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I'm not sure how to edit it so I can't make the changes myself but the legal status map of jurisdictions is wrong for Australia. The map was edited to make the changes for what I assume is the legal status changes in Queensland in 2020, but it was altered to add NSW not QLD. ] (]) 10:20, 7 August 2021 (UTC) | I'm not sure how to edit it so I can't make the changes myself but the legal status map of jurisdictions is wrong for Australia. The map was edited to make the changes for what I assume is the legal status changes in Queensland in 2020, but it was altered to add NSW not QLD. ] (]) 10:20, 7 August 2021 (UTC) | ||
== Suggestion for Sigmund Freud section == | |||
I feel that the first paragraph of Sigmund Freuds section is slightly cluttered with the inclusion of Eugen Steinach's information as well. I'm wondering, would it be appropriate to create a sub-header for Eugen Steinach and separate his information from Sigmund Freud's a bit? It would look like this, | |||
'''Eugen Steinach''' | |||
Eugen Steinach, was a Viennese endocrinologist who transplanted testicles from straight men into gay men in attempts to change their sexual orientation, stating that his research had "thrown a strong light on the organic determinants of homo-eroticism". Steinach's method was doomed to failure because the immune system rejects transplanted glands, and was eventually exposed as ineffective and often harmful. | |||
'''Sigmund Freud''' | |||
Sigmund Freud was a physician and the founder of psychoanalysis. Freud stated that homosexuality could sometimes be removed through hypnotic suggestion, and was influenced by Eugen Steinach. Freud cautioned that Steinach's operations would not necessarily make possible a therapy that could be generally applied, arguing that such transplant procedures would be effective in changing homosexuality in men only in cases in which it was strongly associated with physical characteristics typical of women, and that probably no similar therapy could be applied to lesbianism. | |||
(The section continues normally after this edit) | |||
Another suggestion I'd like to present is the first sentence of the second paragraph in Freud's section. I believe it could be more concise if it were phrased like this, | |||
"Freud's main discussion of female homosexuality was the 1920 paper "The Psychogenesis of a Case of Homosexuality in a Woman", which described his analysis of a young woman who had entered therapy because her parents were concerned that she was a lesbian and wanted her condition to be reverted." | |||
I didn't want to make the changes without approval as I have made no edits prior to this, interested to hear the groups thoughts.] (]) 21:35, 3 October 2021 (UTC) |
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Trans conversion therapy?
The term 'conversion therapy' also applies to conversion therapy targeted towards changing the gender of transgender people back to that assigned at birth - has this been separated out into a different page, and if not, shouldn't this article mention it? Amekyras (talk) 00:58, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
- The highest quality - WP:MEDRS - sources show that the term in fact refers to sexual orientation, as is evident from the sources in the article. Sexual orientation and gender identity are different things, of course. This has been discussed before in the archives, most recently here. Crossroads 05:32, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you, much appreciated. I would personally disagree with the idea that because some studies show that prepubescent children have a high rate of desistance, conversion therapy aimed at transgender individuals should not be talked about, but I absolutely see your point regarding WP:MEDRS. Some sources, however, do apply the term to both contexts (particularly the memorandum of understanding on conversion therapy in the UK, signed by all organisations listed in the UK but two) - at what point should the definition on Misplaced Pages be expanded, or at least noted to include transgender persons in some contexts? Amekyras (talk) 09:37, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
- IIRC the discussion I linked to links to another discussion that speaks of that. Crossroads 05:51, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
- A wikipedia page is not a discussion of a term, but of a topic. If the term "conversion therapy" is also being used to discuss attempts to combat transgenderism, while a parallel topic, it is generally a separate topic, and should get a separate page (just as we have several pages for "Captain Marvel", even though they all have similarities, as they are all about different superheroes with that name.) So a page could be started at conversion therapy (gender identity), and we could add a disambiguation here for that. --Nat Gertler (talk) 14:09, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
- I would agree with that, although given that many articles and even laws tackle the two together, I would have thought it would make sense to keep them on the same page. Amekyras (talk) 17:15, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
- A wikipedia page is not a discussion of a term, but of a topic. If the term "conversion therapy" is also being used to discuss attempts to combat transgenderism, while a parallel topic, it is generally a separate topic, and should get a separate page (just as we have several pages for "Captain Marvel", even though they all have similarities, as they are all about different superheroes with that name.) So a page could be started at conversion therapy (gender identity), and we could add a disambiguation here for that. --Nat Gertler (talk) 14:09, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
