easy to navigate due to being very long, and the discussions are all hatted rather than being visible. So that should be seen as simply a temporary measure to free up editing of this page. ''']''' ''']''' 10:12, 18 June 2013 (UTC) :I recognise there is a desire to keep the discussion all on one page, and I did try to hat all the closed discussions, but the page was becoming unwieldy, so I have moved all the closed discussions to a subpage: ]. I note there is an archive system in place, though there has been some disagreement over archiving, and how to do it. As part of the discussion on archiving, there should be consideration on how the archives of this page are to fit into the archives of the article talkpage. My moving of the closed discussions to a subpage is not ideal, as that subpage will need attention as it is not easy to navigate due to being very long, and the discussions are all hatted rather than being visible. So that should be seen as simply a temporary measure to free up editing of this page. ''']''' ''']''' 10:12, 18 June 2013 (UTC)
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=== {{ex|’’Version 17’’, (version 12d revised for readability)}} ===
=='Viable' versions of the Agenda section==


''<u>Overall readability scores</u>'' '''14/31''' - partially de-archived <br>
'''8.)''' {{ex|The agenda of the Tea Party movement is generally aimed at reform, limiting the size and scope of the federal government, reduction of government spending and lowering of deficits/debt. Placing the Constitution at the forefront of its reform agenda, the movement advocates an originalist interpretation of the Constitution coupled with educational outreach efforts focused on the founding documents. Several constitutional amendments have been targeted by some in the movement for full or partial repeal, including the Fourteenth, Sixteenth, and Seventeenth. There has also been support for a proposed "Repeal Amendment," enabling states to repeal federal laws, and "Balanced-budget Amendment," which would constrain federal deficit spending.}}
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Blah, blah, the Tea Party has protested TARP, stimulus, cap and trade, Obamacare and perceived attacks by the federal government on their first, second, fourth and tenth amendment rights. Also have promoted right-to-work legislation and immigration enforcement at a state level. More recently, protesting the IRS for discriminative actions against conservative groups seeking tax-exempt status. <small>Encyclopedic green text if there's support for some or all of this.</small>
:Note that the quote from the Foley paper explicitly mentions several of those points, "''bailouts, stimulus packages and health-care reform... proposals to require a balanced budget''" --]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 15:37, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

{{ex|While lacking central leadership and representation enjoyed by political parties, the 'Contract from America' was created with the assistance of "hundreds of thousand of people" voting online for their "favorite principles" as a Tea Party platform. Its name was a play on the 'Contract with America' released by Republican Party during the 1994 midterm elections. Contract from America was met with some support within the Republican Party, but not broadly embraced by GOP leadership. They subsequently promulgated their own 'Pledge to America'.}}<br>
]<u>]</u> 14:24, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

===iVote on version {{ex|'''''7'''''}}===
Well, there would appear to be no further modifications of the above final version of the suggested text ({{ex|'''''version 7'''''}}), so I am going to take the initiative and call a vote of the sort that has been used on this page to assess consensus before actioning an edit.

*''''Support''' --]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 12:50, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

What is the proposed change? (I.E. what is proposed to be removed?) Doubly important because the main focus of the agenda is missing from the above. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 13:02, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
:This is intended to replace the entire Agenda section, to my understanding.
:If you are referring to the Contract from America section, please see Silk Torks's related comments, as well as the material I posted above in regard to the connection of Hecker to the TPm. If that question were answered, it would be possible to add to expand that paragraph by introducing a summary of the gist. Also see Silk Tork's and Malke's comments on the Foreign policy section, with which I am basically in agreement. I have started the Mead article, and though it is interesting, it hardly seems that a single source merits mention, and there are no pronouncements from any of the main TPm groups on foreign policy to the best of my knowledge (i.e., none have been introduced here).
:There will just be this one section, no subsections in the Agenda section under this schema.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 13:12, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

The Agenda section does not have to be perfect. So if folks are agreed that the section as proposed is a reasonably fair and balanced summary of the agenda of the Tea Party - enough that the general reader would be given a reliable and unbiased idea of the issues that appear to concern the movement, even if only roughly, then could it be actioned? And then folks can talk about what next needs doing. ''']''' ''']''' 13:40, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose as being misleading to users of the project''' I believe the proposed wording is inapt, inaccurate, and ascribes positions to the TPm which affect only one group or a small number of groups using that umbrella term, and by ascribing them to the entire group, they mislead the Misplaced Pages reader. I further suggest that support by only one or two editors does not meet the requirements for consensus on this discussion page. Cheers. ] (]) 14:01, 25 June 2013 (UTC) Note also that Foley's essay in support of changes to the Constitution, which is not about the Tea Party but is primarily about his own personal opinions, can not properly be used as it does not reflect the content of the source. we do not (and ought not) ] to prove a point on Misplaced Pages. ] (]) 15:08, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

*'''Support actioning the edit''' We spent several days achieving this text, and there is only about a week left on the moderation period.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 14:02, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

*'''Oppose''' If this were to substitute for the agenda section it largely misses the main items. 95% of this is talking about 5% of what they are doing, and 5% is talking about 95% of what they are doing. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 14:02, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

*'''Oppose''' I prefer a version which balances out the constitutional angle with more detail given to their political agenda. Doesn't make sense, IMO, to use block quotes in an ''Agenda'' section not by Tea Party politicians or talking heads. Also think major protest items would be a nice break between the constitution and 'Contract from America'. I forgot Agenda 22, but included reference to all other main points in preceding green text. ]<u>]</u> 14:33, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

==={{ex|'''''Version 9'''''}}===
<big>9.</big> {{ex|The agenda of the Tea Party movement is generally aimed at government reform, including limiting the size and scope of the federal government, reducing government spending and lowering the national debt and deficit. Placing the Constitution at the center of its reform agenda, the movement advocates an originalist interpretation of the Constitution coupled with educational outreach efforts focused on the founding documents.}}

{{ex|<blockquote>...The Tea Party’s constitutional vision is designed to be mobilized. The core elements of the Tea Party Constitution are relatively easily grasped and they readily lend themselves to translation into tangible political action. Tea Party constitutionalism challenges its adherents to do more than just passively accept its basic tenets.<ref> </ref></blockquote>}}

{{ex|Focus on the Constitution is emphasized in election campaigns, and several Amendments, including the Fourteenth, Sixteenth, and Seventeenth, have been targeted for partial or full repeal. Tea Partiers have also expressed widespread support for a proposed "Repeal Amendment" enabling states to repeal federal laws with the stated aim of restoring the constitutionally defined balance between federal and state power.}}

{{ex|<blockquote>Tea Party opposition to bailouts, stimulus packages and health-care reform is reflected in various proposals to amend the Constitution, including proposals to require a balanced budget, repeal the Sixteenth and Seventeenth Amendments, and give states a veto power over federal laws (the so-called Repeal Amendment).<ref>http://ssrn.com/abstract=1904656Foley, Elizabeth Price , Sovereignty, Rebalanced: The Tea Party and Constitutional Amendments (August 3, 2011). Tennessee Law Review, Vol. 78, p. 751, 2011]</ref></blockquote>}}

{{ex|While lacking central leadership and representation enjoyed by political parties, the ] was created with the assistance of "hundreds of thousand of people" voting online for their "favorite principles" as a Tea Party platform. Its name was a play on the ] released by Republican Party during the 1994 midterm elections. Though the Tea Partiers statement met with some support in the Republican Party, it was not broadly embraced. The Republican Party subsequently promulgated its own ].}}

{{ex|After President Obama's reelection in 2012, the movement focused its efforts on questioning the constitutionality of the federal health care law in the courts, and also mobilized locally against the United Nations ].}}.}}
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===10===
10. {{ex|''The Tea Party movement primarily seeks lower taxation and smaller federal government, and is based on strong adherence to the Constitution and a belief in limited government. Zemike notes that local groups frequently had concerns related to their own location, including immigration and other issues. The ] was written with substantial Tea Party influence.''}}

*'''Oppose''' as uninformative and eliding the gist of the Tea Party movements's constitutional agenda, while calling undue attention to local issues and neglecting those national in scope.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 16:44, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

Of all the sources, Zemike appears to be the most comprehensive and usable in the context in which he writes. I get rid of the useless word "agenda" here (as if readers can not figure this one out), and add the CfA as being influenced by the TPm. I avoid long quotes (Zemike quote would be in ref), and avoid all really iffy claims - that Foley wants 17th Amendment repeal does not mean this is generally true of the TPm as he makes no such direct claim. I also do not include manatees. Again - the Foley block quote is wrenched from the full context of the essay favouring Constitutional change by Foley. Cheers. ] (]) 15:23, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

:Well then, "Of '''all the sources'''", it appears that there may be questions relating to WP:DUE and WP:WEIGHT.
:By the way, I didn't use a wrench--copy&paste!--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 15:39, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
::Might you tell us which sources are most comprehensive in discussing the TPm in its variegated forms? And why you would not like Zemike who seems pretty accurate from all I have read now? BTW, "DUE" and "WEIGHT" are pretty clear (they are the same material, so referring to each is outré). When making a short summary statement, there is no requirement that ''every possible position and factoid'' be included to meet the requirements of Misplaced Pages. Rather, our task is to provide readers with an encyclopedia article which is usable and accurate. Adding in the :"manatee" issue, for example, is pure silliness were we to do so. And please ''exclude'' essays by folks pushing their own views of the Constitution here, and taking single quotes fully out of context therefrom in a ] exercise. <g>. Cheers. ] (]) 15:49, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
::::To whom does the statement "''folks pushing their own views of the Constitution''" refer? For the record, I reiterate that Misplaced Pages has a policy ], and that the POVs of authors of reliably published secondary sources are valued as RS statements on the respective topics addressed ].
::::The suggestion that the use of the passage quoted from the Foley paper is "quote mining" is also objectionable. I've already pointed at the the explicit prominent mention of "The Tea Party" as indicative of the focus on the TPm, and have referred to the Repeal Amendment with respect to the "stated aim of restoring the constitutionally defined balance between federal and state power.", which is the crux of Federalism. The paper by Foley is not a paper about Foley, but about the TPm and its agenda viewed through proposals to amend the Constitution. There is nothing misleading in the excerpting of the quote from that paper. Seeing that there is already resistance to describing any measures related to the Constitution in depth in the Agenda section, one could reasonably expect that a brief mention would not only suffice, but be widely acceptable.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 03:10, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
:::::The person to whom I referred is Foley, and his "essay" is clearly promoting his own views of the Constitution. I had thought the context was crystal clear. And he makes no effort to hide his POV and the fact that he is using his essay to promote his POV. And as in all cases, using an essay for a claim of fact is ''intrinsically'' problematic. And again the "paper" is an "essay" and is described as such by Foley. I think we have now shown that it is not usable for the broad factual claim you seem to think it makes as fact. Cheers. ] (]) 12:01, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
::::::Well, considering that you have started a thread on the RS/N regarding the Foley paper, the matter has not yet been resolved. Note that in that posting it was not stated that the "essay" was published in , instead, a website "constitution.org", which appears to be unrelated, was cited. The source has been cited five times on this page as being published in the Tennessee Law Review, which I would generally assume to be peer reviewed. Furthermore, the paper is cited in a recent publication that is part of a series entitled "Routledge Research in Constitutional Law" Routledge being an academic press, and the book being on the Constitution, with Foley being cited in relation to the TPm's position on the Constitution .
::::::Third, the term "folks" is plural, so the subject of the statement was unclear, particularly in light of the fact that the content of the legal papers by Schmidt and Zietlow have also been questioned.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 15:02, 26 June 2013 (UTC)

:::Might you tell us the source that describes the "''variegated forms''" of the TPm? I focus on sources that describe the movement as a whole, in general terms, as they are most informative to the reader with respect to the scope of the article.
:::Incidentally, I find it interesting that this version proposes to do away with the term "agenda", considering that a
:::"''Tea Party '''Agenda''': Contract From America''"
:::section first appeared in the article no later than 29 April 2010.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 18:21, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
::::We have had a ''slew'' of sources already given referring to the fact that there is ''no'' central organization, that the various groups have differing agendas and you ask me for sources for this???? I can simply give you Zemike if you like, and the NYT and about a hundred other sources which make the point. As for using the word "agenda" when it is awkward in normal English grammar here - I think that the NYT MOS etc. would help you understand that simple language is better than convoluted language. NPR '' the book is a guide for people to organize decentralized movements like the Tea Party.'', Willey ''THE DECENTRALIZED SOCIAL MOVEMENT: HOW THE TEA PARTY GAINED RELEVANCY IN THE NEW MEDIA ERA'', Feinberg ''The Tea Party is not a new cohesive party but a large number of disorganized and disparate groups largely comprised of conservative Republicans'', Rasmussen noting its "disorganized quality." and so on ... Cheers. ] (]) 18:51, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
:::::The sources cited describe the '''organization''' of the TPm, not their ''agenda''.
:::::Perhaps the following quote will serve to illustrate the value of blockquotes in relation to controversial topics.<blockquote>The Tea Party contains a welter of oftentimes conflicting Agendas... Yet within this confusing constellation of ideas and viewpoints, there is a relatively stable ideological core to the Tea Party. This core is particularly evident when one focuses on the vision of the Constitution regularly professed by movement leaders, activists, and supporters.<ref> </ref></blockquote>--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 03:10, 26 June 2013 (UTC)

===<big>{{ex|'''''Version 11'''''}}</big>===

<small> Mindful of ThinkEnemies', Malke's and Collect's opposition to undue weight vis-a-vis the Constitution in ''Agenda'' section and usage of blockquotes while also conforming with , and ThinkEnemies' support for having a ''Constitution'' section. I see the latter being a subsection in ''Academic studies''. ]<u>]</u> 15:54, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
:Small steps toward compromise, perhaps, but the text is somewhat muddled, and therefore questionable with respect to readability and the degree to which it is informative to the reader. There is no question of undue weight vis-a-vis the Constitution, as every source that discusses the TPm agenda addresses its relationship to the Constitution in a prominent manner. The only issue would seem to be providing adequate coverage for all of the views, but that could be handled in a separate section if the summary in the Agenda section were balanced.
:Blockquotes are efficient and add credibility, when used appropriately. Here, when strong statements are being made in the voice of the encyclopedia, particularly in relation to controversial topics such as this, it helps to quote authoritative sources.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 16:05, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
::My preferred text "unmuddles" what I perceive to be unnecessary, overly-confusing insertions of detail which add little to the overall encyclopedic value. <s>I also believe there was a plagiarized sentence if memory serves.</s> I'm glad we both agree your sources have given the constitution ''undue'' weight to the Tea Party's political agenda. And I'm aware other editors were concerned about having Tea Party supporters identify their own agendas. My second paragraph can fix that as actual legislation they've protested is easily-sourced and actions speak louder than words. An editor mentioned at "unmoderated" TPM-talk that the USSR had a way of misrepresenting their agenda in ways which flew in the face of their actions. ]<u>]</u> 16:36, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
:::Which sentence was plagiarized?--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 16:40, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
::::Is that really relevant? Just observations while copy-editing. Not criticism focused on anyone. ]<u>]</u> 16:44, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
:::::Well, that is a policy violation, and though it can occur inadvertently, since you raised the issue, what is the problem in responding?--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 16:47, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
::::::Checked, just a few words here or there in succession. No need to sound the alarm. Retracted. ]<u>]</u> 16:56, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
{{ex|The agenda of the Tea Party movement is generally aimed at reform, limiting the size and scope of the federal government, reduction of government spending and lowering of deficits/debt. Placing the Constitution at the forefront of its reform agenda, the movement advocates an originalist interpretation coupled with educational outreach efforts focused on the founding documents. Several constitutional amendments have been targeted by some in the movement for full or partial repeal, including the Fourteenth, Sixteenth, and Seventeenth. There has also been support for a proposed "Repeal Amendment," enabling states to repeal federal laws, and "Balanced-budget Amendment," which would constrain federal deficit spending. Lacking a clearly defined foreign policy, Tea Party groups have stated public opposition to U.N. 'Agenda 21'.}}

Blah, blah, the Tea Party has protested TARP, stimulus, cap and trade, Obamacare and perceived attacks by the federal government on their first, second, fourth and tenth amendment rights. Also have promoted right-to-work legislation and immigration enforcement at a state level. More recently, protesting the IRS for discriminative actions against conservative groups seeking tax-exempt status. <small>Encyclopedic green text if there's support for some or all of this.</small>

{{ex|While lacking central leadership and representation enjoyed by political parties, the 'Contract from America' was created with the assistance of "hundreds of thousand of people" voting online for their "favorite principles" as a Tea Party platform. Its name was a play on the 'Contract with America' released by Republican Party during the 1994 midterm elections. Contract from America was met with some support within the Republican Party, but not broadly embraced by GOP leadership. They subsequently promulgated their own 'Pledge to America'.}}<br>
]<u>]</u> 15:46, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

:I'd like input on my solutions for all stated concerns, to whom it may concern. ]<u>]</u> 17:01, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

::Looks good, TE. My concern is that a section on the constitution will grow into a large mass that will require an ArbCom admin to help remove it. My suggestion has been, at least I hope I've mentioned it, is to create a subarticle on the topic with a para in the main with a link to it. I'll support any paragraph that does not use block quotes, does not point exclusively to scholarly articles which are nothing but opinion with a graduate degree attached, and seems reasonably neutral. ] (]) 18:52, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
:::Forgot to mention, I love the 'blah, blah, blah.' Please keep that. ] (]) 04:18, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
::::Thanks, Malke. I was conflicted about using two ''blahs'' instead of the standard three. It was a tough decision, but I'm happy with the results. In all seriousness, I was hoping for more feedback on paragraph two. Not exactly surprised by virtual silence given the uninviting environment of this page. Chilliest summer ever.
::::On the ''Constitution'' section -- Guess we'll have to cross that bridge when we come to it. I see no reason for an ''Agenda and the constitution'' section. ]<u>]</u> 11:57, 26 June 2013 (UTC)

Suggest we work out a version that has has some small problems but no big problems and put it in. Then tweak it from that, recognizing that it has some problems and that such is planned. I think that a tidied up version of #11 might be that. The overemphasis on constitutional ''details'' could be be fixed later. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 11:41, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
:At the least, it would be a moral victory for all involved to see some actionable results. I'm open to any and all tweaks. The groundwork is there, IMO. ]<u>]</u> 12:04, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
::In short, let's put a tidied up version of #11 in, agreeing that it will still need some work after that. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 13:39, 26 June 2013 (UTC)

===<big>{{ex|'''''Version 12'''''}}</big>===

{{ex|The agenda of the Tea Party movement is generally aimed at reform, limiting the size and scope of the federal government, reduction of government spending and lowering of deficits/debt. Placing the Constitution at the forefront of its reform agenda, the movement advocates an originalist interpretation coupled with educational outreach efforts focused on the founding documents. Several constitutional amendments have been targeted by some in the movement for full or partial repeal, including the Fourteenth, Sixteenth, and Seventeenth. There has also been support for a proposed "Repeal Amendment," enabling states to repeal federal laws, and "Balanced-budget Amendment," which would constrain federal deficit spending. Lacking a clearly defined foreign policy, Tea Party groups have stated public opposition to U.N. 'Agenda 21'.

The Tea Party has protested TARP, stimulus, cap and trade, Obamacare and perceived attacks by the federal government on their first, second, fourth and tenth amendment rights. They support right-to-work legislation and immigration reform that includes provisions for border security to prevent the problem in the future. They have formed SuperPacs to support candidates sympathetic to their goals and have opposed what they call the “Republican establishment” candidates. They protested the IRS for discrimination against conservative groups seeking tax-exempt status.

While lacking central leadership and representation enjoyed by political parties, the 'Contract from America' was created with the assistance of "hundreds of thousand of people" voting online for their "favorite principles" as a Tea Party platform. Its name was a play on the 'Contract with America' released by Republican Party during the 1994 midterm elections. Contract from America was met with some support within the Republican Party, but not broadly embraced by GOP leadership. They subsequently promulgated their own 'Pledge to America'.}}<br>

] (]) 14:22, 26 June 2013 (UTC)

Per whatever comes out of ] on the Foley essay, I would ''remove'' the specifics about amendments, and specify that most of the "agenda items" are those of ''subgroups'' of the TPm and do not necessarily represent the agenda of the ''entire'' group, and that material sourced to an essay should be removed. I still also suggest the forced use of "agenda" is not necessary and is, in fact, verging on redundancy. The "word play" comment is also of little use to readers. ] (]) 15:02, 26 June 2013 (UTC)

{{ex|The Tea Party movement generally aims at reform to limit the size and scope of the federal government, to reduce government spending, to reduce government deficits, and to oppose tax increases. Some call the Tea Party interpretation of the Constitution "originalist."

Some Tea Party groups have protested TARP, stimulus, cap and trade, Obamacare and other government programs. Some support right-to-work legislation and immigration reform that includes provisions for border security to prevent the problem in the future. The IRS treatment of groups using the term "tea party" in their names has been a matter of controversy.

The 'Contract from America' was created with the assistance of "hundreds of thousand of people" self-identifying with the "Tea Party" voting online for their "favorite principles" as a Tea Party platform.<br>}}

Which fixes what I see as substantial issues with the proposal. ] (]) 15:02, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
:Foley is not the only source that discusses Amendments. I have posted detailed quotes in a hatted section above from Schmidt and others. Schmidt discusses both the 16th and 17th in detail as well as the Repeal Amendment, and mentions the 14th in a footnote, while Somin discusses the 16th and 17th. Skocpol also mentions the TPm's pushing for amendments, etc.
:This text has numerous other problems, such as being unsourced, referring to many local actions that seem to relate more to events and (re)actions than specific agenda items. Phrases like, "Some call the Tea Party interpretation of the Constitution "originalist" is somewhat uninformative and leaves the reader wondering, whereas the fact of the matter is that a new term has been coined by a constitutional scholar to describe the TPm's version of originalism.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 15:26, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
:'''Correction, Somin discusses the 16th Amendment and the Repeal Amendment''' in the posted quotes. Note that the quotes are solely from academic sources--peer-reviewed legal journals--there are also many news media sources that discuss the specific Amendments, including more than one NTY article, etc., several of which have been discussed on this page previously.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 12:18, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
:::The fact that I did not muddy the page up with yet more non-utile footnotes does ''not'' mean "unsourced". Really. And that you have posted extensive detailed quotes is not indicative of much of anything at all. The question is how we present the complex topic to Misplaced Pages readers. Cheers -- I would like to see the constructive comments on this proposal which I crafted as best I could to meet everyone's positions here with the goal of reaching a consensus. ] (]) 17:19, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
The specific amendment number should go regardless of RSN, but we could do that later. Either of these is good enough, with the understanding that additional tweaks are needed. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 15:24, 26 June 2013 (UTC)

::Collect might be right. Maybe we shouldn't get too specific. If Jay Leno went into a crowd of tea party peeps from different groups and asked 'what is meant by constitutional originalism,' some might say it's about Adam and Eve, at least one would say Al Gore is the current VP (like the tourist at Grauman's who told Leno that on the night of the Iowa caucuses in 2008) a few would say it was a new cable series like Judge Judy but with a Supreme Court justice named Jefferson instead of Judy, most rest would likely say it had something to do with taking a daily constitutional around the mall, and one would say it had to do with limiting federal powers and states' rights. ] (]) 17:14, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
:::Okay, Malke - that paragraph had me chuckling out loud. :-) Seriously though, we shouldn't be too hard on the average TPer's understanding of Constitution-related stuff; several reliable sources have noted that TPers on average are a degree more engaged with the Constitution than the average American voter. Pocket-constitution booklets are popular merchandise at rallies, and "instructional seminars" on the Constitution are conducted by more than a few local TP groups. ] (]) 17:58, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
::::Glad you liked it. They might be buying those pocket guides but they couldn't quote them to Leno and win the gift certificate to Morton's on La Cienega. But you're right they are more aware of the constitution, but I think it's like they're aware they have a glove compartment in their vehicle but they couldn't tell you what's in it. IMHO, this is all about the fact that they can't sell their homes as planned to use the profits for their retirement. Right after the housing market comes back and the value of their homes comes back to where they were before 2008, they'll sell and move to Naples Florida. Then they'll be so happy to have that great affordable care from that nice Mr. Obama. That's what this is really all about IMHO. ] (]) 21:32, 26 June 2013 (UTC)

==={{ex|'''''Version 13'''''}}===
<big>13.</big> {{ex|The agenda of the Tea Party movement is generally aimed at government reform, including limiting the size and scope of the federal government, reducing government spending and lowering the national debt and deficit. Placing the Constitution at the center of its reform agenda, the movement advocates an originalist interpretation of the Constitution coupled with educational outreach efforts focused on the founding documents.}}

{{ex|<blockquote>...The Tea Party’s constitutional vision is designed to be mobilized. The core elements of the Tea Party Constitution are relatively easily grasped and they readily lend themselves to translation into tangible political action. Tea Party constitutionalism challenges its adherents to do more than just passively accept its basic tenets.<ref> </ref></blockquote>}}

{{ex|Focus on the Constitution is emphasized in election campaigns, and several Amendments, including the Fourteenth, Sixteenth, and Seventeenth, have been targeted for partial or full repeal. Tea Partiers have also expressed widespread support for a proposed "Repeal Amendment" enabling states to repeal federal laws with the stated aim of restoring the constitutionally defined balance between federal and state power.}}

{{ex|<blockquote>Tea Party opposition to bailouts, stimulus packages and health-care reform is reflected in various proposals to amend the Constitution, including proposals to require a balanced budget, repeal the Sixteenth and Seventeenth Amendments, and give states a veto power over federal laws (the so-called Repeal Amendment).<ref></ref></blockquote>}}

{{ex|While lacking the centralized leadership of a political party, Tea Party activists and supporters helped create the ] by voting in an online campaign in which participants were asked to vote for their favorite principles, with the result being promulgated as a ten-point Tea Party platform.<ref name="Davis">{{Cite news|url=http://abcnews.go.com/Politics/tea-party-activists-craft-contract-america/story?id=9740705|title=Tea Party Activists Craft 'Contract from America'|last=Davis|first=Teddy|date=9 February 2010|work=ABC News|publisher=American Broadcasting Company|accessdate=18 September 2010}}</ref><ref>{{cite web|last=Davis |first=Teddy |url=http://abcnews.go.com/Politics/tea-party-activists-unveil-contract-america/story?id=10376437&page=2 |title=Tea Party Activists Unveil 'Contract from America' |publisher=ABC News |date=April 15, 2010 |accessdate=June 7, 2011}}</ref> The third point in the platform calls for enacting a Constitutional Amendment requiring a balanced budget.}}
{{ex|<blockquote>3. Demand a balanced federal budget: Begin the Constitutional amendment process to require a balanced budget with a two-thirds majority needed for any tax modification.</blockquote>}}

{{ex|Its name was a play on the ] released by Republican Party during the 1994 midterm elections. Though the Tea Partiers statement met with some support in the Republican Party, it was not broadly embraced. The Republican Party subsequently promulgated its own ].}}

{{ex|After President Obama's reelection in 2012, the movement shifted its focus to challenging the constitutionality of the federal health care law in the courts, while also mobilizing locally against the United Nations ].}}.
The Tea Party doesn't have a single uniform agenda. The decentralized character of the Tea Party, with its lack of formal structure or hierarchy, allows each autonomous group to set its own priorities and goals. Goals may conflict, and priorities will often differ between groups. Many Tea Party organizers see this as a strength rather than a weakness, as decentralization has helped to immunize the Tea Party against co-opting by outside entities and corruption from within.<ref name="Rauch1">"Group Think: Inside the Tea Party’s Collective Brain"; National Journal; Jonathan Rauch; September 11, 2010</ref><br>
--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 16:03, 26 June 2013 (UTC)


The Tea Party has generally sought to avoid placing too much emphasis on traditional conservative social issues. National Tea Party organizations, such as the ] and ], have expressed concern that engaging in social issues would be divisive.<ref name="Rauch1"/> Instead, they have sought to have activists focus their efforts away from social issues and focus on economic and limited government issues.<ref name="AssocPress">; KTVB News; January 28, 2010</ref><ref></ref> Still, many groups like ]'s 9/12 Tea Parties, TeaParty.org, the Iowa Tea Party and Delaware Patriot Organizations do act on social issues such as abortion, gun control, prayer in schools, and illegal immigration.<ref></ref><ref name="AssocPress"/><ref></ref><br>
:Either way, I could still see this going in even with the tangent of over analyzing constitutional details. That said, I think that the centrality of the constitution in the TPM agenda, dialog etc. more general......that strict adherence to it will tend to limit expansion of government. I see the detailed stuff about adding and subtracting particular amendments to be overemphasis. But I think we should move forward and put it in even with that issue. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 17:07, 26 June 2013 (UTC)


The Tea Party generally focuses on government reform. Among its goals are limiting the size of the federal government, reducing government spending, lowering the national debt and opposing tax increases.<ref name="Foley1">], law professor at ] College of Law, writing on the Tea Party's proclamations regarding the Constitution, observed: "Tea Party opposition to bailouts, stimulus packages and health-care reform is reflected in various proposals to amend the Constitution, including proposals to require a balanced budget, repeal the Sixteenth and Seventeenth Amendments, and give states a veto power over federal laws (the so-called Repeal Amendment)." (Foley, Elizabeth Price. ''Tennessee Law Review,'' Vol. 78, p. 751. August 3, 2011.)</ref> To this end, Tea Party groups have protested ], ], ], ] and perceived attacks by the federal government on their 1st, 2nd, 4th and 10th Amendment rights.<ref name="Zernike1">Kate Zernike, a national correspondent for ''],'' wrote: "It could be hard to define a Tea Party agenda; to some extent it depended on where you were. In the Northeast, groups mobilized against high taxes; in the Southwest, illegal immigration. Some Tea Partiers were clearer about what they didn't want than what they did. But the shared ideology — whether for young libertarians who came to the movement through Ron Paul or older 9/12ers who came to it through Glenn Beck — was the belief that a strict interpretation of the Constitution was the solution to government grown wild. By getting back to what the founders intended, they believed they could right what was wrong with the country. Where in the Constitution, they asked, does it say that the federal government was supposed to run banks? Or car companies? Where does it say that people have to purchase health insurance? Was it so much to ask that officials honor the document they swear an oath to uphold?" (Zernike, Kate. '''' New York: Times Books, 2010, pp.65-66.)</ref> Tea Party groups have also voiced support for ] legislation as well as tighter border security, and opposed amnesty for illegal immigrants.<ref>; Fox News; July 5, 2013</ref><ref>; National Review; Betsy Woodruff; June 20, 2013</ref> They have formed ] to support candidates sympathetic to their goals and have opposed what they call the "Republican establishment" candidates. After setbacks in the ], the movement again shifted its focus. With repeal off the table, the Tea party now leads efforts to ] federal health care law.<ref name="Fringe"/><ref name="Rauch2">; National Journal; Jonathan Rauch;March 2, 2011</ref> It has also mobilized locally against the ] ].<ref name="Fringe">{{cite news
::Some ''substantive'' changes to the proposal to differentiate it from prior proposals would help a lot. ] (]) 17:21, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
| last = Gabriel | first = Trip
| title = Clout Diminished, Tea Party Turns to Narrower Issues
| newspaper = The New York Times
| date = December 25, 2012
| url = http://www.nytimes.com/2012/12/26/us/politics/tea-party-its-clout-diminished-turns-to-fringe-issues.html?pagewanted=all
}}</ref><ref>{{cite web
| last = Carey | first = Nick
| title = Tea Party versus Agenda 21: Saving the U.S. or just irking it?
| publisher = Reuters.com
| date = October 15, 2012
| url = http://www.reuters.com/article/2012/10/15/us-usa-campaign-teaparty-agenda-idUSBRE89E04J20121015
}}</ref> They have protested the IRS for ] of groups with "tea party" in their names.<ref>; Wall Street Journal; Rebecca Ballhaus; June 19, 2013</ref><br>


Even though the groups have a wide range of different goals, the Tea Party places the Constitution at the center of its reform agenda.<ref>Schmidt</ref><ref>; New York Times; Adam Liptak, March 13, 2010</ref><ref name="Foley1"/> It urges the return of government as intended by the ]. It also seeks to teach its view of the Constitution and other founding documents.<ref name="Rauch1"/> Scholars have described its interpretation variously as ], popular,<ref>; Northwestern University Law Review; Ilya Somin; December 6, 2011</ref> or a unique combination of the two.<ref>Rebecca E. Zietlow, law professor at the ] College of Law, characterizes the Tea Party's constitutional position as a combination of two schools of thought: "originalism" and "popular constitutionalism." "Tea Party activists have invoked the Constitution as the foundation of their conservative political philosophy. These activists are engaged in 'popular originalism,' using popular constitutionalism — constitutional interpretation outside of the courts — to invoke originalism as interpretive method." (Zietlow, Rebecca E. ''Florida Law Review,'' Vol. 64, p. 483 (2012).0</ref><ref>; Hastings Constitutional Law Quarterly; Christopher W. Schmidt; May 9, 2012</ref> Reliance on the Constitution is selective and inconsistent. Adherents cite it, yet do so more as a cultural reference rather than out of commitment to the text, which they seek to alter.<ref>''The Tea Party and the Remaking of Republican Conservatism''; Theda Skocpol and Vanessa Williamson; ]; 2012; Pgs. 50-51</ref><ref>; Contexts May 2011 vol. 10 no. 2; Andrew J. Perrin, Stephen J. Tepper; Pgs. 7-8</ref><ref name="Zernike2">; Kate Zernike; Macmillan Publishers; 2010; Pages 67-68</ref><ref>; Virginia Law Review; James E. Ryan; November 2011; Page 19-20</ref><ref>''The Tea Party: A Brief History''; Formisano, Ronald; The Johns Hopkins University Press; 2012; Page 52</ref> Several constitutional amendments have been targeted by some in the movement for full or partial repeal, including the ], ], and ]. There has also been support for a proposed ], which would enable a two-thirds majority of the states to repeal federal laws, and a ], which would limit deficit spending.<ref name="Foley1"></ref><br>
:::(e/c)No block quotes. Too much emphasis from one author's opinion. They didn't 'shift focus after President Obama's election.' That's not accurate and it makes it seem ad hominem. They were always against Obamacare from the beginning. The 2012 election did not change that. They weren't focused on the constitution and then suddenly changed tactics because Obama got reelected. ] (]) 17:29, 26 June 2013 (UTC)


One attempt at forming a list of what Tea Partiers wanted Congress to do resulted in the '']''. It was a legislative agenda created by conservative activist Ryan Hecker with the assistance of ] of FreedomWorks. Armey had co-written the previous ] released by the Republican Party during the 1994 midterm elections. One thousand agenda ideas that had been submitted were narrowed down to twenty-one non-social issues. Participants then voted in an online campaign in which they were asked to select their favorite policy planks. The results were released as a ten-point Tea Party platform.<ref name="Davis">{{Cite news|url=http://abcnews.go.com/Politics/tea-party-activists-craft-contract-america/story?id=9740705|title=Tea Party Activists Craft 'Contract from America'|last=Davis|first=Teddy|date=9 February 2010|work=ABC News|publisher=American Broadcasting Company|accessdate=18 September 2010}}</ref><ref name="Davis2">{{cite web|last=Davis |first=Teddy |url=http://abcnews.go.com/Politics/tea-party-activists-unveil-contract-america/story?id=10376437&page=2 |title=Tea Party Activists Unveil 'Contract from America' |publisher=ABC News |date=April 15, 2010 |accessdate=June 7, 2011}}</ref> The Contract from America was met with some support within the Republican Party, but it was not broadly embraced by GOP leadership, which released its own ']'.<ref name="Davis2"/><br></div>
::::Also, they did not come together as a cohesive force and create contract from America. That was Ryan Heckler and the Tea Party Patriots supported. It's not a good idea to generalize these things to the entire movement. ] (]) 17:31, 26 June 2013 (UTC)


Unresolved concerns:
:::::I see no convincing rationale justifying removal of the block quotes. I provided my rationale above for using them.
:::::I have assessed the suggested texts above, and they have more shortcomings than this, in my opinion.
:::::Thanks North8000, for recognizing that at least this is not all that biased. I would suggest that coming down a little on the side of "overemphasis" is better than omission.
:::::I have tightened up the language to the extent I can see possible at present, and brought a couple of points into clearer focus, I think. It is quite compact, yet sufficiently informative.
:::::With respect to Heckler, please see the section above addressing the question of his connection to the TPm. The sources simply identify him as a TPm activist in Houston. If there are more specific sources, I would be willing to modify the sentence accordingly to reflect the content.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 17:39, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
::::::Compromise is the goal. ] (]) 17:45, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
:::::::I'm doing my best. This version is rather minimalist, from my perspective. And I've incorporated a number of revisions suggested by others along the way.
:::::::Most importantly, I think this version is strikes a balance between being adequately informative and not excessively detailed, which I believe is possible to do in light of: first, tacit agreement regarding a separate section--outside of the Agenda section--or a subarticle dealing with the massive amount of published text focusing on the Constitution; and second, the use use of two blockquotes that contained condensed information.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 17:50, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
:::::::Let me add that, I am willing to admit that there is a something of a want of detail in the specific correlation of detail in the Foley quote between the specific agenda points and the corresponding Amendment points. Nevertheless, I also feel that the mention of several specific agenda points that have been raised in other versions of proposed text are mentioned for the first and only time, making the trade-off overall a plus, as it allows for a more compact text while maintaining a high level of informativeness. --]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 18:09, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
:::::::Regarding some of the points Malke raised just above: I'm on the fence with regard to "blockquotes". I have absolutely no problem with quoting a source, but quoting the source by using the "blockquote" mark-up feature does lend a slight emphasis to that text by separating and indenting it. That doesn't mean it's a bad thing, but care must be used. Regarding "shifting focus", it's true that they were always against the health care legislation, and they still are - the actual change in "focus" (as explained ) is in how they are now fighting Obamacare since Obama was re-elected, and repeal is no longer an option. They have shifted to nullification by the individual states, and killing the funding for it at the local level. Maybe that wording should be made more clear? Regarding Contract from America, Hecker had that idea before the Tea Party even existed (yup, 2008), and the 10-point agenda wasn't exactly created "by the Tea Party". The list of proposed agenda items (generated by just a few thousand surveys from both within and outside of the Tea Party -- not "hundreds of thousands") was first vetted by FreedomWorks and stripped down to 21 items. This info used to be at www.thecontract.org, but is now unfortunately scrubbed. ''Then'' that list of 21 pre-selected items were presented online to activists to have them prioritized (that's where the "hundreds of thousands of votes" comes in). Maybe that wording should be made more clear as well. ] (]) 18:44, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
::::::::Well, if you feel there are important details that are key to informing the reader, then they should be included. Otherwise, too fine-grained a level of detail in this summary section simply serves to detract from the purpose. As for the blockquotes, how do you propose to compensate for the content?
::::::::It seems to me that the details of Hecker are of negligible import, and if they weren't, the account provided in the readily available sources would be more detailed. If you can clarify points without warping the scope, then by all means. Otherwise, prepare for more substantial revision. What knowledge does the reader gain from any of that in relation to the TPm? There is no article at present on Misplaced Pages about Hecker, though I suppose he is notable.
::::::::The shift in focus is in part meant to emphasize the shift of the battleground to the courts from the electorate.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 19:12, 26 June 2013 (UTC)


:4) Introduce the pedestrian understanding of constitutional originalism by sociologists: {{ex|Reliance on the Constitution is selective and inconsistent. Adherents cite it, yet do so as a cultural reference rather than out of commitment to the text, which they seek to alter.}}
:::::::::I agree with Xenophrenic. That is exactly how the Contract from America came about. And he's right about the rest of it. On the block quotes, we've had them before and they are revert magnets. ] (]) 20:29, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
:*'''Oppose''' - You don't call a plumber to tell you why the furnace is acting up. ]<u>]</u> 21:25, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::::::::And Obamacare is the reason they are focused on the constitution and states' rights. They were also very disappointed that the Supremes went around the Commerce Clause to say it wasn't a constitutional violation. ] (]) 20:32, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
:::Addendum: Malke and P&W's versions both have this sentence in their proposed paragraph on ''Contract from America'', which I don't object to adding if we intend to scrap the present subsection on that same topic:
{{od}}As far as the CfA material is concerned, I raised the question almost a week ago above, and no one replied. If the details matter to an extent warranting insertion in this context, then somebody please revise that text. Note that the information being discussed here isn't even included in the main article on the CfA. Maybe that should be revised first, meaning revising this sentence or two could wait until that has been done.
::::''The top ten included "identify the constitutionality of every new law, reject cap and trade legislation, demand a balanced federal budget, simplify the tax code, assess constitutionality of federal agencies, limit growth in annual federal spending, repeal Obamacare, new energy policy that supports exploration, reduce earmarks, and reduce federal taxes."''
:(added subsequent to original post for clarification) Alternatively, correct any misstatements; however, bear in mind that the sentence I proposed was based on two sources from the main article on CfA, so there should probably be sources added.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 12:26, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
:::] (]) 10:25, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
:Here are those sources, for which I have just left refs in the above suggested text, and slightly re-worded the text to make it less inaccurate. According to the information that has been provided here, these sources are somewhat incomplete, but what is the fix in a case such as this?
::::I'd keep the list, but we do need a merge for reduced redundancy. ]<u>]</u> 21:30, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
:Note that the first article (Feb. 2010) describes Hecker as "a Tea Party activist in Texas", while the second in the series (Apr. 2010) mentions that he came up with the idea in 2008, and only describes him as "a 29-year old lawyer from Houston". Does someone want to further edit the text to reflect this, or can it wait until there is a more comprehensive source and we can vote on this? --]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 15:29, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
With regard to states rights, I believe that the TPm was associated with Federalism before the health care bill was passed. The issue of the powers of congress and the 16th Amendment also relate to the balance between state and federal power. The way I see it is that the health care law just gave the TPm a target to go after in the courts.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 02:48, 27 June 2013 (UTC)


:Same answer as the previous 5 versions. Good enough to go in as a starting point for further work. With the understanding that it needs changes which we can handle then. (Including later fixing the travesty "Reliance on the Constitution is selective and inconsistent." If someone advocates blacks' right to vote and cites the constitution, but fails to advocate the right to bear arms in the same speech, do you put that "inconsistent" statement in their article?) Would not replace the subsections which would be handled separately. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 13:41, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
Noting that I, for one, do not always ''instantly reply'' to every point raised in every post here, I would like to note that "overemphasis" is ''specifically contrary'' to Misplaced Pages guidelines and policies. The one thing we specifically must ''not'' do is "overemphasize" what we ] to be the ] - our task is to reach ] through compromise in order to provide readers with articles which do ''not'' use "overemphasis" whatsoever, ever. Cheers. ] (]) 09:07, 27 June 2013 (UTC) (Noting that edits have been made to the posts to which I have replied ''without'' the poster noting the changes for others to see) ] (]) 11:52, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
:::You are referring to the comment under version 12 related to sourcing, I gather. At any rate, I've self-reverted and re-posted that with an expanded text. The other comment I expanded in this section is not a comment related to CfA to which you appear not to have responded, but I have made the adidition thereof more conspicuous so that all can see what you refer to above.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 12:26, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
:It is clear that it is not overemphasis as far as the sources and relevant policies of WP:RS and WP:DUE are concerned. The comment I made was made in response to a statement articulating a perception that was in favor of compromise of the text, while voicing concerns in terms of a personal view on the specificity regarding the Amendments, without making recourse to policy. It is clear that I feel that omitting a POV contained in RS would be a violation of WP:NPOV and WP:DUE, for starters, while potentially assigning something too much weight, which is the suggestion, would not necessarily be a policy violation, and is something that could be resolved later if not perfect. Silk Tork has made that point more than once.
:Deliberating how much weight a given POV found in RS deserves to be given is quote different from excluding a POV that is clearly articulated in numerous sources.
:What is the point of the mention of WP:KNOW and WP:TRUTH? There are a plurality of RS that specifically mention several Amendments by name or number, which is the basis upon which I have composed the suggested text. I have repeatedly discussed those.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 09:42, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
:It appears that I should add that the sources being discussed are only the academic sources available online--peer-reviewed legal journals--there are also many news media sources that discuss the specific Amendments, including more than one NTY article, etc., several of which have been discussed on this page previously. I would imagine that some of the recently published books also list specific Amendments by number, etc. The fact is that there are multiple sources that present a POV relating to the TPm's aims and proposals to repeal specific Amendments and add the Repeal Amendment. I didn't think that was even an issue.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 12:33, 27 June 2013 (UTC)


::re: ''Reliance on the Constitution is selective and inconsistent. Adherents cite it, yet do so as a cultural reference rather than out of commitment to the text, which they seek to alter.''
In light of an utter lack of progress, I've added a short primary source blockquote of the CfA plank related to the balanced budget amendment proposal, and am calling a vote. Please continue the commenting there.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 01:46, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
::Two objections have been raised about that text. The first, is that it is opinion, rather than reliably sourced fact. This is incorrect; the sources do not say they are opining, and the sources (the Oxford University published book, and the peer-reviewed academic paper) are indeed reliable. Also, equally reliable sources calling that text into question have not been produced. Further objections along those lines would be better handled at ].
::The second objection, as I understand it, is that the text is inaccurate or false. The "right to vote/right to bear arms" example doesn't exemplify the reasoning behind the "inconsistent" description being used here. Here is some of the source content supporting the proposed text:


::{{quotation|It can further be found in the TPM’s recurring cultural theme of returning to the ideals of the Constitution. Like the Tea Party name, this theme is <u>selectively nostalgic</u> <u>Support for Constitutional principles is not absolute.</u> TPM supporters were twice as likely than others to favor a constitutional amendment banning flag burning; many also support efforts to overturn citizenship as defined by the Fourteenth Amendment. That TPM supporters <u>simultaneously want to honor the founders’ Constitution and alter</u> that same document highlights the political flexibility of the cultural symbols they draw on. The TPM supporters’ <u>inconsistent views of the Constitution</u> suggests that their nostalgic embrace of the document is animated more by a network of cultural associations than a thorough commitment to the original text. (Perrin, Pgs. 7-8)}}
{{cot|a few more refs citing TPm positions on Amendments, "popular constitutionalism", etc.}}
::{{quotation|They are doing what every political endeavor does: using history as a source of inspiration and social identity. Just like other political actors, past and present, Tea Partiers <u>stretch the limits of the Constitution, use it selectively, and push for amendments</u>. Tea Partiers have argued for measures such as restrictions on birthright citizenship, abridgements of freedom of religion for Muslim-Americans, and suspension of protections in the Bill of Rights for suspected terrorists. <u>Some parts of the Constitution are lauded over others</u>. (Skocpol/Williamson, Pgs. 50-51)}}
Albert, pp. 4-5
::The "inconsistency" is not so much that they do advocate one part while not advocating another part of the Constitution (although they do that, too), but more that they advocate adherance to the constitution while at the same time advocating amending or repealing. Did I incorrectly word what the sources are saying, or is the contention that the sources are just wrong? ] (]) 19:59, 10 July 2013 (UTC) (I note that North8000 is travelling, and says we can fix this later, but I thought I'd at least try to get a clearer picture of the objection.) ] (]) 19:59, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
''Richard Albert. "The Constitutional Politics of the Tea Party Movement." Northwestern University Law Review Colloquy 105, (2011): 267-270.''
Then Somin, a leading theorist on the study of popular political participation and its implications for constitutional democracy, evaluated the '''Tea Party movement as an example of “popular constitutionalism.”''' Somin’s presentation assessed the Tea Party movement against the larger backdrop of the trend toward reviving constitutional limits on federal power.


:::I'd call it misleading POV wording, including if a source said it. Again, we can fix this after it's in. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 13:36, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
Next to the stage was Barnett, perhaps the leading conservative constitutional theorist in the nation. Barnett situated the Tea Party movement within the national debate on health care and federalism, and also '''discussed his work with Tea Party leaders on a constitutional “Repeal Amendment”''' that would give a supermajority of state legislatures the power to repeal any federal law or regulation.
::::"A source" didn't say it, many sources have. Here's another one:
::{{quotation|The Tea Partiers' view of the Constitution was commonly described as "originalism," a fidelity to the exact words of the document as they were written in 1787 that has adherents at major universities and, in Antonin Scalia and Clarence Thomas, on the U.S. Supreme Court. And some Tea Partiers' version of the Constitution sounded just like that. But many others were learning <u>subjective interpretations of the Constitution that went beyond the primary source, and beyond what legal scholars or Americans would recognize</u>—even using a dictionary—in reading the original document. (Zernike; Boiling Mad, Pgs. 67-68)}}
::::And another one in this academic, peer reviewed paper contrasting conservative originalism with progressive living constitutionalism (cited in no fewer than 33 academic journals and papers):
::{{quotation|It serves as a critical counterweight to the <u>distorted history</u> pedaled by many conservative politicians and activists, including the members of the Tea Party. These activists seek to portray themselves as the true defenders of the Constitution, but <u>they are selective in their defense</u> and in their vision. They incorrectly portray the powers of the federal government established by the original Constitution as exceedingly limited, which ignores both the language of the Constitution and the crucial fact that it was adopted in response to the flawed Articles of Confederation, which failed to establish a strong national government. In addition to distorting the original Constitution, Tea Partiers <u>often pretend as if the Constitution were never amended and therefore simply ignore</u> the expansion of individual rights and federal power accomplished by those amendments. When <u>selective amnesia fails</u>, they call for <u>jettisoning portions of the Constitution they dislike</u>, including the guarantee of citizenship in the Fourteenth Amendment to all who are born in the United States. Indeed, Justice Scalia jumped on the Tea Party bandwagon last year in suggesting that the Seventeenth Amendment was a bad idea, which is simultaneously remarkable and somewhat beside the point for a sitting Justice, whose oath is to defend the Constitution—even the parts he may not like. Put simply, the rise of the Tea Party has led to a national debate over the meaning of the Constitution, which has recently focused on the constitutionality of health care reform. The <u>distortions, selective reading of the Constitution</u>, and calls for constitutional amendments by Tea Partiers demand a response from progressives, and Amar‘s work outlines a devastating one. But there is a further lesson in here for progressives who remain uncertain about the wisdom of embracing the Constitution. If the Tea Partiers have to fiddle so much with the actual Constitution in order to claim that it supports their positions, doesn‘t that in itself constitute excellent proof that the real Constitution is not nearly as conservative as the Tea Partiers would like? (James E. Ryan; Virginia Law Review, Pgs. 19-20)}}
::::Another highly regarded source published by Johns Hopkins University Press makes this observation in his book specifically about the Tea Party movement:
::{{quotation|The federal government, especially Congress, must be held to a strict interpretation of the Constitution. Like other Americans, however, Tea Party supporters are selective about which passages to ignore and which to revere. (Formisano; Pg. 52)}}
::::So, to recap, here's the proposed text based on many reliable sources: '''"Reliance on the Constitution is selective and inconsistent. Adherents cite it, yet do so more as a cultural reference rather than out of commitment to the text, which they seek to alter."''' That accurately conveys what the multiple reliable sources say, without being misleading. Are there other concerns?
::::] (]) 05:44, 21 July 2013 (UTC)


== Getting back to work ==
Finally, the audience heard from Levinson, perhaps America’s foremost progressive constitutional theorist. Levinson took the view that we should applaud the Tea Party movement’s attention to the deep interconnections among basic constitutional structures and political outcomes—a theme that has been the focus of much of Levinson’s own scholarship. Levinson was clear, though, to express his '''disagreement with the Tea Party movement’s broader constitutional vision and, more specifically, with the “Repeal Amendment”''' championed by Barnett.


