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| == George Harrison == | |||
| Hello, | |||
| Welcome to Misplaced Pages. I think we need to talk about a few things | |||
| First of all, the lead of an article is meant to be a brief summary of what the reader can expect from the article. | |||
| Second, all content must be ]. | |||
| Please read the ref from ABC that you provided: it states,"''The latest treatment is known as fractionated radiation therapy, and is being given at New York's Staten Island University Hospital to treat the metastatic tumor in his brain that spread from his lung.''" | |||
| Also, Harrison's says the same thing: that he died of metastatic non-small cell lung cancer. | |||
| The issues of his treatment and cause of death are already covered, and referenced, in the article body. | |||
| I apologise for "templating" you first without explanation; that looks a little ]. If you need help with anything, hit me up on my talk page. <b>]</b> ] 01:34, 21 February 2010 (UTC) | |||
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February 2009
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Please do not introduce incorrect information into articles, as you did to George Harrison. Your edits do not appear to be constructive and have been reverted. If you believe the information you added was correct, please cite references or sources or discuss the changes on the article's talk page before making them again. If you would like to experiment, use your sandbox. Thank you. Radiopathy •talk• 01:04, 21 February 2010 (UTC)
George Harrison
Hello,
Welcome to Misplaced Pages. I think we need to talk about a few things
First of all, the lead of an article is meant to be a brief summary of what the reader can expect from the article.
Second, all content must be verirfiable.
Please read the ref from ABC that you provided: it states,"The latest treatment is known as fractionated radiation therapy, and is being given at New York's Staten Island University Hospital to treat the metastatic tumor in his brain that spread from his lung."
Also, Harrison's death certificate says the same thing: that he died of metastatic non-small cell lung cancer.
The issues of his treatment and cause of death are already covered, and referenced, in the article body.
I apologise for "templating" you first without explanation; that looks a little bitey. If you need help with anything, hit me up on my talk page. Radiopathy •talk• 01:34, 21 February 2010 (UTC)