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| In a third round of editing I did further streamlining to the article. Please leave comments here if you still think the tone is inappropriate to Misplaced Pages's. --] 07:38, 2 October 2006 (UTC) | In a third round of editing I did further streamlining to the article. Please leave comments here if you still think the tone is inappropriate to Misplaced Pages's. --] 07:38, 2 October 2006 (UTC) | ||
| :So far it seems pretty good |
:So far it seems pretty good. I'll remove the template. o''']'''r''']''' <sub>(])</sub> 01:16, 3 October 2006 (UTC) | ||
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Revision as of 12:56, 27 July 2008
Tag "Neutral point"
I made some adjustments in formulations and headlines. If you still feel uncomfortable about meeting neutrality standards please elaborate. --Peter Eisenburger 11:12, 1 October 2006 (UTC)
In a third round of editing I did further streamlining to the article. Please leave comments here if you still think the tone is inappropriate to Misplaced Pages's. --Peter Eisenburger 07:38, 2 October 2006 (UTC)
- So far it seems pretty good. I'll remove the template. oTHErONE (Contribs) 01:16, 3 October 2006 (UTC)
References
Regarding the concern that has been expressed about the external links section I will incorporate them (or at least most of them) into a new section "references" that I will create.--Peter Eisenburger 14:42, 19 October 2007 (UTC)