- IIRC the discussion I linked to links to another discussion that speaks of that. Crossroads 05:51, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you, much appreciated. I would personally disagree with the idea that because some studies show that prepubescent children have a high rate of desistance, conversion therapy aimed at transgender individuals should not be talked about, but I absolutely see your point regarding WP:MEDRS. Some sources, however, do apply the term to both contexts (particularly the memorandum of understanding on conversion therapy in the UK, signed by all organisations listed in the UK but two) - at what point should the definition on Misplaced Pages be expanded, or at least noted to include transgender persons in some contexts? Amekyras (talk) 09:37, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
A unilateral edit to the WP:LEADSENTENCE changed the definition to include identity, and I've removed it, per WP:PRIMARY, MOS:LEADNOTUNIQUE, and reasons stated above. I invite Wristsquid (talk · contribs) or Bop34 to discuss this change here first, before pursuing it in the article. Mathglot (talk) 18:55, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
- Undoing this on the basis of it being controversial is unreasonable. Conversion therapy is a practice that includes gender identity and this is confirmed by the United Nations High Commissioner for Human Rights, and given that conversion therapy is a violation of human rights, I'd say the united nations is one of, if not the, highest authority on this. With the current political situation as it is, with LGB groups advocating for conversion therapy of transsexuals and claiming it doesn't count as conversion therapy if it's on trans people, I'd say that leaving trans people out of the definition on Misplaced Pages, despite it being included in international law, can't be seen as anything other than a political statetment. Wristsquid (talk) 20:20, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
- I agree with what @Mathglot said in their edit summary of the reversion. Move to body, then to lead. bop34 • talk • contribs 21:04, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
- @Wristsquid:, you misunderstand. You are right about one thing: undoing it based on it being controversial would be unreasonable, and unjustified. That is not what happened, here. It was undone because of the preponderance of opinion on the subject, as demonstrated by citations to numerous reliable sources, define it differently. That doesn't mean you can't change it, but changing the definition based on a single source that you found, is not the way.
- As far as controversy, the fact that this is a controversial topic, only means that there is likely to be lots of opinion on the topic, including many that may dispute other reliable sources. Misplaced Pages has the policy of WP:DUEWEIGHT in order to determine how to deal with this. The other problem with your edit, was adding the material first to the lead, instead of to the body; in Misplaced Pages, the WP:LEAD summarizes the most important points found in the body. Your material was new material, and if you wish to add it, you should first try to add it to the body, and see if that finds support. (It might, or might not, based on WP:DUEWEIGHT and other considerations.) If it passes muster there, and is considered an important point of the article, only then should you try to add it to the lead. Finally, changing the WP:FIRSTSENTENCE of an article really should be discussed first at the Talk page, because it defines what the entire article is about. Hundreds of editors have been here before you, sometimes definitions are hammered out in long discussions by many editors. It's kind of a newbie mistake, to just float in and change the very first sentence of the article. Which doesn't mean that it couldn't, or shouldn't ever happen; WP:BOLD is also a core principle of Misplaced Pages. But an edit like that, in a controversial article like this, is biting off too much; especially when it is your very first edit at Misplaced Pages. Discussing here, as you are now doing, is the right approach. It could be that your PoV will prevail, but we need to see that the change you propose, is actually the majority opinion of sources on the topic. Is it? So far, the sources in the article don't seem to support that; but maybe you'll find more. Mathglot (talk) 21:23, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
- Given that the Memorandum of Understanding on Conversion Therapy (UK) defines it as both, along with the sources mentioned by Wristsquid, is that not enough for it to be at least worth considering mentioning somewhere in the lead that the term is used by different bodies to refer to different things, and not solely to refer to sexual orientation change efforts? Amekyras (talk) 11:48, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
- Wristsquid's source was problematic as explained by Mathglot. WP:LEADFOLLOWSBODY still applies and to elevate this as equal to sexual orientation conversion therapy I think requires more than governmental sources, but MEDRS academic reviews. Mathglot, any thoughts on this? Crossroads 03:32, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
- Like Nat (below), I believe most sources are on orientation, not identity. Supposing we both are wrong about that, the WP:BURDEN is on those who wish to add material, to demonstrate that the addition is appropriate per WP:DUEWEIGHT. So far, that hasn't happened. It's UNDUE to add it even to the body, imho, unless there's evidence that it represents more than a "tiny minority" of sources on this topic.