===Suggestions on what to work on next===
''NYT article, “Radical Constitutionalism”''
'''Of the newly elected Tea Party senators, Mike Lee, a 39-year-old Republican from Utah, has the most impeccable establishment legal credentials'''...
Lee proposed to dismantle, on constitutional grounds, the federal Departments of Education, and Housing and Urban Development. He insisted that “the Constitution doesn’t give Congress the power to redistribute our wealth” and vowed to phase out Social Security. He '''proposed repealing the 16th Amendment, which authorizes the progressive federal income tax, and called the 17th Amendment, which allows senators to be elected by popular vote rather than by state legislatures, a “mistake.”'''
Many of the positions Lee outlined on the campaign trail appear to be inspired by the '''constitutional guru of the Tea Party movement, W. Cleon Skousen'''…
…'''Skousen also calls for the repeal of the 16th and 17th Amendments''', which he views as an affront to states’ rights…


It might be a good idea to open a section addressing the specific government programs the TP opposes and include the Social Security and Medicare programs which TP members depend on. Tea Party members and their supporters don't seem to be against them, yet these programs represent the same kind of huge government programs they are opposed to.
''NYT article, “Tea Party Rooted in Religious Fervor for Constitution”''
The creation of the amendment process is a fairly evident acknowledgment of the Constitution’s capacity for imperfection and anachronism. ('''Many of the Tea Party’s defenders of the Constitution advocate repeal of the 14th and 17th Amendments''', which makes it confusing whether all or only some of the amendments fall short of inerrancy.)
--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 14:53, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
{{cob}}
{{cot|Amazon blurbs on Foley's book, including review by Ron Paul}}
For the record, Foley is also the author of a book on the Tea Party movement
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There would seem to be a substantial body of evidence to support citation of the above passage, which would seem to be an uncontroversial reiteration of facts. The only opposition being made to using the citation is that the quote is used simply as a statement of fact, whereas the quote was made by a legal scholar that is largely supportive of aspects of the constitutionalism of the Tea Party.


] (]) 15:17, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
Here are some blurbs from the Amazon page, including reviews<blockquote>''Book Description''
:That would prove difficult. How do we delve into the complexity of Medicare which older Americans paid into their entire lives only to see cut for another entitlement (Obamacare), and social security which is backed by IOU's the federal government can only pay back with increased taxes or borrowing? Even saying they oppose these programs is troublesome. Opposition is more to the administration of such programs. ]<u>]</u> 15:31, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
In The Tea Party: Three Principles, Elizabeth Price Foley asserts that the mainstream media's characterization of the American Tea Party movement is distorted. Foley sees the decentralized, wide-ranging group as a movement bound by allegiance to three "core principles" of American constitutional law: limited government, unapologetic U.S. sovereignty, and constitutional originalism. She explains how these principles predict the Tea Party's impact on the American political landscape, connecting them to current issues, such as health care reform, illegal immigration, the war on terror, and internationalism.</blockquote><blockquote>"Elizabeth Price Foley has produced an interesting and important work on the constitutional basis for the agenda of the Tea Party movement.... I do believe anyone interested in understanding how the growth of the welfare-regulatory state violates the constitution and threatens liberty can benefit from reading this book." - Ron Paul, United States Congressman (R-TX)</blockquote><blockquote>"Elizabeth Price Foley's The Tea Party is a clear and straightforward explication of what the Tea Party Movement is all about, and is required reading for anyone who wants to understand the current political climate. With this slim, provocative volume, Foley once again demonstrates why she is one of constitutional law's rising stars." - Glenn Harlan Reynolds, Beauchamp Brogan Distinguished Professor of Law, University of Tennessee College of Law</blockquote>
::I thought it was an interesting dichotomy. Look at the demographic. They're all headed for retirement and will need these programs. I've mentioned this several times back in 2010 but nobody ever wanted to do it. ] (]) 16:23, 12 June 2013 (UTC)


::* Malke, please feel free to write a couple of paragraphs on that topic and post them here for approval. If there's a reliable source which specifically addresses that "interesting dichotomy," it should be identified and cited like this:
<blockquote>“By elevating principle above party, the Tea Party has already changed the face of American politics. In this marvelous book, Elizabeth Price Foley clearly identifies and defends the three basic principles that unite the Tea Party movement, all stemming from its commitment to our written Constitution. Politicos beware; the party has just begun.”– Randy E. Barnett, Professor of Constitutional Law, Georgetown Law Center, and author of Restoring the Lost Constitution: The Presumption of Liberty (2005)</blockquote>
--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 01:14, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
{{cob}}
I hate to say this but '''Amazon blurbs are not reliable sources for anything at all'''. Nor do they make the essay a reliable source for the claims you wish to make from a single sentence in it. Nor does anyone else at RS/N concur with such a usage. ] (]) 01:34, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
:Yes, likely they could be filed under ] at RS/N. ] (]) 15:58, 28 June 2013 (UTC)


:::<blockquote>''Joe Blow, a political science professor at Wassamatta U., has examined the "paradox" created by the Tea Party movement's support for reform of Social Security and Medicare. Blow observes this support is not in the self-interest of many Tea Party members, since they tend to be over 50 years old and will be relying on these programs in a few years.''</blockquote>
===iVote on {{ex|''Version 13''}}===
As there is limited time before the Arbcom case reconvenes, and since there have been no new suggestions in the past 24 hours other than the modifications I've made to the CfA material, while some are lobbying Xenophrenic for a version--which would be welcome--I'm going to call a vote on version 13 in its current state. If anyone has further suggestions, please post them in a new version below. Noe that I've posted information above (hatted section) in relation to objections to using the Foley blockquote, and posted an agenda point from the CfA on the proposed balanced budget amendment referred to by Foley.
*'''Support actioning edit of version 13''' --]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 01:46, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' Iterating essentially the same proposal over and over and suggesting instant auctioning is not productive. The exact same problems are here as in the past, and the concept of seeking compromise is lacking in this iterated proposal. Cheers. BTW, the idea that 24 hours is sufficient to have your own position adopted by default is not exactly airworthy. ] (]) 06:53, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' The unattributed blockquotes are a non-starter as demonstrated in conversations above. Version 13 represents a clear step back in the consensus process. ]<u>]</u> 08:56, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' Per ThinkEnemies and Collect. Well said. ] (]) 15:33, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' Several problems. Can we get one together that genuinely takes feedback into account? <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 15:39, 28 June 2013 (UTC)


::* There are three steps I'd like to take right away:
==={{ex|'''''Version 14?''''' a smaller proposal}}===


:::#One thing I think we should take action on immediately is adding the word ] (with the Wikilink) to the lede sentence. We were discussing it just before the moderated discussion started. I felt we had consensus for it, since there were so many reliable sources to support it. The allegations about ] have one or two sources, and are clearly a minority opinion per ].
A movement is defined by it's agenda. Trying to get this all important section down to a few short paragraphs is a bad idea. So how about this:
:::#Another thing we should consider immediately is removing the ] section. The removal of the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" section has kind of orphaned THIS section. I suggest we cut the length of the paragraph about the gas grill in half, and add both events to the list of bulleted incidents at the end of ], in chronological order.
#Quickly prepare a slightly pared and tidied version of version 12, as being a substitute ''only for the intro paragraphs in the agenda section'' I could do this if folks want.
:::#Also, there's a subsection at the beginning of the "History" section called ]. Nothing there is notable enough to remain in this top-level article. It should be moved to the spin-off article, ], after the bulleted list of incidents.
#Put it in.
#''Then'' tackle what to do with the "contract" section. Keep as is, contract/summarize/pare, eliminate etc. (consider "expansion" to be off the table)
#''Then'' tackle what to do with the "foreign policy" section. Keep as is, contract/summarize/pare, eliminate etc. (consider "expansion" to be off the table)
So we could quickly go 1/2 a step forward. And SilkTork, if you consider this idea proposal to be outside of the plan, I will strike it. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 15:54, 28 June 2013 (UTC)


::* '''Strongly support.''' Now that the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" roadblock has finally been removed, we can move forward with several other items that have been waiting patiently. The "grass-roots" edit, for example, has been waiting for two months. Let's get these three items done and move on. regards .... ] (]) 03:26, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
::I'm not adverse to this. But let me explain what I'd like to see happen now. We've had proposals made, and there's enough material on the table for people to find one of those proposals to work on. What I don't want to see is more proposals, and get into a situation where people simply offer proposal and counter-proposal, and folks are no longer working together collaboratively, but in opposition. I'd like folks to find one version that people agree can be worked on, and then folks work together to make it acceptable (not perfect, but an acceptable starting point). So - we can take forward your suggestion. Let's find an acceptable working version (perhaps 12), and then look at the issues in that version, and make it better - if that means paring it down, and parking the contract and foreign policy sections for later, that's OK. But the first stage is to find a version that most people agree is the best one to be working on. And then we look at the issues arising from that. Does that make sense?
::And while I'm here - which version of Version 12 are people talking about? Malke's original version, or Collect's amendment? ''']''' ''']''' 17:57, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
:::I'm easy....either pare down Malke's or build up Collect's.......I lean towards starting with Malke's. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 18:31, 28 June 2013 (UTC)


::*'''Oppose''' First, I believe that we are to be focusing on one item at a time, not multiple items in a haphazard manner.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 06:12, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
===Version vote===
I'd like an indication now which two of the versions (I think the viable versions run from 7 through to 13) people feel they can live with, and is better than what is currently in the article. The process will be to indicate first and second preference. No need for additional comments at this stage. I'll assess which version is favourite, and then ask what specific objections people have to that version. Depending on the result of that discussion the outcome will be to either insert the chosen version, work on amending it, or continue to search for another version. I'm cool about the format of the vote, though an example might be:
*1st {{ex|13}}; 2nd {{ex|12}}. ]. 15:13, 28 June 2013


::::(A) There's nothing "haphazard" about it, and we have previously discussed more than one edit at a time — usually removal of the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" section, plus some other edit. (B) I don't see any substantive objection, just a procedural one, which has just been addressed — see (A). ] (]) 12:02, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
Though this is called a vote - it's just the first stage in establishing consensus. It's about finding a version that most people feel is workable, and then discussing objections. ''']''' ''']''' 14:15, 28 June 2013 (UTC)


{{od}}
*1st {{ex|13}}; 2nd {{ex|6(b)}} (Xenophrenic's revised version)--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 14:36, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
I didn't have a chance to get back yesterday, but I realized the first goal here is to reduce content. I will postpone the Soc Sec issue until the reductions have been completed. My suggestion for further reducing content that might take the tension off from that last edit, is to reduce the protest/rally sections. We already have ] and the content could easily be transferred there. My suggestion for a remaining para, with a link to the main, is focus on the beginnings and then mention the spread to national, without too much detail. Just generalized. I'd be happy to write up a sample para if anybody is interested.


On the grassroots bit, because there's so much controversy about it (with editors), it is something that needs to be addressed here. We do have to take things one at a time. I just thought something easy, like reducing the protests section, might be something that is easy and could help foster a more collegial atmosphere. The race/bigotry section was stressful for all. (And I agree about the History section with it's "commentaries" subsection. I also agree with transferring the "Other events" section the subarticle.)
*IMO #12 is the best. But I'd rather see another proposal that sort of combines the feedback. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 15:22, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
*{{ex|12}}, which is a continuation of {{ex|11}}; heavily influenced by {{ex|6(B)}}. ]<u>]</u> 15:38, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
*{{ex|12}}, Per TE and North. This does seem premature to me. I don't see discussion among the other editors like North and TE, and Collect and Xeno and myself rushing for a vote. ] (]) 15:47, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
*{{ex|12}} although I think some of my "12a" wording may suffice as being clearer and more succinct (run the choices through a readability index checker for fun) . 13 is a "non-starter" in race parlance. ] (]) 17:56, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
*{{ex|12}} Quite obviously the best choice of the ones that are available. ] (]) 17:56, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
*{{ex|12}} or 12c ] (]) 07:53, 30 June 2013 (UTC)


] (]) 13:16, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
==Readability Index==
12 and 12a each have a grade level of 16, and 12 has a readability index of 16, and 12a one of 20. 10 is the level ''some'' legalese hits on the F/K index. Anything less is pretty much unreadable. 13 has a grade level of 17 and an index of 9, which 6b has a grade level of 20 and a readability of 5. . Ideally articles should aim for a grade level of 12 or so, and a readability of at least 20 as a dead minimum. Feel free to check your favourite articles on this. ] (]) 18:42, 28 June 2013 (UTC)


Note: a grade level of 16 is "college graduate", 20 is "doctoral level" for grade level. Cheers. ] (]) 18:46, 28 June 2013 (UTC) :Yeah, maybe leave "grass roots" for later. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 14:01, 13 June 2013 (UTC)


I think that possibly the most messed up section in the article is the "polling of supporters". It's a ] ] fest, about the worst abuse of primary sources I've ever seen, uses hostile op-ed pieces as a "source" of polling data, and has misleading or inaccurate summaries. Many "gems" in there. For example "predominantly white" (any group representative of US polulaiotn is going to be "predominantly white") A good candidate to take a close look at. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 11:32, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
:As an aside, I would suggest that it is far easier to improve readability than the grade level of content. If you start out aiming for high readability at the expense of content, you wind up dumbing down the text, which I would imagine to run counter to the goals of the encyclopedia.
:This article was loaded with gems like that when we started. It was like the home of a ]. Now that responsible Wikipedians have taken charge of the situation and we're trying to clean it up, we're going to be hauling rubbish out of here for weeks. Every time we open the door to a new section, there's going to be a little avalanche of garbage falling out. regards ... ] (]) 16:19, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
:Is there some pre-established standard for prescribing the target audience for particular articles? Or is that determined in accordance with the corresponding WP:RS on the topic, which in this case includes multiple reliably published papers by legal scholars.
:Working on a paragraph-by-paragraph basis, I could easily improve the readability of version 13. For example, I have incorporated changes in wording in 13 from versions suggested by others that is probably too abbreviated, and also resulted in sentence lengths that are longer, which could be reduced in other cases as well.
:The first suggested text I submitted started with the sentence<blockquote>''The agenda of the Tea Party movement is aimed at government reform.''</blockquote>which now reads<blockquote>''The agenda of the Tea Party movement is generally aimed at government reform, including limiting the size and scope of the federal government, reducing government spending and lowering the national debt and deficit.''</blockquote>
:It's not a bad sentence, but as for grade-level/readability indexes, the former is:


===Let's get back to work===
:<blockquote>Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: '''10''' / Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: '''47'''.</blockquote>
:While the later is:<blockquote>
:<blockquote>Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: '''21''' / Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: '''4'''.</blockquote>
:In this case, the attempt I made to be collaborative resulted in a text that is deemed unattractive based on other criteria.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 06:10, 29 June 2013 (UTC)


I think we should get back to work. The article has been substantially improved, but we still have a lot of work to do. SilkTork has left us since he's traveling during the next week and won't have Internet access. The ArbCom case has started up again, so I'm sure we'll all be on our best behavior, and we have a rough framework of rules for future procedure proposed by North8000.
In the case that improved readability would be considered important to a majority of editors, the following version of the first paragraph scores a 16/15 on the above-referenced scale, whereas the present version of the corresponding paragraph scores 21/-3. The first paragraph of version 12 scores 16/14, and that of 12(a) 16/15.
13 first paragraph, revised for readbaility.<blockquote>{{ex|The agenda of the Tea Party movement is aimed at government reform. Among the goals are limiting the size of the federal government, reducing government spending, and lowering the national debt. The movement places the Constitution at the center of its reform agenda, while advocating an originalist interpretation coupled with educational outreach efforts.}}</blockquote>--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 06:36, 29 June 2013 (UTC)


The race/bigotry section and the agenda section were very difficult and stressful for everyone. It seems to me that to a very substantial extent, they are done. There may be some follow-up work to do with the agenda sub-sections, and some tweaking of the language we've already added/changed in that section (including refcites — ). But I think the big problems have been resolved, and we can go forward with some less challenging portions of the article.
:Check out the results: Grade level of 17 and R/I of 9. Not an improvement, alas. And still harder to read than the IRS Code <g>. ] (]) 07:55, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
::To what results are you referring?
::The result I posted are for the above paragraph from the website linked to above in your earlier post . I believe that it is you that needs to ''"check out the results"''.
::The comment with <g> appended to the end is unhelpful, as it is merely your personal opinion, alas.Moreover, it has the same readability score as the opening paragraph of the suggested text posted as 12(a), but it includes much more information. The the reason that I have spent the time to undertake this exercise is because there is an impartial indexing website available. Cheers.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 08:58, 29 June 2013 (UTC)


Let's get on the stick.
Here are rewritten versions of each paragraph of the text of {{ex|''version 13''}}--excluding the blockquotes, and their corresponding scores. The overall score, incidentally, is '''15/20'''.


My proposal for three minor improvements will be slightly modified as described below. This is to make it more attractive to those who may have been opposed to the original proposal. Modified portions and some explanation and argument have been added in ''italics'' and <s>strikethrough.</s>
'''Paragraph 1: 16/15'''


:#One thing I think we should take action on immediately is adding the word ] (with the Wikilink) to the lede sentence. We were discussing it just before the moderated discussion started. I felt we had consensus for it, since there were so many reliable sources to support it. The allegations about ] have one or two sources, and are clearly a minority opinion per ]. ''Astroturfing allegations have already been presented in the body of the article. If necessary, these can be expanded upon, particularly with footnoted blockquotes from Formisano and Skocpol.''
{{ex|The agenda of the Tea Party movement is aimed at government reform. Among the goals are limiting the size of the federal government, reducing government spending, and lowering the national debt. The movement places the Constitution at the center of its reform agenda, while advocating an originalist interpretation coupled with educational outreach efforts.}}
:#Another thing we should consider immediately is removing the ] section. The removal of the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" section has kind of orphaned THIS section. I suggest we <s>cut the length of the paragraph about the gas grill in half, and</s> add both events to the list of bulleted incidents at the end of ], in chronological order.
:#Also, there's a subsection at the beginning of the "History" section called ]. Nothing there is notable enough to remain in this top-level article. It should be moved to the spin-off article, ], after the bulleted list of incidents. ''I think it's important to identify this as'' '''''"criticism and''''' ''commentaries," since that's what it is, and identify critics as progressives and anti-tobacco activists, since their motives in raising these criticisms are most likely partisan.''


* '''Strongly support.''' Now that the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" roadblock ''and the agenda roadblock'' <s>has</s> ''have'' finally been removed, we can move forward with several other items that have been waiting patiently. The "grass-roots" edit, for example, has been waiting for <s>two</s> '''''three''''' months. Let's get these three items done and move on. regards .... ] (]) 13:45, 6 July 2013 (UTC)
'''Paragraph 2: 16/20'''
{{ex|The Constitution is a focal point for the Tea party in election campaigns. Several Amendments, including the Fourteenth, Sixteenth, and Seventeenth, have been targeted for repeal. Tea Partiers have also expressed widespread support for a proposed "Repeal Amendment" that would enable states to repeal federal laws, with the stated aim of restoring the constitutionally defined balance between federal and state power.}}


* '''Comment''' The addition of grass roots was opposed P&W and you continue to confuse voting with consensus. Otherwise I really don't see the point until the Arbcom position is settled. It ha gone back there because this approach did not work. ----] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 04:50, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
'''Paragraph 3: 15/19'''
::There's no confusion on my part, Snowded. The TPm is a ]; this is the majority position per ]. The example that I used in previous incarnations of this thread was the ] article. Even though a minority of reliable sources, including (at that time) the Vice President of the United States, the Attorney General, and two Deputy Attorneys General were of the opinion that in some cases waterboarding was not torture, a majority of sources stated that it was torture. Accordingly, the first six words of the ] article are, "Waterboarding is a form of torture" In previous incarnations of this discussion thread over the past six months, I've linked at least 18 reliable sources stating that the TPm is a grass-roots movement. These included both peer-reviewed academic and fact-checked news organization sources. Those editors who opposed the edit cited two sources: one by Ron Formisano, who claims that a few groups associated with TPm are engaged in ], and one by Theda Skocpol, who observes that the TPm is neither grass-roots nor Astroturf, but something in between. Even if we count both of these sources as sharing the same minority opinion, it's eighteen to two — clearly a majority opinion and a minority opinion per ].
::But it isn't even that good for those who oppose the edit, Snowded. It's eighteen for the majority opinion, one for a minority opinion, and one for a different minority opinion, because Formisano and Skocpol don't share the same opinion. Clearly, the authors of the ] article have shown us how to handle this situation. Review the archives of that article's Talk page. Those who opposed that edit were very determined, but they lost the content dispute. Here, we also see support for treating obvious minority opinions as something other than the minority. This is a policy based argument, Snowded. Policy based arguments, not votes, determine consensus per ] and ]. You see, there's no confusion on my part about what constitutes consensus at Misplaced Pages. Do you have a policy based argument?
::Next, let's examine your desire to wait until the ArbCom decision. Are you waiting for ArbCom to issue topic bans for one side in the content dispute, and then the other side can have its way? ArbCom doesn't decide content disputes. Policy decides content disputes and here, the policy is ]. Also, you claim that "this approach did not work." It wasn't allowed to work. The first time, we had consensus and SilkTork shut down the discussion to steer us into "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception." The second time, SilkTork shut down the discussion to steer us into the "Agenda" section. Let's get an admin from ] to close this, and provide him with links to the previous two discussions. ] (]) 05:39, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
:::That response illustrates why the Arbcom resolution is needed before progress can be made ----] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 09:46, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
::::Now you are back here - your !vote is solicited above in Lis alibi pendens. ] (]) 11:58, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::A month block for a problematic editor on various Philosophy articles has given me some time Collect but I'm not 100% on my continued participation. I'm waiting to see what comes out of the Arbcom ruling. However I have responded to your request and personal hat tip to you by the way. We've had our disagreements over the years but you do seem to be trying to make some progress here. ----] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 13:56, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
:::* ''That response illustrates why the Arbcom resolution is needed before progress can be made'' Perhaps you'd care to explain, Snowded. I politely provided a fairly thorough policy based argument. Do you have a policy based argument that explains why the edit shouldn't be actioned? If not, why shouldn't the edit be actioned? ] (]) 15:36, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
::::I and other editors have explained the issue elsewhere P&W, this is just another manifestation, counting votes, repeating your arguments as if they were uncontroversial conclusions and at length. Sorry been here too many times to go through it all again ----] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 02:13, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
::::I agree that a persuasive argument has yet to be made, and the past discussions are being misrepresented here as an "18 sources versus just 2 sources" weight discussion, which simply isn't the situation. To use a clearer analogy, if Blitzo Motor Company makes a hybrid car (gas/electric), we don't put a sentence in our article lead about that car saying simply "this car is gasoline-powered". Sure, you can come up with 18 sources that say it runs on gas, and it does, but that isn't the whole truth. It also runs on electricity, and that isn't a "minority opinion", it's a fact - and it remains a fact regardless of how many sources are produced saying so. ] (]) 17:59, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
::::: Once again, it's being claimed that a source must also say "There is no part of TPm that is Astroturfed" in order for that source to be counted as a "TPm is grass-roots" source. When a source says "TPm is grass-roots," that necessarily contains the implicit statement, "There is no part of TPm that is Astroturfed." See my previous analogy about the ] article. If several reliable sources state, "The elephant is an animal," necessarily implicit in that statement is, "The elephant is not a plant." Finding reliable sources which describe ] as plants, and then trying to insert the statement, "Many scholarly sources have indicated that extensive portions of the elephant are a plant" in the ] article, and keep the statement, "The elephant is an animal" out of the lede, is analogous to this effort to describe TPm in this article as Astroturfed. ] (]) 15:14, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::I don't see where that claim is being made. Reliable sources say there are many grassroots activists in the movement, which has been significantly astroturfed. Are you claiming, against reliable sources, that there has been no astroturfing of the movement, or are you only claiming that we shouldn't mention that fact in the lead of the article? ] (]) 16:01, 10 July 2013 (UTC)


Note: The new posited rules disallow such colloquy - I suggest we start ''now'' with not mentioning ''any'' editors by name in ''any'' post, not even using "you." ] (]) 10:47, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
{{ex|Lacking the centralized leadership of a political party, Tea Partiers helped create the Contract from America by voting in an online campaign. Participants were asked to vote for their favorite policy planks, and the results were promulgated as a ten-point Tea Party platform. The third point in the platform calls for enacting a Constitutional Amendment requiring a balanced budget.}}


* The "explanation" I recall was to focus on Formisano and Skocpol, over and over again, in infinite detail; to dismiss such eminently reliable fact-checked news organizations as ''],'' ] and '']'' as birdcage liner and fish wrap, compared to the founts of wisdom contained in the pages of a book by a history professor at the ]; and to pretend that ] (for example) wasn't at least as reliable, and at least as notable as ]. In other words, to claim that seventeen ] sources '''(yes, seventeen)''' plus one ] source (Foley) saying
'''Paragraph 4: 14/30'''


::TPm = G
{{ex|The name 'Contract from America' was a play on the name of the Contract with America, which was a statement released by the Republican Party during the 1994 midterm elections. Though the Tea Partiers' statement met with some support in the Republican Party, it was not broadly embraced. The Republican Party subsequently promulgated its own Pledge to America.}}


:are somehow outweighed by one ] source (Formisano) saying
'''Paragraph 5: 15/24'''


::TPm = ({{frac|2|}} G) + ({{frac|2|}} A)
{{ex|After President Obama's reelection in 2012, the movement shifted its focus. The Tea party led efforts to challenge the constitutionality of the federal health care law in the courts, and also mobilizing locally against the United Nations Agenda 21.}}<br>--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 09:49, 29 June 2013 (UTC)


:and one ] source (Skocpol) saying
IOW you ''excluded'' a large part of your proposal in order to show a "better" score (heck -- if I remove all the hard parts from any article, it will look easier - the question is why someone inserted those hard parts in the first place) -- whilst even then you fail to be as readable as 12a. Are you now proposing to omit all the block quotes? Otherwise the comment "''it is you that(sic) '''needs to check out the results''' ''" looks a teensy bit more like snark than anything else. Do you really expect all Wiki-users to be post-graduates? I sure the hell don't. Cheers. Now get rid of the block quotes to have a chance at all in this. ] (]) 10:33, 29 June 2013 (UTC)


::TPm = D


:(neither A nor G, but something in between). If anyone's recollection of the opposing arguments is any different — or if you have some other, more convincing argument besides
Seems a bit of overemphasis on this aspect. Also 12 has more support as a starting point, plus several of us have a request in to Xenophrenic to try a version which they said they'd do. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 11:06, 29 June 2013 (UTC)


::1 + 1 > 18
(ec)IRS readability for
:''Every person liable for any tax imposed by this title, or for the collection thereof, shall keep such records, render such statements, make such returns, and comply with such rules and regulations as the Secretary may from time to time prescribe. Whenever in the judgment of the Secretary it is necessary, he may require any person, by notice served upon such person or by regulations, to make such returns, render such statements, or keep such records, as the Secretary deems sufficient to show whether or not such person is liable for tax under this title. The only records which an employer shall be required to keep under this section in connection with charged tips shall be charge receipts, records necessary to comply with section 6053(c), and copies of statements furnished by employees under section 6053(a).''
is a grade level of 22! and a readability of 17. The grade level is horrid, but the readability is well over the 9 of your proposal and the 5 of Xenophrenic's proposal (I find it hard to imagine getting under 5).. So far we have only one proposal which is actually at 20, and one at 16, and the other contenders are clearly and significantly less readable than the tax code. End of opinion that this is only my opinion. ] (]) 11:12, 29 June 2013 (UTC)


:then please post it, and enlighten me. Because perhaps I'm just too stupid, but I really don't understand why the policy based argument I've just posted is '''NOT''' an uncontroversial conclusion. regards ... ] (]) 13:52, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
:{{ec}}Well, apparently you misunderstood the intent. The paragraphs I posted were rewritten to improve readability without substantially altering the meaning or diminishing the content.
:The blockquotes are a separate issue, but I can take that up here, since you've broached the topic.
:But first, the comment ''needs to check out the results'' was a repetition of a comment made to me by mistake, apparently, in relation to the online results for the first paragraph, which would seem to be mentioned out of context here.
:The rewritten paragraphs largely removed text and phrasing I had incorporated in an attempt to edit collaboratively, as mentioned above. a quick look at the evolution of the text demonstrates that.
:I'm in favor of including the blockquotes I have posted, obviously, but the rewritten paragraphs could serve as a reference for anyone else seeking to improve the readability of whatever version we eventually arrive at through consensus. They could be appropriated as building blocks, as far as I'm concerned. There is one day left to this endeavor.
:Incidentally, the first blockquote scores fairly well:
'''Blockquote 1: 14/13'''
{{ex|<blockquote>...The Tea Party’s constitutional vision is designed to be mobilized. The core elements of the Tea Party Constitution are relatively easily grasped and they readily lend themselves to translation into tangible political action. Tea Party constitutionalism challenges its adherents to do more than just passively accept its basic tenets.</blockquote>}}
:The second blockquote not so well in terms of "readability", but not does reflect the "grade-level" one might expect from an article in a legal journal.
'''Blockquote 2: 27/-17'''
{{ex|<blockquote>Tea Party opposition to bailouts, stimulus packages and health-care reform is reflected in various proposals to amend the Constitution, including proposals to require a balanced budget, repeal the Sixteenth and Seventeenth Amendments, and give states a veto power over federal laws (the so-called Repeal Amendment).</blockquote>}}
:I suppose I could simply paraphrase the content of that blockquote, and preface that with "According to Elizabeth Foley..., in light of the RS/N suggestion.
:Maybe I'll have some time to do that later tonight and post a version for reference, as it seems others are waiting on Xenophrenic's next suggestion. He is free to draw on the above-posted material.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 11:24, 29 June 2013 (UTC)


* Regarding the removal of the ] section, and putting that material in the bulleted list of incidents at the end of the ] spin-off article, in chronological order: this is the top-level article in a series on a complex subject, which has at least three satellite articles. Please see ] and the notability guideline on ]. The vandalism of someone's gas grill, for example, fails notability on several counts for a top-level article. These events clearly belong in the "Perceptions" spin-off article, not this top-level article.
"One day left" to this endeavour? As far as I can tell we are ''in medias res'' and I sincerely doubt SilkTork, having started this part of the procedure. will call "Time, Gentlemen, Time." As for your seeming iteration about the "check out the results" I suggest that the "results" are only usable if applied to an ''entire proposal''. Else, parsing sentence by sentence, one could end up with ''wondrous'' readability scores for individual sentences. It only counts when you look at the entire proposed material. ] (]) 11:40, 29 June 2013 (UTC)


* Regarding removal of the ] subsection and its placement in the "Perceptions" spin-off article, again this fails notability requirements for a top-level article in a series. These are minority opinions at best, and fringe theories at worst. The article in '']'' magazine, especially, has been carefully ignored by mainstream news organizations, and there are well-grounded questions regarding its political motivations. ], ] and ] all indicate that the spin-off article is where these commentaries belong.
== {{ex|''Version 14'', (version 13 revised, for readability)}} ==


* Again, if anyone would like to offer a policy based argument against any of these three proposed edits, I look forward to your response. regards ... ] (]) 14:52, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
Since a criteria related to "readability" has been introduced, although said criteria does not appear to be based on any Misplaced Pages policy, since an impartial online engine has been introduced for evaluating text in terms of said criteria, I've rewritten the entirety of version 13. Because the online indexing engine does not appear to have an appreciation for blockquotes, I have removed all but one. I happen to think that there are other compelling reasons for using blockquotes, as described above.


::Just a quick note, P&W: The guidelines you linked above (WP:N and WP:EVENT) apply to notability of an "article", and not to notability of content within an existing article, which is what we are discussing. I made that same mistake years ago, and was corrected by a couple helpful editors. WP:WEIGHT is the applicable guideline here. You should also be aware that content determined to be inappropriate for our main article due to policy reasons is equally inappropriate for a spinoff article. Material is moved to spinoff articles only because it has grown too lengthy or detailed, not because the content "fails notability", "is minority opinion" or "is fringe". Moving it for those reasons means you are trying to create a POV-FORK, and that's against policy. ] (]) 17:59, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
The overall score for this version of suggested text is '''16/16''', according to the above-described measure. The score of each paragraph is posted above the paragraph.


::* The material does fail notability for the top-level article in a series. See ] and ] for the official Misplaced Pages guideline. Perhaps the most directly on-point WP policy/guideline is not ], but a section of ] called ]:
'''16/18'''<br>
<big>14.</big> {{ex|The agenda of the Tea Party movement is aimed at government reform. Among the goals are limiting the size of the federal government, reducing government spending, and lowering the national debt. The movement places the Constitution at the center of its reform agenda, advocating an ] interpretation, which is coupled with educational outreach efforts on the founding documents.<ref> </ref>}}


:::<blockquote>Summary style is based on the premise that information about a topic should not all be contained in a single article since different readers have different needs ... '''''The parent article should have general summary information''''' and the more detailed summaries of each subtopic should be in child articles and in articles on specific subjects.</blockquote>
'''14/15'''<br>
{{ex| According to Schmidt,<blockquote>"...The Tea Party’s constitutional vision is designed to be mobilized. The core elements of the Tea Party Constitution are relatively easily grasped and they readily lend themselves to translation into tangible political action. Tea Party constitutionalism challenges its adherents to do more than just passively accept its basic tenets."<ref> </ref></blockquote>}}


::* Particularly since the list of alleged racist incidents has been moved to the spin-off article, the "Other events" section has been orphaned and should be moved as well. See also ]. Personal opinions held by notable, but partisan individuals about the origins of the Tea Party are beyond the topical scope of this article. The ] article is a more appropriate place for them. ] (]) 15:32, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
'''17/17'''<br>
{{ex|Several Amendments, including the Fourteenth, ], and ], have been targeted for full or partial repeal. Tea Partiers have also expressed widespread support for a proposed ], which would enable states to repeal federal laws. <ref></ref> According to Foley, the Tea Party positions on the Constitution can be seen as corresponding to concrete agenda points, such as opposition to government sponsored bailouts and stimulus programs as well as government mandated health care coverage. <ref></ref>}}


::::*''The material does fail notability for the top-level article in a series.'' --P&W
'''17/18'''<br>
{{ex|Lacking the centralized leadership of a political party, Tea Partiers helped create the ] by voting in an online campaign. Participants were asked to vote for their favorite policy planks, and the results were promulgated as a ten-point Tea Party platform. <ref name="Davis">{{Cite news|url=http://abcnews.go.com/Politics/tea-party-activists-craft-contract-america/story?id=9740705|title=Tea Party Activists Craft 'Contract from America'|last=Davis|first=Teddy|date=9 February 2010|work=ABC News|publisher=American Broadcasting Company|accessdate=18 September 2010}}</ref><ref>{{cite web|last=Davis |first=Teddy |url=http://abcnews.go.com/Politics/tea-party-activists-unveil-contract-america/story?id=10376437&page=2 |title=Tea Party Activists Unveil 'Contract from America' |publisher=ABC News |date=April 15, 2010 |accessdate=June 7, 2011}}</ref> The third point in the platform calls on Tea Partiers to“Begin the Constitutional amendment process to require a balanced budget with a two-thirds majority needed for any tax modification”.}}


::::There is no "notability" requirement for content, but there are several guidelines on whether content is appropriate for a Misplaced Pages article. However, if content is not policy-compliant for the main article, it is also inappropriate for subarticles. See ]. Regarding the origins of the movement, that kind of content is definitely within the scope of the main article. The brief paragraph you refer to as commentary actually appears to be a mix of commentary and fact, and should instead be re-written. re: the "Other events" section (that header, frankly, sucks), are you now claiming it is too detailed or long (per WP:DETAIL)? ] (]) 16:55, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
'''15/24'''<br>
{{ex|After President Obama's reelection in 2012, the movement shifted its focus. The Tea party led efforts to challenge the constitutionality of the federal health care law in the courts, and also mobilized locally against the United Nations Agenda 21. <ref></ref>}}<br>--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 14:11, 29 June 2013 (UTC)


::::* ''The brief paragraph you refer to as commentary actually appears to be a mix of commentary and fact ...'' There are no "facts" here at Misplaced Pages, because it doesn't matter whether we as editors believe a statement is true. There are only viewpoints expressed by (and verifiable in) reliable sources — and, when we find enough reliable sources expressing the same viewpoint, it's the majority viewpoint and we are required to treat it as the majority viewpoint. Here, the majority viewpoint per ] is that the TPm is a grass-roots movement, period, full stop. The ] article tells us how we should state this majority viewpoint:
:Much improved - now the same as proposal 12 for readability, and a little less readable than 12a. ] (]) 14:44, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
::OK, thanks.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 14:46, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
:::Are you certain you wish to use the neologism "Tea Partiers" however? I am also uncertain that "originalist" does not need to be in quotation marks - I suspect many readers might assign ''varying interpretations'' to it. Lastly, looking at all the sources, the "Agenda 21" bit seems way way down on the list - are you sure the final paragraph adds anything to your new proposal? Cheers. ] (]) 14:51, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
::::I split usage between "Tea Party" and "Tea Partiers", as those are the two common ways that I've seen RS refer to the movement in general terms. I think the use of both provides for a little flexibility, but are not absolutely necessary.
::::I should have wikilinked "originalism", as there are in fact more than one version, and different versions have been ascribed to the TPm by different people, and I've seen elements of both "textualist" and "intent" in related statements from TPm groups. That is not even briniging up "popular originalism", which needs its own section on the "originalism page. At any rate, maybe wikilinking to that will cover all aspects, and details can be treated elsewhere.
::::As far I recal discussion of the sources (Xenophrenic read those), Agenda 21 was an issue that was raised after 2012 elections. The only thing gained by breaking that sentence in two in the last paragraph was readability.
::::This wasn't meant to be a completely new proposal, but I did leave out a sentence or so on the CfA per Silk Tork's reply to North. Cheers.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 15:04, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
:::::Thanks - I think "Tea Partiers" is far less common in fact, looking in books for "tea Partiers" and "Obama" (to avoid the historical Boston Tea Party) is a bit over 2K, while "Tea Party" and "Obama" hits 25K (which includes all of the "Partier" cites - thus it is clear that writers on the general topic tend ''not'' to use that term. I suggest we follow suit. "Agenda 21" and "Tea Party" in books gets 500 hits -- of which most are primarily about "Agenda 21" and ''not'' primarily about the TPm - thus I think it clear that it is of ''exceedingly minor weight'' per the RS sources. ] (]) 15:39, 29 June 2013 (UTC)


::::::"Waterboarding is a form of torture ..."
::::::I wouldn' have any objections to changing "Tea Partiers" to (the) "Tea Party", or removing the mention of Agenda 21. Feel free to revise the text. Cheers. --]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 15:59, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
::::::I should revise my last comment slightly, as perhaps I should have checked the context again before speaking. in the following sentence, for example, the use of ''"Tea Partiers" has value for brevity and succinctness "Tea Partiers helped create the Contract from America"''. How else can one describe both individuals and groups with a single term here? What does the alternative phrasing look like?
::::::And since there are a couple of sources on Agenda 21, we should probably here more input on that before removing it. It does fit with explicating the post 2012 shift in focus, even if it is relatively limited in scope. There is also the fact that it is a point that relates to favoring property owners over government regulation vis-a-vis environmental impact, or at least that is my perception at the moment. At the same time, it would probably be possible to iron out these issues later.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 16:53, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
:::::::On "Tea Partiers", the following google search returns 234,000 hits, with a . It's a colloquial expression, but basically a grammatical construct the same as "Democrats" or "Republicans".--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 17:26, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
::::::::Version 14 is "Version 13 revised for readability." I'm not sure why so much time and effort is being invested in a new and improved V13. We had a "version vote" and the result was five "votes" in favor of V12, and one "vote" in favor of V13. In my opinion, this time and effort would be far more productively invested in improving V12 and getting it into the mainspace. ] (]) 18:00, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
:::::::::Well, you seem to have missed a couple of points, such as a discussion on Silk Tork's Talk page and comments above in response to North, not to mention the discussion on Xenophrenic's Talk page.
:::::::::Since another version from Xenophrenic is awaited, the process is in suspended animation, while there has been no directive to stop working otherwise. Xenophrenic mentioned valid criticism on ST's talk page, yet he has been unable to produce an alternative text as of yet.
:::::::::Moreover, the step after the version vote was to engage wording in the version in terms of the propriety thereof for the agenda section, and there is much material in version 12 that does not directly relate to the agenda, not too mention other problems, so that version is unlikely to have survived a collective review conducted under moderation by Silk Tork.
:::::::::In the interim, Collect introduced the "readability" concern, so we have been addressing that with respect to version 13.
:::::::::I would venture to say that the "version vote" is moot, but it probably doesn't matter either way, as there is one day remaining in this discussion.
:::::::::Take a little foresight from this and prepare for what's next, the way you see it, of course.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 18:17, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
{{od}}One thing I've learned from all this is that editors rarely change their minds. No matter what version we put into the mainspace, it will get there as the result of a "vote." At least three of the five editors who "voted" for V12 would have to change their minds to "vote" for some reiteration of V13, or for whatever Xenophrenic produces. I've reviewed the discussion on SilkTork's Talk page, and the remarks made to North8000. They do not appear to make such a radical change of opinions any more likely. In my opinion, V12 is the appropriate starting point if we are to get anything accomplished any time soon. regards ... ] (]) 19:58, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
:Thou thus declares consensus on XII.
::Bears witness:
]<u>]</u> 20:22, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
:::Dominus, Patris, Spiritus. . .The end. ] (]) 21:21, 29 June 2013 (UTC)


::::::"The '''Tea Party movement''' is an ] ''']''' political movement that advocates ..."
===<big>{{ex|'''''Version 12c'''''}}</big>===


::::* ''There is no "notability" requirement for content ...'' ], particularly ], requires that the section must be written as "general summary information" regarding the topical scope of the ] sub-article, which is about allegations of "racism, bigotry and intolerance." It's that "intolerance" bit at the end that steers this discussion. It was alleged that some TPm people in Maryland were "intolerant" of a congressman who voted i favor of the ], and gave Tea Party members directions to what they thought was that congressman's house as an expression of this "intolerance." These allegations, and the related vandalism of a gas grill at that house in Maryland don't belong in the "general summary information" in the parent article. They belong in the spin-off article. The relevant sections of Misplaced Pages policy/guidelines that govern this are ] and ]. ] (]) 18:39, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
I do hope that I have the nomenclature correct. I found a V12a and a V12b, but no V12c. So here it is.
:::::You are still arguing to mention grassroots in the lead? As noted several times before, there isn't any real opposition to that (correct me if I'm wrong). The objection is to your suggestion that we cover "grassroots" without also covering "astroturf" in the lead. The prominence of both descriptions, in reliable sources that cover them, requires that we not mention just one of the descriptions, per ]. That would be misleading to the readers. ] (]) 20:27, 10 July 2013 (UTC)

::::::No it wouldn't mislead readers. Look at the lede to the ] article. It doesn't mention the viewpoint of several reliable sources that waterboarding, in some circumstances, is not torture but a "harsh interrogation" technique. Do you feel that its failure to mention the minority viewpoint in the article lede is misleading to readers? ] (]) 20:53, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
This version starts with Malke's V12 which received 5-1 support in the "version vote." I've simplified and cleaned up the language a little bit to improve readability. Collect is absolutely correct about that concern. ] guidelines for newspapers aim for a sixth grade reading level (yes, I'm serious) and I feel we should be aiming for a 12. I encourage a copy-and-paste into Collect's "readability meter." (Don't use the version that appears on the edit page — the underlying article titles in these Wikilinks would skew the result.) I've added Wikilinks to the corresponding WP articles about the relevant amendments and legislation. I have added one blockquote from Christopher Schmidt, very generally descriptive of the agenda, as a compromise offer to the editor with the single dissenting vote.
:::::::Yes, it would mislead readers. Look closely at what you just said: ''"is not torture but a 'harsh interrogation' technique..."'' -- that is an either/or logic statement, which is a completely different situation. With the Tea Party, the reliable sources say we have an "and" situation ("grassroots activists AND astroturf influence"). And I still don't know what "minority viewpoint" you are talking about. The astroturf aspect of the movement is a fact; minority and majority quantifiers only apply to competing viewpoints. ] (]) 00:58, 13 July 2013 (UTC)

:<big>12c.</big> <font color=green>The Tea Party movement has a reform agenda to limit the size and scope of the federal government, reduce government spending, and reduce deficits and the national debt.

:<blockquote>The Tea Party contains a welter of oftentimes conflicting Agendas... Yet within this confusing constellation of ideas and viewpoints, there is a relatively stable ideological core to the Tea Party. This core is particularly evident when one focuses on the vision of the Constitution regularly professed by movement leaders, activists, and supporters.<ref></ref></blockquote>

:Placing the Constitution at the forefront of its agenda, the movement advocates originalism coupled with educational outreach efforts focused on the founding documents. Several constitutional amendments have been targeted by some in the movement for full or partial repeal, including the ], ], and ]. There has also been support for a proposed ], enabling a two-thirds majority of the states to repeal federal laws, and a ], which would limit deficit spending.<ref></ref> Lacking a clearly defined foreign policy, Tea Party groups have opposed the ] ].

:Tea Party members have protested ], Obama's 2009 ], "cap and trade" ], ], and perceived attacks by the federal government on their First, Second, Fourth and Tenth Amendment rights. Tea Party groups support ] legislation, and ] that includes provisions for border security to prevent future unlawful immigration. They have formed SuperPacs to support candidates who share their goals, and have opposed what they call "Republican establishment" candidates. They protested the IRS for ] against conservative groups seeking tax-exempt status.

:While lacking central leadership and representation enjoyed by political parties, the "]" was created with the assistance of "hundreds of thousand of people" voting online for their "favorite principles" to create a Tea Party platform.<ref name="Davis">{{Cite news|url=http://abcnews.go.com/Politics/tea-party-activists-craft-contract-america/story?id=9740705|title=Tea Party Activists Craft 'Contract from America'|last=Davis|first=Teddy|date=9 February 2010|work=ABC News|publisher=American Broadcasting Company|accessdate=18 September 2010}}</ref><ref>{{cite web|last=Davis |first=Teddy |url=http://abcnews.go.com/Politics/tea-party-activists-unveil-contract-america/story?id=10376437&page=2 |title=Tea Party Activists Unveil 'Contract from America' |publisher=ABC News |date=April 15, 2010 |accessdate=June 7, 2011}}</ref> Its name was a play on the "]" released by the Republican Party during the ]. The Contract from America was met with some support within the Republican Party, but not broadly embraced by GOP leadership. They later wrote their own "Pledge to America."</font>

A week ago, we were discussing a spin-off article called ]. "Splendid idea, mate." Remember that? All of the effort invested in most of these versions could have been devoted to making that spin-off article totally awesome. We could still rock that spin-off article and I've been working on a first draft.

As this discussion proceeds, I'll be replacing "fake" refcites in the above version with real refcites, so that it can simply be cut and pasted into the mainspace if and when we get consensus for it. I'd appreciate some help putting in the real refcites if any of you has any spare time. ] (]) 00:51, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

==="Vote" on Version 12c===

*'''Support.''' For the reasons discussed above. regards .... ] (]) 00:51, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' (only) assuming that we are parking the subsections for later review. Otherwise the "contract" being missing would be a big problem. Also, the "12" that received support was also OK. Maybe we could consider this to be that one tweaked. Let's move forward somehow. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 01:12, 30 t's June 2013 (UTC)
::Yes, just to be clear, this proposal means that other sections (Contract and Foreign Policy) are parked for now. ] (]) 01:43, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' The quote from Schmidt is a good quote, but it has not been integrated into the text very well. The concerns and criticisms mentioned under 12(b)--which apply to 12(a) as well, have not been addressed at all. Note that I believe those concerns were in part responsible for prompting people to ask Xenophrenic for input. Aside from that, there is also some peacocky phrasing here and there.
:More specifically, the connection of protests to the agenda is not made, and I have doubts as to whether discussion of protests fit in the agenda section, particularly with respect to the IRS incident. There is also much unsourced material, such as the statement "''perceived attacks by the federal government on their First, Second, Fourth and Tenth Amendment rights. ''", while there is no mention at all of the more prominent issues related to the Constitution, such as efforts to repeal the 14th, 16th and 17th Amendments and support for the "Repeal Amendment". The text is uninformative with respect to WP:RS, disjointed and poorly structured, and contains peacocky phrasing in relation to some topics that probably deserve less attention overall, while other more important topics have been omitted.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 05:04, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
::My apologies. The weird <nowiki>"{{ex|"</nowiki> notation wasn't allowing the first paragraph after the blockquote to show on the page for some screwy reason, showing the entire paragraph as the two words, "Example text." I have changes the <nowiki>"{{ex|"</nowiki> notation to standard HTML, which I actually know something about. Please review. That paragraph cites the efforts to fully or partially repeal the 14th, 16th and 17th Amendments, as well as the support for the Repeal Amendment. We have sources for the allegedly unsourced material. I did say that I was going to be adding real refcites. I just haven't added all of them yet. As SilkTork said, this doesn't have to be perfect; and as I said several weeks ago, "the perfect is the enemy of the good." This version is good enough for now. Your other concerns would best be addressed in the proposed spin-off article, where I certainly would not object to blockquotes from several academics. In fact, as I mentioned, I'm already working on a first draft of that spin-off article. Let's see. For now, it should probably look like this: ]. regards .... ] (]) 06:10, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

:Well, that is an improvement, but the text is still too problematic for me to approve. Until there is some constructive input from others, I'll have nothing more to say.
:Incidentally, the subarticle was to called "The Tea Party and the Constitution", not the title you mentioned above.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 07:34, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' A step backward from the readability of 12 or 12a, and retains some pretty useless "stuff" like the wordplay aside, and implies that specific protests are generally backed by the entire movement, which is inapt per sources. O shall suggest a version also based on 12 with as high a readability as I can. ] (]) 12:45, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

<font color=green>

===''Agenda - Version 12d''===
The Tea Party movement doesn't have a single uniform agenda. The decentralized character of the movement, with its lack of formal structure or hierarchy, allows each autonomous group in the movement to set its own priorities and goals. Sometimes these goals may even be in conflict, and priorities will often differ between groups. Many Tea Party organizers see this as a strength rather than a weakness, as decentralization has helped to immunize the movement against co-opting by outside entities and corruption from within. Despite the disparate nature of the many individual groups, a few defining principles and core ideologies have been embraced by a large majority of the movement. Most political observers agree the Tea Party is largely motivated by the conservative principles of constitutionally limited government, free market economy and fiscal responsibility.<ref>"Group Think: Inside the Tea Party’s Collective Brain"; National Journal; Jonathan Rauch; September 11, 2010</ref>

The Tea Party is a conservative movement, yet it has mostly avoided involvement with the more traditional conservative social, religious and family-values issues. Some national Tea Party organizations like Tea Party Patriots and FreedomWorks, concerned that engaging in social issues would be divisive on the movement, have directed activist efforts away from social issues and toward economic issues. Still, many Tea Party groups like the 9/12 Tea Parties popularized by Glenn Beck, TeaParty.org, the Iowa Tea Party and Delaware Patriot Organizations do prioritize issues concerning abortion, gun control, prayer in schools and illegal immigration.<ref></ref><ref></ref><ref></ref>

<blockquote>The Tea Party contains a welter of oftentimes conflicting Agendas... Yet within this confusing constellation of ideas and viewpoints, there is a relatively stable ideological core to the Tea Party. This core is particularly evident when one focuses on the vision of the Constitution regularly professed by movement leaders, activists, and supporters.</blockquote>

The Tea Party movement generally focuses on government reform. Among its goals are limiting the size of the federal government, reducing government spending, lowering the national debt and opposing tax increases. To this end, Tea Party groups have protested ], stimulus programs, cap and trade ], ] and perceived attacks by the federal government on their First, Second, Fourth and Tenth Amendment rights. Tea Party groups have also supported ] legislation and tighter border security, and opposed amnesty for illegal immigrants. They have formed SuperPacs to support candidates sympathetic to their goals and have opposed what they call the "Republican establishment" candidates. After President Obama's reelection in 2012, the movement again shifted its focus. The Tea party led efforts to challenge the constitutionality of the federal health care law in the courts, and also mobilized locally against the United Nations Agenda 21.<ref name="Fringe"></ref><ref></ref> They have protested the IRS for ] of groups with "tea party" in their names.
Responding to Snowded, it would take quite an effort and major course change by Arbcom to help this, because the case was so badly sent off on a tangent from the start. We need to and should keep trying here.
The movement places the Constitution at the center of its reform agenda, and advocates an originalist interpretation coupled with educational outreach efforts focused on the founding documents. Several constitutional amendments have been targeted by some in the movement for full or partial repeal, including the ], ], and ]. There has also been support for a proposed ], enabling a two-thirds majority of the states to repeal federal laws, and a ], which would limit deficit spending.<ref name="Foley1"></ref> According to Schmidt, "...The Tea Party’s constitutional vision is designed to be mobilized. The core elements of the Tea Party Constitution are relatively easily grasped and they readily lend themselves to translation into tangible political action. Tea Party constitutionalism challenges its adherents to do more than just passively accept its basic tenets." According to Foley, the Tea Party positions on the Constitution can be seen as corresponding to concrete agenda points, such as opposition to government sponsored bailouts and stimulus programs as well as government mandated health care coverage.


