User talk:Oliviabuckwheat - Misplaced Pages

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Your submission at Articles for creation

Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. However, the reviewer felt that a few things need to be fixed before it is accepted. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved. (You can do this by adding the text {{subst:submit}} to the top of the article.)

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Thank you for your contributions to Misplaced Pages! Chzz ► 21:12, 2 February 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation

If you would like to continue working on the submission, you can find it at Misplaced Pages talk:Articles for creation/School-Based Health Centers.
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Thank you for your contributions to Misplaced Pages! Bryce (talk | contribs) 01:44, 3 February 2012 (UTC)

Article comments

So... after our help channel chat I took a closer look and marked up your draft considerably. I found several different issues: generalizations, sympathetic (non-neutral) phrasing, reliance on insider/advocacy sources, and lack of citations for information. If you work on each of these I think the article will be much closer to acceptance. The most important step might just be more research for additional unbiased sources. Let me know if you have any questions. Cheers, Ocaasi 03:57, 3 February 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation

If you would like to continue working on the submission, you can find it at Misplaced Pages talk:Articles for creation/School-Based Health Centers.
To edit the submission, you can use the edit button at the top of the article, near the search bar
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Help desk or the reviewer's talk page. Alternatively you can ask a reviewer questions via live help

Thank you for your contributions to Misplaced Pages! Chzz ► 20:16, 3 February 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation

School-Based Health Centers, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.
You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Misplaced Pages. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you are more than welcome to continue submitting work to Articles for Creation.
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Thank you for helping improve Misplaced Pages!

:- ) DCS 06:21, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

Nice job. :- ) DCS 06:27, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

A belated welcome!

Here's wishing you a belated welcome to Misplaced Pages, Oliviabuckwheat. I see that you've already been around a while and wanted to thank you for your contributions. Though you seem to have been successful in finding your way around, you may benefit from following some of the links below, which help editors get the most out of Misplaced Pages:

Also, when you post on talk pages you should sign your name on talk pages using four tildes (~~~~); that should automatically produce your username and the date after your post.

I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! If you have any questions, feel free to leave me a message on my talk page, consult Misplaced Pages:Questions, or place {{helpme}} on your talk page and ask your question there.

Again, welcome! Brendon ishere 07:16, 5 May 2012 (UTC)