- Of course, for the topic Trans conversion therapy, those sources would be entirely WP:DUE and could be used (if they meet MEDRS). However, that topic would need to face questions of WP:Notability and whether they passed the bar for a stand-alone article. And, as in my response below, it definitely requires MEDRS sources. Mathglot (talk) 03:59, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
- Wristsquid's source was problematic as explained by Mathglot. WP:LEADFOLLOWSBODY still applies and to elevate this as equal to sexual orientation conversion therapy I think requires more than governmental sources, but MEDRS academic reviews. Mathglot, any thoughts on this? Crossroads 03:32, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
- Given that the Memorandum of Understanding on Conversion Therapy (UK) defines it as both, along with the sources mentioned by Wristsquid, is that not enough for it to be at least worth considering mentioning somewhere in the lead that the term is used by different bodies to refer to different things, and not solely to refer to sexual orientation change efforts? Amekyras (talk) 11:48, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
- (edit conflict)It certainly is good to have a source that at least links the two together, and yes, a powerful source... but not a medical source. So if we're relying on this source, part of the question is whether this is a medical article requiring us to meet the guidelines at WP:MEDRS, or whether the preponderance of legal discussion regarding it makes it less medical in nature. I will note that if we do seek to include gender conversion on this page, it will likely take more of an effort than just replacing the first sentence, as I think (off the top of my head; I may be wrong) most of the laws are dealing with specifically orientation conversion efforts, and much of the other discussion is too, and it should not be written as if it reflects everything in that new opening sentence. --Nat Gertler (talk) 21:32, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
- Nat is on the right track, here. I'd go a step further: it's not only whether the article is on a medical topic, but whether the specific *content* to be added is. WP:MEDRS defines what is "appropriate for medical content in any Misplaced Pages article." (emphasis in original). Mathglot (talk) 03:46, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
- Just gonna jump in and say do you have sources that touch on trans conversation therapy? Because I’m not entirely sure I can trust what you are saying.CycoMa (talk) 04:23, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
- Nat is on the right track, here. I'd go a step further: it's not only whether the article is on a medical topic, but whether the specific *content* to be added is. WP:MEDRS defines what is "appropriate for medical content in any Misplaced Pages article." (emphasis in original). Mathglot (talk) 03:46, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
Tries to change a person's gender identity to cisgender
Conversion therapy often tries to change people's gender identity to cisgender, it also tries to make any feminine men masculine and any masculine women feminine DSMbomb (talk) 20:34, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
- Have you a source linking that to sexual preference conversion? --Nat Gertler (talk) 20:52, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
Incorrect changes to legal status map
I'm not sure how to edit it so I can't make the changes myself but the legal status map of jurisdictions is wrong for Australia. The map was edited to make the changes for what I assume is the legal status changes in Queensland in 2020, but it was altered to add NSW not QLD. 2407:8800:BC61:300:A40A:D735:8355:DF9C (talk) 10:20, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
Suggestion for Sigmund Freud section
I feel that the first paragraph of Sigmund Freuds section is slightly cluttered with the inclusion of Eugen Steinach's information as well. I'm wondering, would it be appropriate to create a sub-header for Eugen Steinach and separate his information from Sigmund Freud's a bit? It would look like this,
Eugen Steinach Eugen Steinach, was a Viennese endocrinologist who transplanted testicles from straight men into gay men in attempts to change their sexual orientation, stating that his research had "thrown a strong light on the organic determinants of homo-eroticism". Steinach's method was doomed to failure because the immune system rejects transplanted glands, and was eventually exposed as ineffective and often harmful.
Sigmund Freud Sigmund Freud was a physician and the founder of psychoanalysis. Freud stated that homosexuality could sometimes be removed through hypnotic suggestion, and was influenced by Eugen Steinach. Freud cautioned that Steinach's operations would not necessarily make possible a therapy that could be generally applied, arguing that such transplant procedures would be effective in changing homosexuality in men only in cases in which it was strongly associated with physical characteristics typical of women, and that probably no similar therapy could be applied to lesbianism.
(The section continues normally after this edit)
Another suggestion I'd like to present is the first sentence of the second paragraph in Freud's section. I believe it could be more concise if it were phrased like this,
"Freud's main discussion of female homosexuality was the 1920 paper "The Psychogenesis of a Case of Homosexuality in a Woman", which described his analysis of a young woman who had entered therapy because her parents were concerned that she was a lesbian and wanted her condition to be reverted."
I didn't want to make the changes without approval as I have made no edits prior to this, interested to hear the groups thoughts.BWeihsmantel2021 (talk) 21:35, 3 October 2021 (UTC)
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