I am down to a few minutes per day on Misplaced Pages this week and in-depth analysis in beyond me this week. But P & W's ideas look good. I'm not big on worrying about vague characterizations like "grass roots" and no movement is without some purposeful organization / support, but if there ever was a movement where this term applies, TPM is it. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 16:15, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
The '']'' was a legislative agenda created by a conservative activist with the assistance of ] of ], the author of the '']'' released by Republican Party during the ]. A thousand submitted agenda ideas were narrowed down to twenty-one economic, non-social issues. These were posted online where "hundreds of thousand of people" voted to further narrow the list down to their top ten "favorite principles" as a Tea Party platform.<ref name="Davis">{{Cite news|url=http://abcnews.go.com/Politics/tea-party-activists-craft-contract-america/story?id=9740705|title=Tea Party Activists Craft 'Contract from America'|last=Davis|first=Teddy|date=9 February 2010|work=ABC News|publisher=American Broadcasting Company|accessdate=18 September 2010}}</ref><ref name="Davis2">{{cite web|last=Davis |first=Teddy |url=http://abcnews.go.com/Politics/tea-party-activists-unveil-contract-america/story?id=10376437&page=2 |title=Tea Party Activists Unveil 'Contract from America' |publisher=ABC News |date=April 15, 2010 |accessdate=June 7, 2011}}</ref> The ''Contract from America'' was met with some support within the Republican Party, but not broadly embraced by GOP leadership. They subsequently promulgated their own 'Pledge to America'.<ref name="Davis2"/></font>
] (]) 08:34, 30 June 2013 (UTC)


:In addition to questioning the reliability and bias of the '']'' article, it does not say anything in regard Grassroots v. AstroTurfed. At the most generous interpretation that they know what they're talking about, it says that '''one''' TPm organization was funded by (some of the) same people as the anti-anti-tobacco organizations. — ] ] 16:20, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' (with caveats) One is that subsequent tweaking has to work on the sentence "The Tea Party is a conservative movement" .....probably add "libertarian". Another is presuming that we're parking the two subsections for now. Another is we'll need to see what Malke thinks about the quote. On a different note, since a movement is defined by it's agenda, we should not be concerned that this all-important section it is longer and more detailed. It needs to be pretty well-covered ''here'', not just in a sub article. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 10:49, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
::The sentence beginning with "The Tea Party is a conservative movement" is not intended to be an all-inclusive description of the movement. The intent of that sentence is only to convey the fact that while the movement is "conservative", it focuses primarily on conservative fiscal issues rather than also engaging in conservative social issues -- a notable distinction between this and past movements. re: The CfA and Foreign Policy subsections, I could see the Contract from America subsection being collapsed down to a simple paragraph and presented in much the same way as presents it. The Foreign Policy section, admittedly, has me a little confused. While I find it interesting and informative to read about the foreign policy views of TP activists and their favored politicians, I don't see where these views have translated into actual agenda points for the movement in a meaningful way. ] (]) 17:20, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
:::In reality, it has both conservatives and libertarians in it, and the widely-agreed agenda items are where the two overlap. I think you're right about the foreign policy sub-section, (and maybe it should get deleted) but I advocate dealing with both of those two subsections separately. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 01:47, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' This version adds a lot of pertinent content, and though I see aspect that need work, I'm just going to support it now because I won't have sufficient time to put into it until tomorrow at the earliest.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 11:13, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose.''' The first two paragraphs consist almost entirely of unsourced statements and may be examples of ], ], or both. As just one example, the statement "priorities will often differ between groups '''''due to''''' this absence of central organization." In this case correlation may not be causation. I can think of many national organizations, such as the Republican Party and the Democratic Party — both consist of a large number of local groups which may not share the same goals (Republicans in the Northeast and California, for example, are a little more tolerant of gun control and a great deal more tolerant of abortion rights than Republicans in Utah or Tennessee). And this occurs despite strong, formal national leadership and carefully crafted organization. Even if there's sourcing that may be found for these two paragraphs, the way it's worded here may contain some negative spin. Putting this possible ] and ] at the front end of the first section of the top-level article in a series gives it a huge amount of weight, and the whole thing is a bit too long, considering that it's currently being envisioned as a summary of a potential spin-off article. After the colossal amount of time and effort that has been devoted to this section, starting out from such a shaky foundation is very troubling. This is a lot weaker than V12c. ] (]) 12:06, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
::*'''Note''' The concern raised relating to ''"correlation may not be causation"'' is valid, so I have deleted the corresponding phrase and reworded the sentence.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 15:45, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
::Where has there been discussion of the Agenda section being a summary of a spin off article? A diff or two would suffice.
::There has been suggestion and discussion regarding a couple of implementations have been discussed for the Tea Party and the Constitution subarticle and corresponding summary.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 12:17, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' Too long and manages to get readability only up to 12 - which is significantly worse than other proposals. ] (]) 12:41, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
::It actually scores better than the 12c predecessor version, and it wouldn't shock me to see that section get even longer and more informative. ] (]) 17:28, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
**'''Note''' I've relocated the blockquote one paragraph earlier, where it seems more appropriately interposed, facilitating the transition from one focus (disparate groups/agendas) toward focusing on the shared goals of reform and emphasis on the Constitution.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 14:29, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
::::Moving that quote isn't a problem. It's a matter of style preference, really. I saw the quote as a transition-point from the previous list of a bunch of "confusing/conflicting" issues to the subsequent discussion about how the Constitution informs and often directs the TP's actions on issues. You see it more as an introduction to ''both'' the issues and the constitutional influence. Useful either way, I guess. ] (]) 17:42, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
:::::I think that what got my attention was that the "reform agenda" point is something that also came from Schmidt, so the quote in its original context was also leading into discussion of that, which is then tied to the Consitution, if I recall correctly.
:::::With the addition of the material you added on the different positions espoused by some of the groups in the lead into the blockquote from Schmidt enhances the impact, and taking up the common ground between the groups after that reinforces the basics of the agenda across the TPm, in contrast to the disparities describe in the opening.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 18:10, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' - For the reasons listed above. ] (]) 17:28, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
*'''Comment''': Xenophrenic has made some very good points with this. I like the mention of the Glenn Beck, etc. Don't care for block quotes. The Obamacare issue was decided by the Supreme Court in June 2012, before Obama got reelected so they didn't shift their focus to the courts on that after the election. And maybe shorter. ] (]) 04:44, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


===Request for closure===
<big>{{ex|Shorter version of Xen's 12d}}</big>


I am about to file a Request for Closure at ]. Accordingly, I've reopened the collapsed subsection that had our mid-June discussion of these three minor improvements. The only objection at that time was Ubikwit saying we should only work on one thing at a time (the agenda section). Now that the agenda section has been substantially improved, we can get back to these three minor issues and get them resolved. Previous discussion at great length may be found , and , during most of the month of April. The closer is asked to review all these discussions over the past three months, and indicate whether we have consensus for each of these three edits. Policy based arguments, not votes, determine consensus per ] and ]. regards ... ] (]) 13:41, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
{{ex|The Tea Party movement generally focuses on government reform. Among its goals are limiting the size of the federal government, reducing government spending, lowering the national debt and opposing tax increases. To this end, Tea Party groups have protested ], stimulus programs, cap and trade ], ] and perceived attacks by the federal government on their First, Second, Fourth and Tenth Amendment rights. Tea Party groups have also supported ] legislation and immigration reform that includes border security.}}
:Regarding the minor issue of whether we should mention the Grassroot & AstroTurf aspects of the movement in the ], or just mention one of those aspects in the lead to the exclusion of the other, it would be informative to note that a similar discussion was had in ]. The consensus was that if both descriptions are to appear in the lead, both would appear together. I don't see a change in that consensus, nor a valid argument to the contrary. As for your 2nd and 3rd minor issues, have those been discussed yet in any detail? ] (]) 17:59, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
::That mediation was almost three years ago. One of the most active advocates for "Astroturfing" and opponents of "grass-roots" a month later. And a large number of reliable sources, both ] and ] varieties, have been published since then. Regarding the other two proposed edits, there have been abundant opportunities to express concerns and no concerns were expressed, except Ubikwit saying we should only work on one thing at a time. The "one thing" we were working on has now been substantially completed. This has been discussed and tabled off and on for three months. It's time to turn it over to a closing admin and let him (or her) sort it out. ] (]) 18:22, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
:::The other 2 issues haven't been discussed because an editor (and also our Moderator) said we were to work on something else first, and you say the next step is to turn the issues over to an admin? Wouldn't the next step be to begin discussions it first (so the Admin will have something to "sort out")? As for the Grassroots/Astroturf descriptions matter, yes, other sources have been published since then -- and still the facts haven't changed. There are just more sources. ] (]) 18:33, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
::::On the mediation page we find an enormous number of additional sources (notably '']'') to join the overwhelming number of reliable sources stating that it's a ]. Thanks for providing the link to that wealth of additional reliable sources for the majority opinion per ]. For the other two proposed edits, the material fails ] at for the top-level article in a series, but would be fine for a spin-off article. If there really is a policy based argument against them that has been withheld until now, when a closer has already been requested at ], please post it immediately rather than just talking about it. ] (]) 18:42, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::Incorrect. WP:N applies to articles, not content within an article. To quote: ''' The notability guideline does not determine the content of articles, but only whether the topic should have its own article.''' And as noted above, per policy, if it is against policy in a main article, it is against policy in a sub article. I'm sure a knowledgable "closer" will confirm that for you. Regarding the Grassroots & Astroturfed nature of the movement, neither of those descriptions is "opinion", majority or otherwise (even though the Lexington piece in the Economist is an opinion piece), they are reliably sourced facts. ] (]) 19:39, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::] describes them as "viewpoints," not "facts." My mistake, I should have called them "viewpoints," rather than "opinions." One viewpoint — that the TPm is a grass-roots movement, and the fact that some components have accepted corporate donations does not compromise its essentially grass-roots nature — is clearly supported by a majority of the reliable sources, including ] in her peer-reviewed works, ''],'' ''],'' ], ] and many other fact-checked news organizations. The other viewpoints are each supported by a small minority of the reliable sources. Regarding ], that policy directs editors to several guidelines, one of which is ]. There are various subsections within that guidelines such as ], ], and ] which provide clear guidance in demoting such events as the vandalism of someone's gas grill in Maryland to the spin-off article. ] (]) 20:38, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::::To be more specific about what the reliable sources convey, the TPm consists of both grassroots activists as well as big-monied players and professional politicos, thinktanks and conservative elites that have sought to direct, fund, coordinate and use these "grassroots" efforts. And this fact is neither minority nor majority viewpoint. What "other" viewpoints are you speaking of? Regarding your alphabet-soup of policy links, please simply quote the section of the policy you are acting under, and the content you are applying it to, and let's discuss it. All the ones you linked do not apply here. They apply to the creation of Misplaced Pages articles. ] (]) 20:56, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::::The fact that some RS support "A&nbsp;+&nbsp;G" while others support "G" does not negate the fact that the ones supporting "G" vastly outnumber the ones supporting "A&nbsp;+&nbsp;G" and are therefore the majority per ]. Is there any argument in favor of treating "Astroturfed plus grass-roots" as the majority viewpoint? How many reliable sources support this viewpoint? We've been over this exhaustively. Many of the sources just don't support "Astroturfed plus grass-roots." Some, such as NPR ask the question "Is TPm Astroturfed plus grass-roots?" but do not answer "yes." ] (]) 22:04, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::::::The fact that the movement has genuine grassroots activists in it is <u>a</u> majority viewpoint (as contrasted with not having grassroots activists in it), not <u>the</u> majority viewpoint. It is also a "majority viewpoint" that the movement has been extensively astroturfed, is conservative, takes stances on fiscal issues, had influence in the 2010 elections, etc. Minority viewpoints, for example, would be the ones saying there are no grassroots activists in the movement, or there is no astroturf influencing of the movement, or that the movement had no influence on the 2010 elections. The fact that RS saying the TP movement is concervative vastly outnumber the ones mentioning grassroots doesn't mean the grassroots description is a minority viewpoint. ] (]) 10:25, 10 July 2013 (UTC)


===Extended discussion of grass-roots and astroturf===
{{ex|They have formed SuperPacs to support candidates sympathetic to their goals and have opposed what they call the "Republican establishment" candidates. Prior to the June 2012 Supreme Court decision on Obamacare, the Tea party led efforts to challenge the constitutionality of the federal health care law in the courts. They have also mobilized locally against the United Nations Agenda 21.<ref name="Fringe"></ref><ref></ref> They have protested the IRS for ] of groups with "tea party" in their names.}}
{{od}}
{{ex|The Tea Party is a conservative movement, yet it has avoided involvement with the more traditional conservative social, religious and family-values issues. National Tea Party organizations like Tea Party Patriots, Tea Party Express, and FreedomWorks, are focused on economic issues, although they support immigration reform if it includes border security. Other Tea Party groups like the 9/12 Tea Parties popularized by Glenn Beck, the Iowa Tea Party and Delaware Patriot Organizations focus more on social issues such as abortion, gun control, prayer in schools and illegal immigration.<ref></ref><ref></ref><ref></ref>}}


* Please use colons to indent properly when responding per ] policy.
{{ex|In general, the movement places the Constitution at the center of its reform agenda, and advocates an originalist interpretation. This is combined with educational outreach efforts focused on the founding documents. Several constitutional amendments have been targeted by some in the movement for full or partial repeal, including the ], ], and ]. There has also been support for a proposed ], enabling a two-thirds majority of the states to repeal federal laws, and a ], which would limit deficit spending.<ref name="Foley1"></ref> }}


* ''It is also a "majority viewpoint" that the movement has been extensively astroturfed ...'' This is a false statement.
{{ex|The '']'' was a legislative agenda created by Ryan Heckler, a conservative activist. He launched a website, ContractFromAmerica.com, which encouraged people to offer possible ] for the contract. The top ten included 'identify the constitutionality of every new law, reject cap and trade legislation, demand a balanced federal budget, simplify the tax code, assess constitutionality of federal agencies, limit growth in annual federal spending, repeal Obamacare, new energy policy that supports exploration, reduce earmarks, and reduce federal taxes. <ref name="Davis">{{Cite news|url=http://abcnews.go.com/Politics/tea-party-activists-craft-contract-america/story?id=9740705|title=Tea Party Activists Craft 'Contract from America'|last=Davis|first=Teddy|date=9 February 2010|work=ABC News|publisher=American Broadcasting Company|accessdate=18 September 2010}}</ref><ref name="Davis2">{{cite web|last=Davis |first=Teddy |url=http://abcnews.go.com/Politics/tea-party-activists-unveil-contract-america/story?id=10376437&page=2 |title=Tea Party Activists Unveil 'Contract from America' |publisher=ABC News |date=April 15, 2010 |accessdate=June 7, 2011}}</ref> The ''Contract from America'' was met with some support within the Republican Party, but not broadly embraced by GOP leadership. They subsequently promulgated their own 'Pledge to America'}}


* ''Minority viewpoints, for example, would be the ones saying ... there is no astroturf influencing of the movement ...'' This is also a false statement. What makes these false statements is the overwhelming number of sources saying, "It's a grass-roots movement," without any hesitation or qualification (including not only both peer-reviewed academic and fact-checked news organization sources, but also the Tea Party groups themselves, which must be considered reliable in this limited context under ]), compared to the ones like Formisano saying, "It's partially Astroturfed." The ratio is at least 3-to-1 and may be as high as 10-to-1.
] (]) 05:43, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


* Most of the sources presented in this three-year discussion, which were claimed by some editors to say, "It's partially Astroturfed," turned out after investigation to be either (A) not actually saying that or (B) the opinion of some notable, but highly partisan opponent of the Tea Party, such as ] or ]. These minority opinions are already properly attributed and quoted farther down in the article, and no one is suggesting they should be removed.
===<font color = green>Version 12e===


* Now then, if there is a genuinely policy based argument to be made against any of these three edits, please post it. "It's partially Astroturfed" is obviously a minority viewpoint per ]. ] (]) 11:22, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
The Tea Party movement generally seeks reform. It wants to limit government size and scope and to limit government spending. The movement stresses the Constitution as its basis, and uses an "originalist" interpretation" of it. Some members propose that the 14th, 16th and 17th Amendments be repealed or changed. Others propose a "Repeal Amendment" under which 2/3 of the states could repeal federal laws, and a "Balanced Budget" amendment barring deficit spending.


::Colons were used to indent properly (check the edit history); that the movement has an astroturfed component is the majority viewpoint, and trying to say it has absolutely no astroturfing involved is the minority viewpoint; Pelosi and Krugman are being cited for their opinions only; can't comment on the other two edits, as they haven't really been discussed. ] (]) 16:01, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
Some groups protest TARP, stimulus, cap and trade, Obamacare and perceived attacks by the federal government on their civil rights. The IRS delay of Tea Party related tax-exempt applications has also been protested. They support right-to-work legislation and immigration reform with border security to prevent the problem in the future. SuperPacs support candidates sympathetic to their goals and have opposed what they call the “Republican establishment” candidates.


* ''that the movement has an astroturfed component is the majority viewpoint ...'' This is a false statement. We've been over all these sources with a fine-toothed comb. Out of all the claims that this is the majority viewpoint, here is the single grain of truth: Formisano says that the Institute For Liberty (IFL) is an Astroturfed TPm component. However, IFL doesn't identify itself as part of the TPm, and I've never seen any other source identify IFL as part of the TPm.
Its lack of central organization did not prevent the writing of a 'Contract from America' by supporters voting online for
their "favorite principles."</font>


* There is no valid policy based argument opposing any of these three edits. From ]: "The closer is there to judge the consensus of the community, after discarding irrelevant arguments: those that flatly contradict established policy, those based on personal opinion only, those that are logically fallacious, those that show no understanding of the matter of issue. ... He (or she) is not expected to decide the issue, just to judge the result of the debate, and is expected to know policy sufficiently enough to know what arguments are to be excluded as irrelevant." ] (]) 03:37, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' This version finally gets down to a reasonable grade level (13), and increases the readability up to 30 which makes it the first version to actually be readable for high school graduates. I think it covers all the bases. ] (]) 13:06, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
::Adding an unqualified statement, such as ''"The Tea Party is a grassroots movement."'', to the lede would not satisfy ] anymore than using "astroturf" in lede would.
*'''Neutral''' Very very well written, very succinct, very focused on the core items (which is what the agenda is really about.) But is is short on specific content, and this is the most important section of the whole article. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 13:32, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
<blockquote class="toccolours" style="background:PaleGreen; margin-left:50px; float:none; padding:4px 8px 4px 8px; display:table;">
:*That is why footnotes exist. See SilkTork's user talk page for my ] example - where I took an unreadable article which had every imaginable detail in it, and pared it down to GA status - and from a readability of minus 13 to one of plus 30, and a grade level of 25 to one of 13. Readers who desire every excruciating detail can read the cites given - thee is no need to make a complete and completely unreadable article. Cheers. ] (]) 13:50, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
Considered in its entirety, the Tea Party is neither a top-down creation nor a bottom-up explosion. This remarkable political outpouring is best understood as a combination of three intertwined forces. Each force is important in its own right, and their interaction is what gives the Tea Party its dynamism, drama, and wallop. <small>...snip...</small> Grassroots activists, roving billionaire advocates, and right-wing media purveyors{{mdash}}these three forces, together, create the Tea Party...
*'''Oppose''' While there are pluses to readability, sacrificing specifics and detail, and omitting important information found in sources meeting WP:RS is problematic. This is, indeed, likely the most important section of the article.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 13:59, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
<br /><span style="float:right;">{{mdash}} {{Cite book |last1 = Skocpol | first1 = T. |last2 = Williamson | first2 = V. | title = The Tea Party and the Remaking of Republican Conservatism |publisher = ] | year = 2012 | isbn = 9780199832637}}</span>
:*As I noted - the details can well be in the cites and footnotes. Meanwhile etc. are clear that Misplaced Pages has an average grade level of 12 - and a grade level even higher than average makes the information unusable. Look at the original Widney article and tell me that it is better than the current, shorter, more usable one.
</blockquote>
:::''A common measure of basic readability is the Flesch score. Standard reading level is at a Flesch score of about 60 or higher, with lower scores equating to more difficult reading. The scientific literature is pegged in various studies to have a reading score of around 30''
::More ] is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of "grassroots" as it applies to the Tea Party movement. {{mdash}} ] (]) 07:25, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
:*means that when we talk about reading levels ''under'' 30, we are talking about articles ''more difficult'' to read that science journals! I suggest as a simple matter that making article ''unreadable'' does not fit the purpose of the encyclopedia. We need a maximum grade level of about 12, and a readability index ''minimum'' of 30. Let's keep the details where folks who really want them can find them - in cites and footnotes. ] (]) 14:33, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
:::I would hardly call it '''"unqualified"'''. But, if I'm to read your comment correctly -- You feel the use of ''grassroots'' ought not be construed as all-encompassing.
:::See my comment on Silk Tork's Talk page, as I've basically responded to the above concerns there.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 14:43, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
:::My solution: {{ex|The Tea Party is a political movement primarily based in grassroots activism.}} ]<u>]</u> 14:22, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
:::: ''The results of this study show that the readability of the English Misplaced Pages is overall well below a desired standard. Although the average score of 51.18 does not seem far from the desired goal, nearly 75 percent of all articles scored below 60 in the Flesch reading ease test. Moreover, half of the articles can be classified as difficult or worse. This finding confirms our hypothesis that numerous articles on Misplaced Pages are too difficult to read for many people'' seems quite clear. Reducing readability even lower than it is seems about the worst concept for an encyclopedia ever given. Having a lead with a R/I ''under'' 30 seems a teensy bit worse than even that level they decry. ] (]) 14:48, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
*'''Comment''' - I must agree with North8000 that the "Agenda" of the movement is a very important part of the information on this topic, and as such it deserves more comprehensive coverage in our main article. This proposed version is too sparse. Second, while we should absolutely strive for "readability" when we construct our articles, we should not be slaves to a generic, easily "gamed" tool when comparing proposed versions. To use an example from Collect's most recently proposed text, changing words to numbers in a single sentence:
:::''Some members propose that the Fourteenth, Sixteenth and Seventeenth Amendments be repealed or changed.'' (13/28)
:::''Some members propose that the 14th, 16th and 17th Amendments be repealed or changed.'' (10/53)
:...'''doubles''' the readability score and significantly reduces the "grade level", too. Of course one isn't really more readable than the other, but the tool doesn't know that; it just compares sentence and word lengths and spits out a number. Let's focus first on writing a neutral but comprehensive Agenda section that we can agree on. After that is done, we can go back through it and shorten sentences and words without changing the meaning, so that we can fool the readability tool. Lastly, this most recent proposed wording conveys inaccurate information regarding the subjects of immigration and the CfA origins. ] (]) 15:50, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
::''Hear, hear!'' --]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 17:20, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
::Um -- perhaps you should note the NYT usage -- since 1945 their ''preferred'' usage is the ''numerical'' version. The numerical version is, indeed, easier to read -- thus improves readability. Changing it back to words does ''not'' wreck readability, by the way, and is a straw issue. Changing ''all'' numbers to words reduces reading ease all the way from 30 to 28 -- far from the claim it affects grade level or reading ease much at all. Please raise genuine issues, but this one was unworthy of this page. ] (]) 18:20, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
:::The "straw issue" you mention was never raised by me, Collect. We can have the discussion on which is a more readable format some other time. You apparently missed the point of my comment, which was: ''Let's construct the article section - achieve agreement on it - <u>then</u> focus on cleaning up the readability'', rather than muddle the agreement process by citing F/K score comparisons. The example I gave above was only to illustrate that wide differences in readability scores can be achieved without altering the actual substance of the text one bit. So let's focus on the content substance first, so we can get past these disagreement delays ... ''then'' we can work on the readability, which should be a non-controversial and non-disruptive process. Regards, ] (]) 18:40, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
::::The readability is something to consider. Collect's version is good, but too short. Xen's is good but too long. It also has a box quote that is not necessary, and the post Obama 2012 election focus is all wrong. The Tea Party movement has been against Obamacare from the beginning and that ties in with their government spending issues, TARP, etc. Version 12 had the most support but the first and third paragraphs in it need a rewrite for readability. We might as well get it all at once because if we don't, there will be arguments over the content all over again as to what is readable, etc. ] (]) 19:08, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
:::::The point about "Obamacare" after the elections is the explicitly stated shift toward "the courts", so there is a conflation in the above-posted comment between health-care and TARP, etc., after the 2012 elections.
:::::Readability is not an issue that needs to be addressed immediately.
:::::The blockquote has my support, 100%.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 19:28, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
::::::In 25 words or less, what does the blockquote mean? ] (]) 19:43, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
:::::::Quote: ''The point about "Obamacare" after the elections is the explicitly stated shift toward "the courts.'' Obamacare was settled by the Supreme Court in June 2012, well BEFORE Obama's reelection in November 2012. . ] (]) 21:07, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
::::::::There are other court challenges to the health care law, though I have to admit not being an expert on the matter. Here is an article from this month . That said, I would not have objected to someone removing that sentence, but it was meant to point in part at failure to have enough Tea Party candidates elected with the aim of repealing the law through Congress.<blockquote>''One set of lawsuits accuses the Internal Revenue Service of illegally implementing new subsidies to help people buy insurance. Separately, more than 60 lawsuits have been filed challenging the law’s mandate for health plans to cover birth control.''</blockquote>--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 03:13, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::::And make sure none of those 25 words have more than two syllables, or contain an "x," a "q" or a "z." If readability is going to decide which version gains consensus — and it looks that way, because the swing "voters" have adopted readability as their personal litmus test — then we just can't have any blockquotes at all. Blockquotes come from law review articles, which are written by law professors who are trying to impress federal judges, Supreme Court justices, and other law professors, who read on a 10-15 readability level constantly. They use words with three syllables or more every time they touch a keyboard. So it appears that blockquotes are dead. ] (]) 20:35, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
::::::::Grad 12 reading level is not "dumbed down" - the legalese quotes go neatly into footnotes instead of in the body of text where readers have problems. Simple -- did you think this eliminated sources? ] (]) 20:38, 30 June 2013 (UTC)


* ''More ] is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of "grassroots" as it applies to the Tea Party movement.'' '''YES. EXACTLY.''' I simply could not agree with you more on this point. After an insightful observation like that one, you could be my new best friend.
:::::::::Yes, of course, that's what I mean. See below. ] (]) 21:15, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose,''' by the way. ] (]) 20:35, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' for the reasons stated in no uncertain or conflated terms. ] (]) 21:07, 30 June 2013 (UTC)


* Generally speaking, those sources that have endeavored to define TPm as "Astroturfed" or "partially Astroturfed" have consistently attempted to redefine the word "Astroturfed" in a much more expansive manner. The expanded definition is intended by these sources to include activities that were never perceived as Astroturfing before. The term was first coined in the 1980s and 1990s, when paid political and corporate operatives were each pretending to be several ordinary people at once, writing letters to congressmen, senators, and the editors of major newspapers and news magazines, artificially manufacturing the appearance of a ], or popular support or opposition to a particular thing, '''''where there was none.'''''
===<big>{{ex|'''''Version 12f'''''}}</big>===


* This term was and continues to be a well-recognized and well-understood term in the political science lexicon. Its meaning has never actually changed, unless you can demonstrate a consensus across all of political science, discussing all movements and all activities by political and corporate operatives, that supports such a change in the definition. The meaning is limited to the activities I've described: pretending to be the elements of a grass-roots movement '''''where no such elements exist.'''''
Here we go again.


* In this case, not even ] has claimed that there are absolutely zero grass-roots elements in the Tea Party movement. The effect of corporate involvement, and involvement by established political parties (the Republican Party) and conservative leaning news media (Fox News, Daily Caller and the like) is only to amplify these grass-roots elements — '''''elements that genuinely do exist.'''''
:<big>12f.</big> <font color=green>The Tea Party movement has a reform agenda to limit the size of the government and reduce spending. The Constitution is at the center of the Tea Party platform. Some Tea Party members are seeking to repeal or modify the 14th, 16th and 17th Amendments, and have supported the proposed Repeal Amendment and the Balanced Budget Amendment, which would limit deficit spending. Most Tea Party groups do not define their foreign policy goals, but many have opposed the United Nations Agenda 21.


* There was a video teleconference recorded and posted by '']'' where political experts were discussing this effort to change and expand the definition of the term "Astroturfing." I've posted the link to it at least twice and will try to find it again, and post it again. But yes, my new best friend, more ] is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of "grass-roots" as it applies to TPm '''''without attempting to change the meaning''''' of that long-established term of art, to include activities that, had ] and ] engaged in them, would be cheerfully described by the very same sources as "]."
:Tea Party members have protested TARP, the 2009 stimulus bill, "cap and trade," the 2010 health care law, and what they see as government efforts to limit gun owners' rights, free speech rights, and privacy rights. Tea Party groups support right to work laws, and immigration reform that improves border security. They have formed SuperPacs to support candidates who share their goals, and have opposed many mainstream Republican candidates. They protested the IRS for delaying applications for tax-exempt status by many Tea Party groups.


* The difference here is that the community that's being organized is much more fiscally conservative. And that's really the biggest and most salient difference between the community organizing that's being done by the Koch Brothers, and the community organizing that was done by Barack Obama. Opponents and critics of the movement tend to focus instead on the fact that the Tea Party is mostly white. Considering that some of the most beloved candidates of the Tea Party have included ], ], ], ] and ], race is simply not the salient factor. ] (]) 14:37, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
:While the movement lacks the central leaders enjoyed by political parties, the "Contract from America" was created with the help of "hundreds of thousand of people" voting online to create a Tea Party platform. Its name was a play on the Republican leaders' 1994 "Contract with America". The Contract from America was met with some support within the Republican Party, but not broadly embraced by GOP leaders, who later wrote their own "Pledge to America."</font>


:::I'm going to skip past the new twists on old memes above (''"It depends on what the meaning of the word 'is' is." and "Some of my best friends are black."'') and comment on these:
Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 14.
:::*''You feel the use of ''grassroots'' ought not be construed as all-encompassing. My solution: The Tea Party is a political movement primarily based in grassroots activism.'' --TE
:::That's a tiny step in the right direction, but still leaves us saying that the hybrid car "runs primarily on gasoline" to the neglect of mentioning that it also runs on electricity. By "unqualified statement", I think the other editor is noting that most sources (and this is particularily true of news media sources) use words like 'grassroots', 'conservative', 'anti-tax movement', without qualification because they are convenient and true, but our article would be remiss and misleading if it mentioned taxes without also mentioning spending, or mentioned conservative without also mentioning libertarian, or mentioned grassroots without also mentioning astroturfed.


:::If we look at ''sources that <u>actually discuss the meaning</u> of "grassroots" as it applies to the Tea Party movement'' as suggested above, we see that the description is most frequently applied to the masses of Americans upset at proposed bailouts (activists), not a movement, which was actually developed by more than just grassroots activists.
Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 37.
:::*''not even Ronald P. Formisano has claimed that there are absolutely zero grass-roots elements in the Tea Party movement'' --P&W
:::Nor have any Misplaced Pages editors, as far as I know. That's not where the disagreement is here. ] (]) 16:30, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
{{od}}Why waste so much precious time on the trivial -- Are we still stuck in the past? ''Astroturfing'' allegations were fun while they lasted, but the world has moved on. Since mentioned above, I decided to do a count:<br>''''''<br><small>Vanessa Williamson, Theda Skocpol, and John Coggin</small>


*Grassroots - <s>24</s> 29 <small> ]<u>]</u> 22:25, 11 July 2013 (UTC)</small>
I would like to limit the use of blockquotes to the following '''''FOOTNOTES.''''' Just to be perfectly clear these are going in the footnotes. I also have plenty of enormous words to put into refcites and hide behind Wikilinks. As you can see from previous versions, that can easily be done later.
*Astroturf - 0
It's time to let go. ]<u>]</u> 19:37, 11 July 2013 (UTC)


::Oooh, how very scientific! Your count is off, by the way. It's 29 to 0; but even at 29 the mentions of "grassroots" are still outnumbered by mentions of Elites and Funders of the movement. Not a single mention of a "grassroots movement", but plenty of references to activists, adherents and TPers that are one part of it. Oh, and did you realize several of those "grassroots" are mentions of other conservatives from the past, not TPers? Or is it at all important to you that most of those "grassroots" mentions actually are questioning or qualifying that term?
Here are the blockquotes I want to use in the footnotes:
:::{{quotation|<small>... has been beset with controversy about its grassroots authenticity ... These elites have long since developed a policymaking infrastructure in Washington, but had previously achieved only limited success in directly connecting themselves to an activist grassroots base ... and how grassroots undertakings relate to the Republican Party and to national organizations claiming to further Tea Party efforts ... (TPP), whose website was up and running within days of the original Santelli rant, has been more closely associated with grassroots activism than TPE ... TPP rhetoric and the group’s homespun website gives the impression of an entirely grassroots, volunteer-run organization ... dubs itself the “official grassroots American movement” ... not clear how much grassroots Tea Partiers know about the national advocacy and funding organizations promoting and trying to capitalize on their efforts ... a partnership formalizing long-time ties between the pro-business lobby and the conservative media’s grassroots mobilization efforts ... conservative media’s social coordination of willing local activists and participants, the anti-regulation big-business lobby could harness new grassroots networks to accompany their already powerful DC presence ... elite Tea Party funders and grassroots activists ...</small>}}
::But we wouldn't want to let a little thing like context get in the way. No one is arguing that there are not genuine grassroots activists in the movement; the disagreement with reliable sourcing only arises when a suggestion is made to describe the movement only as "grassroots". Sorry to see you move on, ] (]) 21:23, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
:::OR/SYN. Personal beliefs of what constitutes ''astroturf'' has no place in the mainspace. ]<u>]</u> 22:25, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
::::None were stated. The concern is over describing the movement as only ''grassroots''. {{mdash}} ] (]) 03:36, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
::::I see nothing wrong with the reliable sources' research or synthesis, and it appears to be well-founded conclusion rather than "personal belief". Are we speaking of the same reliable sources? We can raise the issue at WP:RSN to verify if they have a place in mainspace, if needed. ] (]) 12:27, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::Just doing my best to abide by ''Rule 1''. Unfortunately, I must break it to avoid further misunderstanding: '''"Your personal beliefs of what constitutes ''astroturf'' has no place in the mainspace."'''
:::::It's quite clear that if the RS wanted to use the term "astroturf," they were free to do so. ''Elites and Funders'', your personal opinions of what is established by their presence, has no bearing here. ]<u>]</u> 16:02, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::Of course Misplaced Pages editor opinions and beliefs have no place in mainspace; yours nor mine. I don't see why you feel compelled to state the obvious. We're discussing reliable sources, aren't we? Now returning to those, we see that funding sources and elite establishment influence are indeed important components when describing astroturf/grassroots. Skocpol, Williamson, Formisano and other reliable sources all clearly indicate that the TP movement cannot be described as wholly "grassroots". Our Misplaced Pages article shouldn't either, nor should it misleadingly imply it by inserting the unqualified 'grassroots' description in the lead to the exclusion of the other aspects. The RS ''does'' use the term astroturf (and "not grassroots" and "top-down" and "co-opted" and "faux-grassroots" ...) if you've examined their fuller work on the matter. <small><blockquote>''"Many supporters also proclaim the Tea Party to be purely a grassroots rebellion, a "mass movement of ... 'regular' Americans with real concerns about losing the right to live their lives as they choose." This view captures only a small part of the truth, ignoring the fact that Tea Party participants are in many respects even more ideologically extreme than other very conservative Republicans. Similarly, the ‘mass movement’ portrayal overlooks the fact that the Tea Party, understood in its entirety, includes media hosts and wealthy political action committees, plus national advocacy groups and self-proclaimed spokespersons – elites that wield many millions of dollars in political contributions and appear all over the media claiming to speak for grassroots activists who certainly have not elected them, and to whom they are not accountable. What kind of mass rebellion is funded by corporate billionaires, like the Koch brothers, led by over-the-hill former GOP kingpins like Dick Armey, and ceaselessly promoted by millionaires media celebrities like Glenn Beck and Sean Hannity?”''</blockquote></small>
::::::] (]) 21:01, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::::Finally, something we can agree on: ''"he TP movement cannot be described as wholly 'grassroots'."'' There's no such thing in this day and age that could gain a foothold in American politics. You need some muscle behind that hustle. The point of contention is erroneously throwing the term ''astroturf'' about as if it's suddenly been redefined. So and so says ''astroturf'', I'm sure there's a place for it in this BLP, attributed, but would be a stretch to consider it lead-worthy. Weight and all. On "''their fuller work,''" I'm of limited resources. I have overdue books, my google machine is the best I can do. But it's not all bad. For instance, by using parts of your excerpt, my google machine led me to the very text that completes said excerpt, for context: <small><blockquote>''The opposite illusion is also there among those who proclaim the Tea Party to be nothing more than an "astroturf" phenomenon, an illusion pushed by Fox News, or a "billionaire's tea party" in which "corporate America is faking a grassroots revolution." This take on the Tea Party as a kabuki dance entirely manipulated from above simply cannot do justice to the volunteer engagement of many thousands of men and women who travel to rallies with their homemade signs and, even more remarkably, have formed ongoing, regularly meeting local Tea Party groups. The citizens we have met, who spend hours meeting with one another, arguing with officials, and learning about the workings of local, state, and national government—these people do not fit the caricatures espoused by some on the left. They are unglamorous, mostly older middle-class Americans. Billionaire-funded political action committees and longtime free-market advocacy organizations are certainly doing all they can to leverage and benefit from Tea Party activism. But they did not create all that activism in the first place, nor do they entirely control the popular effervescence.''</blockquote></small>
:::::::Hope this helps. ]<u>]</u> 22:31, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::::I don't think we've ever disagreed on that part; the movement is neither wholly grassroots or astroturfed. I provided the paragraph that shows the movement isn't entirely grassroots, and you just added the paragraph that shows the movement isn't entirely astroturfed. (By the way, I have dead-tree copies of each of the above sources if Google's "preview" function fails you.) No one has "redefined" astroturf or grassroots here. Neither grassroots nor astroturf needs to be attributed to "so and so", unless you suggest we start citing opinion pieces, and I'd recommend against that. (Pssst ... by the way, this isn't a BLP.) See more of this same discussion below. ] (]) 00:58, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::::::What I posted, when the RS actually used the phrase ''astroturf'', in parenthesis, shot it down with the quickness. And this is very much a BLP. ]<u>]</u> 02:02, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::::::By "in parenthesis", did you mean "in quotes"? If so, the only thing shot down was the notion that the movement is "nothing more than" or "entirely manipulated" or "entirely controlled" astroturf, and no one is suggesting it is. Like I said, we've never disagreed on that point. And no, ] is not a ]. Just go to WP:BLPN and search the archives for "tea party" and see for yourself, as that one has been tried a couple times before. If you meant that BLP rules still apply to living people regardless of what article they are mentioned in, then we agree. ] (]) 02:51, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::::::::''"Quotes"'' would be the safe assumption. But, I guess it's always good to ask so as to avoid any further misunderstanding. Those "quotes" have a funny way of surrounding what the RS finds to be fringe viewpoints. If you would like, I propose we use the RS as a counterpoint to the Pelosi/Krugman '09 ''astroturf'' allegations. In their same quotation form. ]<u>]</u> 03:16, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
* Please stop beating your dead horse. It's dead.


* ''It's 29 to 0; but even at 29 the mentions of "grassroots" are still outnumbered by mentions of Elites and Funders of the movement.'' "Elites and funders" do not equal "Astroturf," except in the opinion of Ron Formisano. None of these 29 sources describes the activities of these "elites and funders" as Astroturfing, nor does any of these 29 sources describe what they're doing as having a compromising or diluting effect on the essential grass-roots nature of the movement. All they're doing is amplifying the genuine grass-roots elements that are actually there. And as I said before, these very same activities would be described as "]" without the slightest hesitation, rather than "Astroturfing," if it was Barack Obama and Organizing for America instead of conservatives with money. ] (]) 04:08, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
Foley: "Tea Party opposition to bailouts, stimulus packages and health-care reform is reflected in various proposals to amend the Constitution, including proposals to require a balanced budget, repeal the Sixteenth and Seventeenth Amendments, and give states a veto power over federal laws (the so-called Repeal Amendment)."
::::29 sources? No, that is a single source, with 29 iterations of the word "grassroots" used to describe what is and is not grassroots, and yes they do describe the activities of the funders and established elites. ] (]) 21:01, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
*:I agree: There is no source which calls the movement Astroturfed, which doesn't (1) redefine Astroturfed to include any corporate funding, nor (2) quotes political opponents of the movement. I could almost support a statement that it's a grass-roots movement ''said to be'' Astroturfed, but even that doesn't seem to be correct. — ] ] 10:12, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
:::It's true that (1) RS include funding sources in their definitions of grassroots and astroturfing (not "redefine", as funding sources have been part of the definition since the terms were created). (2) None of the sources we're presently discussing "quotes political opponents of the movement", so perhaps Arthur Rubin would be so kind as to indicate which sources he's talking about. Even our Misplaced Pages article notes that "]" ''implies that the creation of the movement <u>and the group supporting it</u> are natural and spontaneous, highlighting the differences between this and a movement that is orchestrated by traditional power structures.'' While the reliable sources note there are grassroots activists, they also note the "movement" is controlled, directed and funded by traditional special interests. Why all the aversion to conveying what the reliable sources actually say? ] (]) 12:27, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
:::* ''(not "redefine", as funding sources have been part of the definition since the terms were created)'' There are other essential elements of the definition of "Astroturfing," and they've been essential elements of the definition since the term was created in the '80s. Not just (A) corporate and PAC money, but also (B) a genuine Astroturfing operation conceals the source of the money, and (C) one political or corporate operative pretends to be several people at once — and the people he's pretending to be have no connection to the source of the money. Is there any evidence of anything like either (B) or (C) going on here? Both are essential elements of the political science term "Astroturfing."
:::* If the TPm does not have both (B) and (C), then what's happening here is called "]." Rich, powerful people are simply providing funds to make sure that all of the very real, grass-roots people who share their beliefs show up at the next protest, or the next election. And without (B) and (C), individuals like Ronald P. Formisano are most certainly trying to redefine "Astroturfing" to include activities that would have made Barack Obama one of the most notorious Astroturfers in the history of politics.
:::* Here's the link to that '']'' video of a discussion about the definition of ]. According to my new best friend ArtifexMayhem, this source deserves more weight than Formisano because it actually discusses the definition of the word it's using. This is a 30-minute video but it's worth a very careful review. Watch for the comments by Edward Walker, the guy with eyeglasses who had to connect to the discussion via telephone, and John Hawkins, the guy wearing the headset. They're the ones who, in my opinion, really hit all the points we've been talking about. ] (]) 13:40, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::I'm the last person to break up a beautiful friendship, but AM said nothing specifically about that video clip and I think you may have missed his/her point. What was said is, "More weight is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of 'grassroots' as it applies to the Tea Party movement." This video clip source is indeed more weighty than one of the many news reports that merely stick in the word "grassroots" by rote when reporting about a protest or activist, etc., (you are up to 18 now, you said?). But that puts it on par with Formisano's ''The Tea Party: A Brief History'', which goes to great lengths to discuss the grassroots and astroturfed aspects as they apply to the Tea Party. Same with Skocpol & Williamson's ''The Tea Party and the Remaking of Republican Conservatism''. Starting at 26:30, Walker gives an accurate popular astroturf versus grassroots description, which doesn't contradict what reliable sources have been saying. He admits he is "unclear" about co-opting, and who co-opted whom, but he does acknowledge the grassroots activists, although he gets the timeline wrong about involvement in the movement. Walker is one of the lead proponents of the line of thought that (and I quote him) ''"The dividing line between “grassroots” and “Astroturf” may be more of a political Rorschach test than a precisely measurable concept. But, in any case, changing relationships between companies and the public—especially in the health domain—are leading more and more industries to institute grassroots mobilization programs."'' (See the "grassroots lobbying" form of astroturfing.)
:::::*''And as I said before...'' --P&W
:::::Repeated time and again, yes, without much change in the discussion. Instead of continuing to spin our wheels, how about we try to move the discussion forward? Maybe if we first developed this topic better in the body of the article, then summarize that content in the lead? ] (]) 21:01, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::Yes, it has been repeated &mdash; and '''no argument''' has been presented for inclusion of "astroturf". But perhaps we should concentrate on other matters. — ] ] 23:02, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::::Except for the '''arguments that have been presented for inclusion of astroturf''', but you would not be expected to know about those. ] (]) 00:58, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::::"''''" - Xenophrenic
::::::::All I've seen was not one mention of ''astroturfing''. OR/SYN has no place in the mainspace. ]<u>]</u> 02:09, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::::::I see nothing wrong with the reliable sources' research or synthesis, and it appears to be well-founded conclusion rather than "personal belief". ] (]) 02:51, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::::::Just doing my best to abide by ''Rule 1''. Unfortunately, I must break it to avoid further misunderstanding: '''"Your OR/SYN has no place in the mainspace."''' ]<u>]</u> 03:07, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::::::::Of course Misplaced Pages editor opinions and beliefs have no place in mainspace; yours nor mine. I don't see why you feel compelled to state the obvious. We're discussing reliable sources, aren't we? I don't see where I've placed "OR/SYN" in mainspace, or even made a proposal that we do so. Maybe some other editor? ] (]) 03:26, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::::::::''"rassroots mobilization programs being referred to are astroturf"'' - Xenophrenic
::::::::::::Well, definitely not in the . Which is why I sometimes feel compelled to state, and restate the obvious. ]<u>]</u> 03:33, 13 July 2013 (UTC)


{{od}}
Schmidt: two blockquotes, the one I used above in V12c plus this one: "The central tenets of Tea Party constitutionalism can be distilled down to four basic assumptions. One, the solutions to the problems facing the United States today can be found in the words of the Constitution and the insights of its framers. Two, the meaning of the Constitution and the lessons of history are not obscure; in fact, they are readily accessible to American citizens who take the time to educate themselves. Three, all Americans, not just lawyers and judges, have a responsibility to understand the Constitution and to act faithfully toward it. And four, the overarching purpose of the Constitution is to ensure that the role of government, and particularly the federal government, is a limited one; only by following constitutionally defined constraints on government can individual liberties be preserved."


* ''I'm the last person to break up a beautiful friendship, but AM said nothing specifically about that video clip ...'' Specifically, AM said, "More ] is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of 'grassroots' as it applies to the Tea Party movement." He did not include Formisano specifically, but the HuffPo video clip is included by definition because it actually discusses the meaning of that word. Formisano does discuss the grass-roots aspects, and what he's trying to redefine as "astroturfed" aspects of TPm. But he never really talks about what Astroturf means, let alone admit that he's trying to expand the definition by leaps and bounds. The multiple experts in the HuffPo clip do talk about what the word means. And it does not mean merely donating money to a Tea Party group. So no, according to AM, the HuffPo video clip deserves more weight than Formisano's book.
Zernike: "It could be hard to define a Tea Party agenda; to some extent it depended on where you were. In the Northeast, groups mobilized against high taxes; in the Southwest, illegal immigration. Some Tea Partiers were clearer about what they didn't want than what they did. But the shared ideology — whether for young libertarians who came to the movement through Ron Paul or older 9/12ers who came to it through ] — was the belief that a strict interpretation of the Constitution was the solution to government grown wild. By getting back to what the founders intended, they believed they could right what was wrong with the country. Where in the Constitution, they asked, does it say that the federal government was supposed to run banks? Or car companies? Where does it say that people have to purchase health insurance? Was it so much to ask that officials honor the document they swear an oath to uphold?"


* ''"... are leading more and more industries to institute grassroots mobilization programs."'' Right. '''"GRASSROOTS''' mobilization programs." ]. Not Astroturf. I think it's important to make it very clear how few of these sources actually say, "The Tea Party movement is partially Astroturfed." Skocpol doesn't say it, for example. ] (]) 02:31, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
Skocpol: "Just like other political actors, past and present, Tea Partiers stretch the limits of the Constitution, use it selectively, and push for amendments. ... Some parts of the Constitution are lauded over others."


* ''Except for the arguments that have been presented for inclusion of astroturf ...'' References to Astroturf are already included down in the body of the article, where minority opinions belong. Nobody is suggesting that they should be removed. What should be changing is the article's treatment of the word "grass-roots." That word goes into the lede sentence, where the majority opinion belongs. ] (]) 02:31, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
Zietlow: "Tea Party activists have invoked the Constitution as the foundation of their conservative political philosophy. These activists are engaged in 'popular originalism,' using popular constitutionalism — constitutional interpretation outside of the courts — to invoke originalism as interpretive method."
:::No, I really don't think AM indicated that your video clip is weight-ier than Formisano or Skocpol. Let's see if he'll clarify for us. And yes, the grassroots mobilization programs being referred to ''are'' astroturf; it's the new grassroots lobbying. As for Skocpol not being quoted as saying the TP movement is partially Astroturfed, how would you propose to convey what she did say? ] (]) 02:51, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
::::Correct, I did not ''"indicated that video clip is weight-ier than Formisano or Skocpol."'' Per ], "When available, academic and peer-reviewed publications, scholarly monographs, and textbooks are usually the most reliable sources." I.e., Formisano and Skocpol are the types of sources we should prefer. {{mdash}} ] (]) 06:23, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::Quote her directly. At one point she says that the TPm is a ], supported by deep-pockets money like the Koch Brothers and "amplified" by conservative media such as Fox News and Breitbart. That is what she actually said: her own opinion, in her own words, which didn't include the use of the word "Astroturf." Quote that paragraph of her book. ] (]) 17:07, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::Quote "her" directly? Don't you mean "them"? Neither Skocpol nor Williamson mention a "grassroots movement". They do mention grassroots activists-people-enthusiasts-adherents-protesters ... you know, the individuals who are genuinely grassroots but only '''part''' of the movement. One component of the movement out of three. Perhaps that is part of the misunderstanding here. You make a big deal out of the fact that the word "astroturf" is rarely used by Skocpol, yet she nonetheless writes a lot about astroturfing. She explains how the movement is neither wholly grassroots or astroturfed. It isn't necessary to repeatedly spell out a-s-t-r-o-t-u-r-f to discuss "top-down" organizing, or "supposedly" grassroots activity, or "elitist" co-opting and control or "the super rich fat-cats who have manipulated Tea Party activism with such glee". It is still astroturf she is describing. Formisano spells it out as well: ''So what is the answer to the question posed at the beginning of this chapter: "Astroturf or Grassroots Populism?" The simple answer is that the Tea Parties have been created by both kinds of populism, in part by the few -- the corporate lobbyists from above--but also from the passionate many expressing real grassroots populism.'' Or ''The Tea Partiers, finally, are routinely referred to in the media as conservatives. But their blend of astroturf and grassroots populism is more accurately labeled right-wing or reactionary populism.'' You claimed above that if pro-Obama groups were to do what FreedomWorks, Americans for Prosperity, etc., were doing, it would be called "community organizing". No, it wouldn't. It would (and has) been called what it is:
::::::{{quotation|<small>More recent advocacy events have likewise shown an apparent lack of spontaneous organization, most notably some of the early “Tea Party” protests. Following CNBC pundit Rick Santelli’s call, in February 2009, for a “‘Chicago Tea Party’” to oppose President Obama’s mortgage bailout plan, numerous websites dedicated to the cause sprang to life, each supposedly part of a national grassroots Internet protest and each tied to the Sam Adams Alliance advocacy group. This group in turn enjoyed substantial financial support from the Koch family, multibillionaire owners of one of the largest privately-held corporations in the United States, and FreedomWorks, a public relations firm with former House Majority leader Dick Armey as its chairman, and which the Kochs have funded. The above examples highlight a phenomenon more widely known as “Astroturfing,” or fake grassroots advocacy, a practice that has become popular among particular groups and individuals. </small>}}
::::::This has been acknowledged as astroturf activity for decades. If you insist on having such nuanced subject matter appear in the lead of the article, we could say something similar to:
:::::::''The Tea Party movement is an American political movement that advocates reducing the U.S. national debt and federal budget deficit by reducing U.S. government spending and taxes. The movement comprises both grassroots and astroturf components, including passionate activists, wealthy political action committees and national advocacy groups, establishment elites and conservative media outlets. The movement has been called partly conservative, partly libertarian, and partly populist. It has sponsored protests and supported political candidates since 2009.''
::::::What are your thoughts? ] (]) 00:50, 14 July 2013 (UTC)


:::::The video teleconference posted by '']'' interviewed four different academics simultaneously. It deserves at least as much weight. And as you said, the four academics do actually discuss the meaning of the words they're using, so unless I'm mistaken about what you said, or you've suddenly changed your mind, that source deserves even more weight than Formisano or Skocpol. ] (]) 17:07, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
I repeat, all these blockquotes are going in the '''''FOOTNOTES.''''' The green text is all that's going directly into the article.
::::::Four different academics? Walker was the only academic in that group, and there were two Tea Partiers and an executive from "Yes! magazine". Information from Walker can be considered, although he admits he is "unclear" about the co-opting of the Tea Party. Formisano and Skocpol do indeed discuss how the TP is grassroots and astroturfed, so it appears that you are mistaken about what was said. Hopefully that helps. ] (]) 00:50, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
:::* ''And yes, the grassroots mobilization programs being referred to are astroturf ...'' According to who? A pseudonymous Misplaced Pages editor's ]? One history professor at the University of Kentucky? Or a demonstrated consensus across the entire profession of political science, supporting that redefinition of the term "Astroturf" by that history professor from the University of Kentucky? Because only the third one will be sufficient to support that statement. ] (]) 05:31, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::You lost me with the U-of-Kentucky reference ... name? I'm also not citing any Misplaced Pages editors. As for your characterization that astroturfing has been redefined, I'd like to see what source you are citing that to, because that's news to me. I do see that there are newer terms like "grassroots lobbying", "astroturf lobbying" and "grassroots mobilization" being introduced over the past decade, but I am unaware of any actual redefining of astroturfing. ] (]) 00:50, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::I caught the "''history professor at the University of Kentucky''" reference right away, and that's even without previously . ]<u>]</u> 07:36, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::::I wish I was as quick on the uptake; you are both speaking of Formisano? I do have the book (borrowed, not owned), and nowhere in it does it mention him as a professor at UofK. He's been referred to simply as "Formisano" in these discussions, so the new referense threw me. I've just Google'd him - looks like an impressive fellow. ] (]) 17:33, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
{{od}}


Opponents of the proposed edit adding the word "grass-roots" to the lede have cited three sources, generally referred to here as "Skocpol," "Formisano," and "Zellner." Skocpol doesn't support use of the term "Astroturfing." Formisano does, but is trying to expand the definition of "Astroturfing" in doing so. Here's a link to an op-ed column by Formisano: Here's another: Formisano clearly likes Barack Obama very, very much and his bias most likely seeps into his writing about TPm. Zellner, while focusing his article on Astroturfed lobbying efforts, decided to do a drive-by on the Tea Party. He not only supports the expanded definition of "Astroturfing," but he relies exclusively on sources that Misplaced Pages would not consider reliable sources: an AlterNet article, and the partisan ] op-ed column. (Check his footnotes.) Furthermore, at the time he wrote the article in November 2010, he was not a professor. He has never been a professor. He was a law student at the time, seeking to obtain a JD the following spring. This is not an academic, certainly not of the same caliber as ], and should not be presented as one.
*'''Strongly support.''' regards .... ] (]) 21:15, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' Other than the "Agenda 21" business which does ''not'' seem to be of enough weight to be given prominence, and the "word play" trivia which, AFAICT, adds nothing to the gist of the section. I also see a couple of spots which could reduce the grade level excess. Removing the two moves the R/I to 37. <font color = green>''The Tea Party seeks to limit the size of the government and reduce spending. The Constitution is the focus of the Tea Party platform. Some Tea Party members seek to repeal or modify the 14th, 16th and 17th Amendments, and support a Repeal Amendment and a Balanced Budget Amendment to limit deficit spending. Tea Party members have protested TARP, the 2009 stimulus bill, "cap and trade," the 2010 health care law, and what they see as government efforts to limit gun owners' rights, free speech, and privacy rights. Tea Party groups support right to work laws, and immigration reform that improves border security. SuperPacs support candidates who share their goals, and have opposed many mainstream Republican candidates. They protested the IRS for delaying applications for tax-exempt status by many Tea Party groups.While the movement lacks the central leaders enjoyed by political parties, the "Contract from America" was created with the help of "hundreds of thousand of people" voting online to create a Tea Party platform.''</font> reduces grade level to 13 and increases the R/I to 40. ] (]) 21:38, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
*'''Vigorously approve''' as a framework aimed at consensus. There are things I would alter or tweak, but will remain silent to avoid the possibility of 12(g). ]<u>]</u> 21:41, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' While granting that the above suggested text includes more information, it omits the important internal contrasts among agendas of different groups eluucidated by the material introduced by Xenophrenic, and I still maintain that the use of blockquotes and inline quotes is permissible in the text as well as capable of being implemented without making the text unreadable. Meanwhile, the Zernike text basically says the same thing as the more succinct quote available from Schmidt, though I would think that the Zernike quote could be included in a footnote.
:Finally, there had been discussion of a "Tea Party and the Constitution section in the article or a subarticle, and the inclusion of more detail would seem merited.
:Version {{ex|'''12d'''}} would be more informative, and readability can be improved, though too much emphasis is being placed on readability, IMO. Meanwhile, I still don't think material on the IRS incident belongs in the Agenda section.
:If I have time later I will attempt another version incorporating the material added by Xenophrenic, or improve the readability of {{ex|'''12d'''}}.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 03:29, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' Introduces too many inaccuracies (I.e.; equates Agenda 21 with "Foreign Policy", implies support for Immigration Reform, juxtaposes Contract with America with "lack of central leaders"), and omits salient information about the agenda (I.e.; it intentionally tries to avoid social issues; it intentionally develops agendas from the bottom up, resulting in both problems and benefits; etc.). ] (]) 18:15, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
<big>{{ex|slightly tweaked version 12f}}</big>
:{{ex|The Tea Party movement seeks to limit the size of the government and reduce spending. Tea Party members have protested TARP, the 2009 stimulus bill, "cap and trade," the 2010 health care law, and what they see as government efforts to limit gun owners' rights, free speech rights, and privacy rights. Tea Party groups support right to work laws, and immigration reform that includes border security. They have formed SuperPacs to support candidates who share their goals, and have opposed Republican establishment candidates.}}


Meanwhile here is a sampling of the reliable, neutral sources supporting a description of TPm as "grass-roots," period, full stop: three from the ''],'' two from the ''],'' one from ], one from ], one from '']'' of all places, a very interesting 30-minute webcam round-table discussion hosted by the ''Huffington Post,'' one from the ''],'' and a Harvard PDF in which Theda Skocpol, of all people, says that "Thus the grassroots Tea Party phenomenon is real ..."
:{{ex|The Constitutionality of new laws is at the center of the Tea Party platform. Some Tea Party members are also seeking to repeal or modify the 14th, 16th and 17th Amendments, and have supported the proposed Repeal Amendment and the Balanced Budget Amendment, which would limit deficit spending. Most Tea Party groups do not define their foreign policy goals, but many have opposed the United Nations Agenda 21.}}


The 30-minute webcam round table hosted by HuffPo, in a very interesting exchange of ideas, explores what is actually meant by the term "Astroturfing." The mere addition of money, even from people like the Koch Brothers, does not negate the grass-roots nature of the movement. Only if the money is being used to pretend that there is genuine grass-roots support for a particular position '''where no grass-roots support actually exists''' can it legitimately be called Astroturfing. It is painfully obvious that the majority viewpoint, per ], is that TPm is a ], even if we don't count the Tea Party's self-serving claims — which we should count under ]. Accordingly, using the ] article as an example, this majority viewpoint should be stated in the lede sentence.
:{{ex|While the movement lacks the central leadership structure of political parties, the "Contract from America" was created with the help of "hundreds of thousand of people" voting online to create a Tea Party platform. Its name was a play on the Republican leaders' 1994 "Contract with America". The Contract from America was met with some support within the Republican Party, but not broadly embraced by GOP leaders, who later wrote their own "Pledge to America."</font>}}


Regarding the "Other events" section, it was orphaned by removal of the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" section, and should accompany that section in the spin-off article. These "other events" are not notable enough to be included in a top-level article written in ].
] (]) 05:53, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


Regarding the "Commentaries on origins," they're partisan and, for the most part, not notable enough to be included in a top-level article written in ]. The '']'' article never should have been mentioned in this article's mainspace. Here's a harsh analysis of that ''Tobacco Control'' study. And in their grant proposal to obtain public funding from NIH, the authors of the study basically admitted that they had a political agenda in seeking this funding: the anti-smoking lobby "requires understanding how the tobacco industry maintains a favorable social and policy environment" As the contributor at ''Huffington Post'' sarcastically observed, it's hard to tell the difference between this stated objective, and political ]. Also, here's an examination of the chief author of the study, Stanton Glantz, and his research:
== {{ex|’’Version 15’’, (version 12d revised for readability)}} ==


* ''It isn't necessary to repeatedly spell out a-s-t-r-o-t-u-r-f to discuss "top-down" organizing ...'' Yes, it is necessary to say it at least once: "These activities by this Tea Party group were Astroturfing." To establish a different standard violates ]. Astroturfing has a very specific meaning, and the activities described by Formisano and Zellner do not satisfy that definition. The term has very negative connotations, indicating that something fraudulent (or at least very dishonest) is going on, which is why the TPm's political enemies have been trying so hard for so many years to hang that word around the Tea Party's neck. We've officially discussed this to death. ] (]) 01:51, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
I've further copy edited the version posted by Xenophrenic, and renumbered it, divorcing it from the "12" series.<br>
I've consolidated a couple of passages for added brevity without sacrificing content, and raised the readability to a non-objectionable level. The overall score as well as paragraph-by-paragraph scores are shown below. Refcites and Wikilinks need work.<br>
This version includes extended coverage of the CfA, and is intended to replace the entire Agenda section, with opportunity for discussion of the CfA and Foreign Policy sections reserved if there is interest. I Believe that the content of the Mead article could be covered in the Academic commentaries section or the like.<br>
''<u>Overall readability scores</u>'' '''15/21'''<br>
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'''15/27'''<br>
The Tea Party movement doesn't have a single uniform agenda. The decentralized character of the Tea Party, with its lack of formal structure or hierarchy, allows each autonomous group to set its own priorities and goals. Sometimes these goals may even be in conflict, and priorities will often differ between groups. Many Tea Party organizers see this as a strength rather than a weakness, as decentralization has helped to immunize the Tea Party against co-opting by outside entities and corruption from within.<ref name="Rauch1">"Group Think: Inside the Tea Party’s Collective Brain"; National Journal; Jonathan Rauch; September 11, 2010</ref><br>
'''17/18'''<br>
The Tea Party has generally sought to avoid placing too much emphasis on traditional conservative social issues. Some national Tea Party organizations, such as the ] and ], have expressed concern that engaging in social issues would be divisive. Instead, they have sought to have activists focus their efforts away from social issues and toward issues such as constitutionally limited government, the free market, and fiscal responsibility.<ref name="AssocPress">; KTVB News; January 28, 2010</ref><ref></ref> Still, many Tea Party groups like the 9/12 Tea Parties popularized by ], TeaParty.org, the Iowa Tea Party and Delaware Patriot Organizations do prioritize social issues such as abortion, gun control, prayer in schools, and illegal immigration.<ref></ref><br><ref name="AssocPress"/><ref></ref>
'''16/12'''<br>
Schmidt writes, <blockquote>“…The Tea Party contains a welter of oftentimes conflicting Agendas... Yet within this confusing constellation of ideas and viewpoints, there is a relatively stable ideological core to the Tea Party. This core is particularly evident when one focuses on the vision of the Constitution regularly professed by movement leaders, activists, and supporters.”</blockquote>
'''14/31'''<br>
The Tea Party generally focuses on government reform. Among its goals are limiting the size of the federal government, reducing government spending, lowering the national debt and opposing tax increases. To this end, Tea Party groups have protested ], stimulus programs, ], ] and perceived attacks by the federal government on their 1st, 2nd, 4th and 10th Amendment rights. Tea Party groups have also voiced support for right-to-work legislation as well as tighter border security, and opposed amnesty for illegal immigrants. They have formed ] to support candidates sympathetic to their goals and have opposed what they call the "Republican establishment" candidates. After setbacks in the 2012 elections, the movement again shifted its focus. With repeal off the table, the Tea party now leads efforts to ] federal health care law. It has also mobilized locally against the United Nations ].<ref name="Fringe"></ref><ref></ref><br>
'''16/14'''<br>
The Tea Party places the Constitution at the center of its reform agenda. It advocates an ] interpretation of the Constitution coupled with educational outreach efforts. Several constitutional amendments have been targeted by some in the movement for full or partial repeal, including the ], ], and ]. There has also been support for a proposed ], which would enable a two-thirds majority of the states to repeal federal laws, and a ], which would limit deficit spending.<ref name="Foley1"></ref><br>
'''15/16'''<br>
According to Schmidt, "...The Tea Party’s constitutional vision is designed to be mobilized. The core elements of the Tea Party Constitution are relatively easily grasped and they readily lend themselves to translation into tangible political action. Tea Party constitutionalism challenges its adherents to do more than just passively accept its basic tenets." According to Foley, the Tea Party positions on the Constitution can be seen as corresponding to concrete agenda points, such as opposition to government sponsored bailouts and stimulus programs as well as government mandated health care coverage.<br>
'''15/19'''<br>
The '']'' was a legislative agenda created by conservative activist Ryan Hecker with the assistance of ] of FreedomWorks. Armey had co-written the ] released by Republican Party during the 1994 midterm elections. A thousand agenda ideas that had been submitted were narrowed down to twenty-one economic, non-social issues. Participants then voted in an online campaign in which they were asked to select their favorite policy planks. The results were released as a ten-point Tea Party platform.<ref name="Davis">{{Cite news|url=http://abcnews.go.com/Politics/tea-party-activists-craft-contract-america/story?id=9740705|title=Tea Party Activists Craft 'Contract from America'|last=Davis|first=Teddy|date=9 February 2010|work=ABC News|publisher=American Broadcasting Company|accessdate=18 September 2010}}</ref><ref name="Davis2">{{cite web|last=Davis |first=Teddy |url=http://abcnews.go.com/Politics/tea-party-activists-unveil-contract-america/story?id=10376437&page=2 |title=Tea Party Activists Unveil 'Contract from America' |publisher=ABC News |date=April 15, 2010 |accessdate=June 7, 2011}}</ref> The Contract from America was met with some support within the Republican Party, but it was not broadly embraced by GOP leadership, which released its own ']'.<ref name="Davis2"/></font><br>
--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 06:58, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


:::Why argue against "Opponents of the proposed edit adding the word 'grass-roots' to the lede"? That's why this conversation keeps repeating itself, because of mis-framing of the discussion. I have no problem with "grassroots" being in the lead, as long as the astroturfed aspect of the movement is also added according to reliable sources. Here is a proposed sentence for the lede that addresses your request to mention "grassroots" in the lead, while also sticking to what reliable sources say:
*'''Oppose''' We have moved well past the "block quotes" insistence, and we have moved below the college graduate reading level, and above the reading ease level of 19, which is, frankly, horrendous. Our aim is not to create literature for one another as Wiki-Shakespeares, but to create an entire usable article per what scholars tell us. I trust ] is on point here. Cheers. ] (]) 11:13, 1 July 2013 (UTC) BTW, identifying Dick Armey as "the author" of the CwA is not borne out by any source -- seal to link a single person to that effort led by Larry Norman at this point is, frankly, pointy. ] (]) 11:18, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
::::{{ex|The movement comprises both grassroots and astroturf components, including passionate activists, wealthy political action committees and national advocacy groups, establishment elites and conservative media outlets.}}
*'''Oppose''' per Collect and ] and ]. ] (]) 16:06, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
:::We can add Formisano, Skocpol and Zellner cites at the end of the sentence, along with any of the dozen cites you've linked above. I've looked at each of those sources and not a single one refutes the astroturf aspect of the movement. In fact, your two NPR sources confirm the heterogeneous nature of the movement. (''On one end, it very much is a grassroots movement ... But then on the other hand, you have sort of an establishment that is somewhat preexisting. And these are the folks who have come to the game with a great deal of money, if not a great deal of energy ... So you have two things going on at once here, is what you're saying ... there is also this political structure and corporate structure that's driving them a little bit.'') Your NYT source also confirms the heterogeneous nature of the movement. (''This anti-government, grass-roots Republican offshoot has rattled the party establishment ... Some of the money behind the Tea Party movement or its offshoots has little in common with grass-roots populism.'') Harvard's Skocpol confirms the heterogeneous nature of the movement. (''Many supporters also proclaim the Tea Party to be purely a grassroots rebellion ... overlooks the fact that the Tea Party, understood in its entirety, includes media hosts and wealthy political action committees, plus national advocacy groups and self-proclaimed spokespersons – elites that wield many millions of dollars in political contributions and appear all over the media claiming to speak for grassroots activists ... Considered in its entirety, the Tea Party is neither a top-down creation nor a bottom-up explosion. Each force is important in its own right, and their interaction is what gives the Tea Party its dynamism, drama, and wallop. ... Grassroots activists, roving billionaire advocates, and right-wing media purveyors{{mdash}}these three forces, together, create the Tea Party...'')
::Xenophrenic added that element about Armey in version 12d, so I don't see why such a fuss about its "pointiness" is only being made now. I'll defer to Xenophrenic to respond further on this point.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 11:23, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
:::I note you changed the wording ''without'' noting clearly that you had done so. The usual system is to use "strikeout" for what you remove and "underline" for what you add. Otherwise it may look like I am referring to something that is no longer there. I did not reply at length ot X's original version as its reading ease of 12 was so interesting and difficult to read. ] (]) 12:25, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
:::*None of your sources refute the astroturf component of the movement; they only confirm the grassroots component.
:::*Your personal opinions about what constitutes "astroturf" (i.e.; ''Only if the money is being used to pretend that there is genuine grass-roots support for a particular position where no grass-roots support actually exists can it legitimately be called Astroturfing'') are trumped by what reliable sources say constitutes astroturf.
:::*Your personal opinions about the reliability of academic sources ("he likes Obama"; "he uses sources we wouldn't use"; etc.) aren't convincing. Try WP:RSN?
:::*Your personal opinion that it's not "Astroturf" if it is instead called "fake grassroots", "top-down manipulation", "artifical grassroots lobbying", etc., isn't really applicable in this discussion.
:::] (]) 07:52, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::Actually, it is within our remit as editors to consider the context and determine how much weight to give to a particular source once it has satisfied basic ] requirements. Let's walk through the rules on that. Rule 1 is we're supposed to give greater weight to both peer-reviewed academic sources and fact-checked news organizations. However, Rule 2 says Formisano's track record as a fawning op-ed writer for Team Obama weakens his status as a reliable, '''neutral''' source, and the weight we should give that source. From WP:RS — very, very much: "The reliability of a source depends on context. Each source must be carefully weighed to judge whether it is reliable for the statement being made and is an appropriate source for that content." Rule 3 specifically addresses and advises caution: "Misplaced Pages articles are required to present a neutral point of view. However, reliable sources are not required to be neutral, unbiased, or objective. Common sources of bias include political, financial, religious, philosophical, or other beliefs." In this case, Formisano's expressed political beliefs reduce the weight that should be given to his opinion.
:::::That brings us to Zellner, the law student. Sorry, he's not an academic like the other authors described here, such as ]. He's graduated from law school now, and he's practicing law in Connecticut. His weakened status as a source is confirmed by the weak, heavily biased sources that he chose to rely upon. Remember, context matters. ] (]) 14:05, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::'''reliable sources are not required to be neutral, unbiased, or objective.'''
::::::'''Each source must be carefully weighed to judge whether it is reliable for the statement being made and is an appropriate source for that content.'''
::::::Either we are in agreement, P&W, or the policies you cite don't say what you think they do. (I'm guessing the latter.) Since you, me, and Policy, all appear to agree, any further concerns you have with the above named sources should be raised at WP:RSN. I'll be happy to meet you there, and I'll allow you the benefit of phrasing and framing the initial argument. ] (]) 17:47, 17 July 2013 (UTC)


* ''I have no problem with "grassroots" being in the lead, as long as the astroturfed aspect of the movement is also added according to reliable sources'' It's too bad that the sources supporting "TPm is partially Astroturfed" are such a tiny minority according to ]. For that policy based reason, the word "Astroturf" belongs down in the body of the article where it currently resides, but the word "grass-roots" belongs in the lede sentence. We can modify it the way Skocpol did, "supported by deep pocket donors and amplified by conservative media," but the word "Astroturfing" does not belong in the lede because it's a minority viewpoint.
:::I believe that the directives Silk Tork issued for this exercise included one permitting the direct editing of suggested text, which is what I did, and clearly described the edit in the edit summary. If you have a complaint about my editing conduct, I suggest you take it to Silk Tork directly.
:::And to clarify, are you asserting that the following sentence was too difficult in terms of the grade-level on the F/K scale to understand?<blockquote>{{ex|The Contract from America was a legislative agenda created by a conservative activist with the assistance of ''Dick Armey of FreedomWorks, the author of the Contract with America'' released by Republican Party during the 1994 midterm elections.}}</blockquote>
:::I've italicized the text at issue to make it easier to find.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 12:44, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::No. I simply pointed out that it was false as a matter of fact. Snark is not needed about its readability. ] (]) 14:40, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


* ''Your personal opinion that it's not "Astroturf" if it is instead called "fake grassroots", "top-down manipulation", "artifical grassroots lobbying", etc., isn't really applicable in this discussion.'' It isn't a personal opinion. It's Misplaced Pages policy: ]. Also, I haven't seen a source describing it as "fake grassroots," or "artificial grassroots lobbying." The sources that allegedly support "TPm is partially Astroturfed," for the most part, do not say what's being claimed.
::::::Again, I politely request that when you have a complaint about my editing conduct, please take it directly to Silk Tork.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 14:50, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
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:<small>''To get his idea off the ground, he launched a website, "ContractFromAmerica.com," which encourages activists to offer possible planks for the contract. From the original 1,000 ideas which were submitted, Hecker whittled it down to about 50 based on popularity. He is currently in the process of narrowing it to 20 ideas. He is being aided in this process by former House Republican Leader Dick Armey, whose conservative group, FreedomWorks, has established close ties with many Tea Party activists around the country.'' -- </small>
There is nothing "false as a matter of fact" in the sentence presented by Ubikwit. They solicited input on the Internet, then Hecker and Armey selected 50, then 21, popular agenda planks after tossing out the non-economic related items. Only then were the pre-selected 21 items presented to the public, to have the best 10 of those 21 selected and prioritized by the "hundreds of thousands" of votes. ] (]) 15:47, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
::No, "They" didn't do anything. Heckler came up with the idea. He initiated it. He drove it on the Internet. He took 1000 ideas, narrowed them down to 50, and then he had Armey help him sort it. The RS says so. And to not even mention Heckler is entirely ] and ]. Seriously, on the one hand you're saying, a guy did all this, but then you don't mention his name? Don't you think the reader would like to know his name? and here:
] (]) 16:01, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


* ''I've looked at each of those sources and not a single one refutes the astroturf aspect of the movement.'' Refutation of that alleged aspect is implicit in the statement, "TPm is a grass-roots movement," just as refutation of "Substantial portions of the elephant are plant-like material" is implicit in the statement, "The elephant is an animal." The mere addition of deep pockets money does not compromise the grass-roots nature of the movement. ] (]) 11:38, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
:::That may be a point worth considering in discussion, as it would be easy enough to insert his name, but this is not an article about him, but about the Tea Party. I have posted material related to Heckler above, who is now an employee of FreedomWorks. The first ABC piece describes him as a TP activist, but Xenophrenic has clarified that the CfA predates his status as such, and that Armey of Freedomworks was involved. Considering the fact that even the main article about the Contract from America on Misplaced Pages doesn't address the details being discussed here in relation to Heckler, I fail to see why it is a point of contention at this juncture. RS clearly point to Armey's role, and since Heckler's actual status is still somewhat unclear, while Armey was with FreedomWorks, the situation is i need of further clarification. WP:POV and WP:UNDUE do not seem immediately relevant to the material under consideration. The statement in the text is reliably sourced, and the status of Heckler is somewhat in limbo per the sources, at any rate.
:::*The sources supporting TPm is partially Astroturfed are such a tiny minority? Incorrect; you have produced zero sources refuting that fact, which makes it not only a majority, but an overwhelming unanimous majority.
:::If including his name in the text would assuage the concerns being raised, I'll simply add it.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 16:13, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
:::*It isn't a personal opinion, it's Misplaced Pages policy: ]? Incorrect, not when reliable sources are doing the sysnthesis. WP:SYNTH applies to Misplaced Pages editors, not expert sources researching the matter.
::::Per source: ''"From the original 1,000 ideas that were submitted, Hecker whittled it down to about 50 based on popularity. He then narrowed the list down to 21. He was aided in this process by former House Republican Leader Dick Armey, whose conservative group, FreedomWorks, is the sponsor of Thursday's event at the Washington Monument."''
:::*Refutation of astroturf aspects is implicit in the grassroots statement? Incorrect; reliable sources explain that genuinely grassroots activists can be manipulated and co-opted by astroturfing groups. (And it's a good thing, too, else a bunch of citizens upset at bailouts never would have been organized and channeled into a 'movement', according to sources.) The fact that a hybrid vehicle can run on gasoline does not refute the fact that it also runs on electricity. Why argue to mention gas in the lead, without mentioning electricity? ] (]) 17:04, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
:::Three different people can read 3 different things from this same innocuous statement of fact.
I consider these vague terms to be a waste of time. But "astroturf" '''''as an overall characterization of the movement''''' is beyond fringe. And so trying to maneuver that in is a complete wp:snow waste of time. And the TPM is about as grassroots as any large movement has been or can be. As far as overall characterizations by sources, I think "grassroots" has about a 30:1 advantage over "astroturf" with the "1" going to zero if you limit it to impartial sources. I even consider spending much time arguing for "grass roots" to be a waste of time even thought it is appropriate. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 11:50, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
::*Dick Armey was secretly involved from the start.
:I don't think I've seen reliable sources showing astroturf as an "overall characteristic", but rather just one component of the whole. Attempting to describe the movement as overall astroturfed would indeed be fringe, but no one is doing that. Reliable sources have explained the astroturf aspect in detail, and there has been zero refutation of it, so the only "maneuvering" appears to be avoid acknowledging it. Your apples to oranges numeric comparison doesn't apply here, unless you would equally argue that "since 30:1 overall sources characterize the movement as 'conservative' over 'grassroots', we shouldn't mention grassroots". Make that 100:1 sources that avoid mentioning 'grassroots' at all when describing the movement.
::*Dick Armey entered the process and helped whittle the 1,000 down to 21.
::*Dick Armey only helped chop 50 down to the final 21.
::::I say instead of arguing which narrative contains the most ''truthiness'', we just follow my example of using inarguable facts. ]<u>]</u> 16:31, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


:The uncontested fact is that the movement comprises both astroturf and grassroots aspects. Our article should convey what reliable sources convey; it's policy. The "astroturf" part of the description does indeed carry with it negative connotations, so I can understand the impetus to avoid mentioning it. I'm not oblivious to the shotgun-arguments attempt to that end:
::::Yes, hopefully the text doesn't raise any of those problems, it basically just states that he assisted in the process, without specifying stages <blockquote>''...a legislative agenda created by conservative activist Ryan Heckler with the assistance of ] of FreedomWorks.''</blockquote>.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 16:37, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
:— try to deny the reliability of the sources ("not impartial"; "likes Obama!"; "that award-winning source is a student, not a professor!")
:::::Your preferred blockquote from my sourced addition above, ''"without specifying stages"'' of others' participation would strike me as being an alternative to reality -- Given what I had just posted above. ]<u>]</u> 18:11, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
:— try to set up a false equivalency ("more sources say grassroots than astroturf!")
{{od}}
:— try to deny standard definitions and applications of the word "astroturfing" ("that reliable source is redefining astroturf!")
The edit I put in came directly from the Tea Party movement article on the Contract from America section. I've mentioned that already. You ask, why is this being raised "at this juncture?" Because Xenophrenic put it in his version, he'd like people to vote on his version, and I've made suggested changes to his version. My understanding is that this is what Silk Tork wants us to do. Armey was involved in the end as RS shows. Heckler working for FreedomWorks now doesn't change what he did back then. Not mentioning him when he did all the work, but mentioning Armey who did very little comes across as ] and ]. ] (]) 16:40, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
:— try to misapply WP:WEIGHT and WP:V ("you are only citing 3 reliable sources that say astroturf is part of the movement!")
:The edit you put in where? When? In the version that omits the crucial fist three paragraphs of 12d?
:I agree with you that it's a time sink, but I think that's because circular argumentation is being used to try to convey something other than what reliable sources convey. ] (]) 17:04, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
:It probably isn't that important, because I've made the point several times now that the Contract for America material on Misplaced Pages is in poor shape--this draft is now more comprehensive in some respects. At any rate, I added Heckler's name in version 15 per your concerns.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 17:10, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


::I guess the only reason for coupling the two terms in discussions is that they are sort of opposites of each other. One additional note: Between the two terms, we must recognize that astroturf is a more extreme one (being an outright direct pejorative) than "grass roots" and inherently an argument for an extreme term is much more likely to fall short than an argument for a more moderate term. My main point is that I consider both words to be vague and a waste of time, but ('''''regarding overall characterization''''') the case for "grass roots" is about 30 times stronger than "astroturf" and the grass roots aspects are immensely more prevalent the astroturf aspects. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 17:24, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
==Let's gel something out of this==


:::Technically, they aren't really opposites; in the most common usage, they are quite similar with the defining difference being that one is inauthentic (fake, manufactured, not genuine, contrived, bogus, etc.). The words can be used as both nouns and adjectives, which adds to the confusion. As for being pejorative, even that is changing, as the lines between astroturfing and legitimate advocacy mobilization are being blurred. If you can get a copy of ''New Technology, Organizational Change and Governance'' by Emmanuelle Avril & Christine Zumello, you can find an excellent explanation of astroturf organizations which <blockquote>turn upside down the definition and spontaneity of grassroots mobilization since they help materialize an inverted movement. They, in essence, groom the potential roots of a movement; they try to locate the potential defenders of a cause in order to aggregate them through a digital network and mobilization that appears to be spontaneous, but is not.</blockquote> Sound familiar? The "case for" grassroots and astroturf are identical (as in, both factual ... there is no such thing as a "stronger" fact, something either is or isn't factual). The fact that you see "grassroots" more often in news reports about TP activists or TP protest groups are because that's what those news reporters are focusing on in their report: the activists, the protesters and their message ... not the movement or the astroturfed part of it. You keep tossing around the number "30" as if you think WP:WEIGHT refers to prominence/prevalence '''OF''' sources, rather than '''IN''' sources. In every reliable source that looks at the grassroots and astroturf aspects of the movement, you'll find both aspects to be equally prominent. ] (]) 20:02, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
There have been many good but imperfect versions. How 'bout this. Let's list all of the last 10 version numbers, (I'd be happy to do that) and everybody put "support" by ''every'' one (to avoid otherwise-inevitable math problems) that you think is good enough to be the starting point for further development/work. The one with the most "supports" goes in (while parking the 2 sub-secitons for later) as a starting point, with a prior understanding that we will need to modify it. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 12:51, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
::::We're talking about two different things here. I've have been talking about characterizations of the (overall) movement, and, with respect to astroturfing (which would certainly leave out astroturfed, and almost certainly include grassroots) and you are basically talking about existence (to some extent) of elements of each. The former is more appropriate to a lead sentence, the latter is more appropriate for elements (major or minor) in the body of the article. And I consider both terms to be vague = uninformative = a waste of time. Sincerely, <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 20:31, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::We are all talking about the characterizations of the movement as a whole, as are the reliable sources I've cited. (Those sources include Skocpol, Formisano, Zellner and the two NPR and a NYT source from P&W's list.) ] (]) 09:20, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::Well,at least we have that clarity going forward. But that somewhat refutes some of your previous points, which essentially implied that the mere existence of a astroturf component (however small) is relevant to the conversation. Second, by "reliable" to you mean actually reliable or meeting the "floor" of wp:rs? Highly biased unreliable writers often meet the meet the "floor" of wp:rs and should be used in that context (attributed etc.) Finally there is the question of which used which words as an '''''overall characterization''''' of the movement. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 12:40, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::::That wasn't my point at all. My point, explicitly stated, is that reliable sources very clearly convey that the "movement" consists of both grassroots components and astroturf components. It is not wholly one or the other, but a combination of both. By "reliable sources", I mean ] as defined by Misplaced Pages policy, nothing more, nothing less. If you feel a cited reliable source is not suitable for supporting the assertion of fact (that means stated in Misplaced Pages's voice without the need for attribution), then let's bring that source and the relevant supported text to WP:RSN for a thorough airing. To your final point, what does Skocpol's "<u>Considered in its entirety</u>, the Tea Party is neither a top-down creation, nor a bottom-up explosion", mean to you? That's "overall". ] (]) 17:48, 17 July 2013 (UTC)


=== Proposal ===
:There is a processes in place here to facilitate collaborative editing, but it is running into a lot of roadblocks. The latest of those lies in the attempt to exclude the new material introduced by Xenophrenic in the first two paragraphs of version 12d, which I have made into three paragraphs above in version 15. That material elucidates aspects of the agenda with respect to the decentralized organization of the TPm, etc.
:Note that I don't see where any policy-based objections have been raised with that material.
:Accordingly, I don't see how the additional exercise proposed above would be capable of producing any results.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 13:21, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


Ok. In the last week or so, I went through this enormous discussion. I reread some sections at times to get a better idea of this discussion. Forgive me if I missed anything as I am working through a lot of comments in my head as I write this. It would seem that editors in this discussion page are divided about how to describe this movement. I have a proposed statement, that may be reworded accordingly to fit the article structure, that may appease both sides of the discussion without misleading or POVing the article.
http://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Talk:Tea_Party_movement/Moderated_discussion&action=edit&section=20
;The Tea Party movement is generally viewed as a grass-roots movement, with occasional views of it being astroturfed.
or
;The Tea Party movement is mostly viewed as a grass-roots movement with some viewing it as an astroturf.
Something along those lines. Any thoughts?—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 17:40, 18 July 2013 (UTC)


::Thank you for taking a look at the discussion(s). It is indeed rather lengthy, and has been a point of contention since the Tea Party first appeared. Since you asked, here are my initial thoughts on the wording you have proposed:
::Take a look at <s>V12d</s> V12f, Ubikwit. Very clearly, in the first sentence of the third paragraph, it says:
::1) The division between editors falls into two sides: those who want to mention "grassroots" in the lead without mentioning "astroturf", and those who want to mention both grassroots and astroturf in the lead.
::2) I don't think I've seen ''any'' reliable sources that declare the "movement" (the subject of our article) is wholly astroturfed, so both of the above proposed sentences might be hard to support with reliable sources. Reliable sources are always careful to note that the movement is only partially astroturfed while also having a large grassroots component.
::3) Wording such as "some viewing it as" or "occassional views of it being" give the impression to the reader that the "astroturf" aspect of the movement is just an opinion. Just to clarify, is that what you were intending to convey to the reader?
::4) It would probably be beneficial if we noted which sources we are to cite for this (or any other) proposed wording, as there also seems to be some disagreement among editors as to which sources are suitable.
::] (]) 18:13, 18 July 2013 (UTC)


Try:
:::<font color=green>While the movement lacks the central leaders enjoyed by political parties ...</font>
:'''The Tea Party movement is generally viewed as a grass-roots movement, with some pointing out partial funding from corporations and wealthy donors'''
Avoiding the quite problematic neologism "astroturf". And quite neutral in tone, as well as being easily sourced. ] (]) 18:42, 18 July 2013 (UTC)


::This is a compromise version I've previously mentioned, slightly modified below, easily sourced in the works of Skocpol et al.:
::This is all the reference to the decentralized, chaotic disorganization of TPm that is necessary at this juncture because it is covered very thoroughly elsewhere in the article. There is an entire section devoted to "Organization," right after the "Agenda" section. Any insistence on covering it once again in the "Agenda" section, in greater detail than this, would seem very ] and ]. This is the "Agenda" section, not a second "Organization" section. ] (]) 13:52, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


::{{ex|The Tea Party movement is generally viewed as a grass-roots movement, with some noting that conservative news media amplify the movement's message, and corporations and wealthy donors provide some of its funding.}}
This isn't about agreeing on everything. It's about picking a version to go in as the starting point for such debates. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 14:11, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


::The word "amplified" is used by Theda Skocpol, a political science professor at Harvard, and the most reliable source provided by the tiny "partially Astroturfed" crowd, so this may work. But Misplaced Pages articles do not elevate small minority viewpoints to appear in the lede like that, as I've repeatedly demonstrated with reference to the lede of the ] article. There are many, many other Misplaced Pages articles I could link that discuss small minority viewpoints down in the body of the article but do not mention them in the lede. The lede is for unchallenged facts and, where viewpoints on the evidence differ, the lede is also for majority viewpoints. Not minority viewpoints. So this is a dead end, and has always been a dead end. An overwhelming majority of reliable sources — including peer-reviewed academics, fact-checked news organizations, and the Tea Party groups themselves, whose self-published websites we're required to treat as reliable sources, see ] — describe the TPm unequivocally, without reservation, as a "grass-roots movement" or its members as "grass-roots activists." Period. Full stop.


::Essentially, you are asking us to concede and let Xenophrenic have his way, when the overwhelming majority of sources, comparable Misplaced Pages articles, and Misplaced Pages policy say that it is Xenophrenic who should be conceding. ] (]) 19:03, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
:::*''It was all Ryan Heckler.'' --Malke
:::It's Hecker, and he explicitly denies that. Hecker, Armey and "a few" TP leaders (Martin & Meckler of TP Patriots had some input) vetted the ~1000 ideas gathered over several months, and they alone selected the "viable ones", rather than the "most popular ones" from all the suggestions. That is why there is a distinct lack of "social issues" among the final 21 and final 10 items. If they went with what was actually most popular, they would end up with things like "A Federal law requiring all presidential candidates to post their birth certificate in public" (yes, that would have been in the top 10). Here is an informative video where Hecker explains the process in a bit more detail: (). ] (]) 16:24, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


:::"with some pointing out" is problematic in that it still insinuates opinion as a vague attribution, and begs the question: who says so? (And that would result in the citing of a great many sources, not just the three mentioned above.) Neutral in tone would be to use "some view" to go with "some point out", but I prefer to leave the word "some" out completely. I think the most straight-forward way to convey what reliable sources say is "The movement comprises both this and that" or "consists of" or "is made up of". Working with your (Collect's) wording as a base, how would you feel about:
::98% Agree. Except I don't think that Arbcom can help us. The current case was initially sent so far off target from the challenges at the article, plus so much has changed since then that resumption would lead nowhere or worse. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 15:36, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
:'''The Tea Party movement is generally viewed as partially grassroots and partially funded and directed by corporations and wealthy individuals ...'''
:::Today is the day. It's July 1. The 30 days are over. North, I'm nominating you. Open a new ArbCom, call it a continuation of the old one, but steer it in the right direction by naming the right people as parties this time. That's enough about that from me because on this page we have to work on the article. Please both of you consider stating your support for V12f above. Since Ubikwit posted an "Oppose vote" the only way to make any progress is to show that we have consensus despite his objection.
::: (I should note that the last part, if we really follow reliable sources, should also say advocacy groups and political elites, but in the interest of brevity and compromise that can be relegated to the body of the article.) ] (]) 19:34, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
:::@P&W: The fact that the movement has an astroturfed component, along with the more visible (and therefore more mentioned) grassroots component, is not a "small minority viewpoint". I would discuss further your misunderstanding of that applicable policy, but I am pressed for time at the moment, so I'll settle for saying ]. ] (]) 19:43, 18 July 2013 (UTC)


::::I proposed a compromise - I suggest your ultimata are not going to get ''others'' to move past my suggestion by even a millimeter -- in fact I think I am pushing as far towards your POV as is possible with ''any'' prospect of reaching consensus. Cheers - but trying to get me to move further towards your wording is not gonna happen. ] (]) 21:05, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
:::Just a friendly reminder — we want the first number low and the second number high.


:::::Your attempt to push toward the POV of the reliable sources is noted, but I contend that merely moving closer to what sources say is insufficient; we should be saying what the reliable sources say. But this appears moot, as suggestions from both you and me have been shot down by others. ] (]) 21:35, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
:::<big>'''14/37'''
*Then here is what I suggest. Everyone here will propose what to add to the article. "Nothing" is an acceptable option. If it's already proposed, then don't propose it again. Then we will remove the least favored ones until we have a result. I think this might be the only way to get this to have a fixed outcome.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 13:02, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
*:Is there a list of proposed additions, already, or should we start over? — ] ] 15:27, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
*::We should start over.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 19:22, 21 July 2013 (UTC)


=== New Start ===
:::12f.</big> <font color=green>The Tea Party movement has a reform agenda to limit the size of the government and reduce spending. The Constitution is at the center of the Tea Party platform. Some Tea Party members are seeking to repeal or modify the 14th, 16th and 17th Amendments, and have supported the proposed Repeal Amendment and the Balanced Budget Amendment, which would limit deficit spending. Most Tea Party groups do not define their foreign policy goals, but many have opposed the United Nations Agenda 21.


====Proposal 1====
:::Tea Party members have protested TARP, the 2009 stimulus bill, "cap and trade," the 2010 health care law, and what they see as government efforts to limit gun owners' rights, free speech rights, and privacy rights. Tea Party groups support right to work laws, and immigration reform that improves border security. They have formed SuperPacs to support candidates who share their goals, and have opposed many mainstream Republican candidates. They protested the IRS for delaying applications for tax-exempt status by many Tea Party groups.
Then let's start over. My proposal is to simply add the word "grass-roots" to the lede sentence as follows: "The Tea Party movement is an American grass-roots political movement that advocates ..." The policy-based arguments supporting this have already been posted at length. To make a long story short, there are 20+ reliable sources stating that it's a "grass-roots movement," period, full stop. And there are three sources that say something else: one of which is most likely biased, one of which was written by a law student rather than a professor (and relies on sources Misplaced Pages doesn't consider reliable), and no two of which say the same thing on this subject. ] is clear about this. ] (]) 14:11, 22 July 2013 (UTC)
*This is one proposal. Others may now support or oppose this proposal and throw in their own proposal to be handled the same way.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 15:30, 22 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' for the reasons already exhaustively discussed. Inserting just "grassroots", when countless reliable sources indicate that the movement is not completely grassroots, would be a gross violation of Misplaced Pages policy -- ] in particular. The false argument that there are only 3 reliable sources refuting your personal opinion has been disproven; there are many, not just 3. The false argument that those sources are unsuitable due to bias or sourcing issues has been disproven; they are ]. The false argument that those particular 3 sources don't all, in unison, say that the TP movement is ''not'' 100% grassroots has been disproven; they all state that. ] (]) 16:47, 22 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' as going in the right direction. It's a grass-roots political movement. Period. That some corporate or "right-wing news media" support the movement does not make it other than grass-roots. I would not object to a neutral expression of that fact in the lead, but using the term "astroturf" is ] or, to be more precise, an original definition of "astroturf". — ] ] 20:20, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
::'''It's a grass-roots political movement. Period.'''
::Really? So when Zeitlow, whom we have no problem quoting elsewhere, says, ''"The degree to which the Tea Party movement is a grassroots movement is debatable. Tea Party organizers have received extensive financial support from prominent conservative think-tanks and financiers",'' we can simply cite you to end that debate? Or do you have a source that Misplaced Pages would actually consider reliable instead? When several professors are published by Oxford University Press and say, ''"The defining feature of astroturf groups is that they are generated by an industry, think tank, or front group, but designed to appear as a spontaneous, popular 'grassroots' effort. Especially important are the roles played by the Koch-funded Americans for Prosperity and FreedomWorks front groups in generating a significant portion of the 'Tea Party'..."'', should I inform them that they are conducting original research? ] (]) 21:21, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
:::''The defining feature of astroturf groups is that they are generated by an industry, think tank, or front group, but designed to appear as a spontaneous, popular 'grassroots' effort''. OK, but ''Especially important are the roles played by the Koch-funded Americans for Prosperity and FreedomWorks front groups in generating a significant portion of the 'Tea Party' '' is the only mention of Tea Party in that book, and seems to be a fringe position, even among the sources that <s>you</s> <ins>have been</ins> claim<ins>ed</ins> to support the "astroturf" position; not even their sources agree. — ] ] 00:26, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
::::Incorrect; there are at least a few mentions of the Tea Party, FreedomWorks and Americans for Prosperity. And the cited sources agree, and I think you know that, because you would have quickly cited the actual discrepency if there really was one. If I understand you correctly, you are saying that all of the highly reliable sources that say the movement is <u>not</u> 100% grassroots are espousing a "fringe theory", correct? If so, I plan to raise your concern and your specific argument at ] (and I'll be sure to credit you). ] (]) 06:58, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
::::Okay, since you haven't objected, I'll raise your "fringe position" concern at WP:FTN this evening. Hopefully, we can get it resolved. ] (]) 21:12, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' per ]'s reasons. —<span style="white-space: nowrap;font-family: Georgia, sans-serif;">] ]</span> 21:34, 7 August 2013 (UTC)


====Proposal 2====
:::While the movement lacks the central leaders enjoyed by political parties, the "Contract from America" was created with the help of "hundreds of thousand of people" voting online to create a Tea Party platform. Its name was a play on the Republican leaders' 1994 "Contract with America". The Contract from America was met with some support within the Republican Party, but not broadly embraced by GOP leaders, who later wrote their own "Pledge to America."</font>
Add to the ]: "The movement comprises both grassroots and astroturf components, including concerned citizen activists, wealthy political action committees and national advocacy groups, establishment elites and conservative media outlets.<ref>''Steep: The Precipitous Rise of the Tea Party''; Lawrence Rosenthal, Christine Trost; University of California Press; May 2012; "Debate still rages in the blogs. Some condemn the Tea Party as Astroturf, a movement directly funded and organized from its very beginning by conservative leaders. Others argue that the Tea Party epitomizes grassroots politics, an outpouring of aggreived citizens who spontaneously protested against big government. Both arguments contain at least a grain of truth." Page 98-99; "Local Tea Parties and national Tea Party unbrella groups are entangled with and significantly funded by the United States' conservative establishment and by parts of the Republican Party." Page 134-135</ref><ref>''Keeping the Republic: Power and Citizenship in American Politics''; Christine Barbour, Gerald C Wright; CQ Press; January 2013; "The indirect lobbying we have discussed is often called grassroots lobbying, meaning that it addresses people in their roles as ordinary citizens. It is the weilding of power from the bottom (roots) up, rather than from the top down. Most of what we refer to as grassroots lobbying, however, does not spring spontaneously from the people but is orchestrated by elites, leading some people to call it astroturf lobbying—indicating that it is not really genuine. Often the line between real grassroots and astroturf lobbying is blurred, however. A movement may be partly spontaneous but partly orchestrated. the Tea Party movement has been, in part, the project of Dick Armey, a former Republican House majority leader whose organization, FreedomWorks, promotes low taxes and small government. FreedomWorks and several other conservative groups, as well as prominent individuals including some commentators at Fox News, have lent their organizational expertise to the Tea Partiers but deny that they are orchestrating an astroturf movement." Page 497-498</ref><ref> ''Blessed Are the Organized: Grassroots Democracy in America''; Jeffrey Stout; Princeton University Press; 2010; "Some of the issues that have been of central concern to the religious right over the last three decades have more recently been taken over by the considerably more volatile Tea Party movement. Insofar as the latter movement is a creation of media elites, it too qualifies as an example of top-down politics. The volatility of the movement derives, however, from the sponteneity of its populist spirit. The movement's distrust of elites, and "socialists" could rapidly morph into outright fascism if there were a further deepening of the economic crisis or a series of additional terrorist attacks on the scale of 9/11. In any event, it is easy to imagine the movement's bottom-up populism becoming a more prominent force in American politics in the coming years." Page 230-231</ref>
The policy-based arguments supporting this have already been exhaustively discussed. There are 20+ reliable sources stating that the TPm is <u>not</u> completely grassroots. There are zero reliable sources that refute the astroturfed components of the movement. Some editors are promoting their personal opinion that the "", in violation of ]. ] (]) 16:47, 22 July 2013 (UTC)


*'''Oppose''' as not even going the right direction. There is one reliable source which uses the term "astroturf" to apply to the TPm, and he redefines it. The list of supporting organization types ''might'' belong in the lead. I ''might'' support the edit if it were rewritten as "the movement as a grass-roots movement, supported by . — ] ] 20:17, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
:::This currently has a 3-1 "vote." If both of you state your support, that would be 5-1 and we would have consensus. '''Please.''' Do it now. regards ... ] (]) 15:58, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
::Please cite this "one reliable source" that redefines "astroturf", and cite that redefinition, please, so we can all review it. Is this the redefinition of which you speak? ''"The Astroturf Metaphor asserts that conservative leadership organizations provided resources, direction, and standardized messages that were crucial in instigating Tea Party protests."'' Please direct me to the source you are using that says that is a "redfinition", please. Just so we're all on the same page. ] (]) 21:21, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
:::"Component" is a very low bar and certainly is not enough to qualify for being a characterization. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 23:59, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
::::"Component" is my word. What word do you think would more accurately convey what the reliable sources convey? Actually, we can remove that word completely without disrupting the meaning. Would that suffice? ] (]) 06:58, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
:::(Actually, that's not the source I had in mind which redefined "astroturf". It's still a different definition, though.) Well, I can't prove it's a redefinition, only that it's different than any other definition proposed, including the one in our article ]. If it weren't a redefinition, it could appear in this article, but with "grass-roots" linked (because it does match our definition) and astroturfing '''not''' linked. — ] ] 00:14, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
::::It's not a different definition. And linking to "grassroots" means it would have to comply with ''"the creation of the movement and the group supporting it are natural and spontaneous, highlighting the differences between this and a movement that is orchestrated by traditional power structures"'', which isn't wholly true. ] (]) 07:01, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' for the reasons I've already stated. The majority viewpoint per ], supported by at least one peer-reviewed academic source, 18 fact-checked news organization sources, and five ] sources, is "The Tea Party movement is a ]," period, full stop. ] will not allow us to elevate a minority viewpoint to be stated as a fact in the lede.
:* ''Inserting just "grassroots", when countless reliable sources indicate that the movement is not completely grassroots ...'' "Countless"? Try "three," and no two of them say the same thing.
:* ''The false argument that there are only 3 reliable sources refuting your personal opinion has been disproven; there are many, not just 3.'' This is a false statement. There are three, and no two of them say the same thing.
:* ''The false argument that those sources are unsuitable due to bias or sourcing issues has been disproven; they are highly reliable.'' This is also a false statement. It has not been disproven. You suggested taking this to ] but you didn't do it. ] allows us, as editors, to consider both context and potential bias in determining how much weight should be given to a particular source. Clearly, the consensus of editors here is that these sources don't merit enough weight to outweigh 24+ reliable sources that say, "The Tea Party is a grass-roots movement," period, full stop.
:* ''The false argument that those particular 3 sources don't all, in unison, say that the TP movement is not 100% grassroots has been disproven; they all state that.'' This is a statement based on a false premise. The false premise is that they represent one unified viewpoint. They don't. While all three say that the Tea Party movement is not 100% grassroots, there the resemblance ends. Two of them are in very, very roughly the same "part grassroots, part astroturf" time zone (not the same ballpark, not even the same zip code, but the same time zone). The third says that the Tea Party is neither grassroots nor astroturf, but something else that's in between.
:* ''So when Zeitlow, whom we have no problem quoting elsewhere, says, "The degree to which the Tea Party movement is a grassroots movement is debatable. Tea Party organizers have received extensive financial support from prominent conservative think-tanks and financiers" ...'' Nowhere in that quotation, or even in the entire article, can I find the word "astroturf." Zietlow supports neither your proposal nor mine. She says it's "debatable." ] (]) 03:06, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
::*''The majority viewpoint per WP:WEIGHT...'' --P&W
:::...doesn't say anything like that. Please quit misquoting and misapplying the policy.
::*''Try "three," and no two of them say the same thing.'' --P&W
:::Please learn to count. Which "three" are you speaking of this time? And so far, at least 7 of them say the very same thing. Have you even read them?
::*''You suggested taking this to WP:RSN but you didn't do it.''
:::Correct. I suggested that you should take your challenge to RSN, and you haven't done it. If you'd like me to take your challenge there for you, I will. Which specific reliable source shall we start with, and what is your specific challenge to its suitability as a reliable source? We can work our way through each of them in turn.
::*''WP:RS allows us, as editors, to consider both context and potential bias in determining how much weight should be given to a particular source.''
:::You are making stuff up about policy again; please stop. "how much weight should be given to a particular source", thanks for the levity.
::*''the consensus of editors here is that these sources don't merit enough weight to outweigh 24+ reliable sources''
:::Please don't libel the other editors here. I'm fairly certain that most of them have been around long enough to know that number of sources saying something has nothing to do with WP:WEIGHT. I note that your proposal has zero reference citations; would you mind choosing 2 or 3 from your ever-changing number of sources and append them to your proposed text?
::*''While all three say that the Tea Party movement is not 100% grassroots, there the resemblance ends.''
:::Again, which three sources, exactly, are you speaking of? And you are correct that reliable sources agree that the Tea Party movement is not 100% grassroots, so why should we mislead our readers to believe otherwise?
::*''The degree to which the Tea Party movement is a grassroots movement is debatable ... She says it's "debatable."''
:::Yet you say there is no debate, according to what you have written above. Why should we mislead readers to believe that? ] (]) 06:58, 24 July 2013 (UTC)


====Proposal 3====
::Is this the to which you refer? It certainly contains the above-quoted passage posted by Xenophrenic. WP:RS is that on the basis of which we compose articles here, and WP:DUE would seem to give further impetus to including a description of Armey's role in producing the Contract from America, particularly in light of the fact that Misplaced Pages article ] describes him as "one of the chief authors of the Contract with America".--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 16:01, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
Do nothing and leave it alone for 6 months. (This is not what I think should be a course of action. I'm just throwing this out there for consideration.)—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:red;font-family:arnprior">Offline</sub> 05:47, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
:We've already done nothing for three years. Count the number of reliable sources supporting one proposal. Count the number of reliable sources supporting the other proposal. And then please make a decision per ]. ] (]) 12:15, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
::Yes, please count the number of reliable sources (many) refuting the "100% grassroots" proposal. Now count the number of reliable sources (zero) refuting the "grassroots+astroturf" proposal. Then make a decision based on actual applicable Misplaced Pages policy, not a misunderstanding of one. ] (]) 21:08, 25 July 2013 (UTC)


===Arbitrary page break=== ====Proposal 4====
Take the existing reliable sources and develop encyclopedic content about the matter in the body of the article first. Then summarize that content in the ], which is how most content in the lede is created. ] (]) 21:08, 25 July 2013 (UTC)


== End of the process — or a fresh start ==
:::P&W, it needs copyediting. I would support the version of yours that I tweaked above. If you make those changes, I would support it. ] (]) 16:11, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


We can not, as I see it, continue when any editor decides that the posited rules that six editors accepted should now be discussed at length - the idea that such a devotion to process, which would surely take weeks at the least, needs to be done when a single editor dislikes the ground rules is clearly going to make any solutions here totally impossible. My goal in proposing such rules was to prevent the absurd wikilawyering found in all too many discussions, and that ''any'' editor would desire to promote such behavior I find distressing. My hands are in the bowl of water, and unless everyone actually decides to work on the article instead of on arguing about process, there is no way in (insert expletive) that this can ever be resolved. Will some admin please lock this puppy down? Cheers. ] (]) 22:54, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
::::Ubikwit, please withdraw and strike through your objection to V12f. You have admitted, in two separate steps, that there have been two different sets of improvements to the first version of V12d that you saw (due to the glitch with the <nowiki>"{{ex|"</nowiki> notation). First, the paragraph about the 14th, 16th and 17th Amdts and the Repeal Amendment magically returned from limbo. Second, no less than five blockquotes from academics will be included in the footnotes. This is the only version that has any chance of making it into mainspace before the deadline. The clock is tciking. regards ... ] (]) 16:12, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
:Your extensive concern about process is noted, but most of us here would just like to be productive with regard to the ] and related articles. P&W has reiterated a few content concerns he'd like to see addressed, and I have some as well. By "please lock this puppy down", are you suggesting that we no longer try to improve the article, or is this just a "venue" concern? ] (]) 23:41, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::Version 15 is far superior, IMO. Cheers.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 16:59, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
*As some of you are aware, I have volunteered to be the moderator of this page per a request at AN. No one has yet opposed me being moderator so I have accepted the offer. As I settle in as moderator, and getting to know my role, a helping hand at knowing my limits as moderator is appreciated. If anybody objects to me being a moderator, please speak, or write that is, now.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 02:06, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
:: ;-)
::But on a serious note, we do appreciate anyone who's willing to help. Hopefully this proves to be a fruitful endeavor for you. ]<u>]</u> 02:16, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
:::Thank you for joining us, Cyberpower. Would you please review the discussion above, and tell us whether we have consensus for the three proposed edits? ] (]) 04:04, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
::::Sure. If it's the multisection thread "Getting back to work" give me a few hours to read it through. :-)—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:red;font-family:arnprior">Offline</sub> 11:37, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
*Just to let everyone know that I'm still here and that I am sifting through the above discussions and links. It might take me another day or two to reach the end and form a close statement.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 00:01, 15 July 2013 (UTC)


=== Withdrawing my participation @moderated discussion ===
:::::Malke, the tweaked version would send the readability level below 30. The original V12f has a readability of 37 which gets Collect on board. That is the only way we will have consensus before the deadline. regards ... ] (]) 16:15, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::Wording tweaks can occur at anytime. This is more about content. ]<u>]</u> 16:34, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


Falling by the wayside. No parting shots, just regrets. Perhaps the future will bring about an environment more conducive to progress. Godspeed. ]<u>]</u> 13:50, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::Why is "foreign policy goals" mentioned in the same sentence with Agenda 21? They are unrelated (Agenda 21 has nothing to do with foreign policy.
::::::Why does it say the TP supports "immigration reform that improves border security"? Not exactly true as stated. The movement supports improved border security. That much is a fact. TP generally rejects reform efforts for many other reasons, however, like "unfair amnesty", and for frivolous reasons like "the reform measure is too long and complicated" and "it's being rushed through without proper deliberation", etc.
::::::Why is lack of "central leaders" in the same sentence as the Contract for America? There is no correlation or juxtaposition between the two.
::::::I oppose sacrificing either accuracy or neutral presentation for an arbitrary "readability" rating. ] (]) 16:40, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


== Amok ==
:::::::Get on board then -- I have things I would change, but consensus does not imply perfection - the aim is to get consensus behind one proposal here -- we can polish the language further (and ditch the Agenda 21 stuff, remove "agenda" as being a "d'oh" word considering the section title - and use "seeks" as being pretty clear (and improve readability to a 39 score) , and remove the CwA "wordplay" trivia) then. ] (]) 16:46, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


:::::::::This "readability" factor is getting too much play here. Let's go by content and tweak everything else later.<font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 16:47, 1 July 2013 (UTC) The recent sequence of edits on the TPm appear to be essentially ignoring the concept of ] here, and verge on disruption at that article. ] (]) 11:10, 16 July 2013 (UTC)


== Reminder ==
*'''PLEASE STOP DISRUPTING THE EDITS BY DISPLACING EDITOR'S COMMENTS; DO NOT USE AGGRESSIVE TONES AND LANGUAGE AND PLEASE USE ]'''


It has been brought to my attention that major anti-consensus were being made and reverted, twice. The page has now been fully protected by SilkTork, the previous moderator. As I don't have any admin powers to reverse this, nor do I now see a reason for it to be reversed right now, I am respectfully asking Xenophrenic to be careful in the future, and restrain from editing that article, unless there's a clear consensus claimed for such edits.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:red;font-family:arnprior">Offline</sub> 11:33, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
Thank you. ] (]) 16:53, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


:I've made no anti-consensus edits. The recent good faith edits by me, ThinkEnemies, Collect and others, were not first subjected to consensus discussion. I've no problem refraining from editing the main article unless concensus is achieved first. That should apply to all involved editors, of course. The last consensus version is , implemented by our former Moderator, SilkTork. ] (]) 21:35, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
:Get on board? Er, was that supposed to read "abandon ship!"?
::<redacted> As we're not allowed to comment on editors here. All I can say is that comment should not be part of any reasoned discussion, because it has little to do with reality. — ] ] 23:27, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
:Xenophrenic submitted a far more informative version, which I have honed into an agile and readable text, and accommodated change where feasible.
:::Still at it? ] (]) 05:44, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
:Clearly version 15 is the way of the future.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 16:59, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


The page has been fully protected and there will evidently be no block for starting an editwar. I propose that we immediately revert the page back to the version that existed before the editwar began. That version may be found .
::The readability factor is getting too much attention, but copyediting should be done. P&W's version needs copyediting. ] (]) 17:03, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
:::I've checked, and every word is spelled correctly in V12f. The punctuation is also perfect. Let's go with what we've got, people. Minor tweaks are the sort of thing that SilkTork would allow under ] without a prior "vote" on this page. I will repeat every salient thing I've said in the past 24 hours, just as a friendly reminder.
:::* We have bickered far too long over minor details and now time is measured in hours, not days. We have literally run out of time. The train is about to leave the station.
:::* If we back off on readability, we lose Collect. He's the swing vote. He has made himself indispensible for consensus. We have to keep him on board, regardless of what you think we are giving up for the sake of readability.
:::* The only other route is for all of us to cave in, and "vote" as a bloc in favor of one of Xenophrenic's or Ubikwit's proposals packed chock full of negative blockquotes. This would focus the first section of the top-level article on the TPm's chaos and disorganization, followed by the most unpopular political agenda positions the TPm has ever espoused.
:::* ... or may I again respectfully suggest that Ubikwit withdraw and strike through his objection to V12f, or Malk and North state their support for V12f, so that we can action the edit.
:::Those are our only three choices. You may find them unpleasant ... but I don't see any other choices besides letting every grain of sand run through the hourglass while the bickering goes on unabated. Decide what you want to do even if it's the least objectionable of three bad options in your opinion, and do it, or do nothing. Let me remind you that ArbCom could convene at any minute, review the situation, and throw a dozen topic bans all around so that they can turn it over to a fresh batch of editors who may appear to be neutral. ] (]) 17:42, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
::::I'm not editing here until Silk Tork does something about the constant disruption to the comments. ] (]) 17:46, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
:::@P&W. Anything close to Version 12(f) and Malke's tweak thereof is fine by me. Xeno took issue with how illegal-immigration/border security was worded so that can be fixed for more accurate portrayal. Mentioned opposition to talking about Tea Party's lack of central leadership in relation to Contract from America. That can go. Said Agenda 21 has nothing to do with the foreign policy goals of TPM so that can also be removed. I see only minor issues which shouldn't make or break consensus. ]<u>]</u> 17:52, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


* '''Strongly support.''' As so often happens, the page protection took effect with the "wrong" version because people who aren't inclined to editwar didn't want to revert to the "right" version. ] (]) 16:54, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
===The final vote===
*'''Support''' Without commenting on the changes, the reversion is best way to go from a process standpoint. Contested edits require a group decision. I say "group decision" rather than "consensus" because IMHO the existing text should be just another option in the process. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 16:58, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' revert to status quo ante. — ] ] 17:25, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' an attempt to swap one "Wrong Version" with another "Wrong Version" via !voting. ] (]) 21:35, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''""''' version. Or alternatively, rather than swap one "Wrong Version" for another "Wrong Version", why not resolve the last remaining concerns about what that content should convey, then implement an actual consensus version? ] (]) 21:35, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' - With stipulation the ''immigration reform'' position is corrected. ]<u>]</u> 15:37, 21 July 2013 (UTC)


*Consensus is in favor of reverting to revision.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:red;font-family:arnprior">Offline</sub> 05:52, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
This process is being crushed under it's own weight. Just to get something going, can we agree soon to just put in Xenophrenic's version 12d ''as a starting point'' (leaving the 2 subsection parked for now) and then start working on it from there. Including taking up Malke's condensation of it. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 19:06, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


*'''Comment''' The consensus discussion notwithstanding, admin Arthur Rubin just ] as an involved ''editor'' in this dispute. Having the tools does not grant the right to do what other involved editors cannot do in a content context. ] <span style="color:black"><sup>]</sup></span> 09:45, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 19:06, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
:::I don't consider there to be a dispute. Just editors with differing opinions trying to work this out. And trying to make some rules/processes for ourselves so that this can move forward. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 10:08, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' ] (]) 20:02, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
::::You can call it a dispute or an orange if you feel so inclined but that focuses on a completely non relevant aspect of my sentence. The point is that administrators are not supposed to edit through full protection when they are involved. We have an edit request template for a reason. ] <span style="color:black"><sup>]</sup></span> 10:12, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' I believe that the objective at this stage was to arrive at a version suitable for content and then address objectionable wording with Silk Tork moderating. Clear 12d is the most informative version suggested to yet. --]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 00:23, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' ----] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 05:24, 2 July 2013 (UTC) :::::I asked him to do it as a moderator request.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 12:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::I realize that. I also realize you did so in good faith and that Arthur complied in good faith, which is why I mentioned it here and not at AN. Nevertheless it should not have been done and for the sake of avoiding even the appearance of impropriety I implore you to make liberal (no pun intended) use of the edit request template. ] <span style="color:black"><sup>]</sup></span> 00:17, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' -- but proposal 15 is a significantly improved version of my 12d proposal. ] (]) 11:02, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::::IMHO the moderator is the best one to assess/read the situation. The mop does not make a drop-in person a better one to do so. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 00:20, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Strongly oppose.''' Let's be clear about this. Xenophrenic's V12d focuses the first two paragraphs, of the very first section, of the top-level article in a series of articles about a very complex subject, on the chaotic disorganization of the TPm and the reasons why it hasn't focused on unpopular social issues like so many other conservative groups. '''The very next section''' is titled "Organization," for crying out loud, and any material about the chaotic disorganization of the TPM belongs in that section. Not this one. See relevant policy on sections and topical scope; see also ] and ]. Malke's condensed version has wisely focused on the '''results''' of that chaotic disorganization as they pertain to the TPm's '''AGENDA.''' This is, after all, the "Agenda" section. And the agenda, not the chaotic disorganization, is what this section should be devoted to. For those editors who insist on focusing this article like a laser beam on the chaotic disorganization of the TPm, rather than their agenda and what they're trying to accomplish as a chaotic, disorganized, but highly effective mob, please just say so, and we can talk about moving the "Organization" section in front of the "Agenda" section. But for now the "Agenda" section is the face of the article. It's what people read first after the lede. It's gotta gotta gotta be very, very good and very focused on its own topical scope. Here at Misplaced Pages, the preceding is called a "policy based argument." If you oppose Malke's condensed version, please post a '''policy based argument''' in an appropriate location below, because I have yet to see one word of such an argument. ] (]) 11:46, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::::I am making a singular point: an involved admin should not edit through full protection. Nothing you're responding with actually addresses this point in the least. Is the moderator the best one to assess/read the situation? Maybe, maybe not. Does the mop make a drop-in-person a better one to do so? Maybe, maybe not. Whether either of those answers falls within the verge of yes/no/maybe/maybe not is ''completely'' irrelevant to the '''very specific''' point that I've made: an involved admin is not permitted to edit through full protection. ] <span style="color:black"><sup>]</sup></span> 09:11, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
::Yes, let's be clear about this. Xenophrenic focuses the first 2 paragraphs on 2 things. Paragraph 1 = "The '''agenda''' comes from the bottom up. The groups decide the '''agenda''' and priorities, not a central leadership." Paragraph 2 = "The '''agenda''' tries to avoid conservative social issues. Including them in the national '''agenda''' would be devisive to the movement, but many local groups make them part of their '''agenda''' anyway." Malke's version has omitted these very salient points about the '''agenda'''. The agenda is a very important part of the article; as such, it should seek to inform the reader, not misinform or propagandize the reader. As for what you "have yet to see" on the page above, I really can't help you further with that. ] (]) 12:19, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
Okay. Making liberal use of the edit request template.
::Yes, clarity is a valued commodity here. Policy-based arguments that material meeting WP:DUE would be excluded from the article, which would in turn violate WP:NPOV have been made, and one could add WP:YESPOV, and I would imagine there are other pertinent policies as well.
:::::::::Noformation is correct. It was wrong of me to ask Arthur to make the edit for me. He was clearly involved, and I have apologized to him for that.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 09:33, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
::Second, the assertion that because the context of the agenda and social issues material is related to the decentralized organization does not mean it is not first and foremost information about the agenda. Trying to exclude it on such grounds is a logical fallacy of false equivalence. The organization of the TPm is not a "chaotic disorganization", there is a rhyme and reason to it which scholars and reliably published journalist and the like have investigated and released their results in reliable publications, and which Misplaced Pages is committed to conveying to the reading public.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 13:09, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' contains misleading material, and in not readable by a huge proportion of Misplaced Pages users. ] (]) 12:59, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
::Could you be more specific? What ''"misleading material"''? Actually, these are the types questions that should be addressed after the version is selected as a starting point. It's better to start with a text that contains information that is questioned/supported rather than a text that excludes information that is supported/questioned.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 13:09, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' {{mdash}} ] (]) 15:28, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose.''' May be redundant to vote, as I've supported the condensed version of this proposal directly below. We mustn't lose sight of the fact we're talking about just one section of this BLP, ''Agenda''. We can save some content for placement elsewhere. It's actually preferable, if our goal is GA status. Also, should be mentioned to the new contributors that our proposals are intended to be the groundwork of this section, not some '''set in stone''' rewrite. ]<u>]</u> 15:40, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
'''OK then, make that Malke's condensed version of Xenophrenic's version 12d''' :-) ?
*'''Support''' <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 21:32, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' Now you're talking, dude. And since Malke wrote it, Malke supports it. That's 3-0 in the support "votes." regards .... ] (]) 21:57, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support'''. Ah yes, I believe you're referring to the ''Shorter Version of Xen.'' A semi-collaborative literary piece by the two most prolific editors of TPM. ]<u>]</u> 22:47, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' --]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 00:23, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' I'd also support the rewrite of P&W's version. ] (]) 00:27, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
::That's 4-1 which is sufficient for consensus, particularly since the "oppose voter" offered absolutely no policy-based rationale for his opposition. ] (]) 01:41, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
:::In respect to what is it that you are claiming to have consensus?--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 01:51, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
::::Malke's condensed version of Xenophrenic's V12d. You should know, you "voted" to oppose it. I've got it in a text file and I've been adding refcites, footnotes (with blockquotes) and Wikilinks. ] (]) 01:57, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::P&W, maybe you should add in Dick Armey to the last para. That will make Xen happier. Xen and I had something of a conversation about that earlier. And it's Ryan Hecker, not Heckler. Xen said so. Don't know where I got Heckler from. ] (]) 03:51, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
::::The submittal was to put this in as the new "starting point" with the understanding that it will need additional discussion and changes. It will replace (only) the main text in the agenda section, not the two subsections, will be dealt with separately. Sincerely, <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 02:02, 2 July 2013 (UTC)


{{edit protected|Tea Party movement|answered=yes}} SilkTork has reverted Arthur's reversion, indicating that even though the edit was requested by our moderator, it must be executed by an '''''uninvolved''''' admin. The "vote" is 4-1 (everyone except Xenophrenic) in favor of reverting to revision, with the lone opposing "vote" coming from Xenophrenic. The policy based argument is that Xenophrenic edited against consensus. Visiting admins, please make this edit. Thank you. regards .... ] (]) 03:05, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::I'm simply going to point out that Xenophrenic also voted in opposition to basically the same text (12f) that is being voted on here.
:::::Moreover, it seems that there is intent to post the section with the most votes into the article, which is clearly not what this stage is about per .--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 03:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::It isn't "basically the same text 12f." It's basically the same text as 12d. North made a proposal, it's got four "votes" in support and one in opposition, and that looks like consensus to me. ] (]) 03:48, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::::P&W, did you see my post above about Dick Armey? ] (]) 03:53, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::::::Yes, I did see it and like everything else, you will need to establish consensus for such a substantive edit. ] (]) 04:42, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' ----] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 05:24, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' The proposed text is little more than a list of talking points and sound bites. {{mdash}} ] (]) 08:55, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' I realize this is redundant; see objections to the problematic content above. ] (]) 11:02, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' Though the wordplay bit is still pretty much useless, we can work from there. ] (]) 12:59, 2 July 2013 (UTC)


I am making no comment on the content of the edit, nor on if appropriate consensus has been reached (I've simply glanced at the voting, not read any of the comments), but it is inappropriate for an admin to be making an edit to a fully protected article while they are involved. Arthur Rubin should not have made the edit, and cyberpower should not have asked him to make the edit. What P&W has just done, is the appropriate procedure: ask an independent admin to look into the matter and assess consensus. It's worth reminding everyone that consensus is not always a simple majority vote - especially if a legitimate objection has been raised, and/or if those in majority are in the same camp. The procedure I adopted when moderating is if there was a legitimate objection raised, that the objection would be discussed before taking any further action. Objections should be discussed not ignored. ''']''' ''']''' 08:11, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
==An edit for Agenda section has been actioned==
:Thanks SilkTork. I did mention that I would make a lot of mistakes in the beginning. But as I make a mistake, I learn from it and get better.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 08:34, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
::] '''Question:'''<!-- Template:EP --> Hi all. Could some kind soul link to any other discussions where this edit has come up? The voting above doesn't tell me anything about whether people have tried to find a consensus on this issue or how successful any attempts were. However, there is a lot of discussion on this page, and (lazy admin that I am) I don't really feel like reading through all of it to find the relevant bits. I'd appreciate help from those who have followed the proceedings here more closely than I. Best regards — ''''']''''' <sup>]</sup> 09:03, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
:::To my understanding, problematic editing was going which led to the article being protected a few days back. This above is the only thread to at least link back to the "correct" version of the article while it's protected.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 09:33, 25 July 2013 (UTC)


:::Hi, Strad. A half-dozen editors had worked to develop an acceptable 'Agenda' section for the ] article, with several competing versions being proposed. An editor prematurely claimed consensus for his preferred version and implemented after some editors expressed support. Other editors contacted the Moderator (SilkTork) and expressed objections to that content being implemented, prompting our Moderator to open ]; note where he reiterates that the Moderator was responsible for declaring consensus unless the edit action was "agreed by all". Unfortunately, SilkTork withdrew as moderator shortly thereafter, leaving the disputed non-consensus version changes in the article and the problem unresolved. Rather than revert or delete the problematic content from the article, I instead proposed a significant rewrite based on proposed content from several versions, and ]. After several days of discussion, editor ThinkEnemies moved some uncontested parts of my proposed text to the main article, and I moved the remainder of the uncontested parts to the main article. Any content to which objections were raised was either deleted (or commented out of view, if discussions were still ongoing). Two and a half days later, Phoenix and Winslow reverted most of the previous edits with this strange edit summary: . That was the beginning of an edit war that resulted in the article being ].
Malke's condensed version of Xenophrenic's V12d has been actioned, following a 4-1 consensus "vote." As a concession to Collect, who wasn't here for the final "vote," I've simplified some of the language for the sake of the readability index ("organizations" became "groups," for example). I did change the name "Heckler" to "Hecker," which is the correct spelling, and added a few Wikilinks. Thank God we're done with that. Thanks to North8000 for seeing an opening and making the right move. And thanks to TE and Malke for supporting the move.
:::The above Edit Request appears to me to be an attempt to impose a preferred non-consensus, problematic version on a fully protected article. The most recent "status quo" version would be the one imposed by our Moderator () before any contested edits were made. Since all of the recent versions appear to be the "wrong" version (a fact not disputed by most of the "voters" above), I don't understand this push to have a preferred wrong version implemented unless the intent is to try to keep it implemented. Why not direct this energy toward fixing the content instead? ] (]) 11:28, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
::::Because (A) consensus does not require unanimity, and (B) we will never have unanimity unless everybody else caves in and agrees to allow the "Agenda" section to become, in effect, a second "Organization" section. This version would focus much of the first two paragraphs on the chaotic disorganization of the Tea Party, under the rationale that this chaotic disorganization is the cause of certain agenda inconsistencies between Tea Party groups. The content that was agreed upon, and implemented by me, was supported by a 4-1 "vote" for several hours before I implemented it; and as I explained earlier, there was every reason to expect the final "vote" to to be 6-1. So I made the edit. We had been working on it for weeks non-stop, we'd been through at least 22 different versions of the section, and everybody (with the obvious exception of Xenophrenic, a tower of iron will) was completely exhausted and burned out.
::::As expected, Collect brought the total of "support votes" to five because we had effectively addressed his concerns about readability. But Xenophrenic inexplicably recorded an "oppose vote" even though he was that version's co-author. Snowded came back to the article after an absence of several weeks for an "oppose vote," and ArtifexMayhem appeared out of nowhere, never having edited the article before, for an "oppose vote."
::::However, the '''CURRENT''' consensus clearly recognizes that reverting that edit was out of line, and that it should be restored immediately despite Xenophrenic's objection. Our moderator has recognized this consensus and asked that the version Xenophrenic reverted be restored. Furthermore, in case it wasn't already clear, for those of us who "voted" weeks ago in favor of the version we are now seeking to restore, this is the "right" version. Mr. Stradivarius, please make the edit. ] (]) 12:05, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::Let me see if I correctly understand what you've just written. Between the two proposals, both with five ], you declared "consensus" for your preferred version because some editors voiced their opinions after your "several hour" window between calling for votes and implementing your edit? Well, at least we can agree that the version you tried to implement is not a consensus version, even if you didn't realize that at the time. (A good cautionary tale against rushing things after just a few hours.) My "!vote" in opposition to the problematic version wasn't inexplicable; as I noted in my comment: ''see objections to the problematic content above.'' Your interpretation of '''CURRENT''' consensus fails to recognize the input of the commenting editors. Every editor has a "right" version; what's your aversion to producing a version that is right for Misplaced Pages, instead? By the way, this is the first time you've raised a concern with the first 2 paragraphs of proposed text. Reliable sources make it a point to explain that the desparate TP groups are autonomous and set their own agendas, and reliable sources make it a point to explain the generally "economic" focus of many TP agendas -- therefore, our 'Agenda' section should do the same. Your concern about redundancy with the 'Organization' section is easily remedied by removal of a single sentence from the 'Organization' section. ] (]) 13:42, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
* ] '''Not done:'''<!-- Template:EP --> I'm marking this as not done, as from the above comments it doesn't look like there has been any attempt to address Xenophrenic's concerns. I think SilkTork put it very well when he said "objections should be discussed not ignored", and I don't think the required discussion has happened in this case. — ''''']''''' <sup>]</sup> 04:15, 26 July 2013 (UTC)


::There have been continual illicit edits (and reverts) made since the article was first unlocked, and the state of discussion on this page, particularly the dismissal of RS on dubious grounds, makes it a waste of time.
Now let's move on to those three minor improvements I was talking about a few weeks ago, and a couple of months ago, and three months ago .... ] (]) 04:42, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
::For the record, the version being pushed by P&W and the same block of editors never came close to achieving consensus even under the premises of the original guidelines (24 hours with at least two votes in support and ''NO'' objections).
::I don't blame Silk Tork for not being able to handle the tremendous burden of moderating this so-called discussion, but it is high time that the Arbcom case brought some resolution and relief to the deplorable state of affairs here.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 10:21, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
:::You are not supposed to be bashing other editors on this page. If you feel that it is important to do so, you should move your comments to where responses to such can occur. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 11:36, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
:::Some of us have gone out of our way to address all stated objections, but progress can't be continually held up due to minor concerns. Now if Ubikwit wants to talk about never coming close to ''"achieving consensus"'' -- Well, they should probably be referred to their own proposals. ]<u>]</u> 13:11, 26 July 2013 (UTC)


== Proposed addition of ] ==
:A bare majority vote after less than two days is not a consensus ----] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 05:26, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
:: It was 4-1 when I actioned the edit. That's not a "bare majority." That's an overwhelming majority, it's consensus by any reasonable definition, and I have yet to see a single word of a policy-based argument against it. ] (]) 05:32, 2 July 2013 (UTC)


I propose adding the following (slightly modified) paragraph from the Wikibio of Karl Denninger to the article mainspace, replacing the "Commentaries on origins" subsection in the History section, which should be moved to the "Perceptions" spin-off article:
::I've self-reverted and posted at Silk Tork's talk page, as there was a previous procedural directive relating to non-consensus edits made by editors aware of the discretionary sanctions, the fine print of which I'd momentarily forgotten.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 06:16, 2 July 2013 (UTC)


{{ex|Internet pioneer ] was one of the early members of the Tea Party movement, sometimes referred to as a founder.<ref name="LaStampa"/><ref name="RT">{{cite news|url=https://rt.com/usa/news/tea-occupy-denninger-wall-819/|title=Tea Party founder backs Occupy Wall Street|work=]|date=2011-10-14|accessdate=2013-01-05}}</ref> In the aftermath of the March 2008 collapse of ], he founded the website Fed Up USA.<ref name="LaStampa">{{cite news|url=http://tuttoaffari.lastampa.it/_web/cmstp/tmplrubriche/midterm2010/grubrica.asp?ID_blog=321&ID_articolo=7&ID_sezione=711|first=Francesco|last=Semprini|title=Il fondatore del movimento, Karl Denninger, si scaglia contro l'ex governatore dell'Alaska e i Patriots|work=]|date=2010-10-26|accessdate=2013-01-05}}</ref> He came to national attention for the criticisms of the ] which he posted on Fed Up USA in September that year. On January 20, 2009, the day of ], he published a blog post calling on readers to mail tea bags to the White House and Congress, echoing a suggestion by a commenter on one of his earlier blog posts.<ref>{{cite web|url=http://market-ticker.org/akcs-www?singlepost=2137825|first=Karl|last=Denninger|title=February 1st Tea Party?|work=The Market Ticker|date=2009-01-20|accessdate=2013-01-05}}</ref> By February 1, the idea had spread to various ] and ]-oriented blogs, forums, websites and through a ] email campaign.<ref name="huffingtonpost.com">{{cite news|url=http://www.huffingtonpost.com/jane-hamsher/a-teabagger-timeline-koch_b_187312.html |title=Jane Hamsher: A Teabagger Timeline: Koch, Coors, Newt, Dick Armey There From The Start | work=] |date= 16 May 2009|accessdate=2010-04-27}}</ref>}}
With new "!voters" entering, this may take quite a while, indeed. ] (]) 13:01, 2 July 2013 (UTC)


Thoughts and comments, please. ] (]) 14:05, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
:I've been watching all the discussions every day Collect but I have been reluctant to re-engage. P&W at the time you made that call there were two proposals both of which had support. We went through this before, a majority vote is not consensus and this is a mediated discussion in which you are not the mediator.----] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 17:52, 2 July 2013 (UTC)


::It had 3:1 support at the time (all people who have been actually working at this) and one active person who had yet to weigh in was a co-author of sorts. It was a good faith and much needed effort to move this forward. Lets just move on instead of working to describe people negatively. Either keep it and modify it, or put in a different one and modify that one. This process is dying under it's own weight and complexity. Let's just move forward, even a baby step. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 18:02, 2 July 2013 (UTC) :This material looks good and useful. The "commentaries on origin" section is really distorted, but I'm not so sure about totally eliminating / replacing it. Perhaps shrink the existing section to a single sentence on each of the listed items and keep the revised one in addition to putting this one in. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 14:16, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
:::Allow me to be the first to welcome you back, Snowded. While I don't personally doubt your assertion of observation from a safe distance, it doesn't necessarily help us to understand your rationale applied in voting on proposals without an accompanying explanation. Can you please help us to address your concerns and/or preferences? ]<u>]</u> 18:42, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
:::North, you do realize P&W's effort didn't "move this forward", right? Either SilkTork is going to revert the problematic action, or the content now in the article will be brought into compliance with consensus (you know, the real kind per the Misplaced Pages policy ... not a vote) before we move forward (something that should have been done first). In either case, P&W's action hasn't advanced the situation, and now we have even more distraction and drama as a result. ] (]) 19:26, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
::::My point was that it was a good reasonable effort to move it forward. I don't know whether or not it will actually do so. However, I would consider getting '''''some''''' semi-OK version into article space and the modifying from there to be a step forward. Trying to design an entire section by writing entire drafts of a section will require 100 drafts. And the talk page format does not support ongoing editing of a version. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 19:34, 2 July 2013 (UTC)


::The whole paragraph should be moved to "Perceptions of the Tea Party movement" spin-off article. ] tells us that this article should summarize what the spin-off articles say. Perhaps a few words to summarize this paragraph, such as "Critics have raised questions about the origins of the movement," should be added to the summary in the "Perceptions of the Tea Party" section. ] (]) 15:20, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
==Clarification please==
The current process was to find an Agenda version that people agreed was the most workable. To work on that one, overcoming objections to any wording. And if there was consensus, to place that version in the article. I've been busy so have not looked at this page in the two days since that process was set up. It was worded such that I would assess the consensus, though I would have no objection to someone moving things forward if consensus was clear and agreed by all. I note that a version has been actioned, but then there was a revert of that, then that was self-reverted. So where are we now? Is the current state of the Agenda section in the article acceptable to all - is that the edit that people agreed should take place? ''']''' ''']''' 07:59, 2 July 2013 (UTC)

:OK, I'll speak up first.
:After several editors asked Xenophrenic to come up with a suggested text, once he did, they have almost (not entirely) unanimously rejected two paragraphs added to the beginning of the proposed section that address social issues in relation to the decentralized organizational structure and disparate goals and priorities, which are statements that have been in the text since I arrived at the article but were unsourced until I introduced the blockquote from Schmidt. Xenophrenic has produced four solid sources in support of that material, and there is no reason to omit it, though WP:UNDUE has been invoked, despite the multiple discussion in RS, including Schmidt and Zernike in addition to the four refs produced by Xenophrenic. I have also been told I was pushing a POV and being "pointy" by supporting the inclusion of those paragraphs.
:One vote after another has been called in rapid succession with the pretense of reaching a consensus to action an edited placing the non-consensus text on the article.
:Xenophrenic, who hasn't been participating in votes much, did place an oppose vote yesterday, seeing the worrying trend, I suppose. With Snowed weighing in, it is very clear that there is no consensus for the text that has been placed in the article, whereas there is now a 3-1 vote count in favor of taking Xenophrenic's original text as the starting point versus a 4-2 vote count for taking the text that has been actioned without going through the process of discussing perceived problems.
:I would suggest checking the respective version with respect to the well-sourced paragraphs with respect to which an attempt is being made to exclude without considered deliberation with participation of the moderator. All versions in the 12 series starting with 12d, as well as the version of that I revised in its entirety with the aim of improving readability (version 15), particularly the first three paragraphs followed by the Schmidt blockquote.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 08:36, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
:Some further clarification of the voting-->actioning time frame would seem in order.
:The section entitled "The final vote" was started , while a was made in quick succession after had been register in the previous vote call.
:The edit was action , less than 8 hours after the corresponding vote call had been made.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 09:10, 2 July 2013 (UTC)

I think we're looking / desperate to see some forward progress and this process has been dying under it's own weight/complexity, not significantly due to any disputes. We can't craft an entire section by just creating drafts of that whole section. I proposed/framed it as just the version to be put in with the understanding that it will need evolution/changes, and to park the two subsections for separate consideration. I supported it despite what I see as a big problem in it. (Calling it conservative, without mentioning libertarian) Of the people '''''who have been participating/working here''''' there is 4:1 support, and that does not yet include Xenophrenic who is a sort of co-author of the version. I'm running out of gas; others probably also are. We need some forward progress. Let's just put it in and then start discussing changes to it. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 10:52, 2 July 2013 (UTC)

:Clarification in a nutshell? A proposed version was actioned into the main Tea Party movement article against consensus. A !vote was called, and the first few responses were quickly mischaracterized as ] and the problematic proposal was quickly installed within hours. The several concerns raised about that content were ignored, as were other proposals with equal support. Ubikwit, noticing the improper addition of the content against consensus, reverted it -- but he apparently recalled that several of us had agreed not to make reverts during this moderated discussion, so he undid his revert. ] (]) 11:02, 2 July 2013 (UTC)

::I don't see any addition against consensus. It was 4:1 at the time before the non-participating drop-ins showed up. And it was a good (apparently wrong) guess that as the one who wrote all of the material in it that you would be a likely supporter. I supported both versions. I'm running out of gas. Trying to build the whole section via drafts of the entire section, and then having drive-bys kill whatever gets worked out will take a hundred versions. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 11:35, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
:::I've addressed your objections above the final vote, Xeno. It's regrettable those subtle changes weren't performed prior to the vote as your support might have proven more productive than opposition. I'm sure we all have minor concerns, but the goal should be giving a little in the name of consensus. ]<u>]</u> 11:55, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
::::There's obviously been canvassing here. And another pass for reverting and then "self-reverting?" Why do we even bother?] (]) 12:21, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::''It was 4:1 at the time'' --North8000
::::::There had been enough discussion. ] (]) 13:27, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::I'm quite certain I wasn't the only '1' with objections at that time, North. ] (]) 12:24, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::I meant of people who had weighed in at that time, which was 4:1. I also supported/support your version as written. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 12:47, 2 July 2013 (UTC)

:::::::''I'm quite certain I wasn't the only one with objections at the time'' - Xenophrenic
::::::::Where are your objections then? ] (]) 13:27, 2 July 2013 (UTC)

The edit was clearly made in good faith and a reasonable belief that a consensus existed - thus not something to be punished. I propose that we allow a minimum of 48 hurs for "new !voters" to appear - but such new entries should be asked to read the ''entire'' prior discussion at this point lest they be seen as only looking at a handful of posts while the prior discussion would likely help them assign weight to particular positions with a finer ear to the background arguments. Cheers. ] (]) 13:06, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
:They should also offer versions. If we are to count their ivote, they must participate. You can't just show up out of the blue without any prior participation and derail the hard work of the editors spending their volunteer time here. They've contributed absolutely nothing to this process and they appear only well after the fact. ] (]) 13:36, 2 July 2013 (UTC)


:The edit was made in utter disregard to my posting several hours therebefore a link to Silk Tork's relevant procedural directive, as it was becoming apparent that an attempt was underway to action an edit without first having Silk Tork assess consensus in a situation where it would seem clear that there was no consensus.
:On a related more general note, with respect to the content dispute, note that in recent days we have seen opposition to using material from reliably published sources that attributes certain traits to the entirety of the movement on the basis that the traits only apply to certain "subsets". Meanwhile, in the current discussion objection has been raised to material because it applies only to subsets in a "chaotic disorganization"--a meme that is repeated about 10 times in a single paragraph above.
:Both of the above-described characterizations would seem to aim at excluding points of view articulated by reliably published authors on the basis of one sort of logical fallacy or another.
:In one case we are told that because the TPm is comprised of a plurality of groups espousing disparate views, any attribution of a particular view (or agenda) to the whole movement is false. On the other hand, we are told that because the movement has a "chaotic disorganization" we can't say anything about the agenda of separate groups that would seem to be in conflict with each other, because that is information that should be addressed in the organization section.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 13:35, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
::What does the blockquote mean in plain English? ] (]) 13:39, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
:::It's html markup language jargon, not plain English.--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 14:01, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
{{od}}
Ubikwit: What does this blockquote mean in plain English?
{{ex|Schmidt writes, <blockquote>“…The Tea Party contains a welter of oftentimes conflicting Agendas... Yet within this confusing constellation of ideas and viewpoints, there is a relatively stable ideological core to the Tea Party. This core is particularly evident when one focuses on the vision of the Constitution regularly professed by movement leaders, activists, and supporters.”}}</blockquote>


:::Sorry, I didn't mean to complicate / snarl things with my suggestion. The Ron Paul and Koch item as written look appropriate. The tobacco thing is way overblown but a brief sentence worded like the Koch item could be appropriate as a compromise. Overall, we should just keep moving. Perfection is the enemy of improvement. The original proposal is also OK with me. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 20:01, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
] (]) 14:08, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
::It means: "I haven't got the foggiest idea what, if anything, unites the Tea Party except, perhaps, the stated belief in the importance of the Constitution." Can anyone restate it more clearly? ] (]) 15:03, 2 July 2013 (UTC)


:Looks good to me; throw it in.--] (]) 05:39, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
:I think that the quote is fairly straight forward and self-explanatory. That is to say, it is not "unreadable". With respect to our shared endeavor here as editors of Misplaced Pages, explicating it with respect to the decentralized structure of the TPm is illustrative. That is to say, this quote from Schmidt can be effectively used to convey to the reader that there are many viewpoints in the TPm, some of which are at odds with each other, but at the same time, there is a common recourse to the Constitution.
:Conversely, with respect to the material newly introduced by Xenophrenic, another side of the movement with respect to the existence of a multiplicity of agendas, some disparate, can be illustrated in a concrete manner with respect to social issues.
:Both the quote from Schmidt and the sources and text by Xenophrenic are therefore mutually reinforcing with respect to enhancing readers' intelligibility with respect to the decentralized amalgamation of disorganized chaos otherwise known as the Tea Party movement. --]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 15:15, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
::In other words, you don't know. ] (]) 16:11, 2 July 2013 (UTC)


::Welcome to the party, pal. Yeah, it ought to look good to you, because you wrote it. I picked it up, refcites and all, from the ] bio you've been writing. The first four words, and a few other minor changes, were necessary to introduce Mr. Denninger into this environment.
{{od}}Well, at the time I actioned the edit, we had literally discussed it to death. We've been working on it in good faith for weeks. Believe it or not, all of the editors I have spoken with have real jobs, real families and real lives, and we don't have the time or energy to devote 16 hours a day to Misplaced Pages editing. Even 20-24 hours a week is a bit much, when you have to do it week after week and you keep running into the same problem you can't solve. Everyone was burned out and exhausted. It was very late at night. I saw four "votes" in favor and one opposed. That's consensus by any reasonable definition. Xeno hadn't officially weighed in, but since he was the original author of a version that had then been condensed by Malke, and since he hadn't opposed it when she first posted it, I very reasonably assumed that he would support it whenever he showed up. That would have made it 5-1. Even better.


{{Edit protected|Tea Party movement|answered=yes}}
Snowded hadn't participated in weeks. No idea where he came from. He didn't register his "oppose vote" until after I'd actioned the edit. ArtifexMayhem???? WTF ???? Never saw him or even heard of him before in my life. I will be speaking about it at great length on SilkTork's User Talk page, when I have the time and I've had some rest and some quality time with my family. Probably late tonight. Now consider the context. Context is important.


::The subsection "Commentaries on origin" should be removed, and replaced with the above paragraph in green about Karl Denninger. I think the new subsection header should be "Fed Up USA," the name of his blog where he first started talking about mailing tea bags to congressmen. Also, "Critics have raised questions about the origins of the movement," should be added to the summary in the "Perceptions of the Tea Party" section. — ] (]) 15:50, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
* Many editors besides me were suffering from serious exhaustion and burnout issues. Something really needed to happen.


::*'''Oppose''' removing "Commentaries on origin" content. I agree with North8000 that there is usable information presently in that section, although it could use some improvement. I don't have a problem with Denninger and FedUpUSA being mentioned in relation to the origins of the movement, but that shouldn't be used as an excuse to remove other material under discussion. ] (]) 16:08, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
* Because I took the additional steps (for readability) of simplifying a little bit of the language and keeping the blockquotes in footnotes, I had every reason to expect Collect to support the proposal as well, whenever he showed up. That would have made it 6-1.
::::I would never argue to exclude the conspiratorial ''commentary'' on the Tea Party movement. But we should try building an ''origin'' section first. We can add new details on the emergence of social media behind the movement, the catalyst, as they say. ]<u>]</u> 19:57, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::Building an 'Origins' section is an excellent idea. The Santelli rant is commonly cited as marking the "start" of the movement, but that is just because it had the benefit of being a cable news incident followed by a viral YouTube presence. There was certainly popular angst in the weeks before that, as evidenced by Trevor Leach, Keli Carender, Karl Denninger, and some stuff on Smart Girl Politics blogs, the TCOT Twitter gang, etc. We could replace the "Commentaries on origins" header with "Origins", and clean it up a bit. ] (]) 21:35, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::I don't want any trouble. We get that certain perspectives are dangerous. I'll pass this along anyways: http://www.lse.ac.uk/media@lse/research/mediaWorkingPapers/MScDissertationSeries/2012/81.pdf ]<u>]</u> 22:02, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::::Interesting read. Is that in support of proposed or existing article content? (I assume we are still discussing Origins, and social media's part in TP movement development.) ] (]) 05:44, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::::Interesting, I figured you wanted to push a crazy-man tobacco conspiracy. This is good news. The nutter is gone from your butter. ]<u>]</u> 06:11, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::::::I'm not catching your references here. Could you speak plainly please? ] (]) 14:43, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
::::::::::I got a notification that you've reverted me. How cool is that? Moving on, I'm not about to edit war over your selective ''de-archiving''. Enjoy! ]<u>]</u> 15:34, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::::::::Yeah, I'm liking the new notification tweaks the developers installed. Thanks for not edit warring; the archiving of ongoing discussions that are less than 72 hours old gave me pause, but I'm not going to waste time speculating as to intentions. Want to help build an Origins section? ] (]) 16:07, 21 July 2013 (UTC)


* I've marked the edit request as answered for now. Although the suggestion has mostly been favourably received, I think there should be a bit more discussion about ways that it could be adjusted to satisfy Xenophrenic's objections. If this was a case of choosing a straight yes or no, I would go for "yes", but I think that there is probably a middle way that we can take here. Best — ''''']''''' <sup>]</sup> 12:50, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
* SilkTork had repeatedly stressed that July 1 was the deadline and we had to take action, that ArbCom was going to reactivate its investigation, and that one possible result was topic bans for a whole lot of people, hoping that a fresh group of editors would come in and get something done effectively. The deadline was repeatedly stressed.


:::The above edit request can be split into two parts. If editors are itching to add something to the article, some of the above proposed Denninger text can be added now, probably immediately before or after (chronologically) the Trevor Leach material. I'd leave off the last proposed sentence, as it is not supported by the cited source. I'm working on content for an 'Origins' section that covers the Jan-Feb 2009 infancy of the movement that may eventually incorporate part of that Denninger material. The second part of the edit request (removal/relocation of the 'Commentaries on origins' content) should instead be refocused on rewriting it as a brief and factual (less the commentary and opinion) 'Origins' section. ] (]) 12:28, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
* SilkTork also repeatedly stated that he wanted to see us work this out by ourselves. This contradicted the admonition Ubikwit posted as a diff, about SilkTork wanting to review all consensus discussions and determining consensus for himself.


== direction of this project ==
* I've also been communicating with SilkTork off-Wiki. The content of those communications further underscored the need to take action immediately — not for any personal agenda of mine or his, but for the good of the project.


I've been away on holiday and have not been able to comment, but today I discovered the TPm page has been locked. This is very disconcerting considering all the work editors have put into this discussion here. After looking over the edits on the article, it's apparent that things are not heading in a productive direction at all. I'm not placing blame on anyone, but it's time to stop and reassess this and sort some goals. I'm also disheartened that nobody seems cognizant of the ArbCom case that is pending. The whole point of this moderated discussion was to sort the problems with the editors and the article goals, not make things worse. I'd really like to hear from editors on what they believe really matters here. And Cyberpower, it's enormously kind of you to take on the role of moderator, but since you've don't have admin powers, it might be best if you reconsider things. You'll be called upon to discipline editors for breaching the rules and without admin powers, that won't be possible. It's an enormous burden to begin with, and it absolutely requires an admin. It's obvious to me that the page needed to be locked which SilkTork rightly did. ] (]) 16:53, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
* The one and only "oppose vote" came from Ubikwit. No explanation. Just the word "Oppose." Here at Misplaced Pages we don't normally count votes. We determine consensus by the strength of policy based arguments, see ] and see also ]. The policy based arguments were all on our side. In fact, in some venues the closing admins are instructed specifically to ignore any and all "votes" that are not supported by policy based arguments.
:You are right. I have been seriously considering withdrawing as moderator. The mere fact that I'm not an admin, is challenge on its own level.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 18:09, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
::It does make things harder for you. You are very brave to take this on, and your comments are measured and patient which is a huge bonus here. Having the tools, and the threat of them, would make things so much easier for you. ] (]) 18:37, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
:::I don't threaten. I'm actually quite patient.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 18:54, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
::::I don't mean you would actually need to threaten. I meant the idea that the tools can be used at any time is often enough to stay an editor from going down the wrong path. I did notice that you are very patient. That's an asset, to be sure. ] (]) 18:58, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::Cyber's head and heart are both in the right place. Unfortunately he needs to be able to ask an admin to perform admin tasks, and the admin needs to be able to accept his judgment and take action immediately, since we've accepted him as our moderator. We have a crowd of people here, all but one of whom are in agreement at this point, but one tendentious editor is still able to stop all our work in its tracks. Changes need to be made. I don't think we need a new moderator. I think we need to give the moderator the on-call admin support that he needs. This is what we need to help our moderator be effective. ] (]) 19:44, 25 July 2013 (UTC)


:::::(edit conflict)
Considering all these factors cumulatively, the totality of circumstances told me to action the edit. ] (]) 19:49, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::@Cyberpower: Please don't do anything rash - I think your lack of Admin tools is a minor technicality that can be easily remedied by enlisting the aid of a willing Administrator who would perform the Admin actions only at your direction and request. You would still be responsible for all of the dispute resolution, final decision making and moderating. It's something to consider, at least. I say this for a reason. Do you realize that you are the only editor to respond to the request for a moderator after many days on the noticeboard? Do you realize the previous moderator visited the Talk pages of a half-dozen established content editors and requested their help, and they all declined (except one, who stuck his toes in the water, made a handful of minor copy-edits, and hasn't been seen since)? Malke is correct that having Admin tools would be more convenient, but I'm not sure she realizes just how difficult (if not impossible at this point) it would be to find another moderator.
:::::@Malke: I hope you had a great time on holiday! You asked to hear from editors what matters here? I really think that differs from editor to editor. Of course everyone will say they want to see article improvement; the generic answer. It has become evident, however, that "improvement" means different things to different editors. The disagreements between editors seem to boil down to whether article content is flattering or non-flattering to the article subject. For me, since I have no personal experience with the subject matter, I must go with what the reliable sources say. Other editors, however, seem to have insider knowledge that I lack - I'm learning, for instance, that seemingly reliable sources, from journalists to academics, are actually not reliable at all. They are secretly "opponents" of the movement, and have an agenda to undermine the movement by claiming unflattering things about them. Or so I've been told. Another thing that matters very much to some editors here, and this is becoming increasingly evident, is what can be done to editors rather than articles. You will find them calling for all manner of bans, blocks and other sanctions against those with whom they have content disagreements. They are easy to spot, lodging carefully worded complaints at Admin noticeboards, ArbComs, RfCs, Talk pages of admins, etc. ] (]) 19:49, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::@P&W: Interesting; you and I agree 100% in our advice to Cyberpower. We also agree on your other observation: there is indeed a crowd of people here that are always in agreement with each other, regardless. Then there's me, who chooses instead to agree with reliable sources, and I do so solo lately since most other editors who do the same have been driven off. Your "tendentious editor" attack has been noted. ] (]) 19:55, 25 July 2013 (UTC)


I think I've supported 90% of the last 15 proposals (all with the caveat the we understand that they aren't perfect and can and will get changes.) and none of them have been implemented. We need to get some that are 90% good put in with the caveat/understanding that they will need to be further evolved after we put them in. Also, let's agree that the status quo is to be treated as just another option. That way people have less to fear that an imperfect change will get entrenched if it's put in. Let's get this baby moving! Sincerely,, <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 21:20, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
::One of the reasons I had not edited before is the difficulty of dealing with you manner of participation. I have however been monitoring the issue every day. When you took what I considered premature action I felt that I needed to engage again. Communication "off-wiki" concerns me as does your tendency to treat a vote as meaning consensus. ----] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 19:55, 2 July 2013 (UTC)


== Notice to Everyone ==
::* ''One of the reasons I had not edited before is the difficulty of dealing with you manner of participation.'' Duly noted, Snowded.
::* ''... as does your tendency to treat a vote as meaning consensus.'' Very good point, thanks for putting an exclamation point on my previous musings on the topic. "Votes" do not determine consensus in most circumstances. Policy based arguments determine consensus ... see ] and see also ].
::* '''I have yet to see the first word of a policy based argument against Malke's condensed Version 12d by Xenophrenic.''' ... ] (]) 20:05, 2 July 2013 (UTC)


I would like to remind everyone that discussions outside of this page will not be moderated or controlled and the civility cannot be enforced. Also, more input on the proposals would be appreciated.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 18:08, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
== In Medias Res ==


== Stepping Down ==
This is sort of a personal appeal to "new !voters" to please read ''all'' of the prior discussions here - where we ''are'' is a function of ''past'' discussions, and if we simply argue about material which was already discussed at great length in the past, we are in the position of an editorial ] at best. If new editors here will please read the "old stuff" we, I hope, can move on to get the job done. If we have to rehash all that was ''already'' discussed for months, it will definitely take more months to re-discuss it. Cheers. ] (]) 14:06, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
:Yes, it will keep you from thinking that the ivote was made after only two days. ] (]) 14:11, 2 July 2013 (UTC)


I appreciate that many of you would like to keep as moderator. It was a strong incentive to remain one. However, numerous reasons came up as to why I should step down. First and foremost, when I accepted moderator-ship of this page, it never occurred to me how overwhelming moderating this page for me. I'm afraid I'll burn myself out too quickly and make major mistakes. The current ArbCom case seems to be in favor of topic banning everyone involved for 6 months. There won't be anything to moderate when it passes. On the topic of ArbCom, since I can technically be seen as an involved party, it may come to pass to topic ban me too. In any event resignation would be a preferable option than to face a topic ban. I really feel this should be left to a much more experienced editor to moderate. I thought I could give it a try at least. It was a pleasure to be the moderator of this page, no matter what went on. I hope ArbCom settles this dispute in a fashion that most can agree on.—] ]<sub style="margin-left:-4.4ex;color:olive;font-family:arnprior">Online</sub> 09:16, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
::Ok, I wasn't a !voter (new or otherwise), but I'll read the discussions. Is there a brief summary about the key sticking points(s)? ] (]) 14:49, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
:Well said. It's a travesty what's currently happening at ArbCom and your concerns are completely valid. Possibly under less-chilling circumstances we all could've collaborated and actually improved TPM (which is really in sad shape). I'm desperately attempting to re-gain faith in this project. Regrettably, it seems the powers that be are still running interference for truly bad, albeit active elements around here who dissuade and burnout our more well-intentioned contributors. Sad to see this vicious cycle repeating itself. SMH. ]<u>]</u> 12:35, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
:::Alas not - but it ''is'' shorter then ] by quite a bit. ] (]) 15:15, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
::Thanks for stopping by, and we appreciate your contribution. The motion proposed at ArbCom is perplexing to say the least. It's far from impossible to spot the worst offenders on this page — the ones who, either single-handedly or as a very small group, are being allowed and even enabled to obstruct any further progress on the article at all. This is being allowed to happen no matter how bad their track records have been proven to be, and no matter how well-stated and numerous the policy-based arguments might be against them. It's very frustrating. But the willingness of a moderator to step in here at a difficult time, and at least attempt to keep things moving in the right direction, was one of the bright spots. ] (]) 23:16, 3 August 2013 (UTC)
::{{ec}}It could just as easily be said that where we are is a result of ''the dysfunctional state of past discussions'', but I digress, and to say as much may be an insult to the intelligence of many an editor wading (or re-wading) into this discussion.
:::Cyberpower, thanks for what you did and we wish you would stay. More fallout from the fact that Arbcom case was sent off on a tangent from the start and has never recovered. <span style="color:#0000cc">''North8000''</span> (]) 16:44, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
::By the way, what does "In Medias Res" mean, in plain English?--]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 14:51, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
:::See ]. It refers to people starting off in the middle of the story, instead of reading the background. In the case at hand, there is a great deal to be gained by reading the past discussions, but if we rehash all that was said in the past, then I will absolutely be out of here. There is a term called ] which appears to be all too relevant to that sort of exercise. ] (]) 15:12, 2 July 2013 (UTC
::::It's Latin. It means "in the middle of the subject." Or "in the middle of the process." ] (]) 15:17, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
:::::I previously wanted to use that same Wiktionary example in reference to the various lawyers' 'academic' law review opinion pieces of the tea party. ] (]) 16:15, 2 July 2013 (UTC)


== Re: ] ==
== Version 12g ==


The suddenly fashionable ] approach to Misplaced Pages editing has taken me by surprise and I'm not sure it's appropriate. Binksternet and Ubikwit are encouraged to discuss their concerns here regarding alleged NPOV problems, any proposed changes to the lede sentence, the allegation that the article is a ], etc. Please stop flinging around templates hoping that one of them will stick. For example, the NPOV template that was posted there claims that "relevant discussion can be found on the Talk page." There is no discussion at all on that Talk page concerning your NPOV allegation, so don't post the template until you've expressed your concern in the proper venue. After your concerns have been properly expressed, rather than just driving up and spraying your rhetorical bullets around, a proper response can be posted, and we'll see whether you can gather consensus for your proposed changes. ] (]) 16:10, 6 August 2013 (UTC)
<big>{{ex|New Version}}</big>


It's a shame that the entire other side in the content dispute has chosen not to participate in the moderated discussion. I'm sure that a new moderator can be found, and would like to proceed. ] (]) 17:28, 7 August 2013 (UTC)
{{ex|The Tea Party movement doesn't have a single uniform agenda. The decentralized character of the movement, with its lack of formal structure or hierarchy, allows each autonomous group in the movement to set its own priorities and goals. Sometimes these goals may even be in conflict, and priorities will often differ between groups. Many Tea Party organizers see this as a strength rather than a weakness, as decentralization has helped to immunize the movement against co-opting by outside entities and corruption from within. Despite the disparate nature of the many individual groups, a few defining principles and core ideologies have been embraced by a large majority of the movement. Most political observers agree the Tea Party is largely motivated by the conservative principles of constitutionally limited government, free market economy and fiscal responsibility.<ref>"Group Think: Inside the Tea Party’s Collective Brain"; National Journal; Jonathan Rauch; September 11, 2010</ref>}}


==The term "teabagger"==
{{ex|The Tea Party is a conservative movement, but it has avoided involvement with conservative social, religious and family-values issues. National Tea Party organizations like the Tea Party Patriots, Tea Party Express, and FreedomWorks are focused on economic issues, but they support immigration reform if it includes securing the borders first. Other Tea Party groups like ]'s 9/12 Tea Parties, the Iowa Tea Party and Delaware Patriot groups focus more on social issues such as abortion, gun control, prayer in schools and unlawful immigration.<ref></ref><ref></ref><ref></ref>}}
I've commented at the main article talk page, but will now repeat here. I can't recall having been involved in this article until right now, and would like to point out an error. The following sentence in the article is unsourced, it has two separate Misplaced Pages tags on it, and it is erroneous:
<blockquote><nowiki>The term '']'' was initially used to refer to Tea Partiers after conservatives{{who|date=September 2013}} used ''tea bag'' as a verb on protest signs and websites.{{cn|date=September 2013}}</nowiki></blockquote>


According to the article by Alex Koppelman that's already in the footnotes:
{{ex|The Tea Party movement generally focuses on government reform. Among its goals are limiting the size of the federal government, reducing government spending, lowering the national debt and opposing tax increases. To this end, Tea Party groups have protested ], stimulus programs, cap and trade ], ] and perceived attacks by the federal government on their First, Second, Fourth and Tenth Amendment rights. Tea Party groups have also supported ] legislation and tighter border security, and opposed amnesty for illegal immigrants. They have formed SuperPacs to support candidates sympathetic to their goals and have opposed what they call the "Republican establishment" candidates. After President Obama's reelection in 2012, the movement again shifted its focus. The Tea party led efforts to challenge the constitutionality of the federal health care law in the courts, and also mobilized locally against the United Nations Agenda 21.<ref name="Fringe"></ref><ref></ref> They have protested the IRS for ] of groups with "tea party" in their names.}}


<blockquote>hen used as a verb, the words “tea bag” and “teabagging” have nothing to do with a hot, soothing drink....I’ve traced the meme’s birth back to February 27th, when blogs like Instaputz and Wonkette started using it independently of one another. They were inspired by a photo that the Washington Independent’s David Weigel shot of one protester carrying a sign that was, if you knew that second meaning, pretty funny: “Tea bag the liberal Dems before they tea bag you !!” (sic).</blockquote>
{{ex|The movement places the Constitution at the center of its reform agenda, and supports an originalist view. Several amendments have been targeted by some groups for full or partial repeal, including the ], ], and ]. There has also been support for a proposed ], enabling a two-thirds majority of the states to repeal federal laws, and a ], which would limit deficit spending.<ref name="Foley1"></ref> }}


Those first uses on websites were not by conservatives at all, so the unsourced sentence in the Misplaced Pages article is false. And the origin seems to have been a single protest sign, not a plurality of them. Surely we can make this article a fine upstanding place to visit, instead of, um, a fleabag. Any objection if I take a crack at it?] (]) 02:21, 28 September 2013 (UTC)
{{ex|The '']'' was a legislative agenda created by Ryan Hecker, a conservative activist. He launched a website which encouraged people to offer possible ] for the Tea Party platform. Hecker worked with Dick Armey of FreedomWorks in crafting the suggestions into ten agenda items which include: "identify the constitutionality of every new law, reject cap and trade legislation, demand a balanced federal budget, simplify the tax code, assess constitutionality of federal agencies, limit growth in annual federal spending, repeal Obamacare, new energy policy that supports exploration, reduce earmarks, and reduce federal taxes."<ref name="Davis">{{Cite news|url=http://abcnews.go.com/Politics/tea-party-activists-craft-contract-america/story?id=9740705|title=Tea Party Activists Craft 'Contract from America'|last=Davis|first=Teddy|date=9 February 2010|work=ABC News|publisher=American Broadcasting Company|accessdate=18 September 2010}}</ref><ref name="Davis2">{{cite web|last=Davis |first=Teddy |url=http://abcnews.go.com/Politics/tea-party-activists-unveil-contract-america/story?id=10376437&page=2 |title=Tea Party Activists Unveil 'Contract from America' |publisher=ABC News |date=April 15, 2010 |accessdate=June 7, 2011}}</ref> }}
::Here's a specific proposal: "In February 2009, a conservative protester was photographed with a sign using the words 'tea bag' as a verb, which swiftly led to left-leaning websites like Wonkette introducing 'teabagger' as a term for Tea Partiers." Cite: Koppelman.] (]) 18:14, 28 September 2013 (UTC)


:::And your wording would be backed up by what citations? Koppelman doesn't back this up and conflicts with other sources.] (]) 00:00, 29 September 2013 (UTC)
Please offer support or oppose for this version but please also include your rationale for your vote.
::::Please feel free to rephrase the proposed sentence, or to say specifically what you think is unsupported by Koppelman. I already quoted the pertinent part of Koppelman above. Koppelman seems to have investigated the matter in greatest depth, and so treatments that are obviously more cursory should probably not necessarily be given equal weight with Koppelman. What I mainly tried to do is take the Koppelman info and present it chronologically. Are you saying that you think the current text in the article is fine?] (]) 00:58, 29 September 2013 (UTC)


:::::First of all, you took one of many sources and added your own interpretation/twist to it. Further, re. "''cursory treatments''" , "TheWeek.com" source as an example dosn't seem to fit your label at all. Is the present text accurate? Yes it is or very, very close. At least closer to sources presented than what you're proposing. You don't get to decide how much weight each RS receives, you sure understand that. Can the text in question be improved? Sure, there is always space to improve content, just not by twisting it in a different direction contrary to sources. Give it another try and I might go for it.] (]) 01:39, 29 September 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' - it combines elements from several recent versions. ] (]) 19:14, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
(Outdent) For the time being, I will continue to assume that you're editing in good faith, TMKC, and that (like me) you are not trying to twist anything. You cite one source to assert that the current text in the Wikipedua article is much better than what I have proposed. Let's look at what that source (TheWeek.com) says about February 2009:
*'''Oppose''' Grade level of 17 (post college) and readability of 18 make this, IMO, a very difficult proposal to remedy. The extensive detail seems to increase the problem here. ] (]) 20:09, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
<blockquote>Feb. 27, 2009. At the first anti-stimulus "New American Tea Party" rally in Washington D.C., a protestor carries a sign reading "Tea Bag the Liberal Dems before they Tea Bag You!!" The Washington Independent's David Weigel calls it "the best sign I saw."</blockquote>
:::Extensive detail about the subject ("Agenda") is a good thing. Extensive detail about just one aspect of the subject (i.e.; Is the constitutionalism "originalist", "popular", neither, a unique blend of both, etc., etc., etc.,) is not so good. I've found that I can increase the readability score of the whole section simply by adding more information. ] (]) 20:18, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
This excerpt is much more cursory than the discussion in the Koppelman article, which identifies further uses on Feb. 27, 2009 by blogs Instaputz and Wonkette. TheWeek.com does not contradict Koppelman, and instead simply skips along to March 2009. I don't see any ambiguity about the fact that the piece in TheWeek is much more cursory about the events of February 2009 than Koppelman. I would also like to request that you please tone down your accusations, and try to assume good faith. Thanks.] (]) 02:06, 29 September 2013 (UTC)
:::Collect, we can fix that during the next phase. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 00:29, 3 July 2013 (UTC)
::I have started a survey at the ].] (]) 16:55, 30 September 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' Looks good. Agenda section should be thorough. Perfection is the enemy of progress. Let's put it in and evolve it from there. One big problem to fix in the next phase would be calling it simply a conservative movement. (if we're using labels, it should include libertarian). We could also tighten up the wording in the next phase. <font color ="#0000cc">''North8000''</font> (]) 21:27, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' I am 100% certain that with the arrival of new editors and the return of others, this has absolutely zero chance of making it into the mainspace. Readability suffers so we have lost Collect, and there are others who have always been here and will never go for it anyway. I anticipate five "Oppose" votes. Nevertheless, my opinion is that it is an improvement over the version that's already in the mainspace, because it contains more details and it's presented in a fair and accurate way. And I recognize that Malke has done some excellent work here. regards ... ] (]) 21:41, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Support''' - I think this is ok. I didn't like the quote that had been in previous versions. This is better. ] (]) 02:53, 3 July 2013 (UTC)
*'''Oppose''' While this includes the first two paragraphs of Xenophrenic's 12d, that material has been worked on continually, resulting in Version 15, to which Xenophrenic has recently made further revisions and expressed approval. Considering that a formal vote has never been called on version 15, that version deserves consideration. This version 12g would seem to have the sole objective of eliminating the Schmidt quote, but if that is the case, then an argument as to whether that is desirable or not could be more effectively examined under the moderation of Silk Tork after selecting a version for the starting point that includes the quote. I see no convincing rationale for excluding the quote beforehand while several editors have expressed support for including it. --]<sup>]</sup><sub>]</sub> 03:20, 3 July 2013 (UTC)

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...I want people to edit the article. But I want those who edit it to be trustworthy, and to only edit by consensus, not to revert or encourage or incite others to revert, not to remove or add content that alters meaning without first establishing that it is OK to do do, not to make edits based on guessing or assuming, but to follow the academic principles of doing research FIRST, and then supporting statements with citations, and to follow Misplaced Pages guidelines on building an article. This is editing basics, and should be done on every article. It is particularly important that it should be done on this article. This is not the article to be making bold edits, nor uncertain edits. This is an article where we need people to be putting their proposals down on the talkpage and getting consensus. Who actually makes the edit after consensus has been done, doesn't matter. As long as that person actions the edit as agreed, and does not add their own twist as they are doing so. I am concerned there is not much time before ArbCom reconvenes, and I don't want edit wars to start up on the article between now and then. So I want all edits to the article to be secure and agreed. And if there are editors who are not able to discern when an edit has been agreed or not, they should be discouraged from editing the article. If necessary, permanently. I can't make that clear enough. The article has suffered for years because editors have taken unilateral action on the article rather than seeking consensus first. On a contentious topic like this it is vital to discus and get consensus. Doubly so when there's a moderated discussion taking place. And triply so when there's an ArbCom case being held in suspension.... SilkTork 12:32, 15 June 2013 (UTC)
Well, someone just made an extreme undiscussed change in the first sentence of the article. What happens now? North8000 (talk) 22:49, 15 June 2013 (UTC)
I've just notified that editor of the Moderated dicsussion User_talk:John_Paul_Parks#Tea_Party_movement_and_the_Constitution.--Ubikwit見学/迷惑 02:20, 16 June 2013 (UTC)
Yes, that is the appropriate approach. I will copy this over to the talkpage so people are clear. SilkTork 11:37, 16 June 2013 (UTC)

If someone is already fully aware of the restrictions in place on the article, and they make an inappropriate edit, they will be sanctioned. If someone is not aware, they should be informed of the situation, and directed to this discussion page. Their edit can then be discussed and consensus sought as to what is to be done with it. Only obvious vandalism (such as "Misplaced Pages sucks", "My balls are big", "Wombats are best") and BLP violations should be reverted on sight. If it's a possible BLP violation it's best to revert and to let me know immediately - I will allow a fair amount of leeway on reverting possible BLP violations. Somebody in good faith adding, removing or altering content is not to be reverted. However, somebody who adds, removes or alters content without consensus and after being informed of the restrictions in place, will be sanctioned. Notify me, and I will deal with it. I will revert the edit and sanction the editor. Anyone can inform an editor of the restrictions in place, but only an independent admin or myself can carry out reverts and sanctions.

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I hope that is clear. SilkTork 11:57, 16 June 2013 (UTC)

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Sounds like a good 3/4 of a plan but is missing an important item. So drive-bys can edit it any way, and their edits can only be reverted by consensus? Guess where that will end up. North8000 (talk) 13:21, 16 June 2013 (UTC)
Nothing is missing. A "drive by edit" is not by default a bad edit, and editors need to accept that the principle of Misplaced Pages editing is that we welcome contributions from all - not just those who have edited an article for a long time. An expert on the Tea Party movement may read the article, note some errors, or missing information, and quickly amend the article and move on. This is to be encouraged, not reverted. It would be better for folks to concentrate on sorting out the article rather than quibbling at attempts to moderate the process. SilkTork 09:27, 18 June 2013 (UTC)
Proposal to work on one narrow item

The phrase "one somewhat personified by Ron Paul and the other by Sarah Palin. "Paulites" have a Jeffersonian, "neo-isolationist" approach" which says or implies that Ron Paul, (the person who wants free trade with Cuba) is an isolationist. This says or implies that a living person has a belief/agenda that is opposite to his actual belief/agenda. An erroneous word in a source is certainly not enough to place/repeat the false statement/implication (particularly about a living person) in Misplaced Pages.

Also, although the source used the word/said it, there is no requirement that everything that every source says and every word used (right or wrong) must get put into the article.

The proposal is to reword (or delete the whole sentence if necessary) to remove any statement/implication that Ron Paul is a (neo)isolationist. North8000 (talk) 14:39, 12 June 2013 (UTC)

well said! Paul is a non-interventionist, meaning free trade with all, entangling alliances with none. Darkstar1st (talk) 14:48, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
As far as I am aware, Jefferson's approach has conventionally been referred to as isolationist, but he was not against free trade or interacting with other nations, or even sending the military to deal with pirates.
good point and part of the problem, few people, including RS know the actual def of Isolationism, the policy or doctrine of isolating one's country from the affairs of other nations by declining to enter into alliances, foreign economic commitments, foreign trade... Darkstar1st (talk) 18:04, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
So, if a reliable source says "Jeffersonian" neo-isolationist (does the quote include Jeffersonian?), then it should not be considered misleading, as there is a historical context for that discourse. If a more modern and nuanced parlance is preferred, find a reliable source that uses such phraseology. If it has been found to be sufficiently objectionable, then there should be corresponding sources.--Ubikwit見学/迷惑 16:17, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
Just leave out calling Ron Paul an "isolationist". Simple. North8000 (talk) 17:18, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
 Done I have removed the word "neo-isolationist" from the mainspace. regards .... Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 03:26, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
What is the basis of the presumption of consensus on that? I don't believe that the discussion of the sources had even been concluded. Note that I wouldn't necessarily be opposed to the terms removal, I just want to see a source-based rationale.
I haven't looked at the edit, but the term non-interventionist would be significantly more narrow in scope than "Jeffersonian neo-isolationist", which appears to have been cited from a reliable source, if I recall correctly.
I do not believe that the unlocking of the article is a license for anyone to make such edits without adequate discussion here, first.--Ubikwit見学/迷惑 06:08, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
Try reviewing the edit. The entire meaning of the statement has been well preserved. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 12:02, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
Yes, the statement can be made without mislabeling Ron Paul as an isolationist. Doubly so since the statement isn't even about Ron Paul. North8000 (talk) 13:21, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
Edits since the article has been unlocked

Not encouraging.

  • An edit "boldly" removing sourced information regarding perceptions of the Tea Party. I am assuming this was done under the impression that if information is in the lead it does not have to be in the article. That is a misunderstanding of how articles are constructed - see WP:Lead. I had indicated earlier that "The lead should be a summary of what is in the main article, so there will be duplication of information". Following the edit removing that information, the main body of the article now does not contain key information regarding perceptions of the Tea Party; and there is material summarised in the lead that is not mentioned in the main body. These are basic errors that should not be taking place at this stage as we move toward improving the article. Please, nobody make any "bold" edits. Removing sourced material should not happen without a discussion here. To underscore the importance of this, Phoenix and Winslow is topic-banned from the article for one week for removing sourced content without first getting consensus. I will reinstate the information. If people are uncomfortable with the wording in the lead and the main body being so similar, that is a copy-editing solution in which the wording is altered, but the information remains.
  • There has been a revert with the instruction "Please take it to talk". A significant part of the problem with this article has been the reverting. The approach to be taken is to approach the editor responsible for the questionable edit, and discus the matter with them first. If unable to resolve the matter, get a wider consensus on this talkpage. Nobody should be reverting unless the edit is clear and obvious vandalism or BLP violation, or there is consensus for the revert. Reverting because of disagreement over content should not be taking place, and any instances of that happening, the reverter will be sanctioned.
  • There is a complaint on my talkpage regarding two edits by North, both of which are marked "Please revert me if you do not agree". If you are unsure about an edit, do not make it - come here for consensus first. Do not ask people to revert on an article with a revert restriction. This is tantamount to a honey trap. Reverting as a standard mode of editing needs to stop on this article. We should be aiming for an editing approach that does not involve reverting at all. I have looked at both edits. The first is acceptable as North was correcting a clear error. Such edits are encouraged. The second edit alters information without first having checked the source. We don't do that in any article. We don't guess. We don't make assumptions. We check our facts. A basic editing error. That is unacceptable in any article. It is particularly bad on this one. For making a revert without consensus. And for altering information without consensus. North8000 is also topic banned from this article for one week.

I am not comfortable that in less than 48 hours of the article being unlocked there have been such poor examples of editing. I don't wish to put a chill effect on this article. But I do want to send out the message that if your editing skills and judgement are not up to the job you should not edit this article. If your contributions to this article are more negative than positive, then you need to either stay away voluntarily, or you will be forced to stay away. In just over two weeks ArbCom will reconvene to decide what is to happen regarding this article and those editors involved in editing it. I really want this article to be in good shape and making progress. If that means cutting out some editors along the way, then so be it. Time is running out. Let's get some quality editing done please. No more reverting. No more making assumptions. No more "bold" edits that remove sourced content. No more making political statements. If you are more interested in grandstanding your political views, then this article is not for you. There is some serious encyclopaedic work that needs to be done in the next two weeks. I'd like to see folks focus on that. SilkTork 16:50, 14 June 2013 (UTC)

"I don't wish to put a chill effect on this article."
Well, that effect is already present. I've felt the inclination to remove editorializations of RS's and apply other corrections that would be proven non-controversial 95% of the time. Foresight of knee-jerk reactions have steered me towards inaction. Make of that what you will. Being said, North8000's removal of the 17th amendment was wrong. Both factually and procedurally. As for P&W's edit, there's a problem with the statement "...called partly conservative, partly libertarian, and partly populist." (which appears in the lead) not being supported in the body of subarticle, Perceptions of the Tea Party movement, let alone the summary thereof in the body of Tea Party movement. So, what we have is a violation of WP:Lead in both articles. Perhaps, the best course of action would be removal in both the lead and body of TPM until it's supported in the body of "Perceptions." Lest we continue to support more "poor examples of editing." TETalk 18:27, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
First, I think Silk Tork's clarification of editing rules is brilliant and very clear and certainly easily followed from now on. So no excuses ever again. Second, I'm confused now about what the para is supposed to say, and I've asked P&W below to clarify his perceptions of what was to be included. We absolutely must all be on the same page here to prevent this happening again. Malke 2010 (talk) 18:39, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
Topic bans

User:North8000 and User:Phoenix and Winslow are banned from editing the Tea Party movement article until this time on 21 June 2013. If they do edit the article they will be blocked. They may continue to join in the discussion on this page. SilkTork 17:02, 14 June 2013 (UTC)

That was unnecessary. I did not remove sourced content from the article since it's still there, in the lede section of the article. I removed redundant material in an effort to proceed in a constructive way. That's all. Is trying to work constructively here going to be like a walk through a minefield every day? Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 18:15, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
Maybe I'm having a "Junior moment" (as opposed to a senior moment), but I was under the impression that the material in the perceptions section was to be moved to the subarticle once the remaining para in the main was agreed upon. Did we not agree to the version by Collect which you then changed? Or did we agree to the version you crafted earlier and did Silk Tork not action that edit? Please clarify, thanks. Malke 2010 (talk) 18:34, 14 June 2013 (UTC)

That was totally uncalled for! It was a gnome edit, the edit summary asked anybody who disagreed to revert me'. Where is the controversy? Who is going to argue that a TPM agenda item is to prevent the states from being allowed to pick their Senators by an election? And I don't even see that rule that you are describing anywhere. Where is it? You are going to turn this article into a fifth rail that nobody is going to want to risk working on. North8000 (talk) 01:16, 15 June 2013 (UTC)

Archiving

FWIW: It might be best to just have Silk Tork 'hat' discussions rather than archiving. Especially in case of any misunderstandings, the previous discussions are readily viewed. Malke 2010 (talk) 19:12, 14 June 2013 (UTC)

I recognise there is a desire to keep the discussion all on one page, and I did try to hat all the closed discussions, but the page was becoming unwieldy, so I have moved all the closed discussions to a subpage: /Closed discussions. I note there is an archive system in place, though there has been some disagreement over archiving, and how to do it. As part of the discussion on archiving, there should be consideration on how the archives of this page are to fit into the archives of the article talkpage. My moving of the closed discussions to a subpage is not ideal, as that subpage will need attention as it is not easy to navigate due to being very long, and the discussions are all hatted rather than being visible. So that should be seen as simply a temporary measure to free up editing of this page. SilkTork 10:12, 18 June 2013 (UTC)

’’Version 17’’, (version 12d revised for readability)

Overall readability scores 14/31 - partially de-archived

The Tea Party doesn't have a single uniform agenda. The decentralized character of the Tea Party, with its lack of formal structure or hierarchy, allows each autonomous group to set its own priorities and goals. Goals may conflict, and priorities will often differ between groups. Many Tea Party organizers see this as a strength rather than a weakness, as decentralization has helped to immunize the Tea Party against co-opting by outside entities and corruption from within.

The Tea Party has generally sought to avoid placing too much emphasis on traditional conservative social issues. National Tea Party organizations, such as the Tea Party Patriots and FreedomWorks, have expressed concern that engaging in social issues would be divisive. Instead, they have sought to have activists focus their efforts away from social issues and focus on economic and limited government issues. Still, many groups like Glenn Beck's 9/12 Tea Parties, TeaParty.org, the Iowa Tea Party and Delaware Patriot Organizations do act on social issues such as abortion, gun control, prayer in schools, and illegal immigration.

The Tea Party generally focuses on government reform. Among its goals are limiting the size of the federal government, reducing government spending, lowering the national debt and opposing tax increases. To this end, Tea Party groups have protested TARP, stimulus programs, cap and trade, health care reform and perceived attacks by the federal government on their 1st, 2nd, 4th and 10th Amendment rights. Tea Party groups have also voiced support for right to work legislation as well as tighter border security, and opposed amnesty for illegal immigrants. They have formed Super PACs to support candidates sympathetic to their goals and have opposed what they call the "Republican establishment" candidates. After setbacks in the 2012 elections, the movement again shifted its focus. With repeal off the table, the Tea party now leads efforts to nullify federal health care law. It has also mobilized locally against the United Nations Agenda 21. They have protested the IRS for controversial treatment of groups with "tea party" in their names.

Even though the groups have a wide range of different goals, the Tea Party places the Constitution at the center of its reform agenda. It urges the return of government as intended by the Founding Fathers. It also seeks to teach its view of the Constitution and other founding documents. Scholars have described its interpretation variously as originalist, popular, or a unique combination of the two. Reliance on the Constitution is selective and inconsistent. Adherents cite it, yet do so more as a cultural reference rather than out of commitment to the text, which they seek to alter. Several constitutional amendments have been targeted by some in the movement for full or partial repeal, including the 14th, 16th, and 17th. There has also been support for a proposed Repeal Amendment, which would enable a two-thirds majority of the states to repeal federal laws, and a Balanced Budget Amendment, which would limit deficit spending.

One attempt at forming a list of what Tea Partiers wanted Congress to do resulted in the Contract from America. It was a legislative agenda created by conservative activist Ryan Hecker with the assistance of Dick Armey of FreedomWorks. Armey had co-written the previous Contract with America released by the Republican Party during the 1994 midterm elections. One thousand agenda ideas that had been submitted were narrowed down to twenty-one non-social issues. Participants then voted in an online campaign in which they were asked to select their favorite policy planks. The results were released as a ten-point Tea Party platform. The Contract from America was met with some support within the Republican Party, but it was not broadly embraced by GOP leadership, which released its own 'Pledge to America'.

Unresolved concerns:

4) Introduce the pedestrian understanding of constitutional originalism by sociologists: Reliance on the Constitution is selective and inconsistent. Adherents cite it, yet do so as a cultural reference rather than out of commitment to the text, which they seek to alter.
Addendum: Malke and P&W's versions both have this sentence in their proposed paragraph on Contract from America, which I don't object to adding if we intend to scrap the present subsection on that same topic:
The top ten included "identify the constitutionality of every new law, reject cap and trade legislation, demand a balanced federal budget, simplify the tax code, assess constitutionality of federal agencies, limit growth in annual federal spending, repeal Obamacare, new energy policy that supports exploration, reduce earmarks, and reduce federal taxes."
Xenophrenic (talk) 10:25, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
I'd keep the list, but we do need a merge for reduced redundancy. TETalk 21:30, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
Same answer as the previous 5 versions. Good enough to go in as a starting point for further work. With the understanding that it needs changes which we can handle then. (Including later fixing the travesty "Reliance on the Constitution is selective and inconsistent." If someone advocates blacks' right to vote and cites the constitution, but fails to advocate the right to bear arms in the same speech, do you put that "inconsistent" statement in their article?) Would not replace the subsections which would be handled separately. North8000 (talk) 13:41, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
re: Reliance on the Constitution is selective and inconsistent. Adherents cite it, yet do so as a cultural reference rather than out of commitment to the text, which they seek to alter.
Two objections have been raised about that text. The first, is that it is opinion, rather than reliably sourced fact. This is incorrect; the sources do not say they are opining, and the sources (the Oxford University published book, and the peer-reviewed academic paper) are indeed reliable. Also, equally reliable sources calling that text into question have not been produced. Further objections along those lines would be better handled at WP:RSN.
The second objection, as I understand it, is that the text is inaccurate or false. The "right to vote/right to bear arms" example doesn't exemplify the reasoning behind the "inconsistent" description being used here. Here is some of the source content supporting the proposed text:

It can further be found in the TPM’s recurring cultural theme of returning to the ideals of the Constitution. Like the Tea Party name, this theme is selectively nostalgic Support for Constitutional principles is not absolute. TPM supporters were twice as likely than others to favor a constitutional amendment banning flag burning; many also support efforts to overturn citizenship as defined by the Fourteenth Amendment. That TPM supporters simultaneously want to honor the founders’ Constitution and alter that same document highlights the political flexibility of the cultural symbols they draw on. The TPM supporters’ inconsistent views of the Constitution suggests that their nostalgic embrace of the document is animated more by a network of cultural associations than a thorough commitment to the original text. (Perrin, Pgs. 7-8)

They are doing what every political endeavor does: using history as a source of inspiration and social identity. Just like other political actors, past and present, Tea Partiers stretch the limits of the Constitution, use it selectively, and push for amendments. Tea Partiers have argued for measures such as restrictions on birthright citizenship, abridgements of freedom of religion for Muslim-Americans, and suspension of protections in the Bill of Rights for suspected terrorists. Some parts of the Constitution are lauded over others. (Skocpol/Williamson, Pgs. 50-51)

The "inconsistency" is not so much that they do advocate one part while not advocating another part of the Constitution (although they do that, too), but more that they advocate adherance to the constitution while at the same time advocating amending or repealing. Did I incorrectly word what the sources are saying, or is the contention that the sources are just wrong? Xenophrenic (talk) 19:59, 10 July 2013 (UTC) (I note that North8000 is travelling, and says we can fix this later, but I thought I'd at least try to get a clearer picture of the objection.) Xenophrenic (talk) 19:59, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
I'd call it misleading POV wording, including if a source said it. Again, we can fix this after it's in. North8000 (talk) 13:36, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
"A source" didn't say it, many sources have. Here's another one:

The Tea Partiers' view of the Constitution was commonly described as "originalism," a fidelity to the exact words of the document as they were written in 1787 that has adherents at major universities and, in Antonin Scalia and Clarence Thomas, on the U.S. Supreme Court. And some Tea Partiers' version of the Constitution sounded just like that. But many others were learning subjective interpretations of the Constitution that went beyond the primary source, and beyond what legal scholars or Americans would recognize—even using a dictionary—in reading the original document. (Zernike; Boiling Mad, Pgs. 67-68)

And another one in this academic, peer reviewed paper contrasting conservative originalism with progressive living constitutionalism (cited in no fewer than 33 academic journals and papers):

It serves as a critical counterweight to the distorted history pedaled by many conservative politicians and activists, including the members of the Tea Party. These activists seek to portray themselves as the true defenders of the Constitution, but they are selective in their defense and in their vision. They incorrectly portray the powers of the federal government established by the original Constitution as exceedingly limited, which ignores both the language of the Constitution and the crucial fact that it was adopted in response to the flawed Articles of Confederation, which failed to establish a strong national government. In addition to distorting the original Constitution, Tea Partiers often pretend as if the Constitution were never amended and therefore simply ignore the expansion of individual rights and federal power accomplished by those amendments. When selective amnesia fails, they call for jettisoning portions of the Constitution they dislike, including the guarantee of citizenship in the Fourteenth Amendment to all who are born in the United States. Indeed, Justice Scalia jumped on the Tea Party bandwagon last year in suggesting that the Seventeenth Amendment was a bad idea, which is simultaneously remarkable and somewhat beside the point for a sitting Justice, whose oath is to defend the Constitution—even the parts he may not like. Put simply, the rise of the Tea Party has led to a national debate over the meaning of the Constitution, which has recently focused on the constitutionality of health care reform. The distortions, selective reading of the Constitution, and calls for constitutional amendments by Tea Partiers demand a response from progressives, and Amar‘s work outlines a devastating one. But there is a further lesson in here for progressives who remain uncertain about the wisdom of embracing the Constitution. If the Tea Partiers have to fiddle so much with the actual Constitution in order to claim that it supports their positions, doesn‘t that in itself constitute excellent proof that the real Constitution is not nearly as conservative as the Tea Partiers would like? (James E. Ryan; Virginia Law Review, Pgs. 19-20)

Another highly regarded source published by Johns Hopkins University Press makes this observation in his book specifically about the Tea Party movement:

The federal government, especially Congress, must be held to a strict interpretation of the Constitution. Like other Americans, however, Tea Party supporters are selective about which passages to ignore and which to revere. (Formisano; Pg. 52)

So, to recap, here's the proposed text based on many reliable sources: "Reliance on the Constitution is selective and inconsistent. Adherents cite it, yet do so more as a cultural reference rather than out of commitment to the text, which they seek to alter." That accurately conveys what the multiple reliable sources say, without being misleading. Are there other concerns?
Xenophrenic (talk) 05:44, 21 July 2013 (UTC)

Getting back to work

Suggestions on what to work on next

It might be a good idea to open a section addressing the specific government programs the TP opposes and include the Social Security and Medicare programs which TP members depend on. Tea Party members and their supporters don't seem to be against them, yet these programs represent the same kind of huge government programs they are opposed to.

Malke 2010 (talk) 15:17, 12 June 2013 (UTC)

That would prove difficult. How do we delve into the complexity of Medicare which older Americans paid into their entire lives only to see cut for another entitlement (Obamacare), and social security which is backed by IOU's the federal government can only pay back with increased taxes or borrowing? Even saying they oppose these programs is troublesome. Opposition is more to the administration of such programs. TETalk 15:31, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
I thought it was an interesting dichotomy. Look at the demographic. They're all headed for retirement and will need these programs. I've mentioned this several times back in 2010 but nobody ever wanted to do it. Malke 2010 (talk) 16:23, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
  • Malke, please feel free to write a couple of paragraphs on that topic and post them here for approval. If there's a reliable source which specifically addresses that "interesting dichotomy," it should be identified and cited like this:

Joe Blow, a political science professor at Wassamatta U., has examined the "paradox" created by the Tea Party movement's support for reform of Social Security and Medicare. Blow observes this support is not in the self-interest of many Tea Party members, since they tend to be over 50 years old and will be relying on these programs in a few years.

  • There are three steps I'd like to take right away:
  1. One thing I think we should take action on immediately is adding the word "grass-roots" (with the Wikilink) to the lede sentence. We were discussing it just before the moderated discussion started. I felt we had consensus for it, since there were so many reliable sources to support it. The allegations about Astroturfing have one or two sources, and are clearly a minority opinion per WP:WEIGHT.
  2. Another thing we should consider immediately is removing the Other events section. The removal of the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" section has kind of orphaned THIS section. I suggest we cut the length of the paragraph about the gas grill in half, and add both events to the list of bulleted incidents at the end of Perceptions of the Tea Party movement, in chronological order.
  3. Also, there's a subsection at the beginning of the "History" section called Commentaries on origin. Nothing there is notable enough to remain in this top-level article. It should be moved to the spin-off article, Perceptions of the Tea Party movement, after the bulleted list of incidents.
  • Strongly support. Now that the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" roadblock has finally been removed, we can move forward with several other items that have been waiting patiently. The "grass-roots" edit, for example, has been waiting for two months. Let's get these three items done and move on. regards .... Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 03:26, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
(A) There's nothing "haphazard" about it, and we have previously discussed more than one edit at a time — usually removal of the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" section, plus some other edit. (B) I don't see any substantive objection, just a procedural one, which has just been addressed — see (A). Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 12:02, 13 June 2013 (UTC)

I didn't have a chance to get back yesterday, but I realized the first goal here is to reduce content. I will postpone the Soc Sec issue until the reductions have been completed. My suggestion for further reducing content that might take the tension off from that last edit, is to reduce the protest/rally sections. We already have Tea Party protests and the content could easily be transferred there. My suggestion for a remaining para, with a link to the main, is focus on the beginnings and then mention the spread to national, without too much detail. Just generalized. I'd be happy to write up a sample para if anybody is interested.

On the grassroots bit, because there's so much controversy about it (with editors), it is something that needs to be addressed here. We do have to take things one at a time. I just thought something easy, like reducing the protests section, might be something that is easy and could help foster a more collegial atmosphere. The race/bigotry section was stressful for all. (And I agree about the History section with it's "commentaries" subsection. I also agree with transferring the "Other events" section the subarticle.)

Malke 2010 (talk) 13:16, 13 June 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, maybe leave "grass roots" for later. North8000 (talk) 14:01, 13 June 2013 (UTC)

I think that possibly the most messed up section in the article is the "polling of supporters". It's a wp:synth wp:or fest, about the worst abuse of primary sources I've ever seen, uses hostile op-ed pieces as a "source" of polling data, and has misleading or inaccurate summaries. Many "gems" in there. For example "predominantly white" (any group representative of US polulaiotn is going to be "predominantly white") A good candidate to take a close look at. North8000 (talk) 11:32, 14 June 2013 (UTC)

This article was loaded with gems like that when we started. It was like the home of a hoarder. Now that responsible Wikipedians have taken charge of the situation and we're trying to clean it up, we're going to be hauling rubbish out of here for weeks. Every time we open the door to a new section, there's going to be a little avalanche of garbage falling out. regards ... Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 16:19, 14 June 2013 (UTC)

Let's get back to work

I think we should get back to work. The article has been substantially improved, but we still have a lot of work to do. SilkTork has left us since he's traveling during the next week and won't have Internet access. The ArbCom case has started up again, so I'm sure we'll all be on our best behavior, and we have a rough framework of rules for future procedure proposed by North8000.

The race/bigotry section and the agenda section were very difficult and stressful for everyone. It seems to me that to a very substantial extent, they are done. There may be some follow-up work to do with the agenda sub-sections, and some tweaking of the language we've already added/changed in that section (including refcites — ). But I think the big problems have been resolved, and we can go forward with some less challenging portions of the article.

Let's get on the stick.

My proposal for three minor improvements will be slightly modified as described below. This is to make it more attractive to those who may have been opposed to the original proposal. Modified portions and some explanation and argument have been added in italics and strikethrough.

  1. One thing I think we should take action on immediately is adding the word "grass-roots" (with the Wikilink) to the lede sentence. We were discussing it just before the moderated discussion started. I felt we had consensus for it, since there were so many reliable sources to support it. The allegations about Astroturfing have one or two sources, and are clearly a minority opinion per WP:WEIGHT. Astroturfing allegations have already been presented in the body of the article. If necessary, these can be expanded upon, particularly with footnoted blockquotes from Formisano and Skocpol.
  2. Another thing we should consider immediately is removing the Other events section. The removal of the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" section has kind of orphaned THIS section. I suggest we cut the length of the paragraph about the gas grill in half, and add both events to the list of bulleted incidents at the end of Perceptions of the Tea Party movement, in chronological order.
  3. Also, there's a subsection at the beginning of the "History" section called Commentaries on origin. Nothing there is notable enough to remain in this top-level article. It should be moved to the spin-off article, Perceptions of the Tea Party movement, after the bulleted list of incidents. I think it's important to identify this as "criticism and commentaries," since that's what it is, and identify critics as progressives and anti-tobacco activists, since their motives in raising these criticisms are most likely partisan.
  • Strongly support. Now that the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" roadblock and the agenda roadblock has have finally been removed, we can move forward with several other items that have been waiting patiently. The "grass-roots" edit, for example, has been waiting for two three months. Let's get these three items done and move on. regards .... Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 13:45, 6 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Comment The addition of grass roots was opposed P&W and you continue to confuse voting with consensus. Otherwise I really don't see the point until the Arbcom position is settled. It ha gone back there because this approach did not work. ----Snowded 04:50, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
There's no confusion on my part, Snowded. The TPm is a grass-roots movement; this is the majority position per WP:WEIGHT. The example that I used in previous incarnations of this thread was the Waterboarding article. Even though a minority of reliable sources, including (at that time) the Vice President of the United States, the Attorney General, and two Deputy Attorneys General were of the opinion that in some cases waterboarding was not torture, a majority of sources stated that it was torture. Accordingly, the first six words of the Waterboarding article are, "Waterboarding is a form of torture" In previous incarnations of this discussion thread over the past six months, I've linked at least 18 reliable sources stating that the TPm is a grass-roots movement. These included both peer-reviewed academic and fact-checked news organization sources. Those editors who opposed the edit cited two sources: one by Ron Formisano, who claims that a few groups associated with TPm are engaged in Astroturfing, and one by Theda Skocpol, who observes that the TPm is neither grass-roots nor Astroturf, but something in between. Even if we count both of these sources as sharing the same minority opinion, it's eighteen to two — clearly a majority opinion and a minority opinion per WP:WEIGHT.
But it isn't even that good for those who oppose the edit, Snowded. It's eighteen for the majority opinion, one for a minority opinion, and one for a different minority opinion, because Formisano and Skocpol don't share the same opinion. Clearly, the authors of the Waterboarding article have shown us how to handle this situation. Review the archives of that article's Talk page. Those who opposed that edit were very determined, but they lost the content dispute. Here, we also see support for treating obvious minority opinions as something other than the minority. This is a policy based argument, Snowded. Policy based arguments, not votes, determine consensus per WP:CLOSE and WP:CONSENSUS. You see, there's no confusion on my part about what constitutes consensus at Misplaced Pages. Do you have a policy based argument?
Next, let's examine your desire to wait until the ArbCom decision. Are you waiting for ArbCom to issue topic bans for one side in the content dispute, and then the other side can have its way? ArbCom doesn't decide content disputes. Policy decides content disputes and here, the policy is WP:WEIGHT. Also, you claim that "this approach did not work." It wasn't allowed to work. The first time, we had consensus and SilkTork shut down the discussion to steer us into "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception." The second time, SilkTork shut down the discussion to steer us into the "Agenda" section. Let's get an admin from WP:AN to close this, and provide him with links to the previous two discussions. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 05:39, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
That response illustrates why the Arbcom resolution is needed before progress can be made ----Snowded 09:46, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
Now you are back here - your !vote is solicited above in Lis alibi pendens. Collect (talk) 11:58, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
A month block for a problematic editor on various Philosophy articles has given me some time Collect but I'm not 100% on my continued participation. I'm waiting to see what comes out of the Arbcom ruling. However I have responded to your request and personal hat tip to you by the way. We've had our disagreements over the years but you do seem to be trying to make some progress here. ----Snowded 13:56, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
  • That response illustrates why the Arbcom resolution is needed before progress can be made Perhaps you'd care to explain, Snowded. I politely provided a fairly thorough policy based argument. Do you have a policy based argument that explains why the edit shouldn't be actioned? If not, why shouldn't the edit be actioned? Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 15:36, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
I and other editors have explained the issue elsewhere P&W, this is just another manifestation, counting votes, repeating your arguments as if they were uncontroversial conclusions and at length. Sorry been here too many times to go through it all again ----Snowded 02:13, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
I agree that a persuasive argument has yet to be made, and the past discussions are being misrepresented here as an "18 sources versus just 2 sources" weight discussion, which simply isn't the situation. To use a clearer analogy, if Blitzo Motor Company makes a hybrid car (gas/electric), we don't put a sentence in our article lead about that car saying simply "this car is gasoline-powered". Sure, you can come up with 18 sources that say it runs on gas, and it does, but that isn't the whole truth. It also runs on electricity, and that isn't a "minority opinion", it's a fact - and it remains a fact regardless of how many sources are produced saying so. Xenophrenic (talk) 17:59, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
Once again, it's being claimed that a source must also say "There is no part of TPm that is Astroturfed" in order for that source to be counted as a "TPm is grass-roots" source. When a source says "TPm is grass-roots," that necessarily contains the implicit statement, "There is no part of TPm that is Astroturfed." See my previous analogy about the Elephant article. If several reliable sources state, "The elephant is an animal," necessarily implicit in that statement is, "The elephant is not a plant." Finding reliable sources which describe elephant ears as plants, and then trying to insert the statement, "Many scholarly sources have indicated that extensive portions of the elephant are a plant" in the Elephant article, and keep the statement, "The elephant is an animal" out of the lede, is analogous to this effort to describe TPm in this article as Astroturfed. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 15:14, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
I don't see where that claim is being made. Reliable sources say there are many grassroots activists in the movement, which has been significantly astroturfed. Are you claiming, against reliable sources, that there has been no astroturfing of the movement, or are you only claiming that we shouldn't mention that fact in the lead of the article? Xenophrenic (talk) 16:01, 10 July 2013 (UTC)

Note: The new posited rules disallow such colloquy - I suggest we start now with not mentioning any editors by name in any post, not even using "you." Collect (talk) 10:47, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

TPm = G
are somehow outweighed by one WP:SCHOLARSHIP source (Formisano) saying
TPm = (1⁄2 G) + (1⁄2 A)
and one WP:SCHOLARSHIP source (Skocpol) saying
TPm = D
(neither A nor G, but something in between). If anyone's recollection of the opposing arguments is any different — or if you have some other, more convincing argument besides
1 + 1 > 18
then please post it, and enlighten me. Because perhaps I'm just too stupid, but I really don't understand why the policy based argument I've just posted is NOT an uncontroversial conclusion. regards ... Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 13:52, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Regarding the removal of the Other events section, and putting that material in the bulleted list of incidents at the end of the Perceptions spin-off article, in chronological order: this is the top-level article in a series on a complex subject, which has at least three satellite articles. Please see WP:N and the notability guideline on WP:EVENT. The vandalism of someone's gas grill, for example, fails notability on several counts for a top-level article. These events clearly belong in the "Perceptions" spin-off article, not this top-level article.
  • Regarding removal of the Commentaries on origin subsection and its placement in the "Perceptions" spin-off article, again this fails notability requirements for a top-level article in a series. These are minority opinions at best, and fringe theories at worst. The article in Tobacco Control magazine, especially, has been carefully ignored by mainstream news organizations, and there are well-grounded questions regarding its political motivations. WP:N, WP:WEIGHT and WP:FRINGE all indicate that the spin-off article is where these commentaries belong.
Just a quick note, P&W: The guidelines you linked above (WP:N and WP:EVENT) apply to notability of an "article", and not to notability of content within an existing article, which is what we are discussing. I made that same mistake years ago, and was corrected by a couple helpful editors. WP:WEIGHT is the applicable guideline here. You should also be aware that content determined to be inappropriate for our main article due to policy reasons is equally inappropriate for a spinoff article. Material is moved to spinoff articles only because it has grown too lengthy or detailed, not because the content "fails notability", "is minority opinion" or "is fringe". Moving it for those reasons means you are trying to create a POV-FORK, and that's against policy. Xenophrenic (talk) 17:59, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
  • The material does fail notability for the top-level article in a series. See WP:SUMMARY and WP:SPLIT for the official Misplaced Pages guideline. Perhaps the most directly on-point WP policy/guideline is not WP:N, but a section of WP:SUMMARY called WP:DETAIL:

Summary style is based on the premise that information about a topic should not all be contained in a single article since different readers have different needs ... The parent article should have general summary information and the more detailed summaries of each subtopic should be in child articles and in articles on specific subjects.

  • Particularly since the list of alleged racist incidents has been moved to the spin-off article, the "Other events" section has been orphaned and should be moved as well. See also WP:SCOPE. Personal opinions held by notable, but partisan individuals about the origins of the Tea Party are beyond the topical scope of this article. The Perceptions article is a more appropriate place for them. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 15:32, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
  • The material does fail notability for the top-level article in a series. --P&W
There is no "notability" requirement for content, but there are several guidelines on whether content is appropriate for a Misplaced Pages article. However, if content is not policy-compliant for the main article, it is also inappropriate for subarticles. See WP:NNC. Regarding the origins of the movement, that kind of content is definitely within the scope of the main article. The brief paragraph you refer to as commentary actually appears to be a mix of commentary and fact, and should instead be re-written. re: the "Other events" section (that header, frankly, sucks), are you now claiming it is too detailed or long (per WP:DETAIL)? Xenophrenic (talk) 16:55, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
  • The brief paragraph you refer to as commentary actually appears to be a mix of commentary and fact ... There are no "facts" here at Misplaced Pages, because it doesn't matter whether we as editors believe a statement is true. There are only viewpoints expressed by (and verifiable in) reliable sources — and, when we find enough reliable sources expressing the same viewpoint, it's the majority viewpoint and we are required to treat it as the majority viewpoint. Here, the majority viewpoint per WP:WEIGHT is that the TPm is a grass-roots movement, period, full stop. The Waterboarding article tells us how we should state this majority viewpoint:
"Waterboarding is a form of torture ..."
"The Tea Party movement is an American grass-roots political movement that advocates ..."
  • There is no "notability" requirement for content ... WP:SUMMARY, particularly WP:DETAIL, requires that the Perceptions of the Tea Party section must be written as "general summary information" regarding the topical scope of the Perceptions of the Tea Party movement sub-article, which is about allegations of "racism, bigotry and intolerance." It's that "intolerance" bit at the end that steers this discussion. It was alleged that some TPm people in Maryland were "intolerant" of a congressman who voted i favor of the Affordable Care Act, and gave Tea Party members directions to what they thought was that congressman's house as an expression of this "intolerance." These allegations, and the related vandalism of a gas grill at that house in Maryland don't belong in the "general summary information" in the parent article. They belong in the spin-off article. The relevant sections of Misplaced Pages policy/guidelines that govern this are WP:DETAIL and WP:SCOPE. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 18:39, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
You are still arguing to mention grassroots in the lead? As noted several times before, there isn't any real opposition to that (correct me if I'm wrong). The objection is to your suggestion that we cover "grassroots" without also covering "astroturf" in the lead. The prominence of both descriptions, in reliable sources that cover them, requires that we not mention just one of the descriptions, per WP:WEIGHT. That would be misleading to the readers. Xenophrenic (talk) 20:27, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
No it wouldn't mislead readers. Look at the lede to the Waterboarding article. It doesn't mention the viewpoint of several reliable sources that waterboarding, in some circumstances, is not torture but a "harsh interrogation" technique. Do you feel that its failure to mention the minority viewpoint in the article lede is misleading to readers? Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 20:53, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
Yes, it would mislead readers. Look closely at what you just said: "is not torture but a 'harsh interrogation' technique..." -- that is an either/or logic statement, which is a completely different situation. With the Tea Party, the reliable sources say we have an "and" situation ("grassroots activists AND astroturf influence"). And I still don't know what "minority viewpoint" you are talking about. The astroturf aspect of the movement is a fact; minority and majority quantifiers only apply to competing viewpoints. Xenophrenic (talk) 00:58, 13 July 2013 (UTC)

Responding to Snowded, it would take quite an effort and major course change by Arbcom to help this, because the case was so badly sent off on a tangent from the start. We need to and should keep trying here.

I am down to a few minutes per day on Misplaced Pages this week and in-depth analysis in beyond me this week. But P & W's ideas look good. I'm not big on worrying about vague characterizations like "grass roots" and no movement is without some purposeful organization / support, but if there ever was a movement where this term applies, TPM is it. North8000 (talk) 16:15, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

In addition to questioning the reliability and bias of the Tobacco Control article, it does not say anything in regard Grassroots v. AstroTurfed. At the most generous interpretation that they know what they're talking about, it says that one TPm organization was funded by (some of the) same people as the anti-anti-tobacco organizations. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 16:20, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

Request for closure

I am about to file a Request for Closure at WP:AN. Accordingly, I've reopened the collapsed subsection that had our mid-June discussion of these three minor improvements. The only objection at that time was Ubikwit saying we should only work on one thing at a time (the agenda section). Now that the agenda section has been substantially improved, we can get back to these three minor issues and get them resolved. Previous discussion at great length may be found here, here and here, during most of the month of April. The closer is asked to review all these discussions over the past three months, and indicate whether we have consensus for each of these three edits. Policy based arguments, not votes, determine consensus per WP:CLOSE and WP:CONSENSUS. regards ... Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 13:41, 9 July 2013 (UTC)

Regarding the minor issue of whether we should mention the Grassroot & AstroTurf aspects of the movement in the lead, or just mention one of those aspects in the lead to the exclusion of the other, it would be informative to note that a similar discussion was had in this mediation. The consensus was that if both descriptions are to appear in the lead, both would appear together. I don't see a change in that consensus, nor a valid argument to the contrary. As for your 2nd and 3rd minor issues, have those been discussed yet in any detail? Xenophrenic (talk) 17:59, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
That mediation was almost three years ago. One of the most active advocates for "Astroturfing" and opponents of "grass-roots" left Misplaced Pages a month later. And a large number of reliable sources, both WP:NEWSORG and WP:SCHOLARSHIP varieties, have been published since then. Regarding the other two proposed edits, there have been abundant opportunities to express concerns and no concerns were expressed, except Ubikwit saying we should only work on one thing at a time. The "one thing" we were working on has now been substantially completed. This has been discussed and tabled off and on for three months. It's time to turn it over to a closing admin and let him (or her) sort it out. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 18:22, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
The other 2 issues haven't been discussed because an editor (and also our Moderator) said we were to work on something else first, and you say the next step is to turn the issues over to an admin? Wouldn't the next step be to begin discussions it first (so the Admin will have something to "sort out")? As for the Grassroots/Astroturf descriptions matter, yes, other sources have been published since then -- and still the facts haven't changed. There are just more sources. Xenophrenic (talk) 18:33, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
On the mediation page we find an enormous number of additional sources (notably The Economist) to join the overwhelming number of reliable sources stating that it's a grass-roots movement. Thanks for providing the link to that wealth of additional reliable sources for the majority opinion per WP:WEIGHT. For the other two proposed edits, the material fails WP:N at for the top-level article in a series, but would be fine for a spin-off article. If there really is a policy based argument against them that has been withheld until now, when a closer has already been requested at WP:AN, please post it immediately rather than just talking about it. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 18:42, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
Incorrect. WP:N applies to articles, not content within an article. To quote: The notability guideline does not determine the content of articles, but only whether the topic should have its own article. And as noted above, per policy, if it is against policy in a main article, it is against policy in a sub article. I'm sure a knowledgable "closer" will confirm that for you. Regarding the Grassroots & Astroturfed nature of the movement, neither of those descriptions is "opinion", majority or otherwise (even though the Lexington piece in the Economist is an opinion piece), they are reliably sourced facts. Xenophrenic (talk) 19:39, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
WP:WEIGHT describes them as "viewpoints," not "facts." My mistake, I should have called them "viewpoints," rather than "opinions." One viewpoint — that the TPm is a grass-roots movement, and the fact that some components have accepted corporate donations does not compromise its essentially grass-roots nature — is clearly supported by a majority of the reliable sources, including Elizabeth Price Foley in her peer-reviewed works, The New York Times, The Washington Post, CBS News, National Public Radio and many other fact-checked news organizations. The other viewpoints are each supported by a small minority of the reliable sources. Regarding WP:N, that policy directs editors to several guidelines, one of which is WP:EVENT. There are various subsections within that guidelines such as WP:EFFECT, WP:INDEPTH, and WP:GEOSCOPE which provide clear guidance in demoting such events as the vandalism of someone's gas grill in Maryland to the spin-off article. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 20:38, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
To be more specific about what the reliable sources convey, the TPm consists of both grassroots activists as well as big-monied players and professional politicos, thinktanks and conservative elites that have sought to direct, fund, coordinate and use these "grassroots" efforts. And this fact is neither minority nor majority viewpoint. What "other" viewpoints are you speaking of? Regarding your alphabet-soup of policy links, please simply quote the section of the policy you are acting under, and the content you are applying it to, and let's discuss it. All the ones you linked do not apply here. They apply to the creation of Misplaced Pages articles. Xenophrenic (talk) 20:56, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
The fact that some RS support "A + G" while others support "G" does not negate the fact that the ones supporting "G" vastly outnumber the ones supporting "A + G" and are therefore the majority per WP:WEIGHT. Is there any argument in favor of treating "Astroturfed plus grass-roots" as the majority viewpoint? How many reliable sources support this viewpoint? We've been over this exhaustively. Many of the sources just don't support "Astroturfed plus grass-roots." Some, such as NPR ask the question "Is TPm Astroturfed plus grass-roots?" but do not answer "yes." Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 22:04, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
The fact that the movement has genuine grassroots activists in it is a majority viewpoint (as contrasted with not having grassroots activists in it), not the majority viewpoint. It is also a "majority viewpoint" that the movement has been extensively astroturfed, is conservative, takes stances on fiscal issues, had influence in the 2010 elections, etc. Minority viewpoints, for example, would be the ones saying there are no grassroots activists in the movement, or there is no astroturf influencing of the movement, or that the movement had no influence on the 2010 elections. The fact that RS saying the TP movement is concervative vastly outnumber the ones mentioning grassroots doesn't mean the grassroots description is a minority viewpoint. Xenophrenic (talk) 10:25, 10 July 2013 (UTC)

Extended discussion of grass-roots and astroturf

  • Please use colons to indent properly when responding per WP:TALK policy.
  • It is also a "majority viewpoint" that the movement has been extensively astroturfed ... This is a false statement.
  • Minority viewpoints, for example, would be the ones saying ... there is no astroturf influencing of the movement ... This is also a false statement. What makes these false statements is the overwhelming number of sources saying, "It's a grass-roots movement," without any hesitation or qualification (including not only both peer-reviewed academic and fact-checked news organization sources, but also the Tea Party groups themselves, which must be considered reliable in this limited context under WP:SELFSOURCE), compared to the ones like Formisano saying, "It's partially Astroturfed." The ratio is at least 3-to-1 and may be as high as 10-to-1.
  • Most of the sources presented in this three-year discussion, which were claimed by some editors to say, "It's partially Astroturfed," turned out after investigation to be either (A) not actually saying that or (B) the opinion of some notable, but highly partisan opponent of the Tea Party, such as Nancy Pelosi or Paul Krugman. These minority opinions are already properly attributed and quoted farther down in the article, and no one is suggesting they should be removed.
Colons were used to indent properly (check the edit history); that the movement has an astroturfed component is the majority viewpoint, and trying to say it has absolutely no astroturfing involved is the minority viewpoint; Pelosi and Krugman are being cited for their opinions only; can't comment on the other two edits, as they haven't really been discussed. Xenophrenic (talk) 16:01, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
  • that the movement has an astroturfed component is the majority viewpoint ... This is a false statement. We've been over all these sources with a fine-toothed comb. Out of all the claims that this is the majority viewpoint, here is the single grain of truth: Formisano says that the Institute For Liberty (IFL) is an Astroturfed TPm component. However, IFL doesn't identify itself as part of the TPm, and I've never seen any other source identify IFL as part of the TPm.
  • There is no valid policy based argument opposing any of these three edits. From WP:CLOSE: "The closer is there to judge the consensus of the community, after discarding irrelevant arguments: those that flatly contradict established policy, those based on personal opinion only, those that are logically fallacious, those that show no understanding of the matter of issue. ... He (or she) is not expected to decide the issue, just to judge the result of the debate, and is expected to know policy sufficiently enough to know what arguments are to be excluded as irrelevant." Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 03:37, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
Adding an unqualified statement, such as "The Tea Party is a grassroots movement.", to the lede would not satisfy WP:NPOV anymore than using "astroturf" in lede would.

Considered in its entirety, the Tea Party is neither a top-down creation nor a bottom-up explosion. This remarkable political outpouring is best understood as a combination of three intertwined forces. Each force is important in its own right, and their interaction is what gives the Tea Party its dynamism, drama, and wallop. ...snip... Grassroots activists, roving billionaire advocates, and right-wing media purveyors—these three forces, together, create the Tea Party...
Skocpol, T.; Williamson, V. (2012). The Tea Party and the Remaking of Republican Conservatism. Oxford University Press. ISBN 9780199832637.

More weight is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of "grassroots" as it applies to the Tea Party movement. — ArtifexMayhem (talk) 07:25, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
I would hardly call it "unqualified". But, if I'm to read your comment correctly -- You feel the use of grassroots ought not be construed as all-encompassing.
My solution: The Tea Party is a political movement primarily based in grassroots activism. TETalk 14:22, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
  • More weight is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of "grassroots" as it applies to the Tea Party movement. YES. EXACTLY. I simply could not agree with you more on this point. After an insightful observation like that one, you could be my new best friend.
  • Generally speaking, those sources that have endeavored to define TPm as "Astroturfed" or "partially Astroturfed" have consistently attempted to redefine the word "Astroturfed" in a much more expansive manner. The expanded definition is intended by these sources to include activities that were never perceived as Astroturfing before. The term was first coined in the 1980s and 1990s, when paid political and corporate operatives were each pretending to be several ordinary people at once, writing letters to congressmen, senators, and the editors of major newspapers and news magazines, artificially manufacturing the appearance of a grass-roots movement, or popular support or opposition to a particular thing, where there was none.
  • This term was and continues to be a well-recognized and well-understood term in the political science lexicon. Its meaning has never actually changed, unless you can demonstrate a consensus across all of political science, discussing all movements and all activities by political and corporate operatives, that supports such a change in the definition. The meaning is limited to the activities I've described: pretending to be the elements of a grass-roots movement where no such elements exist.
  • In this case, not even Ronald P. Formisano has claimed that there are absolutely zero grass-roots elements in the Tea Party movement. The effect of corporate involvement, and involvement by established political parties (the Republican Party) and conservative leaning news media (Fox News, Daily Caller and the like) is only to amplify these grass-roots elements — elements that genuinely do exist.
  • There was a video teleconference recorded and posted by The Huffington Post where political experts were discussing this effort to change and expand the definition of the term "Astroturfing." I've posted the link to it at least twice and will try to find it again, and post it again. But yes, my new best friend, more WP:WEIGHT is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of "grass-roots" as it applies to TPm without attempting to change the meaning of that long-established term of art, to include activities that, had Barack Obama and Organizing for America engaged in them, would be cheerfully described by the very same sources as "community organizing."
  • The difference here is that the community that's being organized is much more fiscally conservative. And that's really the biggest and most salient difference between the community organizing that's being done by the Koch Brothers, and the community organizing that was done by Barack Obama. Opponents and critics of the movement tend to focus instead on the fact that the Tea Party is mostly white. Considering that some of the most beloved candidates of the Tea Party have included Herman Cain, Mia Love, Allen West, Ted Cruz and Marco Rubio, race is simply not the salient factor. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 14:37, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
I'm going to skip past the new twists on old memes above ("It depends on what the meaning of the word 'is' is." and "Some of my best friends are black.") and comment on these:
  • You feel the use of grassroots ought not be construed as all-encompassing. My solution: The Tea Party is a political movement primarily based in grassroots activism. --TE
That's a tiny step in the right direction, but still leaves us saying that the hybrid car "runs primarily on gasoline" to the neglect of mentioning that it also runs on electricity. By "unqualified statement", I think the other editor is noting that most sources (and this is particularily true of news media sources) use words like 'grassroots', 'conservative', 'anti-tax movement', without qualification because they are convenient and true, but our article would be remiss and misleading if it mentioned taxes without also mentioning spending, or mentioned conservative without also mentioning libertarian, or mentioned grassroots without also mentioning astroturfed.
If we look at sources that actually discuss the meaning of "grassroots" as it applies to the Tea Party movement as suggested above, we see that the description is most frequently applied to the masses of Americans upset at proposed bailouts (activists), not a movement, which was actually developed by more than just grassroots activists.
  • not even Ronald P. Formisano has claimed that there are absolutely zero grass-roots elements in the Tea Party movement --P&W
Nor have any Misplaced Pages editors, as far as I know. That's not where the disagreement is here. Xenophrenic (talk) 16:30, 11 July 2013 (UTC)

Why waste so much precious time on the trivial -- Are we still stuck in the past? Astroturfing allegations were fun while they lasted, but the world has moved on. Since mentioned above, I decided to do a count:
The Tea Party and the Remaking of Republican Conservatism
Vanessa Williamson, Theda Skocpol, and John Coggin

It's time to let go. TETalk 19:37, 11 July 2013 (UTC)

Oooh, how very scientific! Your count is off, by the way. It's 29 to 0; but even at 29 the mentions of "grassroots" are still outnumbered by mentions of Elites and Funders of the movement. Not a single mention of a "grassroots movement", but plenty of references to activists, adherents and TPers that are one part of it. Oh, and did you realize several of those "grassroots" are mentions of other conservatives from the past, not TPers? Or is it at all important to you that most of those "grassroots" mentions actually are questioning or qualifying that term?

... has been beset with controversy about its grassroots authenticity ... These elites have long since developed a policymaking infrastructure in Washington, but had previously achieved only limited success in directly connecting themselves to an activist grassroots base ... and how grassroots undertakings relate to the Republican Party and to national organizations claiming to further Tea Party efforts ... (TPP), whose website was up and running within days of the original Santelli rant, has been more closely associated with grassroots activism than TPE ... TPP rhetoric and the group’s homespun website gives the impression of an entirely grassroots, volunteer-run organization ... dubs itself the “official grassroots American movement” ... not clear how much grassroots Tea Partiers know about the national advocacy and funding organizations promoting and trying to capitalize on their efforts ... a partnership formalizing long-time ties between the pro-business lobby and the conservative media’s grassroots mobilization efforts ... conservative media’s social coordination of willing local activists and participants, the anti-regulation big-business lobby could harness new grassroots networks to accompany their already powerful DC presence ... elite Tea Party funders and grassroots activists ...

But we wouldn't want to let a little thing like context get in the way. No one is arguing that there are not genuine grassroots activists in the movement; the disagreement with reliable sourcing only arises when a suggestion is made to describe the movement only as "grassroots". Sorry to see you move on, Xenophrenic (talk) 21:23, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
OR/SYN. Personal beliefs of what constitutes astroturf has no place in the mainspace. TETalk 22:25, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
None were stated. The concern is over describing the movement as only grassroots. — ArtifexMayhem (talk) 03:36, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
I see nothing wrong with the reliable sources' research or synthesis, and it appears to be well-founded conclusion rather than "personal belief". Are we speaking of the same reliable sources? We can raise the issue at WP:RSN to verify if they have a place in mainspace, if needed. Xenophrenic (talk) 12:27, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
Just doing my best to abide by Rule 1. Unfortunately, I must break it to avoid further misunderstanding: "Your personal beliefs of what constitutes astroturf has no place in the mainspace."
It's quite clear that if the RS wanted to use the term "astroturf," they were free to do so. Elites and Funders, your personal opinions of what is established by their presence, has no bearing here. TETalk 16:02, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
Of course Misplaced Pages editor opinions and beliefs have no place in mainspace; yours nor mine. I don't see why you feel compelled to state the obvious. We're discussing reliable sources, aren't we? Now returning to those, we see that funding sources and elite establishment influence are indeed important components when describing astroturf/grassroots. Skocpol, Williamson, Formisano and other reliable sources all clearly indicate that the TP movement cannot be described as wholly "grassroots". Our Misplaced Pages article shouldn't either, nor should it misleadingly imply it by inserting the unqualified 'grassroots' description in the lead to the exclusion of the other aspects. The RS does use the term astroturf (and "not grassroots" and "top-down" and "co-opted" and "faux-grassroots" ...) if you've examined their fuller work on the matter.

"Many supporters also proclaim the Tea Party to be purely a grassroots rebellion, a "mass movement of ... 'regular' Americans with real concerns about losing the right to live their lives as they choose." This view captures only a small part of the truth, ignoring the fact that Tea Party participants are in many respects even more ideologically extreme than other very conservative Republicans. Similarly, the ‘mass movement’ portrayal overlooks the fact that the Tea Party, understood in its entirety, includes media hosts and wealthy political action committees, plus national advocacy groups and self-proclaimed spokespersons – elites that wield many millions of dollars in political contributions and appear all over the media claiming to speak for grassroots activists who certainly have not elected them, and to whom they are not accountable. What kind of mass rebellion is funded by corporate billionaires, like the Koch brothers, led by over-the-hill former GOP kingpins like Dick Armey, and ceaselessly promoted by millionaires media celebrities like Glenn Beck and Sean Hannity?”

Xenophrenic (talk) 21:01, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
Finally, something we can agree on: "he TP movement cannot be described as wholly 'grassroots'." There's no such thing in this day and age that could gain a foothold in American politics. You need some muscle behind that hustle. The point of contention is erroneously throwing the term astroturf about as if it's suddenly been redefined. So and so says astroturf, I'm sure there's a place for it in this BLP, attributed, but would be a stretch to consider it lead-worthy. Weight and all. On "their fuller work," I'm of limited resources. I have overdue books, my google machine is the best I can do. But it's not all bad. For instance, by using parts of your excerpt, my google machine led me to the very text that completes said excerpt, for context:

The opposite illusion is also there among those who proclaim the Tea Party to be nothing more than an "astroturf" phenomenon, an illusion pushed by Fox News, or a "billionaire's tea party" in which "corporate America is faking a grassroots revolution." This take on the Tea Party as a kabuki dance entirely manipulated from above simply cannot do justice to the volunteer engagement of many thousands of men and women who travel to rallies with their homemade signs and, even more remarkably, have formed ongoing, regularly meeting local Tea Party groups. The citizens we have met, who spend hours meeting with one another, arguing with officials, and learning about the workings of local, state, and national government—these people do not fit the caricatures espoused by some on the left. They are unglamorous, mostly older middle-class Americans. Billionaire-funded political action committees and longtime free-market advocacy organizations are certainly doing all they can to leverage and benefit from Tea Party activism. But they did not create all that activism in the first place, nor do they entirely control the popular effervescence.

Hope this helps. TETalk 22:31, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
I don't think we've ever disagreed on that part; the movement is neither wholly grassroots or astroturfed. I provided the paragraph that shows the movement isn't entirely grassroots, and you just added the paragraph that shows the movement isn't entirely astroturfed. (By the way, I have dead-tree copies of each of the above sources if Google's "preview" function fails you.) No one has "redefined" astroturf or grassroots here. Neither grassroots nor astroturf needs to be attributed to "so and so", unless you suggest we start citing opinion pieces, and I'd recommend against that. (Pssst ... by the way, this isn't a BLP.) See more of this same discussion below. Xenophrenic (talk) 00:58, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
What I posted, when the RS actually used the phrase astroturf, in parenthesis, shot it down with the quickness. And this is very much a BLP. TETalk 02:02, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
By "in parenthesis", did you mean "in quotes"? If so, the only thing shot down was the notion that the movement is "nothing more than" or "entirely manipulated" or "entirely controlled" astroturf, and no one is suggesting it is. Like I said, we've never disagreed on that point. And no, Tea Party movement is not a Biography of a Living Person. Just go to WP:BLPN and search the archives for "tea party" and see for yourself, as that one has been tried a couple times before. If you meant that BLP rules still apply to living people regardless of what article they are mentioned in, then we agree. Xenophrenic (talk) 02:51, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
"Quotes" would be the safe assumption. But, I guess it's always good to ask so as to avoid any further misunderstanding. Those "quotes" have a funny way of surrounding what the RS finds to be fringe viewpoints. If you would like, I propose we use the RS as a counterpoint to the Pelosi/Krugman '09 astroturf allegations. In their same quotation form. TETalk 03:16, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Please stop beating your dead horse. It's dead.
  • It's 29 to 0; but even at 29 the mentions of "grassroots" are still outnumbered by mentions of Elites and Funders of the movement. "Elites and funders" do not equal "Astroturf," except in the opinion of Ron Formisano. None of these 29 sources describes the activities of these "elites and funders" as Astroturfing, nor does any of these 29 sources describe what they're doing as having a compromising or diluting effect on the essential grass-roots nature of the movement. All they're doing is amplifying the genuine grass-roots elements that are actually there. And as I said before, these very same activities would be described as "community organizing" without the slightest hesitation, rather than "Astroturfing," if it was Barack Obama and Organizing for America instead of conservatives with money. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 04:08, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
29 sources? No, that is a single source, with 29 iterations of the word "grassroots" used to describe what is and is not grassroots, and yes they do describe the activities of the funders and established elites. Xenophrenic (talk) 21:01, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
  • I agree: There is no source which calls the movement Astroturfed, which doesn't (1) redefine Astroturfed to include any corporate funding, nor (2) quotes political opponents of the movement. I could almost support a statement that it's a grass-roots movement said to be Astroturfed, but even that doesn't seem to be correct. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 10:12, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
It's true that (1) RS include funding sources in their definitions of grassroots and astroturfing (not "redefine", as funding sources have been part of the definition since the terms were created). (2) None of the sources we're presently discussing "quotes political opponents of the movement", so perhaps Arthur Rubin would be so kind as to indicate which sources he's talking about. Even our Misplaced Pages article notes that "grassroots" implies that the creation of the movement and the group supporting it are natural and spontaneous, highlighting the differences between this and a movement that is orchestrated by traditional power structures. While the reliable sources note there are grassroots activists, they also note the "movement" is controlled, directed and funded by traditional special interests. Why all the aversion to conveying what the reliable sources actually say? Xenophrenic (talk) 12:27, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
  • (not "redefine", as funding sources have been part of the definition since the terms were created) There are other essential elements of the definition of "Astroturfing," and they've been essential elements of the definition since the term was created in the '80s. Not just (A) corporate and PAC money, but also (B) a genuine Astroturfing operation conceals the source of the money, and (C) one political or corporate operative pretends to be several people at once — and the people he's pretending to be have no connection to the source of the money. Is there any evidence of anything like either (B) or (C) going on here? Both are essential elements of the political science term "Astroturfing."
  • If the TPm does not have both (B) and (C), then what's happening here is called "community organizing." Rich, powerful people are simply providing funds to make sure that all of the very real, grass-roots people who share their beliefs show up at the next protest, or the next election. And without (B) and (C), individuals like Ronald P. Formisano are most certainly trying to redefine "Astroturfing" to include activities that would have made Barack Obama one of the most notorious Astroturfers in the history of politics.
  • Here's the link to that Huffington Post video of a discussion about the definition of Astroturfing. According to my new best friend ArtifexMayhem, this source deserves more weight than Formisano because it actually discusses the definition of the word it's using. This is a 30-minute video but it's worth a very careful review. Watch for the comments by Edward Walker, the guy with eyeglasses who had to connect to the discussion via telephone, and John Hawkins, the guy wearing the headset. They're the ones who, in my opinion, really hit all the points we've been talking about. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 13:40, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
I'm the last person to break up a beautiful friendship, but AM said nothing specifically about that video clip and I think you may have missed his/her point. What was said is, "More weight is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of 'grassroots' as it applies to the Tea Party movement." This video clip source is indeed more weighty than one of the many news reports that merely stick in the word "grassroots" by rote when reporting about a protest or activist, etc., (you are up to 18 now, you said?). But that puts it on par with Formisano's The Tea Party: A Brief History, which goes to great lengths to discuss the grassroots and astroturfed aspects as they apply to the Tea Party. Same with Skocpol & Williamson's The Tea Party and the Remaking of Republican Conservatism. Starting at 26:30, Walker gives an accurate popular astroturf versus grassroots description, which doesn't contradict what reliable sources have been saying. He admits he is "unclear" about co-opting, and who co-opted whom, but he does acknowledge the grassroots activists, although he gets the timeline wrong about involvement in the movement. Walker is one of the lead proponents of the line of thought that (and I quote him) "The dividing line between “grassroots” and “Astroturf” may be more of a political Rorschach test than a precisely measurable concept. But, in any case, changing relationships between companies and the public—especially in the health domain—are leading more and more industries to institute grassroots mobilization programs." (See the "grassroots lobbying" form of astroturfing.)
  • And as I said before... --P&W
Repeated time and again, yes, without much change in the discussion. Instead of continuing to spin our wheels, how about we try to move the discussion forward? Maybe if we first developed this topic better in the body of the article, then summarize that content in the lead? Xenophrenic (talk) 21:01, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
Yes, it has been repeated — and no argument has been presented for inclusion of "astroturf". But perhaps we should concentrate on other matters. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 23:02, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
Except for the arguments that have been presented for inclusion of astroturf, but you would not be expected to know about those. Xenophrenic (talk) 00:58, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
"(See the "grassroots lobbying" form of astroturfing.)" - Xenophrenic
All I've seen was not one mention of astroturfing. OR/SYN has no place in the mainspace. TETalk 02:09, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
I see nothing wrong with the reliable sources' research or synthesis, and it appears to be well-founded conclusion rather than "personal belief". Xenophrenic (talk) 02:51, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
Just doing my best to abide by Rule 1. Unfortunately, I must break it to avoid further misunderstanding: "Your OR/SYN has no place in the mainspace." TETalk 03:07, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
Of course Misplaced Pages editor opinions and beliefs have no place in mainspace; yours nor mine. I don't see why you feel compelled to state the obvious. We're discussing reliable sources, aren't we? I don't see where I've placed "OR/SYN" in mainspace, or even made a proposal that we do so. Maybe some other editor? Xenophrenic (talk) 03:26, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
"rassroots mobilization programs being referred to are astroturf" - Xenophrenic
Well, definitely not in the source provided. Which is why I sometimes feel compelled to state, and restate the obvious. TETalk 03:33, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
  • I'm the last person to break up a beautiful friendship, but AM said nothing specifically about that video clip ... Specifically, AM said, "More weight is accorded to sources that actually discuss the meaning of 'grassroots' as it applies to the Tea Party movement." He did not include Formisano specifically, but the HuffPo video clip is included by definition because it actually discusses the meaning of that word. Formisano does discuss the grass-roots aspects, and what he's trying to redefine as "astroturfed" aspects of TPm. But he never really talks about what Astroturf means, let alone admit that he's trying to expand the definition by leaps and bounds. The multiple experts in the HuffPo clip do talk about what the word means. And it does not mean merely donating money to a Tea Party group. So no, according to AM, the HuffPo video clip deserves more weight than Formisano's book.
  • "... are leading more and more industries to institute grassroots mobilization programs." Right. "GRASSROOTS mobilization programs." Community organizing. Not Astroturf. I think it's important to make it very clear how few of these sources actually say, "The Tea Party movement is partially Astroturfed." Skocpol doesn't say it, for example. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 02:31, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Except for the arguments that have been presented for inclusion of astroturf ... References to Astroturf are already included down in the body of the article, where minority opinions belong. Nobody is suggesting that they should be removed. What should be changing is the article's treatment of the word "grass-roots." That word goes into the lede sentence, where the majority opinion belongs. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 02:31, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
No, I really don't think AM indicated that your video clip is weight-ier than Formisano or Skocpol. Let's see if he'll clarify for us. And yes, the grassroots mobilization programs being referred to are astroturf; it's the new grassroots lobbying. As for Skocpol not being quoted as saying the TP movement is partially Astroturfed, how would you propose to convey what she did say? Xenophrenic (talk) 02:51, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
Correct, I did not "indicated that video clip is weight-ier than Formisano or Skocpol." Per WP:RS, "When available, academic and peer-reviewed publications, scholarly monographs, and textbooks are usually the most reliable sources." I.e., Formisano and Skocpol are the types of sources we should prefer. — ArtifexMayhem (talk) 06:23, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
Quote her directly. At one point she says that the TPm is a grass-roots movement, supported by deep-pockets money like the Koch Brothers and "amplified" by conservative media such as Fox News and Breitbart. That is what she actually said: her own opinion, in her own words, which didn't include the use of the word "Astroturf." Quote that paragraph of her book. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 17:07, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
Quote "her" directly? Don't you mean "them"? Neither Skocpol nor Williamson mention a "grassroots movement". They do mention grassroots activists-people-enthusiasts-adherents-protesters ... you know, the individuals who are genuinely grassroots but only part of the movement. One component of the movement out of three. Perhaps that is part of the misunderstanding here. You make a big deal out of the fact that the word "astroturf" is rarely used by Skocpol, yet she nonetheless writes a lot about astroturfing. She explains how the movement is neither wholly grassroots or astroturfed. It isn't necessary to repeatedly spell out a-s-t-r-o-t-u-r-f to discuss "top-down" organizing, or "supposedly" grassroots activity, or "elitist" co-opting and control or "the super rich fat-cats who have manipulated Tea Party activism with such glee". It is still astroturf she is describing. Formisano spells it out as well: So what is the answer to the question posed at the beginning of this chapter: "Astroturf or Grassroots Populism?" The simple answer is that the Tea Parties have been created by both kinds of populism, in part by the few -- the corporate lobbyists from above--but also from the passionate many expressing real grassroots populism. Or The Tea Partiers, finally, are routinely referred to in the media as conservatives. But their blend of astroturf and grassroots populism is more accurately labeled right-wing or reactionary populism. You claimed above that if pro-Obama groups were to do what FreedomWorks, Americans for Prosperity, etc., were doing, it would be called "community organizing". No, it wouldn't. It would (and has) been called what it is:

More recent advocacy events have likewise shown an apparent lack of spontaneous organization, most notably some of the early “Tea Party” protests. Following CNBC pundit Rick Santelli’s call, in February 2009, for a “‘Chicago Tea Party’” to oppose President Obama’s mortgage bailout plan, numerous websites dedicated to the cause sprang to life, each supposedly part of a national grassroots Internet protest and each tied to the Sam Adams Alliance advocacy group. This group in turn enjoyed substantial financial support from the Koch family, multibillionaire owners of one of the largest privately-held corporations in the United States, and FreedomWorks, a public relations firm with former House Majority leader Dick Armey as its chairman, and which the Kochs have funded. The above examples highlight a phenomenon more widely known as “Astroturfing,” or fake grassroots advocacy, a practice that has become popular among particular groups and individuals. Connecticut Law Review

This has been acknowledged as astroturf activity for decades. If you insist on having such nuanced subject matter appear in the lead of the article, we could say something similar to:
The Tea Party movement is an American political movement that advocates reducing the U.S. national debt and federal budget deficit by reducing U.S. government spending and taxes. The movement comprises both grassroots and astroturf components, including passionate activists, wealthy political action committees and national advocacy groups, establishment elites and conservative media outlets. The movement has been called partly conservative, partly libertarian, and partly populist. It has sponsored protests and supported political candidates since 2009.
What are your thoughts? Xenophrenic (talk) 00:50, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
The video teleconference posted by The Huffington Post interviewed four different academics simultaneously. It deserves at least as much weight. And as you said, the four academics do actually discuss the meaning of the words they're using, so unless I'm mistaken about what you said, or you've suddenly changed your mind, that source deserves even more weight than Formisano or Skocpol. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 17:07, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
Four different academics? Walker was the only academic in that group, and there were two Tea Partiers and an executive from "Yes! magazine". Information from Walker can be considered, although he admits he is "unclear" about the co-opting of the Tea Party. Formisano and Skocpol do indeed discuss how the TP is grassroots and astroturfed, so it appears that you are mistaken about what was said. Hopefully that helps. Xenophrenic (talk) 00:50, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
  • And yes, the grassroots mobilization programs being referred to are astroturf ... According to who? A pseudonymous Misplaced Pages editor's WP:OR? One history professor at the University of Kentucky? Or a demonstrated consensus across the entire profession of political science, supporting that redefinition of the term "Astroturf" by that history professor from the University of Kentucky? Because only the third one will be sufficient to support that statement. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 05:31, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
You lost me with the U-of-Kentucky reference ... name? I'm also not citing any Misplaced Pages editors. As for your characterization that astroturfing has been redefined, I'd like to see what source you are citing that to, because that's news to me. I do see that there are newer terms like "grassroots lobbying", "astroturf lobbying" and "grassroots mobilization" being introduced over the past decade, but I am unaware of any actual redefining of astroturfing. Xenophrenic (talk) 00:50, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
I caught the "history professor at the University of Kentucky" reference right away, and that's even without previously bragging about owning his book. TETalk 07:36, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
I wish I was as quick on the uptake; you are both speaking of Formisano? I do have the book (borrowed, not owned), and nowhere in it does it mention him as a professor at UofK. He's been referred to simply as "Formisano" in these discussions, so the new referense threw me. I've just Google'd him - looks like an impressive fellow. Xenophrenic (talk) 17:33, 14 July 2013 (UTC)

Opponents of the proposed edit adding the word "grass-roots" to the lede have cited three sources, generally referred to here as "Skocpol," "Formisano," and "Zellner." Skocpol doesn't support use of the term "Astroturfing." Formisano does, but is trying to expand the definition of "Astroturfing" in doing so. Here's a link to an op-ed column by Formisano: Here's another: Formisano clearly likes Barack Obama very, very much and his bias most likely seeps into his writing about TPm. Zellner, while focusing his article on Astroturfed lobbying efforts, decided to do a drive-by on the Tea Party. He not only supports the expanded definition of "Astroturfing," but he relies exclusively on sources that Misplaced Pages would not consider reliable sources: an AlterNet article, and the partisan Paul Krugman op-ed column. (Check his footnotes.) Furthermore, at the time he wrote the article in November 2010, he was not a professor. He has never been a professor. He was a law student at the time, seeking to obtain a JD the following spring. This is not an academic, certainly not of the same caliber as Elizabeth Price Foley, and should not be presented as one.

Meanwhile here is a sampling of the reliable, neutral sources supporting a description of TPm as "grass-roots," period, full stop: three from the New York Times, two from the Washington Post, one from Reuters, one from National Public Radio, one from Huffington Post of all places, a very interesting 30-minute webcam round-table discussion hosted by the Huffington Post, one from the Chicago Tribune, and a Harvard PDF in which Theda Skocpol, of all people, says that "Thus the grassroots Tea Party phenomenon is real ..."

The 30-minute webcam round table hosted by HuffPo, in a very interesting exchange of ideas, explores what is actually meant by the term "Astroturfing." The mere addition of money, even from people like the Koch Brothers, does not negate the grass-roots nature of the movement. Only if the money is being used to pretend that there is genuine grass-roots support for a particular position where no grass-roots support actually exists can it legitimately be called Astroturfing. It is painfully obvious that the majority viewpoint, per WP:WEIGHT, is that TPm is a grass-roots movement, even if we don't count the Tea Party's self-serving claims — which we should count under WP:SELFSOURCE. Accordingly, using the Waterboarding article as an example, this majority viewpoint should be stated in the lede sentence.

Regarding the "Other events" section, it was orphaned by removal of the "On issues of race, bigotry and public perception" section, and should accompany that section in the spin-off article. These "other events" are not notable enough to be included in a top-level article written in summary style.

Regarding the "Commentaries on origins," they're partisan and, for the most part, not notable enough to be included in a top-level article written in summary style. The Tobacco Control article never should have been mentioned in this article's mainspace. Here's a harsh analysis of that Tobacco Control study. And in their grant proposal to obtain public funding from NIH, the authors of the study basically admitted that they had a political agenda in seeking this funding: the anti-smoking lobby "requires understanding how the tobacco industry maintains a favorable social and policy environment" As the contributor at Huffington Post sarcastically observed, it's hard to tell the difference between this stated objective, and political opposition research. Also, here's an examination of the chief author of the study, Stanton Glantz, and his research:

  • It isn't necessary to repeatedly spell out a-s-t-r-o-t-u-r-f to discuss "top-down" organizing ... Yes, it is necessary to say it at least once: "These activities by this Tea Party group were Astroturfing." To establish a different standard violates WP:SYNTH. Astroturfing has a very specific meaning, and the activities described by Formisano and Zellner do not satisfy that definition. The term has very negative connotations, indicating that something fraudulent (or at least very dishonest) is going on, which is why the TPm's political enemies have been trying so hard for so many years to hang that word around the Tea Party's neck. We've officially discussed this to death. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 01:51, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
Why argue against "Opponents of the proposed edit adding the word 'grass-roots' to the lede"? That's why this conversation keeps repeating itself, because of mis-framing of the discussion. I have no problem with "grassroots" being in the lead, as long as the astroturfed aspect of the movement is also added according to reliable sources. Here is a proposed sentence for the lede that addresses your request to mention "grassroots" in the lead, while also sticking to what reliable sources say:
The movement comprises both grassroots and astroturf components, including passionate activists, wealthy political action committees and national advocacy groups, establishment elites and conservative media outlets.
We can add Formisano, Skocpol and Zellner cites at the end of the sentence, along with any of the dozen cites you've linked above. I've looked at each of those sources and not a single one refutes the astroturf aspect of the movement. In fact, your two NPR sources confirm the heterogeneous nature of the movement. (On one end, it very much is a grassroots movement ... But then on the other hand, you have sort of an establishment that is somewhat preexisting. And these are the folks who have come to the game with a great deal of money, if not a great deal of energy ... So you have two things going on at once here, is what you're saying ... there is also this political structure and corporate structure that's driving them a little bit.) Your NYT source also confirms the heterogeneous nature of the movement. (This anti-government, grass-roots Republican offshoot has rattled the party establishment ... Some of the money behind the Tea Party movement or its offshoots has little in common with grass-roots populism.) Harvard's Skocpol confirms the heterogeneous nature of the movement. (Many supporters also proclaim the Tea Party to be purely a grassroots rebellion ... overlooks the fact that the Tea Party, understood in its entirety, includes media hosts and wealthy political action committees, plus national advocacy groups and self-proclaimed spokespersons – elites that wield many millions of dollars in political contributions and appear all over the media claiming to speak for grassroots activists ... Considered in its entirety, the Tea Party is neither a top-down creation nor a bottom-up explosion. Each force is important in its own right, and their interaction is what gives the Tea Party its dynamism, drama, and wallop. ... Grassroots activists, roving billionaire advocates, and right-wing media purveyors—these three forces, together, create the Tea Party...)
  • None of your sources refute the astroturf component of the movement; they only confirm the grassroots component.
  • Your personal opinions about what constitutes "astroturf" (i.e.; Only if the money is being used to pretend that there is genuine grass-roots support for a particular position where no grass-roots support actually exists can it legitimately be called Astroturfing) are trumped by what reliable sources say constitutes astroturf.
  • Your personal opinions about the reliability of academic sources ("he likes Obama"; "he uses sources we wouldn't use"; etc.) aren't convincing. Try WP:RSN?
  • Your personal opinion that it's not "Astroturf" if it is instead called "fake grassroots", "top-down manipulation", "artifical grassroots lobbying", etc., isn't really applicable in this discussion.
Xenophrenic (talk) 07:52, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
Actually, it is within our remit as editors to consider the context and determine how much weight to give to a particular source once it has satisfied basic WP:RS requirements. Let's walk through the rules on that. Rule 1 is we're supposed to give greater weight to both peer-reviewed academic sources and fact-checked news organizations. However, Rule 2 says Formisano's track record as a fawning op-ed writer for Team Obama weakens his status as a reliable, neutral source, and the weight we should give that source. From WP:RS — context matters very, very much: "The reliability of a source depends on context. Each source must be carefully weighed to judge whether it is reliable for the statement being made and is an appropriate source for that content." Rule 3 specifically addresses biased or opinionated sources and advises caution: "Misplaced Pages articles are required to present a neutral point of view. However, reliable sources are not required to be neutral, unbiased, or objective. Common sources of bias include political, financial, religious, philosophical, or other beliefs." In this case, Formisano's expressed political beliefs reduce the weight that should be given to his opinion.
That brings us to Zellner, the law student. Sorry, he's not an academic like the other authors described here, such as Elizabeth Price Foley. He's graduated from law school now, and he's practicing law in Connecticut. His weakened status as a source is confirmed by the weak, heavily biased sources that he chose to rely upon. Remember, context matters. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 14:05, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
reliable sources are not required to be neutral, unbiased, or objective.
Each source must be carefully weighed to judge whether it is reliable for the statement being made and is an appropriate source for that content.
Either we are in agreement, P&W, or the policies you cite don't say what you think they do. (I'm guessing the latter.) Since you, me, and Policy, all appear to agree, any further concerns you have with the above named sources should be raised at WP:RSN. I'll be happy to meet you there, and I'll allow you the benefit of phrasing and framing the initial argument. Xenophrenic (talk) 17:47, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
  • I have no problem with "grassroots" being in the lead, as long as the astroturfed aspect of the movement is also added according to reliable sources It's too bad that the sources supporting "TPm is partially Astroturfed" are such a tiny minority according to WP:WEIGHT. For that policy based reason, the word "Astroturf" belongs down in the body of the article where it currently resides, but the word "grass-roots" belongs in the lede sentence. We can modify it the way Skocpol did, "supported by deep pocket donors and amplified by conservative media," but the word "Astroturfing" does not belong in the lede because it's a minority viewpoint.
  • Your personal opinion that it's not "Astroturf" if it is instead called "fake grassroots", "top-down manipulation", "artifical grassroots lobbying", etc., isn't really applicable in this discussion. It isn't a personal opinion. It's Misplaced Pages policy: WP:SYNTH. Also, I haven't seen a source describing it as "fake grassroots," or "artificial grassroots lobbying." The sources that allegedly support "TPm is partially Astroturfed," for the most part, do not say what's being claimed.
  • I've looked at each of those sources and not a single one refutes the astroturf aspect of the movement. Refutation of that alleged aspect is implicit in the statement, "TPm is a grass-roots movement," just as refutation of "Substantial portions of the elephant are plant-like material" is implicit in the statement, "The elephant is an animal." The mere addition of deep pockets money does not compromise the grass-roots nature of the movement. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 11:38, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
  • The sources supporting TPm is partially Astroturfed are such a tiny minority? Incorrect; you have produced zero sources refuting that fact, which makes it not only a majority, but an overwhelming unanimous majority.
  • It isn't a personal opinion, it's Misplaced Pages policy: WP:SYNTH? Incorrect, not when reliable sources are doing the sysnthesis. WP:SYNTH applies to Misplaced Pages editors, not expert sources researching the matter.
  • Refutation of astroturf aspects is implicit in the grassroots statement? Incorrect; reliable sources explain that genuinely grassroots activists can be manipulated and co-opted by astroturfing groups. (And it's a good thing, too, else a bunch of citizens upset at bailouts never would have been organized and channeled into a 'movement', according to sources.) The fact that a hybrid vehicle can run on gasoline does not refute the fact that it also runs on electricity. Why argue to mention gas in the lead, without mentioning electricity? Xenophrenic (talk) 17:04, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

I consider these vague terms to be a waste of time. But "astroturf" as an overall characterization of the movement is beyond fringe. And so trying to maneuver that in is a complete wp:snow waste of time. And the TPM is about as grassroots as any large movement has been or can be. As far as overall characterizations by sources, I think "grassroots" has about a 30:1 advantage over "astroturf" with the "1" going to zero if you limit it to impartial sources. I even consider spending much time arguing for "grass roots" to be a waste of time even thought it is appropriate. North8000 (talk) 11:50, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

I don't think I've seen reliable sources showing astroturf as an "overall characteristic", but rather just one component of the whole. Attempting to describe the movement as overall astroturfed would indeed be fringe, but no one is doing that. Reliable sources have explained the astroturf aspect in detail, and there has been zero refutation of it, so the only "maneuvering" appears to be avoid acknowledging it. Your apples to oranges numeric comparison doesn't apply here, unless you would equally argue that "since 30:1 overall sources characterize the movement as 'conservative' over 'grassroots', we shouldn't mention grassroots". Make that 100:1 sources that avoid mentioning 'grassroots' at all when describing the movement.
The uncontested fact is that the movement comprises both astroturf and grassroots aspects. Our article should convey what reliable sources convey; it's policy. The "astroturf" part of the description does indeed carry with it negative connotations, so I can understand the impetus to avoid mentioning it. I'm not oblivious to the shotgun-arguments attempt to that end:
— try to deny the reliability of the sources ("not impartial"; "likes Obama!"; "that award-winning source is a student, not a professor!")
— try to set up a false equivalency ("more sources say grassroots than astroturf!")
— try to deny standard definitions and applications of the word "astroturfing" ("that reliable source is redefining astroturf!")
— try to misapply WP:WEIGHT and WP:V ("you are only citing 3 reliable sources that say astroturf is part of the movement!")
I agree with you that it's a time sink, but I think that's because circular argumentation is being used to try to convey something other than what reliable sources convey. Xenophrenic (talk) 17:04, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
I guess the only reason for coupling the two terms in discussions is that they are sort of opposites of each other. One additional note: Between the two terms, we must recognize that astroturf is a more extreme one (being an outright direct pejorative) than "grass roots" and inherently an argument for an extreme term is much more likely to fall short than an argument for a more moderate term. My main point is that I consider both words to be vague and a waste of time, but (regarding overall characterization) the case for "grass roots" is about 30 times stronger than "astroturf" and the grass roots aspects are immensely more prevalent the astroturf aspects. North8000 (talk) 17:24, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
Technically, they aren't really opposites; in the most common usage, they are quite similar with the defining difference being that one is inauthentic (fake, manufactured, not genuine, contrived, bogus, etc.). The words can be used as both nouns and adjectives, which adds to the confusion. As for being pejorative, even that is changing, as the lines between astroturfing and legitimate advocacy mobilization are being blurred. If you can get a copy of New Technology, Organizational Change and Governance by Emmanuelle Avril & Christine Zumello, you can find an excellent explanation of astroturf organizations which

turn upside down the definition and spontaneity of grassroots mobilization since they help materialize an inverted movement. They, in essence, groom the potential roots of a movement; they try to locate the potential defenders of a cause in order to aggregate them through a digital network and mobilization that appears to be spontaneous, but is not.

Sound familiar? The "case for" grassroots and astroturf are identical (as in, both factual ... there is no such thing as a "stronger" fact, something either is or isn't factual). The fact that you see "grassroots" more often in news reports about TP activists or TP protest groups are because that's what those news reporters are focusing on in their report: the activists, the protesters and their message ... not the movement or the astroturfed part of it. You keep tossing around the number "30" as if you think WP:WEIGHT refers to prominence/prevalence OF sources, rather than IN sources. In every reliable source that looks at the grassroots and astroturf aspects of the movement, you'll find both aspects to be equally prominent. Xenophrenic (talk) 20:02, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
We're talking about two different things here. I've have been talking about characterizations of the (overall) movement, and, with respect to astroturfing (which would certainly leave out astroturfed, and almost certainly include grassroots) and you are basically talking about existence (to some extent) of elements of each. The former is more appropriate to a lead sentence, the latter is more appropriate for elements (major or minor) in the body of the article. And I consider both terms to be vague = uninformative = a waste of time. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 20:31, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
We are all talking about the characterizations of the movement as a whole, as are the reliable sources I've cited. (Those sources include Skocpol, Formisano, Zellner and the two NPR and a NYT source from P&W's list.) Xenophrenic (talk) 09:20, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
Well,at least we have that clarity going forward. But that somewhat refutes some of your previous points, which essentially implied that the mere existence of a astroturf component (however small) is relevant to the conversation. Second, by "reliable" to you mean actually reliable or meeting the "floor" of wp:rs? Highly biased unreliable writers often meet the meet the "floor" of wp:rs and should be used in that context (attributed etc.) Finally there is the question of which used which words as an overall characterization of the movement. North8000 (talk) 12:40, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
That wasn't my point at all. My point, explicitly stated, is that reliable sources very clearly convey that the "movement" consists of both grassroots components and astroturf components. It is not wholly one or the other, but a combination of both. By "reliable sources", I mean Reliable Sources as defined by Misplaced Pages policy, nothing more, nothing less. If you feel a cited reliable source is not suitable for supporting the assertion of fact (that means stated in Misplaced Pages's voice without the need for attribution), then let's bring that source and the relevant supported text to WP:RSN for a thorough airing. To your final point, what does Skocpol's "Considered in its entirety, the Tea Party is neither a top-down creation, nor a bottom-up explosion", mean to you? That's "overall". Xenophrenic (talk) 17:48, 17 July 2013 (UTC)

Proposal

Ok. In the last week or so, I went through this enormous discussion. I reread some sections at times to get a better idea of this discussion. Forgive me if I missed anything as I am working through a lot of comments in my head as I write this. It would seem that editors in this discussion page are divided about how to describe this movement. I have a proposed statement, that may be reworded accordingly to fit the article structure, that may appease both sides of the discussion without misleading or POVing the article.

The Tea Party movement is generally viewed as a grass-roots movement, with occasional views of it being astroturfed.

or

The Tea Party movement is mostly viewed as a grass-roots movement with some viewing it as an astroturf.

Something along those lines. Any thoughts?—cyberpower Online 17:40, 18 July 2013 (UTC)

Thank you for taking a look at the discussion(s). It is indeed rather lengthy, and has been a point of contention since the Tea Party first appeared. Since you asked, here are my initial thoughts on the wording you have proposed:
1) The division between editors falls into two sides: those who want to mention "grassroots" in the lead without mentioning "astroturf", and those who want to mention both grassroots and astroturf in the lead.
2) I don't think I've seen any reliable sources that declare the "movement" (the subject of our article) is wholly astroturfed, so both of the above proposed sentences might be hard to support with reliable sources. Reliable sources are always careful to note that the movement is only partially astroturfed while also having a large grassroots component.
3) Wording such as "some viewing it as" or "occassional views of it being" give the impression to the reader that the "astroturf" aspect of the movement is just an opinion. Just to clarify, is that what you were intending to convey to the reader?
4) It would probably be beneficial if we noted which sources we are to cite for this (or any other) proposed wording, as there also seems to be some disagreement among editors as to which sources are suitable.
Xenophrenic (talk) 18:13, 18 July 2013 (UTC)

Try:

The Tea Party movement is generally viewed as a grass-roots movement, with some pointing out partial funding from corporations and wealthy donors

Avoiding the quite problematic neologism "astroturf". And quite neutral in tone, as well as being easily sourced. Collect (talk) 18:42, 18 July 2013 (UTC)

This is a compromise version I've previously mentioned, slightly modified below, easily sourced in the works of Skocpol et al.:
The Tea Party movement is generally viewed as a grass-roots movement, with some noting that conservative news media amplify the movement's message, and corporations and wealthy donors provide some of its funding.
The word "amplified" is used by Theda Skocpol, a political science professor at Harvard, and the most reliable source provided by the tiny "partially Astroturfed" crowd, so this may work. But Misplaced Pages articles do not elevate small minority viewpoints to appear in the lede like that, as I've repeatedly demonstrated with reference to the lede of the Waterboarding article. There are many, many other Misplaced Pages articles I could link that discuss small minority viewpoints down in the body of the article but do not mention them in the lede. The lede is for unchallenged facts and, where viewpoints on the evidence differ, the lede is also for majority viewpoints. Not minority viewpoints. So this is a dead end, and has always been a dead end. An overwhelming majority of reliable sources — including peer-reviewed academics, fact-checked news organizations, and the Tea Party groups themselves, whose self-published websites we're required to treat as reliable sources, see WP:SELFSOURCE — describe the TPm unequivocally, without reservation, as a "grass-roots movement" or its members as "grass-roots activists." Period. Full stop.
Essentially, you are asking us to concede and let Xenophrenic have his way, when the overwhelming majority of sources, comparable Misplaced Pages articles, and Misplaced Pages policy say that it is Xenophrenic who should be conceding. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 19:03, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
"with some pointing out" is problematic in that it still insinuates opinion as a vague attribution, and begs the question: who says so? (And that would result in the citing of a great many sources, not just the three mentioned above.) Neutral in tone would be to use "some view" to go with "some point out", but I prefer to leave the word "some" out completely. I think the most straight-forward way to convey what reliable sources say is "The movement comprises both this and that" or "consists of" or "is made up of". Working with your (Collect's) wording as a base, how would you feel about:
The Tea Party movement is generally viewed as partially grassroots and partially funded and directed by corporations and wealthy individuals ...
(I should note that the last part, if we really follow reliable sources, should also say advocacy groups and political elites, but in the interest of brevity and compromise that can be relegated to the body of the article.) Xenophrenic (talk) 19:34, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
@P&W: The fact that the movement has an astroturfed component, along with the more visible (and therefore more mentioned) grassroots component, is not a "small minority viewpoint". I would discuss further your misunderstanding of that applicable policy, but I am pressed for time at the moment, so I'll settle for saying there you go again. Xenophrenic (talk) 19:43, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
I proposed a compromise - I suggest your ultimata are not going to get others to move past my suggestion by even a millimeter -- in fact I think I am pushing as far towards your POV as is possible with any prospect of reaching consensus. Cheers - but trying to get me to move further towards your wording is not gonna happen. Collect (talk) 21:05, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
Your attempt to push toward the POV of the reliable sources is noted, but I contend that merely moving closer to what sources say is insufficient; we should be saying what the reliable sources say. But this appears moot, as suggestions from both you and me have been shot down by others. Xenophrenic (talk) 21:35, 20 July 2013 (UTC)

New Start

Proposal 1

Then let's start over. My proposal is to simply add the word "grass-roots" to the lede sentence as follows: "The Tea Party movement is an American grass-roots political movement that advocates ..." The policy-based arguments supporting this have already been posted at length. To make a long story short, there are 20+ reliable sources stating that it's a "grass-roots movement," period, full stop. And there are three sources that say something else: one of which is most likely biased, one of which was written by a law student rather than a professor (and relies on sources Misplaced Pages doesn't consider reliable), and no two of which say the same thing on this subject. WP:WEIGHT is clear about this. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 14:11, 22 July 2013 (UTC)

  • This is one proposal. Others may now support or oppose this proposal and throw in their own proposal to be handled the same way.—cyberpower Online 15:30, 22 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Oppose for the reasons already exhaustively discussed. Inserting just "grassroots", when countless reliable sources indicate that the movement is not completely grassroots, would be a gross violation of Misplaced Pages policy -- WP:NPOV in particular. The false argument that there are only 3 reliable sources refuting your personal opinion has been disproven; there are many, not just 3. The false argument that those sources are unsuitable due to bias or sourcing issues has been disproven; they are highly reliable. The false argument that those particular 3 sources don't all, in unison, say that the TP movement is not 100% grassroots has been disproven; they all state that. Xenophrenic (talk) 16:47, 22 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Support as going in the right direction. It's a grass-roots political movement. Period. That some corporate or "right-wing news media" support the movement does not make it other than grass-roots. I would not object to a neutral expression of that fact in the lead, but using the term "astroturf" is WP:OR or, to be more precise, an original definition of "astroturf". — Arthur Rubin (talk) 20:20, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
It's a grass-roots political movement. Period.
Really? So when Zeitlow, whom we have no problem quoting elsewhere, says, "The degree to which the Tea Party movement is a grassroots movement is debatable. Tea Party organizers have received extensive financial support from prominent conservative think-tanks and financiers", we can simply cite you to end that debate? Or do you have a source that Misplaced Pages would actually consider reliable instead? When several professors are published by Oxford University Press and say, "The defining feature of astroturf groups is that they are generated by an industry, think tank, or front group, but designed to appear as a spontaneous, popular 'grassroots' effort. Especially important are the roles played by the Koch-funded Americans for Prosperity and FreedomWorks front groups in generating a significant portion of the 'Tea Party'...", should I inform them that they are conducting original research? Xenophrenic (talk) 21:21, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
The defining feature of astroturf groups is that they are generated by an industry, think tank, or front group, but designed to appear as a spontaneous, popular 'grassroots' effort. OK, but Especially important are the roles played by the Koch-funded Americans for Prosperity and FreedomWorks front groups in generating a significant portion of the 'Tea Party' is the only mention of Tea Party in that book, and seems to be a fringe position, even among the sources that you have been claimed to support the "astroturf" position; not even their sources agree. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 00:26, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
Incorrect; there are at least a few mentions of the Tea Party, FreedomWorks and Americans for Prosperity. And the cited sources agree, and I think you know that, because you would have quickly cited the actual discrepency if there really was one. If I understand you correctly, you are saying that all of the highly reliable sources that say the movement is not 100% grassroots are espousing a "fringe theory", correct? If so, I plan to raise your concern and your specific argument at WP:FTN (and I'll be sure to credit you). Xenophrenic (talk) 06:58, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
Okay, since you haven't objected, I'll raise your "fringe position" concern at WP:FTN this evening. Hopefully, we can get it resolved. Xenophrenic (talk) 21:12, 25 July 2013 (UTC)

Proposal 2

Add to the lede: "The movement comprises both grassroots and astroturf components, including concerned citizen activists, wealthy political action committees and national advocacy groups, establishment elites and conservative media outlets. The policy-based arguments supporting this have already been exhaustively discussed. There are 20+ reliable sources stating that the TPm is not completely grassroots. There are zero reliable sources that refute the astroturfed components of the movement. Some editors are promoting their personal opinion that the "TPm is 100% grass-roots", in violation of WP:WEIGHT. Xenophrenic (talk) 16:47, 22 July 2013 (UTC)

  • Oppose as not even going the right direction. There is one reliable source which uses the term "astroturf" to apply to the TPm, and he redefines it. The list of supporting organization types might belong in the lead. I might support the edit if it were rewritten as "the movement as a grass-roots movement, supported by . — Arthur Rubin (talk) 20:17, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
Please cite this "one reliable source" that redefines "astroturf", and cite that redefinition, please, so we can all review it. Is this the redefinition of which you speak? "The Astroturf Metaphor asserts that conservative leadership organizations provided resources, direction, and standardized messages that were crucial in instigating Tea Party protests." Please direct me to the source you are using that says that is a "redfinition", please. Just so we're all on the same page. Xenophrenic (talk) 21:21, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
"Component" is a very low bar and certainly is not enough to qualify for being a characterization. North8000 (talk) 23:59, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
"Component" is my word. What word do you think would more accurately convey what the reliable sources convey? Actually, we can remove that word completely without disrupting the meaning. Would that suffice? Xenophrenic (talk) 06:58, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
(Actually, that's not the source I had in mind which redefined "astroturf". It's still a different definition, though.) Well, I can't prove it's a redefinition, only that it's different than any other definition proposed, including the one in our article astroturfing. If it weren't a redefinition, it could appear in this article, but with "grass-roots" linked (because it does match our definition) and astroturfing not linked. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 00:14, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
It's not a different definition. And linking to "grassroots" means it would have to comply with "the creation of the movement and the group supporting it are natural and spontaneous, highlighting the differences between this and a movement that is orchestrated by traditional power structures", which isn't wholly true. Xenophrenic (talk) 07:01, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Oppose for the reasons I've already stated. The majority viewpoint per WP:WEIGHT, supported by at least one peer-reviewed academic source, 18 fact-checked news organization sources, and five WP:SELFPUB sources, is "The Tea Party movement is a grass-roots movement," period, full stop. WP:WEIGHT will not allow us to elevate a minority viewpoint to be stated as a fact in the lede.
  • Inserting just "grassroots", when countless reliable sources indicate that the movement is not completely grassroots ... "Countless"? Try "three," and no two of them say the same thing.
  • The false argument that there are only 3 reliable sources refuting your personal opinion has been disproven; there are many, not just 3. This is a false statement. There are three, and no two of them say the same thing.
  • The false argument that those sources are unsuitable due to bias or sourcing issues has been disproven; they are highly reliable. This is also a false statement. It has not been disproven. You suggested taking this to WP:RSN but you didn't do it. WP:RS allows us, as editors, to consider both context and potential bias in determining how much weight should be given to a particular source. Clearly, the consensus of editors here is that these sources don't merit enough weight to outweigh 24+ reliable sources that say, "The Tea Party is a grass-roots movement," period, full stop.
  • The false argument that those particular 3 sources don't all, in unison, say that the TP movement is not 100% grassroots has been disproven; they all state that. This is a statement based on a false premise. The false premise is that they represent one unified viewpoint. They don't. While all three say that the Tea Party movement is not 100% grassroots, there the resemblance ends. Two of them are in very, very roughly the same "part grassroots, part astroturf" time zone (not the same ballpark, not even the same zip code, but the same time zone). The third says that the Tea Party is neither grassroots nor astroturf, but something else that's in between.
  • So when Zeitlow, whom we have no problem quoting elsewhere, says, "The degree to which the Tea Party movement is a grassroots movement is debatable. Tea Party organizers have received extensive financial support from prominent conservative think-tanks and financiers" ... Nowhere in that quotation, or even in the entire article, can I find the word "astroturf." Zietlow supports neither your proposal nor mine. She says it's "debatable." Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 03:06, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
  • The majority viewpoint per WP:WEIGHT... --P&W
...doesn't say anything like that. Please quit misquoting and misapplying the policy.
  • Try "three," and no two of them say the same thing. --P&W
Please learn to count. Which "three" are you speaking of this time? And so far, at least 7 of them say the very same thing. Have you even read them?
  • You suggested taking this to WP:RSN but you didn't do it.
Correct. I suggested that you should take your challenge to RSN, and you haven't done it. If you'd like me to take your challenge there for you, I will. Which specific reliable source shall we start with, and what is your specific challenge to its suitability as a reliable source? We can work our way through each of them in turn.
  • WP:RS allows us, as editors, to consider both context and potential bias in determining how much weight should be given to a particular source.
You are making stuff up about policy again; please stop. "how much weight should be given to a particular source", thanks for the levity.
  • the consensus of editors here is that these sources don't merit enough weight to outweigh 24+ reliable sources
Please don't libel the other editors here. I'm fairly certain that most of them have been around long enough to know that number of sources saying something has nothing to do with WP:WEIGHT. I note that your proposal has zero reference citations; would you mind choosing 2 or 3 from your ever-changing number of sources and append them to your proposed text?
  • While all three say that the Tea Party movement is not 100% grassroots, there the resemblance ends.
Again, which three sources, exactly, are you speaking of? And you are correct that reliable sources agree that the Tea Party movement is not 100% grassroots, so why should we mislead our readers to believe otherwise?
  • The degree to which the Tea Party movement is a grassroots movement is debatable ... She says it's "debatable."
Yet you say there is no debate, according to what you have written above. Why should we mislead readers to believe that? Xenophrenic (talk) 06:58, 24 July 2013 (UTC)

Proposal 3

Do nothing and leave it alone for 6 months. (This is not what I think should be a course of action. I'm just throwing this out there for consideration.)—cyberpower Offline 05:47, 24 July 2013 (UTC)

We've already done nothing for three years. Count the number of reliable sources supporting one proposal. Count the number of reliable sources supporting the other proposal. And then please make a decision per WP:WEIGHT. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 12:15, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
Yes, please count the number of reliable sources (many) refuting the "100% grassroots" proposal. Now count the number of reliable sources (zero) refuting the "grassroots+astroturf" proposal. Then make a decision based on actual applicable Misplaced Pages policy, not a misunderstanding of one. Xenophrenic (talk) 21:08, 25 July 2013 (UTC)

Proposal 4

Take the existing reliable sources and develop encyclopedic content about the matter in the body of the article first. Then summarize that content in the WP:LEDE, which is how most content in the lede is created. Xenophrenic (talk) 21:08, 25 July 2013 (UTC)

End of the process — or a fresh start

We can not, as I see it, continue when any editor decides that the posited rules that six editors accepted should now be discussed at length - the idea that such a devotion to process, which would surely take weeks at the least, needs to be done when a single editor dislikes the ground rules is clearly going to make any solutions here totally impossible. My goal in proposing such rules was to prevent the absurd wikilawyering found in all too many discussions, and that any editor would desire to promote such behavior I find distressing. My hands are in the bowl of water, and unless everyone actually decides to work on the article instead of on arguing about process, there is no way in (insert expletive) that this can ever be resolved. Will some admin please lock this puppy down? Cheers. Collect (talk) 22:54, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

Your extensive concern about process is noted, but most of us here would just like to be productive with regard to the Tea Party movement and related articles. P&W has reiterated a few content concerns he'd like to see addressed, and I have some as well. By "please lock this puppy down", are you suggesting that we no longer try to improve the article, or is this just a "venue" concern? Xenophrenic (talk) 23:41, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
  • As some of you are aware, I have volunteered to be the moderator of this page per a request at AN. No one has yet opposed me being moderator so I have accepted the offer. As I settle in as moderator, and getting to know my role, a helping hand at knowing my limits as moderator is appreciated. If anybody objects to me being a moderator, please speak, or write that is, now.—cyberpower Online 02:06, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
Welcome to party, Pal! ;-)
But on a serious note, we do appreciate anyone who's willing to help. Hopefully this proves to be a fruitful endeavor for you. TETalk 02:16, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
Thank you for joining us, Cyberpower. Would you please review the discussion above, and tell us whether we have consensus for the three proposed edits? Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 04:04, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
Sure. If it's the multisection thread "Getting back to work" give me a few hours to read it through. :-)—cyberpower Offline 11:37, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Just to let everyone know that I'm still here and that I am sifting through the above discussions and links. It might take me another day or two to reach the end and form a close statement.—cyberpower Online 00:01, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

Withdrawing my participation @moderated discussion

Falling by the wayside. No parting shots, just regrets. Perhaps the future will bring about an environment more conducive to progress. Godspeed. TETalk 13:50, 14 July 2013 (UTC)

Amok

The recent sequence of edits on the TPm appear to be essentially ignoring the concept of WP:Consensus here, and verge on disruption at that article. Collect (talk) 11:10, 16 July 2013 (UTC)

Reminder

It has been brought to my attention that major anti-consensus were being made and reverted, twice. The page has now been fully protected by SilkTork, the previous moderator. As I don't have any admin powers to reverse this, nor do I now see a reason for it to be reversed right now, I am respectfully asking Xenophrenic to be careful in the future, and restrain from editing that article, unless there's a clear consensus claimed for such edits.—cyberpower Offline 11:33, 16 July 2013 (UTC)

I've made no anti-consensus edits. The recent good faith edits by me, ThinkEnemies, Collect and others, were not first subjected to consensus discussion. I've no problem refraining from editing the main article unless concensus is achieved first. That should apply to all involved editors, of course. The last consensus version is this one, implemented by our former Moderator, SilkTork. Xenophrenic (talk) 21:35, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
<redacted> As we're not allowed to comment on editors here. All I can say is that comment should not be part of any reasoned discussion, because it has little to do with reality. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 23:27, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
Still at it? Xenophrenic (talk) 05:44, 21 July 2013 (UTC)

The page has been fully protected and there will evidently be no block for starting an editwar. I propose that we immediately revert the page back to the version that existed before the editwar began. That version may be found here.

I don't consider there to be a dispute. Just editors with differing opinions trying to work this out. And trying to make some rules/processes for ourselves so that this can move forward. North8000 (talk) 10:08, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
You can call it a dispute or an orange if you feel so inclined but that focuses on a completely non relevant aspect of my sentence. The point is that administrators are not supposed to edit through full protection when they are involved. We have an edit request template for a reason. Nformation 10:12, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
I asked him to do it as a moderator request.—cyberpower Online 12:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
I realize that. I also realize you did so in good faith and that Arthur complied in good faith, which is why I mentioned it here and not at AN. Nevertheless it should not have been done and for the sake of avoiding even the appearance of impropriety I implore you to make liberal (no pun intended) use of the edit request template. Nformation 00:17, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
IMHO the moderator is the best one to assess/read the situation. The mop does not make a drop-in person a better one to do so. North8000 (talk) 00:20, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
I am making a singular point: an involved admin should not edit through full protection. Nothing you're responding with actually addresses this point in the least. Is the moderator the best one to assess/read the situation? Maybe, maybe not. Does the mop make a drop-in-person a better one to do so? Maybe, maybe not. Whether either of those answers falls within the verge of yes/no/maybe/maybe not is completely irrelevant to the very specific point that I've made: an involved admin is not permitted to edit through full protection. Nformation 09:11, 25 July 2013 (UTC)

Okay. Making liberal use of the edit request template.

Noformation is correct. It was wrong of me to ask Arthur to make the edit for me. He was clearly involved, and I have apologized to him for that.—cyberpower Online 09:33, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
This edit request to Tea Party movement has been answered. Set the |answered= or |ans= parameter to no to reactivate your request.

SilkTork has reverted Arthur's reversion, indicating that even though the edit was requested by our moderator, it must be executed by an uninvolved admin. The "vote" is 4-1 (everyone except Xenophrenic) in favor of reverting to this revision, with the lone opposing "vote" coming from Xenophrenic. The policy based argument is that Xenophrenic edited against consensus. Visiting admins, please make this edit. Thank you. regards .... Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 03:05, 25 July 2013 (UTC)

I am making no comment on the content of the edit, nor on if appropriate consensus has been reached (I've simply glanced at the voting, not read any of the comments), but it is inappropriate for an admin to be making an edit to a fully protected article while they are involved. Arthur Rubin should not have made the edit, and cyberpower should not have asked him to make the edit. What P&W has just done, is the appropriate procedure: ask an independent admin to look into the matter and assess consensus. It's worth reminding everyone that consensus is not always a simple majority vote - especially if a legitimate objection has been raised, and/or if those in majority are in the same camp. The procedure I adopted when moderating is if there was a legitimate objection raised, that the objection would be discussed before taking any further action. Objections should be discussed not ignored. SilkTork 08:11, 25 July 2013 (UTC)

Thanks SilkTork. I did mention that I would make a lot of mistakes in the beginning. But as I make a mistake, I learn from it and get better.—cyberpower Online 08:34, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
Question: Hi all. Could some kind soul link to any other discussions where this edit has come up? The voting above doesn't tell me anything about whether people have tried to find a consensus on this issue or how successful any attempts were. However, there is a lot of discussion on this page, and (lazy admin that I am) I don't really feel like reading through all of it to find the relevant bits. I'd appreciate help from those who have followed the proceedings here more closely than I. Best regards — Mr. Stradivarius 09:03, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
To my understanding, problematic editing was going which led to the article being protected a few days back. This above is the only thread to at least link back to the "correct" version of the article while it's protected.—cyberpower Online 09:33, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
Hi, Strad. A half-dozen editors had worked to develop an acceptable 'Agenda' section for the Tea Party movement article, with several competing versions being proposed. An editor prematurely claimed consensus for his preferred version and implemented this after some editors expressed support. Other editors contacted the Moderator (SilkTork) and expressed objections to that content being implemented, prompting our Moderator to open this discussion; note where he reiterates that the Moderator was responsible for declaring consensus unless the edit action was "agreed by all". Unfortunately, SilkTork withdrew as moderator shortly thereafter, leaving the disputed non-consensus version changes in the article and the problem unresolved. Rather than revert or delete the problematic content from the article, I instead proposed a significant rewrite based on proposed content from several versions, and asked for others to review it and raise objections. After several days of discussion, editor ThinkEnemies moved some uncontested parts of my proposed text to the main article, and I moved the remainder of the uncontested parts to the main article. Any content to which objections were raised was either deleted (or commented out of view, if discussions were still ongoing). Two and a half days later, Phoenix and Winslow reverted most of the previous edits with this strange edit summary: (Since there weren't four "votes" in favor of this massive edit, consensus could not be claimed under the new rules that a strong consensus agreed to on the Moderated Discussion page). That was the beginning of an edit war that resulted in the article being fully locked.
The above Edit Request appears to me to be an attempt to impose a preferred non-consensus, problematic version on a fully protected article. The most recent "status quo" version would be the one imposed by our Moderator (here) before any contested edits were made. Since all of the recent versions appear to be the "wrong" version (a fact not disputed by most of the "voters" above), I don't understand this push to have a preferred wrong version implemented unless the intent is to try to keep it implemented. Why not direct this energy toward fixing the content instead? Xenophrenic (talk) 11:28, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
Because (A) consensus does not require unanimity, and (B) we will never have unanimity unless everybody else caves in and agrees to allow the "Agenda" section to become, in effect, a second "Organization" section. This version would focus much of the first two paragraphs on the chaotic disorganization of the Tea Party, under the rationale that this chaotic disorganization is the cause of certain agenda inconsistencies between Tea Party groups. The content that was agreed upon, and implemented by me, was supported by a 4-1 "vote" for several hours before I implemented it; and as I explained earlier, there was every reason to expect the final "vote" to to be 6-1. So I made the edit. We had been working on it for weeks non-stop, we'd been through at least 22 different versions of the section, and everybody (with the obvious exception of Xenophrenic, a tower of iron will) was completely exhausted and burned out.
As expected, Collect brought the total of "support votes" to five because we had effectively addressed his concerns about readability. But Xenophrenic inexplicably recorded an "oppose vote" even though he was that version's co-author. Snowded came back to the article after an absence of several weeks for an "oppose vote," and ArtifexMayhem appeared out of nowhere, never having edited the article before, for an "oppose vote."
However, the CURRENT consensus clearly recognizes that reverting that edit was out of line, and that it should be restored immediately despite Xenophrenic's objection. Our moderator has recognized this consensus and asked that the version Xenophrenic reverted be restored. Furthermore, in case it wasn't already clear, for those of us who "voted" weeks ago in favor of the version we are now seeking to restore, this is the "right" version. Mr. Stradivarius, please make the edit. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 12:05, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
Let me see if I correctly understand what you've just written. Between the two proposals, both with five "Supports", you declared "consensus" for your preferred version because some editors voiced their opinions after your "several hour" window between calling for votes and implementing your edit? Well, at least we can agree that the version you tried to implement is not a consensus version, even if you didn't realize that at the time. (A good cautionary tale against rushing things after just a few hours.) My "!vote" in opposition to the problematic version wasn't inexplicable; as I noted in my comment: see objections to the problematic content above. Your interpretation of CURRENT consensus fails to recognize the input of the commenting editors. Every editor has a "right" version; what's your aversion to producing a version that is right for Misplaced Pages, instead? By the way, this is the first time you've raised a concern with the first 2 paragraphs of proposed text. Reliable sources make it a point to explain that the desparate TP groups are autonomous and set their own agendas, and reliable sources make it a point to explain the generally "economic" focus of many TP agendas -- therefore, our 'Agenda' section should do the same. Your concern about redundancy with the 'Organization' section is easily remedied by removal of a single sentence from the 'Organization' section. Xenophrenic (talk) 13:42, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Not done: I'm marking this as not done, as from the above comments it doesn't look like there has been any attempt to address Xenophrenic's concerns. I think SilkTork put it very well when he said "objections should be discussed not ignored", and I don't think the required discussion has happened in this case. — Mr. Stradivarius 04:15, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
There have been continual illicit edits (and reverts) made since the article was first unlocked, and the state of discussion on this page, particularly the dismissal of RS on dubious grounds, makes it a waste of time.
For the record, the version being pushed by P&W and the same block of editors never came close to achieving consensus even under the premises of the original guidelines (24 hours with at least two votes in support and NO objections).
I don't blame Silk Tork for not being able to handle the tremendous burden of moderating this so-called discussion, but it is high time that the Arbcom case brought some resolution and relief to the deplorable state of affairs here.--Ubikwit見学/迷惑 10:21, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
You are not supposed to be bashing other editors on this page. If you feel that it is important to do so, you should move your comments to where responses to such can occur. North8000 (talk) 11:36, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
Some of us have gone out of our way to address all stated objections, but progress can't be continually held up due to minor concerns. Now if Ubikwit wants to talk about never coming close to "achieving consensus" -- Well, they should probably be referred to their own proposals. TETalk 13:11, 26 July 2013 (UTC)

Proposed addition of Karl Denninger

I propose adding the following (slightly modified) paragraph from the Wikibio of Karl Denninger to the article mainspace, replacing the "Commentaries on origins" subsection in the History section, which should be moved to the "Perceptions" spin-off article:

Internet pioneer Karl Denninger was one of the early members of the Tea Party movement, sometimes referred to as a founder. In the aftermath of the March 2008 collapse of Bear Stearns, he founded the website Fed Up USA. He came to national attention for the criticisms of the Emergency Economic Stabilization Act of 2008 which he posted on Fed Up USA in September that year. On January 20, 2009, the day of President Obama's first inauguration, he published a blog post calling on readers to mail tea bags to the White House and Congress, echoing a suggestion by a commenter on one of his earlier blog posts. By February 1, the idea had spread to various conservative and libertarian-oriented blogs, forums, websites and through a viral email campaign.

Thoughts and comments, please. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 14:05, 17 July 2013 (UTC)

This material looks good and useful. The "commentaries on origin" section is really distorted, but I'm not so sure about totally eliminating / replacing it. Perhaps shrink the existing section to a single sentence on each of the listed items and keep the revised one in addition to putting this one in. North8000 (talk) 14:16, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
The whole paragraph should be moved to "Perceptions of the Tea Party movement" spin-off article. WP:SUMMARY tells us that this article should summarize what the spin-off articles say. Perhaps a few words to summarize this paragraph, such as "Critics have raised questions about the origins of the movement," should be added to the summary in the "Perceptions of the Tea Party" section. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 15:20, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
Sorry, I didn't mean to complicate / snarl things with my suggestion. The Ron Paul and Koch item as written look appropriate. The tobacco thing is way overblown but a brief sentence worded like the Koch item could be appropriate as a compromise. Overall, we should just keep moving. Perfection is the enemy of improvement. The original proposal is also OK with me. North8000 (talk) 20:01, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
Looks good to me; throw it in.--Froglich (talk) 05:39, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
Welcome to the party, pal. Yeah, it ought to look good to you, because you wrote it. I picked it up, refcites and all, from the Karl Denninger bio you've been writing. The first four words, and a few other minor changes, were necessary to introduce Mr. Denninger into this environment.
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The subsection "Commentaries on origin" should be removed, and replaced with the above paragraph in green about Karl Denninger. I think the new subsection header should be "Fed Up USA," the name of his blog where he first started talking about mailing tea bags to congressmen. Also, "Critics have raised questions about the origins of the movement," should be added to the summary in the "Perceptions of the Tea Party" section. — Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 15:50, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Oppose removing "Commentaries on origin" content. I agree with North8000 that there is usable information presently in that section, although it could use some improvement. I don't have a problem with Denninger and FedUpUSA being mentioned in relation to the origins of the movement, but that shouldn't be used as an excuse to remove other material under discussion. Xenophrenic (talk) 16:08, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
I would never argue to exclude the conspiratorial commentary on the Tea Party movement. But we should try building an origin section first. We can add new details on the emergence of social media behind the movement, the catalyst, as they say. TETalk 19:57, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
Building an 'Origins' section is an excellent idea. The Santelli rant is commonly cited as marking the "start" of the movement, but that is just because it had the benefit of being a cable news incident followed by a viral YouTube presence. There was certainly popular angst in the weeks before that, as evidenced by Trevor Leach, Keli Carender, Karl Denninger, and some stuff on Smart Girl Politics blogs, the TCOT Twitter gang, etc. We could replace the "Commentaries on origins" header with "Origins", and clean it up a bit. Xenophrenic (talk) 21:35, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
I don't want any trouble. We get that certain perspectives are dangerous. I'll pass this along anyways: http://www.lse.ac.uk/media@lse/research/mediaWorkingPapers/MScDissertationSeries/2012/81.pdf TETalk 22:02, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
Interesting read. Is that in support of proposed or existing article content? (I assume we are still discussing Origins, and social media's part in TP movement development.) Xenophrenic (talk) 05:44, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
Interesting, I figured you wanted to push a crazy-man tobacco conspiracy. This is good news. The nutter is gone from your butter. TETalk 06:11, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
I'm not catching your references here. Could you speak plainly please? Xenophrenic (talk) 14:43, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
I got a notification that you've reverted me. How cool is that? Moving on, I'm not about to edit war over your selective de-archiving. Enjoy! TETalk 15:34, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
Yeah, I'm liking the new notification tweaks the developers installed. Thanks for not edit warring; the archiving of ongoing discussions that are less than 72 hours old gave me pause, but I'm not going to waste time speculating as to intentions. Want to help build an Origins section? Xenophrenic (talk) 16:07, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
  • I've marked the edit request as answered for now. Although the suggestion has mostly been favourably received, I think there should be a bit more discussion about ways that it could be adjusted to satisfy Xenophrenic's objections. If this was a case of choosing a straight yes or no, I would go for "yes", but I think that there is probably a middle way that we can take here. Best — Mr. Stradivarius 12:50, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
The above edit request can be split into two parts. If editors are itching to add something to the article, some of the above proposed Denninger text can be added now, probably immediately before or after (chronologically) the Trevor Leach material. I'd leave off the last proposed sentence, as it is not supported by the cited source. I'm working on content for an 'Origins' section that covers the Jan-Feb 2009 infancy of the movement that may eventually incorporate part of that Denninger material. The second part of the edit request (removal/relocation of the 'Commentaries on origins' content) should instead be refocused on rewriting it as a brief and factual (less the commentary and opinion) 'Origins' section. Xenophrenic (talk) 12:28, 25 July 2013 (UTC)

direction of this project

I've been away on holiday and have not been able to comment, but today I discovered the TPm page has been locked. This is very disconcerting considering all the work editors have put into this discussion here. After looking over the edits on the article, it's apparent that things are not heading in a productive direction at all. I'm not placing blame on anyone, but it's time to stop and reassess this and sort some goals. I'm also disheartened that nobody seems cognizant of the ArbCom case that is pending. The whole point of this moderated discussion was to sort the problems with the editors and the article goals, not make things worse. I'd really like to hear from editors on what they believe really matters here. And Cyberpower, it's enormously kind of you to take on the role of moderator, but since you've don't have admin powers, it might be best if you reconsider things. You'll be called upon to discipline editors for breaching the rules and without admin powers, that won't be possible. It's an enormous burden to begin with, and it absolutely requires an admin. It's obvious to me that the page needed to be locked which SilkTork rightly did. Malke 2010 (talk) 16:53, 25 July 2013 (UTC)

You are right. I have been seriously considering withdrawing as moderator. The mere fact that I'm not an admin, is challenge on its own level.—cyberpower Online 18:09, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
It does make things harder for you. You are very brave to take this on, and your comments are measured and patient which is a huge bonus here. Having the tools, and the threat of them, would make things so much easier for you. Malke 2010 (talk) 18:37, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
I don't threaten. I'm actually quite patient.—cyberpower Online 18:54, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
I don't mean you would actually need to threaten. I meant the idea that the tools can be used at any time is often enough to stay an editor from going down the wrong path. I did notice that you are very patient. That's an asset, to be sure. Malke 2010 (talk) 18:58, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
Cyber's head and heart are both in the right place. Unfortunately he needs to be able to ask an admin to perform admin tasks, and the admin needs to be able to accept his judgment and take action immediately, since we've accepted him as our moderator. We have a crowd of people here, all but one of whom are in agreement at this point, but one tendentious editor is still able to stop all our work in its tracks. Changes need to be made. I don't think we need a new moderator. I think we need to give the moderator the on-call admin support that he needs. This is what we need to help our moderator be effective. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 19:44, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
(edit conflict)
@Cyberpower: Please don't do anything rash - I think your lack of Admin tools is a minor technicality that can be easily remedied by enlisting the aid of a willing Administrator who would perform the Admin actions only at your direction and request. You would still be responsible for all of the dispute resolution, final decision making and moderating. It's something to consider, at least. I say this for a reason. Do you realize that you are the only editor to respond to the request for a moderator after many days on the noticeboard? Do you realize the previous moderator visited the Talk pages of a half-dozen established content editors and requested their help, and they all declined (except one, who stuck his toes in the water, made a handful of minor copy-edits, and hasn't been seen since)? Malke is correct that having Admin tools would be more convenient, but I'm not sure she realizes just how difficult (if not impossible at this point) it would be to find another moderator.
@Malke: I hope you had a great time on holiday! You asked to hear from editors what matters here? I really think that differs from editor to editor. Of course everyone will say they want to see article improvement; the generic answer. It has become evident, however, that "improvement" means different things to different editors. The disagreements between editors seem to boil down to whether article content is flattering or non-flattering to the article subject. For me, since I have no personal experience with the subject matter, I must go with what the reliable sources say. Other editors, however, seem to have insider knowledge that I lack - I'm learning, for instance, that seemingly reliable sources, from journalists to academics, are actually not reliable at all. They are secretly "opponents" of the movement, and have an agenda to undermine the movement by claiming unflattering things about them. Or so I've been told. Another thing that matters very much to some editors here, and this is becoming increasingly evident, is what can be done to editors rather than articles. You will find them calling for all manner of bans, blocks and other sanctions against those with whom they have content disagreements. They are easy to spot, lodging carefully worded complaints at Admin noticeboards, ArbComs, RfCs, Talk pages of admins, etc. Xenophrenic (talk) 19:49, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
@P&W: Interesting; you and I agree 100% in our advice to Cyberpower. We also agree on your other observation: there is indeed a crowd of people here that are always in agreement with each other, regardless. Then there's me, who chooses instead to agree with reliable sources, and I do so solo lately since most other editors who do the same have been driven off. Your "tendentious editor" attack has been noted. Xenophrenic (talk) 19:55, 25 July 2013 (UTC)

I think I've supported 90% of the last 15 proposals (all with the caveat the we understand that they aren't perfect and can and will get changes.) and none of them have been implemented. We need to get some that are 90% good put in with the caveat/understanding that they will need to be further evolved after we put them in. Also, let's agree that the status quo is to be treated as just another option. That way people have less to fear that an imperfect change will get entrenched if it's put in. Let's get this baby moving! Sincerely,, North8000 (talk) 21:20, 25 July 2013 (UTC)

Notice to Everyone

I would like to remind everyone that discussions outside of this page will not be moderated or controlled and the civility cannot be enforced. Also, more input on the proposals would be appreciated.—cyberpower Online 18:08, 29 July 2013 (UTC)

Stepping Down

I appreciate that many of you would like to keep as moderator. It was a strong incentive to remain one. However, numerous reasons came up as to why I should step down. First and foremost, when I accepted moderator-ship of this page, it never occurred to me how overwhelming moderating this page for me. I'm afraid I'll burn myself out too quickly and make major mistakes. The current ArbCom case seems to be in favor of topic banning everyone involved for 6 months. There won't be anything to moderate when it passes. On the topic of ArbCom, since I can technically be seen as an involved party, it may come to pass to topic ban me too. In any event resignation would be a preferable option than to face a topic ban. I really feel this should be left to a much more experienced editor to moderate. I thought I could give it a try at least. It was a pleasure to be the moderator of this page, no matter what went on. I hope ArbCom settles this dispute in a fashion that most can agree on.—cyberpower Online 09:16, 1 August 2013 (UTC)

Well said. It's a travesty what's currently happening at ArbCom and your concerns are completely valid. Possibly under less-chilling circumstances we all could've collaborated and actually improved TPM (which is really in sad shape). I'm desperately attempting to re-gain faith in this project. Regrettably, it seems the powers that be are still running interference for truly bad, albeit active elements around here who dissuade and burnout our more well-intentioned contributors. Sad to see this vicious cycle repeating itself. SMH. TETalk 12:35, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
Thanks for stopping by, and we appreciate your contribution. The motion proposed at ArbCom is perplexing to say the least. It's far from impossible to spot the worst offenders on this page — the ones who, either single-handedly or as a very small group, are being allowed and even enabled to obstruct any further progress on the article at all. This is being allowed to happen no matter how bad their track records have been proven to be, and no matter how well-stated and numerous the policy-based arguments might be against them. It's very frustrating. But the willingness of a moderator to step in here at a difficult time, and at least attempt to keep things moving in the right direction, was one of the bright spots. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 23:16, 3 August 2013 (UTC)
Cyberpower, thanks for what you did and we wish you would stay. More fallout from the fact that Arbcom case was sent off on a tangent from the start and has never recovered. North8000 (talk) 16:44, 4 August 2013 (UTC)

Re: Agenda of the Tea Party movement

The suddenly fashionable drive-by shooting approach to Misplaced Pages editing has taken me by surprise and I'm not sure it's appropriate. Binksternet and Ubikwit are encouraged to discuss their concerns here regarding alleged NPOV problems, any proposed changes to the lede sentence, the allegation that the article is a WP:POVFORK, etc. Please stop flinging around templates hoping that one of them will stick. For example, the NPOV template that was posted there claims that "relevant discussion can be found on the Talk page." There is no discussion at all on that Talk page concerning your NPOV allegation, so don't post the template until you've expressed your concern in the proper venue. After your concerns have been properly expressed, rather than just driving up and spraying your rhetorical bullets around, a proper response can be posted, and we'll see whether you can gather consensus for your proposed changes. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 16:10, 6 August 2013 (UTC)

It's a shame that the entire other side in the content dispute has chosen not to participate in the moderated discussion. I'm sure that a new moderator can be found, and would like to proceed. Phoenix and Winslow (talk) 17:28, 7 August 2013 (UTC)

The term "teabagger"

I've commented at the main article talk page, but will now repeat here. I can't recall having been involved in this article until right now, and would like to point out an error. The following sentence in the article is unsourced, it has two separate Misplaced Pages tags on it, and it is erroneous:

The term '']'' was initially used to refer to Tea Partiers after conservatives{{who|date=September 2013}} used ''tea bag'' as a verb on protest signs and websites.{{cn|date=September 2013}}

According to the article by Alex Koppelman that's already in the footnotes:

hen used as a verb, the words “tea bag” and “teabagging” have nothing to do with a hot, soothing drink....I’ve traced the meme’s birth back to February 27th, when blogs like Instaputz and Wonkette started using it independently of one another. They were inspired by a photo that the Washington Independent’s David Weigel shot of one protester carrying a sign that was, if you knew that second meaning, pretty funny: “Tea bag the liberal Dems before they tea bag you !!” (sic).

Those first uses on websites were not by conservatives at all, so the unsourced sentence in the Misplaced Pages article is false. And the origin seems to have been a single protest sign, not a plurality of them. Surely we can make this article a fine upstanding place to visit, instead of, um, a fleabag. Any objection if I take a crack at it?Anythingyouwant (talk) 02:21, 28 September 2013 (UTC)

Here's a specific proposal: "In February 2009, a conservative protester was photographed with a sign using the words 'tea bag' as a verb, which swiftly led to left-leaning websites like Wonkette introducing 'teabagger' as a term for Tea Partiers." Cite: Koppelman.Anythingyouwant (talk) 18:14, 28 September 2013 (UTC)
And your wording would be backed up by what citations? Koppelman doesn't back this up and conflicts with other sources.TMCk (talk) 00:00, 29 September 2013 (UTC)
Please feel free to rephrase the proposed sentence, or to say specifically what you think is unsupported by Koppelman. I already quoted the pertinent part of Koppelman above. Koppelman seems to have investigated the matter in greatest depth, and so treatments that are obviously more cursory should probably not necessarily be given equal weight with Koppelman. What I mainly tried to do is take the Koppelman info and present it chronologically. Are you saying that you think the current text in the article is fine?Anythingyouwant (talk) 00:58, 29 September 2013 (UTC)
First of all, you took one of many sources and added your own interpretation/twist to it. Further, re. "cursory treatments" , "TheWeek.com" source as an example dosn't seem to fit your label at all. Is the present text accurate? Yes it is or very, very close. At least closer to sources presented than what you're proposing. You don't get to decide how much weight each RS receives, you sure understand that. Can the text in question be improved? Sure, there is always space to improve content, just not by twisting it in a different direction contrary to sources. Give it another try and I might go for it.TMCk (talk) 01:39, 29 September 2013 (UTC)

(Outdent) For the time being, I will continue to assume that you're editing in good faith, TMKC, and that (like me) you are not trying to twist anything. You cite one source to assert that the current text in the Wikipedua article is much better than what I have proposed. Let's look at what that source (TheWeek.com) says about February 2009:

Feb. 27, 2009. At the first anti-stimulus "New American Tea Party" rally in Washington D.C., a protestor carries a sign reading "Tea Bag the Liberal Dems before they Tea Bag You!!" The Washington Independent's David Weigel calls it "the best sign I saw."

This excerpt is much more cursory than the discussion in the Koppelman article, which identifies further uses on Feb. 27, 2009 by blogs Instaputz and Wonkette. TheWeek.com does not contradict Koppelman, and instead simply skips along to March 2009. I don't see any ambiguity about the fact that the piece in TheWeek is much more cursory about the events of February 2009 than Koppelman. I would also like to request that you please tone down your accusations, and try to assume good faith. Thanks.Anythingyouwant (talk) 02:06, 29 September 2013 (UTC)

I have started a survey at the main article talk page.Anythingyouwant (talk) 16:55, 30 September 2013 (UTC)
  1. ^ "Group Think: Inside the Tea Party’s Collective Brain"; National Journal; Jonathan Rauch; September 11, 2010
  2. ^ Tea Partiers shaking up races across country; KTVB News; January 28, 2010
  3. ^ Elizabeth Price Foley, law professor at Florida International University College of Law, writing on the Tea Party's proclamations regarding the Constitution, observed: "Tea Party opposition to bailouts, stimulus packages and health-care reform is reflected in various proposals to amend the Constitution, including proposals to require a balanced budget, repeal the Sixteenth and Seventeenth Amendments, and give states a veto power over federal laws (the so-called Repeal Amendment)." (Foley, Elizabeth Price. "Sovereignty, Rebalanced: The Tea Party and Constitutional Amendments." Tennessee Law Review, Vol. 78, p. 751. August 3, 2011.) Cite error: The named reference "Foley1" was defined multiple times with different content (see the help page).
  4. Kate Zernike, a national correspondent for The New York Times, wrote: "It could be hard to define a Tea Party agenda; to some extent it depended on where you were. In the Northeast, groups mobilized against high taxes; in the Southwest, illegal immigration. Some Tea Partiers were clearer about what they didn't want than what they did. But the shared ideology — whether for young libertarians who came to the movement through Ron Paul or older 9/12ers who came to it through Glenn Beck — was the belief that a strict interpretation of the Constitution was the solution to government grown wild. By getting back to what the founders intended, they believed they could right what was wrong with the country. Where in the Constitution, they asked, does it say that the federal government was supposed to run banks? Or car companies? Where does it say that people have to purchase health insurance? Was it so much to ask that officials honor the document they swear an oath to uphold?" (Zernike, Kate. Boiling Mad: Inside Tea Party America. New York: Times Books, 2010, pp.65-66.)
  5. Tea Party groups ramp up fight against immigration bill, as August recess looms; Fox News; July 5, 2013
  6. Tea Party - vs - Immigration Reform; National Review; Betsy Woodruff; June 20, 2013
  7. ^ Gabriel, Trip (December 25, 2012). "Clout Diminished, Tea Party Turns to Narrower Issues". The New York Times.
  8. The Tea Party's Next Move; National Journal; Jonathan Rauch;March 2, 2011
  9. Carey, Nick (October 15, 2012). "Tea Party versus Agenda 21: Saving the U.S. or just irking it?". Reuters.com.
  10. Tea Party Protesters Rally Against IRS, Government; Wall Street Journal; Rebecca Ballhaus; June 19, 2013
  11. Schmidt
  12. Tea-ing Up the Constitution; New York Times; Adam Liptak, March 13, 2010
  13. The Tea Party Movement and Popular Constitutionalism; Northwestern University Law Review; Ilya Somin; December 6, 2011
  14. Rebecca E. Zietlow, law professor at the University of Toledo College of Law, characterizes the Tea Party's constitutional position as a combination of two schools of thought: "originalism" and "popular constitutionalism." "Tea Party activists have invoked the Constitution as the foundation of their conservative political philosophy. These activists are engaged in 'popular originalism,' using popular constitutionalism — constitutional interpretation outside of the courts — to invoke originalism as interpretive method." (Zietlow, Rebecca E. "Popular Originalism? The Tea Party Movement and Constitutional Theory." Florida Law Review, Vol. 64, p. 483 (2012).0
  15. The Tea Party and the Constitution; Hastings Constitutional Law Quarterly; Christopher W. Schmidt; May 9, 2012
  16. The Tea Party and the Remaking of Republican Conservatism; Theda Skocpol and Vanessa Williamson; Oxford University Press; 2012; Pgs. 50-51
  17. Cultures of the Tea Party; Contexts May 2011 vol. 10 no. 2; Andrew J. Perrin, Stephen J. Tepper; Pgs. 7-8
  18. Boiling Mad: Inside Tea Party America; Kate Zernike; Macmillan Publishers; 2010; Pages 67-68
  19. Laying Claim to the Constitution: The Promise of New Textualism; Virginia Law Review; James E. Ryan; November 2011; Page 19-20
  20. The Tea Party: A Brief History; Formisano, Ronald; The Johns Hopkins University Press; 2012; Page 52
  21. Davis, Teddy (9 February 2010). "Tea Party Activists Craft 'Contract from America'". ABC News. American Broadcasting Company. Retrieved 18 September 2010.
  22. ^ Davis, Teddy (April 15, 2010). "Tea Party Activists Unveil 'Contract from America'". ABC News. Retrieved June 7, 2011.
  23. Steep: The Precipitous Rise of the Tea Party; Lawrence Rosenthal, Christine Trost; University of California Press; May 2012; "Debate still rages in the blogs. Some condemn the Tea Party as Astroturf, a movement directly funded and organized from its very beginning by conservative leaders. Others argue that the Tea Party epitomizes grassroots politics, an outpouring of aggreived citizens who spontaneously protested against big government. Both arguments contain at least a grain of truth." Page 98-99; "Local Tea Parties and national Tea Party unbrella groups are entangled with and significantly funded by the United States' conservative establishment and by parts of the Republican Party." Page 134-135
  24. Keeping the Republic: Power and Citizenship in American Politics; Christine Barbour, Gerald C Wright; CQ Press; January 2013; "The indirect lobbying we have discussed is often called grassroots lobbying, meaning that it addresses people in their roles as ordinary citizens. It is the weilding of power from the bottom (roots) up, rather than from the top down. Most of what we refer to as grassroots lobbying, however, does not spring spontaneously from the people but is orchestrated by elites, leading some people to call it astroturf lobbying—indicating that it is not really genuine. Often the line between real grassroots and astroturf lobbying is blurred, however. A movement may be partly spontaneous but partly orchestrated. the Tea Party movement has been, in part, the project of Dick Armey, a former Republican House majority leader whose organization, FreedomWorks, promotes low taxes and small government. FreedomWorks and several other conservative groups, as well as prominent individuals including some commentators at Fox News, have lent their organizational expertise to the Tea Partiers but deny that they are orchestrating an astroturf movement." Page 497-498
  25. Blessed Are the Organized: Grassroots Democracy in America; Jeffrey Stout; Princeton University Press; 2010; "Some of the issues that have been of central concern to the religious right over the last three decades have more recently been taken over by the considerably more volatile Tea Party movement. Insofar as the latter movement is a creation of media elites, it too qualifies as an example of top-down politics. The volatility of the movement derives, however, from the sponteneity of its populist spirit. The movement's distrust of elites, and "socialists" could rapidly morph into outright fascism if there were a further deepening of the economic crisis or a series of additional terrorist attacks on the scale of 9/11. In any event, it is easy to imagine the movement's bottom-up populism becoming a more prominent force in American politics in the coming years." Page 230-231
  26. ^ Semprini, Francesco (2010-10-26). "Il fondatore del movimento, Karl Denninger, si scaglia contro l'ex governatore dell'Alaska e i Patriots". La Stampa. Retrieved 2013-01-05.
  27. "Tea Party founder backs Occupy Wall Street". Russia Today. 2011-10-14. Retrieved 2013-01-05.
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  29. "Jane Hamsher: A Teabagger Timeline: Koch, Coors, Newt, Dick Armey There From The Start". The Huffington Post. 16 May 2009. Retrieved 2010-04-27.
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